... Everyone looks back to see what's happening and before anyon notices Pascucci jumps of the jeep, takes the man by the hair and bumps his head against a rock. Everyone is shocked as little peices of brain matter jump and stain the car's colors... Pascucci gets back to the jeep and says "they shot one of ours, we kill one of them" and just stays quiet looking ahead hoping for Omid to start the jeep again. Jessia says "Tyler is still breathing, I think he missed the heart, but we have to hurry and get some medicine and medical tools!!". Eddie presses the gas and speeds in the direction of the setlement as Omid pauses looking at Pascucci "are you ok man?" ask scared, "Just follow them, we have to save Tyler and your girlfriend...". omid looks at Clem and Charlie with an expression that says "It'll be ok" and drives following Eddie...
Eddies car turns of the country lane and drives into a forest, dipsy-doodling through the gaps inbetween the trees. The atmosphere is haunting, as Omid fights his tears and Pascucci pants with rage. "You alright?" Clementine has been so bemused that she didn't notice Charlie looking at her. Am I alright? I am alive, but I am not alright she answers the question in her mind. "I am alright." she says. Charlie replies with a smile, whispering "I know you are not. Nobody is. But I am free now, and I can do whatever I want - so do you. " Clementine looks upon him with a doubtful espression as he continues whispering "The place we are driving to is hell. We are safe here, and I tell you what: you don't need grownups to defend yourself, to be safe. Have confidence. I've heard you are a good shot.". Clementine blushes, responding "yes, I am.". "See. You can do it. And we need to save our people.". You can do it. You are smarter than all of them, Lee said. Clementine buries herself in thaughts again when Charlie abbruptly shouts "Stop the car!". Omid and Pascucci turn around looking at him with a questionable face. "The storage. It's here. We need the weapons. ALL of them." Pascucci immediately jumps of the car running towards Eddies car stopping it by waving his arms and calling to stop. "You come with me." Says Charlie grabbing Clementines Arm and walking home stretch deeper into the forest. Eddie, Kenny and Jessica quickly grab a few empty bags and follow him. "You stay here and take care of Tyler and Christa and our supplies. Think you can handle that?" says Pascucci, continuing "You see the yellow bag? It's full of selfmade weapons, we don't have any firearms, though. We also hid one weapon in every single bag just in case someone steels the yellow one, So... Can you handle that or should I stay?". "Go." Omid replies, nodding.
Charlie ducks, removing greenery from a blanket and revealing lots of weapons and Ammo. "This is our lucky day," says Eddie smilimg at Jessica. "We gonna kick some asses." Says Kenny, visibly pleased. Everyone immediately starts to pack them into the bags or putting them into their clothes. Charlie grabs two small guns and packs of ammo, handing them over to Clementine, saying "I prefer my rifle." Clementine realizes that she feels much much safer having guns. She can now defend herself. "Don't be too greedy, the guards could come every second. Beware!" Charlie speaks "Oh, great" Kenny replies "You could've mentioned that earlier, don'tcha think? Eddie, help me covering the pithole.". The group goes back to their jeeps when Charlie says "you reminde me of my sister. I miss her so much. I'm so sorry I teased her."
Eddies car turns of the country lane and drives into a forest, dipsy-doodling through the gaps inbetween the trees. The atmosphere is haunting… more, as Omid fights his tears and Pascucci pants with rage. "You alright?" Clementine has been so bemused that she didn't notice Charlie looking at her. Am I alright? I am alive, but I am not alright she answers the question in her mind. "I am alright." she says. Charlie replies with a smile, whispering "I know you are not. Nobody is. But I am free now, and I can do whatever I want - so do you. " Clementine looks upon him with a doubtful espression as he continues whispering "The place we are driving to is hell. We are safe here, and I tell you what: you don't need grownups to defend yourself, to be safe. Have confidence. I've heard you are a good shot.". Clementine blushes, responding "yes, I am.". "See. You can do it. And we need to save our people.". You can do it. You are smarter than all of them, Lee said… [view original content]
While walking back through the forest they come across a small portable.
"Charlie what is that" says pascucci
"Honestly i dont know" says charlie "No guards though lets find out. Eddie can you guard the portable
"Yes captain" says eddie as he breaks out into a salute. the group walks inside to discover 2 doors one had a Man label on it while the other had a woman Lebel on it clem walks up to them and notices that they are both unlocked
"Charlie?" says Eddie nervously "I hear footsteps hurry up"
Note: for the future it would be nice if the one continuing with the story writes a hint first, such as "I am next, still typing" or something like that, posting it and after that edit the post writing the story
Sorry, seems we were typing at the same time
Note: for the future it would be nice if the one continuing with the story writes a hint first… more, such as "I am next, still typing" or something like that, posting it and after that edit the post writing the story
Clementine doesnt hesitate and opens the door with the woman label on it - she had been in a men toilet once and she'll never forget the disgusting smell of old doody. As they quickly enter the room behind it they discover a long hallway with another door at the end of it. "This could be another storage - keep going and be quiet!" Pascucci insists. "Are you crazy?! We are trapped if we stay here, you heard the voices!" Eddie replies, panicking "Go backwards, we gotta run to the cars!" as the door banged. "Fuuuck!!!" Kenny yelled "Open the door you motherfuckers - I'm gonna kill you!". "SHUT UP, KENNY!" yelled Clementine, with an angry look first, then realising that she lost her temper infront of an adult for the very first time, so she looks embarrassed while Kenny stares at her with big eyes, totally speechless. Suddenly groans appear - they are trapped with walkers. Jessica stands infront of the other door which has a small window. She can't reach it, though since it is too high for her. "Eddie, give me a leg-up so I can see what's on the other side. They locked the other door behind us. We gotta get out of here and save Tyler!". "Oh my god" Pascucci says with a frustration in his voice. "I shouldn't have left Omid and Christa behind... there's two cars filled with sll our stuff, two wounded and only one man who can drive. Omid won't leave his girl to help us... ever!... fucking christ...". Eddie helps Jessica to reach the window, asking "What do you see?". "There's a room with a fence at the end of it - it seems to be locked with chains... there are lots of boxes behind this fence... and I can see there is also another door...." replies Jessica. "Great! Let's go!" says Kenny who is about to open the door when Jessica kicks him in the chest. "What was that for?!" yells Kenny and the groans become louder "There are walkers in there." Jessica answers, wondering how Kenny can overhear the noises. "Why haven't you mentioned that first?!"says a pissed looking Kenny. Jessica responses: "Can't you hear the groans?! You caused attention with your useless screaming. Anyway, we have 4 bags full of weapons - that should be enough to deal with them. I counted about 13 walkers - maybe 15. We need a combat system...". Kenny is obviously impressed by the new side of Jessica's character - she appears quiet and reserved but is also capable of being tough when the situation requires it. As the adults make up a plan Clementine doesn't feel well. The cold artificial light coming from the ceiling tubes remind her of being trapped in the locker at St. Johns Dairy. She looks for Charlie as she feels safer around him - but unfortunately ... he is gone!!
Scene swap:
Charlie keeps running through the forest as fast as he can. When he can hear voices he abruptly lays on the ground, not moving. He waits until the area is clear, and keeps running "I gotta run to the car! I must help!" is all he can think about while coming closer to the jeeps. After 5 minutes running he finally manages to reach the jeeps. Charlie discovers there is a man standing next to Omid, who looks beaten up having a black eye. Instinctly he points his rifle at the mans head when Omid shouts "Charlie, don't! This is Jacob! Put the gun down!". Charlie listens to him, asking "The lost survival artist? "Yes, that's me. Where are the others?"
... "They are stuck in a very bad place, we have to go help them!!" Charlie answer, "WHAT? I get out of the group for one night Tyler gets shot and everyone gets stuck, just f*cking great..." - grumps Jacob - "I'll go, I'm sorry I punched you Omid, will you be allright alone in here with Tyler and Christa?", "I think so, just, Tyler has lost a lot of blood, I tried to restrain the blood loss but I can do it forever, you have to hurry, for him and for Christa..." explains Omid as he gets up, "If any of them dies, you know what to do (exclaims Jacob sadlt looking at Tyler), and if Anyone appears, just take the jeep and get the three of you to safety just go north until you find a chruch, hide there and we'll find you" "That's cool, but jsut a question? where's north anyways?", Tyler points him the way befora Charlie gives him one of the guns he collected and joins Jacob in the walk back. While Charlie analyses his new companion he notices that he's missing a bit of his hear and that his long black coat is stained in blood, "Don't worry little man, this is walker blood, that's how I passed a lot of them, they can't notice you if you smell like them... And this thing in my ear it served as dinner one time me, Tyler and pascucci, no arm done (says Jacob calmly), now tell me your name and what kind off bad place is that where they are...". Charlie puts a sad expresison on "My name is Charlie and I was part of that group of soldires shooting everyone that comes by (Jacob looks at charlie angry), but I left, they made me killed and made me kill people I liked so they coud train me, as they putt it.ds.. (Jacob changes to a sad and vengencefull expression). That place where they are at is a kind of cage for walkers. They capture them and then lockk them by genres so they could teach us to kill manny types of things and not feel sorry for kids or women..." Charlie let's a tear escape and Jacob jsut says "Let's go save yours and my friends" as he puts his arm around Charlie...
Scene swap
... "Where's Charlie?" asks Clementine, "I don't know he was just gone when I looked for him, don't worry is looks a tought kid he's ok" says Eddie winking at Clem. Pascucci suddendly yells "Ok so everyone agrees?" as Kenny and Jessica say yes and Eddie returns to them saying "come on Clem, we need your help". as the five gather in a circle. Pascucci starts "Ok, so this is what we are going to do,Kenny, you will raise Clem to the window, and we will give her this silenced gun so she can shoot the maximum amount of walkers she can, we don't know who can be watching and we don't want that much attention on us. After that me and Eddie will kick the door open and we will stab everything that comes out. By that time Clem, you just stay hiden behind Jessia, she will protect you". Everyone noods yes and Kenny (looking a bit suspicious of the plan) picks up Clementine who points the gun throught the little window...
Gunfire. The sound of a bullet piercing through flesh. The smell of blood spraying out of someone's leg. The chances were slim, but Clementine was shot. She fell to the ground screaming in pain, her head hit the floor. The last thing she saw was Kenny shooting an unknown hooded figure right before rushing to Clementine's aid.
-Clementine's eyes faintly open-
''What the hell happened!?''. ''They shot her.'' ''There was nothing we could have done, we need to get medicine right. the fuck. NOW!''
-Eyes close again-
You're strong Clem. You're smarter than them. ''Lee? Lee, is... is that you?'', Clementine says with a small voice, ''I miss you.'' ''Clementine, sweet pea, you can be with me again'', Lee says calmly, ''All you have to do, is to come here. You don't have to suffer anymore.''
Clementine starts walking to the ghostly figure of Lee, but right before she can walk into his arms, the ground opens underneath her. She falls into a seemingly bottomless pit, screaming endlessly.
''Where... where am I?''. Clementine's head aches, and see feels a sharp pain in her right leg.
Please, continue from right here and disregard anything else you may have read
Gunfire. The sound of a bullet piercing through flesh. The smell of blood spraying out of someone's leg. The chances were slim, but Clementine… more was shot. She fell to the ground screaming in pain, her head hit the floor. The last thing she saw was Kenny shooting an unknown hooded figure right before rushing to Clementine's aid.
-Clementine's eyes faintly open-
''What the hell happened!?''. ''They shot her.'' ''There was nothing we could have done, we need to get medicine right. the fuck. NOW!''
-Eyes close again-
You're strong Clem. You're smarter than them. ''Lee? Lee, is... is that you?'', Clementine says with a small voice, ''I miss you.'' ''Clementine, sweet pea, you can be with me again'', Lee says calmly, ''All you have to do, is to come here. You don't have to suffer anymore.''
Clementine starts walking to the ghostly figure of Lee, but right before she can walk into his arms, the ground opens underneath her. She falls into a … [view original content]
You could try to tie in the 400 days group, maybe even bring Eddie and Wyatt together. (It is the Eddie from 400 days, right?)
Just try something, I know you can make it work, you've shown that in your previous posts. : )
EDIT: I just hope I haven't put too much twists into that one little post, I thought about killing off Kenny for a while, but didn't want to risk it ; p
Another possibility is starting a new ''episode''. This will give everyone some freedom in their writing and might give you some ideas to tie the story together. Your call I guess.
You could try to tie in the 400 days group, maybe even bring Eddie and Wyatt together. (It is the Eddie from 400 days, right?)
Just try somet… morehing, I know you can make it work, you've shown that in your previous posts. : )
EDIT: I just hope I haven't put too much twists into that one little post, I thought about killing off Kenny for a while, but didn't want to risk it ; p
In the interest of, well, interest, I would like to point out a few things. First, there has been a lot of action in the past few posts, so I think the people who post next should sort of tone it down and focus on character building. I am not fully up to date with what has happened but I gather there is a new character, Jacob, in the story. His character, being newly introduced, hasn't had much time. There was a post a while back which switched scenes, and that is a good idea to help focus on different characters.
I'll see if I can put some rough guidelines down:
Eddie is a sarcastic fellow, but kind and jolly. Omid is pretty much the same. Jessica is shy and reserved. Jacob us confident, skilled, and nice. Tyler is (assuming he survives) a nice but quiet man. Kenny is a stubborn but loyal dude. Christa is level-headed and pragmatic. Pascucci is kind, but can be brutal and serious when the time calls for it.
New characters are welcome to be defined as they appear.
More to the point, though, it would be nice to see characters just sit down and talk for a while. People who read this need breaks too.
Anyway, I concur with TheMissus, in that New Woodbury appears very late in 400 Days, and so Clementine getting there so soon is sort of messing with continuity. Any ideas to help solve this problem will be appreciated. Thanks.
EDIT: Disregard the last paragraph. New Woodbury is not canon to this thread yet. Read the summary for Episode 1 given below by TheMissus.
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In the interest of, well, interest, I would like to point out a few things. First, there has been a … morelot of action in the past few posts, so I think the people who post next should sort of tone it down and focus on character building. I am not fully up to date with what has happened but I gather there is a new character, Jacob, in the story. His character, being newly introduced, hasn't had much time. There was a post a while back which switched scenes, and that is a good idea to help focus on different characters.
I'll see if I can put some rough guidelines down:
Eddie is a sarcastic fellow, but kind and jolly. Omid is pretty much the same. Jessica is shy and reserved. Jacob us confident, skilled, and nice. Tyler is (assuming he survives) a nice but quiet man. Kenny is a stubborn but loyal dude. Christa is level-headed and pragmatic. Pascucci is kind, but can be brutal and serious when the time call… [view original content]
I was thinking about it... But: the 400 days group joining Tavia took place on day 400, more than a year after the outbreak. Lee on the other hand died roughly 4 months past the outbreak. The story so far occurs vaguely 2-4 days after Clem and Lees separation. Keeping this timeline in mind is very important because that means it takes one year until Eddie can finally be brought together with Wyatt. Thank you so much for the compliment I give someone else the advantage of continuing eith the story.
You could try to tie in the 400 days group, maybe even bring Eddie and Wyatt together. (It is the Eddie from 400 days, right?)
Just try somet… morehing, I know you can make it work, you've shown that in your previous posts. : )
EDIT: I just hope I haven't put too much twists into that one little post, I thought about killing off Kenny for a while, but didn't want to risk it ; p
I was thinking about it... But: the 400 days group joining Tavia took place on day 400, more than a year after the outbreak. Lee on the other … morehand died roughly 4 months past the outbreak. The story so far occurs vaguely 2-4 days after Clem and Lees separation. Keeping this timeline in mind is very important because that means it takes one year until Eddie can finally be brought together with Wyatt. Thank you so much for the compliment I give someone else the advantage of continuing eith the story.
Summary of Season 1.5 - Episode 1: Adrenaline (pages 1-9)
Clem meets Christa and Omid in the fields and they walk into a forest as the night fell
walkers approach, they are fleeing into a barn near a field, meeting a zombified Molly on their way
they enter the barn, being trapped when an unrecognizable voice speaks through the walkie-talkie, which says to hang on, but they have no time to stay and discover whi this might be
they manage to fight themselves through the horde to a jeep near the barn which is out of gas and has a walker trapped in the backseat. Christa gets bitten into her leg
as the walkers surround them a pick-up approaches, saving them - it's Nate, who makes rude comments about the ladies during the drive
they go past a zombified Doug, when a man waves his arms to stop the car: it's Kenny
Nate wants to shoot him, but Kenny overpowers him and takes over the car
the group keeps driving, then there are explosions, which come from the fields because of uniformed people shooting at something in the distance. They decide to drive off unseen as the people look like danger
Christa is in pain because of the bite, this is why they decide to amputate the leg. They stop the car near a forest and chop the leg off
Christa screams and faints, which caused attention - flashlights are running through the distant trees
They again decide to flee and manage to get wounded Christa into the car, where Clem finds some whiskey to deal with Christas wound, as well as a gun that she keeps secretly
they want to drive off when suddenly a young boy forces them with his rifle to join them. Gunshots come out of the forest as the lights come nearer
the mature acting boy introduces himself as Charlie (8yo), revealing he belonged to the group that tried to shoot them. He describes them as very horrible people in army gear, having very bad intentions
Kenny keeps driving while the car slowly runs out of gas. He explains how he managed to survive Savannah, telling them he just kept fighting the walkers one by one to save Clem like he promised Lee
they need to deal with Christas amputated leg. Charlie says medicine can be found either at his former settlement where the bad guys are or at the retirement home overrun by walkers where his grandma used to live. They choose the retirement home
as they step inside Lilly approaches. After a battle she succeeds in shooting Kens leg and steeling the car
it's impossbile to get into the retirement home because of the amount of walkers. They manage to flee into a ranger cabin (the highseat type)
surrounded by the walkers downstairs the group has an argument when a man steps inside wielding with a machete. It turns out he came for the boy, also trying to persuade the group to come with him, promising food, medicine and safety. Charlie disagrees as well as Clementine, Kenny isn't sure while Omid wants to go, admitting Christa is pregnant
it turns out the bad guys belonged to Crawford. They build a military settlement on the countryside (New Crawford) with almost the same rules as orIginal Crawford, except of killing children. The kids are forced to fight each other, though - survival of the fittest. Eventually the group disagrees in joining him
the man arrogantly leaves the group behind, being convinced they are fated to die anyway either by the walkers or his group that is supposed to come to this area by sunrise
Charlie left a bullet in his rifle in case he meets the man, this is why the boy shoots him from behind. Clem tried to prevent him from doing it but he explains the man is responsible for the death of his brothers and sister as well as his mother
the gunshot attracts walkers, so they flee. The group gets seperated: Kenny and Charlie are gone and Clem is with wounded Christa and Omid, who is exhausted because of carrying his woman
everything seems hopeless, when suddenly help comes from a man leading them to a prison bus nearby, on the edge of a small town
it is Eddie, who says he saw Kenny and Charlie running into a coffee shop down the street, where Eddies group is
turms out Eddies group has got supplies such as food and a a few weapons - no firearms, though - and no medicine
they make up a plan, which is as followed: sleeping two hours until sunrise, hoping the walkers will be gone, then going into the coffee shop, preparing for leaving this place with their supplies since the Crawford group plans to steal from Eddies group. Christa needs medicine asap, thats why they also plan to steal it from New Crawford, like they already did a few times in the past without getting noticed
they wake up in the morning and step inside the coffee shop meeting Kenny, Charlie, Eddies girlfriend Jessica (blonde scenester), Tyler (a muscular blonde with a basecap, a few medical skills as a former vet) and Pascucci (real name is Luca, italian looking skinny guy)
they learn about another group member, Jacob who got lost the other night, supposably in the woods unarmed and hopefully alive. Jacob has very good survival skills and has been a big help since the outbreak
Charlie mentions a secret weapon storage of New Crawfords, hidden in the woods. He knows where to find it. The group packs up their stuff and load it on two jeeps
While preparing to leave the small town Clem struggles with the past, feeling respinsible for the dead of Lee. Charlie has sympathy, letting her know they share a similar past
Christa's condition got worse and the group is afraid she might turn - they head out into the forest to break into Crawfords camp to steal medicine
the group is divided, one jeep following the other, when two strangers approach - they open the fire. Tyler gets shot into the chest. Pascucci kills one of the strangers, the other one ran off
They run out of time. This is why they make a stop at the weapon storage. Omid is the only person staying with Christa and wounded Tyler, guarding the jeeps stuffed with supplies
on the way back to the car they discover a hidden stash. There are two doors in it: one with a man label, the other one has a woman label. As they enter the room with the woman label someone cages the group by locking the door behind them
Clem, Pascucci, Kenny, Eddie and Jessica are trapped in a hallway with another door at the end of it. Peeking through the windowed door it turns out there is a room full of walkers. On the other side of the room is a fence caging up a bunch of boxes as well as a door
Charlie managed to run away before getting caged. He runs to the cars to get help. As he arrives he discovers Omid has company: Jacob, the lost survival artist. Charlie tells them what happened and Jacob chimes in in getting the group out of their trouble. Omid once again stays back at the cars, taking care of Christa and Tyler. Jacob instructs him to wait for them and only to drive away in case the soldiers from New Crawford show up. The venue is a church located northerly
The trapped group plans to kill off the walkers quietly, not raising any attention as they want to reach the door behind the fence - a shot rings out - Clementine is being shot in the leg and faints. The last thing she witnesses is Kenny going after a hooded man
The episode ends with a hallucination Clem undergoes: Lee wants Clementine to join him so she can finally have peace
Beginning of Season 1.5 - Episode 2: The Land of Men
Summary of Season 1.5 - Episode 1: Adrenaline (pages 1-9)
* Clem meets Christa and Omid in the fields and they walk into a forest as the … morenight fell
* walkers approach, they are fleeing into a barn near a field, meeting a zombified Molly on their way
* they enter the barn, being trapped when an unrecognizable voice speaks through the walkie-talkie, which says to hang on, but they have no time to stay and discover whi this might be
* they manage to fight themselves through the horde to a jeep near the barn which is out of gas and has a walker trapped in the backseat. Christa gets bitten into her leg
* as the walkers surround them a pick-up approaches, saving them - it's Nate, who makes rude comments about the ladies during the drive
* they go past a zombified Doug, when a man waves his arms to stop the car: it's Kenny
* Nate wants to shoot him, but Kenny overpowers him and takes over the car
* the group keeps driving, then there are exp… [view original content]
Prepare for miscellaneous information.
In the interest of, well, interest, I would like to point out a few things. First, there has been a … morelot of action in the past few posts, so I think the people who post next should sort of tone it down and focus on character building. I am not fully up to date with what has happened but I gather there is a new character, Jacob, in the story. His character, being newly introduced, hasn't had much time. There was a post a while back which switched scenes, and that is a good idea to help focus on different characters.
I'll see if I can put some rough guidelines down:
Eddie is a sarcastic fellow, but kind and jolly. Omid is pretty much the same. Jessica is shy and reserved. Jacob us confident, skilled, and nice. Tyler is (assuming he survives) a nice but quiet man. Kenny is a stubborn but loyal dude. Christa is level-headed and pragmatic. Pascucci is kind, but can be brutal and serious when the time call… [view original content]
we dont know when Lee died because they did not give us an exact time between episode 2 and 3 though lee did say "Bandits have had our number for months" infering that it could be longer
Im about to start typing and the one thing have to say is..... i know you love these people and i love them to but in true walking dead fashion they have to die. i also like that we are less gritty compared to the comic where the govener loses his right arm, his fingernails, his testicles, and his left eye. Great job not having senseless violence
Even so, Clem clearly had not aged enough to pass more than a few months at most, so obviously 400 days is far off. Either way, the point is moot; New Woodbury will not show up till much later, since @That_1_Guy edited his post.
we dont know when Lee died because they did not give us an exact time between episode 2 and 3 though lee did say "Bandits have had our number for months" infering that it could be longer
we dont know when Lee died because they did not give us an exact time between episode 2 and 3 though lee did say "Bandits have had our number for months" infering that it could be longer
Im about to start typing and the one thing have to say is..... i know you love these people and i love them to but in true walking dead fashi… moreon they have to die. i also like that we are less gritty compared to the comic where the govener loses his right arm, his fingernails, his testicles, and his left eye. Great job not having senseless violence
Clemintine tried to get up but her leg pulled her down. the pain was like nothing she ever felt before. her vision cleared and she examined her surroundings. they where in a big church and she was laying down on some wood seats. there was a big dome up the front with lots of painting of bearded men. the windows had pretty pictures of men on crosses. as clem sense of hearing came back she could hear a converstion
'Its been 4 days" said Eddie
'So she is still alive!" said a worried Jessica
"Doing what's best for clem is our job now. even putting her down" said Eddie darkly
"Look when we inherited this child i promised myself i was gonna care for her like it was OUR child Eddie. i mean where not married and we only met once before THIS but i really think we got to care for this child. Omid and christa would want that" said Jessica almost chocking up
'Hello..." said Clementine weakly
"Jesus is that you clem" said Eddie and he ran over to her. Eddie looked almost unchanged
'Jess get over here shes alive!" said Eddie happily. Jessica ran over. she had a new shirt on that was purple
"Oh god...oh god..." she said and she hugged clem
"What happened" she muttered Jessica and Eddie exchanged worried looks
"You where knocked out by the hooded man" began Eddie 'he ran off but Kenny got him and killed him. the gunshot attracted the guards and alerted the walkers that we where here. As the guards arrived Jacob and Charlie came running out and killed 3 of them. Jacob went around through the doors and covered us as we killed the walkers. . once they where all dead we found a sniper rifle, ammo and 2 sets of body armor in the room. Jacob and Kenny where perfect size for them so they put it on before we escaped as they where to heavy to carry. we came to the road and saw.... saw..."
"What" said clem who by this time was awake and had energy
"Honey....." said Jessica "Omid and christa didn't make it
"Wha...wha.... what happened" said Clementine with tears in her eyes. Jessica picked her up and sat down with clem in her arms.
"Omid couldn't take" said Eddie "christa was handcuffed to the car dead along with Omid. Tyler had regained conciousness and had climbed around to see what had happened. when he saw them both dead he checked on the baby. it was alive. at that moment we came running out with you and we saw what had happened. Tyler, who was in extreme pain, said to bring the dead christa with us as he might be able to save the baby. we got in the Jeeps and drove over to the church that Jacob told Charlie about. the place was mostly empty only a few walkers that Jacob took care of.you fell into a long sleep that lasted 4 days honey. The baby is alive, Tyler is much better and is focusing all his attention on the baby in the back room with Charlie and Jacob. Kenny, Pascucci and Jacob have been going out and looking for cars and taking there gas only 2 go at a time to make sure no one gets exhausted. we are hoping to get out of here in about a week and look for a place by the countryside."
"So..Sniff where...okay?"
"Yes honey we are fine. Eddie honey could you please get Tyler, Jacob and Charlie." said Jessica "they where all very worried about you"
"Uh..huh" said Clementine as she cuddled into Jessicas arms
Clemintine tried to get up but her leg pulled her down. the pain was like nothing she ever felt before. her vision cleared and she examined he… morer surroundings. they where in a big church and she was laying down on some wood seats. there was a big dome up the front with lots of painting of bearded men. the windows had pretty pictures of men on crosses. as clem sense of hearing came back she could hear a converstion
'Its been 4 days" said Eddie
'So she is still alive!" said a worried Jessica
"Doing what's best for clem is our job now. even putting her down" said Eddie darkly
"Look when we inherited this child i promised myself i was gonna care for her like it was OUR child Eddie. i mean where not married and we only met once before THIS but i really think we got to care for this child. Omid and christa would want that" said Jessica almost chocking up
'Hello..." said Clementine weakly
"Jesus is that you clem" said Eddie and he ran ov… [view original content]
Alright guys, it's two in the morning here, and I have to sleep. Something I do want to know is if there is a significant Church in Statesboro. I think I have a plan, but that has to be true for this to work. Just reply here, and I'll check it tomorrow. Good job, and good night, people.
Clemintine tried to get up but her leg pulled her down. the pain was like nothing she ever felt before. her vision cleared and she examined he… morer surroundings. they where in a big church and she was laying down on some wood seats. there was a big dome up the front with lots of painting of bearded men. the windows had pretty pictures of men on crosses. as clem sense of hearing came back she could hear a converstion
'Its been 4 days" said Eddie
'So she is still alive!" said a worried Jessica
"Doing what's best for clem is our job now. even putting her down" said Eddie darkly
"Look when we inherited this child i promised myself i was gonna care for her like it was OUR child Eddie. i mean where not married and we only met once before THIS but i really think we got to care for this child. Omid and christa would want that" said Jessica almost chocking up
'Hello..." said Clementine weakly
"Jesus is that you clem" said Eddie and he ran ov… [view original content]
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Relax, no harm done
.. Clem looks as the man frantically dragges himself through the tall grass, "he's alive"Clem says her voice small and weak.
... Everyone looks back to see what's happening and before anyon notices Pascucci jumps of the jeep, takes the man by the hair and bumps his head against a rock. Everyone is shocked as little peices of brain matter jump and stain the car's colors... Pascucci gets back to the jeep and says "they shot one of ours, we kill one of them" and just stays quiet looking ahead hoping for Omid to start the jeep again. Jessia says "Tyler is still breathing, I think he missed the heart, but we have to hurry and get some medicine and medical tools!!". Eddie presses the gas and speeds in the direction of the setlement as Omid pauses looking at Pascucci "are you ok man?" ask scared, "Just follow them, we have to save Tyler and your girlfriend...". omid looks at Clem and Charlie with an expression that says "It'll be ok" and drives following Eddie...
It's okay. I'm not accusing you of anything. Little mistakes like that happen.
Eddies car turns of the country lane and drives into a forest, dipsy-doodling through the gaps inbetween the trees. The atmosphere is haunting, as Omid fights his tears and Pascucci pants with rage. "You alright?" Clementine has been so bemused that she didn't notice Charlie looking at her. Am I alright? I am alive, but I am not alright she answers the question in her mind. "I am alright." she says. Charlie replies with a smile, whispering "I know you are not. Nobody is. But I am free now, and I can do whatever I want - so do you. " Clementine looks upon him with a doubtful espression as he continues whispering "The place we are driving to is hell. We are safe here, and I tell you what: you don't need grownups to defend yourself, to be safe. Have confidence. I've heard you are a good shot.". Clementine blushes, responding "yes, I am.". "See. You can do it. And we need to save our people.". You can do it. You are smarter than all of them, Lee said. Clementine buries herself in thaughts again when Charlie abbruptly shouts "Stop the car!". Omid and Pascucci turn around looking at him with a questionable face. "The storage. It's here. We need the weapons. ALL of them." Pascucci immediately jumps of the car running towards Eddies car stopping it by waving his arms and calling to stop. "You come with me." Says Charlie grabbing Clementines Arm and walking home stretch deeper into the forest. Eddie, Kenny and Jessica quickly grab a few empty bags and follow him. "You stay here and take care of Tyler and Christa and our supplies. Think you can handle that?" says Pascucci, continuing "You see the yellow bag? It's full of selfmade weapons, we don't have any firearms, though. We also hid one weapon in every single bag just in case someone steels the yellow one, So... Can you handle that or should I stay?". "Go." Omid replies, nodding.
Charlie ducks, removing greenery from a blanket and revealing lots of weapons and Ammo. "This is our lucky day," says Eddie smilimg at Jessica. "We gonna kick some asses." Says Kenny, visibly pleased. Everyone immediately starts to pack them into the bags or putting them into their clothes. Charlie grabs two small guns and packs of ammo, handing them over to Clementine, saying "I prefer my rifle." Clementine realizes that she feels much much safer having guns. She can now defend herself. "Don't be too greedy, the guards could come every second. Beware!" Charlie speaks "Oh, great" Kenny replies "You could've mentioned that earlier, don'tcha think? Eddie, help me covering the pithole.". The group goes back to their jeeps when Charlie says "you reminde me of my sister. I miss her so much. I'm so sorry I teased her."
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The missus rights better. look above
all yours
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While walking back through the forest they come across a small portable.
"Charlie what is that" says pascucci
"Honestly i dont know" says charlie "No guards though lets find out. Eddie can you guard the portable
"Yes captain" says eddie as he breaks out into a salute. the group walks inside to discover 2 doors one had a Man label on it while the other had a woman Lebel on it clem walks up to them and notices that they are both unlocked
"Charlie?" says Eddie nervously "I hear footsteps hurry up"
"Open a door clem!" yells Kenny
Man or woman?
Sorry, seems we were typing at the same time
Note: for the future it would be nice if the one continuing with the story writes a hint first, such as "I am next, still typing" or something like that, posting it and after that edit the post writing the story
yeah that would be cool i will do that next time
Clementine doesnt hesitate and opens the door with the woman label on it - she had been in a men toilet once and she'll never forget the disgusting smell of old doody. As they quickly enter the room behind it they discover a long hallway with another door at the end of it. "This could be another storage - keep going and be quiet!" Pascucci insists. "Are you crazy?! We are trapped if we stay here, you heard the voices!" Eddie replies, panicking "Go backwards, we gotta run to the cars!" as the door banged. "Fuuuck!!!" Kenny yelled "Open the door you motherfuckers - I'm gonna kill you!". "SHUT UP, KENNY!" yelled Clementine, with an angry look first, then realising that she lost her temper infront of an adult for the very first time, so she looks embarrassed while Kenny stares at her with big eyes, totally speechless. Suddenly groans appear - they are trapped with walkers. Jessica stands infront of the other door which has a small window. She can't reach it, though since it is too high for her. "Eddie, give me a leg-up so I can see what's on the other side. They locked the other door behind us. We gotta get out of here and save Tyler!". "Oh my god" Pascucci says with a frustration in his voice. "I shouldn't have left Omid and Christa behind... there's two cars filled with sll our stuff, two wounded and only one man who can drive. Omid won't leave his girl to help us... ever!... fucking christ...". Eddie helps Jessica to reach the window, asking "What do you see?". "There's a room with a fence at the end of it - it seems to be locked with chains... there are lots of boxes behind this fence... and I can see there is also another door...." replies Jessica. "Great! Let's go!" says Kenny who is about to open the door when Jessica kicks him in the chest. "What was that for?!" yells Kenny and the groans become louder "There are walkers in there." Jessica answers, wondering how Kenny can overhear the noises. "Why haven't you mentioned that first?!"says a pissed looking Kenny. Jessica responses: "Can't you hear the groans?! You caused attention with your useless screaming. Anyway, we have 4 bags full of weapons - that should be enough to deal with them. I counted about 13 walkers - maybe 15. We need a combat system...". Kenny is obviously impressed by the new side of Jessica's character - she appears quiet and reserved but is also capable of being tough when the situation requires it. As the adults make up a plan Clementine doesn't feel well. The cold artificial light coming from the ceiling tubes remind her of being trapped in the locker at St. Johns Dairy. She looks for Charlie as she feels safer around him - but unfortunately ... he is gone!!
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Charlie keeps running through the forest as fast as he can. When he can hear voices he abruptly lays on the ground, not moving. He waits until the area is clear, and keeps running "I gotta run to the car! I must help!" is all he can think about while coming closer to the jeeps. After 5 minutes running he finally manages to reach the jeeps. Charlie discovers there is a man standing next to Omid, who looks beaten up having a black eye. Instinctly he points his rifle at the mans head when Omid shouts "Charlie, don't! This is Jacob! Put the gun down!". Charlie listens to him, asking "The lost survival artist? "Yes, that's me. Where are the others?"
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... "They are stuck in a very bad place, we have to go help them!!" Charlie answer, "WHAT? I get out of the group for one night Tyler gets shot and everyone gets stuck, just f*cking great..." - grumps Jacob - "I'll go, I'm sorry I punched you Omid, will you be allright alone in here with Tyler and Christa?", "I think so, just, Tyler has lost a lot of blood, I tried to restrain the blood loss but I can do it forever, you have to hurry, for him and for Christa..." explains Omid as he gets up, "If any of them dies, you know what to do (exclaims Jacob sadlt looking at Tyler), and if Anyone appears, just take the jeep and get the three of you to safety just go north until you find a chruch, hide there and we'll find you" "That's cool, but jsut a question? where's north anyways?", Tyler points him the way befora Charlie gives him one of the guns he collected and joins Jacob in the walk back. While Charlie analyses his new companion he notices that he's missing a bit of his hear and that his long black coat is stained in blood, "Don't worry little man, this is walker blood, that's how I passed a lot of them, they can't notice you if you smell like them... And this thing in my ear it served as dinner one time me, Tyler and pascucci, no arm done (says Jacob calmly), now tell me your name and what kind off bad place is that where they are...". Charlie puts a sad expresison on "My name is Charlie and I was part of that group of soldires shooting everyone that comes by (Jacob looks at charlie angry), but I left, they made me killed and made me kill people I liked so they coud train me, as they putt it.ds.. (Jacob changes to a sad and vengencefull expression). That place where they are at is a kind of cage for walkers. They capture them and then lockk them by genres so they could teach us to kill manny types of things and not feel sorry for kids or women..." Charlie let's a tear escape and Jacob jsut says "Let's go save yours and my friends" as he puts his arm around Charlie...
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... "Where's Charlie?" asks Clementine, "I don't know he was just gone when I looked for him, don't worry is looks a tought kid he's ok" says Eddie winking at Clem. Pascucci suddendly yells "Ok so everyone agrees?" as Kenny and Jessica say yes and Eddie returns to them saying "come on Clem, we need your help". as the five gather in a circle. Pascucci starts "Ok, so this is what we are going to do,Kenny, you will raise Clem to the window, and we will give her this silenced gun so she can shoot the maximum amount of walkers she can, we don't know who can be watching and we don't want that much attention on us. After that me and Eddie will kick the door open and we will stab everything that comes out. By that time Clem, you just stay hiden behind Jessia, she will protect you". Everyone noods yes and Kenny (looking a bit suspicious of the plan) picks up Clementine who points the gun throught the little window...
Gunfire. The sound of a bullet piercing through flesh. The smell of blood spraying out of someone's leg. The chances were slim, but Clementine was shot. She fell to the ground screaming in pain, her head hit the floor. The last thing she saw was Kenny shooting an unknown hooded figure right before rushing to Clementine's aid.
-Clementine's eyes faintly open-
''What the hell happened!?''. ''They shot her.'' ''There was nothing we could have done, we need to get medicine right. the fuck. NOW!''
-Eyes close again-
You're strong Clem. You're smarter than them. ''Lee? Lee, is... is that you?'', Clementine says with a small voice, ''I miss you.'' ''Clementine, sweet pea, you can be with me again'', Lee says calmly, ''All you have to do, is to come here. You don't have to suffer anymore.''
Clementine starts walking to the ghostly figure of Lee, but right before she can walk into his arms, the ground opens underneath her. She falls into a seemingly bottomless pit, screaming endlessly.
''Where... where am I?''. Clementine's head aches, and see feels a sharp pain in her right leg.
Please, continue from right here and disregard anything else you may have read
Oh my god... What a story twist. What comes next? And what happened anyway? Beats me :-S
Edit: okay, I see you changed it
You could try to tie in the 400 days group, maybe even bring Eddie and Wyatt together. (It is the Eddie from 400 days, right?)
Just try something, I know you can make it work, you've shown that in your previous posts. : )
EDIT: I just hope I haven't put too much twists into that one little post, I thought about killing off Kenny for a while, but didn't want to risk it ; p
Another possibility is starting a new ''episode''. This will give everyone some freedom in their writing and might give you some ideas to tie the story together. Your call I guess.
Prepare for miscellaneous information.
In the interest of, well, interest, I would like to point out a few things. First, there has been a lot of action in the past few posts, so I think the people who post next should sort of tone it down and focus on character building. I am not fully up to date with what has happened but I gather there is a new character, Jacob, in the story. His character, being newly introduced, hasn't had much time. There was a post a while back which switched scenes, and that is a good idea to help focus on different characters.
I'll see if I can put some rough guidelines down:
Eddie is a sarcastic fellow, but kind and jolly. Omid is pretty much the same. Jessica is shy and reserved. Jacob us confident, skilled, and nice. Tyler is (assuming he survives) a nice but quiet man. Kenny is a stubborn but loyal dude. Christa is level-headed and pragmatic. Pascucci is kind, but can be brutal and serious when the time calls for it.
New characters are welcome to be defined as they appear.
More to the point, though, it would be nice to see characters just sit down and talk for a while. People who read this need breaks too.
Anyway, I concur with TheMissus, in that New Woodbury appears very late in 400 Days, and so Clementine getting there so soon is sort of messing with continuity. Any ideas to help solve this problem will be appreciated. Thanks.
EDIT: Disregard the last paragraph. New Woodbury is not canon to this thread yet. Read the summary for Episode 1 given below by TheMissus.
EDIT: everything's solved, please continue.
I was thinking about it... But: the 400 days group joining Tavia took place on day 400, more than a year after the outbreak. Lee on the other hand died roughly 4 months past the outbreak. The story so far occurs vaguely 2-4 days after Clem and Lees separation. Keeping this timeline in mind is very important because that means it takes one year until Eddie can finally be brought together with Wyatt. Thank you so much for the compliment
I give someone else the advantage of continuing eith the story.
Okay, then disregard the last part of my story and continue when Clementine wakes up, much earlier of course! ; )
End of Season 1.5: Episode 1: Adrenaline
Up next:
Season 1.5: Episode 2: The Land of Men
I like the name, really fits this action-packed episode. ; D
Summary of Season 1.5 - Episode 1: Adrenaline (pages 1-9)
Beginning of Season 1.5 - Episode 2: The Land of Men
I really liked your text, don't get me wrong - it was just a bit puzzling and difficult to build a proper connection. Thanks for your understanding
Just wondering, is Clementine being shot still in? I'm a bit puzzled by those dots, but I wouldn't be surprised or mad if it was cut out.
I was still typing - done now. It takes time to make a summary, especially since english is not my first language
I totally agree with you. Character developement is a priority. Less actions, more dialogue. Please go on with the story - it's highly appreciated
Okay, I'm sorry. Didn't mean to rush you or anything, English is not my first language either, so I can relate.
Not a Problem. At this point allow me to say: Kudos to all of you - I really like the story so far even with the many unpredictable twists
we dont know when Lee died because they did not give us an exact time between episode 2 and 3 though lee did say "Bandits have had our number for months" infering that it could be longer
Im about to start typing and the one thing have to say is..... i know you love these people and i love them to but in true walking dead fashion they have to die. i also like that we are less gritty compared to the comic where the govener loses his right arm, his fingernails, his testicles, and his left eye. Great job not having senseless violence
Even so, Clem clearly had not aged enough to pass more than a few months at most, so obviously 400 days is far off. Either way, the point is moot; New Woodbury will not show up till much later, since @That_1_Guy edited his post.
AND DONT KILL OF KENNY!!
Very well, just one reminder: please solve some of the current problems before bringing too many new lines of action, that's it, thanks
Clemintine tried to get up but her leg pulled her down. the pain was like nothing she ever felt before. her vision cleared and she examined her surroundings. they where in a big church and she was laying down on some wood seats. there was a big dome up the front with lots of painting of bearded men. the windows had pretty pictures of men on crosses. as clem sense of hearing came back she could hear a converstion
'Its been 4 days" said Eddie
'So she is still alive!" said a worried Jessica
"Doing what's best for clem is our job now. even putting her down" said Eddie darkly
"Look when we inherited this child i promised myself i was gonna care for her like it was OUR child Eddie. i mean where not married and we only met once before THIS but i really think we got to care for this child. Omid and christa would want that" said Jessica almost chocking up
'Hello..." said Clementine weakly
"Jesus is that you clem" said Eddie and he ran over to her. Eddie looked almost unchanged
'Jess get over here shes alive!" said Eddie happily. Jessica ran over. she had a new shirt on that was purple
"Oh god...oh god..." she said and she hugged clem
"What happened" she muttered Jessica and Eddie exchanged worried looks
"You where knocked out by the hooded man" began Eddie 'he ran off but Kenny got him and killed him. the gunshot attracted the guards and alerted the walkers that we where here. As the guards arrived Jacob and Charlie came running out and killed 3 of them. Jacob went around through the doors and covered us as we killed the walkers. . once they where all dead we found a sniper rifle, ammo and 2 sets of body armor in the room. Jacob and Kenny where perfect size for them so they put it on before we escaped as they where to heavy to carry. we came to the road and saw.... saw..."
"What" said clem who by this time was awake and had energy
"Honey....." said Jessica "Omid and christa didn't make it
"Wha...wha.... what happened" said Clementine with tears in her eyes. Jessica picked her up and sat down with clem in her arms.
"Omid couldn't take" said Eddie "christa was handcuffed to the car dead along with Omid. Tyler had regained conciousness and had climbed around to see what had happened. when he saw them both dead he checked on the baby. it was alive. at that moment we came running out with you and we saw what had happened. Tyler, who was in extreme pain, said to bring the dead christa with us as he might be able to save the baby. we got in the Jeeps and drove over to the church that Jacob told Charlie about. the place was mostly empty only a few walkers that Jacob took care of.you fell into a long sleep that lasted 4 days honey. The baby is alive, Tyler is much better and is focusing all his attention on the baby in the back room with Charlie and Jacob. Kenny, Pascucci and Jacob have been going out and looking for cars and taking there gas only 2 go at a time to make sure no one gets exhausted. we are hoping to get out of here in about a week and look for a place by the countryside."
"So..Sniff where...okay?"
"Yes honey we are fine. Eddie honey could you please get Tyler, Jacob and Charlie." said Jessica "they where all very worried about you"
"Uh..huh" said Clementine as she cuddled into Jessicas arms
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Nicely done! Have you finished?
Alright guys, it's two in the morning here, and I have to sleep. Something I do want to know is if there is a significant Church in Statesboro. I think I have a plan, but that has to be true for this to work. Just reply here, and I'll check it tomorrow. Good job, and good night, people.
have now
How can the baby still be alive, It doesn't look like Christa has been pregnant for that long.