Continuing upon the end of S1(fan-fic)

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  • edited March 2014

    For newbies: there are SUMMARIES of the story:

    • EPISODE 1-3 (contains pages 1-26): To be found on Page 26. Completed.

    • EPISODE 4 (contains pages 26-40): To be found on Page 49. Completed.

    • EPISODE 5 (contains pages 41- 60): To be found on Page 51, 52, 61. Completed.

    Though it is highly recommended to read through the comments since the story is full of dialogue as well as detailed descriptions of the characters and the environment.

    TGP95 posted: »

    Good one , here we go : When Clem looked at the two behind the shadows , she felt afraid , she grapped her gun and moved slowly towards those

  • A baby was saved back in 2004 after the parent died. it was 4 months till due date. since christa didnt fully reanimate the baby didnt get infected and as long as food is still flowing through the umblical cord it can survive. i wanted both of them to survive or both of them to die. since christa was bit i decided that we still could try to save the baby. this was my plan from as soon as she was bit

    XyzLewis posted: »

    How can the baby still be alive, It doesn't look like Christa has been pregnant for that long.

  • Zurrdroid posted: »

    Alright guys, it's two in the morning here, and I have to sleep. Something I do want to know is if there is a significant Church in Statesboro

  • I ask myself the same to be honest. I like your writing style very much

    XyzLewis posted: »

    How can the baby still be alive, It doesn't look like Christa has been pregnant for that long.

  • if you want me to il disragared the baby and have tyler working on something else. i just wanted to not kill 3 lovleley birds with 2 bullets

    TheMissus posted: »

    I ask myself the same to be honest. I like your writing style very much

  • Buhtye problably put the baby in a incubater or something, I mean your story is really good, but I don't think you can do taht with the baby :S

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    A baby was saved back in 2004 after the parent died. it was 4 months till due date. since christa didnt fully reanimate the baby didnt get inf

  • I see. Let's see how far we can go with this plotline, indeed has some potential to be a good story

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    A baby was saved back in 2004 after the parent died. it was 4 months till due date. since christa didnt fully reanimate the baby didnt get inf

  • See my post above

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    if you want me to il disragared the baby and have tyler working on something else. i just wanted to not kill 3 lovleley birds with 2 bullets

  • edited November 2013

    "Eddieeee!!!"

    Clementine and Jessica become frightened of the sudden yell. It is Charlie running towards Eddie.

    "What is it?"

    "Tyler... He.." Charlie babbles as he realises that Clem is alive, following the conversation. "You should go see him" Charlie finishes the sentence. "Okey dokey.. Hold on. I go get Clementine some food first." "You go with me NOW!" Charlie insists.

    "I have a baaad feeling" says Jessica, holding Clementine tighter than before.

    Continue from here

  • edited November 2013

    We vote. you have 1 hour to deciede weather we leave christa on the side of the road and the baby dies or tyler takes christa and tryes to save the baby. reply in this comment to vote

  • never mind
    missus is writeing so we deal with it

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    We vote. you have 1 hour to deciede weather we leave christa on the side of the road and the baby dies or tyler takes christa and tryes to save the baby. reply in this comment to vote

  • Right. It's the same as in the game: a decision has been made you gotta deal with it. As long as it is not absolutely grotesque we'll always find a good continuation, I am convinced of it.

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    never mind missus is writeing so we deal with it

  • edited November 2013

    yeah and as long as we dont meet miley cyrus we will be fine

    TheMissus posted: »

    Right. It's the same as in the game: a decision has been made you gotta deal with it. As long as it is not absolutely grotesque we'll always find a good continuation, I am convinced of it.

  • edited November 2013

    ... Eddie runs with Charlie to the back room and a yell is hear "OH F*CK!!". Clementine and Jessica run towards the screams that keep getting louder and louder "NO!! COME ON MAN!! TALK TO ME!!". As Clem and jessica enter the room they see Charlie holding the baby in a corner and Eddie trying to revive Tyler, that looks dead. "What's happening" - asks Jessica, " I don't know, we were in here and suddendly Tyler told me to call someone for help because he wasn't feeling good and he just fell to the ground..:" explains Charlie as Eddie continues trying to revive Tyler. Jessica rushes to his aid but when she tries to feel his pulse she mutters "he's dead honey..." Eddie cries and says " NO!! HE'S NOT!! What the hell happened?" "We were never able to take the bullet out, problably he died from the infection or something I don't know" answers Jessica trying to calm Eddie out, but noticebly as disturbed as Eddie is. "What do we do know? He's gonna turn..." - asks clem trying to scream over the desperate cries from Eddie as he keeps being in denial "NO HE'S NOT!!". Charlie, hands the baby to Clementine and shares "Don't kill him, in my old camp they used some dead as watchdogs and protection from others, I really liked Tyler but I think we should do that... Tie him with one of this old chains around the church and It will make this place safer...". A discussion starts where Jessica says they should wait for the others to return and Eddie rejects the idea of using his friend as a dog when the dead body of tyler starts slowly moving, Clementine is the only one that sees it, Clem puts the baby in an altar, but what does she do now?

    KILL HIM (support Eddie) / Chain him up for now (support Charlie)

  • edited November 2013

    "Charlie we cant just let him become a watchdog" said clem

    "Clems right" said jess "we know this person if we walk past him everyday think about the people that would get traumatised. i thought you didn't like your people"

    "NO HES NOT DEAD HES NOT" said eddie desperately trying to revive him.

    "Eddie.. hon-" began jess but at that moment the doors opened and jacob came running in

    "Shit...shit,shit shit" said jacob in disbelief "Charlie get the handcucffs of christa and give them to me. Eddie get all the meds we got where gonna need them. Jess can you get a something to put around his mouth."

    "what are you gonna do?" asked clem

    "Try. and thats the only thing we can do. im not seeing 3 deaths in 3 days" Charlie hands him the handcuffs and jacob quickly roles him over face down. he handcuffs Tyler to the radiator and takes a deep breath.

    "i got the supplies" said Eddie "And i got a bandana" said jess nervously. Jacob quickly takes them both and sets the work. he puts the bandana around tyler. he shoves some morphine down his neck and takes a scalpel out of the medicine bag. as he begins to slowly cut his way through. tyler screams in pain.

    "Still alive." said a relived jacob

    "Bearly" said Charlie.

    "Wait how is he.....alive?" asked Jessica

    "When you hang around a few doctors you learn there tricks. before all this happened i used to hang around my cousins in atlanta. one of them was a doctor. they where both younger and i used to hang around them and play tricks as well as help out one of there sisters.

    "What was wrong with the sister?" asked Pascucci

    "Jesus christ man! were did you come from" said a shocked eddie

    "ive been here the entire time. Kennys putting the gas away"

    "Back to my story" said Jacob who was quite capable to work while speaking

    "One of them had a sister, 14, She was diabetic poor girl......wonder how long she lasted......" Tyler screeched in pain as he got deeper.

    "Here it is" he said as the bullet poked out of Tyler's side. "Take a deep breath and focus on something happy tyler. you guys might want to look away this could get messy" clementine left the room. she watched as pasucucci looked away and jessica lept into eddies arms. clementine went to look for Kenny. she went around the back to where they held the gas. inside kenny was pouring th gas out of the gas cans and into the jeeps

    "Hey clem" says kenny "looks like your back up to full strength. whats going on back there?"

    "There operating on tyler." she says "Taking out the bullet. we don't know if he will make it:

    "Oh" says a stunned kenny "Is there anything i can do"

    "I think there okay there taking out the bullet."

    "Oh okay" "Could you get pascucci for me. i need to tell him something"

    "Shure" says clem and she leaves the room. as she walks back into the surgery room she notices that the bullet is out and laid on the table Jacob is sitting down on the wooden bench having some water though she cant find pascucci

    "Need anything clem?" Jacob asked

    "Yeah" she says "do you know where pascucci went"

    "Yeah hes just gone to talk to kenny"

    "Figures" Clem walks out and back into the main room. she can vaguely hear the conversation between pasucci and Kenny

    **Eavesdrop or leave them alone **

    OFF TOPIC
    In my post i decided that tyler should live. why? i mean he was so close to death shouldn't we just kill him? we decided to have less action and more character development in this episode. Besides i figured that the bullet was taken out as soon a they got to the church, trust me though i have a better plan for the death of these characters

    DLGR13 posted: »

    ... Eddie runs with Charlie to the back room and a yell is hear "OH F*CK!!". Clementine and Jessica run towards the screams that keep getting

  • edited November 2013

    ** eavesdrop **

    pascucci: "So what's going on Ken?"

    Kenny: "If I tell you something can you promise me a couple things?"

    Pascucci: "Sure"

    Kenny: "first thing is that you have to promise me that you will keep this to yourself though"

    Pascucci: "sure man whats going on?"

    Kenny: "well when I just got back from getting fuel... well... ** pulls down his shirt to show an infected bite on his shoulder** one of the bastards got me...."

    Pascucci: "FUCK MAN what are we going to do?"

    Kenny: "what your going to do is take care of Clem for me no matter what, and when the time comes ill take care of myself if it comes to that."

    Pascucci: "i'm sorry Ken but iI have to tell the others... I will take care of Clem though." **turns his back on Kenny to walk away when...

    CONTINUE HERE

  • edited November 2013

    can you please change it. if kenny was bit while chasing the hooded man he would have been dead. you can only last 1-10 hours after a bite 4 days is insane. unless kenny is immune he would be dead. besides i think we should have something else all together. we are trying to focus on character progression and story. this would just get us into trouble. we also just lost Christa and omid. we don't need more deaths

    ** eavesdrop ** pascucci: "So what's going on Ken?" Kenny: "If I tell you something can you promise me a couple things?" Pascucci: "

  • The idea of a plot twist is cool and interesting but a bite would have killed him by now. Also it might be a good idea to build up character relationships before doing something like this.

    ** eavesdrop ** pascucci: "So what's going on Ken?" Kenny: "If I tell you something can you promise me a couple things?" Pascucci: "

  • my point exactly.

    MegaMoto posted: »

    The idea of a plot twist is cool and interesting but a bite would have killed him by now. Also it might be a good idea to build up character relationships before doing something like this.

  • no one should continue untill this is fixed and resolved

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    my point exactly.

  • So is ken dead or not?

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    my point exactly.

  • edited November 2013

    We need to talk to dead in the head. where either

    A) Scraping the post and he can right something else completely different (what we want as we just lost omid and christa and this episode is focusing on story and character progression)

    or

    B) Kenny gets bit just after coming back from getting fuel

    No matter witch way you put it that post has to be changed

    darnitben posted: »

    So is ken dead or not?

  • edited November 2013

    wow this is incredibly lame... nobody said 4 days passed in the summaries. and just because you don't like what someone wrote all of a sudden it needs to be changed? I would say go with lord zasca b option then, but im sure there is going to be objectors. goddamn Kenny fans...

    just ignore my post if you cant handle losing your beloved Kenny, but i'm out then.

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    We need to talk to dead in the head. where either A) Scraping the post and he can right something else completely different (what we want a

  • Hello. Bite victims last for very little time, usually the infection spreads quickly enough to incapacitate them, and in a few hours, kill them. Kenny wouldn't have survived this long. I think it would be best if we cut that out of the thing. More importantly, though, how is the baby alive again? I don't think Christa was pregnant for nearly long enough to develop a living fetus. From the looks of her, She'd been pregnant for about, what , 2 months? Tops. Unless the baby is horribly underdeveloped, I don't think there is anything we can do to keep it, and even then it will slowly die, due to lack of nutrition and immune-system development.

    ** eavesdrop ** pascucci: "So what's going on Ken?" Kenny: "If I tell you something can you promise me a couple things?" Pascucci: "

  • It's not about losing Kenny, personally I think he's okay, I don't like him but I didn't like Lilly more. To the point the part that's bothering people is the break in cannon. You made on honest mistake because you probably skimmed over the post that said that 4 days had past but the fact it it breaks lore. If we just start making up new rules tension and suspense go'es out the window faster then a David Cage game. Feel free to kill Kenny off, just do it in the confines of the universes rules.

    wow this is incredibly lame... nobody said 4 days passed in the summaries. and just because you don't like what someone wrote all of a sudden

  • Lore is important to upkeep here.

    Zurrdroid posted: »

    Hello. Bite victims last for very little time, usually the infection spreads quickly enough to incapacitate them, and in a few hours, kill the

  • I agree with everything

    Zurrdroid posted: »

    Hello. Bite victims last for very little time, usually the infection spreads quickly enough to incapacitate them, and in a few hours, kill the

  • The last summary was after my post. therefor you should have read it. i am a kenny fan and i am sad to see him go but this is just for fun. he will go

    wow this is incredibly lame... nobody said 4 days passed in the summaries. and just because you don't like what someone wrote all of a sudden

  • did you see the curches i marked out for ya? and are you going next or should i

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    I agree with everything

  • edited November 2013

    Wait is ken dead or alive?

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    did you see the curches i marked out for ya? and are you going next or should i

  • Yep, saw the churches. That's good. Although, I don't know how inner city they are. Oh well, I'll make do.

    As for the next post, your call. I'm fine either way. Just, don't leave the Church, yet. I want to keep them there for a while.

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    did you see the curches i marked out for ya? and are you going next or should i

  • Yeah, we're still undecided. I guess it's your call. Either you have him killed some other way, or you let him live, ignoring the post. Go ahead.

    darnitben posted: »

    Wait is ken dead or alive?

  • Ken is bit. he will die.

    darnitben posted: »

    Wait is ken dead or alive?

  • You go. il go after

    Zurrdroid posted: »

    Yep, saw the churches. That's good. Although, I don't know how inner city they are. Oh well, I'll make do. As for the next post, your call. I'm fine either way. Just, don't leave the Church, yet. I want to keep them there for a while.

  • Actually, as @MegaMoto said, it is mentioned that 4 days have passed since the incident. That was Episode 1, Episode 2 begins 4 days later. Read the post again. Also, I don't think anyone was trying to cop Kenny's death out. LZ is a Kenny fan, I think, and he's the one who suggested the options. Don't jump to conclusions before you read everything, okay? It makes for a bad experience. I know, mistakes happen, so just try and be more careful next time, eh? :)

    wow this is incredibly lame... nobody said 4 days passed in the summaries. and just because you don't like what someone wrote all of a sudden

  • Putting it down to this. do you want kenny to live or die reply and after 15 minutes we will se the outcome

  • Alright, I don't see any reasonable way to kill him off. Yet. Eh, I'll come up with something if needed. Put your votes down here, people.

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Putting it down to this. do you want kenny to live or die reply and after 15 minutes we will se the outcome

  • Live live live live live

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Putting it down to this. do you want kenny to live or die reply and after 15 minutes we will se the outcome

  • It's Been 15 mins, Ken is live!

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Putting it down to this. do you want kenny to live or die reply and after 15 minutes we will se the outcome

  • K ken lives and dead in the heads post doesnt exist. post from mine. someone quickly get the train moving and explain the confusion

    darnitben posted: »

    It's Been 15 mins, Ken is live!

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