Clementine decided to sneak around to the door and eavesdrop the conversion
"So what do we do with her" Said Kenny
"I don't know" said pascucci "Should we kill her?"
"We wait for him to wake up and make him tell us what she knows" said Kenny angrily
"Cant belive you found her. i mean after what she did to you....what she did to clem......" said pasucci sadly
"Just leave her here" said Kenny " i need a snack" Clementine ran away from the door and went to check on tyler. he was layed out on the floor with a pillow on his head. Jacob was next to him inspecting him.
"Hey clem" said jacob happily
"Hi" said clem
"Did you find pascucci?" jacob asked
"Yeah yeah i did"
"Cool. do you want to say high to tyler. because of the medicine i gave him he is very drowsy. he probably cant even hear what is being said right now, so you have to get in very close and whisper in his ear. he is concious so he will respond but not in a loud voice okay?
"Okay i might say hi" clem lies down next to Tyler and they begin to talk
"Are you okay?" clem asks
"Yeah. i am" says Tyler weakly "don't worry about me though after a day or 2 il be fit as a fiddle"
"is there anything you need?" Clementine asked
"No im fine for now Jacobs like my maid hes getting me anything i want. don't tell him that"
"okay. bye Tyler"
"Bye" said tyler and Clementine went and gave him a hug. she walked out into the main altar and saw Jessica asleep on the wooden benches with eddie sitting next to her he waved at her. Clementine also saw Charlie sitting by himself on the other side of the church. clem stood at a stand still . who should she tell about the woman in the gas room? why did clem not see her when she went in before? would they believe her?
Decide who clem should tell. the only people Clem can not tell are Tyler Kenny and pascucci for obvious reasons
see what i mean? I even changed it a while ago (EDIT not just a while ago, but hours ago...)and people still ignore it because they are obsessed with kenny. This game doesn't work if people pick and choose what posts to respond too.....
People didn't ignore it because they are obsessed with Kenny, people ignored it because you didn't make any notification of the changes you made, so naturally they didn't know what to do. I mean, the change is pretty minor, and so they may have missed it. Again, don't assume the reasons for people's decisions. There was a vote being made on whether or not Kenny lives, and it turned out that the ONE person who voted said he should live, and so that's how it went. Also. a lot of people responded to your post, you didn't respond back.
C'mon, give these guys a break. The only reason I saw your change was because you said it, AFTER the last update was made.
see what i mean? I even changed it a while ago (EDIT not just a while ago, but hours ago...)and people still ignore it because they are obsessed with kenny. This game doesn't work if people pick and choose what posts to respond too.....
Him? Her? Sorry, I'm not too clear if there are two people they are talking about or just one. If it's just a woman, I think we all know who it is, but if not, well, then I dunno.
Clementine decided to sneak around to the door and eavesdrop the conversion
"So what do we do with her" Said Kenny
"I don't know" said p… moreascucci "Should we kill her?"
"We wait for him to wake up and make him tell us what she knows" said Kenny angrily
"Cant belive you found her. i mean after what she did to you....what she did to clem......" said pasucci sadly
"Just leave her here" said Kenny " i need a snack" Clementine ran away from the door and went to check on tyler. he was layed out on the floor with a pillow on his head. Jacob was next to him inspecting him.
"Hey clem" said jacob happily
"Hi" said clem
"Did you find pascucci?" jacob asked
"Yeah yeah i did"
"Cool. do you want to say high to tyler. because of the medicine i gave him he is very drowsy. he probably cant even hear what is being said right now, so you have to get in very close and whisper in his ear. he is concious so he will respond but not in a loud … [view original content]
Him? Her? Sorry, I'm not too clear if there are two people they are talking about or just one. If it's just a woman, I think we all know who it is, but if not, well, then I dunno.
see what i mean? I even changed it a while ago (EDIT not just a while ago, but hours ago...)and people still ignore it because they are obsessed with kenny. This game doesn't work if people pick and choose what posts to respond too.....
Clementine looked at Eddie. He was waving at her. What does he want to talk about? Should I tell him about the woman?
She walked up to him, and sat down on the bench next to Jessica.
"Hey there, Clementine. How are you feeling?"
"A little better. My leg still hurts, but I think I'll be okay."
"That's good to hear. When I saw you get shot, man... Fucking Christ."
Clementine's eyes widened at the swear. It sounded strange, especially when everything was so calm. Eddie looked confused for a second, but then understood.
"Oh, sorry. I don't really hang out with kids too much. I guess I should tone down the swears, huh?"
Clementine nodded. Eddie was pretty enthusiastic. He reminded her of Omid. Both were funny, swore a lot, and friendly. Omid..
Train. Bridge. Ladder. "Shit! You have a kid!" Omid falling. Broken leg. Fever. Mansion. Medicine. Following Lee. Molly. Lee gets lost to walkers. Molly takes her back. Vernon. Crawford. Antibiotics.
Clementine was crying. It wasn't like before though. She wasn't shivering, her nose wasn't blocked, she didn't feel scared. Her heart was just aching, and the tears were flowing. She was crying, but not the same way as she used to. She suddenly felt a hug. It was Eddie. He felt warm.
"Don't worry it's gonna be okay. We're here for you. Jessica and I will take good care of you. It's gonna be all right."
Clementine wiped her tears. She thanked Eddie. It's been a while since I got a hug... She pushed the thought out of her mind, trying to distract herself. She looked at Jessica, who was sleeping soundly. The blonde hair was on on her face, long and untied, but it was a nice look for her. Clementine looked back at Eddie, who had begun to slowly whistle a tune.
"She's pretty.", she remarked.
"Well, of course she is. I found her outside the coffee shop too, you know? A few months back, after I got separated from a friend..." Eddie's voice trailed off. He made a worried expression for a moment, but then looked back at Clementine and brightened up. "I saw her, surrounded by dead dudes. So I took my badass revolver, grabbed some ammo from my pocket, loaded it and then BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! I put 'em down one by one. After that..." Clementine had stopped paying attention, Eddie's words fading into the background.
She looked at Charlie, who had just begun playing on a harmonica. He wasn't very good at it. It was funny, he looked so small, like Duck, but he acted so grown up. The little kid looked like he had been living in this world his whole life. It was strange.
"...and then I said, 'Well, I'll show you where else I've got tattoos.', and-"
"Um, I'm sorry, but I'll just go join Charlie, okay?"
"Oh, um, alright. Go ahead."
Clementine got up, and walked towards Charlie. The Church was big, but empty. There were corpses near a doorway, arranged like someone had dragged them and piled them on top of each other. It reminded her of how they piled the bodies back at the Motor Inn.
She reached Charlie, who was still struggling to play the Harmonica. Clementine giggled at the sight.
"You don't play that very well."
"Hey, I'm trying, okay. Get off my back."
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean-"
"It's not your fault."
He sighed. "The baby, it was too young, it didn't make it."
The bluntness of the statement shocked her. She felt a pang of sadness.
"That's... sad."
Charlie shrugged. "That's the world we live in. Everything dies. This one just died before he was born."
"Don't say that! It's not... nice.."
"It's the truth, and if you're gonna live in this world, you have to get used to it."
Clementine looked at her feet. I guess he's sorta right... She looked away. The pile of bodies were near a window, and she could see outside. They were in a city.
"Where is this?"
"Statesboro. We came here while you were... out. We got to this church, and not many walkers were around. There were a few inside, but we took care of them. Them and the rest of the dead bodies is what you see over there." He pointed at the pile she saw earlier.
"You call them 'Walkers' too?" Huh, what're the odds of that?
"Actually, the guys at New Crawford..." His face tightened, and then relaxed. "...called them 'The Unholy Ones'. I like what you call them better."
"Oh."
"I hated them, the Crawford people. They made me do... horrible, disgusting, things. I guess I just want to forget."
There was some silence after that.What they did to him... She suddenly remembered the conversation between Pascucci and Kenny. "What she did to you... to Clem..."
She wondered if she could tell Charlie, or even Eddie. Could she trust them? She opened her mouth to speak.
I actualy didn't want to kill Tyler - I wanted Charlie to get Eddie, so Tyler could tell him that the baby did not make it. You know, solving the baby problem. I thought it was obvious, seems it was not
"Charlie we cant just let him become a watchdog" said clem
"Clems right" said jess "we know this person if we walk past him everyday think … moreabout the people that would get traumatised. i thought you didn't like your people"
"NO HES NOT DEAD HES NOT" said eddie desperately trying to revive him.
"Eddie.. hon-" began jess but at that moment the doors opened and jacob came running in
"Shit...shit,shit shit" said jacob in disbelief "Charlie get the handcucffs of christa and give them to me. Eddie get all the meds we got where gonna need them. Jess can you get a something to put around his mouth."
"what are you gonna do?" asked clem
"Try. and thats the only thing we can do. im not seeing 3 deaths in 3 days" Charlie hands him the handcuffs and jacob quickly roles him over face down. he handcuffs Tyler to the radiator and takes a deep breath.
"i got the supplies" said Eddie "And i got a bandana" said jess nervously. Jacob quickly take… [view original content]
I actualy didn't want to kill Tyler - I wanted Charlie to get Eddie, so Tyler could tell him that the baby did not make it. You know, solving the baby problem. I thought it was obvious, seems it was not
I was gone for 8 hours and what do i see in the morning? An argument. This is not cool guys. We need proper rules for this so such misunderstandings won't ever happen again. I don't want Kenny to die either but thats the way TWD is and every decision has to be respected - as long as it is not absolutely grotesque (I was not allowed to vote due to time lag). The idea with the baby was such a grotesque decision, and we still kept it. I have given a vorlage to kill the 4 months baby off on the previous page - Charlie came for Eddie so Tyler could tell them he couldnt save the baby, that was my idea - and you wanted to kill Tyler instead. I agree we should focus on character developement. I know that one more death is hardly baresble, but lets face it: the baby cant make it. It cant be that people dont want to play this game anymore because some of us ignore their posts
Its not that kenny died its the confusion. the orginal post stated that kenny got bit while chasing the hooded person. as a hardcore walking dead fan seeing this made me go a little nuts. i pointed out his mistake but he took to long to respond and people where confused even my GF who loves this post though is too afraid to enter herself could not understand what was going on. i put it down to a vote and in 15 minutes 1 PERSON voted and that vote was to save kenny. so he lives. for now..... as for the baby it was totally my fault. the baby was planned to die when they where leaving the church. the baby is now alive witch is not good and he will have to die soon. i will admit when you wrote that i felt like a sweat band had gone streight across my head. Wait its tyler whos almost dead? that sent me sky high!
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I was gone for 8 hours and what do i see in the morning? An argument. This is not cool guys. We need proper rules for this so such mis… moreunderstandings won't ever happen again. I don't want Kenny to die either but thats the way TWD is and every decision has to be respected - as long as it is not absolutely grotesque (I was not allowed to vote due to time lag). The idea with the baby was such a grotesque decision, and we still kept it. I have given a vorlage to kill the 4 months baby off on the previous page - Charlie came for Eddie so Tyler could tell them he couldnt save the baby, that was my idea - and you wanted to kill Tyler instead. I agree we should focus on character developement. I know that one more death is hardly baresble, but lets face it: the baby cant make it. It cant be that people dont want to play this game anymore because some of us ignore their posts
I don't think voting wheter a post is ignored or not is a good system - there is something called time lag. It's 10 o clock here while other people have midnight and go to sleep. You see? Not a fair system. I think we need specific rules for this thread instead so everybody knows what is allowed and what isnt. @Zurrdroid is good with that, maybe he could arrange it - he is a good writer and objective.
Its not that kenny died its the confusion. the orginal post stated that kenny got bit while chasing the hooded person. as a hardcore walking d… moreead fan seeing this made me go a little nuts. i pointed out his mistake but he took to long to respond and people where confused even my GF who loves this post though is too afraid to enter herself could not understand what was going on. i put it down to a vote and in 15 minutes 1 PERSON voted and that vote was to save kenny. so he lives. for now..... as for the baby it was totally my fault. the baby was planned to die when they where leaving the church. the baby is now alive witch is not good and he will have to die soon. i will admit when you wrote that i felt like a sweat band had gone streight across my head. Wait its tyler whos almost dead? that sent me sky high!
This will not happen again as long as people PROOF READ. if he had edited it in the first place or when i told him changed it immediately as it did not make sense however he walked over to his computer like this:
I don't think voting wheter a post is ignored or not is a good system - there is something called time lag. It's 10 o clock here while other p… moreeople have midnight and go to sleep. You see? Not a fair system. I think we need specific rules for this thread instead so everybody knows what is allowed and what isnt. @Zurrdroid is good with that, maybe he could arrange it - he is a good writer and objective.
This will not happen again as long as people PROOF READ. if he had edited it in the first place or when i told him changed it immediately as i… moret did not make sense however he walked over to his computer like this:
when he should of beein walking like this
Anyway, story past the post @Lord_zasca made.
Clementine looked at Eddie. He was waving at her. What does he want to talk about? Should I t… moreell him about the woman?
She walked up to him, and sat down on the bench next to Jessica.
"Hey there, Clementine. How are you feeling?"
"A little better. My leg still hurts, but I think I'll be okay."
"That's good to hear. When I saw you get shot, man... Fucking Christ."
Clementine's eyes widened at the swear. It sounded strange, especially when everything was so calm. Eddie looked confused for a second, but then understood.
"Oh, sorry. I don't really hang out with kids too much. I guess I should tone down the swears, huh?"
Clementine nodded. Eddie was pretty enthusiastic. He reminded her of Omid. Both were funny, swore a lot, and friendly. Omid..
Train. Bridge. Ladder. "Shit! You have a kid!" Omid falling. Broken leg. Fever. Mansion. Medicine. Following Lee. Molly. Lee gets lost to wa… [view original content]
Clem began to think about the people she should tell and how they would react. the obvious person to tell was jacob. he would understand no matter what and would not what to do... he always does.
"um... are you okay" asked charlie
"Oh yeah yeah" said clem. "Im just going to walk around and explore a bit.
"Okay" said charlie "il be here if you need me" Clem got up and walked to the front of the church she sat down on the step in front of the altar she saw jessica get up over in the corner. eddie welcomed her up but she quickly ran to the other side of the church. wonder what that was about and began to think about who else to tell
Eddie: Eddies cool and i like his funny storeys, but he's to rash and out of control
Tyler: i would choose tyler but he is not in a condition to be helping me and i cant wait a few days
Charlie: he could be trust worthy but i dont know a lot about him
Jessica: Jessica is really nice. but is she too nice?
Clem thought long and hard about the people until it all made sense to her. she was going t-
"Ahh" Jessica's screamed from down the hall way.
"JESS?" Yelled eddie "Holy fuck jess!" and he sprinted down the hallway
Charlie got up and followed eddie just as kenny, jacob and pasucci walked through the door.
"Jesus christ whats going on?" kenny asked but clem wasnt giving an answer she wasnt going to see another person die. the door was open to the girls toilets so she figured she must be in there. as she ran into the room with her gun out she saw the most horrifying thing. in the room there was a dog. but not just any dog a small dog with a mushed up face.
"EEEP" yelled clementine who ran out of the room
"Its okay clem its a dog!" said jessica excitedly. Kenny and pascucci ran into the room and where instantly bewildered by the cute puppy
"How did it survive?" Pascucci askes
Eddie points to a large amount of dog food and other meats on the ground. "he must have got into the food here." he says "such a smart doggie"
"What do we call it?" Charlie asks
"Dont know" said jessica who was beside herself in happyness "Its a girl. maybe Miranda?"
"yeah" says eddie as he puts his arm around jess "Miranda the pug" the crowd stands there in silence as miranda mucks around it the meat
"Alright me and pascucci are going out on our second run outside for gas" said kenny "where almost there" as kenny and pascucci set of clem thought to her self Okay this is it now or never im going to tell-
EDITED, IT NOW FITS THE STORY
''The man you lost,'', Charlie interrupted her, ''What?'' Clementine asked confused. ''A few days before we met, you lost someone. Omid and Christa told me so. Was he... your dad?''
''No''. Charlie looked a little puzzled, ''Then who was he?''
He was strong, he was sweet. He made you feel like you could take on the world. He was a great leader. He was... a murderer. The memories rushed through Clementine's head. Hershel's farm, the pharmacy, the motel, the mansion, Crawford and the Marsh house. Seeing her parents walking on the street, undead... monsters.
Tears started rolling down her cheeks, Charlie stood up and apologized for asking. ''It's not your fault'', Clementine said. ''His name was Lee, he teached me how to shoot a gun, and told me to keep my hair short.''
After giving Clementine a hug Charlie walked away with Miranda, the dog, walking next to him. Clementine sat down next to Eddie, and started hugging him while crying uncontrollably. After calming down Clementine told Eddie about the girl, ''I heard Kenny talk to Pascuscci about a girl they found, I wanted to tell somebody, and I figured that you're kind of the leader, right?''
''Right'' Eddie replied while standing up, ''I'll talk to Kenny, why don't you play with Miranda for a while, puppies are the best anti-depressant, am I right?''
EDITED, IT NOW FITS THE STORY
''The man you lost,'', Charlie interrupted her, ''What?'' Clementine asked confused. ''A few days before we met… more, you lost someone. Omid and Christa told me so. Was he... your dad?''
''No''. Charlie looked a little puzzled, ''Then who was he?''
He was strong, he was sweet. He made you feel like you could take on the world. He was a great leader. He was... a murderer. The memories rushed through Clementine's head. Hershel's farm, the pharmacy, the motel, the mansion, Crawford and the Marsh house. Seeing her parents walking on the street, undead... monsters.
Tears started rolling down her cheeks, Charlie stood up and apologized for asking. ''It's not your fault'', Clementine said. ''His name was Lee, he teached me how to shoot a gun, and told me to keep my hair short.''
After giving Clementine a hug Charlie walked away with Miranda, the dog, walking next to him. Clementine sat down next to Eddie, and started … [view original content]
The point of this is that someone puts a story and you continua from there, it's not omeone puts a story and you change it as you want just ebcause you want it to go another way... I introduced Nate and didn't wanted him to get cut off tright away and someone did and I just went along, I didn't wanted kenny introduced so soon and someone did it, I also agree that there was too much action in the story, and no charatcher development, but the point isn't changing someone post just because it didn't went as you want it... If the game if supposed to be like that everyone should just write their own story and post it here
The point of this is that someone puts a story and you continua from there, it's not omeone puts a story and you change it as you want just eb… morecause you want it to go another way... I introduced Nate and didn't wanted him to get cut off tright away and someone did and I just went along, I didn't wanted kenny introduced so soon and someone did it, I also agree that there was too much action in the story, and no charatcher development, but the point isn't changing someone post just because it didn't went as you want it... If the game if supposed to be like that everyone should just write their own story and post it here
Clementine watches Eddy leaving the cathedral. She is allone now and explores the variety of different stories the paintings as well as the colorful church windows tell. The pictures remind her of how she loves to paint. As she looks around she realises how good the silence feels. Every step she makes is followed by a beautiful noise and its echoe. She makes sure noone is watching and then - starts to sing a song her teacher Miss Richardson taught her, singing with a small voice first, then louder. Enjoying the power of her voice she is reminded of what Lee told her. You're strong, Clem. I wish I was... she thinks. Suddenly the place reminds her of the death of her beloved grandpa, with the coffin behind the altar and how sad she was. *He will never come back. My parents... It's so horrible.. And then Lee... Ben, too... Omid, Christa.. And the innocent baby... This is so sad... The baby was so tiny, tinier than any of my dolls...". Clementine starts to cry again, not longer enjoying the silence of this place. She feels alone. Sure, there are some people left - but what if I will be alone in the end? Alone with those monsters? A whimper brings her back into reality: Charlie stands behind her, leaning at a wall holding miranda very tight and petting the cute little pug. Charlie ignores Clementines tears, saying "You wanna hold her? She is very sweet, and smart. She left a poop on Kenny's sleeping-place - he is going to be veeeery angry...,". Clementine first doesnt know what to answer because she is so surprised by his sudden presence, but when she realises what Miranda did she starts to giggle, then laughing when finally both kids laugh so hard that the whole place is filled with laughter. Jessica comes to check what's going on, saying "I am so glad that there is still some hapiness left in this horrible world... You should both eat. Charlie, you know where the beans are - please bring me 4 cans so I can heat them.". "Yes, maam." Charlie salutes then asking Clementine to join him.
When they enter a small room used as a storage Clementine cannot resist to tell Charlie about the conversation she witnessed.
"Have you met another girl, or a woman, when I was in the coma?". Charlie looks very suspicious, then asking "What are you talking about?". Clementine tells him what she has seen, Kenny and Pascucci talking about a girl. They were not specific but secretive as if nobody should know. "I told Eddie, but he just changed the subject.". Charlie looks at Miranda, still petting her and then saying: "We haven't met a girl, or a woman or anyone... Do you remember what I said about grownups?". Clementine tries to remember then saying with a questionable face "We don't need them?". "Right. Adults always hide the truth, practicing secret-mongering infront of us. They think we kids are stupid but I prove you we are not." "What do you mean?" asks Clem, impressed by his speech. "We are going to find out what Kenny and Pascucci are hiding and why. We'll discover who else might know about the girl. They might betray us - maybe they are even traitors? Anyway, I am going to find out. Will you help me, Clem?". Charlie looks very serious when Jessica's voice appears: "Charlie? Beans, please...". "Will you Clementine?" He repeats the question. "Yes.". "Ok, very well. We are going to meet at the birch behind the church after our meal." says Charlie, handing over the pug and getting the beancans to bring them Jessica. "Very important: Don't tell anyone. Eddie does not want us kids to go outside. And as soon as we are alone you are goong to tell me one more time every single detail about the secret talk between Pascucci and Kenny..."
Agreed, we shouldn't change someone else's story for our benefit. However, it is important to note that the story should still be coherent and plausible. I personally didn't want Kenny there either, but it was plausible, so I went with it. The problem occurs when something falls out of that range. It just isn't possible for a person to survive a bite for 4 days, according to the established fiction in the TWD universe, and a baby being born before it's mother shows any physically visible sign of pregnancy is not possible either. That's why there had to be changes made.
Although, as long as the story falls with the realm of plausibility, it's fair game. Even if someone posts something you don't personally like, you have to roll with it.
It still would be nice, though, if people could follow the general trend of the story for the most part, so it's enjoyable to read. Either way, good luck, people.
The point of this is that someone puts a story and you continua from there, it's not omeone puts a story and you change it as you want just eb… morecause you want it to go another way... I introduced Nate and didn't wanted him to get cut off tright away and someone did and I just went along, I didn't wanted kenny introduced so soon and someone did it, I also agree that there was too much action in the story, and no charatcher development, but the point isn't changing someone post just because it didn't went as you want it... If the game if supposed to be like that everyone should just write their own story and post it here
I'd really appreciate if @SomeGuye adapted the thread head (maybe even the title) by explaining the project and the episodic system, episode names, posting the summary, listing characters plus their status and lastly citing the rules (plausability, following the main plot, no major twists and other things we defined in the group so far.)
Agreed, we shouldn't change someone else's story for our benefit. However, it is important to note that the story should still be coherent and… more plausible. I personally didn't want Kenny there either, but it was plausible, so I went with it. The problem occurs when something falls out of that range. It just isn't possible for a person to survive a bite for 4 days, according to the established fiction in the TWD universe, and a baby being born before it's mother shows any physically visible sign of pregnancy is not possible either. That's why there had to be changes made.
Although, as long as the story falls with the realm of plausibility, it's fair game. Even if someone posts something you don't personally like, you have to roll with it.
It still would be nice, though, if people could follow the general trend of the story for the most part, so it's enjoyable to read. Either way, good luck, people.
if we are talking about deaths being possible kennys wouldn't be, even if he changed it,
Why? kenny was bit on the shoulder in the post. but wasn't he wearing the body armour? now that i slept on it im glad that we DID NOT count that post as it also couldn't happen
I'd really appreciate if @SomeGuye adapted the thread head (maybe even the title) by explaining the project and the episodic system, episode n… moreames, posting the summary, listing characters plus their status and lastly citing the rules (plausability, following the main plot, no major twists and other things we defined in the group so far.)
if we are talking about deaths being possible kennys wouldn't be, even if he changed it,
Why? kenny was bit on the shoulder in the post. bu… moret wasn't he wearing the body armour? now that i slept on it im glad that we DID NOT count that post as it also couldn't happen
Ps good morning
"well.... guess we should find out whos in there" said charlie
"I dont want to know" said clementine sadly
"Look" charlie began "Its not that bad. once we found out whats in there we can deal with it ourselves or let someone know. your choice"
"Okay" said clem bluntly as they snuck over to the door to the gas room.
"Il go in first with my gun out" said charlie "you cover me
"Okay" said clem. charlie approached the door and slowly walked in.
"Its all clear" he said and clementine followed. the garage hadn't really changed 2 cars and a bunch of gas. except for the fact that there was a woman there held together by chains. she was awake. she had short black hair and had an orange hoodie just like...
"Your the person that shot me" said clem
"And im glad i did" said the woman in a Southern texan accent "because of you i got taken here and im getting great hospitality here"
"what do you mean" said charlie
"Food, Water and no dead things. isn't that the 3 needs of humans now?" the woman said
"I guess so......" said charlie and his voice trailed off
"I dont undertand" said a voice behind them "Kenny said he killed you" they spun around and saw jacob in the room. "you really should close the door when you sneak into places" said jacob
"so you dont know about her" said clem
"Nope" said jacob "and i dont know what to DO with her"
"Im fine here" the woman said "y'all are great at the hospitality business"
"Oh, really how can you be so sure?" says Charlie sarcastically pointing the rifle at the girls' face.
"Wait, kiddo - what are you doing? Seriously.. Go out, playing or something..." The hooded woman replies, acting confident but being nervous.
"You better shut your mouth. Now!" He warns her, and Clementine seems to be very surprised by Charlies' harsh words.
Jacob steps closer, laying his hand on Charlies left shoulder, saying "I'd like to to the same Charlie, but you should calm down first to see the things clearer."
"She shot Clementine, tried to kill at least one of us - I see the things crystal-clear. I've lost my sister, already - I am not going to lose another one." speaks Charlie with a very calm voice, still pointing the rifle at her face."
"I'm with you, but please, Charlie. Let me take care of it."
"Clementine we have to tell the others" said jacob softly "Kenny and pascucci probably thought they could take care of her alone"
"Why dont we just shoot her?" asked charlie
"Thats not very nice" said the woman
"Charlie get the others" said jacob "Kenny and pascucci should be home soon so they can tell us what we know and sort this out before dinner" and at that moment charlie left to get the others. Jacob bent down next to the woman
"Whats your name" jacob asked
"Amanda" the woman said
"Whats your story" jacob asked
"I grew up in texas and moved here to become a college student when i was in my mid 20s i got my degree in law and became a lawyer. it was just past my 30th birthday when the outbreak started. i was in a museum when i saw them outside people running for there lives and the dead going around and eating them. i pulled an axe out of one of those "Break glass" things and just kept on living" i was stalking new Crawford when i saw you guys attacking it. i wasn't aiming for the girls leg but she got in the way of your redneck friend. i ran off in the horror of what i had done. i turned around the redneck punched me and i was knocked out cold. i woke up here 2 days later and he's been hiding me in that closet over there ever since. he's quite a wuss you know been hiding me because he cant make a decision on what to do with me" she concluded "He is kinda hot though"
"Jesus christ" said Jacob who was oblivious to the whole group (except tyler who was happily sitting where he was before with miranda climbing all over him)
"You found her said" kenny
"Why didn't you tell us" said jacob "we can help"
"NO!" yelled kenny and pointed the sniper that he took on the fuel journey at amanda "She shot clem and stabbed me! she deserves to die"
"She told us her story" said jacob "she was just defending her self"
"She....She should just......... ARGH" yelled kenny and he walked out of the room
"Shit man...." said eddie "What do we do with her?"
"I vote we let her go" said jacob "She did nothing wrong"
"She knows our location" said kenny who walked back in "what if she comes back with a group and kills us
"Im not the social type" amanda began "But if you want i could stay with you and help. I'm a good shot and i know this place well"
"YOUR NOT IN THE POSITION TO GIVE YOUR OPINION" Yelled kenny
Clem thought back to Lee, he had done his best to keep his morality in the new world the walkers had created. For a convicted murderer he sure didn't like killing people unless he had to. Clementine wanted to be like Lee but she also knew the reason was able to solve things diplomatically was because he was strong and good with words and she wasn't very good with either. What if this women could help her ? She could get training become strong so one day she could protect people and make sure no one else she cared about died. No matter which decision she made there would be consequences one way or the other it was time to decide.
"She's going to stay." Clementine said, there was no room for argument in her voice and no one seemed to want to, except Kenny.
"Clem this bitch shot you, this is unacceptable, I can't allow her to live I just can't." Kenny stated.
"Kenny you always try to make the hard decisions for the group and I know you heart is in the right place, you want to keep us safe but I won't allow this, it's as much my decision as anyone else's." Clementine told him, no one was going to change her mind. For a second Kenny just stood there and then he started to tear up,slowly starting to sob.
"I'm just trying to protect you like Lee wanted Clem." He cried. "He told me to look after you, I just want to keep you safe, you're all I have left, everyone one I know and cared about died. Clem, when we were looking for you and I got separated from the group and surrounded by walkers I thought for a long time about giving up, I had the gun and the bullet to do it to, but I knew as long as there was something worth fighting for I had to keep going, you're my last leg Clem."
Clementine had never seen such emotion from the mustached man and it made her feel like she had made the right choice. "Thank you Kenny, I mean it." Clem touched Kenny gingerly on the shoulder and the two look at each other for just a moment, and then Clem turns back to the rest of the group.
Hmm, we need a new system for people who start typing first, I think earlier someone posted a small comment he was writing and edited it in when he was finished.
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Clementine decided to sneak around to the door and eavesdrop the conversion
"So what do we do with her" Said Kenny
"I don't know" said pascucci "Should we kill her?"
"We wait for him to wake up and make him tell us what she knows" said Kenny angrily
"Cant belive you found her. i mean after what she did to you....what she did to clem......" said pasucci sadly
"Just leave her here" said Kenny " i need a snack" Clementine ran away from the door and went to check on tyler. he was layed out on the floor with a pillow on his head. Jacob was next to him inspecting him.
"Hey clem" said jacob happily
"Hi" said clem
"Did you find pascucci?" jacob asked
"Yeah yeah i did"
"Cool. do you want to say high to tyler. because of the medicine i gave him he is very drowsy. he probably cant even hear what is being said right now, so you have to get in very close and whisper in his ear. he is concious so he will respond but not in a loud voice okay?
"Okay i might say hi" clem lies down next to Tyler and they begin to talk
"Are you okay?" clem asks
"Yeah. i am" says Tyler weakly "don't worry about me though after a day or 2 il be fit as a fiddle"
"is there anything you need?" Clementine asked
"No im fine for now Jacobs like my maid hes getting me anything i want. don't tell him that"
"okay. bye Tyler"
"Bye" said tyler and Clementine went and gave him a hug. she walked out into the main altar and saw Jessica asleep on the wooden benches with eddie sitting next to her he waved at her. Clementine also saw Charlie sitting by himself on the other side of the church. clem stood at a stand still . who should she tell about the woman in the gas room? why did clem not see her when she went in before? would they believe her?
Decide who clem should tell. the only people Clem can not tell are Tyler Kenny and pascucci for obvious reasons
see what i mean? I even changed it a while ago (EDIT not just a while ago, but hours ago...)and people still ignore it because they are obsessed with kenny. This game doesn't work if people pick and choose what posts to respond too.....
People didn't ignore it because they are obsessed with Kenny, people ignored it because you didn't make any notification of the changes you made, so naturally they didn't know what to do. I mean, the change is pretty minor, and so they may have missed it. Again, don't assume the reasons for people's decisions. There was a vote being made on whether or not Kenny lives, and it turned out that the ONE person who voted said he should live, and so that's how it went. Also. a lot of people responded to your post, you didn't respond back.
C'mon, give these guys a break. The only reason I saw your change was because you said it, AFTER the last update was made.
Him? Her? Sorry, I'm not too clear if there are two people they are talking about or just one. If it's just a woman, I think we all know who it is, but if not, well, then I dunno.
sorry its a her. il patch that up
You caused a lot of confusion and i didnt want people going. so kennys..... umm uh.
Anyway, story past the post @Lord_zasca made.
Clementine looked at Eddie. He was waving at her. What does he want to talk about? Should I tell him about the woman?
She walked up to him, and sat down on the bench next to Jessica.
"Hey there, Clementine. How are you feeling?"
"A little better. My leg still hurts, but I think I'll be okay."
"That's good to hear. When I saw you get shot, man... Fucking Christ."
Clementine's eyes widened at the swear. It sounded strange, especially when everything was so calm. Eddie looked confused for a second, but then understood.
"Oh, sorry. I don't really hang out with kids too much. I guess I should tone down the swears, huh?"
Clementine nodded. Eddie was pretty enthusiastic. He reminded her of Omid. Both were funny, swore a lot, and friendly. Omid..
Train. Bridge. Ladder. "Shit! You have a kid!" Omid falling. Broken leg. Fever. Mansion. Medicine. Following Lee. Molly. Lee gets lost to walkers. Molly takes her back. Vernon. Crawford. Antibiotics.
Clementine was crying. It wasn't like before though. She wasn't shivering, her nose wasn't blocked, she didn't feel scared. Her heart was just aching, and the tears were flowing. She was crying, but not the same way as she used to. She suddenly felt a hug. It was Eddie. He felt warm.
"Don't worry it's gonna be okay. We're here for you. Jessica and I will take good care of you. It's gonna be all right."
Clementine wiped her tears. She thanked Eddie. It's been a while since I got a hug... She pushed the thought out of her mind, trying to distract herself. She looked at Jessica, who was sleeping soundly. The blonde hair was on on her face, long and untied, but it was a nice look for her. Clementine looked back at Eddie, who had begun to slowly whistle a tune.
"She's pretty.", she remarked.
"Well, of course she is. I found her outside the coffee shop too, you know? A few months back, after I got separated from a friend..." Eddie's voice trailed off. He made a worried expression for a moment, but then looked back at Clementine and brightened up. "I saw her, surrounded by dead dudes. So I took my badass revolver, grabbed some ammo from my pocket, loaded it and then BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! I put 'em down one by one. After that..." Clementine had stopped paying attention, Eddie's words fading into the background.
She looked at Charlie, who had just begun playing on a harmonica. He wasn't very good at it. It was funny, he looked so small, like Duck, but he acted so grown up. The little kid looked like he had been living in this world his whole life. It was strange.
"...and then I said, 'Well, I'll show you where else I've got tattoos.', and-"
"Um, I'm sorry, but I'll just go join Charlie, okay?"
"Oh, um, alright. Go ahead."
Clementine got up, and walked towards Charlie. The Church was big, but empty. There were corpses near a doorway, arranged like someone had dragged them and piled them on top of each other. It reminded her of how they piled the bodies back at the Motor Inn.
She reached Charlie, who was still struggling to play the Harmonica. Clementine giggled at the sight.
"You don't play that very well."
"Hey, I'm trying, okay. Get off my back."
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean-"
"It's not your fault."
He sighed. "The baby, it was too young, it didn't make it."
The bluntness of the statement shocked her. She felt a pang of sadness.
"That's... sad."
Charlie shrugged. "That's the world we live in. Everything dies. This one just died before he was born."
"Don't say that! It's not... nice.."
"It's the truth, and if you're gonna live in this world, you have to get used to it."
Clementine looked at her feet. I guess he's sorta right... She looked away. The pile of bodies were near a window, and she could see outside. They were in a city.
"Where is this?"
"Statesboro. We came here while you were... out. We got to this church, and not many walkers were around. There were a few inside, but we took care of them. Them and the rest of the dead bodies is what you see over there." He pointed at the pile she saw earlier.
"You call them 'Walkers' too?" Huh, what're the odds of that?
"Actually, the guys at New Crawford..." His face tightened, and then relaxed. "...called them 'The Unholy Ones'. I like what you call them better."
"Oh."
"I hated them, the Crawford people. They made me do... horrible, disgusting, things. I guess I just want to forget."
There was some silence after that.What they did to him... She suddenly remembered the conversation between Pascucci and Kenny. "What she did to you... to Clem..."
She wondered if she could tell Charlie, or even Eddie. Could she trust them? She opened her mouth to speak.
-Continue from here-
I actualy didn't want to kill Tyler - I wanted Charlie to get Eddie, so Tyler could tell him that the baby did not make it. You know, solving the baby problem. I thought it was obvious, seems it was not
Yeah that what i thought. i was not going to have tyler mysteriously die because they forgot to take out a bullet after 4 days
Note
I was gone for 8 hours and what do i see in the morning? An argument. This is not cool guys. We need proper rules for this so such misunderstandings won't ever happen again. I don't want Kenny to die either but thats the way TWD is and every decision has to be respected - as long as it is not absolutely grotesque (I was not allowed to vote due to time lag). The idea with the baby was such a grotesque decision, and we still kept it. I have given a vorlage to kill the 4 months baby off on the previous page - Charlie came for Eddie so Tyler could tell them he couldnt save the baby, that was my idea - and you wanted to kill Tyler instead. I agree we should focus on character developement. I know that one more death is hardly baresble, but lets face it: the baby cant make it. It cant be that people dont want to play this game anymore because some of us ignore their posts
Its not that kenny died its the confusion. the orginal post stated that kenny got bit while chasing the hooded person. as a hardcore walking dead fan seeing this made me go a little nuts. i pointed out his mistake but he took to long to respond and people where confused even my GF who loves this post though is too afraid to enter herself could not understand what was going on. i put it down to a vote and in 15 minutes 1 PERSON voted and that vote was to save kenny. so he lives. for now..... as for the baby it was totally my fault. the baby was planned to die when they where leaving the church. the baby is now alive witch is not good and he will have to die soon. i will admit when you wrote that i felt like a sweat band had gone streight across my head. Wait its tyler whos almost dead? that sent me sky high!
I don't think voting wheter a post is ignored or not is a good system - there is something called time lag. It's 10 o clock here while other people have midnight and go to sleep. You see? Not a fair system. I think we need specific rules for this thread instead so everybody knows what is allowed and what isnt. @Zurrdroid is good with that, maybe he could arrange it - he is a good writer and objective.
This will not happen again as long as people PROOF READ. if he had edited it in the first place or when i told him changed it immediately as it did not make sense however he walked over to his computer like this:
when he should of beein walking like this
I don't want us to leave this game because we don't feel heard, that's all. Okay enough
let's just go on
Admit the dog walking up the stairs video made you smile
Yes it did
The tattoo line was awesome - I laughed
Clem began to think about the people she should tell and how they would react. the obvious person to tell was jacob. he would understand no matter what and would not what to do... he always does.
"um... are you okay" asked charlie
"Oh yeah yeah" said clem. "Im just going to walk around and explore a bit.
"Okay" said charlie "il be here if you need me" Clem got up and walked to the front of the church she sat down on the step in front of the altar she saw jessica get up over in the corner. eddie welcomed her up but she quickly ran to the other side of the church. wonder what that was about and began to think about who else to tell
Eddie: Eddies cool and i like his funny storeys, but he's to rash and out of control
Tyler: i would choose tyler but he is not in a condition to be helping me and i cant wait a few days
Charlie: he could be trust worthy but i dont know a lot about him
Jessica: Jessica is really nice. but is she too nice?
Clem thought long and hard about the people until it all made sense to her. she was going t-
"Ahh" Jessica's screamed from down the hall way.
"JESS?" Yelled eddie "Holy fuck jess!" and he sprinted down the hallway
Charlie got up and followed eddie just as kenny, jacob and pasucci walked through the door.
"Jesus christ whats going on?" kenny asked but clem wasnt giving an answer she wasnt going to see another person die. the door was open to the girls toilets so she figured she must be in there. as she ran into the room with her gun out she saw the most horrifying thing. in the room there was a dog. but not just any dog a small dog with a mushed up face.
"EEEP" yelled clementine who ran out of the room
"Its okay clem its a dog!" said jessica excitedly. Kenny and pascucci ran into the room and where instantly bewildered by the cute puppy
"How did it survive?" Pascucci askes
Eddie points to a large amount of dog food and other meats on the ground. "he must have got into the food here." he says "such a smart doggie"
"What do we call it?" Charlie asks
"Dont know" said jessica who was beside herself in happyness "Its a girl. maybe Miranda?"
"yeah" says eddie as he puts his arm around jess "Miranda the pug" the crowd stands there in silence as miranda mucks around it the meat
"Alright me and pascucci are going out on our second run outside for gas" said kenny "where almost there" as kenny and pascucci set of clem thought to her self Okay this is it now or never im going to tell-
CONTINUE
EDITED, IT NOW FITS THE STORY
''The man you lost,'', Charlie interrupted her, ''What?'' Clementine asked confused. ''A few days before we met, you lost someone. Omid and Christa told me so. Was he... your dad?''
''No''. Charlie looked a little puzzled, ''Then who was he?''
He was strong, he was sweet. He made you feel like you could take on the world. He was a great leader. He was... a murderer. The memories rushed through Clementine's head. Hershel's farm, the pharmacy, the motel, the mansion, Crawford and the Marsh house. Seeing her parents walking on the street, undead... monsters.
Tears started rolling down her cheeks, Charlie stood up and apologized for asking. ''It's not your fault'', Clementine said. ''His name was Lee, he teached me how to shoot a gun, and told me to keep my hair short.''
After giving Clementine a hug Charlie walked away with Miranda, the dog, walking next to him. Clementine sat down next to Eddie, and started hugging him while crying uncontrollably. After calming down Clementine told Eddie about the girl, ''I heard Kenny talk to Pascuscci about a girl they found, I wanted to tell somebody, and I figured that you're kind of the leader, right?''
''Right'' Eddie replied while standing up, ''I'll talk to Kenny, why don't you play with Miranda for a while, puppies are the best anti-depressant, am I right?''
NVM
goodnight guys! see you tomorrow
-From australia
oh....... delete the post and use the blank space as the next thing to say
Sleep well, I just woke up. haha
Yup, just did, all solved.
The point of this is that someone puts a story and you continua from there, it's not omeone puts a story and you change it as you want just ebcause you want it to go another way... I introduced Nate and didn't wanted him to get cut off tright away and someone did and I just went along, I didn't wanted kenny introduced so soon and someone did it, I also agree that there was too much action in the story, and no charatcher development, but the point isn't changing someone post just because it didn't went as you want it... If the game if supposed to be like that everyone should just write their own story and post it here
I agree. We write a story together so we need to go along with every contribution as long as it's not absurd.
Clementine watches Eddy leaving the cathedral. She is allone now and explores the variety of different stories the paintings as well as the colorful church windows tell. The pictures remind her of how she loves to paint. As she looks around she realises how good the silence feels. Every step she makes is followed by a beautiful noise and its echoe. She makes sure noone is watching and then - starts to sing a song her teacher Miss Richardson taught her, singing with a small voice first, then louder. Enjoying the power of her voice she is reminded of what Lee told her. You're strong, Clem. I wish I was... she thinks. Suddenly the place reminds her of the death of her beloved grandpa, with the coffin behind the altar and how sad she was. *He will never come back. My parents... It's so horrible.. And then Lee... Ben, too... Omid, Christa.. And the innocent baby... This is so sad... The baby was so tiny, tinier than any of my dolls...". Clementine starts to cry again, not longer enjoying the silence of this place. She feels alone. Sure, there are some people left - but what if I will be alone in the end? Alone with those monsters? A whimper brings her back into reality: Charlie stands behind her, leaning at a wall holding miranda very tight and petting the cute little pug. Charlie ignores Clementines tears, saying "You wanna hold her? She is very sweet, and smart. She left a poop on Kenny's sleeping-place - he is going to be veeeery angry...,". Clementine first doesnt know what to answer because she is so surprised by his sudden presence, but when she realises what Miranda did she starts to giggle, then laughing when finally both kids laugh so hard that the whole place is filled with laughter. Jessica comes to check what's going on, saying "I am so glad that there is still some hapiness left in this horrible world... You should both eat. Charlie, you know where the beans are - please bring me 4 cans so I can heat them.". "Yes, maam." Charlie salutes then asking Clementine to join him.
When they enter a small room used as a storage Clementine cannot resist to tell Charlie about the conversation she witnessed.
"Have you met another girl, or a woman, when I was in the coma?". Charlie looks very suspicious, then asking "What are you talking about?". Clementine tells him what she has seen, Kenny and Pascucci talking about a girl. They were not specific but secretive as if nobody should know. "I told Eddie, but he just changed the subject.". Charlie looks at Miranda, still petting her and then saying: "We haven't met a girl, or a woman or anyone... Do you remember what I said about grownups?". Clementine tries to remember then saying with a questionable face "We don't need them?". "Right. Adults always hide the truth, practicing secret-mongering infront of us. They think we kids are stupid but I prove you we are not." "What do you mean?" asks Clem, impressed by his speech. "We are going to find out what Kenny and Pascucci are hiding and why. We'll discover who else might know about the girl. They might betray us - maybe they are even traitors? Anyway, I am going to find out. Will you help me, Clem?". Charlie looks very serious when Jessica's voice appears: "Charlie? Beans, please...". "Will you Clementine?" He repeats the question. "Yes.". "Ok, very well. We are going to meet at the birch behind the church after our meal." says Charlie, handing over the pug and getting the beancans to bring them Jessica. "Very important: Don't tell anyone. Eddie does not want us kids to go outside. And as soon as we are alone you are goong to tell me one more time every single detail about the secret talk between Pascucci and Kenny..."
Continue from here
Agreed, we shouldn't change someone else's story for our benefit. However, it is important to note that the story should still be coherent and plausible. I personally didn't want Kenny there either, but it was plausible, so I went with it. The problem occurs when something falls out of that range. It just isn't possible for a person to survive a bite for 4 days, according to the established fiction in the TWD universe, and a baby being born before it's mother shows any physically visible sign of pregnancy is not possible either. That's why there had to be changes made.
Although, as long as the story falls with the realm of plausibility, it's fair game. Even if someone posts something you don't personally like, you have to roll with it.
It still would be nice, though, if people could follow the general trend of the story for the most part, so it's enjoyable to read. Either way, good luck, people.
I'd really appreciate if @SomeGuye adapted the thread head (maybe even the title) by explaining the project and the episodic system, episode names, posting the summary, listing characters plus their status and lastly citing the rules (plausability, following the main plot, no major twists and other things we defined in the group so far.)
if we are talking about deaths being possible kennys wouldn't be, even if he changed it,
Why? kenny was bit on the shoulder in the post. but wasn't he wearing the body armour? now that i slept on it im glad that we DID NOT count that post as it also couldn't happen
Ps good morning
Good evening. Please continue - I need a bedtime story
I wish i could but im outta time got to go do things. i can post a paragraph or so and i will.
Not a problem. It's just that I wish I could contine but it's not my turn
"Thats all" said clementine
"well.... guess we should find out whos in there" said charlie
"I dont want to know" said clementine sadly
"Look" charlie began "Its not that bad. once we found out whats in there we can deal with it ourselves or let someone know. your choice"
"Okay" said clem bluntly as they snuck over to the door to the gas room.
"Il go in first with my gun out" said charlie "you cover me
"Okay" said clem. charlie approached the door and slowly walked in.
"Its all clear" he said and clementine followed. the garage hadn't really changed 2 cars and a bunch of gas. except for the fact that there was a woman there held together by chains. she was awake. she had short black hair and had an orange hoodie just like...
"Your the person that shot me" said clem
"And im glad i did" said the woman in a Southern texan accent "because of you i got taken here and im getting great hospitality here"
"what do you mean" said charlie
"Food, Water and no dead things. isn't that the 3 needs of humans now?" the woman said
"I guess so......" said charlie and his voice trailed off
"I dont undertand" said a voice behind them "Kenny said he killed you" they spun around and saw jacob in the room. "you really should close the door when you sneak into places" said jacob
"so you dont know about her" said clem
"Nope" said jacob "and i dont know what to DO with her"
"Im fine here" the woman said "y'all are great at the hospitality business"
"indeed we are" said jacob
CONTINUE
i wrote a short thing. you can go now
"Oh, really how can you be so sure?" says Charlie sarcastically pointing the rifle at the girls' face.
"Wait, kiddo - what are you doing? Seriously.. Go out, playing or something..." The hooded woman replies, acting confident but being nervous.
"You better shut your mouth. Now!" He warns her, and Clementine seems to be very surprised by Charlies' harsh words.
Jacob steps closer, laying his hand on Charlies left shoulder, saying "I'd like to to the same Charlie, but you should calm down first to see the things clearer."
"She shot Clementine, tried to kill at least one of us - I see the things crystal-clear. I've lost my sister, already - I am not going to lose another one." speaks Charlie with a very calm voice, still pointing the rifle at her face."
"I'm with you, but please, Charlie. Let me take care of it."
How will you solve this? Please comtinue
"Clementine we have to tell the others" said jacob softly "Kenny and pascucci probably thought they could take care of her alone"
"Why dont we just shoot her?" asked charlie
"Thats not very nice" said the woman
"Charlie get the others" said jacob "Kenny and pascucci should be home soon so they can tell us what we know and sort this out before dinner" and at that moment charlie left to get the others. Jacob bent down next to the woman
"Whats your name" jacob asked
"Amanda" the woman said
"Whats your story" jacob asked
"I grew up in texas and moved here to become a college student when i was in my mid 20s i got my degree in law and became a lawyer. it was just past my 30th birthday when the outbreak started. i was in a museum when i saw them outside people running for there lives and the dead going around and eating them. i pulled an axe out of one of those "Break glass" things and just kept on living" i was stalking new Crawford when i saw you guys attacking it. i wasn't aiming for the girls leg but she got in the way of your redneck friend. i ran off in the horror of what i had done. i turned around the redneck punched me and i was knocked out cold. i woke up here 2 days later and he's been hiding me in that closet over there ever since. he's quite a wuss you know been hiding me because he cant make a decision on what to do with me" she concluded "He is kinda hot though"
"Jesus christ" said Jacob who was oblivious to the whole group (except tyler who was happily sitting where he was before with miranda climbing all over him)
"You found her said" kenny
"Why didn't you tell us" said jacob "we can help"
"NO!" yelled kenny and pointed the sniper that he took on the fuel journey at amanda "She shot clem and stabbed me! she deserves to die"
"She told us her story" said jacob "she was just defending her self"
"She....She should just......... ARGH" yelled kenny and he walked out of the room
"Shit man...." said eddie "What do we do with her?"
"I vote we let her go" said jacob "She did nothing wrong"
"She knows our location" said kenny who walked back in "what if she comes back with a group and kills us
"Im not the social type" amanda began "But if you want i could stay with you and help. I'm a good shot and i know this place well"
"YOUR NOT IN THE POSITION TO GIVE YOUR OPINION" Yelled kenny
A) Let her stay
C) Kill her
Clem thought back to Lee, he had done his best to keep his morality in the new world the walkers had created. For a convicted murderer he sure didn't like killing people unless he had to. Clementine wanted to be like Lee but she also knew the reason was able to solve things diplomatically was because he was strong and good with words and she wasn't very good with either. What if this women could help her ? She could get training become strong so one day she could protect people and make sure no one else she cared about died. No matter which decision she made there would be consequences one way or the other it was time to decide.
"She's going to stay." Clementine said, there was no room for argument in her voice and no one seemed to want to, except Kenny.
"Clem this bitch shot you, this is unacceptable, I can't allow her to live I just can't." Kenny stated.
"Kenny you always try to make the hard decisions for the group and I know you heart is in the right place, you want to keep us safe but I won't allow this, it's as much my decision as anyone else's." Clementine told him, no one was going to change her mind. For a second Kenny just stood there and then he started to tear up,slowly starting to sob.
"I'm just trying to protect you like Lee wanted Clem." He cried. "He told me to look after you, I just want to keep you safe, you're all I have left, everyone one I know and cared about died. Clem, when we were looking for you and I got separated from the group and surrounded by walkers I thought for a long time about giving up, I had the gun and the bullet to do it to, but I knew as long as there was something worth fighting for I had to keep going, you're my last leg Clem."
Clementine had never seen such emotion from the mustached man and it made her feel like she had made the right choice. "Thank you Kenny, I mean it." Clem touched Kenny gingerly on the shoulder and the two look at each other for just a moment, and then Clem turns back to the rest of the group.
Disregard this
Hmm, we need a new system for people who start typing first, I think earlier someone posted a small comment he was writing and edited it in when he was finished.