Continuing upon the end of S1(fan-fic)

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  • edited December 2013

    Yeah, so proud of you guys - we have so many good writers! I did not believe we would come this far, actually

    SomGuye posted: »

    This will be the greatest THE WALKING DEAD GAME fan piece.

  • edited December 2013

    Impatient as I am: Someone else should go on. I've made to many posts, especially on this Jacobs' talkin-to situation. Someone please continue :)

  • i cant i just went

  • I'd love to, but this whole speech-thing just seems a little too hard. I'll do it if no one else does though.

  • il write a quick thing if u want even though its against the rules

  • stuff it im going XD

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    il write a quick thing if u want even though its against the rules

  • edited December 2013

    Yeah, do it. A clue: Clem finds out that Charlie just killed someone. What's her reaction?

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    stuff it im going XD

  • edited December 2013

    We've had action, lots of. It's time for some talks. I just realised we haven't met any walkers lately

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    I'd love to, but this whole speech-thing just seems a little too hard. I'll do it if no one else does though.

  • "Woodbury?" eddie asked himself "i went there on a holiday when i was little. its AGES away"

    "How do they keep in contact with a place thats so far away?" pascucci said

    "We will never know" said Jacob "But thats it everything has been explained. unless there is something else thats been happening" silence filled the room

    "Okay" said jacob happier than before "We can go to bed now. Ken, do you want to watch out tonight.

    "Shure" said kenny and he looked down at his feet

    "Alright" said jacob "everything is cleared up. we know what everyone knows. go to bed and we leave here tomorrow. go around and deep into the country. we find an abandoned house and make it a home." Jacob walked back inside followed by everyone. clem watched everyone get into there sleeping bags. tyler was already asleep at the back of the church. mirandas head could be seen poking out of the sleeping bag. Eddie go into the sleeping bag and jessica put hers next to him. Charlie was alone in the right wing and jacob and pascucci where next to kenny, incase he needed a break. Clementine sat her bag down next to Charlie and he smiled as she slid into the bag. clem fell asleep quickly and began to dream....

    Continue

  • crap. just saw the post. make her dream about it

    TheMissus posted: »

    Yeah, do it. A clue: Clem finds out that Charlie just killed someone. What's her reaction?

  • crap. just saw the post. make her dream about it

    TheMissus posted: »

    Yeah, do it. A clue: Clem finds out that Charlie just killed someone. What's her reaction?

  • edited December 2013

    Clementine wakes up in her tree house. The sun shines through the little windows and her left arm got sunburned. It must be late afternoon. Something smells really tasty. Is it safe outside? She peeks through a slit in the wooden door. The pool is filled with fresh and clean looking water, which makes very light reflections. She can't trust her eyes: there is her daddy, standing infront of the barbecue talking to someone who cannot be seen, because he is standing behind the housewall. Clem throws down the ladder when her Mom comes out the house onto the porch: "Clementine, Sweetheart: go wash your hands, sleepy head.". Clem runs to her mommy, hugging her, then into the kitchen to wash her hands in the sink. As she enters the porch her daddy stands infront of her, stroking her head, asking "Have you missed anything?" Clementine hugs her daddy and happily replies "I've missed you!" In the corner of her view field she recognises Charlie jumping into the cold water, then waving at her: "Come on, Clem, hurry! It's awesome!". Her daddy gives her the cap, saying "you really haven't missed it? That's sad, because this man came here to bringt it to you. He found it when..." Lee shows up, smiling and opening his arms: "Clementine...." "Lee!" As she runs as fast as she can a bang ruins the scene. Lee falls, his body hits the ground and the earth shakes. Clementine drowns into the ground, seeing Charlie with his rifle, who's standing right behind her beloved guardian. The last things she sees is the rifle barrel....

    The Dream is over - please continue

  • edited December 2013

    Clementine shot up out of her bed, she was drenched it sticky sweat. Clem looked around, it was clearly still dark out and Charlie was still sound asleep a few inches away. Clem knew she wouldn't get back to sleep tonight so she slipped out of her bag quietly and tip toed outside. The cool fresh air swept away any grogginess she had left from her sleep. She just stood for awhile thinking of her dream, Charlie had killed someone it was just so awful, and yet that was the world she lived in was like now, she had taken lives as well. After a long time the sun started to rise and she felt a hand on her shoulder, it was Kenny.
    "Hey Clementine, how long have you been out here?" He asked.
    "Just a few minutes, needed some fresh air." She lied.
    "It's finally time to say goodbye to this place huh, feels like we've been here forever. You know I've been thinking Clem, about how strange it all is. The most capable people who used to be in our group are gone now and yet we remain, we are all that remains."
    She understood what he was saying, she was a kid and he wasn't much of a fighter from what Lee told her, but they were the ones who were still alive.
    "Hey Kenny were you keeping watch all night ?"
    "Didn't get tired, I'm sure I'll regret it once we hit the road. Alright the others should be waking up now we should probably head inside."
    Just before Clem got back inside Kenny said. "Just so you know next time you "just need fresh air" for a few minutes, put something warmer on it's getting cold."
    Clem had forgotten to grab a sweater from the small amount of warm clothes the group and gathered that they kept in a small storage area, she gave Kenny a small nod and walked inside.

  • Its possible for clem to NEVER have that sweater.

    MegaMoto posted: »

    Clementine shot up out of her bed, she was drenched it sticky sweat. Clem looked around, it was clearly still dark out and Charlie was still s

  • edited December 2013

    People slowly started to get up. clem saw Tyler get up quickly and walk outside with miranda following him. it reminded her of how much her pet hamster liked her dad. she would go crazy when he got near. eddie and jessica where staring out the window together and looking at the sun as it rose. Jacob and pascucci where packing everything up. jacob picked up clems hat and threw it to her. she barley caught it. Charlie was waving to her up the front. she walked up to him

    Continue

    PS sorry for short posts been busy

  • Right, I should try to fix that.

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Its possible for clem to NEVER have that sweater.

  • edited December 2013

    "Yes?" She asks, clearly nervous. Charlie replies "Everything alright? I've heard you groaning and whimpering - guess you had nightmares, huh?" Clementine is reminded of her horrible dream. Charlie killed Lee. Sure, it wasn't real, but still: as much as she likes the self-conscious little boy: He has a very dark side that scares her. "What was it?" asks Charlie. "Errr... You mean the dream?". "Yes. Was it about walkers? You don't have to be afraid, you know: I'll protect you..." "Charlie...you killed him..." she begins to cry "you killed Lee! I know it wasn't real... But you kiled the girl... And the man in the woods...". Charlie first looks offended, but when he realises how scared and desperate Clem is he makes a sad face. "Clem listen.. I only kill BAD people... I am just protecting you. Believe me: I don't want you to cry, I know what I did is horrible. But I'll see you rather crying than dead. Even if you're going to hate me: I will always keep killing the ones trying to kill us. And believe me: I'd never hurt your friends. Lee was your best friend - I'd NEVER kill him! Do you believe me?". Clem stopped crying, her face still wet because of her tears. "You got a veeeery red nose, like Rudolph!" Charlie remarks with a grin and Clementine giggles, whipping her tears away.Then she says: "It's just... killing is so horrible... I'd never do that..." "You never killed somebody? Not even a walker? Well, whenever I meet a bad guy I try to see him as a walker, that helps...". Clementine doesn't reply, as she is thinking: Actually, I killed somebody... The bad man that made me follow him. He told me he had my parents... He lied... I was SO dissappointed... And then he tried to kill Lee... I saved Lee... Then she comes to the conclusion that she actually HAD to kill the stranger ... "Are you listening, Clem? Nevermind. If you need me, you can find me at the jeeps - they are loading our stuff onto the load spaces - I'm gonna help them. Just one thing: Do you forgive me?" Clementine looks him straight in the eyes, saying "Yes." She feels relieved.

    "Holy crap!" says Eddie. "Have you seen Miranda, Clementine? She must've run off or something..." In the same moment Tyler comes back from the restroom. "Where is the dog?". "She was just right here, at least a few minutes ago.. chillax, she can't be far". Tyler lifts his hands over his head saying "I am not going anywhere without this cute little pup - don't just stand here - find her!" The group followed this scene and now pauses the preparations. Clem looks at Charlie - he obviously looks shocked - where is Miranda?

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  • Just popping in to note, I have my mid-terms ending next week, so I should be able to post after that. Until then, I'll let you guys handle it. It looke like you all are doing a good job of it anyway, so yeah. Bye for now!

  • Can't wait - we need more writers since I'm going to be very busy in the next days, too. Anyway: Good luck

    Zurrdroid posted: »

    Just popping in to note, I have my mid-terms ending next week, so I should be able to post after that. Until then, I'll let you guys handle it. It looke like you all are doing a good job of it anyway, so yeah. Bye for now!

  • edited December 2013

    ''We don't have time to look for some stupid dog right now'', Kenny yelled with obvious annoyance in his voice, ''We don't have the time.''

    The group ignored Kenny's commands and kept on searching for the pug in every nook and cranny. Unable to find any trace of the dog in the main hall, they decided to open the previously barred up door that led to a big tower. There was a small hole at the bottom of the door, just big enough to fit a small dog.

    ''You don't think she might have...'' Charlie looks worried, his face has turned white as snow. ''The only way to find out is to go up.'' Eddie replies. ''What are you all talking about?'', Clementine sounds confused, ''Have you been here before?''.

    ''While you were in your coma,'', Eddie begins talking, ''we explored the entire church, we didn't find a lot of supplies, but what we did find was this door leading to the bell tower. When we found it, the place was all boarded up and there was a note attached to the door. The note said that the guy had left a shit ton of supplies before... hanging himself on the bell at the top of the bell tower. What he forgot to mention in his note was the fact that the entire staircase was and still is flooded by walkers.''

    ''So, did you ever try to get in?'' Clementine says with a small voice. ''We've made several attempts, but it's just too dangerous.''

    Clementine thought long and hard about the matter, every single option crossed her mind, but after 10 minutes she realized what she had to do.

    ''I know how we can get up there.'', Clementine uttered, ''When Lee and I walked through Savannah, the streets were full of walkers, but Lee was smart, and he came up with a way to be safe around walkers.'' Clementine felt tears welling up, but she fought them, ''You have to rub the organs of walkers on you, I don't know why, but it worked.''

    Eddie was in the middle of making a snappy remark, when he noticed everyone looking at him, he turned pale, ''I don't feel too good.''

  • AWE-SOME

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    ''We don't have time to look for some stupid dog right now'', Kenny yelled with obvious annoyance in his voice, ''We don't have the time.''

  • Going to continue. Don't know what do do with Eddie but il do something

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    ''We don't have time to look for some stupid dog right now'', Kenny yelled with obvious annoyance in his voice, ''We don't have the time.''

  • At that moment Miranda came running out of the girls bathroom wondering where her food was. She ran over to Tyler who was checking Eddie out

    "He has gastro" Tyler said "get to the room and don't worry about him. I have the tools in need to nurse him to full strength. Jacob before you go I left that ice pick in the car. You should take it

    "Shure said Jacob who began walking to the gas room with clem in hot pursuit. When they walked in clem jumped inside the jeep and began fiddling with the radio. She knew there was no music playing but it reminded her of home as she used to donut to her pernets car. She kept going until she reached 77.4 on that channel she herd static. Jacob went around to see

    "We NEED help Brian. There are THOUSANDS out there and your just going to sit by and watch this happen" said a woman on the radio upon hearing this Jacob ran out of the room

    "Where in Woodbury we can't help" said a man on the radio

    "PLEASE!!!" The woman begged. By that time everyone was inside the room (except Eddie)

    "Unless some little girl starts playing with the radio and finds this station you are FUCKED!!!" Yelled the man "Get out and piss off" clementine gave them an uneasy smile

    "WE HAVE NO MEDS AND NO WEAPONS" the woman yelled "PLEASE"

    "I have better things to attend to. My niece has to be fed. Goodbye. Woodbury singing off"

    "AHHHH" the woman yelled. Walkers could be herd above her screams seemingly devouring her.

    CONTINUE

  • Wait, I am a bit confused here... I thought it was established that the group was in Statesboro. I mentioned it in a previous post, right? This sounds like they are still in Savannah, at Crawford, and if they were, wouldn't Clem have recognized the place by now (since she could have been asked to come along)?

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    ''We don't have time to look for some stupid dog right now'', Kenny yelled with obvious annoyance in his voice, ''We don't have the time.''

  • I guess he means that the church in Statesboro has a belltower

    Zurrdroid posted: »

    Wait, I am a bit confused here... I thought it was established that the group was in Statesboro. I mentioned it in a previous post, right? Thi

  • I don't know what to write actually :(

  • Yeah, that is what I meant, while I was writing I did realize that the same thing happened in Crawford, but I figured that there might have been more people hanging themselves in a bell tower.

    So yes, we are in Statesboro, not in Crawford. The situation is just similar.

    TheMissus posted: »

    I guess he means that the church in Statesboro has a belltower

  • Thanks!

    TheMissus posted: »

    AWE-SOME

  • edited December 2013

    Me neither, I feel like Lord_zasca kind of avoided the whole bell tower situation, which, for some people, could have been a nice action-filled break from the character-building episode we have written so far.

    Not saying what Lord_zasca wrote is bad, just that I think he missed an opportunity to give a much needed twist to the story.

    TheMissus posted: »

    I don't know what to write actually

  • edited December 2013

    I totally agree (and this is no offense, Zasca, I like your textes very much). I felt like the story needed some action this is why I made Miranda dissapear. Anyway, let's try to make the best out of it.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    Me neither, I feel like Lord_zasca kind of avoided the whole bell tower situation, which, for some people, could have been a nice action-fille

  • this was going to make it MORE action filled (at least thats what i thought!) because now they have to worry about the walkers at new crawford and that once they have "turned" them all they would come for the church group. oh well

    TheMissus posted: »

    I totally agree (and this is no offense, Zasca, I like your textes very much). I felt like the story needed some action this is why I made Miranda dissapear. Anyway, let's try to make the best out of it.

  • That could turn out interesting as well, we're just going to make it work like we always have so far!

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    this was going to make it MORE action filled (at least thats what i thought!) because now they have to worry about the walkers at new crawford and that once they have "turned" them all they would come for the church group. oh well

  • I am bumping this. I don't know what to write and do NOT want this thread, and thus the story, to die. Keep it up everyone!

  • Damn. The potential this thread had, has been ruined by illiterate children. I'm out.

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    What a shame.

  • Yes I think someone should write an ending and thats it.

    xer0Hack posted: »

    Damn. The potential this thread had, has been ruined by illiterate children. I'm out. What a shame.

  • edited December 2013

    If you don't like it feel free to improve it or to not follow it anymore. Insulting everyone who invested blood, sweat and tears on 14 pages full of story so far is a shame

    xer0Hack posted: »

    Damn. The potential this thread had, has been ruined by illiterate children. I'm out. What a shame.

  • edited December 2013

    It was a weird turn that happened there. It's really confusing. I am trying to add to this but I can't seem to make it work. This can't be New Crawford Woodbury is talking to because they say they have no meds or weapons..and yet new Crawford has been fortified by an electric fence and has been hoarding supplies. So I can only assume that the people dying are the ones that Amanda was part of who were on the perimeter of New Crawford. This is really tough to fix this story...still gonna try. Forgive me as this is my first post.

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    this was going to make it MORE action filled (at least thats what i thought!) because now they have to worry about the walkers at new crawford and that once they have "turned" them all they would come for the church group. oh well

  • edited December 2013

    NEVER mind

  • edited December 2013

    Finally the screaming stopped. Radio static filled the air.

    "What the HELL was that?!" yelled Kenny.

    "Woodbury? That's the place Amanda was talking about..." Charlie said quietly.

    "BUT, what the hell was that?!" Kenny turned and asked.

    "That must've been her group..." Charlie said.

    "Well then that means we are lucky then. At least we don't have to worry about those nut jobs coming for us anymore, right?." Kenny mentions to the group.

    "But she said there were thousands...." Muttered Clem.

    Jacob returned to the room, supporting a very pale looking Eddie.
    "No time guys, get your stuff and get in...we've got to go." Eddie says hastily.
    Jacob helps walk Eddie slowly around the jeep and helps him get into one of the backseats.

    "Tyler, grab whatever meds you need and jump in back with Eddie. You got to help him through this. We have to go." Eddie says.
    Tyler nods and walks out of the room to get his supplies, Miranda following quickly right on his heels.

    "Why are we in such a hurry? We don't have to worry about Amanda's group anymore." Kenny says.

    "Didn't you hear what she screamed?! There are thousands! They can't be too far from us if they were near New Crawford...and if there's thousands then that means we don't have too much time before those thousands reach us. We have to go Kenny!" Jacob says.

    "Oh. Shit. Yeah alright alright." Kenny fumbles a bit as he leaves the room to grab his stuff.

    ** Please continue. Hope this helps a bit. **

  • edited December 2013

    Disregard anything you may or may not have read

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    NEVER mind

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