I've been waiting for the season two hype train to die down before coming back to this thread. That being said I'm completely confused as to what's going on, did one of the cars explode or something ? I think we need a new recap soon.
K. here is what we do. i dont have the time so someone write a peice where another plane crahses and it devertes the herd of walkers. they drive out of there and stumble onto a farm with 2 people (The series needs more woman so 2 of them would be cool) we end the episode and go back to writing in 2ish weeks when christmas is over and they hype for episode 1 has died down
Jacob was at the other car and realized Kenny was right, maybe Clem should have been in the other car...
Jessica was checking on Eddie, eagerly checking to see what the problem was.
"Come on Eddie...Not now please...sweetie...it's gonna be sniff ok..." Jessica said trying to wake Eddie up.
"Guys! The damn walkers are coming!" Charlie said.
Jessica shouted to Jacob, "Come on! Jacob get in the car!"
Jeep 1 & 2 were ready to start.
"WHAT THE ---?" Jacob started.
As a huge plane came out of nowhere, landing in a different direction to the walkers, diverting the walkers away from the group.
Jacob was startled..."Holy shit guys!"
Everyone got out of the RV and looked in the distance, the plane saved them. The walkers were all going over to the plane.
"Well...that escalated quickly" Kenny said.
"Guys...We have NO time to waste, now Kenny, what is wrong with Pascucci?" Tyler asked.
"We don't know, we need to get him, Eddie & Clem to a saver place" Charlie said.
Kenny walked over to Clem, Clem was holding on to Miranda.
"Are you ok Clementine?" Kenny asked.
"I...I think.........." Clem tried to say before passing out.
"Guys! We need to go now, Clem's passed out and she might have broken something, we need to go to a medical center of hospital or find supplies!" Kenny shouted.
Everybody agreed to keep driving, they kept on going their direction where the walkers weren't following them.
Car 1 - Jacob, Jessica, Clem, Eddie, Miranda, Tyler
"What is that?" Jessica asked.
"I think it's a farm" Jacob said with a smile.
2nd Jeep - Kenny, Charlie & Pascucci
"Kenny, is that a farm?" Charlie asked.
"I think so boy, it's a farm" Kenny said with a relaxing smile.
Both cars parked in and two women walked out of the farm.
Tyler held the sniper close to him, whilst Clem had her good ol pistol with her. Jacob still had the ice pick, and there was a spare hammer.
"Don't shoot fellas, please, me and my friend here have been on this farm for years, and it's very safe I assure you. My name's Emma, and my friend here is Eva" Emma said.
"Hey! We're both 23, but our parents didn't make it" Eva said.
"I'm sorry if I sound like a dick, but me and Clem didn't exactly have a good encounter last time we stumbled across a farm" Kenny said.
"Why?" Emma asked eagerly, even if a little nosy.
"Cannibals" Kenny said.
Emma & Eva shook their heads.
"Well I can say we don't do that and never will, if you look over there, we got 3 perfect apple trees, and over there are some perfect carrots to grow. We got even more food in the house, and potatoes are growing too!" Eva said.
The group looked in awe at the farm.
"You look like you're in pretty bad shape" Emma said. "I think I might be able to patch one of your folks up!"
Kenny was holding Clementine. "Please...she's a little girl, and she may have broken something" Kenny said.
"Where's her parents?" Eva asked.
Kenny looked down, realizing he actually didn't know, but he had to assume...
"Don't think they made it" Kenny said.
Kenny then passed Clem over to Emma, and the whole group looked at the farm, and then at Clem. The screen focuses on Clem when
**THE WALKING DEAD**
Thought I'd continue the story and we can now do Zusca's idea, go back to writing 2 weeks when xmas is over and the hype has died down...
"Where the fuck's Jacob?" Tyler asked.
Jacob was at the other car and realized Kenny was right, maybe Clem should have been in the other ca… morer...
Jessica was checking on Eddie, eagerly checking to see what the problem was.
"Come on Eddie...Not now please...sweetie...it's gonna be sniff ok..." Jessica said trying to wake Eddie up.
"Guys! The damn walkers are coming!" Charlie said.
Jessica shouted to Jacob, "Come on! Jacob get in the car!"
Jeep 1 & 2 were ready to start.
"WHAT THE ---?" Jacob started.
As a huge plane came out of nowhere, landing in a different direction to the walkers, diverting the walkers away from the group.
Jacob was startled..."Holy shit guys!"
Everyone got out of the RV and looked in the distance, the plane saved them. The walkers were all going over to the plane.
"Well...that escalated quickly" Kenny said.
"Guys...We have NO time to waste, now Kenny, what is wrong with Pascucci?" Tyler a… [view original content]
Off-topic: I think the OP SomeGuye should think about changing the title of the thread to make it clear that this is a fan-fiction type of thr… moreead. That way we might be able to attract some more readers and possible writers.
So, SomeGuye, if you're reading this, please change the title to something more fitting!
How about Molly... wait she was killed off in the first page wasn't she. Dammit, those were the early years, we were inexperienced. Well how about some of the 400 days guys ?
How about Molly... wait she was killed off in the first page wasn't she. Dammit, those were the early years, we were inexperienced. Well how about some of the 400 days guys ?
Im happy to let other people write go ahead. its just that i have to deal with the hype over episode 1 season 2 and i have a lot of work. go ahead. i dont care. as for mr Interactive gamers idea. its cool but i had a back up plot point about this for awhile and here goes
We skip 7 weeks (Now that clems leg is healed) there has been at least one full scale walker attack on the farm. the farms are doing well but its taking its toll on the people. one night clem overhears kenny talking to the group about leaving and says no matter what that he is taking clem. Charlie and Pascucci come with him while the others (Jessica in perticular) disagrees with kenny. No matter what clem goes and that could segway into new people. and at the end of the season (or earlier) we could come back.
Im happy to let other people write go ahead. its just that i have to deal with the hype over episode 1 season 2 and i have a lot of work. go a… morehead. i dont care. as for mr Interactive gamers idea. its cool but i had a back up plot point about this for awhile and here goes
We skip 7 weeks (Now that clems leg is healed) there has been at least one full scale walker attack on the farm. the farms are doing well but its taking its toll on the people. one night clem overhears kenny talking to the group about leaving and says no matter what that he is taking clem. Charlie and Pascucci come with him while the others (Jessica in perticular) disagrees with kenny. No matter what clem goes and that could segway into new people. and at the end of the season (or earlier) we could come back.
Just an idea
Am I allowed to start yet? I feel like I could make a great introduction to the new group. I will also try to take Lord_Zasca's idea in consideration for the end of this episode.
Am I allowed to start yet? I feel like I could make a great introduction to the new group. I will also try to take Lord_Zasca's idea in consideration for the end of this episode.
I am seriously bursting with ideas!
I would like to point out that this season will feature a different set of characters, who will meet up with Clementine's group sonner or later in the episode.
The Walking dead - Season 2 - Episode 3 - ''A settlement up north''
''Damn, it's cold out here.'', Jeremy shivered, the wind felt like needles on his exposed arms, ''We better chop up some wood, else we gonna freeze to death.''
Jeremy's friend, Dave, had picked up a fairly new looking axe from the abandoned cabin they were holed up in, the friends used to live in an apartment together, and have been surviving on their own since the outbreak started.
''Remind me, why are we going north again?''
Dave had never liked cold weather, he was born in California and moved to Georgia when he was ten years old. Whenever December came you would see him sitting in front of the warmth of a fireplace with hot chocolate in his hands.
Jeremy was obviously agitated, ''Dave, man, I've told you countless times that the cold makes the shamblers slower, do you even listen to me?''
No response.
''Haha, very funny Dave.''
Still nothing. Jeremy proceeded to walk to an open part of the forest, he saw a set of footsteps in the snow. He and Dave had chopped wood here a few times before, but these footsteps were too fresh to have remained from their previous trips.
''Dave? Dave? Come on, man! Is this some kind of joke?'' Jeremy grabbed his baseball bat, a gift from his father, and prepared for what was to come. ''This is not funny Dave!'', he said, followed by ten seconds of dead-silence, seemingly forever in his nervous mind.
''Drop the weapon.'', a calm female voice broke the silence, and a silhouette could be seen in the bushes. Jeremy heard the sound of a gun being holstered, a middle-aged African-American woman stepped out of the thick, snowy shrubbery.
''My name is Tavia.''
''Where's my friend!?'', Jeremy pushed her up against a thick oak tree and started screaming, ''What have you done to him, you sick fu--''
His sentence was cut short by a weird sting in the back of his neck, he fell to the floor and laid there, paralyzed. Jeremy witnessed the sight of the woman called Tavia talking to Dave just before passing out...
I would like to point out that this season will feature a different set of characters, who will meet up with Clementine's group sonner or late… morer in the episode.
The Walking dead - Season 2 - Episode 3 - ''A settlement up north''
''Damn, it's cold out here.'', Jeremy shivered, the wind felt like needles on his exposed arms, ''We better chop up some wood, else we gonna freeze to death.''
Jeremy's friend, Dave, had picked up a fairly new looking axe from the abandoned cabin they were holed up in, the friends used to live in an apartment together, and have been surviving on their own since the outbreak started.
''Remind me, why are we going north again?''
Dave had never liked cold weather, he was born in California and moved to Georgia when he was ten years old. Whenever December came you would see him sitting in front of the warmth of a fireplace with hot chocolate in his hands.
Jeremy was obviously agitated, ''Dave, man, I've told… [view original content]
Guys I got an idea. Remember in Episode 1 Lily said she got to work with a plane if she was lucky, what if one of the planes that crashed was driven by Lily? Just an Idea that probably wouldn't work, but it would be cool if we went to explore the wreckage and found walker Lily/almost dead Lily.
Guys I got an idea. Remember in Episode 1 Lily said she got to work with a plane if she was lucky, what if one of the planes that crashed was … moredriven by Lily? Just an Idea that probably wouldn't work, but it would be cool if we went to explore the wreckage and found walker Lily/almost dead Lily.
its good. nothing i want to improve on. so just to be clear we have skipped 16 months into the future? or are we 7 weeks after the accident (the estimated amount of time for a bone to heal)
Please leave feedback if you liked or disliked something I wrote, thanks.
EDIT: I slightly changed the post to give more background to the … morecharacters and to add some details.
EDIT: more changes. This time, I went the extra mile, because I finally had the time, I hope you enjoy!.
its good. nothing i want to improve on. so just to be clear we have skipped 16 months into the future? or are we 7 weeks after the accident (the estimated amount of time for a bone to heal)
But wasn't Lilly killed/shot earlier in the season? Man, I think we're kind of losing track of the story here, I might consider creating a new thread, or some kind of blog to post the entire story, or at least a summary.
Hi guys. As you can imagine I've been busy with exams, then holidays and of course the S2 hype. I used to be a busy story contributor with the first 15 pages of this thread. I am happy to see that this thread is still alive and people are bursting with ideas. But please - I gotta repeat at this point what was written before:
1. don't make too many twists. Big twists should be made seldom and if there is a twist it has to be a logically written and meaningful one
2. stay true to the storyline so far - make sure you don't mix up characters, bring up people who are dead and so on
3. the emphasis has to be on character developement and good dialogues rather than lots of puzzling action scenes which cause frustration and confusion so people leave this game
4. don't bring up to many new characters, if it is not necessary because of the reasons listed in the next point
5. we love our characters, but sometimes even a beloved character has to die (it's TWD). At this point we have an enourmous group and it's become impossible to give every character the attention that he or she deserves
6. summaries are good for new members. But they are also a lot of work. Lord Zasca and I have made summaries already. Don't write "someone make a summary!" because nobody will just because you ask for it. Take your time and do it yourself instead, as we did.
7. very important: please - don't make short posts with lots of action and twists. Make rather longer posts including more descriptions of the environment, the facial expressions, the feelings and so on. If you don't have the time for a longer post make a short contribution with less activity
8. If you have a story idea just write it down when it's your turn. To plan where the story will go isn't the sense of this game - the surprise effect is. Don't start polls with thumbs up or downs. The community members are from allover the world and due to time difference it is unfair to start quick votings while it is in the middle of the night elsewhere.
9. Stay true to the right timeframe!!! Here is a link to the TWD timeline: http://walkingdead.wikia.com/wiki/The_Walking_Dead_Telltale_Games_Timeline
don't just bring up characters just because you like them - look at the timeline and check if it is possible for the caracter to meet our group. Our story takes place approximately inbetween Day 130-150 (month 5 or so after the outbreak). I talk here about the incident with the two cars and the crashes - it doesn't occur to me how much time passed until the group meets the farm girls - who can tell me?
10. Lastly - summing up: make sure your post is as unmistakeable, clear and plain as possible. The story has to be readable and the happenings understandeable.
An addition to the newest incidents: After the two cars surrounded by walkers and the big crash I totally lost track of what is going on as well as what might happen next and I think it is because of too many things happening to fast as well as the leaving out of details and descriptions. Please keep the points above I've repeated from earlier pages in mind to make it enjoyable as well as readable.
If you have any other ideas how to assure that the story becomes easier to read please share. Thanks and go on.
Comments
I think he replied without realizing there were more pages possibly.
Bumping this thread. Lets not let it die, guys!
I know, it's confusing.
How 'bout we just "teleport" them out of the horde lol.
I'd love to write something but I'm so confused, no matter how many times I reread it, this whole car thing, ugh.
At least then we could get things back in the road. Again a summery could help.
me too i read dead in the heads post and was like Um what? i think its a plane or something
Tyler because i based it off my freind tyler. i tell him whats happening and he was really pissed when he got shot
K. here is what we do. i dont have the time so someone write a peice where another plane crahses and it devertes the herd of walkers. they drive out of there and stumble onto a farm with 2 people (The series needs more woman so 2 of them would be cool) we end the episode and go back to writing in 2ish weeks when christmas is over and they hype for episode 1 has died down
Mine is either Eddie (for obvious reasons) or Charlie.
I was gonna write but the last part about the explosion plane or whatever mindfucked me
"Where the fuck's Jacob?" Tyler asked.
Jacob was at the other car and realized Kenny was right, maybe Clem should have been in the other car...
Jessica was checking on Eddie, eagerly checking to see what the problem was.
"Come on Eddie...Not now please...sweetie...it's gonna be sniff ok..." Jessica said trying to wake Eddie up.
"Guys! The damn walkers are coming!" Charlie said.
Jessica shouted to Jacob, "Come on! Jacob get in the car!"
Jeep 1 & 2 were ready to start.
"WHAT THE ---?" Jacob started.
As a huge plane came out of nowhere, landing in a different direction to the walkers, diverting the walkers away from the group.
Jacob was startled..."Holy shit guys!"
Everyone got out of the RV and looked in the distance, the plane saved them. The walkers were all going over to the plane.
"Well...that escalated quickly" Kenny said.
"Guys...We have NO time to waste, now Kenny, what is wrong with Pascucci?" Tyler asked.
"We don't know, we need to get him, Eddie & Clem to a saver place" Charlie said.
Kenny walked over to Clem, Clem was holding on to Miranda.
"Are you ok Clementine?" Kenny asked.
"I...I think.........." Clem tried to say before passing out.
"Guys! We need to go now, Clem's passed out and she might have broken something, we need to go to a medical center of hospital or find supplies!" Kenny shouted.
Everybody agreed to keep driving, they kept on going their direction where the walkers weren't following them.
Car 1 - Jacob, Jessica, Clem, Eddie, Miranda, Tyler
"What is that?" Jessica asked.
"I think it's a farm" Jacob said with a smile.
2nd Jeep - Kenny, Charlie & Pascucci
"Kenny, is that a farm?" Charlie asked.
"I think so boy, it's a farm" Kenny said with a relaxing smile.
Both cars parked in and two women walked out of the farm.
Tyler held the sniper close to him, whilst Clem had her good ol pistol with her. Jacob still had the ice pick, and there was a spare hammer.
"Don't shoot fellas, please, me and my friend here have been on this farm for years, and it's very safe I assure you. My name's Emma, and my friend here is Eva" Emma said.
"Hey! We're both 23, but our parents didn't make it" Eva said.
"I'm sorry if I sound like a dick, but me and Clem didn't exactly have a good encounter last time we stumbled across a farm" Kenny said.
"Why?" Emma asked eagerly, even if a little nosy.
"Cannibals" Kenny said.
Emma & Eva shook their heads.
"Well I can say we don't do that and never will, if you look over there, we got 3 perfect apple trees, and over there are some perfect carrots to grow. We got even more food in the house, and potatoes are growing too!" Eva said.
The group looked in awe at the farm.
"You look like you're in pretty bad shape" Emma said. "I think I might be able to patch one of your folks up!"
Kenny was holding Clementine. "Please...she's a little girl, and she may have broken something" Kenny said.
"Where's her parents?" Eva asked.
Kenny looked down, realizing he actually didn't know, but he had to assume...
"Don't think they made it" Kenny said.
Kenny then passed Clem over to Emma, and the whole group looked at the farm, and then at Clem. The screen focuses on Clem when
Thought I'd continue the story and we can now do Zusca's idea, go back to writing 2 weeks when xmas is over and the hype has died down...
This is gosh dang fabulouse,
Thanks man
Duck comes in with a tractor and mows every zombie he sees. ignore me LOL
I agree that the title of the thread should be changed. Some suggestions are Let's Tell a Story, Let's Tell a Tale, or Let's Tell a Tall Tale.
That was good. You should write books.
why thank you kind sir
I kinda feel like writing, but I guess I'll hold off until just a little longer. Bursting with ideas though!
Shall we start a new episode or continue with the farm though?
If you want to start fresh, thumbs this up. If you don't thumbs this down. I will check the votes soon and we will see what people want to do.
We could start this episode with a fresh group, or even one person, then in the end, we can have that group or person meet up with Clementine's group.
Yeh.
How about Molly... wait she was killed off in the first page wasn't she. Dammit, those were the early years, we were inexperienced. Well how about some of the 400 days guys ?
My bro "Where you at Wyatt" could join. love him.
Im happy to let other people write go ahead. its just that i have to deal with the hype over episode 1 season 2 and i have a lot of work. go ahead. i dont care. as for mr Interactive gamers idea. its cool but i had a back up plot point about this for awhile and here goes
We skip 7 weeks (Now that clems leg is healed) there has been at least one full scale walker attack on the farm. the farms are doing well but its taking its toll on the people. one night clem overhears kenny talking to the group about leaving and says no matter what that he is taking clem. Charlie and Pascucci come with him while the others (Jessica in perticular) disagrees with kenny. No matter what clem goes and that could segway into new people. and at the end of the season (or earlier) we could come back.
Just an idea
Oh my god! This would be amazing! ")
Am I allowed to start yet? I feel like I could make a great introduction to the new group. I will also try to take Lord_Zasca's idea in consideration for the end of this episode.
I am seriously bursting with ideas!
Go!
sry wrong thread
Alrighty then!
I would like to point out that this season will feature a different set of characters, who will meet up with Clementine's group sonner or later in the episode.
The Walking dead - Season 2 - Episode 3 - ''A settlement up north''
''Damn, it's cold out here.'', Jeremy shivered, the wind felt like needles on his exposed arms, ''We better chop up some wood, else we gonna freeze to death.''
Jeremy's friend, Dave, had picked up a fairly new looking axe from the abandoned cabin they were holed up in, the friends used to live in an apartment together, and have been surviving on their own since the outbreak started.
''Remind me, why are we going north again?''
Dave had never liked cold weather, he was born in California and moved to Georgia when he was ten years old. Whenever December came you would see him sitting in front of the warmth of a fireplace with hot chocolate in his hands.
Jeremy was obviously agitated, ''Dave, man, I've told you countless times that the cold makes the shamblers slower, do you even listen to me?''
No response.
''Haha, very funny Dave.''
Still nothing. Jeremy proceeded to walk to an open part of the forest, he saw a set of footsteps in the snow. He and Dave had chopped wood here a few times before, but these footsteps were too fresh to have remained from their previous trips.
''Dave? Dave? Come on, man! Is this some kind of joke?'' Jeremy grabbed his baseball bat, a gift from his father, and prepared for what was to come. ''This is not funny Dave!'', he said, followed by ten seconds of dead-silence, seemingly forever in his nervous mind.
''Drop the weapon.'', a calm female voice broke the silence, and a silhouette could be seen in the bushes. Jeremy heard the sound of a gun being holstered, a middle-aged African-American woman stepped out of the thick, snowy shrubbery.
''My name is Tavia.''
''Where's my friend!?'', Jeremy pushed her up against a thick oak tree and started screaming, ''What have you done to him, you sick fu--''
His sentence was cut short by a weird sting in the back of his neck, he fell to the floor and laid there, paralyzed. Jeremy witnessed the sight of the woman called Tavia talking to Dave just before passing out...
-CONTINUE FROM HERE-
Please leave feedback if you liked or disliked something I wrote, thanks.
EDIT: I slightly changed the post to give more background to the characters and to add some details.
EDIT: more changes. This time, I went the extra mile, because I finally had the time, I hope you enjoy!.
Damn! So maybe Tavia is bad afterall
Loved the start.
Gotta consider compelling this and making it a solid fanfic.
Guys I got an idea. Remember in Episode 1 Lily said she got to work with a plane if she was lucky, what if one of the planes that crashed was driven by Lily? Just an Idea that probably wouldn't work, but it would be cool if we went to explore the wreckage and found walker Lily/almost dead Lily.
I have an idea for lilly and it did envolve that. wait and see
its good. nothing i want to improve on. so just to be clear we have skipped 16 months into the future? or are we 7 weeks after the accident (the estimated amount of time for a bone to heal)
Look at my later post.
But wasn't Lilly killed/shot earlier in the season? Man, I think we're kind of losing track of the story here, I might consider creating a new thread, or some kind of blog to post the entire story, or at least a summary.
Hi guys. As you can imagine I've been busy with exams, then holidays and of course the S2 hype. I used to be a busy story contributor with the first 15 pages of this thread. I am happy to see that this thread is still alive and people are bursting with ideas. But please - I gotta repeat at this point what was written before:
1. don't make too many twists. Big twists should be made seldom and if there is a twist it has to be a logically written and meaningful one
2. stay true to the storyline so far - make sure you don't mix up characters, bring up people who are dead and so on
3. the emphasis has to be on character developement and good dialogues rather than lots of puzzling action scenes which cause frustration and confusion so people leave this game
4. don't bring up to many new characters, if it is not necessary because of the reasons listed in the next point
5. we love our characters, but sometimes even a beloved character has to die (it's TWD). At this point we have an enourmous group and it's become impossible to give every character the attention that he or she deserves
6. summaries are good for new members. But they are also a lot of work. Lord Zasca and I have made summaries already. Don't write "someone make a summary!" because nobody will just because you ask for it. Take your time and do it yourself instead, as we did.
7. very important: please - don't make short posts with lots of action and twists. Make rather longer posts including more descriptions of the environment, the facial expressions, the feelings and so on. If you don't have the time for a longer post make a short contribution with less activity
8. If you have a story idea just write it down when it's your turn. To plan where the story will go isn't the sense of this game - the surprise effect is. Don't start polls with thumbs up or downs. The community members are from allover the world and due to time difference it is unfair to start quick votings while it is in the middle of the night elsewhere.
9. Stay true to the right timeframe!!! Here is a link to the TWD timeline: http://walkingdead.wikia.com/wiki/The_Walking_Dead_Telltale_Games_Timeline
don't just bring up characters just because you like them - look at the timeline and check if it is possible for the caracter to meet our group. Our story takes place approximately inbetween Day 130-150 (month 5 or so after the outbreak). I talk here about the incident with the two cars and the crashes - it doesn't occur to me how much time passed until the group meets the farm girls - who can tell me?
10. Lastly - summing up: make sure your post is as unmistakeable, clear and plain as possible. The story has to be readable and the happenings understandeable.
An addition to the newest incidents: After the two cars surrounded by walkers and the big crash I totally lost track of what is going on as well as what might happen next and I think it is because of too many things happening to fast as well as the leaving out of details and descriptions. Please keep the points above I've repeated from earlier pages in mind to make it enjoyable as well as readable.
If you have any other ideas how to assure that the story becomes easier to read please share. Thanks and go on.