I realized that as well, but I believe there's a good reason for that. You're just really good at his story line. When TheMissus made a courageous attempt to save the episode she did write about him. But sadly, I found it to not be as good as it could have been. But now that you have decided to pick up his story, I feel like it has improved immensely and I'm eagerly awaiting the next Pascucci-post you make.
And yes, Pascucci-post is a word now.
(Also, no offense to TheMissus. She has done her best and I admire the way she tried to save the episode. )
I realized that as well, but I believe there's a good reason for that. You're just really good at his story line. When TheMissus made a courag… moreeous attempt to save the episode she did write about him. But sadly, I found it to not be as good as it could have been. But now that you have decided to pick up his story, I feel like it has improved immensely and I'm eagerly awaiting the next Pascucci-post you make.
And yes, Pascucci-post is a word now.
(Also, no offense to TheMissus. She has done her best and I admire the way she tried to save the episode. )
Thank you, I suppose Pascucci-posts (I like that word ) are my hidden talent.
But where is the post where Themissus posted a Pascucci-post? I looked for it, but couldn't find it.
I don't really know what to write. I don't really know about Bryan opening up. I feel as if somebody else, maybe the guy who created Bryan should do it.
I don't really know what to write. I don't really know about Bryan opening up. I feel as if somebody else, maybe the guy who created Bryan should do it.
I realized that, too, and that's fine with me. At this point I just feel like I am better with Clem's story rather than Kenny or Pascucci-posts. Currently it looks like That1guy makes Ken or Pas, HSB and me Clem's goup and you're our Pascucci-post expert
The individual emphasis will surely change as the story progresses.
Yeah, I have noticed that whenever I write about Clem's group I end up using Bryan's perspective. I have also decided it's best to keep Kenny and the settlement out of the story until the group reaches it, just to leave some wiggle room for what is happening there when Clem and co. finally reach it.
I realized that, too, and that's fine with me. At this point I just feel like I am better with Clem's story rather than Kenny or Pascucci-post… mores. Currently it looks like That1guy makes Ken or Pas, HSB and me Clem's goup and you're our Pascucci-post expert
The individual emphasis will surely change as the story progresses.
I realized that as well, but I believe there's a good reason for that. You're just really good at his story line. When TheMissus made a courag… moreeous attempt to save the episode she did write about him. But sadly, I found it to not be as good as it could have been. But now that you have decided to pick up his story, I feel like it has improved immensely and I'm eagerly awaiting the next Pascucci-post you make.
And yes, Pascucci-post is a word now.
(Also, no offense to TheMissus. She has done her best and I admire the way she tried to save the episode. )
The moon shines bright and the group crawls into the cave, follwoing Bryan's flashlight. The aisle is full of spider webs, though Clementine doesn't remember the time when she was actually scared by those small 8-legged creatures anymore. Danielle walks right behind her, though she tries to avoid getting any of the webs into her hair. After 10-15 yards they reach a big room with a few light rays coming from the holes in the walls and the roof. The air is a bit humid and smells like moss yet it's warm, at least much warmer than outside. Then Bryan lights one lantern after another and the group examines the room:
There's a place with a patchwork quilt, probably Bryan's sleeping berth. In the middle of the room is a fireplace with an old kettle and a deer fur lying on the floor next to it. Bryan crouches in the corner and then comes back with plenty of furs, giving them Jeremy: "There, you can sit on them. Please light the fireplace, there's some wood over there in the corner.". Jeremy listens to him and Bryan goes to a box with a blanket on it - turms out it's his weapon storage. He loads one gun after another and hands them to every group member ss they make themselves comfortable by the fire. "Thanks to the elderly lady we can eat dinner. I am not hungry, but you girl's should actually eat." says Jeremy, unpacking 2 cans of carrots while the girls both don't answer as they are still impressed by the extraordinary location. Eventually Bryan accompanies them.
"Why did you choose a cave over a house or another building?" asks Jeremy, chewing on his carrots. "I prefer my privacy." Bryan answers. "Yeah, but... why didn't you just stay on your own in a sort of ... intact bulding?". Bryan swallows and then scratches his cheek as he answers: "i tried to defend my privacy but it didn't last long... eventually some shitheads scavenging for stuff came in my way, always the same shit: fights over weapons, my property or my home. It happened several times and one day I was just sick of it. I gave everything up and ever since I finally got some peace of mind. Four walls or objects don't mean a thing to me, anymore - just the life itself. And my weapons, of course.".Danielle smiles: "It's not that bad, actaully. I like your home." Clementine yawns and Bryan reacts: "You're tired. You can go over there and get some rest.", potining at the place with the quilts. When she covers herself with the blankets she finds a photo near a pillow: it shows Bryan with a very slender and tender looking woman. She has long brown hair and a pretty face with a big nose und full lips. They're both smiling. It's as if it was a completely different person for she had never seen a hint of that smile in Bryan's face before. Clem wants to put it aside as she feels that it is none of her business, but then she notices something familiar: The Marsh House right behind them. She remembers he mentioned that he used to be a night shift guard in this very place where He fooled her. "What is it?". Bryan asks but she doesn't answer. "It's Hannah. She was the love of my life... But she's dead now...". Danielle looks very sad. "I am so sorry... What happened?". Jeremy intervenes: "That's inappropriate, Danielle. You don't have to tell us, Bryan. Though I'd really like to know you better since we're all we've got now.". "No, it's fine. I'll tell you...."
Hey guys, after reading a lot of this story i've decided I want to join in since i'm interested in writing. Gimme some time to catch up so I can write a continuation properly.
Edit: Can anyone tell me on which page is the latest summary? Thanks
I realized that, too, and that's fine with me. At this point I just feel like I am better with Clem's story rather than Kenny or Pascucci-post… mores. Currently it looks like That1guy makes Ken or Pas, HSB and me Clem's goup and you're our Pascucci-post expert
The individual emphasis will surely change as the story progresses.
Welcome! The latest summary is on page 26. Please continue from there. Don't worry: many of the posts after page 26 aren't the story itself but discussions or off-topic posts
Hey guys, after reading a lot of this story i've decided I want to join in since i'm interested in writing. Gimme some time to catch up so I can write a continuation properly.
Edit: Can anyone tell me on which page is the latest summary? Thanks
"Will you shut the hell up?! We need to be quiet!" Pascucci begins to quiet down. "Am I- Am- dead?" Asks Pascucci. "Huh? Oh hell man! Your awake! And no you ain't dead!" Pascucci responds, "Well i feel dead, my arm at least. I don't know how you did it, but you stitched me up! Where the hell did you find the stuff for stitches?" Frank widens his eyes. "I'm supposed to stitch you up?" Pascucci rolls his eyes and sighs. "Well we need to get back to your base, I need stitches." Frank sighs and says, "That ain't happenin, there's a shitload of Zorks out there, and I ain't gonna be there midnight snack. Speaking of midnight snack... want some apple juice and biscuits?" Pascucci nods, "Hell yeah, I could really go for some of that shit... by the way what's in that bag? Any antibiotics, just in case we're here for a while." Frank responds, "Check the bag yourself, I didn't check the front pocket." Pascucci grabs the bag and checks the items inside. "hmm... he's got plenty of condoms that's for darn sure! Why would anybody need this many?" Frank chuckles, "Must of had ALOT of women in his group." Pascucci looks around the bag some more, "Holy crap! This fucker had a watch on him. And it ain't any ordinary watch either, it's really fancy, shows the date and everything!" Frank's eyes widen even more, he asks with the most serious face possible, "Tell me, what is the freaking date"
After thinking about what to write, i've come up with some good ideas. Would you guys mind if I introduced some completely new characters i've been thinking about? (After Randomz has written his).
After thinking about what to write, i've come up with some good ideas. Would you guys mind if I introduced some completely new characters i've been thinking about? (After Randomz has written his).
After thinking about what to write, i've come up with some good ideas. Would you guys mind if I introduced some completely new characters i've been thinking about? (After Randomz has written his).
After this episode are we just gonna stop or make another season some time later?
If I can't make another character now that's fine, I can still make it work.
After this episode are we just gonna stop or make another season some time later?
If I can't make another character now that's fine, I can still make it work.
After this episode are we just gonna stop or make another season some time later?
If I can't make another character now that's fine, I can still make it work.
I
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"I had known her my entire life. Our family's had both decided to live out in the country so we were the only two kids around. Or parents tried to home school us at first, but that didn't work out so we ended up taking these long ass bus rides. Anyway being the only two kids around we grew close rather quickly. At age ten things started moving faster, she started saying things about being more then friends. I was a ten year old boy so of course I was oblivious. However even though I didn't know it we started getting even closer then we were. She'd start holding my hand on the long walks to the bus stop. On my eleventh birthday we ran into the forest to play, and I challenged her to a race up a tree. Hannah could climb better then anyone, but she let me win. That's the kinda person she was."
"When we got to the top of the tree we were both out of breath and so we sat there, for a long time. It had been the middle of the day before but now the sun was setting. I turned to her the sun was beaming behind her. She looked like some sort of angle. We both stared at each other for just a second and then she kissed me. It wasn't long, just a peck but suddenly I understood all the things she had talked about over the last year. We never really talked about it but immediately after we started going out. Strange thing was nothing changed much, we were together almost everyday anyway, but things felt better now. Life moved on and when we got to the second year of high school we made love to each other." Clementine looked slightly confused and then a sudden realization came across her face. "But I don't want to talk about that."
"We were never really popular in school so bully's actually tried to get us to fight sometimes spreading rumors and such, but it never worked. I once shot an arrow right over a bully's head in archery, he never bothered me again. Of course I got kicked out of gym. When we graduated I proposed and she said yes. Hannah wanted to become an artist so we decided to move out, and into the city. Out parents never liked the city much, that's why we lived so far in the country, but they didn't put up much of a fight. A couple weeks later we found ourselves a nice little apartment in Savanna. Even though it was small the rent was high, at least for us. I took up two jobs, by day I worked a register and by night I worked as security at the marsh hotel. That pictures from when she visited me one day. It was rough, but I'd do anything for Hannah, she was the love of my life. We barley saw each other over the course of a year, but out love never died."
"Then one day out of the blue, she came home in tears..."
(please continue)
Note: Boy did I not mean for this to go on for as long as it did. Sorry it's all dialogue, it is Bryan telling a story after all.
"Then one day out of the blue, she came home in tears, she told me that her parents died from some virus, little did we know that was the virus. The virus that has spread around the world, causing the dead to feast on the living."
"Anyway- Later that day, I was working the register. A couple had walked in when I saw my very first ghost. He took a bite right into this guy. Once the night had came the lady explained herself. Her name was Diana, she was married to this guy named Ed." The realization sends a shiver right down Clementine's spine. "She had to use our phone, her poor daughter was trapped somewhere near Atlanta. Me and Hannah agreed we would let Diana stay with us until Ed was feeling better. But that was only our first mistake."
"They gave Ed antibiotics and let him leave the hospital. While he was "Sleeping" in our room, he woke up and bit his wife right on the arm. Me and Hannah were so scared... we- we-, we locked her in there with him. We left the Marsh hotel, and started driving to my parents house. There was this guy along the way, he was hitchhiking. We let him in and told him we would drop him off at the nearest gas station. Again this was another mistake, it was our 4th hour of driving on back roads and he began to get sick. We thought he passed out but her turned into the ghosts. Nearly took a chomp out of Hannah when I beat the hell out of him. To this day i'm so thankful he didn't bite me, or Hannah. I managed to get him out of the truck. And we were on our way again."
"We had just arrived at my parents house, when I ran in and-" A tear rolls down the face of Bryan. but it was almost as if he forced it back up. "I saw my parents, except they weren't them, they looked ghost-like. That's the reason I call em' ghosts. The last thing on my parents TV was the news, I heard the news people say that you need to take out the head. I managed to go to my room and grab my bow that my parents bought me when I was in high school. I did the worst thing I have ever done in my life. I shot them in the head."
"Once again me and Hannah watched the news and heard information regarding a safe zone in Atlanta, we drove, and drove, and drove. Until we made it to the safe zone, spoiler alert, it wasn't that safe. We thought it was at first. It had been a couple of days before everyone was getting bit and turning into the ghosts. I was in the bathroom when I heard all the screaming. I got out as fast as I could, went to my room, grabbed my bow and searched for Hannah. I haven't stopped searching for her either and i will never stop."
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"I had known her my entire life. Our family's had both decided to live out in the country so we wer… moree the only two kids around. Or parents tried to home school us at first, but that didn't work out so we ended up taking these long ass bus rides. Anyway being the only two kids around we grew close rather quickly. At age ten things started moving faster, she started saying things about being more then friends. I was a ten year old boy so of course I was oblivious. However even though I didn't know it we started getting even closer then we were. She'd start holding my hand on the long walks to the bus stop. On my eleventh birthday we ran into the forest to play, and I challenged her to a race up a tree. Hannah could climb better then anyone, but she let me win. That's the kinda person she was."
"When we got to the top of the tree we were both out of breath and so we sat there, for a long time. It had been… [view original content]
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"I had known her my entire life. Our family's had both decided to live out in the country so we wer… moree the only two kids around. Or parents tried to home school us at first, but that didn't work out so we ended up taking these long ass bus rides. Anyway being the only two kids around we grew close rather quickly. At age ten things started moving faster, she started saying things about being more then friends. I was a ten year old boy so of course I was oblivious. However even though I didn't know it we started getting even closer then we were. She'd start holding my hand on the long walks to the bus stop. On my eleventh birthday we ran into the forest to play, and I challenged her to a race up a tree. Hannah could climb better then anyone, but she let me win. That's the kinda person she was."
"When we got to the top of the tree we were both out of breath and so we sat there, for a long time. It had been… [view original content]
"Then one day out of the blue, she came home in tears, she told me that her parents died from some virus, little did we know that was the viru… mores. The virus that has spread around the world, causing the dead to feast on the living."
"Anyway- Later that day, I was working the register. A couple had walked in when I saw my very first ghost. He took a bite right into this guy. Once the night had came the lady explained herself. Her name was Diana, she was married to this guy named Ed." The realization sends a shiver right down Clementine's spine. "She had to use our phone, her poor daughter was trapped somewhere near Atlanta. Me and Hannah agreed we would let Diana stay with us until Ed was feeling better. But that was only our first mistake."
"They gave Ed antibiotics and let him leave the hospital. While he was "Sleeping" in our room, he woke up and bit his wife right on the arm. Me and Hannah were so scared... we- we-, we locked her in there … [view original content]
Yeah, I kind of left her story open, in case in the far future she were to somehow make a return. But Bryan searched the whole safe zone for her, (and probably the area.) And eventually had to leave the city due to walker numbers, and hasn't given up on finding her.
If you don't mind me asking, What time is it where you are right now? Because it seems like a lot of you guys are sleeping at the same time it's mid-day for me. Right now,it's midnight for me.
Yeah, I kind of left her story open, in case in the far future she were to somehow make a return. But Bryan searched the whole safe zone for h… moreer, (and probably the area.) And eventually had to leave the city due to walker numbers, and hasn't given up on finding her.
If you don't mind me asking, What time is it where you are right now? Because it seems like a lot of you guys are sleeping at the same time it's mid-day for me. Right now,it's midnight for me.
Hey guys im back! sorry for the delay (What 3 weeks?) there was a long process of my laptop and hard drive getting stolen when i came back and me forgetting my password (Sigh..) however a few days ago the police notfied my that my laptop and hard drive had been delivered back with a "Threating note" that the police where not allowed to tell me because....there the police? when i got all my stuff back i noticed they had been hacked. my freind (You know him as tyler) is un hacking it because thats what he does. he had also hacked my most used email and this to. if he has gone on this thread and stuffed it up (Hatefull comments and bad writing come to mind) let me know. Thanks!
Hey guys im back! sorry for the delay (What 3 weeks?) there was a long process of my laptop and hard drive getting stolen when i came back and… more me forgetting my password (Sigh..) however a few days ago the police notfied my that my laptop and hard drive had been delivered back with a "Threating note" that the police where not allowed to tell me because....there the police? when i got all my stuff back i noticed they had been hacked. my freind (You know him as tyler) is un hacking it because thats what he does. he had also hacked my most used email and this to. if he has gone on this thread and stuffed it up (Hatefull comments and bad writing come to mind) let me know. Thanks!
The old Lord_zasca
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I just realized, I am the only one who has told the story about Pascucci.
I realized that as well, but I believe there's a good reason for that. You're just really good at his story line. When TheMissus made a courageous attempt to save the episode she did write about him. But sadly, I found it to not be as good as it could have been. But now that you have decided to pick up his story, I feel like it has improved immensely and I'm eagerly awaiting the next Pascucci-post you make.
And yes, Pascucci-post is a word now.
(Also, no offense to TheMissus. She has done her best and I admire the way she tried to save the episode. )
Thank you, I suppose Pascucci-posts (I like that word
) are my hidden talent.
But where is the post where Themissus posted a Pascucci-post? I looked for it, but couldn't find it.
She deleted it, because we decided to disregard Lord_Zasca's post and she tried to save the story before we did that.
Somebody NEEDS to write. I'm experiencing an overdose of fan-fic.
Yeah, what @That_1_guy said
I don't really know what to write. I don't really know about Bryan opening up. I feel as if somebody else, maybe the guy who created Bryan should do it.
You should write, nobody really knows much about Bryan. He keeps to himself more then anything.
I realized that, too, and that's fine with me. At this point I just feel like I am better with Clem's story rather than Kenny or Pascucci-posts. Currently it looks like That1guy makes Ken or Pas, HSB and me Clem's goup and you're our Pascucci-post expert
The individual emphasis will surely change as the story progresses.
I was thinking about writing actually
Please do.
Yeah, I have noticed that whenever I write about Clem's group I end up using Bryan's perspective. I have also decided it's best to keep Kenny and the settlement out of the story until the group reaches it, just to leave some wiggle room for what is happening there when Clem and co. finally reach it.
I would love to write, but I feel like I should continue making the episode slides. So yeah, when I'm back, I'm hoping for someone to have written!
You can write, I'll wait then.
Edit: Which storyline do you want to continue with?
I appreciate it, tried my best indeed :>
The moon shines bright and the group crawls into the cave, follwoing Bryan's flashlight. The aisle is full of spider webs, though Clementine doesn't remember the time when she was actually scared by those small 8-legged creatures anymore. Danielle walks right behind her, though she tries to avoid getting any of the webs into her hair. After 10-15 yards they reach a big room with a few light rays coming from the holes in the walls and the roof. The air is a bit humid and smells like moss yet it's warm, at least much warmer than outside. Then Bryan lights one lantern after another and the group examines the room:
There's a place with a patchwork quilt, probably Bryan's sleeping berth. In the middle of the room is a fireplace with an old kettle and a deer fur lying on the floor next to it. Bryan crouches in the corner and then comes back with plenty of furs, giving them Jeremy: "There, you can sit on them. Please light the fireplace, there's some wood over there in the corner.". Jeremy listens to him and Bryan goes to a box with a blanket on it - turms out it's his weapon storage. He loads one gun after another and hands them to every group member ss they make themselves comfortable by the fire. "Thanks to the elderly lady we can eat dinner. I am not hungry, but you girl's should actually eat." says Jeremy, unpacking 2 cans of carrots while the girls both don't answer as they are still impressed by the extraordinary location. Eventually Bryan accompanies them.
"Why did you choose a cave over a house or another building?" asks Jeremy, chewing on his carrots. "I prefer my privacy." Bryan answers. "Yeah, but... why didn't you just stay on your own in a sort of ... intact bulding?". Bryan swallows and then scratches his cheek as he answers: "i tried to defend my privacy but it didn't last long... eventually some shitheads scavenging for stuff came in my way, always the same shit: fights over weapons, my property or my home. It happened several times and one day I was just sick of it. I gave everything up and ever since I finally got some peace of mind. Four walls or objects don't mean a thing to me, anymore - just the life itself. And my weapons, of course.".Danielle smiles: "It's not that bad, actaully. I like your home." Clementine yawns and Bryan reacts: "You're tired. You can go over there and get some rest.", potining at the place with the quilts. When she covers herself with the blankets she finds a photo near a pillow: it shows Bryan with a very slender and tender looking woman. She has long brown hair and a pretty face with a big nose und full lips. They're both smiling. It's as if it was a completely different person for she had never seen a hint of that smile in Bryan's face before. Clem wants to put it aside as she feels that it is none of her business, but then she notices something familiar: The Marsh House right behind them. She remembers he mentioned that he used to be a night shift guard in this very place where He fooled her. "What is it?". Bryan asks but she doesn't answer. "It's Hannah. She was the love of my life... But she's dead now...". Danielle looks very sad. "I am so sorry... What happened?". Jeremy intervenes: "That's inappropriate, Danielle. You don't have to tell us, Bryan. Though I'd really like to know you better since we're all we've got now.". "No, it's fine. I'll tell you...."
Please continue with a flashback
Hey guys, after reading a lot of this story i've decided I want to join in since i'm interested in writing. Gimme some time to catch up so I can write a continuation properly.
Edit: Can anyone tell me on which page is the latest summary? Thanks
You forgot me.
. Ha just messing with you.
Of course! How could I forget the author of our famous Bryan-posts?
Gosh, I would really love to write now! Sadly, I'm off to bed, I have to go to school tomorrow. (I will make sure to write after that though!)
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I want to write but... this would be like my fourth time going right after someone else
Better get reading. If you guys can wait, I'll post next.
"gruhh" {"Moan"} "bruhgg" "Dugggg" "Frahhh"
"Will you shut the hell up?! We need to be quiet!" Pascucci begins to quiet down. "Am I- Am- dead?" Asks Pascucci. "Huh? Oh hell man! Your awake! And no you ain't dead!" Pascucci responds, "Well i feel dead, my arm at least. I don't know how you did it, but you stitched me up! Where the hell did you find the stuff for stitches?" Frank widens his eyes. "I'm supposed to stitch you up?" Pascucci rolls his eyes and sighs. "Well we need to get back to your base, I need stitches." Frank sighs and says, "That ain't happenin, there's a shitload of Zorks out there, and I ain't gonna be there midnight snack. Speaking of midnight snack... want some apple juice and biscuits?" Pascucci nods, "Hell yeah, I could really go for some of that shit... by the way what's in that bag? Any antibiotics, just in case we're here for a while." Frank responds, "Check the bag yourself, I didn't check the front pocket." Pascucci grabs the bag and checks the items inside. "hmm... he's got plenty of condoms that's for darn sure! Why would anybody need this many?" Frank chuckles, "Must of had ALOT of women in his group." Pascucci looks around the bag some more, "Holy crap! This fucker had a watch on him. And it ain't any ordinary watch either, it's really fancy, shows the date and everything!" Frank's eyes widen even more, he asks with the most serious face possible, "Tell me, what is the freaking date"
"Alright, alright, the date is....
Please continue
After thinking about what to write, i've come up with some good ideas. Would you guys mind if I introduced some completely new characters i've been thinking about? (After Randomz has written his).
I dunno, maybe, but this is Episode 5, maybe one more
One more? I can make that work.
No, i feel like now that this is Episode 5, it should be about the GROUP, not anything new.
Not even one character in my opinion, sorry :l.
After this episode are we just gonna stop or make another season some time later?
If I can't make another character now that's fine, I can still make it work.
We are indeed making more seasons.
We are planning on having another season. Next season would be a much better time to introduce characters.
I
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play this
"I had known her my entire life. Our family's had both decided to live out in the country so we were the only two kids around. Or parents tried to home school us at first, but that didn't work out so we ended up taking these long ass bus rides. Anyway being the only two kids around we grew close rather quickly. At age ten things started moving faster, she started saying things about being more then friends. I was a ten year old boy so of course I was oblivious. However even though I didn't know it we started getting even closer then we were. She'd start holding my hand on the long walks to the bus stop. On my eleventh birthday we ran into the forest to play, and I challenged her to a race up a tree. Hannah could climb better then anyone, but she let me win. That's the kinda person she was."
"When we got to the top of the tree we were both out of breath and so we sat there, for a long time. It had been the middle of the day before but now the sun was setting. I turned to her the sun was beaming behind her. She looked like some sort of angle. We both stared at each other for just a second and then she kissed me. It wasn't long, just a peck but suddenly I understood all the things she had talked about over the last year. We never really talked about it but immediately after we started going out. Strange thing was nothing changed much, we were together almost everyday anyway, but things felt better now. Life moved on and when we got to the second year of high school we made love to each other." Clementine looked slightly confused and then a sudden realization came across her face. "But I don't want to talk about that."
"We were never really popular in school so bully's actually tried to get us to fight sometimes spreading rumors and such, but it never worked. I once shot an arrow right over a bully's head in archery, he never bothered me again. Of course I got kicked out of gym. When we graduated I proposed and she said yes. Hannah wanted to become an artist so we decided to move out, and into the city. Out parents never liked the city much, that's why we lived so far in the country, but they didn't put up much of a fight. A couple weeks later we found ourselves a nice little apartment in Savanna. Even though it was small the rent was high, at least for us. I took up two jobs, by day I worked a register and by night I worked as security at the marsh hotel. That pictures from when she visited me one day. It was rough, but I'd do anything for Hannah, she was the love of my life. We barley saw each other over the course of a year, but out love never died."
"Then one day out of the blue, she came home in tears..."
(please continue)
Note: Boy did I not mean for this to go on for as long as it did. Sorry it's all dialogue, it is Bryan telling a story after all.
"Then one day out of the blue, she came home in tears, she told me that her parents died from some virus, little did we know that was the virus. The virus that has spread around the world, causing the dead to feast on the living."
"Anyway- Later that day, I was working the register. A couple had walked in when I saw my very first ghost. He took a bite right into this guy. Once the night had came the lady explained herself. Her name was Diana, she was married to this guy named Ed." The realization sends a shiver right down Clementine's spine. "She had to use our phone, her poor daughter was trapped somewhere near Atlanta. Me and Hannah agreed we would let Diana stay with us until Ed was feeling better. But that was only our first mistake."
"They gave Ed antibiotics and let him leave the hospital. While he was "Sleeping" in our room, he woke up and bit his wife right on the arm. Me and Hannah were so scared... we- we-, we locked her in there with him. We left the Marsh hotel, and started driving to my parents house. There was this guy along the way, he was hitchhiking. We let him in and told him we would drop him off at the nearest gas station. Again this was another mistake, it was our 4th hour of driving on back roads and he began to get sick. We thought he passed out but her turned into the ghosts. Nearly took a chomp out of Hannah when I beat the hell out of him. To this day i'm so thankful he didn't bite me, or Hannah. I managed to get him out of the truck. And we were on our way again."
"We had just arrived at my parents house, when I ran in and-" A tear rolls down the face of Bryan. but it was almost as if he forced it back up. "I saw my parents, except they weren't them, they looked ghost-like. That's the reason I call em' ghosts. The last thing on my parents TV was the news, I heard the news people say that you need to take out the head. I managed to go to my room and grab my bow that my parents bought me when I was in high school. I did the worst thing I have ever done in my life. I shot them in the head."
"Once again me and Hannah watched the news and heard information regarding a safe zone in Atlanta, we drove, and drove, and drove. Until we made it to the safe zone, spoiler alert, it wasn't that safe. We thought it was at first. It had been a couple of days before everyone was getting bit and turning into the ghosts. I was in the bathroom when I heard all the screaming. I got out as fast as I could, went to my room, grabbed my bow and searched for Hannah. I haven't stopped searching for her either and i will never stop."
You just told a better love story in 3 paragraphs, then Twilight did in 5 movies.
That was so great sniff sniff poor Bryan
Well done! Glad you brought Ed and Diana into the story. So... What happened to Hannah? Was she just gone?
Yeah, I kind of left her story open, in case in the far future she were to somehow make a return. But Bryan searched the whole safe zone for her, (and probably the area.) And eventually had to leave the city due to walker numbers, and hasn't given up on finding her.
If you don't mind me asking, What time is it where you are right now? Because it seems like a lot of you guys are sleeping at the same time it's mid-day for me. Right now,it's midnight for me.
It's 6.30 am here in Germany, same time as That1guy afaik, I believe he's from Belgium. Where are you from?
Hey guys im back! sorry for the delay (What 3 weeks?) there was a long process of my laptop and hard drive getting stolen when i came back and me forgetting my password (Sigh..) however a few days ago the police notfied my that my laptop and hard drive had been delivered back with a "Threating note" that the police where not allowed to tell me because....there the police? when i got all my stuff back i noticed they had been hacked. my freind (You know him as tyler) is un hacking it because thats what he does. he had also hacked my most used email and this to. if he has gone on this thread and stuffed it up (Hatefull comments and bad writing come to mind) let me know. Thanks!
The old Lord_zasca
Are you kidding me?
Edit: you know, if you want to continue writing just do so, you don't have to invent that kinda bizarre scenario