What do you mean what's that all about? In one of my parts Russel mentions that Vince could have some hidden past and was supposed to make you think that Russel doesn't trust Vince and won't bring him. But do you want me to change it so they bring Vince? I'm ok with that if so. And I just hoped you weren't angry because you used Vince in your part but for me he wasn't supposed to be there.
I'm confused?
Randomz my part kind of meant they weren't going to bring Vince so hes with Jared's group still. Sorry about that and I hope your not angry!
What's that all about?
"Damnit! I can´t leave Becca alone with this freak, i have to follow them. I am sure Kenny will keep Russel safe! I knew we shouldn´t have left without saying anything to Vincent." Wyatt said to himself before he runs towards the river.
Some hours later a sleepy Vincent wakes up alone, slowly realizing that he got left by his friends yet another time. " Good morning sleepy head. I didn´t want to wake you up...but i have to tell you some bad news. Your friend´s have gone of on their own." Carver said. " Yes i already figured that out. Jesus Christ, how could everything get so fucked up. After we met this women Tavia everything has been going from bad to worse." Vincent sadly responded. " I know the feeling Vincent. We have lost people to. It´s a shitty time to life in, but we have to stick together to survive. Look...if you want our help we would like to help you find your friend´s. But before we do that I have to be sure that I can trust you Vincent. There are some crazy people out there and I am not sure yet if you are one of them or not. I want you to swear that for aslong you are part of this group you do anything I tell you to do and follow any of my commands. I think I don´t have to remind you how dangerous it is for someone beeing alone out there?" Carver said with a evil smile on his face.
Choice A: Join Carvers group
Choise B: Wander of on your own and look for you´r friends
Yeah, right but this thread is going to deal with the same problems as the other fan-fic thread. The longer it gets the harder it is to join in and you can't force people to make a summary but hoping someone takes the initiative to spend his time and effort doing it. I must admit that really hurt, reading that people don't want to join as it's gotten too long. I am not a native english speaker and it was really not easy for me doing all the summaries as well as the Backup. It's as if my effort was without success, as I now have seen myself people don't want to join after all, somehow frustrating.
Yeah, right but this thread is going to deal with the same problems as the other fan-fic thread. The longer it gets the harder it is to join i… moren and you can't force people to make a summary but hoping someone takes the initiative to spend his time and effort doing it. I must admit that really hurt, reading that people don't want to join as it's gotten too long. I am not a native english speaker and it was really not easy for me doing all the summaries as well as the Backup. It's as if my effort was without success, as I now have seen myself people don't want to join after all, somehow frustrating.
Don't do it all by yourself, it's too much work. How about you do pages 26-36 and I do pages 36-46 and then someone can do another at the end of episode 5? If we break it down it shouldn't be too hard to get it done.
I hope you didn't misunderstand: I did the summaries because I wanted and it was fun and I didn't blame anyone. It's just that it needs time and I have other daily responsibilities as well, like all of you. I can help you with the summary. Tell me which Pages and I'll do it.
Don't do it all by yourself, it's too much work. How about you do pages 26-36 and I do pages 36-46 and then someone can do another at the end of episode 5? If we break it down it shouldn't be too hard to get it done.
Sorry for any misunderstanding. I just meant that since you have worked so hard already and done the last summary you could take a break . If you want we could break the twenty pages down so the three of us can do a part of the summary each. I'll go over to the thread now to discuss it.
I hope you didn't misunderstand: I did the summaries because I wanted and it was fun and I didn't blame anyone. It's just that it needs time a… morend I have other daily responsibilities as well, like all of you. I can help you with the summary. Tell me which Pages and I'll do it.
Sorry for any misunderstanding. I just meant that since you have worked so hard already and done the last summary you could take a break . If … moreyou want we could break the twenty pages down so the three of us can do a part of the summary each. I'll go over to the thread now to discuss it.
Choice B: "Sorry Carver, I gotta go find my friends." Vince said, walking towards the door. "It's ok, I understand." Vince pushed the bookcase, and turned to say goodbye, and saw Carver cocking his pistol. Vince ducked, and the bullet smashed the door. Then he looked back and realised. Carver stole his gun! He was now unarmed. Vince swung open the door, and noticed the footprints leading to the woods. Vince was the best runner in the group, and even he struggled to get into the woods, and still had Carver and his group hunting him. Carver opened fire, but missed through the woods. "Dammit! Vince, load yer damn gun! I'm out! Yer so inconsiderate!" Carver yelled, as Vince spotted the group parting ways. "Guys! Run! Carver's coming!" Vince yelled, as the group noticed. "Oh, they found Becca and Shel- Lily? Oh god, which way do I go.....Russel and Ken need help!" Vince thought, as he ran up to Kenny and Russel.
"Guys, Carver's coming to kill us, we gotta go!" Vince said, as he looked around. Carver's group was in pursuit of Lilly, Becca, and Wyatt. "Guys, look! There's the spot where the 2 paths meet! Let's go help them!" Russel said, as Kenny refused. "C'mon Ken! You know that Wyatt went to help them, do this for your friend. Wyatt." Kenny hesitates....then agreed. "If I HAVE to live with that bitch to be with real friends.....then I'll be damned if I refuse." The group ran up to where the paths, meet, and everyone went back into 1 group. But as they did, the guy named Arnie Ran up, and held a switch blade up to Becca's throat, and began backing up. "1 Move and I kill her." Becca kicked him in the crotch as hard as she could, then grabbed his arm with the blade, and stabbed him with it. He collapsed, cursing, as everyone continued running. Dead end. The trees were to thick to see anything, and everyone might separate. They were cornered! The 3 members of carver showed up, and they had no choice. Everyone ran through. Vince got scratched up, and kept yelling, "stay close!"Vince eventually pushed through, bleeding from all the cuts. Russel and Wyatt came through too, both helping Becca. And then, Lilly came through, tired, and bleeding far worse than Vince. Then Kenny, being pushed by Steven. Carver grabbed Wyatt, unloading with punches, and Betty pinned Becca down, slapping her. Then, Steven pulled a machete on Kenny. Kenny started yelling for help, as Vince noticed a horde of walker coming. Lily noticed it too, passing her gun to Vince, who began shooting, and then 1 came through, pinning Lily down. The only free person was Russel, who was in the middle of the treeline, Kenny was on the far left, Lily was far right. Nobody else's lives were in danger, so h knew he had to do something. /he also knew that he could only have the time to save 1, and only 1. He also knew that whoever he chose not to save, was screwed.
In a state of panic Russel sped towards Kenny tackling Steven to the ground. Steven gets back up real fast and swings his machete towards Russel. It misses but that was a feint as Steven lunged at Russel hoping to thrust his blade into his stomach. Kenny runs up and tackles him back to the ground and starts beating on his face. "Kenny we have to get my friends! They're in danger!" Russel says as he starts running toward Lilly hoping that there was still time. "GET THIS WALKER OFF OF ME!" Lilly screams as the zombie tries to grab her head. But it was too late the herd was close and they all knelt down and started eating Lilly. "Holy crap..." Russel says. Traumatized Russel runs into the forest sweat and tears running down his bruised face. "Its all my fault.."
Kenny watched as the zombies devoured Stevens mutilated body. He turned and ran towards Vince who was firing bullets at the zombies Becca standing beside him ready with the knife. "Where's Russ and Wyatt? Where did Carver's group go?" Kenny asks. "We don't know but we gotta go because I can't kill all those geeks.I'm sorry Kenny but we have to leave now!" Vince says as he and Becca run toward the river."God damnit." Kenny says as he follows them.
What do you mean what's that all about? In one of my parts Russel mentions that Vince could have some hidden past and was supposed to make you… more think that Russel doesn't trust Vince and won't bring him. But do you want me to change it so they bring Vince? I'm ok with that if so. And I just hoped you weren't angry because you used Vince in your part but for me he wasn't supposed to be there.
At you´r service!
I´m happy that, that bitch Lilly finally died by the way:D... i just wish she would have got some kind of redemption after everything she´s done.
Wyatt was chasing Russel, looking for him, so they could reunite with the group. He found Russel near Arnie's body, with his blade, trying to commit suicide. "NO!" Wyatt yelled, tackling Russel, knocking the blade out of his hand. "Dude...sob......I-I let Lily die.....Let me end myself." Russel said, crying. "Hell no. You had no other option. You did the right thing." Wyatt said, helping him up. "now, let's get back to the group, before they're too far awa- JESUS!" Arnie was a walker, and had grabbed his leg, pushing Russel forward. Russel was scared. Risk his life to save a friend? OR make a mad dash, saving himself? Russel took a deep breath, and ran up, stomping the walker's head with so much momentum, it smashed as soon as it hit the ground. Russel helped Wyatt up, and Wyatt smiled and said "If that's not a statement as to why you deserve to live, I dunno what would be!" Russel smiled at Wyatt, and they went running. Kenny, Vince, and Becca reached a pile of junk. It was a car wreck. Lots of sharp pieces of glass and metal poked out. "Oh god, the walkers are catching up....Ok guys, I'll try to climb this..." Kenny said, putting 1 foot, and both hands on, and letting out a grunt. He got off, and his hands were covered in blood. "No damn way we'll make it over that. Blood attracts walkers. Everything would just get worse." Kenny said, as they all looked back. 30 walkers all headed their way. "Worse than this Ken?" Vince asked, as Kenny grabbed a long, sharp piece of metal. "Everyone find a piece of metal long and sharp. Like a sword. We're gonna fight our way outta this.
The fighting was intense. Kenny bludgeoning and slicing zombie heads. Vince using his quickness to do the same, but faster, and Becca using her size advantage to let walkers miss, for easy kills. Wyatt and Russel only caught up near the last 5, but weaved through, finishing ones that were still kickin' by stomping and pointing them out to others. Eventually, they were all dead. Without taking time to rest, Kenny explained what happened to them to Wyatt and Russel, and everyone carefully made their way over the wall of cars, getting as few cuts as possible. They entered a town. Quickly running into a building to regroup before moving on. They found a bar. "Spacious, Lotsa tables and stools to barricade with, and pickled eggs to eat on those days that we don't find food? Man, I know we gotta move on EVENTUALLY, but for now, why don't we make this our base of operations?" Kenny suggested. Everyone agreed, and sat down "First, though, is everyone alright?" Wyatt asked, as Russel gave a thumbs up, Vince said "A little cut up from the wall and the forest, but I'll survive." Kenny was checking for food, so he took that as a yes. But Becca was rubbing her shoulder. "I think I cut myself with the metal blade in the battle......hurts like heck." "Here, I've dealt with injuries. Let me see." Kenny said walking over to look at it. He gasped, backing up into the wall. "What is it Ken?" Russel asked, nervously. "Guys.....I think she's bit."
" No, you´r lieyng! This can´t be true!" Vincent screamed in disbelieve. " I´m sorry Vincent but we have to face the facts here. I already was in such a situation before and i am telling you there is no happy end to this." Kenny respondet. " No i´m fine. I wasn´t biten! It is a cut, you have to believe me!" Becca fearfully yelled. "I am sorry young Lady but this is a bite. I´m afraid we ´have no other choice but to kill you and put you out of your misery." Kenny said. " Kenny man don´t get hasty here. Maybe she is telling us the truth, what if it is a cut? You couldn´t life on knowing that you killed a innocent little girl could you?" Wyatt asked in a hurry. " Wyatt Pal, i don´t judge you, i was in this Situation myself. Back then my best friend stod up to me and talked some sense into me. I know some of you ain´t gonna like this, but we have to make painfull decisions to survive in a world like this." Kenny respondet trying to stay as calm as he possible could. " Please don´t do this. I´m fine. Everything is gonna be okay." Becca scarefully said. " We can´t just kill her of like this! We are a group after all. We have to vote about this. That´s how we always handeled it when bad things happened. " Russel said. " Cut the shit boy, you all gonna listen to me now! This is not a discussion. I already let Hershel´s son die and i sweared to myself i will never let this happen to anyone again. This girl won´t suffer any more than she has to. " Kenny angry shouted. " But what if we just cut the bite out, right man? Jesus Christ we can´t just kill her of like this. " Wyatt said. " Ain´t gonna happen! It doesn´t work like this and you know that Wyatt. I told you already how this is gonna get done." Kenny even angryer than before respondet. " Who do you think you are Kenny? You may think you are a tough son of a bitch, but you are not in charge of this little group. We can make our own goddamn decisions. We are a Democratie after all. What if it was you´r son who got biten? Would you have the balls to do it then?" Vincent said. " This ain´t shit." Kenny angrily mumbled. Kenny balled his fist and was ready to go Berserk. The air was geting thiner and thiner as things slowly started to get out of control.
Choice A: Kenny knocks out Vincent in a angry rage
Choice B: Vincent apologizes and try´s to calm down Kenny
Wyatt was chasing Russel, looking for him, so they could reunite with the group. He found Russel near Arnie's body, with his blade, trying to … morecommit suicide. "NO!" Wyatt yelled, tackling Russel, knocking the blade out of his hand. "Dude...sob......I-I let Lily die.....Let me end myself." Russel said, crying. "Hell no. You had no other option. You did the right thing." Wyatt said, helping him up. "now, let's get back to the group, before they're too far awa- JESUS!" Arnie was a walker, and had grabbed his leg, pushing Russel forward. Russel was scared. Risk his life to save a friend? OR make a mad dash, saving himself? Russel took a deep breath, and ran up, stomping the walker's head with so much momentum, it smashed as soon as it hit the ground. Russel helped Wyatt up, and Wyatt smiled and said "If that's not a statement as to why you deserve to live, I dunno what would be!" Russel smiled at Wyatt, and they went running. Kenny, Vince, and Becca r… [view original content]
"Guys calm down. This won't get us anywhere" Wyatt intrudes. Vince turns to look at him "Hes arguing for killing a kid! We c---." Vince is cut off as Kenny slammed his fist right into Vince's nose. Vince topples to the ground unconscious blood spilling from his left nostril. "WHAT THE F*** MAN!" Wyatt yells as he kneels down beside Vince. "I'm sorry but we have to kill her or else we'll all end up bitten! I know its hard but it has to be done." Kenny says rubbing his knuckles. "Are you crazy? You just knocked out one of our group!" Russel says with a angry look on his face. "Come on Russ don't you trust me? This is what we have to do to survive." Kenny said. "Your nuts! We can't just kill Becca shes one of us!" Russel says as he slowly closes his fists. "My son was bitten and we had to kill him. I'm sorry Russel but shes going to turn and we have to kill her now!" In the heat of the conversation Wyatt was calling out guys but they weren't listening until now. "What is it Wyatt buddy? Tell Russ we need to kill Becca." Wyatt had a scared look on his face "No its not that... guys.. Becca's gone. They all look toward a small bloody pool beside the chair Becca was sitting on. It was empty. "We need to go after her!" Wyatt says. "What about Vince? We gotta think about living!" Kenny responds. "Well I'm going after her. For Shel. Are you coming Russel or not?" Wyatt asks.
Russel was shoked by the situation and couldn´t move his body. " Just go boy, the girl needs you. I will stay here and protect Vincent until he wakes up. That´s the least I can do after what I did to him." Kenny said. " Thank´s man. Maybe you aren´t such a son of a bitch after all. " Russel said before he followed Wyatt to find Becca. " Just the two of us then, ha Pal? Look...I´m sorry man I just overreacted before. Maybe I shouldn´t have...maybe I was wrong. I know there is no hope for Becca, but it is her choice after all. She should decide how she want´s to end her life and not us." Kenny said to himself while he was looking on the passed out Vincent.
Meanwhile not to far away a women was all on her own struggling to survive. " I don´t know how long I can go on like this." The women said to herself, as suddenly a walker grabbed her from behind. She knew this was it for her and she had accepted her faith. " I won´t let anyone else get eaten today, no way!" A deep man voice said behind her. The man pulled out his gun and killed the Walker. The women was still shoked from the events that just happened to her and was barely able to open her mouth as she falled to the ground. " Thank you." She quietly answered, while the mysterious man was geting closer to her. " Hey don´t mention it." The man said as he reached his arm to help the women get up. " I would have died if you guys haven´t showed up, i am indepted to you. How can I ever make up for this?" The women asked. " You are indepented to noone, but yourself." The man said. " By the way my name is Jared. Who are you?" The man asked. " My name is...I am Tavia." The women respondet. " Hello Tavia, I am glad I found you. I have to ask you something and i want you to think good about it. I won´t force you to´do anything here, but we had a fight with a bunch of crazy people before and two of our people got killed. You can fill in and take their places if you want to. We could just need your help. Do you want to join our little group and follow my lead?" Jared asked Tavia.
Choice A:
Russel was shoked by the situation and couldn´t move his body. " Just go boy, the girl needs you. I will stay here and protect Vi… morencent until he wakes up. That´s the least I can do after what I did to him." Kenny said. " Thank´s man. Maybe you aren´t such a son of a bitch after all. " Russel said before he followed Wyatt to find Becca. " Just the two of us then, ha Pal? Look...I´m sorry man I just overreacted before. Maybe I shouldn´t have...maybe I was wrong. I know there is no hope for Becca, but it is her choice after all. She should decide how she want´s to end her life and not us." Kenny said to himself while he was looking on the passed out Vincent.
Meanwhile not to far away a women was all on her own struggling to survive. " I don´t know how long I can go on like this." The women said to herself, as suddenly a walker grabbed her from behind. She knew this was it for her and she had accepted her faith. " I won´t let anyone el… [view original content]
Choice A: "Yes I've been on my own for a while now. Do you think you could help me find my friends?" Tavia says. "Yeah sure but first you should stay at our base for the night and rest up" Jared responded. Tavia and Jared walk toward the building in silence, the sounds of their footsteps filling the empty air of the broken down area of buildings. They come across the one Jared is staying in and Jared speaks to the door "Open it we have a visitor." The door opens a bookcase slowly pulling back revealing a pudgy blonde girl. "This is Betty... The rest of are group was murdered and well... were all that's left and we need good people so we can rebuild our group." "Who murdered your group?" Tavia asks. Jared starts crying back against the wall sliding downward "They killed my best friend Steven... Th- these people... that stupid guy in the ballcap beat his face so bad he couldn't get up. There was a herd of those things between us and I couldn't stop him." "I'm so sorry Jared... these days people can be dangerous. If were to ever survive these people need to be stopped" Tavia says her arm around Jared. Jared sniffles "Thanks... your right."
Just to recap:
Kenny: Alive with unconscious Vince in the bar
Lilly: Died being eaten by walkers
Vince: Unconscious in the bar with Kenny
Wyatt: With Russel looking for runaway Becca
Russel: With Wyatt looking for runaway Becca
Bonnie: Died by angry Lilly shooting her
Shel: "Killed" by Carver when staying with him and his group
Jared/Carver: Alive, wants revenge on 400 day's group
Steven: Punched out by Kenny and eaten by walkers
Arnie: Died from Becca stabbing him
Becca: Alive and bitten, currently running away
Tavia: With Carver's group, wants to help stop the murderers of Carver's group(Not knowing that they are her friends)
Betty: Alive with Carver and Tavia
If I missed anyone please add on. And great job guys your doing great lets keep this going!
Choice A: "Yes I've been on my own for a while now. Do you think you could help me find my friends?" Tavia says. "Yeah sure but first you shou… moreld stay at our base for the night and rest up" Jared responded. Tavia and Jared walk toward the building in silence, the sounds of their footsteps filling the empty air of the broken down area of buildings. They come across the one Jared is staying in and Jared speaks to the door "Open it we have a visitor." The door opens a bookcase slowly pulling back revealing a pudgy blonde girl. "This is Betty... The rest of are group was murdered and well... were all that's left and we need good people so we can rebuild our group." "Who murdered your group?" Tavia asks. Jared starts crying back against the wall sliding downward "They killed my best friend Steven... Th- these people... that stupid guy in the ballcap beat his face so bad he couldn't get up. There was a herd of those things between us and I couldn't stop… [view original content]
"S-s-so now what?" Betty stuttered. Jared and Tavia exchanged glances. The building was worn down a huge amount and the occasional creak could be heard from the floorboards. "This place gives me the creeps" Tavia commented. "Maybe so, but it the safest place right now" Jared answered. The three of them pushed a bookcase over the door the took seats near a window. It was time to play the waiting game.
A few hours later Tavia heard a noise. It was coming from the door. She glanced over at Jared and Betty who were both sleeping. Tavia sat up and waited for the noise to stop, the insistent scratching, but unfortuantly for her it didn't. Tavia stood up and moved to the door. "Go away" she whispered. She knew that wasn't going to do any good but-
"What did you just say?" A voice asked from the other side. Tavia's heart leapt. A person? It was a girl for sure and sounded pretty young. Tavia moved over to the window to see who it was. It was a girl, about 18 with long brown locks and freckles. She spotted Tavia through the window. Tavia panicked for a minute but then thought about it. The girl didn't seem to be a threat. "Please help" the girl said. "My name is Lola and I've been alone for weeks now. Please help me." Tavia wasn't sure what to do.
Tavia remembered Jared´s word´s " We can use any help we can get. " "Okay i will help you, but i have to talk with my group first. Please wait outside the house for a minute." Tavia said to the girl. " Jared, Betty wake up. There is a women outside the bookstore, she needs our help." Tavia loudly said. " Alright Tavia, what are you waiting for? Let her in, the more the better!" Jared sleepy respondet. Tavia slowly opened the door to let Lola inside. " Thank you so much! I was nearly giving up hope before i came across here. I was out there on my own for week´s. I am Lola, nice to meet you all." The women happily said. " Hello Lola, I am Jared and this are Betty and Tavia. We are just a small group but we take care of each other. You got to be starving! Wait here for a minute i will get you something to eat." Carver said as he was going to get the some food for the women. "Here you go, grab yourself some tuna!" The Women didn´t have a decent meal for weeks and was swallowing it up all at once. " Thank you (eating sounds) so much (more eating sounds), i didn´t have a decent meal for week´s." The women said with a full mouth. "Hey don´t mention it, there is more where that´s coming from! I want to make you an offer Lola. You can stay here with us and become part of our little group, or you just wander of on your own and go out in the cold darkness again. But if you stay here with us you need to swear me something in return. There is a other group out there, dangerous people. They killed two of our friend´s already and aslong as this monsters are still breathing we won´t be able to life in peace. We desiderate for revenge, we need to kill all of them and we need your help. Are you with us or not?" Carver determinedly asked.
Choice A
"I haven't seen humans for a while now. And you guys well you just took me in and fed me, I'll be damned if good people like yourselves are killed by.... by murderers. I'm with you but if I don't like something I'm leaving." Lola says. "Great and thank you for joining us. Trust me these people are downright evil. The sooner they're gone the better so I've decided we strike today. I think I know which way they headed." Jared said. After their meal Jared, Betty, Tavia, and Lola set out in the direction the other group was heading.
Kenny sighs "Idiot... I'm such and idiot." Vince is lying down on 3 chairs in the corner of the room the blood cleaned from his face. Kenny slowly paces back and forth. "Damn I need some air." Kenny walk outside and paces by the bar door, the sun is slowly sinking over yonder. "I hope Wyatt and Russel are okay..." Kenny says. He sits down on a bench across the street from the bar and takes out some whisky that he found in the bar. He starts drinking "I'll find her for you Lee... I'll keep her safe. We can have a new family with Vince, an Wyatt, and Russ.... Becca" Kenny starts crying knowing that he failed to keep one little girl safe. Two walkers approach him from down the street and Kenny pulls out his knife, the back of his hand wiping away the tears. He pushes one and stabs the other in the head, the on on the ground he stabbed in the head multiple times, anger in his face. "Well, well well" a familiar voice said behind him. Kenny turns and finds Jared, Betty, Tavia, and Lola in front of him pointing their guns at his head. "If it isn't Steven's killer. Were gonna teach you and your group a lesson. But first you have to show us where your group is." Jared said. "I'll never tell you you motherf---" Kenny is interrupted finding a bullet shot from Carver in his left knee. Kenny falls to the ground and Jared speaks again "Lets try this again. Where Is Your Group?" Kenny spits out blood onto Carver's pants "F*** you." "Fine then" Jared firmly kicks Kenny in the head and Kenny is unconscious the last thing he remembered that day was being dragged by a surprisingly strong Betty, and Lola down what seemed like an endless road.
That was very well written man! I love the way Kenny always seems to find something to drink when thing´s are going to shit:D
So let´s go on with the Story then shall we?... Some hour´s later Kenny woke up in a small room, still feeling dizzy and feeling the pain of the wound on his knee. He was captivated on a small chair made of wood and Carver was sitting right infront of him stareing into his face. " Look who finally woke up, i nearly thought you aren´t as tough as you look like, that would have been a dissapointment." Carver said. " Where the fuck am I, what do you want from me?" Kenny angrily respondet. " You know where you are, you have been here before, it´s the old bookstore where you and you´r disgusting friend´s where staying at. I saved you´r lives that day remember? And you just ran of and killed 2 of my people. Is that the way you alway´s show how thankful you are? I will teach you some respect!" Carver said with a frightening tone in his word´s. " I won´t tell you anything, this will never happen! I gues you will just have to kill me." Kenny determinedly said. " Kill you? Why the fuck would I do that? You gonna tell me where they are eventually. Every person has a pain limit and i gues we just have to find out where your´s is." Carver said with a evil ambition of pain in his eyes. Kenny was taking a closer look at the room he was in and he didn´t like what he was seeing. It was a room constructed to torture people. On the right of him there was a table full of torture instrument´s and on the left side there was a big wagon that looked like if dead body´s or bodypart´s where stored in it. " So let´s begin then shall we? " Carver said and Kenny could see in his eyes that he almost couldn´t await the procedure to begin.
Choice A
"I haven't seen humans for a while now. And you guys well you just took me in and fed me, I'll be damned if good people like yoursel… moreves are killed by.... by murderers. I'm with you but if I don't like something I'm leaving." Lola says. "Great and thank you for joining us. Trust me these people are downright evil. The sooner they're gone the better so I've decided we strike today. I think I know which way they headed." Jared said. After their meal Jared, Betty, Tavia, and Lola set out in the direction the other group was heading.
Kenny sighs "Idiot... I'm such and idiot." Vince is lying down on 3 chairs in the corner of the room the blood cleaned from his face. Kenny slowly paces back and forth. "Damn I need some air." Kenny walk outside and paces by the bar door, the sun is slowly sinking over yonder. "I hope Wyatt and Russel are okay..." Kenny says. He sits down on a bench across the street from the bar and takes out some whisky th… [view original content]
Wow! Thanks that made me feel good . And yeah when I saw that Kenny was in a bar I was like hmmm hes gonna start drinking again . I really enjoy your parts too especially this one where Kenny sees all this torture equipment probably thinking like "Oh shit..." Anyway keep up the good work everyone!
That was very well written man! I love the way Kenny always seems to find something to drink when thing´s are going to shit:D
So let´s go o… moren with the Story then shall we?... Some hour´s later Kenny woke up in a small room, still feeling dizzy and feeling the pain of the wound on his knee. He was captivated on a small chair made of wood and Carver was sitting right infront of him stareing into his face. " Look who finally woke up, i nearly thought you aren´t as tough as you look like, that would have been a dissapointment." Carver said. " Where the fuck am I, what do you want from me?" Kenny angrily respondet. " You know where you are, you have been here before, it´s the old bookstore where you and you´r disgusting friend´s where staying at. I saved you´r lives that day remember? And you just ran of and killed 2 of my people. Is that the way you alway´s show how thankful you are? I will teach you some respect!" Carver said with a frightening to… [view original content]
Yea i gues we have to find out if Kenny will stand his ground like he said and if Carver rly is as big of an asshole in the game then he is in our story!
Wow! Thanks that made me feel good . And yeah when I saw that Kenny was in a bar I was like hmmm hes gonna start drinking again . I really enj… moreoy your parts too especially this one where Kenny sees all this torture equipment probably thinking like "Oh shit..." Anyway keep up the good work everyone!
I have writer's block. I had this big, long part all typed up, an hit the mouse, that was hovering over the home button,and lost all of it. I might get inspiration if someone else posts......
I have writer's block. I had this big, long part all typed up, an hit the mouse, that was hovering over the home button,and lost all of it. I might get inspiration if someone else posts......
I have writer's block. I had this big, long part all typed up, an hit the mouse, that was hovering over the home button,and lost all of it. I might get inspiration if someone else posts......
Yesterday
Wyatt and Russel ran for hours that day, sweat trickling down their faces, their legs like jello. They didn't dare call out Becca because it might attract walkers, and so they followed her tracks deep into the forest. As dusk approached they set up camp and feasted on some of the pickled eggs they found in the bar. "How could she run off like that?" Wyatt asked. "People do crazy shit when things are taken away from them then they just... give up.... Maybe there's no point she'll die no matter what." Russel responded "Don't say that! Maybe its not a bite!" Wyatt replied denying the truth. "We have to face facts Wyatt she will die from that bite." "Enough of your crazy talk Russel lets get moving I ain't sleeping in a dark forest." And so they kept running moon shining through the treetops overhead, and arrive at a small clearing where a campsite once stood. Becca comes out from behind the car slowly walking toward them looking very sickly. Wyatt starts crying and Russel pulls out Lilly's rifle that he borrowed from Vince and points it at Becca. Russel starts crying as well "I can't do it..." "Be strong you can do it Russel." Wyatt says wiping the tears from his face. Russel squeezed the trigger slowly and in his head swore he would get revenge on Carver and Betty.
Vince awoke in the bar confused. Where was everyone? He looked for a weapon and found a pistol on the table Kenny was sitting at. He went outside and looked for anybody, and found a bottle of empty whisky on the ground. He walked down the street searching the buildings that were still intact but at one part of the street he found a large pool of blood. Some of it trailed off in the direction of... Jared's base. They must have kidnapped Kenny! Wyatt and Russel emerged from the woods with frowns on their faces. What happened Vince wondered. "Come on Vince were getting revenge... Were going to kill Carver" Russel said in a grief tone.
They arrived at Carver's place Vince with Lilly's gun, Wyatt with a knife, and Russel with Kenny's gun. They found Carver and his group at the end of the street like they were waiting for them. There were four... five of them Betty, Lola, Tavia, Carver, and Carver was pointing his gun at someone who was tied up all bloody like he had been tortured all day. He was wearing that same cap and he had that same mustache... It was Kenny. "Put your guns down or Kenny gets it" Jared yelled from across the street an evil grin on his face.
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What do you mean what's that all about? In one of my parts Russel mentions that Vince could have some hidden past and was supposed to make you think that Russel doesn't trust Vince and won't bring him. But do you want me to change it so they bring Vince? I'm ok with that if so. And I just hoped you weren't angry because you used Vince in your part but for me he wasn't supposed to be there.
Choice A:
"Damnit! I can´t leave Becca alone with this freak, i have to follow them. I am sure Kenny will keep Russel safe! I knew we shouldn´t have left without saying anything to Vincent." Wyatt said to himself before he runs towards the river.
Some hours later a sleepy Vincent wakes up alone, slowly realizing that he got left by his friends yet another time. " Good morning sleepy head. I didn´t want to wake you up...but i have to tell you some bad news. Your friend´s have gone of on their own." Carver said. " Yes i already figured that out. Jesus Christ, how could everything get so fucked up. After we met this women Tavia everything has been going from bad to worse." Vincent sadly responded. " I know the feeling Vincent. We have lost people to. It´s a shitty time to life in, but we have to stick together to survive. Look...if you want our help we would like to help you find your friend´s. But before we do that I have to be sure that I can trust you Vincent. There are some crazy people out there and I am not sure yet if you are one of them or not. I want you to swear that for aslong you are part of this group you do anything I tell you to do and follow any of my commands. I think I don´t have to remind you how dangerous it is for someone beeing alone out there?" Carver said with a evil smile on his face.
Choice A: Join Carvers group
Choise B: Wander of on your own and look for you´r friends
Choice C: Post a unappropriate picture:D
Yeah, right but this thread is going to deal with the same problems as the other fan-fic thread. The longer it gets the harder it is to join in and you can't force people to make a summary but hoping someone takes the initiative to spend his time and effort doing it. I must admit that really hurt, reading that people don't want to join as it's gotten too long. I am not a native english speaker and it was really not easy for me doing all the summaries as well as the Backup. It's as if my effort was without success, as I now have seen myself people don't want to join after all, somehow frustrating.
I think I will make the next summary, I haven't made one yet and I feel like I should take the task this time.
Don't do it all by yourself, it's too much work. How about you do pages 26-36 and I do pages 36-46 and then someone can do another at the end of episode 5? If we break it down it shouldn't be too hard to get it done.
I hope you didn't misunderstand: I did the summaries because I wanted and it was fun and I didn't blame anyone. It's just that it needs time and I have other daily responsibilities as well, like all of you. I can help you with the summary. Tell me which Pages and I'll do it.
Sorry for any misunderstanding. I just meant that since you have worked so hard already and done the last summary you could take a break . If you want we could break the twenty pages down so the three of us can do a part of the summary each. I'll go over to the thread now to discuss it.
Very well, glad you joined, btw
Choice B: "Sorry Carver, I gotta go find my friends." Vince said, walking towards the door. "It's ok, I understand." Vince pushed the bookcase, and turned to say goodbye, and saw Carver cocking his pistol. Vince ducked, and the bullet smashed the door. Then he looked back and realised. Carver stole his gun! He was now unarmed. Vince swung open the door, and noticed the footprints leading to the woods. Vince was the best runner in the group, and even he struggled to get into the woods, and still had Carver and his group hunting him. Carver opened fire, but missed through the woods. "Dammit! Vince, load yer damn gun! I'm out! Yer so inconsiderate!" Carver yelled, as Vince spotted the group parting ways. "Guys! Run! Carver's coming!" Vince yelled, as the group noticed. "Oh, they found Becca and Shel- Lily? Oh god, which way do I go.....Russel and Ken need help!" Vince thought, as he ran up to Kenny and Russel.
"Guys, Carver's coming to kill us, we gotta go!" Vince said, as he looked around. Carver's group was in pursuit of Lilly, Becca, and Wyatt. "Guys, look! There's the spot where the 2 paths meet! Let's go help them!" Russel said, as Kenny refused. "C'mon Ken! You know that Wyatt went to help them, do this for your friend. Wyatt." Kenny hesitates....then agreed. "If I HAVE to live with that bitch to be with real friends.....then I'll be damned if I refuse." The group ran up to where the paths, meet, and everyone went back into 1 group. But as they did, the guy named Arnie Ran up, and held a switch blade up to Becca's throat, and began backing up. "1 Move and I kill her." Becca kicked him in the crotch as hard as she could, then grabbed his arm with the blade, and stabbed him with it. He collapsed, cursing, as everyone continued running. Dead end. The trees were to thick to see anything, and everyone might separate. They were cornered! The 3 members of carver showed up, and they had no choice. Everyone ran through. Vince got scratched up, and kept yelling, "stay close!"Vince eventually pushed through, bleeding from all the cuts. Russel and Wyatt came through too, both helping Becca. And then, Lilly came through, tired, and bleeding far worse than Vince. Then Kenny, being pushed by Steven. Carver grabbed Wyatt, unloading with punches, and Betty pinned Becca down, slapping her. Then, Steven pulled a machete on Kenny. Kenny started yelling for help, as Vince noticed a horde of walker coming. Lily noticed it too, passing her gun to Vince, who began shooting, and then 1 came through, pinning Lily down. The only free person was Russel, who was in the middle of the treeline, Kenny was on the far left, Lily was far right. Nobody else's lives were in danger, so h knew he had to do something. /he also knew that he could only have the time to save 1, and only 1. He also knew that whoever he chose not to save, was screwed.
Choice A Run left, save Kenny, let Lily die
Choice B Run right, save Lily, let Kenny die
In a state of panic Russel sped towards Kenny tackling Steven to the ground. Steven gets back up real fast and swings his machete towards Russel. It misses but that was a feint as Steven lunged at Russel hoping to thrust his blade into his stomach. Kenny runs up and tackles him back to the ground and starts beating on his face. "Kenny we have to get my friends! They're in danger!" Russel says as he starts running toward Lilly hoping that there was still time. "GET THIS WALKER OFF OF ME!" Lilly screams as the zombie tries to grab her head. But it was too late the herd was close and they all knelt down and started eating Lilly. "Holy crap..." Russel says. Traumatized Russel runs into the forest sweat and tears running down his bruised face. "Its all my fault.."
Kenny watched as the zombies devoured Stevens mutilated body. He turned and ran towards Vince who was firing bullets at the zombies Becca standing beside him ready with the knife. "Where's Russ and Wyatt? Where did Carver's group go?" Kenny asks. "We don't know but we gotta go because I can't kill all those geeks.I'm sorry Kenny but we have to leave now!" Vince says as he and Becca run toward the river."God damnit." Kenny says as he follows them.
Well Vince could still come, but Russel just doesn't trust him.
I think its too late since the Walking Moustache kept Vince with Jared's group and then maxbear reunited Vince with the others so its all good.
Yes i did it on purpose. The switch of event´s was needed to bring some clearness into this situation.
Awesome thanks for that.
At you´r service!
I´m happy that, that bitch Lilly finally died by the way:D... i just wish she would have got some kind of redemption after everything she´s done.
I liked Lilly
but Russel was more of a Kenny fan sadly. But in this story she was a b**** so no harm done 
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Wyatt was chasing Russel, looking for him, so they could reunite with the group. He found Russel near Arnie's body, with his blade, trying to commit suicide. "NO!" Wyatt yelled, tackling Russel, knocking the blade out of his hand. "Dude...sob......I-I let Lily die.....Let me end myself." Russel said, crying. "Hell no. You had no other option. You did the right thing." Wyatt said, helping him up. "now, let's get back to the group, before they're too far awa- JESUS!" Arnie was a walker, and had grabbed his leg, pushing Russel forward. Russel was scared. Risk his life to save a friend? OR make a mad dash, saving himself? Russel took a deep breath, and ran up, stomping the walker's head with so much momentum, it smashed as soon as it hit the ground. Russel helped Wyatt up, and Wyatt smiled and said "If that's not a statement as to why you deserve to live, I dunno what would be!" Russel smiled at Wyatt, and they went running. Kenny, Vince, and Becca reached a pile of junk. It was a car wreck. Lots of sharp pieces of glass and metal poked out. "Oh god, the walkers are catching up....Ok guys, I'll try to climb this..." Kenny said, putting 1 foot, and both hands on, and letting out a grunt. He got off, and his hands were covered in blood. "No damn way we'll make it over that. Blood attracts walkers. Everything would just get worse." Kenny said, as they all looked back. 30 walkers all headed their way. "Worse than this Ken?" Vince asked, as Kenny grabbed a long, sharp piece of metal. "Everyone find a piece of metal long and sharp. Like a sword. We're gonna fight our way outta this.
The fighting was intense. Kenny bludgeoning and slicing zombie heads. Vince using his quickness to do the same, but faster, and Becca using her size advantage to let walkers miss, for easy kills. Wyatt and Russel only caught up near the last 5, but weaved through, finishing ones that were still kickin' by stomping and pointing them out to others. Eventually, they were all dead. Without taking time to rest, Kenny explained what happened to them to Wyatt and Russel, and everyone carefully made their way over the wall of cars, getting as few cuts as possible. They entered a town. Quickly running into a building to regroup before moving on. They found a bar. "Spacious, Lotsa tables and stools to barricade with, and pickled eggs to eat on those days that we don't find food? Man, I know we gotta move on EVENTUALLY, but for now, why don't we make this our base of operations?" Kenny suggested. Everyone agreed, and sat down "First, though, is everyone alright?" Wyatt asked, as Russel gave a thumbs up, Vince said "A little cut up from the wall and the forest, but I'll survive." Kenny was checking for food, so he took that as a yes. But Becca was rubbing her shoulder. "I think I cut myself with the metal blade in the battle......hurts like heck." "Here, I've dealt with injuries. Let me see." Kenny said walking over to look at it. He gasped, backing up into the wall. "What is it Ken?" Russel asked, nervously. "Guys.....I think she's bit."
" No, you´r lieyng! This can´t be true!" Vincent screamed in disbelieve. " I´m sorry Vincent but we have to face the facts here. I already was in such a situation before and i am telling you there is no happy end to this." Kenny respondet. " No i´m fine. I wasn´t biten! It is a cut, you have to believe me!" Becca fearfully yelled. "I am sorry young Lady but this is a bite. I´m afraid we ´have no other choice but to kill you and put you out of your misery." Kenny said. " Kenny man don´t get hasty here. Maybe she is telling us the truth, what if it is a cut? You couldn´t life on knowing that you killed a innocent little girl could you?" Wyatt asked in a hurry. " Wyatt Pal, i don´t judge you, i was in this Situation myself. Back then my best friend stod up to me and talked some sense into me. I know some of you ain´t gonna like this, but we have to make painfull decisions to survive in a world like this." Kenny respondet trying to stay as calm as he possible could. " Please don´t do this. I´m fine. Everything is gonna be okay." Becca scarefully said. " We can´t just kill her of like this! We are a group after all. We have to vote about this. That´s how we always handeled it when bad things happened. " Russel said. " Cut the shit boy, you all gonna listen to me now! This is not a discussion. I already let Hershel´s son die and i sweared to myself i will never let this happen to anyone again. This girl won´t suffer any more than she has to. " Kenny angry shouted. " But what if we just cut the bite out, right man? Jesus Christ we can´t just kill her of like this. " Wyatt said. " Ain´t gonna happen! It doesn´t work like this and you know that Wyatt. I told you already how this is gonna get done." Kenny even angryer than before respondet. " Who do you think you are Kenny? You may think you are a tough son of a bitch, but you are not in charge of this little group. We can make our own goddamn decisions. We are a Democratie after all. What if it was you´r son who got biten? Would you have the balls to do it then?" Vincent said. " This ain´t shit." Kenny angrily mumbled. Kenny balled his fist and was ready to go Berserk. The air was geting thiner and thiner as things slowly started to get out of control.
Choice A: Kenny knocks out Vincent in a angry rage
Choice B: Vincent apologizes and try´s to calm down Kenny
Just noticed only the girls are dieing.
whateva.
But there is one brave little girl out there that is gonna survive them all!
"Guys calm down. This won't get us anywhere" Wyatt intrudes. Vince turns to look at him "Hes arguing for killing a kid! We c---." Vince is cut off as Kenny slammed his fist right into Vince's nose. Vince topples to the ground unconscious blood spilling from his left nostril. "WHAT THE F*** MAN!" Wyatt yells as he kneels down beside Vince. "I'm sorry but we have to kill her or else we'll all end up bitten! I know its hard but it has to be done." Kenny says rubbing his knuckles. "Are you crazy? You just knocked out one of our group!" Russel says with a angry look on his face. "Come on Russ don't you trust me? This is what we have to do to survive." Kenny said. "Your nuts! We can't just kill Becca shes one of us!" Russel says as he slowly closes his fists. "My son was bitten and we had to kill him. I'm sorry Russel but shes going to turn and we have to kill her now!" In the heat of the conversation Wyatt was calling out guys but they weren't listening until now. "What is it Wyatt buddy? Tell Russ we need to kill Becca." Wyatt had a scared look on his face "No its not that... guys.. Becca's gone. They all look toward a small bloody pool beside the chair Becca was sitting on. It was empty. "We need to go after her!" Wyatt says. "What about Vince? We gotta think about living!" Kenny responds. "Well I'm going after her. For Shel. Are you coming Russel or not?" Wyatt asks.
Choice A: Look for Becca with Wyatt
Choice B: Stay with Vince with Kenny
Choice A:
Russel was shoked by the situation and couldn´t move his body. " Just go boy, the girl needs you. I will stay here and protect Vincent until he wakes up. That´s the least I can do after what I did to him." Kenny said. " Thank´s man. Maybe you aren´t such a son of a bitch after all. " Russel said before he followed Wyatt to find Becca. " Just the two of us then, ha Pal? Look...I´m sorry man I just overreacted before. Maybe I shouldn´t have...maybe I was wrong. I know there is no hope for Becca, but it is her choice after all. She should decide how she want´s to end her life and not us." Kenny said to himself while he was looking on the passed out Vincent.
Meanwhile not to far away a women was all on her own struggling to survive. " I don´t know how long I can go on like this." The women said to herself, as suddenly a walker grabbed her from behind. She knew this was it for her and she had accepted her faith. " I won´t let anyone else get eaten today, no way!" A deep man voice said behind her. The man pulled out his gun and killed the Walker. The women was still shoked from the events that just happened to her and was barely able to open her mouth as she falled to the ground. " Thank you." She quietly answered, while the mysterious man was geting closer to her. " Hey don´t mention it." The man said as he reached his arm to help the women get up. " I would have died if you guys haven´t showed up, i am indepted to you. How can I ever make up for this?" The women asked. " You are indepented to noone, but yourself." The man said. " By the way my name is Jared. Who are you?" The man asked. " My name is...I am Tavia." The women respondet. " Hello Tavia, I am glad I found you. I have to ask you something and i want you to think good about it. I won´t force you to´do anything here, but we had a fight with a bunch of crazy people before and two of our people got killed. You can fill in and take their places if you want to. We could just need your help. Do you want to join our little group and follow my lead?" Jared asked Tavia.
Choice A: Tavia joins Carvers group
Choice B: Tavia wanders of on her own
2 died. Steven got eaten, and Arnie died after Becca stabbed him.
Yea right...i will Edit it in that case:D
Choice A: "Yes I've been on my own for a while now. Do you think you could help me find my friends?" Tavia says. "Yeah sure but first you should stay at our base for the night and rest up" Jared responded. Tavia and Jared walk toward the building in silence, the sounds of their footsteps filling the empty air of the broken down area of buildings. They come across the one Jared is staying in and Jared speaks to the door "Open it we have a visitor." The door opens a bookcase slowly pulling back revealing a pudgy blonde girl. "This is Betty... The rest of are group was murdered and well... were all that's left and we need good people so we can rebuild our group." "Who murdered your group?" Tavia asks. Jared starts crying back against the wall sliding downward "They killed my best friend Steven... Th- these people... that stupid guy in the ballcap beat his face so bad he couldn't get up. There was a herd of those things between us and I couldn't stop him." "I'm so sorry Jared... these days people can be dangerous. If were to ever survive these people need to be stopped" Tavia says her arm around Jared. Jared sniffles "Thanks... your right."
Just to recap:
Kenny: Alive with unconscious Vince in the bar
Lilly: Died being eaten by walkers
Vince: Unconscious in the bar with Kenny
Wyatt: With Russel looking for runaway Becca
Russel: With Wyatt looking for runaway Becca
Bonnie: Died by angry Lilly shooting her
Shel: "Killed" by Carver when staying with him and his group
Jared/Carver: Alive, wants revenge on 400 day's group
Steven: Punched out by Kenny and eaten by walkers
Arnie: Died from Becca stabbing him
Becca: Alive and bitten, currently running away
Tavia: With Carver's group, wants to help stop the murderers of Carver's group(Not knowing that they are her friends)
Betty: Alive with Carver and Tavia
If I missed anyone please add on. And great job guys your doing great lets keep this going!
Becca is bitten, I'd include that.
"S-s-so now what?" Betty stuttered. Jared and Tavia exchanged glances. The building was worn down a huge amount and the occasional creak could be heard from the floorboards. "This place gives me the creeps" Tavia commented. "Maybe so, but it the safest place right now" Jared answered. The three of them pushed a bookcase over the door the took seats near a window. It was time to play the waiting game.
A few hours later Tavia heard a noise. It was coming from the door. She glanced over at Jared and Betty who were both sleeping. Tavia sat up and waited for the noise to stop, the insistent scratching, but unfortuantly for her it didn't. Tavia stood up and moved to the door. "Go away" she whispered. She knew that wasn't going to do any good but-
"What did you just say?" A voice asked from the other side. Tavia's heart leapt. A person? It was a girl for sure and sounded pretty young. Tavia moved over to the window to see who it was. It was a girl, about 18 with long brown locks and freckles. She spotted Tavia through the window. Tavia panicked for a minute but then thought about it. The girl didn't seem to be a threat. "Please help" the girl said. "My name is Lola and I've been alone for weeks now. Please help me." Tavia wasn't sure what to do.
Choice A: Let Lola in
Choice B: Don't let her in
Choice A
Tavia remembered Jared´s word´s " We can use any help we can get. " "Okay i will help you, but i have to talk with my group first. Please wait outside the house for a minute." Tavia said to the girl. " Jared, Betty wake up. There is a women outside the bookstore, she needs our help." Tavia loudly said. " Alright Tavia, what are you waiting for? Let her in, the more the better!" Jared sleepy respondet. Tavia slowly opened the door to let Lola inside. " Thank you so much! I was nearly giving up hope before i came across here. I was out there on my own for week´s. I am Lola, nice to meet you all." The women happily said. " Hello Lola, I am Jared and this are Betty and Tavia. We are just a small group but we take care of each other. You got to be starving! Wait here for a minute i will get you something to eat." Carver said as he was going to get the some food for the women. "Here you go, grab yourself some tuna!" The Women didn´t have a decent meal for weeks and was swallowing it up all at once. " Thank you (eating sounds) so much (more eating sounds), i didn´t have a decent meal for week´s." The women said with a full mouth. "Hey don´t mention it, there is more where that´s coming from! I want to make you an offer Lola. You can stay here with us and become part of our little group, or you just wander of on your own and go out in the cold darkness again. But if you stay here with us you need to swear me something in return. There is a other group out there, dangerous people. They killed two of our friend´s already and aslong as this monsters are still breathing we won´t be able to life in peace. We desiderate for revenge, we need to kill all of them and we need your help. Are you with us or not?" Carver determinedly asked.
Choice A: Join Carvers group
Choice B: Wander of on your own
Choice A
"I haven't seen humans for a while now. And you guys well you just took me in and fed me, I'll be damned if good people like yourselves are killed by.... by murderers. I'm with you but if I don't like something I'm leaving." Lola says. "Great and thank you for joining us. Trust me these people are downright evil. The sooner they're gone the better so I've decided we strike today. I think I know which way they headed." Jared said. After their meal Jared, Betty, Tavia, and Lola set out in the direction the other group was heading.
Kenny sighs "Idiot... I'm such and idiot." Vince is lying down on 3 chairs in the corner of the room the blood cleaned from his face. Kenny slowly paces back and forth. "Damn I need some air." Kenny walk outside and paces by the bar door, the sun is slowly sinking over yonder. "I hope Wyatt and Russel are okay..." Kenny says. He sits down on a bench across the street from the bar and takes out some whisky that he found in the bar. He starts drinking "I'll find her for you Lee... I'll keep her safe. We can have a new family with Vince, an Wyatt, and Russ.... Becca" Kenny starts crying knowing that he failed to keep one little girl safe. Two walkers approach him from down the street and Kenny pulls out his knife, the back of his hand wiping away the tears. He pushes one and stabs the other in the head, the on on the ground he stabbed in the head multiple times, anger in his face. "Well, well well" a familiar voice said behind him. Kenny turns and finds Jared, Betty, Tavia, and Lola in front of him pointing their guns at his head. "If it isn't Steven's killer. Were gonna teach you and your group a lesson. But first you have to show us where your group is." Jared said. "I'll never tell you you motherf---" Kenny is interrupted finding a bullet shot from Carver in his left knee. Kenny falls to the ground and Jared speaks again "Lets try this again. Where Is Your Group?" Kenny spits out blood onto Carver's pants "F*** you." "Fine then" Jared firmly kicks Kenny in the head and Kenny is unconscious the last thing he remembered that day was being dragged by a surprisingly strong Betty, and Lola down what seemed like an endless road.
That was very well written man! I love the way Kenny always seems to find something to drink when thing´s are going to shit:D
So let´s go on with the Story then shall we?... Some hour´s later Kenny woke up in a small room, still feeling dizzy and feeling the pain of the wound on his knee. He was captivated on a small chair made of wood and Carver was sitting right infront of him stareing into his face. " Look who finally woke up, i nearly thought you aren´t as tough as you look like, that would have been a dissapointment." Carver said. " Where the fuck am I, what do you want from me?" Kenny angrily respondet. " You know where you are, you have been here before, it´s the old bookstore where you and you´r disgusting friend´s where staying at. I saved you´r lives that day remember? And you just ran of and killed 2 of my people. Is that the way you alway´s show how thankful you are? I will teach you some respect!" Carver said with a frightening tone in his word´s. " I won´t tell you anything, this will never happen! I gues you will just have to kill me." Kenny determinedly said. " Kill you? Why the fuck would I do that? You gonna tell me where they are eventually. Every person has a pain limit and i gues we just have to find out where your´s is." Carver said with a evil ambition of pain in his eyes. Kenny was taking a closer look at the room he was in and he didn´t like what he was seeing. It was a room constructed to torture people. On the right of him there was a table full of torture instrument´s and on the left side there was a big wagon that looked like if dead body´s or bodypart´s where stored in it. " So let´s begin then shall we? " Carver said and Kenny could see in his eyes that he almost couldn´t await the procedure to begin.
Wow! Thanks that made me feel good
. And yeah when I saw that Kenny was in a bar I was like hmmm hes gonna start drinking again 
. I really enjoy your parts too especially this one where Kenny sees all this torture equipment probably thinking like "Oh shit..." Anyway keep up the good work everyone!
Thank you will do:D
Yea i gues we have to find out if Kenny will stand his ground like he said and if Carver rly is as big of an asshole in the game then he is in our story!
I have writer's block. I had this big, long part all typed up, an hit the mouse, that was hovering over the home button,and lost all of it. I might get inspiration if someone else posts......
Well...i can´t, i´m the last one who posted:D
Wow that really sucks.. You guys mind if I post?
Not at all man go ahead! The story must go on!:D
Thanks will do with great pleasure! This is actually really addicting
It sure is! I also like the way the story is developing! It´s a nice previous history to the event´s of season2.
Yesterday
Wyatt and Russel ran for hours that day, sweat trickling down their faces, their legs like jello. They didn't dare call out Becca because it might attract walkers, and so they followed her tracks deep into the forest. As dusk approached they set up camp and feasted on some of the pickled eggs they found in the bar. "How could she run off like that?" Wyatt asked. "People do crazy shit when things are taken away from them then they just... give up.... Maybe there's no point she'll die no matter what." Russel responded "Don't say that! Maybe its not a bite!" Wyatt replied denying the truth. "We have to face facts Wyatt she will die from that bite." "Enough of your crazy talk Russel lets get moving I ain't sleeping in a dark forest." And so they kept running moon shining through the treetops overhead, and arrive at a small clearing where a campsite once stood. Becca comes out from behind the car slowly walking toward them looking very sickly. Wyatt starts crying and Russel pulls out Lilly's rifle that he borrowed from Vince and points it at Becca. Russel starts crying as well "I can't do it..." "Be strong you can do it Russel." Wyatt says wiping the tears from his face. Russel squeezed the trigger slowly and in his head swore he would get revenge on Carver and Betty.
Vince awoke in the bar confused. Where was everyone? He looked for a weapon and found a pistol on the table Kenny was sitting at. He went outside and looked for anybody, and found a bottle of empty whisky on the ground. He walked down the street searching the buildings that were still intact but at one part of the street he found a large pool of blood. Some of it trailed off in the direction of... Jared's base. They must have kidnapped Kenny! Wyatt and Russel emerged from the woods with frowns on their faces. What happened Vince wondered. "Come on Vince were getting revenge... Were going to kill Carver" Russel said in a grief tone.
They arrived at Carver's place Vince with Lilly's gun, Wyatt with a knife, and Russel with Kenny's gun. They found Carver and his group at the end of the street like they were waiting for them. There were four... five of them Betty, Lola, Tavia, Carver, and Carver was pointing his gun at someone who was tied up all bloody like he had been tortured all day. He was wearing that same cap and he had that same mustache... It was Kenny. "Put your guns down or Kenny gets it" Jared yelled from across the street an evil grin on his face.