Yesterday
Wyatt and Russel ran for hours that day, sweat trickling down their faces, their legs like jello. They didn't dare call out Becca b… moreecause it might attract walkers, and so they followed her tracks deep into the forest. As dusk approached they set up camp and feasted on some of the pickled eggs they found in the bar. "How could she run off like that?" Wyatt asked. "People do crazy shit when things are taken away from them then they just... give up.... Maybe there's no point she'll die no matter what." Russel responded "Don't say that! Maybe its not a bite!" Wyatt replied denying the truth. "We have to face facts Wyatt she will die from that bite." "Enough of your crazy talk Russel lets get moving I ain't sleeping in a dark forest." And so they kept running moon shining through the treetops overhead, and arrive at a small clearing where a campsite once stood. Becca comes out from behind the car slowly walking toward them looking very sick… [view original content]
Russel's heart felt like it was beating out of his chest. He couldn't lose Kenny, just like they lost Shel, Bonnie and Becca. Too many innocent people had died, they couldn't lose another. "It doesn't have to be like this" Vince pleaded. "You made your choice" Betty spat. "Now you will know what it feels like for one of your own to get kille-"
Betty's head exploded. Tavia screamed and a look of shock and desperation was etched onto Carver's face. He looked to Wyatt, Russel and Vince but they weren't the culprit. He turned to Lola who was crying and still had her gun pointed to were Betty once was. Lola turned to Vince and the others and screamed.
"SHOOT!!!!"
If you look at the dead body at the river in episode 1 season 2 with the black coat that is carter the man that made you kill that woman in 400 days he's wearing the same coat
Yes you are right about that, but his name was Roman and not Carter . Carver is the (Antagonosist) Clem will have to face in Season2. He was mentioned a couple of times by the Cabin group during the events of episode1.
If you look at the dead body at the river in episode 1 season 2 with the black coat that is carter the man that made you kill that woman in 400 days he's wearing the same coat
Carver knew he couldn't kill all of them at once, so he did run to the woods as fast as he could, releasing one last bullet before he was out of sight. Vince and Russel did their best to aim for the running Carver, but unfortunatelly all their shots seemed to miss their target. "It´s finally over. Atleast all of us made it out alive. The next thing we need to do is..." Vincent got interrupted from a scream of pain coming from Russels direction. " What happened? Russel no!" Wyatt was shouting as Russel was slowly falling to the ground. " He got shot, we need to stop the bleeding! " Vince respondet in frustration. " I am so sorry, i didn't know that you were the group Jared was talking about, i swear i didn't know it" Tavia screamed in a tone of anger and fearness. " He's gonna be alright man, he's got to be right? Wyatt asked Vince in a tone of anger and disbelieve. " Tavia you know this people? How could you ever do this to them? I thought you were different then all the other psychos out there. " Lola angrilly said. " What the fuck happened? Is Russel gonna be alright? I'l...I'l be..." Kenny said before the heavy pain he felt did make him pass out once more.
Russel's heart felt like it was beating out of his chest. He couldn't lose Kenny, just like they lost Shel, Bonnie and Becca. Too many innocen… moret people had died, they couldn't lose another. "It doesn't have to be like this" Vince pleaded. "You made your choice" Betty spat. "Now you will know what it feels like for one of your own to get kille-"
Betty's head exploded. Tavia screamed and a look of shock and desperation was etched onto Carver's face. He looked to Wyatt, Russel and Vince but they weren't the culprit. He turned to Lola who was crying and still had her gun pointed to were Betty once was. Lola turned to Vince and the others and screamed.
"SHOOT!!!!"
"Maybe Carver had some medical supplies in the house?" Vince suggested. So Vince and Wyatt lifted Russel and walked over to the building with Tavia and Lola hauling Kenny with a betrayed look on their faces. Russel and Kenny were set down and Wyatt searched for any medical supplies finding some bandages and stitching equipment. They all worked together to clean and close the wound hoping that these two might live. After they were done Vince got up "I'm going after Carver. But somebody has to watch Russel and Kenny so I'll bring one of you while two of you stay here." "I will stay." Tavia said with some doubt in her voice "I have done enough already.". Wyatt and Lola were begging to come with Vince. They both wanted revenge on Carver for the horrible things he did."Come on man I'm your friend we need to get back at him for Kenny and Russel" Wyatt pleaded. "He lied to me I want him to know that it was a mistake crossing me." Lola said. Vince didn't think it mattered who he brought but to them it meant a lot.
Choice A: Sorry Lola. Wyatt's my friend through all of this, and I know you want to go, but......I'm sorry, just please watch our friend. "Ok...... I understand. I was part of their group, you don't trust me yet......" Lola said sadly, as she leaned over to help Kenny. Into the woods they went, as Vince lead, and Wyatt followed. As they exited, Carver was seen, far away, pinned to the ground by a walker. They caught up, as Carver broke free, and tried to run. At the same time a walker grabbed Wyatt, and he dropped his weapon. 1. Bullet. Left. No time to do both.......
Choice A: Sorry Lola. Wyatt's my friend through all of this, and I know you want to go, but......I'm sorry, just please watch our friend. "Ok.… more..... I understand. I was part of their group, you don't trust me yet......" Lola said sadly, as she leaned over to help Kenny. Into the woods they went, as Vince lead, and Wyatt followed. As they exited, Carver was seen, far away, pinned to the ground by a walker. They caught up, as Carver broke free, and tried to run. At the same time a walker grabbed Wyatt, and he dropped his weapon. 1. Bullet. Left. No time to do both.......
Choice A: Save Wyatt.
Choice B: Kill Carver
Yeah, I know Carver is alive in season 2. I already have another antagonist in mind already! I have a name, character, and motivation in mind. I am just waiting for my chance to throw him in there....
Well this choice is kinda easy considering the fact that we know already that Carver will be alive in season2.
I still like the idea behind it! Well written!
Yes you are right about that, but his name was Roman and not Carter . Carver is the (Antagonosist) Clem will have to face in Season2. He was mentioned a couple of times by the Cabin group during the events of episode1.
Thank you very much for doing a summary of the event's that already happened. I was thinking about doing one myself but i am just to lazy:D Before i started reading this i was thinking about Lee's voice in my head saying " previously on the Walking Dead "
You are all doing a good work here so let's keep going!
Choice A: Save Wyatt:
Vincent didn't waste a second to make his decision. He shot the last bullet he had right though the Walkers brain that was grabbing Wyatt. During the time this events happened, Carver was able to free himself of the Walker and get away safely. " Don't stop now Vince, we have to go after him. It's to dangerous to let him get away! " Wyatt said in a hurry as we was running after the fleeing Carver. " Wyatt don't, i have no more bullets left and Carver still has his gun. We can't take the risk and keep following like this. " Vincent respondet. Wyatt stoped running and turned around looking deep into Vincent's eyes. " Well we can't just let him run of either. What if he comes back another day and trys to kill us while we are sleeping? " Wyatt said in a boiling rage. " Look Wyatt man, you need to calm down now. I know what this man did was terrible and there is no excuse for that. But what good are we doing the group if we chase after him without any way to defend ourselfes and get killed by this monster eventually. " Vincent said as he was trying to calm down the raging Wyatt. " But we can't...we have to... i gues you'r right Vince, you are always right. That's why we voted for you beeing the Leader of our group back then. " Wyatt said as he was slowly calming down. " You don't have to worry about it Wyatt. We are more people and we have more shoting power. We will keep up guards every day and night to make sure this fucker isn't gonna be able to do us any harme anymore. " Vincent said with a strong determination in his words. " I know man...aslong as we take care of each other we gonna be alright. I just wish you would have killed this guy when you had the chance instead of saving my life. " Wyatt sadly respondet. " Wyatt i know u don't mean that. The man i know, my best friend on the whole world would never say something like this. The man i know made me remember back then that sparing someones life is always the right thing to do. If i would choose killing a dangerous man over safing my best friend's life, i would be nothing better than the man i was trying to kill. " Vincent said and Wyatt and Vincent happily smiled in each others faces.
I know it's been 5 pages, I do but.... to encourage more people to join....
SUMMARY TIME
Ok, we have lots to cover, because we've gone c… morerazy with this....
Episode 1: A New Threat
Russel is talking to Bonnie about his fear that his family is dead, and how he'd be happier not knowing whether or not they're alive.
Russel gets out of Tavia's car, and vomits, an flees.
Vince and Bonnie chase him, saving him from a walker.
Tavia, Shel, Becca and Wyatt drive away.
Vince and crew find a girl named Lily, who lies about seeing their friends, and they still let her tag along.
.
They find the river, and the woods, and Tavia's crashed car
They find Wyatt, and Kenny, an old survivor from Lily's group, who hates her, and they ditch Lily because of this.
Lily murders Bonnie. Her explaination: She was working for the villain, Carver, for drugs, to spy on them. Apparently.
The group goes through the woods, into a town, where th… [view original content]
Yeah, I know Carver is alive in season 2. I already have another antagonist in mind already! I have a name, character, and motivation in mind. I am just waiting for my chance to throw him in there....
I know it's been 5 pages, I do but.... to encourage more people to join....
SUMMARY TIME
Ok, we have lots to cover, because we've gone c… morerazy with this....
Episode 1: A New Threat
Russel is talking to Bonnie about his fear that his family is dead, and how he'd be happier not knowing whether or not they're alive.
Russel gets out of Tavia's car, and vomits, an flees.
Vince and Bonnie chase him, saving him from a walker.
Tavia, Shel, Becca and Wyatt drive away.
Vince and crew find a girl named Lily, who lies about seeing their friends, and they still let her tag along.
.
They find the river, and the woods, and Tavia's crashed car
They find Wyatt, and Kenny, an old survivor from Lily's group, who hates her, and they ditch Lily because of this.
Lily murders Bonnie. Her explaination: She was working for the villain, Carver, for drugs, to spy on them. Apparently.
The group goes through the woods, into a town, where th… [view original content]
After the escape of Carver the group lived a little more happier but it seemed their spirits could never be lifted after all the loss and pain they all encountered. Kenny had recovered from his torture but he now walked with a limp in his left leg from the bullet that was shot days before. Russel however had been in bed for days his breathing very raspy but his heart was still beating. Tavia felt guilty and felt responsible for Russel and Kenny and cared for them but stopped talking to the others. Vince was mostly outside on watch on top of the bar and Lola and Wyatt scavenged all the small towns they had come across including Jared's hideout. Wyatt suggested inspections like Shel and Becca did and Vince agreed also deciding they should roll cars around their general area to keep out walkers.
All their supplies lay on the bar tables side by side. Four guns six bullets in each. Six long sharpened knives. Three flashlights. Two bags, one filled with medicine the other with food. One backpack with Russel's name on it. They had searched for food everywhere they could but they were running out. Vince frowned and looked inside the food bag shaking his head "We only have enough food to last us seven more days." "Damnit.. We gotta move. Me and my friend Lee we had to leave our place because there was no food and now I'm in the same damn situation. I'm getting sick of this shit!" Kenny says angrily and walks out the bar door. "We need to keep trying and Russel's still hasn't recovered yet." Lola says "I agree with Kenny there's no food left we have to go. Remember Tavia's camp. They have everything including food! I say we go there" Wyatt said. Tavia said nothing as usual. "Me and Lola want to stay. And you and Kenny want to go. Tavia won't say a word so I say we wait for Russel to wake up and then we vote." Vince said. They decided to wait for Russel but the next day Vince decided to give food to only people who needed the food to keep their food stocks up until Russel recovered. Vince frowned. Some people will miss a meal but it had to be done. He put his hands in the food bag and pulled out a piece of steak, an egg, and a loaf of bread. Vince walked outside and looked at all the group members. Kenny was on watch a angry look on his face, Wyatt and Lola were standing by a broken house probably trying to convince the other to leave or stay, and Tavia sat on the bench across the street from the bar staring into the nothingness in the ground. This is going to be harder than I thought Vince said to himself.
Sorry that I kind of copyed! I loved the feeding part in episode 2 and just needed to add that in here to see who you would choose!
Don´t worry about it man! I love the way how you keep bringing back some of the scenes from Season1 ( Like the scene where Kenny found a bottle of Whisky in the bar:). That brings back some good memorys!
It also kinda feels like to me we are done with our first episode here. ( i know this story doesn't need to end but why not keep up the Telltale spirit right?:). And with the food scene a whole new episode has begun!
Episode 1: A new group ( instead of A new day)
Episode 2: Starved for vengeance ( instead of Starved for help)
Episode 2 Starved For Vengeance
After the escape of Carver the group lived a little more happier but it seemed their spirits could never be… more lifted after all the loss and pain they all encountered. Kenny had recovered from his torture but he now walked with a limp in his left leg from the bullet that was shot days before. Russel however had been in bed for days his breathing very raspy but his heart was still beating. Tavia felt guilty and felt responsible for Russel and Kenny and cared for them but stopped talking to the others. Vince was mostly outside on watch on top of the bar and Lola and Wyatt scavenged all the small towns they had come across including Jared's hideout. Wyatt suggested inspections like Shel and Becca did and Vince agreed also deciding they should roll cars around their general area to keep out walkers.
All their supplies lay on the bar tables side by side. Four guns six bullets in each. Six long sharpened knives. Three… [view original content]
Don´t worry about it man! I love the way how you keep bringing back some of the scenes from Season1 ( Like the scene where Kenny found a bottl… moree of Whisky in the bar:). That brings back some good memorys!
It also kinda feels like to me we are done with our first episode here. ( i know this story doesn't need to end but why not keep up the Telltale spirit right?:). And with the food scene a whole new episode has begun!
Episode 1: A new group ( instead of A new day)
Episode 2: Starved for vengeance ( instead of Starved for help)
Thanks! Yes I guess our first episode is basically done. Here are my ideas for episode names.
Episode 1: A New Threat (Carver introduced)
… more Episode 2: Starved For Vengeance (Loved that one The Walking Mustache! Good thinking.)
Episode 3: A Home Far Ahead(spoil too much maybe? Its just my opinion but they got to get there at some point )
Episode 4: Behind Every Shadow (something dark is revealed?)
Episode 5: A Final Breath ( couldn't think of much for this ah well)
Hope you liked my ideas!
No Problem! I like it and it goes fairly well to the story(I even edited my post and put the chapter name there)
Maxbear could you do the same and put in bolded text the episode one name? Me and The Walking Mustache agreed that "A New Threat" would be pretty good. If you or anyone else disagrees or have an opinion for another name don't be afraid to suggest!
I agree we should name the episode as the story develops I was just giving ideas .
I agree..." A New Threat " is a better idea then " A new group "... we should keep that name.
Thanks! Starved for Vengeance rly has a nice … morering to it:D
For other upcoming Episodes i would suggest we just see how the story keeps developing and decide which name we wanna give it then!
Walking dead 401 days. Enter Vince. Vince: hey did you guys ever see a picture of my brother? He is the reason I went to jail he overdosed on drugs and I killed the dealer. Every one looks at picture Wyatt,Russel,Shell.... then Bonnie..
Bonnie suddenly faints. Bonnie has a dark secret that we all know about. Bonnie was a junkie. Something every one doesn't know is that Bonnie is the reason Vince's brother is dead.
Enter Shell into Bonnies tent. Shell: Bonnie are you ok? Bonnie: do you remember when we were talking the one day about our past? Shell: ya I do.
Bonnie: well...remember how I told you I stole another junkies fix and injected air into his heart? Shell: (very serious stunned face) ya.... are you saying.... VINCE'S BROTHER! Bonnie: nods.
PART 2 COMMING SOON BASED ON LIKES.
wait wut? I thought we were doing a fan-fic? Ok, this shall be ignored, I mean really, sorry if you misunderstood but....this is 1 group fan-fic dude. Nto a bunch of little ones. Please don't post more, but please do add to the story!
Walking dead 401 days. Enter Vince. Vince: hey did you guys ever see a picture of my brother? He is the reason I went to jail he overdosed on … moredrugs and I killed the dealer. Every one looks at picture Wyatt,Russel,Shell.... then Bonnie..
Bonnie suddenly faints. Bonnie has a dark secret that we all know about. Bonnie was a junkie. Something every one doesn't know is that Bonnie is the reason Vince's brother is dead.
Enter Shell into Bonnies tent. Shell: Bonnie are you ok? Bonnie: do you remember when we were talking the one day about our past? Shell: ya I do.
Bonnie: well...remember how I told you I stole another junkies fix and injected air into his heart? Shell: (very serious stunned face) ya.... are you saying.... VINCE'S BROTHER! Bonnie: nods.
PART 2 COMMING SOON BASED ON LIKES.
Yes i know, i liked the ideas but maybe they won´t fit the story anymore if we we finally get this far...speaking of which, let's go on then shall we?
The first candidate on Vincent's list was Kenny. " The man must have been going though hell lately, geting abused by this sick man. I can't even immagine what kind of torture technics Carver did use on him. " Vincent said to himself as he was walking towards the noticable angry Kenny. " Hey Ken, how you holding up? I thought you could use something to eat. " Vincent said as he was handing out the fresh piece of steak to Kenny. " Oh Jackpot, today gotta be my birthday! I was afraid i would have to nourish on tuna for the rest of my life. " Kenny said as his condition was noticable getting better. " Haha, i'm afraid that's an offer i can only make you for today. Enjoy it Ken, you deserve it. " Vincent happily respondet. " Now to the next one. " Vincent said as he was heading towards Wyatt. " Here Wyatt, you need to keep your strength up. " Vincent said as he was trying to hand over the egg to Wyatt. " Wow thank's Vince. I'm starving! But actualy...why don't you take my ration for today? You had to make alot of hard decisions lately and i know its not that easy for you. " Wyatt said as he was giving Vincent back the boiled egg. " Thank you Wyatt, you are a true friend. That should make my next decisions easyer. " Vincent respondet with a big smile on his face. He was taking a long look at the deliciously looking boiled egg before he came to a decision. " Alot of this peole have been going for even more shit then i did. They are the once who should get the food." Vincent thought as he was looking at Lola and Tavia. " This whole situation must be very stressful for Tavia, she should be the one that becomes the next ration of food. " Vincent said to himself as he was heading towards Tavia. " Hello Tavia, it's a nice day today isn't it? Are you hungry? I got some food here for you if you would like to have it. " Vincent said as he was holding a big fresh baken loaf of bread in his hand. " I...i don't deserve this. I am the reason all of this happened. I am the reason that so many of your friends have died. I am garbage. " Tavia respondet before she was starting to cry out loudly. " There there, i am here for you Tavia. You have to forgive yourself for what happened to our friends. I don't blame you, it's not your fault. I blame this fucking monster, he is responsible for all of this. Even i couldn't see though his evil facade at first. Tavia listen to me, i want you to have this. Please accept the food that i offered you. " Vincent said as he was gently patting on Tavia's back. Tavia silently toke the loaf of bread, but Vincent was sure that he could get a glimpse of Tavia having a smile on her face. " Only one left to go." Vincent said as he was slowly heading towards Lola. " Oh shit, i forgot about Russel, he will need somethng fresh and warm to eat when he wakes up. " Vincent said slightly feeling ashamed of himself. " I gues it's time for the bad news now. " Vincent sighted as he was going to tell Lola there was no food left for her. " Lola i am sorry, but we are out of rations for today. I'm afraid there is no food left for you. " Vincent said worrying about the upcoming consequences. " Excellent, that's just like i supposed things would gonna get to happen. I am the new face here in the group and you people still don't trust me yet." Lola respondet in a tone of anger. " No Lola that's not how it is, i did just have to set prioritize here and at the moment you are the one who is needing the food the least. You got to believe me! " Vincent said as he was trying to calm down the angry Lola. " Just stop it Vincent, i don't wanna hear it. I would prefer you would just leave me alone for the rest of the day. I will take a little walk, that always helps me clearing out my mind. " Lola angily respondet as she was wandering of on her own.
Yeah A New Group sounds kinda weird no offense.
No Problem! I like it and it goes fairly well to the story(I even edited my post and put th… moree chapter name there)
Maxbear could you do the same and put in bolded text the episode one name? Me and The Walking Mustache agreed that "A New Threat" would be pretty good. If you or anyone else disagrees or have an opinion for another name don't be afraid to suggest!
I agree we should name the episode as the story develops I was just giving ideas .
wait wut? I thought we were doing a fan-fic? Ok, this shall be ignored, I mean really, sorry if you misunderstood but....this is 1 group fan-fic dude. Nto a bunch of little ones. Please don't post more, but please do add to the story!
"Tavia doesn't need this.." Vince says and walks over to a bridge and throws the loaf of bread down. "Wait don't feed the trolls!" Kenny yells from behind him. But it was too late... the trolls were fed. DUN DUN DUNNNNNN
I know it's been 5 pages, I do but.... to encourage more people to join....
SUMMARY TIME
Ok, we have lots to cover, because we've gone c… morerazy with this....
Episode 1: A New Threat
Russel is talking to Bonnie about his fear that his family is dead, and how he'd be happier not knowing whether or not they're alive.
Russel gets out of Tavia's car, and vomits, an flees.
Vince and Bonnie chase him, saving him from a walker.
Tavia, Shel, Becca and Wyatt drive away.
Vince and crew find a girl named Lily, who lies about seeing their friends, and they still let her tag along.
.
They find the river, and the woods, and Tavia's crashed car
They find Wyatt, and Kenny, an old survivor from Lily's group, who hates her, and they ditch Lily because of this.
Lily murders Bonnie. Her explaination: She was working for the villain, Carver, for drugs, to spy on them. Apparently.
The group goes through the woods, into a town, where th… [view original content]
That's a very good question...as we got introduced to Kenny the first time, he told the group that Wyatt and him (and i assume the others aswell since i was the one writing this), did have to go because there was a dangerous group chasing after him and they desiderate to kill him and everyone who crosses his way...after that happened the group got introduced to Carver and his group and we kinda lost track of this part of the story. We should probaply get back to this part at some point to clear things out.
I also just saw that in the next commend (writen by maxbear29) he mentioned Tavia geting chased by someone...so that's gotta be someone of the group Kenny was talking about...looks like they just lost the track of them after Carver saved the group when they where getting attacked by Walkers.
When i did write the commend about Kenny getting chased i was thinking about Roman's group ( we still don't know what happened to the cancer patients and the boat yet...maybe Kenny was trying to get back the boat? Spoiler Alert!), it would have also brought a nice touch to the story, because Becca and Shel where part of this group before and they were fearing that Roman was still chasing after them. (to bad that they are both dead already now:)
So there's another evil group out there? And yes we should see that scene maybe for a flashback with Wyatt. And which comment are you talking about that maxbear posted?
That's a very good question...as we got introduced to Kenny the first time, he told the group that Wyatt and him (and i assume the others aswe… morell since i was the one writing this), did have to go because there was a dangerous group chasing after him and they desiderate to kill him and everyone who crosses his way...after that happened the group got introduced to Carver and his group and we kinda lost track of this part of the story. We should probaply get back to this part at some point to clear things out.
I also just saw that in the next commend (writen by maxbear29) he mentioned Tavia geting chased by someone...so that's gotta be someone of the group Kenny was talking about...looks like they just lost the track of them after Carver saved the group when they where getting attacked by Walkers.
When i did write the commend about Kenny getting chased i was thinking about Roman's group ( we still don't know what happened to the cancer patients… [view original content]
"Wait, Wyatt.....Where's Shel? And Becca? And Tavia?" Bonnie asked, stepping inside. "We split up, unintentionally. Becca ran off into the woods, and Shel went after her. Tavia got chased, she's somewhere down the stream now." Wyatt replied. "I found Wyatt almost dead, beggin' for help. I knew he wasn't dangerous, so I took him inside and- You again bitch! You guys trusted her?! Did she mention she SHOT a girl in our group on a HUNCH!" Kenny yelled pointing at Lily. "Nice to see you again too, Ken." "Oh, no. If you're traveling with this......Whore, you ain't staying with me." "Fine. C'mon, Vince, Bonnie, Russel, let's go find your other friends."
Is what he wrote...i maybe just didn't understand it correctly and she got chased by a Walker? That would also make sense.
So there's another evil group out there? And yes we should see that scene maybe for a flashback with Wyatt. And which comment are you talking about that maxbear posted?
That still doesn't answer why Tavia drove away. I'm really confused. So Russel Vince and Bonnie are in the woods. Wyatt, Shel, Becca, and Tavia drive away(but why!?). Bonnie, Russel, and Vince find the car in a wreck for some odd reason and find Wyatt with Kenny. Shel is chasing after Becca, and Tavia was "chased" (by what!?). Anyway would it be okay tommorow if I posted something to clear this up?
"Wait, Wyatt.....Where's Shel? And Becca? And Tavia?" Bonnie asked, stepping inside. "We split up, unintentionally. Becca ran off into the woo… moreds, and Shel went after her. Tavia got chased, she's somewhere down the stream now." Wyatt replied. "I found Wyatt almost dead, beggin' for help. I knew he wasn't dangerous, so I took him inside and- You again bitch! You guys trusted her?! Did she mention she SHOT a girl in our group on a HUNCH!" Kenny yelled pointing at Lily. "Nice to see you again too, Ken." "Oh, no. If you're traveling with this......Whore, you ain't staying with me." "Fine. C'mon, Vince, Bonnie, Russel, let's go find your other friends."
Is what he wrote...i maybe just didn't understand it correctly and she got chased by a Walker? That would also make sense.
As far as i'm concerned i think Kenny was running into them, while Vincent and Bonnie where chasing after Russel. He probaply told them that the group that was chasing after him is coming closer or something like that and that they have to leave immediatelly. I can't explain why the car was such a wreck when they found it though...maybe Tavia just panicked and crashed into something?
That's the best explanation i can come up with at the moment.
That still doesn't answer why Tavia drove away. I'm really confused. So Russel Vince and Bonnie are in the woods. Wyatt, Shel, Becca, and Tavi… morea drive away(but why!?). Bonnie, Russel, and Vince find the car in a wreck for some odd reason and find Wyatt with Kenny. Shel is chasing after Becca, and Tavia was "chased" (by what!?). Anyway would it be okay tommorow if I posted something to clear this up?
Okay, my plot holes need to be filled. I do indeed have answers!! Tavia was chased downstream by walkers. I just forgot to say that. And they drove away because they got swarmed by walkers, and they were afraid if they didn't, the walkers would get into the car and....y'know. Hope this helped.
As far as i'm concerned i think Kenny was running into them, while Vincent and Bonnie where chasing after Russel. He probaply told them that t… morehe group that was chasing after him is coming closer or something like that and that they have to leave immediatelly. I can't explain why the car was such a wreck when they found it though...maybe Tavia just panicked and crashed into something?
That's the best explanation i can come up with at the moment.
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That was awesome writing! The story is getting good!
Russel's heart felt like it was beating out of his chest. He couldn't lose Kenny, just like they lost Shel, Bonnie and Becca. Too many innocent people had died, they couldn't lose another. "It doesn't have to be like this" Vince pleaded. "You made your choice" Betty spat. "Now you will know what it feels like for one of your own to get kille-"
Betty's head exploded. Tavia screamed and a look of shock and desperation was etched onto Carver's face. He looked to Wyatt, Russel and Vince but they weren't the culprit. He turned to Lola who was crying and still had her gun pointed to were Betty once was. Lola turned to Vince and the others and screamed.
"SHOOT!!!!"
If you look at the dead body at the river in episode 1 season 2 with the black coat that is carter the man that made you kill that woman in 400 days he's wearing the same coat
Yes you are right about that, but his name was Roman and not Carter
. Carver is the (Antagonosist) Clem will have to face in Season2. He was mentioned a couple of times by the Cabin group during the events of episode1.
Carver knew he couldn't kill all of them at once, so he did run to the woods as fast as he could, releasing one last bullet before he was out of sight. Vince and Russel did their best to aim for the running Carver, but unfortunatelly all their shots seemed to miss their target. "It´s finally over. Atleast all of us made it out alive. The next thing we need to do is..." Vincent got interrupted from a scream of pain coming from Russels direction. " What happened? Russel no!" Wyatt was shouting as Russel was slowly falling to the ground. " He got shot, we need to stop the bleeding! " Vince respondet in frustration. " I am so sorry, i didn't know that you were the group Jared was talking about, i swear i didn't know it" Tavia screamed in a tone of anger and fearness. " He's gonna be alright man, he's got to be right? Wyatt asked Vince in a tone of anger and disbelieve. " Tavia you know this people? How could you ever do this to them? I thought you were different then all the other psychos out there. " Lola angrilly said. " What the fuck happened? Is Russel gonna be alright? I'l...I'l be..." Kenny said before the heavy pain he felt did make him pass out once more.
I'm glad you think so! And welcome to the fan fic! Thank you for joining
we need more people even though the story is getting long.
"Maybe Carver had some medical supplies in the house?" Vince suggested. So Vince and Wyatt lifted Russel and walked over to the building with Tavia and Lola hauling Kenny with a betrayed look on their faces. Russel and Kenny were set down and Wyatt searched for any medical supplies finding some bandages and stitching equipment. They all worked together to clean and close the wound hoping that these two might live. After they were done Vince got up "I'm going after Carver. But somebody has to watch Russel and Kenny so I'll bring one of you while two of you stay here." "I will stay." Tavia said with some doubt in her voice "I have done enough already.". Wyatt and Lola were begging to come with Vince. They both wanted revenge on Carver for the horrible things he did."Come on man I'm your friend we need to get back at him for Kenny and Russel" Wyatt pleaded. "He lied to me I want him to know that it was a mistake crossing me." Lola said. Vince didn't think it mattered who he brought but to them it meant a lot.
**Choice A: Vince brings Wyatt
**Choice B: Vince brings Lola****
Choice A: Sorry Lola. Wyatt's my friend through all of this, and I know you want to go, but......I'm sorry, just please watch our friend. "Ok...... I understand. I was part of their group, you don't trust me yet......" Lola said sadly, as she leaned over to help Kenny. Into the woods they went, as Vince lead, and Wyatt followed. As they exited, Carver was seen, far away, pinned to the ground by a walker. They caught up, as Carver broke free, and tried to run. At the same time a walker grabbed Wyatt, and he dropped his weapon. 1. Bullet. Left. No time to do both.......
Choice A: Save Wyatt.
Choice B: Kill Carver
Well this choice is kinda easy considering the fact that we know already that Carver will be alive in season2.
I still like the idea behind it! Well written!
Yeah, I know Carver is alive in season 2. I already have another antagonist in mind already! I have a name, character, and motivation in mind. I am just waiting for my chance to throw him in there....
Hey I'm just happy the name I gave was someone from the game there were so may other one that weren't LOL
I know it's been 5 pages, I do but.... to encourage more people to join....
SUMMARY TIME
Ok, we have lots to cover, because we've gone crazy with this....
Episode 1: A New Threat
Russel is talking to Bonnie about his fear that his family is dead, and how he'd be happier not knowing whether or not they're alive.
Russel gets out of Tavia's car, and vomits, an flees.
Vince and Bonnie chase him, saving him from a walker.
Tavia, Shel, Becca and Wyatt drive away.
Vince and crew find a girl named Lily, who lies about seeing their friends, and they still let her tag along.
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They find the river, and the woods, and Tavia's crashed car
They find Wyatt, and Kenny, an old survivor from Lily's group, who hates her, and they ditch Lily because of this.
Lily murders Bonnie. Her explaination: She was working for the villain, Carver, for drugs, to spy on them. Apparently.
The group goes through the woods, into a town, where they meet Jared, and his group
They find out Jared is called Carver, and that he'll help them find the other members of their group, Arnie, Betty, and Steven in the morning.
While everyone's sleeping, everyone except Vince leaves to search to their own.
Vince escapes to help them search for the group.
They find Lily, who explains, and rejoins them, and Becca, who reveals Carver assaulted her and Shel, killing Shel, and leaving her near death.
Becca gets attacked by Arnie, and Becca stabs him, killing him.
Lily and Kenny both get attacked. Lily by walkers, and Kenny by Steven. Russel saves Kenny, as Steven dies, and Lily dies too.
Grief-stricken, Russel runs off and tries to commit suicide, and Wyatt saves him.
The others run off, and find a wall of car crash, which they take sharp metal scraps from, fighting off a pursuing horde of walkers.
Wyatt and Russel catch up.
They find a bar in the city past the wall of cars, and stay there.
They find out Becca is bitten, and only Kenny is wiling to kill her.
Kenny knocks Vince out, out of rage.
Becca flees, and Russel and Wyatt search for her.
Tavia finds and joins Carver's group, unaware he wants to kill her old group.
A girl named Lola joins Carver's group.
Becca is found walking dead (lol), and Russel kills her.
Carver's and the main group have a face-off.
Kenny is found near death, because of Carver's torture
Lola kills Betty.
Tavia joins the main group.
Carver flees, and shoots Russel.
Vince and Wyatt go to kill Carver.
Thank you very much for doing a summary of the event's that already happened. I was thinking about doing one myself but i am just to lazy:D Before i started reading this i was thinking about Lee's voice in my head saying " previously on the Walking Dead "
You are all doing a good work here so let's keep going!
Choice A: Save Wyatt:
Vincent didn't waste a second to make his decision. He shot the last bullet he had right though the Walkers brain that was grabbing Wyatt. During the time this events happened, Carver was able to free himself of the Walker and get away safely. " Don't stop now Vince, we have to go after him. It's to dangerous to let him get away! " Wyatt said in a hurry as we was running after the fleeing Carver. " Wyatt don't, i have no more bullets left and Carver still has his gun. We can't take the risk and keep following like this. " Vincent respondet. Wyatt stoped running and turned around looking deep into Vincent's eyes. " Well we can't just let him run of either. What if he comes back another day and trys to kill us while we are sleeping? " Wyatt said in a boiling rage. " Look Wyatt man, you need to calm down now. I know what this man did was terrible and there is no excuse for that. But what good are we doing the group if we chase after him without any way to defend ourselfes and get killed by this monster eventually. " Vincent said as he was trying to calm down the raging Wyatt. " But we can't...we have to... i gues you'r right Vince, you are always right. That's why we voted for you beeing the Leader of our group back then. " Wyatt said as he was slowly calming down. " You don't have to worry about it Wyatt. We are more people and we have more shoting power. We will keep up guards every day and night to make sure this fucker isn't gonna be able to do us any harme anymore. " Vincent said with a strong determination in his words. " I know man...aslong as we take care of each other we gonna be alright. I just wish you would have killed this guy when you had the chance instead of saving my life. " Wyatt sadly respondet. " Wyatt i know u don't mean that. The man i know, my best friend on the whole world would never say something like this. The man i know made me remember back then that sparing someones life is always the right thing to do. If i would choose killing a dangerous man over safing my best friend's life, i would be nothing better than the man i was trying to kill. " Vincent said and Wyatt and Vincent happily smiled in each others faces.
Yeah awesome choice
. And we don't have to follow the main story right? So you can kill Carver even if hes supposed to show up in season 2.
Well yes i think we can. But anyway, Vince would never choose to kill an enemy instead of saving a good friends life.
Good job with the summary! Thanks to all who have contributed so far and I hope more people will join at this point!
Yeah I know
. Just wondering.
Episode 2 Starved For Vengeance
After the escape of Carver the group lived a little more happier but it seemed their spirits could never be lifted after all the loss and pain they all encountered. Kenny had recovered from his torture but he now walked with a limp in his left leg from the bullet that was shot days before. Russel however had been in bed for days his breathing very raspy but his heart was still beating. Tavia felt guilty and felt responsible for Russel and Kenny and cared for them but stopped talking to the others. Vince was mostly outside on watch on top of the bar and Lola and Wyatt scavenged all the small towns they had come across including Jared's hideout. Wyatt suggested inspections like Shel and Becca did and Vince agreed also deciding they should roll cars around their general area to keep out walkers.
All their supplies lay on the bar tables side by side. Four guns six bullets in each. Six long sharpened knives. Three flashlights. Two bags, one filled with medicine the other with food. One backpack with Russel's name on it. They had searched for food everywhere they could but they were running out. Vince frowned and looked inside the food bag shaking his head "We only have enough food to last us seven more days." "Damnit.. We gotta move. Me and my friend Lee we had to leave our place because there was no food and now I'm in the same damn situation. I'm getting sick of this shit!" Kenny says angrily and walks out the bar door. "We need to keep trying and Russel's still hasn't recovered yet." Lola says "I agree with Kenny there's no food left we have to go. Remember Tavia's camp. They have everything including food! I say we go there" Wyatt said. Tavia said nothing as usual. "Me and Lola want to stay. And you and Kenny want to go. Tavia won't say a word so I say we wait for Russel to wake up and then we vote." Vince said. They decided to wait for Russel but the next day Vince decided to give food to only people who needed the food to keep their food stocks up until Russel recovered. Vince frowned. Some people will miss a meal but it had to be done. He put his hands in the food bag and pulled out a piece of steak, an egg, and a loaf of bread. Vince walked outside and looked at all the group members. Kenny was on watch a angry look on his face, Wyatt and Lola were standing by a broken house probably trying to convince the other to leave or stay, and Tavia sat on the bench across the street from the bar staring into the nothingness in the ground. This is going to be harder than I thought Vince said to himself.
Sorry that I kind of copyed! I loved the feeding part in episode 2 and just needed to add that in here to see who you would choose!
Don´t worry about it man! I love the way how you keep bringing back some of the scenes from Season1 ( Like the scene where Kenny found a bottle of Whisky in the bar:). That brings back some good memorys!
It also kinda feels like to me we are done with our first episode here. ( i know this story doesn't need to end but why not keep up the Telltale spirit right?:). And with the food scene a whole new episode has begun!
Episode 1: A new group ( instead of A new day)
Episode 2: Starved for vengeance ( instead of Starved for help)
Thanks! Yes I guess our first episode is basically done. Here are my ideas for episode names.
Episode 1: A New Threat (Carver introduced)
Episode 2: Starved For Vengeance (Loved that one The Walking Mustache! Good thinking.)
Episode 3: A Home Far Ahead(spoil too much maybe? Its just my opinion but they got to get there at some point
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Episode 4: Behind Every Shadow (something dark is revealed?)
Episode 5: A Final Breath ( couldn't think of much for this
ah well)
Hope you liked my ideas!
I agree..." A New Threat " is a better idea then " A new group "... we should keep that name.
Thanks! Starved for Vengeance rly has a nice ring to it:D
For other upcoming Episodes i would suggest we just see how the story keeps developing and decide which name we wanna give it then!
Yeah A New Group sounds kinda weird no offense.
No Problem! I like it and it goes fairly well to the story(I even edited my post and put the chapter name there)
Maxbear could you do the same and put in bolded text the episode one name? Me and The Walking Mustache agreed that "A New Threat" would be pretty good. If you or anyone else disagrees or have an opinion for another name don't be afraid to suggest!
I agree we should name the episode as the story develops I was just giving ideas
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Walking dead 401 days. Enter Vince. Vince: hey did you guys ever see a picture of my brother? He is the reason I went to jail he overdosed on drugs and I killed the dealer. Every one looks at picture Wyatt,Russel,Shell.... then Bonnie..
Bonnie suddenly faints. Bonnie has a dark secret that we all know about. Bonnie was a junkie. Something every one doesn't know is that Bonnie is the reason Vince's brother is dead.
Enter Shell into Bonnies tent. Shell: Bonnie are you ok? Bonnie: do you remember when we were talking the one day about our past? Shell: ya I do.
Bonnie: well...remember how I told you I stole another junkies fix and injected air into his heart? Shell: (very serious stunned face) ya.... are you saying.... VINCE'S BROTHER! Bonnie: nods.
PART 2 COMMING SOON BASED ON LIKES.
wait wut? I thought we were doing a fan-fic? Ok, this shall be ignored, I mean really, sorry if you misunderstood but....this is 1 group fan-fic dude. Nto a bunch of little ones. Please don't post more, but please do add to the story!
Yes i know, i liked the ideas but maybe they won´t fit the story anymore if we we finally get this far...speaking of which, let's go on then shall we?
The first candidate on Vincent's list was Kenny. " The man must have been going though hell lately, geting abused by this sick man. I can't even immagine what kind of torture technics Carver did use on him. " Vincent said to himself as he was walking towards the noticable angry Kenny. " Hey Ken, how you holding up? I thought you could use something to eat. " Vincent said as he was handing out the fresh piece of steak to Kenny. " Oh Jackpot, today gotta be my birthday! I was afraid i would have to nourish on tuna for the rest of my life. " Kenny said as his condition was noticable getting better. " Haha, i'm afraid that's an offer i can only make you for today. Enjoy it Ken, you deserve it. " Vincent happily respondet. " Now to the next one. " Vincent said as he was heading towards Wyatt. " Here Wyatt, you need to keep your strength up. " Vincent said as he was trying to hand over the egg to Wyatt. " Wow thank's Vince. I'm starving! But actualy...why don't you take my ration for today? You had to make alot of hard decisions lately and i know its not that easy for you. " Wyatt said as he was giving Vincent back the boiled egg. " Thank you Wyatt, you are a true friend. That should make my next decisions easyer. " Vincent respondet with a big smile on his face. He was taking a long look at the deliciously looking boiled egg before he came to a decision. " Alot of this peole have been going for even more shit then i did. They are the once who should get the food." Vincent thought as he was looking at Lola and Tavia. " This whole situation must be very stressful for Tavia, she should be the one that becomes the next ration of food. " Vincent said to himself as he was heading towards Tavia. " Hello Tavia, it's a nice day today isn't it? Are you hungry? I got some food here for you if you would like to have it. " Vincent said as he was holding a big fresh baken loaf of bread in his hand. " I...i don't deserve this. I am the reason all of this happened. I am the reason that so many of your friends have died. I am garbage. " Tavia respondet before she was starting to cry out loudly. " There there, i am here for you Tavia. You have to forgive yourself for what happened to our friends. I don't blame you, it's not your fault. I blame this fucking monster, he is responsible for all of this. Even i couldn't see though his evil facade at first. Tavia listen to me, i want you to have this. Please accept the food that i offered you. " Vincent said as he was gently patting on Tavia's back. Tavia silently toke the loaf of bread, but Vincent was sure that he could get a glimpse of Tavia having a smile on her face. " Only one left to go." Vincent said as he was slowly heading towards Lola. " Oh shit, i forgot about Russel, he will need somethng fresh and warm to eat when he wakes up. " Vincent said slightly feeling ashamed of himself. " I gues it's time for the bad news now. " Vincent sighted as he was going to tell Lola there was no food left for her. " Lola i am sorry, but we are out of rations for today. I'm afraid there is no food left for you. " Vincent said worrying about the upcoming consequences. " Excellent, that's just like i supposed things would gonna get to happen. I am the new face here in the group and you people still don't trust me yet." Lola respondet in a tone of anger. " No Lola that's not how it is, i did just have to set prioritize here and at the moment you are the one who is needing the food the least. You got to believe me! " Vincent said as he was trying to calm down the angry Lola. " Just stop it Vincent, i don't wanna hear it. I would prefer you would just leave me alone for the rest of the day. I will take a little walk, that always helps me clearing out my mind. " Lola angily respondet as she was wandering of on her own.
I was confused as well but I think hes trolling -_-
Don't feed the troll's! For those of you who followed this thread lately, they will know what i am talking about!:D
"Tavia doesn't need this.." Vince says and walks over to a bridge and throws the loaf of bread down. "Wait don't feed the trolls!" Kenny yells from behind him. But it was too late... the trolls were fed. DUN DUN DUNNNNNN
This is the best thing that's ever happened.
Why did Tavia, Wyatt, Shel, and Becca drive away anyway?
That's a very good question...as we got introduced to Kenny the first time, he told the group that Wyatt and him (and i assume the others aswell since i was the one writing this), did have to go because there was a dangerous group chasing after him and they desiderate to kill him and everyone who crosses his way...after that happened the group got introduced to Carver and his group and we kinda lost track of this part of the story. We should probaply get back to this part at some point to clear things out.
I also just saw that in the next commend (writen by maxbear29) he mentioned Tavia geting chased by someone...so that's gotta be someone of the group Kenny was talking about...looks like they just lost the track of them after Carver saved the group when they where getting attacked by Walkers.
When i did write the commend about Kenny getting chased i was thinking about Roman's group ( we still don't know what happened to the cancer patients and the boat yet...maybe Kenny was trying to get back the boat? Spoiler Alert!), it would have also brought a nice touch to the story, because Becca and Shel where part of this group before and they were fearing that Roman was still chasing after them. (to bad that they are both dead already now:)
What is?
So there's another evil group out there? And yes we should see that scene maybe for a flashback with Wyatt. And which comment are you talking about that maxbear posted?
"Wait, Wyatt.....Where's Shel? And Becca? And Tavia?" Bonnie asked, stepping inside. "We split up, unintentionally. Becca ran off into the woods, and Shel went after her. Tavia got chased, she's somewhere down the stream now." Wyatt replied. "I found Wyatt almost dead, beggin' for help. I knew he wasn't dangerous, so I took him inside and- You again bitch! You guys trusted her?! Did she mention she SHOT a girl in our group on a HUNCH!" Kenny yelled pointing at Lily. "Nice to see you again too, Ken." "Oh, no. If you're traveling with this......Whore, you ain't staying with me." "Fine. C'mon, Vince, Bonnie, Russel, let's go find your other friends."
Is what he wrote...i maybe just didn't understand it correctly and she got chased by a Walker? That would also make sense.
Ignore this comment, it was a mistake XD
Err ok lol that didn't make any sense. But Okay then!
That still doesn't answer why Tavia drove away. I'm really confused. So Russel Vince and Bonnie are in the woods. Wyatt, Shel, Becca, and Tavia drive away(but why!?). Bonnie, Russel, and Vince find the car in a wreck for some odd reason and find Wyatt with Kenny. Shel is chasing after Becca, and Tavia was "chased" (by what!?). Anyway would it be okay tommorow if I posted something to clear this up?
As far as i'm concerned i think Kenny was running into them, while Vincent and Bonnie where chasing after Russel. He probaply told them that the group that was chasing after him is coming closer or something like that and that they have to leave immediatelly. I can't explain why the car was such a wreck when they found it though...maybe Tavia just panicked and crashed into something?
That's the best explanation i can come up with at the moment.
Okay, my plot holes need to be filled. I do indeed have answers!! Tavia was chased downstream by walkers. I just forgot to say that. And they drove away because they got swarmed by walkers, and they were afraid if they didn't, the walkers would get into the car and....y'know. Hope this helped.
It was supposed to be a reply to the feed the trolls thing, but I messed it up.