For what it's worth, I think the solution would be to edit Randomz89101's 'Back in the woods' post so that Frank does not recognise Kirkmin by removing the last line of the fourth paragraph. In the fifth, sixth and final paragraph replace Steve with Kirkmin and everything still flows logically.
I know it's a bit much asking someone to edit their post but I really think Steve and Kirkmin have shown themselves to be quite different. Steve is slightly deranged and quick to be enraged whereas Kirkmin has been a logical villain. Killing the cat can show his callous side but he's really just a strict, authoritarian survivalist. I think re-introducing Frank is a great idea as it was a bit of a loose end and the rest of the post is really good. However, I don't think Steve and Kirkmin are the same person. This is the last I will say on the matter as we need to discuss the end of the episode and complete the summaries so if others disagree we can still go on from here as it is certainly not a disaster.
Okay last night I was on mobile, and I thought i posted something. Apparently not, so apologizes for that.
Do you guys want me to edit it? … moreIt's completely up to you guys what you want me to do. And sorry about not being on lately, a lot is going on in my family right now.
I've just seen that you said something about publishing. That wasn't my intention. I was rather thinking about mailing that ebook as a gift to all contributors. No sales.
Okay last night I was on mobile, and I thought i posted something. Apparently not, so apologizes for that.
Do you guys want me to edit it? … moreIt's completely up to you guys what you want me to do. And sorry about not being on lately, a lot is going on in my family right now.
That would be cool! even if it was breif. for instance they could go to a large settlement (Tavias community anyone) and they could just be a group of people in the background like Charlie,Pascucci,Tyler,Jacob,Jessica,Melody,Gus,Jermey and Bryan (Thought those where the most inportant)
Guys, I was just daydreaming about Telltale choosing one of our original characters to have a cameo in a TWD game! Wouldn't that be awesome? I… moret came to my mind while reading through the summaries. If it really were a game it would be so much fun. Sigh
Glad you're taking the time to edit your post. I sincerely hope that your family and you will get through whatever it is you are struggling with very soon.
Glad you're taking the time to edit your post. I sincerely hope that your family and you will get through whatever it is you are struggling with very soon.
Request: Although the story is hotting up, great job everyone who's contributed, can we have a small break to get the summary completed and di… morescuss a few things? Earlier in the thread someone wrote the end of the episode should be collaborative and we're nearing the end of the episode so we should talk about it.
I'm not suggesting we do any pre-planning but some ground rules for the end of the episode could be discussed as we need to get this right.
Guys, I was just daydreaming about Telltale choosing one of our original characters to have a cameo in a TWD game! Wouldn't that be awesome? I… moret came to my mind while reading through the summaries. If it really were a game it would be so much fun. Sigh
The settlement? Maybe leave it somewhat a mystery, but it still being most likely, just like Tavia's settlement, a failure.
Bryan and Clementine.
Frank will most likely play a big role by the end of One Last Breath, he'll most likely be one of the few characters left, and i think that he'll either help or have a negative effect on the group.
I'm in bed already, though to urge on disscussing the finale:
1) What do you think should happen to the settlement?
2) Who is your favorit… moree character?
3) What part will Frank play in all this?
4) Offtopic: Who caused the fire in the cabin and why?
You don't have to answer them but sometimes questions like those help to trigger some ideas.
Making an E-Book when the season is finished
What Do you think about it? I am a graphic designer and very interested in designing a real b… moreook for print and web including cover art, impress and everything. It came to my mind while thinking of my uncle. He is a sales agent for a polish book printery. They make very good and affordable books, though international shipping might cost a little. That's why the idea with the E-Book came up. We can of course make both.
For this project we need someone good with the english language, who can polish the whole text and correct bad grammar since me and some other contributors aren't raised with english language.
So?
Okay, so we have several things and ideas´and I'd like to go through them all. Please comment below this post if you wish to add any more that I've forgotten or that you've personally came up with just now .
The Last Breath | Idea by: @HSPLazerz (me): Basically the ending of One Last Breath, and my idea that i posted like, 10 pages back, about us all collaborating in making the Finale of this Season. I'd wish we all have a more simple way of contacting each other and discussing about this, if this is something ya'll wanna do. Comment down below about any ways you'd like to contact each other, whether that'd be Kik (please, no) or Teamspeak (the servers can be real hard to connect to, and i'm sure we all live in completely different places on this planet, like me in Sweden, so, nah...). My personal picks would most likely be Skype, as it is simple yet great for groups etc.
The Walking E-Book | Idea by @TheMissus: I think the title speaks for itself, basically a book of this Entire Story. Just several side notes that she herself mentioned was simply polishing every single post, especially the first Episode's posts. I think personally that this is a great idea. This would be gifted to every single contributor (well, every single one who has an e-mail, i'd suppose ;P), and possibly others who might want it as well. CHARGE THE-, nah, nevermind... or? Once again, this is an E-Book, people with worries about publisher deals or whatever, i don't know much about books and how they're published (lul), but all i have to say, is Emphasis on E. This can be done once we're finished with this Finale Episode.
Unknown Title: The Game | Idea by @HSPLazerz (once again, me): I came up with this idea also around 10 pages ago. This is pretty self explanatory, a game, yes, an entire game, based on this Story of ours. Obviously, this would take a lot of time and we would need a things that are most likely almost not possible, but it's worth a try. What i'm personally gonna need is the hardware, software, skills, and a team, in which would most likely take till summer to get the very much so basics out of the way. Oh, and yeah, voice acting...
Summaries i think we got pretty much taken care of, but we can do them once this Episode has finished.
The Continuation of Lilly: Back in the Episode 3 days, or 4, fuck my memory... anyways, we made a "DLC", like 400 Days, but what we did was explain the plane crash, and how it involved Lilly, ZAMGZ!!! Well obviously it ended up with her SPOILER ALERT meeting the farm group, and then firing a bullet at Jacob, well, indirectly. Thought it'd be cool if we could continue upon this, whether or not this would be like a spin off or just one post, is up to all of you, but still, it'd be nice to see where it all went.
And also, for Season 3 (in my opinion, the next season is the third considering how this current Season followed upon Season 1), we should definitely have the Farm Group in it, just sayin'.
Now, bring all your opinions/extensions down in the comments! .
Video game: Like you said, this would be very difficult. But if it somehow one day, becomes a thing, that would be awesome. (I'm an actor in real life, so i would be hired for voice actor. :P)
The continuation of Lily: Cool.
The 400 days like scenario (My idea) Not sure if you saw my post a while back, but I wrote this idea. Basically we could show for example, Charlie and his brother before he found our group.
And also, (Preparing for hate) I really did not like the farm group. I just didn't find it as interesting as the others.
Video Game: We'd have to be fucking rich. We'd have to try and strike a deal with Telltale to include Clem, Christa, Omid, Kenny, Lily and whatever season 1 characters I missed.
Book: I'm pretty sure we'd have to strike a deal with telltale about the characters.
I agree with all the others. So, I might write so we can continue the story, but that's only a might, so if you wanna right do so please.
The last breath: I agree.
The walking E-Book: Hell yeah!
Video game: Like you said, this would be very difficult. But if it somehow one … moreday, becomes a thing, that would be awesome. (I'm an actor in real life, so i would be hired for voice actor. :P)
The continuation of Lily: Cool.
The 400 days like scenario (My idea) Not sure if you saw my post a while back, but I wrote this idea. Basically we could show for example, Charlie and his brother before he found our group.
And also, (Preparing for hate) I really did not like the farm group. I just didn't find it as interesting as the others.
Video Game: We'd have to be fucking rich. We'd have to try and strike a deal with Telltale to include Clem, Christa, Omid, Kenny, Lily and wha… moretever season 1 characters I missed.
Book: I'm pretty sure we'd have to strike a deal with telltale about the characters.
I agree with all the others. So, I might write so we can continue the story, but that's only a might, so if you wanna right do so please.
I was mostly just thinking that the farm group should only be possibly visited in Season 3 by Clem or only be shown in Lilly's little DLC. NOT be the main protagonists of Season 3, agree upon that they are pretty damn uninteresting, especially compared to Clem's group.
I actually came up with an idea on your post about the 400 Days-like thing :P. I love this idea, would be interesting to see the origins of Charlie and Bryan .
The last breath: I agree.
The walking E-Book: Hell yeah!
Video game: Like you said, this would be very difficult. But if it somehow one … moreday, becomes a thing, that would be awesome. (I'm an actor in real life, so i would be hired for voice actor. :P)
The continuation of Lily: Cool.
The 400 days like scenario (My idea) Not sure if you saw my post a while back, but I wrote this idea. Basically we could show for example, Charlie and his brother before he found our group.
And also, (Preparing for hate) I really did not like the farm group. I just didn't find it as interesting as the others.
I was mostly just thinking that the farm group should only be possibly visited in Season 3 by Clem or only be shown in Lilly's little DLC. NOT… more be the main protagonists of Season 3, agree upon that they are pretty damn uninteresting, especially compared to Clem's group.
I actually came up with an idea on your post about the 400 Days-like thing :P. I love this idea, would be interesting to see the origins of Charlie and Bryan .
Well one of the things we were debating on was, discussing on how we're all going to end the season. Like somebody else said, (Don't remember who) the story who just keep continuing, and nobody could finish it.
I was mostly just thinking that the farm group should only be possibly visited in Season 3 by Clem or only be shown in Lilly's little DLC. NOT… more be the main protagonists of Season 3, agree upon that they are pretty damn uninteresting, especially compared to Clem's group.
I actually came up with an idea on your post about the 400 Days-like thing :P. I love this idea, would be interesting to see the origins of Charlie and Bryan .
We shouldn't just "end it" so that we can get on with it and finish it, we should still make it the best we can.
What you're saying right now is the same as Battlefield 4, it was broken the time it came out, because EA wanted the cash as fast as possible and pushed it out, whilst DICE wanted to make it as great as possible and needed just a bit more time.
Also, remember my idea of the collaboration? Most people liked it, so i think we should do it. Now, nobody has responded yet about how we're gonna communicate, i still stand for Skype here.
I agree with everything, though I don't have Skype or other messengers. Besides, I'm good with writing and reading the english language - fluently speaking or understanding, especially many different accents, on the other hand... tricky. Chatting is not a problem, though. Time difference might be a problem.
We shouldn't just "end it" so that we can get on with it and finish it, we should still make it the best we can.
What you're saying right n… moreow is the same as Battlefield 4, it was broken the time it came out, because EA wanted the cash as fast as possible and pushed it out, whilst DICE wanted to make it as great as possible and needed just a bit more time.
Also, remember my idea of the collaboration? Most people liked it, so i think we should do it. Now, nobody has responded yet about how we're gonna communicate, i still stand for Skype here.
I 100% disagree with the communication thing on Skype, it should be somewhere we can just chat so nobody has to worry about getting a microphone or whatever. If we go on skype, create a conversation and just chat then I'm down but if we're in a call then I'm not joining :P
I agree with everything, though I don't have Skype or other messengers. Besides, I'm good with writing and reading the english language - flue… morently speaking or understanding, especially many different accents, on the other hand... tricky. Chatting is not a problem, though. Time difference might be a problem.
I 100% disagree with the communication thing on Skype, it should be somewhere we can just chat so nobody has to worry about getting a micropho… morene or whatever. If we go on skype, create a conversation and just chat then I'm down but if we're in a call then I'm not joining :P
I agree upon the time thing, but again, we'll always have that issue everywhere. We can just chat via text. Others who complain about Skype and how they "don't have a mic" and what not, please make some research before you guys complain. You. Can. Chat. Text wise.
I agree with everything, though I don't have Skype or other messengers. Besides, I'm good with writing and reading the english language - flue… morently speaking or understanding, especially many different accents, on the other hand... tricky. Chatting is not a problem, though. Time difference might be a problem.
I agree upon the time thing, but again, we'll always have that issue everywhere. We can just chat via text. Others who complain about Skype an… mored how they "don't have a mic" and what not, please make some research before you guys complain. You. Can. Chat. Text wise.
Downloading and making a Skype account ain't to tough neither, here.
If you guys don't wanna do it, fine, but i just find it tough communicating on this forum.
I agree upon the time thing, but again, we'll always have that issue everywhere. We can just chat via text. Others who complain about Skype an… mored how they "don't have a mic" and what not, please make some research before you guys complain. You. Can. Chat. Text wise.
Downloading and making a Skype account ain't to tough neither, here.
If you guys don't wanna do it, fine, but i just find it tough communicating on this forum.
Yeah, i know you weren't against it, but i meant for others, sorry x3.
Yeah sure, this weekend works just fine by me, just that i'm not sure we'll be ready with the ending by that time, but we can have some pre-discussions or talk about the other ideas whilst then. I'm a little sick right now, so i'm most likely not gonna speak nor use a camera etc. this week, just gonna type instead, but who knows :P.
Just... god...
No shit we can chat, that's the entire point. Now, if people wanna speak via a mic, go on ahead, if they just wanna chat via text, go on ahead.
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Yes, please :> See what Snufkin said:
I've just seen that you said something about publishing. That wasn't my intention. I was rather thinking about mailing that ebook as a gift to all contributors. No sales.
I really wish this would be solved soon, it's already bedtime for me.
I agree, this needs to be solved soon. I really want to write and just see where the story is going.
That would be cool! even if it was breif. for instance they could go to a large settlement (Tavias community anyone) and they could just be a group of people in the background like Charlie,Pascucci,Tyler,Jacob,Jessica,Melody,Gus,Jermey and Bryan (Thought those where the most inportant)
Alright, I am fed up waiting. Hope this will be solved in th next couple of hours. If not: Well, then we're stuck. Not cool.
Or we make our own decision. Randomz, I'm sorry but I'm straight up voting.
I vote that we ignore the part where Randomz put Frank knew Kirkmin as Steve.
Sorry, my family and I are going through a lot right now. I'm editing right now, you can look at it in a little bit.
Glad you're taking the time to edit your post. I sincerely hope that your family and you will get through whatever it is you are struggling with very soon.
Thank you. I appreciate it a lot.
That would be me who had the idea with the collaboration :P.
Well, i haven't really gotten started with my game idea (you know, a game based on this story). Just busy with school etc.
Maybe around summer, i might just get started. But for now, i wanna make sure i have the hardware, the team, the skills, and so on.
The settlement? Maybe leave it somewhat a mystery, but it still being most likely, just like Tavia's settlement, a failure.
Bryan and Clementine.
Frank will most likely play a big role by the end of One Last Breath, he'll most likely be one of the few characters left, and i think that he'll either help or have a negative effect on the group.
I think it's a great idea when we're finished with this Season!
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I wish you luck with whatever trouble you and your family are going through.
Okay, so we have several things and ideas´and I'd like to go through them all. Please comment below this post if you wish to add any more that I've forgotten or that you've personally came up with just now
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The Last Breath | Idea by: @HSPLazerz (me): Basically the ending of One Last Breath, and my idea that i posted like, 10 pages back, about us all collaborating in making the Finale of this Season. I'd wish we all have a more simple way of contacting each other and discussing about this, if this is something ya'll wanna do. Comment down below about any ways you'd like to contact each other, whether that'd be Kik (please, no) or Teamspeak (the servers can be real hard to connect to, and i'm sure we all live in completely different places on this planet, like me in Sweden, so, nah...). My personal picks would most likely be Skype, as it is simple yet great for groups etc.
The Walking E-Book | Idea by @TheMissus: I think the title speaks for itself, basically a book of this Entire Story. Just several side notes that she herself mentioned was simply polishing every single post, especially the first Episode's posts. I think personally that this is a great idea. This would be gifted to every single contributor (well, every single one who has an e-mail, i'd suppose ;P), and possibly others who might want it as well. CHARGE THE-, nah, nevermind... or? Once again, this is an E-Book, people with worries about publisher deals or whatever, i don't know much about books and how they're published (lul), but all i have to say, is Emphasis on E. This can be done once we're finished with this Finale Episode.
Unknown Title: The Game | Idea by @HSPLazerz (once again, me): I came up with this idea also around 10 pages ago. This is pretty self explanatory, a game, yes, an entire game, based on this Story of ours. Obviously, this would take a lot of time and we would need a things that are most likely almost not possible, but it's worth a try. What i'm personally gonna need is the hardware, software, skills, and a team, in which would most likely take till summer to get the very much so basics out of the way. Oh, and yeah, voice acting...
Summaries i think we got pretty much taken care of, but we can do them once this Episode has finished.
The Continuation of Lilly: Back in the Episode 3 days, or 4, fuck my memory... anyways, we made a "DLC", like 400 Days, but what we did was explain the plane crash, and how it involved Lilly, ZAMGZ!!! Well obviously it ended up with her SPOILER ALERT meeting the farm group, and then firing a bullet at Jacob, well, indirectly. Thought it'd be cool if we could continue upon this, whether or not this would be like a spin off or just one post, is up to all of you, but still, it'd be nice to see where it all went.
And also, for Season 3 (in my opinion, the next season is the third considering how this current Season followed upon Season 1), we should definitely have the Farm Group in it, just sayin'.
Now, bring all your opinions/extensions down in the comments!
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Just like everyone else, i really hope that you get though you and your families struggle.
That's some good story development right there! Keep going!
The last breath: I agree.
The walking E-Book: Hell yeah!
Video game: Like you said, this would be very difficult. But if it somehow one day, becomes a thing, that would be awesome. (I'm an actor in real life, so i would be hired for voice actor. :P)
The continuation of Lily: Cool.
The 400 days like scenario (My idea) Not sure if you saw my post a while back, but I wrote this idea. Basically we could show for example, Charlie and his brother before he found our group.
And also, (Preparing for hate) I really did not like the farm group. I just didn't find it as interesting as the others.
Thank you everybody. I really appreciate it.
Video Game: We'd have to be fucking rich. We'd have to try and strike a deal with Telltale to include Clem, Christa, Omid, Kenny, Lily and whatever season 1 characters I missed.
Book: I'm pretty sure we'd have to strike a deal with telltale about the characters.
I agree with all the others. So, I might write so we can continue the story, but that's only a might, so if you wanna right do so please.
Did you even read it? It's not like we're gonna publish the book officially or charge for the game etc.
I was mostly just thinking that the farm group should only be possibly visited in Season 3 by Clem or only be shown in Lilly's little DLC. NOT be the main protagonists of Season 3, agree upon that they are pretty damn uninteresting, especially compared to Clem's group.
I actually came up with an idea on your post about the 400 Days-like thing :P. I love this idea, would be interesting to see the origins of Charlie and Bryan
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Oh, i'd be fine with just a visit to the farm.
And thanks for liking my idea.
I think maybe somebody should write now so we can just finish the season and then discuss everything.
Well one of the things we were debating on was, discussing on how we're all going to end the season. Like somebody else said, (Don't remember who) the story who just keep continuing, and nobody could finish it.
Oh, I am sorry.
Hope you and your family get well soon.
I would have a very good way of including the farm group in our story. That would be something for season 3 though.
We shouldn't just "end it" so that we can get on with it and finish it, we should still make it the best we can.
What you're saying right now is the same as Battlefield 4, it was broken the time it came out, because EA wanted the cash as fast as possible and pushed it out, whilst DICE wanted to make it as great as possible and needed just a bit more time.
Also, remember my idea of the collaboration? Most people liked it, so i think we should do it. Now, nobody has responded yet about how we're gonna communicate, i still stand for Skype here.
I agree with everything, though I don't have Skype or other messengers. Besides, I'm good with writing and reading the english language - fluently speaking or understanding, especially many different accents, on the other hand... tricky. Chatting is not a problem, though. Time difference might be a problem.
I 100% disagree with the communication thing on Skype, it should be somewhere we can just chat so nobody has to worry about getting a microphone or whatever. If we go on skype, create a conversation and just chat then I'm down but if we're in a call then I'm not joining :P
Yea time might be an issue.
Just... god...
No shit we can chat, that's the entire point. Now, if people wanna speak via a mic, go on ahead, if they just wanna chat via text, go on ahead.
I agree upon the time thing, but again, we'll always have that issue everywhere. We can just chat via text. Others who complain about Skype and how they "don't have a mic" and what not, please make some research before you guys complain. You. Can. Chat. Text wise.
Downloading and making a Skype account ain't to tough neither, here.
If you guys don't wanna do it, fine, but i just find it tough communicating on this forum.
I'm up for it. Just have it on a weekend, I don't sleep during those anyway so I'll be good all day.
Never said that I don't wanna do it, if we can chat then I'm in fact up for it. Camera is not a problem either.
So how about making it this weekend?
Will we be ready to end it by this weekend ?
Yeah, i know you weren't against it, but i meant for others, sorry x3.
Yeah sure, this weekend works just fine by me, just that i'm not sure we'll be ready with the ending by that time, but we can have some pre-discussions or talk about the other ideas whilst then. I'm a little sick right now, so i'm most likely not gonna speak nor use a camera etc. this week, just gonna type instead, but who knows :P.
My Skype Username: williamnumpru.
It's called making things clear. You say Skype, you didn't say "Call" or "just have a chat on text"
Derp.
Thanks.