Yeah. Killing Larry he was trying to protect the group. Leaving the girl was so they could get more supplies. His decisions are not very human but they're living in a inhuman world and they gotta do tough shit. That's what makes him unique as he thinks differently than others might. But if you don't do something he likes he gets very very angry.
You'r welcome!
I wanna point out though that Kenny has anger issues, but he always has understandable reasons for beeing that angry. ( even if he is overracting sometime)
Yeah. Killing Larry he was trying to protect the group. Leaving the girl was so they could get more supplies. His decisions are not very human… more but they're living in a inhuman world and they gotta do tough shit. That's what makes him unique as he thinks differently than others might. But if you don't do something he likes he gets very very angry.
The 400days group voted for Vince beeing the leader of their little group (atleast in our story). He isn't leading the group like a dictator d… moreoes, he is just making the decisions for the group. Similar to Rick in the Walking Dead Comics/TV show.
My old idea was writting that we are writting when we are currently writting, so the others can see that we are writting. Or to say it easyer, we let the other people know when we are working on a Post (by writting some commend about it), and Edit the Post later when we did finish it.
i didn't understand one word of what you said. Too much writing the word I mean.
Edit: Never mind I get it and do you mean stop writing today? Or the word writing.
Okay we do that then. But on the odd chance that you both got on the thread at the same time and wrote that you were writing would the other person see the notification?
Okay we do that then. But on the odd chance that you both got on the thread at the same time and wrote that you were writing would the other person see the notification?
I don't know to be honest...i gues we will just have to find out:D
I think it's about time to go on with the story now. Everything is talked though now i think.
It was raining they all got out of the car. Kenny and Vince charged at each other knocking each other to the ground, they rolled around trying to punch each others face Kenny getting the most hits. They stood up and Kenny kicked Vince's stomach making him fall back losing ground. But Vince was agile he darted fast behind Kenny and kicked him forward onto the ground and started kicking his ribs. As they were fighting a herd of walkers was heading their way and Lola was yelling for them to stop but no one noticed. Kenny in a fast sweeping motion tripped Vince with his leg and pulled him up and held him over a cliff with a 2 meter drop into a river. "I know you won't do it" Vince said spitting into Kenny's face. Kenny's wet fist on Vince's shirt slipped and Vince fell the river carrying him away. Russel had feinted in the car and Wyatt was afraid to intervene and watched. Lola screamed as she watched Vince fall and in a instant she ran into the trees beside the river hoping to find him. Wyatt picked up the keys and turned it in the ignition. Kenny in his state of anger said "Your just going to leave me here? You don't even know the way back! Trust me guys I'm sure I know the way" Kenny said. "No you don't" Wyatt said silently and drove away.
"F*** me... It's all my fault. Why am I so damn stupid! I gotta clean up my mess." Kenny said running in the direction Lola had.
I introduce a villain I've been planning for so long. He had motivations, and a scheme, and I tried to make him intimidating, and have a second in command.
AAAND HE'S DEAD. There goes my work. Lol, I'm not mad, it's just...... I wanted it to work, and it didn't
The idea behind it was very good, but the problem was that it almost felt like we were skiping some part of the story. There was no time getting to know the new characters (the villain), because things where happening to fast.
I introduce a villain I've been planning for so long. He had motivations, and a scheme, and I tried to make him intimidating, and have a secon… mored in command.
AAAND HE'S DEAD. There goes my work. Lol, I'm not mad, it's just...... I wanted it to work, and it didn't
I'm so so sorry bro. I liked the idea as well but we never got to see the personality of the antagonist. How do we see his schemes, and motivations if were strapped in beds being sacrificed? I loved your idea but it was going too fast. I hope your not mad even though you said your not. Sorry it didn't work, please forgive me.
The idea behind it was very good, but the problem was that it almost felt like we were skiping some part of the story. There was no time getting to know the new characters (the villain), because things where happening to fast.
It's fine. I know he was going to die, I just wanted to dive into his character after they escape, which was obviously going to happen. I was just hoping he wasn't going to die before they got away.
I'm so so sorry bro. I liked the idea as well but we never got to see the personality of the antagonist. How do we see his schemes, and motiva… moretions if were strapped in beds being sacrificed? I loved your idea but it was going too fast. I hope your not mad even though you said your not. Sorry it didn't work, please forgive me.
Hi guys, i had a little idea for improving our Fanfic. Maxbear29 already wrote a very good summary of our first episode. There were alot of important (and less important) choices that had to be made during our first episode and unfortunately not everyone of us could make a decision. That's why i made a list of the in my eyes 5most important Choices that had to be made, so everyone of us can write down his decisions:
1: Choice A: Trust the new group and their leader (Carver) / Choice B: Don't trust the new group and their leader and try to find your friends on your own
2: Choice A: Safe Kenny's life and let Lilly die / Choice B: Safe Lilly's life and let Kenny die
3: Choice A: Lose your Temper (Kenny) and knock out Vincent / Choice B: Stay put and try to apologize to Kenny for your misbehavior (Vincent)
4: Choice A: Help out the unknown women and let her inside (Tavia - Lola) / Choice B: Don't help out the unknown woman and make her go away
5: Choice A: Save your friends life and let Carver escape / Choice B: Kill Carver and let your friend die
Kenny followed Lola, and found -Vince, half awake, beat to hell, clutching on to a rock. He had a black eye, and a gash on his leg that was bleeding a lot. Kenny hoisted him up, as he slipped in and out of consciousness. He didn't seem to know here he was, as Kenny and Lola talked. Lola was scolding Kenny, as he apologized, and they decided to follow Wyatt and Russel. They eventually, 3 hours later, found The car, with a figure leaning on it. Kenny ran, as Lola followed, only to discover it was Russel, calling for Wyatt. "Russ! Oh thank god you're ok! Where's Wyatt?" Lola said, as Russel looked on the verge of tears. "I-......Ok. I woke up, and Wyatt was driving, and I mumbled something, I don't remember, and Wyatt noticed. He sounded relieved, as he pulled over. He crawled between the front seats, and unbuckled me. He said he was lost, and that he was gonna go look fort the bar, an that if a walker got in, I'd need to kill it. I understood, as he reluctantly got out. And I mean, it looked like he was conflicted. He ran off, and I heard him yelling at someone. Not in fear, in....anger, and then, I checked the time. it had been 2 hours, and I was worrying. I got out, and he was nowhere to be found. I looked, and looked, and he wasn't anywhere. I'd say he's dead, but I found his empty gun next to a pile of dead walkers....... I think he ditched me. I don't know why, or why he waited until I awoke, or why he was so angry, or why he as so reluctant to do so......" Russel said, finally breaking down to tears. "He's my best friend! You don't do that to a best friend! Why did he do this?!" Lola grimaced. "I think I know. Once, when we were out looking for food......."
Kenny followed Lola, and found -Vince, half awake, beat to hell, clutching on to a rock. He had a black eye, and a gash on his leg that was bl… moreeeding a lot. Kenny hoisted him up, as he slipped in and out of consciousness. He didn't seem to know here he was, as Kenny and Lola talked. Lola was scolding Kenny, as he apologized, and they decided to follow Wyatt and Russel. They eventually, 3 hours later, found The car, with a figure leaning on it. Kenny ran, as Lola followed, only to discover it was Russel, calling for Wyatt. "Russ! Oh thank god you're ok! Where's Wyatt?" Lola said, as Russel looked on the verge of tears. "I-......Ok. I woke up, and Wyatt was driving, and I mumbled something, I don't remember, and Wyatt noticed. He sounded relieved, as he pulled over. He crawled between the front seats, and unbuckled me. He said he was lost, and that he was gonna go look fort the bar, an that if a walker got in, I'd need to kill it. I understood, as h… [view original content]
No, the first choice was for the group (Wyatt,Russel,Kenny,Vince), there were alot of choices like who trusts Carver and who doesn't, so i thought i put them all together in one choice. There also were alot choices of who you would trust more (Lilly/Kenny), so i thought i put all of them all together in the final choice where u have to decide who lives on and who doesn't.
No, the first choice was for the group (Wyatt,Russel,Kenny,Vince), there were alot of choices like who trusts Carver and who doesn't, so i tho… moreught i put them all together in one choice. There also were alot choices of who you would trust more (Lilly/Kenny), so i thought i put all of them all together in the final choice where u have to decide who lives on and who doesn't.
Well...yes that's how it is. Alot of this decision would have an impact about how the story progresses. That's why i made a Genereal decision. Trust Carver/don't trust Carver. If Lola would have went with Vince at the end for example i would have choosen to kill Carver instead of saving her. That's why i wrote " save your friends life" and not save Wyatt's life.
...he told me that he still has some of his Weed left. He told me that he was keeping the last of it for a special moment, he is hiding it in the old bookstore where Carvers group was staying. He probaply saw that you woke up again and thought that he could leave you alone by now. " Lola said. " Damnit Wyatt, why do you always have to act this stupid? " Vince said while he was shaking his head. " We have to go after him, what if this crazy culture people come back ? " Kenny respondet. " Finally you are not acting like a complete son of a bitch, i though this day would never happen. " Vince said in an angry tone. " Kenny you are suprising me, that's already the second time in one hour that i have to agree with you. " Lola said with a grin on her face. " Shut up Lola and you Vince Sh...nevermind. " Kenny sighted. " Okay guys, what are we waiting for, let's go! " Russel said. They all agreed and were heading towards the old bookstore. " Atleast we know that way... " Lola joked around. " Not the time Lola. " Kenny said in a angry tone. It toke them sometime to get there and when they finally arrived they made sure the check every corner of it. " He isn't here anymore. Where the fuck could he have been going? " Vince asked the group. " I don't know Vince. But maybe...maybe he is going to Wellington, wating for us to drive past? " Russel respondet. " Yes that's gotta be it. Okay guys what are we waiting for, lets go! We have to find him! " Vince said and he was very determinadet. " Wait guys, i am sorry to tell you this but Wyatt isn't heading towards to Wellington. Look at this. " Lola said and she was holding something into the air. " We have found your friend as he was trying to smoke the hell-cabbage, we toke him with us and he will be sacrificed for your evil sins. " Vince was loudly reading the letter Lola found. " The fucking psychos? Not this shit again... " Kenny screamed as he was smashing the nearest chair he could find.
NICE! Now maybe maxbear could show us his scheme for these people. Obviously maybe a new leader takes over and they want revenge as one of the motives. After all I still left 98 lunatic priests back in the church . But this time we have to keep their weird cult going so don't kill the leader!
"F*** F*** F*** F**********!" Kenny was yelling breaking anything he could find in the room. "Well it looks like were going back.." Vince said looking really pissed off. They all walked back to the car only to find the gas tank empty. "Maybe we could walk?" Russel suggested. "That's f***ing stupid Russel" (See what I did there? ) Kenny said as he was pacing the ground. "Dammit Wyatt you idiot!" Vince said. "I'm sorry guys its partially my fault since I knew about it." Lola apologized. "Well hes the on that messed up I'm looking for the bar." Kenny said and started walking down the road. "Its my fault. I'm going to find him" Lola said and walked the opposite way that Kenny was. "I'm sorry Vince. Kenny is right. Wyatt ditched me. Kenny can be a dick but hes right we have to go back" Russel said and walked away with Kenny. "Damn it all to hell..." Vince said to himself and followed Lola.
Kenny and Russel finally found the bar after a day of searching. But something was wrong.... There was a group using the bar as a base. About 3 people outside, and who knows how many more inside. And the food and medicine bag were on the bar roof....
Vince and Lola were walking for a long time having no sight of the bar after searching for a while. But one night a blue pickup truck with one headlight broken approached them with one man inside, he pulled over beside them and rolled the window down. "Need a ride?" Nate said.
NICE! Now maybe maxbear could show us his scheme for these people. Obviously maybe a new leader takes over and they want revenge as one of the… more motives. After all I still left 98 lunatic priests back in the church . But this time we have to keep their weird cult going so don't kill the leader!
"F*** F*** F*** F**********!" Kenny was yelling breaking anything he could find in the room. "Well it looks like were going back.." Vince said looking really pissed off. They all walked back to the car only to find the gas tank empty. "Maybe we could walk?" Russel suggested. "That's f***ing stupid Russel" (See what I did there? ) Kenny said as he was pacing the ground. "Dammit Wyatt you idiot!" Vince said. "I'm sorry guys its partially my fault since I knew about it." Lola apologized. "Well hes the on that messed up I'm looking for the bar." Kenny said and started walking down the road. "Its my fault. I'm going to find him" Lola said and walked the opposi… [view original content]
I just erased all of my story. Dammit. Ok, just to let you know: The church kills and mutilates survivors because they want to give sacrifices to god to let them survive the walkers. If 1 dies, they sacrifice more people. That is 100% of the reason they murder people. Obviously they're all sick and twisted individuals, clearly, and that's a part of it, but that is why they kill. Still scary, a bunch of people, trying to kill you to appease the lord......right? Am I just not very good at horror?
That was my plan...i rly liked maxbears idea and i thought we should find out a bit more about this crazy culture people:D
" That's fucking stupid Russel...that line just killed me! " lol
Yea i like this little references from Season1...brings back some good memories!
So Vince is basically like the new Lee, Wyatt is like the new Carley/Doug, Russel is like the new Ben, Lola is like the new Lilly and Kenny is like the new Kenny...wait what?
I just erased all of my story. Dammit. Ok, just to let you know: The church kills and mutilates survivors because they want to give sacrifices… more to god to let them survive the walkers. If 1 dies, they sacrifice more people. That is 100% of the reason they murder people. Obviously they're all sick and twisted individuals, clearly, and that's a part of it, but that is why they kill. Still scary, a bunch of people, trying to kill you to appease the lord......right? Am I just not very good at horror?
You should probaply start copying the things (and stuff) you write, so if this happens another time you can just integrate the things (and stuff) you just wrote.
I just erased all of my story. Dammit. Ok, just to let you know: The church kills and mutilates survivors because they want to give sacrifices… more to god to let them survive the walkers. If 1 dies, they sacrifice more people. That is 100% of the reason they murder people. Obviously they're all sick and twisted individuals, clearly, and that's a part of it, but that is why they kill. Still scary, a bunch of people, trying to kill you to appease the lord......right? Am I just not very good at horror?
I know this is not story but we almost have 200 comments! This is great but I find 3/4 of the thread is not part of the story. In other words replying to recent posts. I find it partly annoying that there are maybe 150 replying posts while there is only about 45 actual story posts. I know I am a fairly large portion of these replies but I'm suggesting maybe we could have a separate thread and link to it at the top(first post) for all replies and comments not relating to the story. What do you guys think?
I know this is not story but we almost have 200 comments! This is great but I find 3/4 of the thread is not part of the story. In other words … morereplying to recent posts. I find it partly annoying that there are maybe 150 replying posts while there is only about 45 actual story posts. I know I am a fairly large portion of these replies but I'm suggesting maybe we could have a separate thread and link to it at the top(first post) for all replies and comments not relating to the story. What do you guys think?
Yeah... I'm just so bored so I always come on in my free time. The thing is there's only about 4 of us but only you and me are the most active on this thread. I kind of wanted to join the other fan fic because it had more people but it was way too long so I always go to this thread waiting for a post I'm pretty sad I know.
Well...i think it's a good idea, but with my answer i just made another Post just to answer yours so i gues that's a bad thing:D
I would/co… moreuld go on with the story, but at the moment you and me are doing like 90% of the Posts, i wanted to give the others some space.
Yeah... I'm just so bored so I always come on in my free time. The thing is there's only about 4 of us but only you and me are the most active… more on this thread. I kind of wanted to join the other fan fic because it had more people but it was way too long so I always go to this thread waiting for a post I'm pretty sad I know.
No man your not...i feel ya:D
But we should probaply stop talking now, since we are only making even more non story related Posts!
Well i gues its up to me again to go on with the story...
" Shit Kenny, they got our food and supplies. What are we gonna do now? " Russel asked " Fuck it...i have enough of this shit. We gonna get back what belongs to us. I was able to do it once and god knows i will do it again. " Kenny said as he was grabbing for his gun. " Are you crazy? There are 3 guards outside and who knows how many of them are inside the bar. We are only 2 people here and i don't even have a gun. " Russel responded as he was looking onto his knife." Listen to me Russel, i know we can do this. We take them out by suprise. I will make them lower their guns and meanwhile you can sneak behind the bar and attack them from behind and take their weapons. " Kenny said determinadet " And Russel, don't be afraid. You are stronger than you think you are. You have no reason to think bad of yourself. You...you remind me of my son. " Kenny added with a big smile on his face. As they were getting ready to attack the guards, a man steped outside the bar. He was a medium sized white man, had a big colourfull tatoo on his right arm and was waering a hood. He also had two earrings and a piercing under his lips. " This place seems secure guys, i think we can stay here for the night atleast. " The man said. " I think that's their leader Russel and there are probaply no other guards inside. Now is our turn to strike. We hit them and we hit them hard. " Kenny said as he was standing up and aimed his gun towards the 4 man's. " If i were you i wouldn't do that. Put your guns down immediatelly and hold up your hands. Nobody needs to get hurt here. " Kenny said as one of the man's was trying to grab after his gun. " Who the fuck are you and what do you want from us? " The group leader asked. " I just want back what is mine, this place belongs to us and not you. " Kenny answered. " Shit man i didn't know. You said us, are there more of your guys out there? Look man why don't you lower your gun so we can talk about this in peace. " The leader said and he did his best trying to make Kenny calm down. " That ain't gonna happen. I have met enough crazy people already to know that i can't just simply trust strangers. Russel take their guns so we can get them inside. " Kenny screamed and Russel was taking up the guns the 4mans were laying on the ground before. After they all went inside Russel and Kenny were bonding them on 4 chairs made out of wood with some of the ropes they had left. " Alright...now we can start talking. First of all i wanna know your names. " Kenny said with a loud voice. " I am Eddie and this is my crew. Please stay cool man, we are just trying to survive out here like you do. I am sure we can settle this. " The groupleader said.
Alright, i thought when you can bring back Nate into the story why can't i bring back Eddie aswell:D
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Yeah. Killing Larry he was trying to protect the group. Leaving the girl was so they could get more supplies. His decisions are not very human but they're living in a inhuman world and they gotta do tough shit. That's what makes him unique as he thinks differently than others might. But if you don't do something he likes he gets very very angry.
I think that sums it up pretty well. He also was suggesting to kill Lee if he would pass out another time during the scene in the attic.
i didn't understand one word of what you said. Too much writing the word I mean.
Edit: Never mind I get it and do you mean stop writing today? Or the word writing.
Sorry for confusing you so much:D
I Edited my commend aswell now.
Okay we do that then. But on the odd chance that you both got on the thread at the same time and wrote that you were writing would the other person see the notification?
I don't know to be honest...i gues we will just have to find out:D
I think it's about time to go on with the story now. Everything is talked though now i think.
Mind if I continue? The part where you left off is gnawing at my brain.
Go ahead! The story must go on! (i hope Kenny isn't beating up Vince to badly,haha)
Sorry I took so long I was eating
It was raining they all got out of the car. Kenny and Vince charged at each other knocking each other to the ground, they rolled around trying to punch each others face Kenny getting the most hits. They stood up and Kenny kicked Vince's stomach making him fall back losing ground. But Vince was agile he darted fast behind Kenny and kicked him forward onto the ground and started kicking his ribs. As they were fighting a herd of walkers was heading their way and Lola was yelling for them to stop but no one noticed. Kenny in a fast sweeping motion tripped Vince with his leg and pulled him up and held him over a cliff with a 2 meter drop into a river. "I know you won't do it" Vince said spitting into Kenny's face. Kenny's wet fist on Vince's shirt slipped and Vince fell the river carrying him away. Russel had feinted in the car and Wyatt was afraid to intervene and watched. Lola screamed as she watched Vince fall and in a instant she ran into the trees beside the river hoping to find him. Wyatt picked up the keys and turned it in the ignition. Kenny in his state of anger said "Your just going to leave me here? You don't even know the way back! Trust me guys I'm sure I know the way" Kenny said. "No you don't" Wyatt said silently and drove away.
"F*** me... It's all my fault. Why am I so damn stupid! I gotta clean up my mess." Kenny said running in the direction Lola had.
I introduce a villain I've been planning for so long. He had motivations, and a scheme, and I tried to make him intimidating, and have a second in command.
AAAND HE'S DEAD. There goes my work. Lol, I'm not mad, it's just...... I wanted it to work, and it didn't
The idea behind it was very good, but the problem was that it almost felt like we were skiping some part of the story. There was no time getting to know the new characters (the villain), because things where happening to fast.
I'm so so sorry bro. I liked the idea as well but we never got to see the personality of the antagonist. How do we see his schemes, and motivations if were strapped in beds being sacrificed? I loved your idea but it was going too fast. I hope your not mad even though you said your not. Sorry it didn't work, please forgive me.
It's fine. I know he was going to die, I just wanted to dive into his character after they escape, which was obviously going to happen. I was just hoping he wasn't going to die before they got away.
Never mind, not posting, it's WAY late. G'nite!
What order to I post?
Were not doing that anymore. So if you wanna post just go ahead but make sure you write that your writing. Then edit that post to write the story.
Roger!
Hi guys, i had a little idea for improving our Fanfic. Maxbear29 already wrote a very good summary of our first episode. There were alot of important (and less important) choices that had to be made during our first episode and unfortunately not everyone of us could make a decision. That's why i made a list of the in my eyes 5most important Choices that had to be made, so everyone of us can write down his decisions:
1: Choice A: Trust the new group and their leader (Carver) / Choice B: Don't trust the new group and their leader and try to find your friends on your own
2: Choice A: Safe Kenny's life and let Lilly die / Choice B: Safe Lilly's life and let Kenny die
3: Choice A: Lose your Temper (Kenny) and knock out Vincent / Choice B: Stay put and try to apologize to Kenny for your misbehavior (Vincent)
4: Choice A: Help out the unknown women and let her inside (Tavia - Lola) / Choice B: Don't help out the unknown woman and make her go away
5: Choice A: Save your friends life and let Carver escape / Choice B: Kill Carver and let your friend die
My choices would be
1: B
2: A
3: A
4: A
5: A
1: B
2: A
3: B
4: A
5:A
Kenny followed Lola, and found -Vince, half awake, beat to hell, clutching on to a rock. He had a black eye, and a gash on his leg that was bleeding a lot. Kenny hoisted him up, as he slipped in and out of consciousness. He didn't seem to know here he was, as Kenny and Lola talked. Lola was scolding Kenny, as he apologized, and they decided to follow Wyatt and Russel. They eventually, 3 hours later, found The car, with a figure leaning on it. Kenny ran, as Lola followed, only to discover it was Russel, calling for Wyatt. "Russ! Oh thank god you're ok! Where's Wyatt?" Lola said, as Russel looked on the verge of tears. "I-......Ok. I woke up, and Wyatt was driving, and I mumbled something, I don't remember, and Wyatt noticed. He sounded relieved, as he pulled over. He crawled between the front seats, and unbuckled me. He said he was lost, and that he was gonna go look fort the bar, an that if a walker got in, I'd need to kill it. I understood, as he reluctantly got out. And I mean, it looked like he was conflicted. He ran off, and I heard him yelling at someone. Not in fear, in....anger, and then, I checked the time. it had been 2 hours, and I was worrying. I got out, and he was nowhere to be found. I looked, and looked, and he wasn't anywhere. I'd say he's dead, but I found his empty gun next to a pile of dead walkers....... I think he ditched me. I don't know why, or why he waited until I awoke, or why he was so angry, or why he as so reluctant to do so......" Russel said, finally breaking down to tears. "He's my best friend! You don't do that to a best friend! Why did he do this?!" Lola grimaced. "I think I know. Once, when we were out looking for food......."
For me the same as Mustache. And was the first choice for Tavia?
Nice job. I like the ending but I hope whoever goes next will make it interesting.
No, the first choice was for the group (Wyatt,Russel,Kenny,Vince), there were alot of choices like who trusts Carver and who doesn't, so i thought i put them all together in one choice. There also were alot choices of who you would trust more (Lilly/Kenny), so i thought i put all of them all together in the final choice where u have to decide who lives on and who doesn't.
Oh okay so if Wyatt says no then he can never mention Kenny so Russel would go off on his own?
Well...yes that's how it is. Alot of this decision would have an impact about how the story progresses. That's why i made a Genereal decision. Trust Carver/don't trust Carver. If Lola would have went with Vince at the end for example i would have choosen to kill Carver instead of saving her. That's why i wrote " save your friends life" and not save Wyatt's life.
...he told me that he still has some of his Weed left. He told me that he was keeping the last of it for a special moment, he is hiding it in the old bookstore where Carvers group was staying. He probaply saw that you woke up again and thought that he could leave you alone by now. " Lola said. " Damnit Wyatt, why do you always have to act this stupid? " Vince said while he was shaking his head. " We have to go after him, what if this crazy culture people come back ? " Kenny respondet. " Finally you are not acting like a complete son of a bitch, i though this day would never happen. " Vince said in an angry tone. " Kenny you are suprising me, that's already the second time in one hour that i have to agree with you. " Lola said with a grin on her face. " Shut up Lola and you Vince Sh...nevermind. " Kenny sighted. " Okay guys, what are we waiting for, let's go! " Russel said. They all agreed and were heading towards the old bookstore. " Atleast we know that way... " Lola joked around. " Not the time Lola. " Kenny said in a angry tone. It toke them sometime to get there and when they finally arrived they made sure the check every corner of it. " He isn't here anymore. Where the fuck could he have been going? " Vince asked the group. " I don't know Vince. But maybe...maybe he is going to Wellington, wating for us to drive past? " Russel respondet. " Yes that's gotta be it. Okay guys what are we waiting for, lets go! We have to find him! " Vince said and he was very determinadet. " Wait guys, i am sorry to tell you this but Wyatt isn't heading towards to Wellington. Look at this. " Lola said and she was holding something into the air. " We have found your friend as he was trying to smoke the hell-cabbage, we toke him with us and he will be sacrificed for your evil sins. " Vince was loudly reading the letter Lola found. " The fucking psychos? Not this shit again... " Kenny screamed as he was smashing the nearest chair he could find.
NICE! Now maybe maxbear could show us his scheme for these people. Obviously maybe a new leader takes over and they want revenge as one of the motives. After all I still left 98 lunatic priests back in the church
. But this time we have to keep their weird cult going so don't kill the leader!
"F*** F*** F*** F**********!" Kenny was yelling breaking anything he could find in the room. "Well it looks like were going back.." Vince said looking really pissed off. They all walked back to the car only to find the gas tank empty. "Maybe we could walk?" Russel suggested. "That's f***ing stupid Russel" (See what I did there?
) Kenny said as he was pacing the ground. "Dammit Wyatt you idiot!" Vince said. "I'm sorry guys its partially my fault since I knew about it." Lola apologized. "Well hes the on that messed up I'm looking for the bar." Kenny said and started walking down the road. "Its my fault. I'm going to find him" Lola said and walked the opposite way that Kenny was. "I'm sorry Vince. Kenny is right. Wyatt ditched me. Kenny can be a dick but hes right we have to go back" Russel said and walked away with Kenny. "Damn it all to hell..." Vince said to himself and followed Lola.
Kenny and Russel finally found the bar after a day of searching. But something was wrong.... There was a group using the bar as a base. About 3 people outside, and who knows how many more inside. And the food and medicine bag were on the bar roof....
Vince and Lola were walking for a long time having no sight of the bar after searching for a while. But one night a blue pickup truck with one headlight broken approached them with one man inside, he pulled over beside them and rolled the window down. "Need a ride?" Nate said.
That was my plan...i rly liked maxbears idea and i thought we should find out a bit more about this crazy culture people:D
" That's fucking stupid Russel...that line just killed me! " lol
I just erased all of my story. Dammit. Ok, just to let you know: The church kills and mutilates survivors because they want to give sacrifices to god to let them survive the walkers. If 1 dies, they sacrifice more people. That is 100% of the reason they murder people. Obviously they're all sick and twisted individuals, clearly, and that's a part of it, but that is why they kill. Still scary, a bunch of people, trying to kill you to appease the lord......right? Am I just not very good at horror?
Yeah great job bringing his idea back to bite us in the butt.
And haha yeah the good old days when Kenny said the same thing to Ben.
Yea i like this little references from Season1...brings back some good memories!
So Vince is basically like the new Lee, Wyatt is like the new Carley/Doug, Russel is like the new Ben, Lola is like the new Lilly and Kenny is like the new Kenny...wait what?
Again!? Aww man that stinks big time.
What is the definition of horror? If it's supposed to be scary its not but it is quite sick like the St Johns eating human meat.
You should probaply start copying the things (and stuff) you write, so if this happens another time you can just integrate the things (and stuff) you just wrote.
I know this is not story but we almost have 200 comments! This is great but I find 3/4 of the thread is not part of the story. In other words replying to recent posts. I find it partly annoying that there are maybe 150 replying posts while there is only about 45 actual story posts. I know I am a fairly large portion of these replies but I'm suggesting maybe we could have a separate thread and link to it at the top(first post) for all replies and comments not relating to the story. What do you guys think?
Well...i think it's a good idea, but with my answer i just made another Post just to answer yours so i gues that's a bad thing:D
I would/could go on with the story, but at the moment you and me are doing like 90% of the Posts, i wanted to give the others some space.
Yeah... I'm just so bored so I always come on in my free time. The thing is there's only about 4 of us but only you and me are the most active on this thread. I kind of wanted to join the other fan fic because it had more people but it was way too long so I always go to this thread waiting for a post
I'm pretty sad I know.
No man your not...i feel ya:D
But we should probaply stop talking now, since we are only making even more non story related Posts!
Well i gues its up to me again to go on with the story...
Ah well I guess
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Oooppsss DANG!!! I did it again..... Ok I'm going to stop for serious this time
Meanwhile at the bar:
" Shit Kenny, they got our food and supplies. What are we gonna do now? " Russel asked " Fuck it...i have enough of this shit. We gonna get back what belongs to us. I was able to do it once and god knows i will do it again. " Kenny said as he was grabbing for his gun. " Are you crazy? There are 3 guards outside and who knows how many of them are inside the bar. We are only 2 people here and i don't even have a gun. " Russel responded as he was looking onto his knife." Listen to me Russel, i know we can do this. We take them out by suprise. I will make them lower their guns and meanwhile you can sneak behind the bar and attack them from behind and take their weapons. " Kenny said determinadet " And Russel, don't be afraid. You are stronger than you think you are. You have no reason to think bad of yourself. You...you remind me of my son. " Kenny added with a big smile on his face. As they were getting ready to attack the guards, a man steped outside the bar. He was a medium sized white man, had a big colourfull tatoo on his right arm and was waering a hood. He also had two earrings and a piercing under his lips. " This place seems secure guys, i think we can stay here for the night atleast. " The man said. " I think that's their leader Russel and there are probaply no other guards inside. Now is our turn to strike. We hit them and we hit them hard. " Kenny said as he was standing up and aimed his gun towards the 4 man's. " If i were you i wouldn't do that. Put your guns down immediatelly and hold up your hands. Nobody needs to get hurt here. " Kenny said as one of the man's was trying to grab after his gun. " Who the fuck are you and what do you want from us? " The group leader asked. " I just want back what is mine, this place belongs to us and not you. " Kenny answered. " Shit man i didn't know. You said us, are there more of your guys out there? Look man why don't you lower your gun so we can talk about this in peace. " The leader said and he did his best trying to make Kenny calm down. " That ain't gonna happen. I have met enough crazy people already to know that i can't just simply trust strangers. Russel take their guns so we can get them inside. " Kenny screamed and Russel was taking up the guns the 4mans were laying on the ground before. After they all went inside Russel and Kenny were bonding them on 4 chairs made out of wood with some of the ropes they had left. " Alright...now we can start talking. First of all i wanna know your names. " Kenny said with a loud voice. " I am Eddie and this is my crew. Please stay cool man, we are just trying to survive out here like you do. I am sure we can settle this. " The groupleader said.
Alright, i thought when you can bring back Nate into the story why can't i bring back Eddie aswell:D