400 Days: Let's keep going! (fan-fic)

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  • Oh you Posted already?

    Well i see Russel is still with the group in your Post (what makes no sense,lol), so i suggest you just adjust your Post according to my last Post.

    Good idea as I have posted and forgotten Russel!

  • edited February 2014

    Yeah I fixed it so only Wyatt wanted to find them.

    Edit: Haha! Papa Nate! Good one.

    Oh you Posted already? Well i see Russel is still with the group in your Post (what makes no sense,lol), so i suggest you just adjust your Post according to my last Post.

  • Okay i agree, we are done with episode 2 now!

    My idea for episode 3 would be "Road to Wellington", but i gues that's to obvious?

    Edit: Haha yea, i thought it would be funny to bring the 2 of them back together after Russel could escape his claws last time:D

    Yeah I fixed it so only Wyatt wanted to find them. Edit: Haha! Papa Nate! Good one.

  • Yeah that's not a bad idea. But too obvious

    Okay i agree, we are done with episode 2 now! My idea for episode 3 would be "Road to Wellington", but i gues that's to obvious? Edit: H

  • edited February 2014

    How about "Long loneliness ahead" ?

    There will be alot of deaths and there will be alot of loneliness in the next episode. (Spoiler Alert)

    Edit: How about "The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel "?...no srsly i'm out of ideas:D

    Yeah that's not a bad idea. But too obvious

  • edited February 2014

    You forgot the spoiler tag! Jesus are you fucking kidding me... Please don't post the Winston I am not fucking kidding you pic btw. Loneliness is too long a word :(.

    Abode lies Ahead?

    A Home Far Ahead?

    Long Street Ahead?

    Group Far Mislead?

    Long Streak Of Red?

    I don't know just some ideas.

    How about "Long loneliness ahead" ? There will be alot of deaths and there will be alot of loneliness in the next episode. (Spoiler Alert) Edit: How about "The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel "?...no srsly i'm out of ideas:D

  • Exactly. That and I was exhausted. Woo hoo! My plotholes have been filled! Thank you guys!

    Okay how about we say there were three leaders. And they were all named Father Ryan after their weird god. Currently 2 of the fathers live.

  • edited February 2014

    Never mind, this was never here.

  • I kinda like " Long streak of red " sounds bloody!

    I also like my idea " The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel " but maybe that's just me? :D

    I give my vote to " Long streak of Red".

    You forgot the spoiler tag! Jesus are you fucking kidding me... Please don't post the Winston I am not fucking kidding you pic btw. Loneliness

  • edited February 2014

    This better be good then ^^ Jade= Jane

    Edit: Seriously? You could have just started episode 3. And damn we never got to know James and Matthew :(. Okay whoever goes next(Not me) will finish the episode okay?

    maxbear29 posted: »

    Never mind, this was never here.

  • Well...go on with the story then i gues...but it kinda looked like an end to me already. The group beeing seperated and everything.

    maxbear29 posted: »

    Never mind, this was never here.

  • Yeah maybe you can start episode 3?

    Well...go on with the story then i gues...but it kinda looked like an end to me already. The group beeing seperated and everything.

  • Hi thanks for the summary, I know I didn't do much in Episode 2, sorry bout that. The story is still going great though. Ep 2 seems to be finished now though. End it with the scene between Vince, Lola and Michael. The other scene seems out of place.

    Yeah maybe you can start episode 3?

  • R-really? I try to contribute anything whatsoever, and I get "NOPE! That didn't happen!" Yeah........I don't think I'm good at this. Maybe I'll sit out for a while. You guys seem to not need me anymore, I got it started, so now I'm just useless........ Everyone's better than me at writing, so I'm just gonna while. I'd just be making the story worse.

    Glinda posted: »

    Hi thanks for the summary, I know I didn't do much in Episode 2, sorry bout that. The story is still going great though. Ep 2 seems to be finished now though. End it with the scene between Vince, Lola and Michael. The other scene seems out of place.

  • edited February 2014

    We applaud you for your amazing contribution to this story. I guess we bid you farewell. We will sorely miss you.

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    maxbear29 posted: »

    R-really? I try to contribute anything whatsoever, and I get "NOPE! That didn't happen!" Yeah........I don't think I'm good at this. Maybe I'l

  • I'll be back someday......like frosty the snowman, I'll just be sitting out for a while. Despite what I said about posting more in episode 3. I'm just gonna wait until I have something interesting to add, then I'll be back......

    We applaud you for your amazing contribution to this story. I guess we bid you farewell. We will sorely miss you.

  • edited February 2014

    For Frosty, the Snowman, had to hurry on his way,
    But he waved goodbye, sayin' "Don't cry, I'll be back again some day."

    Edit: So what do you guys want to do with his post? 1.Abandon it. 2.Make it the beginning of episode 3. 3. Or keep in in episode 2 and continue.

    maxbear29 posted: »

    I'll be back someday......like frosty the snowman, I'll just be sitting out for a while. Despite what I said about posting more in episode 3. I'm just gonna wait until I have something interesting to add, then I'll be back......

  • edited March 2014

    Hello! Welcome to the 400 days fan fiction. Currently we have maybe 4 members and we need more people! There are summaries that can be read to catch yourself up! We only have 2 episodes done so far.

    Episode 1: A New Threat Summary on Page 6

    Episode 2: Starved For Vengeance Summary on Page 9

    Episode 3: From Every Angle Summary on Page 11

    We only have about 10 pages done so I would recommend reading it all. But if you don't want to then you can read the summaries.

    All 7 of them fit into Taiva's small car. It had been quiet before anybody decided to spark a conversation. "So, um where is this place? Your settlement." Asks Vince. Taiva begins. "Well..."

  • edited February 2014

    It may be kinda rude, but i vote for 1. Abandon...sorry:D

    For Frosty, the Snowman, had to hurry on his way, But he waved goodbye, sayin' "Don't cry, I'll be back again some day." Edit: So what do

  • Ah I agree. I just didn't want to say it unless someone else did. Sorry max.

    It may be kinda rude, but i vote for 1. Abandon...sorry:D

  • It took me forever to write........ But if you guys want to, I'll get rid of it. I'll get to it.......

    Ah I agree. I just didn't want to say it unless someone else did. Sorry max.

  • Yeah I was going for bloody. And maybe The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel could be a DLC lol.

    I kinda like " Long streak of red " sounds bloody! I also like my idea " The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel " but maybe that's just me? I give my vote to " Long streak of Red".

  • Sorry :(

    maxbear29 posted: »

    It took me forever to write........ But if you guys want to, I'll get rid of it. I'll get to it.......

  • I would definitely buy that DLC! Together with the Kenny DLC...long Stacheness ahead!

    Yeah I was going for bloody. And maybe The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel could be a DLC lol.

  • Okay so I guess were doing the red thing. So looks like some people will die! Ooops forgot the spoiler tag....

    I would definitely buy that DLC! Together with the Kenny DLC...long Stacheness ahead!

  • Well it's not really a big Spoiler that people gonna die in the Walking Dead,lol. Yes i agree lets do that!

    Okay so I guess were doing the red thing. So looks like some people will die! Ooops forgot the spoiler tag....

  • Episode 3: Long Streaks Of Red

    Caitlyn sighed. They had been walking for days and it was just so... boring. Robert, and Kenny were always on watch and usually kept to themselves. The only one that really talked to her was Eddie. He was funny but he seemed pretty weird but he was kind of her only friend. She missed her old group and wondered if her sister Breanna had escaped. After five days they saw a figure walking towards them. He had short hair, and dirty clothing. "Vince!" Kenny cried out. "Guys! Who are these three?" Vince asked looking at Eddie, Caitlyn, and Robert. "Well Eddie is Wyatt's friend and Robert here was in his group. This is Caitlyn who we just met we decided we could bring her to Wellington. We got split up from Wyatt, Eddie's buddy James, and Caitlyn's friend Jane." replied Kenny "You saved Wyatt? We need to go reunite with them" Vince said "We got split up by a huge group of walkers but were heading to Wellington and hoping to meet them there. Where's Lola" Kenny said. "She's with this guy me met named Michael they were looking for Wyatt chasing after those priests." Vince replied. "Well were going to Wellington and were not going back for anyone because we keep on losing people." Kenny said "Well fine... Michael will take care of her I'm sure of it." Vince said and the group continued forward on the road to Wellington.

    Wyatt and Jane decided heading north to Wellington was the best idea in their predicament. They didn't really get to know each other so they awkwardly walked down the road. "I hope that place is safe." Jane said. "Yeah me to." Wyatt replied. Jane was heartbroken, before they had a group of 5 people. Jane, Caitlyn, Breanna, Joe, and Drew. But then a bunch of zombies showed up and attacked them. Hopefully they all survived Jane said in her head.

    Lola and Michael found the priest camp. There were about 20 of them all on their knees while the 2nd Father Ryan preached the 3rd Father Ryan beside him. There was no sign of Wyatt. Michael kicked a tree in anger and said to Lola "What do we do now? Hes not here but these bastards need to die." "We can't fight them all" Lola said. "Exactly.... Wait who's that?" Three figures came from behind them. "Who are you?" A skinny man said holding a hatchet." "It depends who are you?" Michael replied. The tall skinny one who seemed to be the leader pointed toward the people behind him. One was a girl with short blonde hair and blue eyes. And there was a man beside her who was short but held a gun ready. "I'm Joe, the girl's Breanna, and hes Drew."

    Hope that was an ok start. Now there are three separate groups! I suggest you all do only one per post(but you don't have to!) but I did three just for the intro.

  • edited February 2014

    Okay nice intro, i think we shouldn't add in more characters into the story for now. We need to find out more about the characters that are already in the story and get to know them better before we do so. By the way...you aren't quite right, there are 4 groups out there. You forgot about Nate and his boys. But we shouldn't spend to much time with their story anywayso its's okay:D

    " Hello Joe, Breanna and Drew, i am Micheal and this is Lola. " Micheal said, but Lola didn't want to say a word to the strangers and just looked on her foots with a stare view. " Hello, nice to meet you, Micheal...Lola." Joe said as he was nodding towards Lola. " I would like to ask you two a few questions. First of all, who are this crazy people over there wearing the robes? And secondly, have you seen any other people pass by here lately. You have to know we are a group and got isolated from two of our people, when we were attacked by a horde of Walkers. " Joe asked Micheal and was hoping for a helpfull answer. " Before i answer you'r questions i have to know that i can trust you people. It exists alot of evil in this world and trusting strangers isn't the same as it once used to be. " Micheal asked in return and was waiting for a appropriate answer. " We are not evil, we are just regular folks who are trying to survive in this screwed up world just like you do. " Joe answered and Micheal wasn't really convinced yet. " What can we do to make you guys trust us, we do anything. " Breanna interrupted and Micheal was peeking on Drews gun. " Hand me out your weopons, so i can be sure that you won't suddenly start attacking us in suprise. " Micheal responded determinated and Drew answered him. " Are you crazy, this weapons are our only way to protect us, how can we be sure that you won't just kill us once you receaved them? " He asked. " Listen boy, if i would have wanted to kill you, you would already be dead. Now please hand out your gun, so i don't have to make my words become true. " Micheal said. " Do it. Just do it Drew. " Joe said and Drew was very unhappy and fearfull staring into Joe's eyes, while he was giving his gun to Micheal. " That wasn't that hard was it? Now i can answer you'r questions. Sorry but i am afraid i have to dissapoint you, we didn't see any other people passing by lately, except those crazy priest over there. That brings me back to your first question. They call themselves " brother Ryan ". They all share the same names, it doesn't matter who you were before, as long as you are part of their culture you are known under the name Ryan. But only a few of them have the right to give commands and become a leader. People who wear a black robe are graded as " Son of Ryan " and the 3 people wearing the white robes are graded as " Father Ryan ". They are a sick organization who sweared loyality to the holy father and believe that the Walkers were send down to earth from heaven to clean the world from sinners. Only the choosen ones who they believe to be themselves can survive in this world. " Michael ended his long explanation and they were all looking at him in amazement. " You seem to know very much about this culture Micheal, is there something you did hide from me? " Lola asked astound. " Yes Lola, i see i can't hide my secret from you any longer. I will have to tell you something that you probaply won't like to hear. " Micheal said and Lola was getting stressed and doubtful " Speek already. " She loudly said and Micheal answered her. " I know so much about this people, because i once was part of their organisation. Before people started getting to know me under the name Micheal, people used to call me Father Dylan. You have to know, i was a very religious man before the outbreak started and i lost my whole family in a terrible car accident. My life seemed meeningless and i thought maybe the " brother Dylan " could bring back my will to live. " Micheal responded and they were all horrified and starring at him. " What...what the...what happened then? " Lola asked and she wanted to hear more about it at all costs. " Live happened..." Michael said and started to narrate his story.

  • Thanks and yeah I know definitely a lot of people. But if were going to live up to "Long Streaks Of Red" then we need people to kill off. But don't necessarily kill off the new people as we didn't get to know them (damn we hardly know Robert!) So try to get some deaths in there but maybe some of the people who have been around longer(spoiler alert!)

    And no its 3 groups because "The Awesome Adventures Of Russel and Papa Nate" is a DLC. So I think we should get Russel in with one of the groups in mid story without telling his story with Nate. Then at the end whoever was in episode one(Wyatt, Vince, Kenny, Lola) asks Russel "Where were you when we were going to Wellington" and it begins with Russel who says "Well there was this guy named Nate I never told you about..."

    Note: Keep at least one of the characters in the brackets alive :) I know you want them to live but most of them gotta go(not necessarily this episode but it would be appreciated if at least one of them did, due to the episode name)

    Okay nice intro, i think we shouldn't add in more characters into the story for now. We need to find out more about the characters that are al

  • edited February 2014

    Aslong as the Mustache man lives i can live with it:D...and we need to keep Eddie alive aswell. He is on the S2E4 cover! (Spoiler Alert)

    Edit: Russel told the group about Nate...Bonnie/or Shel mentions him when Tavia was meeting the group.

    Thanks and yeah I know definitely a lot of people. But if were going to live up to "Long Streaks Of Red" then we need people to kill off. But

  • edited February 2014

    I'm sorry bro Kenny's mustache is running out of juice. But don't worry he won't die...YET!

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    And okay then Russel just tells them that he met Nate and they.. did stuff. But eventually Russel escapes and returns in episode 4!

    Aslong as the Mustache man lives i can live with it:D...and we need to keep Eddie alive aswell. He is on the S2E4 cover! (Spoiler Alert) Edit: Russel told the group about Nate...Bonnie/or Shel mentions him when Tavia was meeting the group.

  • edited February 2014

    That's just...excellent.

    Russel confirmed for Episode4!!! Nate and Russel were doing stuff...and things...

    I'm sorry bro Kenny's mustache is running out of juice. But don't worry he won't die...YET! And okay then Russel just tells them that he met Nate and they.. did stuff. But eventually Russel escapes and returns in episode 4!

  • Yeah his mustache needs to be "refueled" if you will. If he ever gets in another tight spot he can't use his mustache to fly :(.

    Russel is doing stuff against his will but ah ... yeah he was umm helping Papa Nate

    That's just...excellent. Russel confirmed for Episode4!!! Nate and Russel were doing stuff...and things...

  • Maybe he can't fly with it anymore, but he can still count on unicorns.

    Edit: Helping Papa Nate is always the right thing to do!

    Yeah his mustache needs to be "refueled" if you will. If he ever gets in another tight spot he can't use his mustache to fly . Russel is doing stuff against his will but ah ... yeah he was umm helping Papa Nate

  • edited February 2014

    Okay, i am done with my part of the story for today. This part was all about Lola and Micheal (and the other 3 people:)...so whoever wants to go on with their story is free to do so, or you can continue the story of 1 of the other 2groups. I hope you enjoyed it.

    Edit: As a free goodie i will write a little bonus Post here on this Post. " The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel-part1". I think it's a funny idea if every here and then some little Nate storys appear to make the atmosphere a little bit nicer, apart from our ambitious bloody story.

    It was a cold rainy night and 4 mans were marching though the darkness. " How you holding up, up there Nate? " One of the mans asked and the other one angrily responded. " I told you this alot of times already, don't fucking call me Nate. My name is Russel and you all know that. " Russel answered in a angry mode. " Woow woow, don't you start mouthing of to be now Junior. The kid the world once knew under the name Russel doesn't exist anymore. You are my little boy and with your fresh new name and your strong new attidute the whole world can be your's. " Nate answered with a big grin on his face. He was laying his arm on Russel's shoulder and started a long and exhausting speech. " Pussys Junior Pussys. They will all try to catch a part of you..... " Russel tryed his best to not follow the conversation. He ignored him as good as he possible could and was barely listening. Russel was still feeling very guilty, he thought it had something to do with bad karma that he was in this situation again. If he just could go back in time and change the past he thought. " ...titts Junior titts, gotta grab them..." Nate continued and Russel was trying to concentrade on other things again. " I wish i would know what happened to them and if they are all okay. " He quietly said to himself as Nate was finally ending his emotional speech. " ...ass, you know boy. Don't you worry little man. Aslong as Papa Nate is around you, everything is gonna be just fine. "

  • edited February 2014

    Wait....this is the episode where most people die? THAT'S MY SPECIALTY!!! Omg, this is going to be the shortest retirement ever. FROSTY'S BACK BITCHES!! Mortal danger, here I come. Oh, and in case it wasn't obvious enough, literally just because killing characters is my specialty, (and I promised I'd post in episode 3....) I'm gonna post Soon!

  • I'm scared... Please don't kill people we don't know. We need to get to know them more. But go ahead with Robert he's been hanging around too long and is just a weirdo.

    maxbear29 posted: »

    Wait....this is the episode where most people die? THAT'S MY SPECIALTY!!! Omg, this is going to be the shortest retirement ever. FROSTY'S BACK

  • edited February 2014

    Okay just finished with " The awsome adventues of Papa Nate and his boy Russel-part 1". Please tell me what you think about it!

    Edit: I would just write this every now and then. Not all the time.

    I'm scared... Please don't kill people we don't know. We need to get to know them more. But go ahead with Robert he's been hanging around too long and is just a weirdo.

  • Disgusting but that's to be expected from our infamous Papa Nate. So in that case great job! I love how Russel is trying to block out Nate's talking. Poor Russel... Its going to be one long DLC. I just noticed we are now making a DLC in a DLC! The Awesome Adventures Of Russel and Papa Nate DLC(TAAORAPPN) inside or fan fic of the DLC 400 day's. We are genious!!!

    Okay just finished with " The awsome adventues of Papa Nate and his boy Russel-part 1". Please tell me what you think about it! Edit: I would just write this every now and then. Not all the time.

  • Yes we are my friend...yes we are:D

    I will try my best to make it even more disgusting in part2! But for now lets just go on with the normal story!

    Disgusting but that's to be expected from our infamous Papa Nate. So in that case great job! I love how Russel is trying to block out Nate's t

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