I don't know if I'm happy or scared to hear that but uh go ahead. And okay just waiting because maxbear I think said was going to post.
Edit: I call Michael's backstory... well hopefully.
Dude remember he had 3 sisters who died from zombies or Nate's group? How would they have died in a car accident? Anyway I'll clear that up in my post but you should edit out the car accident
Okay nice intro, i think we shouldn't add in more characters into the story for now. We need to find out more about the characters that are al… moreready in the story and get to know them better before we do so. By the way...you aren't quite right, there are 4 groups out there. You forgot about Nate and his boys. But we shouldn't spend to much time with their story anywayso its's okay:D
" Hello Joe, Breanna and Drew, i am Micheal and this is Lola. " Micheal said, but Lola didn't want to say a word to the strangers and just looked on her foots with a stare view. " Hello, nice to meet you, Micheal...Lola." Joe said as he was nodding towards Lola. " I would like to ask you two a few questions. First of all, who are this crazy people over there wearing the robes? And secondly, have you seen any other people pass by here lately. You have to know we are a group and got isolated from two of our people, when we were attacked by a horde of Walkers. " Joe ask… [view original content]
Dude remember he had 3 sisters who died from zombies or Nate's group? How would they have died in a car accident? Anyway I'll clear that up in my post but you should edit out the car accident
"I had lost hope after the death of my old group and sisters and decided that this group was just and could make me happy again. I was wrong. As I rose in their ranks they told me they sacrificed people to destroy sin and protect them from the lurkers. They began to tell everyone and I was the only one who thought it was crazy. I left them and set out to head to Wellington but remembered how Nate's group raped one of my sisters. I swore I would kill them but I never got the chance. I just couldn't leave you alone Lola, you remind me of my sister you know." Michael explained. "We should probably kill these bastards then!" Drew said. They all agreed to work together for now to kill all the priests and end their evil. They all took cover and began firing shooting at least 10 priests. Drew ran forward in a angry rage and killed three priests but was shot in the leg. At the time Joe had flanked them and shot the remaining seven. They all ran over to attend to Drew. Blood was all over the grass in long red streaks. "Are you okay?!!" Breanna said. "Just fine..." Drew said and died. "Fuck..." Joe said.
With his family i ment wife+children...that was before the apocolypse ( the outbreak) happened.
Edit: You could include his Sisters in your story, maybe they have something to do with him getting away of the " brother Dylan " culture.
No that was maxbear...Micheal told Lola and Vince that he was in a group of 7 people before...him, his 3 sisters a striper, his old neighbor and a college student. His sisters died and one of them was raped by Nate and his gang. Micheal never said when all of this happened. We are almost 1 and a half years inside the apocolypse, it could have happened after he left the " brother Ryan " culture.
Ok, I'm doing Eddie, Catilyn, Robert, Kenny, and Vince's story, gotta get this done..... Sorry it took so long, I had to talk to someone.
"C'mon, we got 4 more hours until sunset, let's find a resting place." Eddie said, as they arrived in a snowy town. It was the first week, 6th day, and they had barely left ton, and the more north they travel, the colder it is. They all piled into a house in a suburban neighborhood. Vince had his gun ready, in case of a walker. He found post-it notes all over the house, about locations, all crossed out, and 1 large 1 that said "Reena is here" and was over top of a post-it that said "Wellington." "I think the coast is clear. No shattered windows, the door was closed, and the guy went to look for someone named 'Reena' in Wellington, and it looks like a daughter, or wife, or sister or something." Vince said, reading the post-it. "Good, he's not here, no walkers, good place to sleep." Kenny said, opening a cupboard, and pulling out a duffle bag, filling it with all the cans of food in the house. "Food bag? Nice Ken." Eddie said. "Easy carryin', and can be refilled. Perfect." Everyone packed it in, and went to bed.
MIDNIGHT
Vince woke up, as he heard a bang in the kitchen, and a scream, then a few clangs. He rushed downstairs. Eddie was on the floor, with Robert holding a pan above his head. He had a bloody arm, and was screaming, and Robert just kept hitting his head. "HEY! ROBERT! STOP!" Vince yelled, as Robert looked horrified. "JESUS ROBERT! YOU SHOT MY ARM! OH YOU MOTHER F*CKER!" Eddie yelled, as Robert looked mildly surprised. "EDDIE! I'm sorry man, I thought you were a walker!" Everyone was awake at this point, and gathered. "I was restless, so I came out to look outside, and then Robbie started beating the hell outta me! My arm.........god......." "Ok, accident or not, this is a dangerous predicament, so we'll....have someone stay up, and make sure Eddie doesn't bleed out." Vince said "This is my fault, I'll do it." Robert said. "OH NO! you just tried to murder me! I am NOT letting you watch over me." Eddie said, spitefully, with a lot of pain. "Ok, I'll do it." Catilyn said, with a smile to Eddie. "I'll go get our medical supplies. We got BARELY enough thread and bandages to do this." Kenny said, as Vince went to go help Kenny. Everyone left, and Robert turned to Eddie, who was on the floor, alone, and said, with a cruel smile. "You lived, good for you, but next time.......I'll get the job done." He said, as Eddie passed out from blood loss, and Catilyn returned to help him, and Robert went back to his room.
MORNING
"Guys, I think Robert-" Eddie was saying, as Robert ran down the stairs. "Ok, new day, crack o' dawn, let's get moving!" Robert said, gleefully. Despite Eddie's injury, he could still walk, and they found a wheelchair in the shed, so he could still sit while they move. "Guys.....look." Vince said, leaning over to the bushes, picking up a camcorder with no battery cover, a few batteries (clearly fell out.) And a letter, addressed to Wellington, Reena. Also, there was a walker, sitting near them, laying down, it appeared he couldn't move, or was crawling slowly. Vince swooped down, and grabbed them. He put the batteries into the camcorder, and started watching. There was 1 video. It was 40 seconds long. It was a guy, in a wheelchair, going down the stairs. "Reena my love, I cannot spend any longer away from you. That Tavia lady took you to Wellington without me. She is cruel, and I will save you GEARGH!" The man was saying, as a walker grabbed him, and started biting him, as he dropped the camcorder backwards, and it turned off. "Batteries fell out. Looks like the guy didn't make it too far, he got bitten right out the door. There's also the letter." Vince said, opening it and reading it out loud. "Dearest Reena. I know I have been awful, and neglecting, but I love you! I have put a map from Wellington back to our house. I know they won't et me in there, but hopefully this will convince you to come back here. Your dearest, Antonio." "Hey! We can reverse that map, and go from here to wellington!" Kenny said, as Vince smiled, turned it upside-down, and they got moving
I'm kind of confused about the post its. But lol ROBERT IS EVIL!!! How did nobody hear what Robert said to Eddie at the end? At least you added to his personality . Eddie should tell them though that Robert is bad
Ok, I'm doing Eddie, Catilyn, Robert, Kenny, and Vince's story, gotta get this done..... Sorry it took so long, I had to talk to someone.
"… moreC'mon, we got 4 more hours until sunset, let's find a resting place." Eddie said, as they arrived in a snowy town. It was the first week, 6th day, and they had barely left ton, and the more north they travel, the colder it is. They all piled into a house in a suburban neighborhood. Vince had his gun ready, in case of a walker. He found post-it notes all over the house, about locations, all crossed out, and 1 large 1 that said "Reena is here" and was over top of a post-it that said "Wellington." "I think the coast is clear. No shattered windows, the door was closed, and the guy went to look for someone named 'Reena' in Wellington, and it looks like a daughter, or wife, or sister or something." Vince said, reading the post-it. "Good, he's not here, no walkers, good place to sleep." Kenny said, opening a cupbo… [view original content]
I'm kind of confused about the post its. But lol ROBERT IS EVIL!!! How did nobody hear what Robert said to Eddie at the end? At least you added to his personality . Eddie should tell them though that Robert is bad
No that was maxbear...Micheal told Lola and Vince that he was in a group of 7 people before...him, his 3 sisters a striper, his old neighbor a… morend a college student. His sisters died and one of them was raped by Nate and his gang. Micheal never said when all of this happened. We are almost 1 and a half years inside the apocolypse, it could have happened after he left the " brother Ryan " culture.
Ok, literally Robert snuck up on him when he wasn't looking and beat him up, using "I thought you were a walker" as an excuse. The first time he'd thought it was malicious, is when Robert said it was intentional. The post-it notes, on the other hand......Look, I'm tied, and I'll edit it in in the morning, but right now......sleep!
"I had lost hope after the death of my old group and sisters and decided that this group was just and could make me happy again. I was wrong. … moreAs I rose in their ranks they told me they sacrificed people to destroy sin and protect them from the lurkers. They began to tell everyone and I was the only one who thought it was crazy. I left them and set out to head to Wellington but remembered how Nate's group raped one of my sisters. I swore I would kill them but I never got the chance. I just couldn't leave you alone Lola, you remind me of my sister you know." Michael explained. "We should probably kill these bastards then!" Drew said. They all agreed to work together for now to kill all the priests and end their evil. They all took cover and began firing shooting at least 10 priests. Drew ran forward in a angry rage and killed three priests but was shot in the leg. At the time Joe had flanked them and shot the remaining seven. They all ran over to a… [view original content]
Since he was small I guess he didn't have as much blood as most people and during the 5 minute-ish fight he just couldn't survive much longer. So when he was crawling for help he just lost too much blood and died before they could patch him up.
The backstory is perfect and everything...but why did Drew die after he got shot in the leg? Did the priest's have poisened arrows?:D
Edit:… more Okay that makes sense aswell...sry
By the way i loved the part " Blood was all over the grass in long red streaks ". Fits in perfectly since this is the name of the episode!
Ok, literally Robert snuck up on him when he wasn't looking and beat him up, using "I thought you were a walker" as an excuse. The first time … morehe'd thought it was malicious, is when Robert said it was intentional. The post-it notes, on the other hand......Look, I'm tied, and I'll edit it in in the morning, but right now......sleep!
Just like a phoenix " The Walking Mustache " will rise out of the ashes after death and will return even bigger and even better.
My name shall be rememberd and never forgotten. Here i am back again, ready to fullfil my task.
" So...Jane... " Wyatt shyly said. " Yes Wyatt? " Jane responded. " I was just wondering if the two of us...maybe someday we could...we should get to know each other a little better. " Wyatt said and he seemed a little broken. " I think that's a great idea Wyatt. Why don't you start? I would really enjoy a conversation right now. " Jane happily responded with a smile on her face. " Okay uhmm i am Wyatt, but i gues you know that already. I am ehhm... " Wyatt quietly whispered and he seemed very nervous. " What did you say Wyatt? I can't understand you when u are peeping like that. " Jane said and was coming a bit closer towards Wyatt. Wyatt was so perplexed about this that he totally forgot about what he was trying to tell her, so he just told her the first thing that came up to his mind. " You see Jane ehhhm...you know one time my friend Eddie was going out with this girl named Abigal, she told him that she was 5 years old or something and her dad toke her to a freak show. They saw some crazy shit right there, there was a chick with two heads, a dude with lobster hands and some kind of monkey human thing with a dick for a face and she also said there was a little girl in there with the size of an apple but he called bullshit on that...the point is they saw some guy standing in there bucked naked and singing this weird song... " Wyatt was interrupted by James, he was the advanced guard of their little group and he just came back from his watch. " I am such an idiot...why am i telling her this stupid story? " He thought. " What you wanna hear first guys? The good news or the bad news? " James asked and Jane answerd him. " The good news James, we could all use some good news right now. " She answered. " Well the good news are there is still no sign of this crazy priests you were talking about before Wyatt, i think we should find some place safe and stay there to sleep over night. " He said. " And the bad news? " Wyatt asked. " The bad news are, there are still many miles of road ahead of us and it's getting dark already. There also is a little group of Walkers about 500meters in this direction. " James said while he was pointing at the direction he just came back from. " That's how it's gonna be then. We need to get pass by this Walkers and keep heading towards Wellington. If there is any place in this world where we can be safe and where we will find our friends again, it's Wellington. " Wyatt said and they all agreed on that. " I better get back on watch again. " James said and walked back towards the direction he just came from. As soon as he disappeared an awkward sylence occured and Wyatt was feeling very ashamed of himself. " I wanna hear the end of the story Wyatt. " Jane said and she was leering into Wyatts face. " Yeah right...so ehhm the guy was singing this weird song you know and then the guy peed on her dad. " Wyatt said and he still couldn't believe what an idiot he was. Jane suddenly started laughing tears and Wyatt almost couldn't believe it. " Let's Tom Cruise our way out of here Wyatt. " She said and Wyatt was to astound to give her an answer.
LOL that awkward story Eddie was telling! Also isn't James dead? In some post they were climbing the wall so Wyatt lifted Jane and James lifted Wyatt. But no one could lift James so he died. Btw why you have two accounts?
Well...yes i am me.
By the way, here is my next Post!
" So...Jane... " Wyatt shyly said. " Yes Wyatt? " Jane responded. " I was just won… moredering if the two of us...maybe someday we could...we should get to know each other a little better. " Wyatt said and he seemed a little broken. " I think that's a great idea Wyatt. Why don't you start? I would really enjoy a conversation right now. " Jane happily responded with a smile on her face. " Okay uhmm i am Wyatt, but i gues you know that already. I am ehhm... " Wyatt quietly whispered and he seemed very nervous. " What did you say Wyatt? I can't understand you when u are peeping like that. " Jane said and was coming a bit closer towards Wyatt. Wyatt was so perplexed about this that he totally forgot about what he was trying to tell her, so he just told her the first thing that came up to his mind. " You see Jane ehhhm...you know one time my friend Eddie was going out with this girl named Abigal, s… [view original content]
LOL that awkward story Eddie was telling! Also isn't James dead? In some post they were climbing the wall so Wyatt lifted Jane and James lifted Wyatt. But no one could lift James so he died. Btw why you have two accounts?
It was the part that maxbear wrote, but we decided to cut it out of the story...so James never died in any of our Posts.
Edit: Yes we agreed to abandon that Post, because episode2 was already over when he wrote it. So James is still alive after all (Yea! More people to kill off!:)
LOL that awkward story Eddie was telling! Also isn't James dead? In some post they were climbing the wall so Wyatt lifted Jane and James lifted Wyatt. But no one could lift James so he died. Btw why you have two accounts?
It was the part that maxbear wrote, but we decided to cut it out of the story...so James never died in any of our Posts.
Edit: Yes we agree… mored to abandon that Post, because episode2 was already over when he wrote it. So James is still alive after all (Yea! More people to kill off!:)
"We need to get to Wellington it's safe there" Michael stated breaking the silence of the death of Drew. "But my friends..." Lola said. "I will go back to look for them but you have to go there now!" Michael said more angrily. "My sister is out there somewhere we need to look for her!" Breanna said. "I'll gather up any of your friends but you have to promise me you will get to Wellington safely." Michael said. "We promise" Lola and Breanna said in unison. "Its settled then. Joe you better make sure these two make it there safely or I will hunt you down." Michael said. Lola hugged Michael goodbye, Breanna awkwardly waved and Joe shook his hand "Don't worry shes in good hands now" Joe said. (Don't make anyone else evil! Robert is enough for this episode)
Kenny's group set up for the night. As they all settled in and ate some food they all went to sleep... Robert was on watch. Robert walked toward Eddie and put a bag over Eddie's head. Eddie tried to scream as he awoke but he was then knocked out. Eddie awoke tied to a tree his mouth gagged "You made a mistake fighting back at the town. And now I'm going to make sure that the job is done." Robert said evilly and put his gun to Eddie's forehead. Robert laughed as he watched Eddie struggle and then... he pulled the trigger. Robert walked back to camp and Kenny was up and came toward him "Why did you shoot?" Kenny asked. "A walker had me pinned down I had no choice." Robert replied innocently. "Well the walkers are going to start coming now. We better get moving." Kenny said a little angry. The group awoke and started down the road. A silhouette was walking towards them. He wore a hood and had a bow on his back. "Guys... Where's Eddie?" Caitlyn said behind them.
Sorry about Eddie. Robert needed to finish the "job"
I leave a lot of questions unanswered in my posts intentionally so that others can come up with their own conclusion, and make it part of the story. But sometimes nobody answers the question Ex. Why did Tavia drive away? Nobody bothered to answer that! Sometimes, when I leave unanswered questions in the post, fill them in yourself! That's often the point! Although, sometimes, I do just forget to answer a question.
" Jesus are you fucking kidding me? " Wow...Eddies death kinda shoked me right now. I will make Kenny (or Vince) kill that son of a bitch the first chance i get!
Edit: You seem to forget that Robert isn't the only evil person out there...don't forget about " The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel! ".
Unknown reason ban? Damn I'm scared now .
"We need to get to Wellington it's safe there" Michael stated breaking the silence of the death o… moref Drew. "But my friends..." Lola said. "I will go back to look for them but you have to go there now!" Michael said more angrily. "My sister is out there somewhere we need to look for her!" Breanna said. "I'll gather up any of your friends but you have to promise me you will get to Wellington safely." Michael said. "We promise" Lola and Breanna said in unison. "Its settled then. Joe you better make sure these two make it there safely or I will hunt you down." Michael said. Lola hugged Michael goodbye, Breanna awkwardly waved and Joe shook his hand "Don't worry shes in good hands now" Joe said. (Don't make anyone else evil! Robert is enough for this episode)
Kenny's group set up for the night. As they all settled in and ate some food they all went to sleep... Robert was on watch. Robert walked toward Eddi… [view original content]
I leave a lot of questions unanswered in my posts intentionally so that others can come up with their own conclusion, and make it part of the … morestory. But sometimes nobody answers the question Ex. Why did Tavia drive away? Nobody bothered to answer that! Sometimes, when I leave unanswered questions in the post, fill them in yourself! That's often the point! Although, sometimes, I do just forget to answer a question.
Dammit, I thought Walk- Clemintine-Everett was doing Nate and Russel, as well as Wyatt and Jane, Blades was doing Micheal and Lola, and I was doing Kenny and Vince's group. I guess not. Anyway, posting, still for Kenny's group (I had a big chunk of story all planned out, and Eddie's death screws all of it up), so from this point on, I'll pretty much be winging it until I can string a story together. Also, kindly requesting that I do the bulk of this one. Feel free to add to it, and I don't want it to be sacred to me or anything, I just kinda want to handle most of it, at least for a while. Also, the entire part is a narration that is entirely there to explain the relationships between the group, specifically Robert's relationship with the group, especially how they suspect him. So sorry if that breaks up the flow of the game, it just had to be done, It mostly consists of what they think of each other, but don't share, which to explain in non-explanatory-text-chunk form would require a series of self-monologues, which I hate.
Moving down the road, Kenny started to grow suspicious of Robert. He was almost....cartoonish with how innocent and naive he was.......or was pretending to be. Vince was kind of picking up on small amounts of passive aggression, just barely noticeable, coating every word he was saying. Not suspicious, but certainly annoying. Catilyn denied seeing any suspicious activity, as her and Robert constantly had conversations about very poetic things, that they both loved, and she thought of him as a lost puppy. Sad, defenseless, and adorable. Although she saw the most red flags with Robert, such as mutilated weasels, rabbits, and cats, in the bushes in close proximity to his tent, she ignored them. She refused to see him as anything else then a perfect boyfriend......he saw her as a sex object. He'd get close to her, start up a relationship, they'd have sex, and then he'd dispose of her. Plus he got a thrill off the idea of her not seeing it coming, and seeing the look on her face as she died. And the sad part was.......it was working.
Guys we already talked this though...the part with Tavia and the car i mean. They were attacked by a group of Walkers and the Walkers where chasing after them. Tavia crashed the car in a move of frusttration and then they got seperated from each other, Shel and Becca running of on their own, Tavia running into the wood because she was chased by one of the Walkers and Wyatt was saved by Kenny. About the wheelchair part on the other hand...
I leave a lot of questions unanswered in my posts intentionally so that others can come up with their own conclusion, and make it part of the … morestory. But sometimes nobody answers the question Ex. Why did Tavia drive away? Nobody bothered to answer that! Sometimes, when I leave unanswered questions in the post, fill them in yourself! That's often the point! Although, sometimes, I do just forget to answer a question.
" Jesus are you fucking kidding me? " Wow...Eddies death kinda shoked me right now. I will make Kenny (or Vince) kill that son of a bitch the … morefirst chance i get!
Edit: You seem to forget that Robert isn't the only evil person out there...don't forget about " The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel! ".
Dammit, I thought Walk- Clemintine-Everett was doing Nate and Russel, as well as Wyatt and Jane, Blades was doing Micheal and Lola, and I was … moredoing Kenny and Vince's group. I guess not. Anyway, posting, still for Kenny's group (I had a big chunk of story all planned out, and Eddie's death screws all of it up), so from this point on, I'll pretty much be winging it until I can string a story together. Also, kindly requesting that I do the bulk of this one. Feel free to add to it, and I don't want it to be sacred to me or anything, I just kinda want to handle most of it, at least for a while. Also, the entire part is a narration that is entirely there to explain the relationships between the group, specifically Robert's relationship with the group, especially how they suspect him. So sorry if that breaks up the flow of the game, it just had to be done, It mostly consists of what they think of each other, but don't share, which to explain in non-expl… [view original content]
I was very shocked/suprised and that is a good thing, because that what's the Walking Dead is all about. I didn't saw it coming.
I agree that Nates gang needs to die (except Papa nate and Nate Junior ofc), i also think we should kill 1 or 2 of the old group (Vince,Eddie). But i don't think we necessarilly need to keep everyone of the new people alive. Killing some of them off will lead to character developments for others (for example killing Breanna will develope Caithlyn's character). Our beloved Villian Robert needs to die ofcourse, he dissgusts me even more than Nates gang at the moment:D. And yes the Mustache man must live on aswell!
Shocked in good way or bad? Here's my list of people who need to live to see next episode in no specific order.
Breanna & Caitlyn (need… more to reunite!)
Kenny(The stache must live a little longer! But he is too beast to be living this long...)
Jane & James & Joe (Haha all J names. They all need more development!)
Lola(She's been through a lot and deserves more time)
So since this episode is for killing so far we have killed, Drew, and Eddie. People I think should die if we needed to kill anyone.
Vince(Been around here for too long. This will also add to more Lola development!)
Wyatt(Make sure he finds out Eddie is dead first! And he does weed. Look what happened to Eddie.)
Robert(Our beloved villain. Kill him in the end if he should die.)
I'm assuming the awesome adventures of Russel and Papa Nate are not DLC and part of episode 3 so:
Thomas & Dylan (These fools need to be taught a lesson)
Russel (He d… [view original content]
Well we did never say that we all had our own parts (except the awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel, that's my part:) , but if that's how you guys wanna do it i can agree on that. I don't care to much to be honest.
Dammit, I thought Walk- Clemintine-Everett was doing Nate and Russel, as well as Wyatt and Jane, Blades was doing Micheal and Lola, and I was … moredoing Kenny and Vince's group. I guess not. Anyway, posting, still for Kenny's group (I had a big chunk of story all planned out, and Eddie's death screws all of it up), so from this point on, I'll pretty much be winging it until I can string a story together. Also, kindly requesting that I do the bulk of this one. Feel free to add to it, and I don't want it to be sacred to me or anything, I just kinda want to handle most of it, at least for a while. Also, the entire part is a narration that is entirely there to explain the relationships between the group, specifically Robert's relationship with the group, especially how they suspect him. So sorry if that breaks up the flow of the game, it just had to be done, It mostly consists of what they think of each other, but don't share, which to explain in non-expl… [view original content]
Well we did never say that we all had our own parts (except the awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel, that's my part:) , but if that's how you guys wanna do it i can agree on that. I don't care to much to be honest.
Haha Eddie hardly lived a whole episode. Yeah maybe one more death from the old group. I'm suggesting Vince but that's just me.
Next episode I'm thinking they get to Wellington and stay there for most of the episode (fingers crossed its safe and not another Woodbury!) I want it to be a good place where we can get to know our characters more. And while our characters are developing Robert is secretly murdering people. But episode 5 they need to leave Wellington maybe because people were getting murdered(sneaky Robert) and they didn't think it was safe anymore. For new characters to die yes I agree Breanna should die at some point but when everyone is at Wellington maybe Robert murders her and then that causes group to leave at the end of episode 4. Also Wellington should be found at end of episode 3. This is just my idea. What do you think it should be like?
I was very shocked/suprised and that is a good thing, because that what's the Walking Dead is all about. I didn't saw it coming.
I agree th… moreat Nates gang needs to die (except Papa nate and Nate Junior ofc), i also think we should kill 1 or 2 of the old group (Vince,Eddie). But i don't think we necessarilly need to keep everyone of the new people alive. Killing some of them off will lead to character developments for others (for example killing Breanna will develope Caithlyn's character). Our beloved Villian Robert needs to die ofcourse, he dissgusts me even more than Nates gang at the moment:D. And yes the Mustache man must live on aswell!
WHAT DA FACK! NOOOOOO. Robert damn you... So much for the sister reuniting...
Hes so good he needs to live to the next episode. (I'm serious)
Just random thing I thought about. When Kenny suspects Robert was killer. Robert runs away. The whole group is at Wellington. An escaped Brother Ryan, Carver, and Robert come to Wellington with an army. But don't actually do that I just thought I should share this random idea.
Dammit, I thought Walk- Clemintine-Everett was doing Nate and Russel, as well as Wyatt and Jane, Blades was doing Micheal and Lola, and I was … moredoing Kenny and Vince's group. I guess not. Anyway, posting, still for Kenny's group (I had a big chunk of story all planned out, and Eddie's death screws all of it up), so from this point on, I'll pretty much be winging it until I can string a story together. Also, kindly requesting that I do the bulk of this one. Feel free to add to it, and I don't want it to be sacred to me or anything, I just kinda want to handle most of it, at least for a while. Also, the entire part is a narration that is entirely there to explain the relationships between the group, specifically Robert's relationship with the group, especially how they suspect him. So sorry if that breaks up the flow of the game, it just had to be done, It mostly consists of what they think of each other, but don't share, which to explain in non-expl… [view original content]
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I don't know if I'm happy or scared to hear that but uh go ahead. And okay just waiting because maxbear I think said was going to post.
Edit: I call Michael's backstory... well hopefully.
" I am gonna Post soon ".
I gues he uses the word soon just like Telltale likes to use it:D
Edit: Yes sure, go ahead and write it man!
Dude remember he had 3 sisters who died from zombies or Nate's group? How would they have died in a car accident? Anyway I'll clear that up in my post but you should edit out the car accident
With his family i ment wife+children...that was before the apocolypse ( the outbreak) happened.
Edit: You could include his Sisters in your story, maybe they have something to do with him getting away of the " brother Dylan " culture.
"I had lost hope after the death of my old group and sisters and decided that this group was just and could make me happy again. I was wrong. As I rose in their ranks they told me they sacrificed people to destroy sin and protect them from the lurkers. They began to tell everyone and I was the only one who thought it was crazy. I left them and set out to head to Wellington but remembered how Nate's group raped one of my sisters. I swore I would kill them but I never got the chance. I just couldn't leave you alone Lola, you remind me of my sister you know." Michael explained. "We should probably kill these bastards then!" Drew said. They all agreed to work together for now to kill all the priests and end their evil. They all took cover and began firing shooting at least 10 priests. Drew ran forward in a angry rage and killed three priests but was shot in the leg. At the time Joe had flanked them and shot the remaining seven. They all ran over to attend to Drew. Blood was all over the grass in long red streaks. "Are you okay?!!" Breanna said. "Just fine..." Drew said and died. "Fuck..." Joe said.
I believe it was you who said his sisters died in his group of 7 with. You know the twins and his other sister.
No that was maxbear...Micheal told Lola and Vince that he was in a group of 7 people before...him, his 3 sisters a striper, his old neighbor and a college student. His sisters died and one of them was raped by Nate and his gang. Micheal never said when all of this happened. We are almost 1 and a half years inside the apocolypse, it could have happened after he left the " brother Ryan " culture.
Ok, I'm doing Eddie, Catilyn, Robert, Kenny, and Vince's story, gotta get this done..... Sorry it took so long, I had to talk to someone.
"C'mon, we got 4 more hours until sunset, let's find a resting place." Eddie said, as they arrived in a snowy town. It was the first week, 6th day, and they had barely left ton, and the more north they travel, the colder it is. They all piled into a house in a suburban neighborhood. Vince had his gun ready, in case of a walker. He found post-it notes all over the house, about locations, all crossed out, and 1 large 1 that said "Reena is here" and was over top of a post-it that said "Wellington." "I think the coast is clear. No shattered windows, the door was closed, and the guy went to look for someone named 'Reena' in Wellington, and it looks like a daughter, or wife, or sister or something." Vince said, reading the post-it. "Good, he's not here, no walkers, good place to sleep." Kenny said, opening a cupboard, and pulling out a duffle bag, filling it with all the cans of food in the house. "Food bag? Nice Ken." Eddie said. "Easy carryin', and can be refilled. Perfect." Everyone packed it in, and went to bed.
MIDNIGHT
Vince woke up, as he heard a bang in the kitchen, and a scream, then a few clangs. He rushed downstairs. Eddie was on the floor, with Robert holding a pan above his head. He had a bloody arm, and was screaming, and Robert just kept hitting his head. "HEY! ROBERT! STOP!" Vince yelled, as Robert looked horrified. "JESUS ROBERT! YOU SHOT MY ARM! OH YOU MOTHER F*CKER!" Eddie yelled, as Robert looked mildly surprised. "EDDIE! I'm sorry man, I thought you were a walker!" Everyone was awake at this point, and gathered. "I was restless, so I came out to look outside, and then Robbie started beating the hell outta me! My arm.........god......." "Ok, accident or not, this is a dangerous predicament, so we'll....have someone stay up, and make sure Eddie doesn't bleed out." Vince said "This is my fault, I'll do it." Robert said. "OH NO! you just tried to murder me! I am NOT letting you watch over me." Eddie said, spitefully, with a lot of pain. "Ok, I'll do it." Catilyn said, with a smile to Eddie. "I'll go get our medical supplies. We got BARELY enough thread and bandages to do this." Kenny said, as Vince went to go help Kenny. Everyone left, and Robert turned to Eddie, who was on the floor, alone, and said, with a cruel smile. "You lived, good for you, but next time.......I'll get the job done." He said, as Eddie passed out from blood loss, and Catilyn returned to help him, and Robert went back to his room.
MORNING
"Guys, I think Robert-" Eddie was saying, as Robert ran down the stairs. "Ok, new day, crack o' dawn, let's get moving!" Robert said, gleefully. Despite Eddie's injury, he could still walk, and they found a wheelchair in the shed, so he could still sit while they move. "Guys.....look." Vince said, leaning over to the bushes, picking up a camcorder with no battery cover, a few batteries (clearly fell out.) And a letter, addressed to Wellington, Reena. Also, there was a walker, sitting near them, laying down, it appeared he couldn't move, or was crawling slowly. Vince swooped down, and grabbed them. He put the batteries into the camcorder, and started watching. There was 1 video. It was 40 seconds long. It was a guy, in a wheelchair, going down the stairs. "Reena my love, I cannot spend any longer away from you. That Tavia lady took you to Wellington without me. She is cruel, and I will save you GEARGH!" The man was saying, as a walker grabbed him, and started biting him, as he dropped the camcorder backwards, and it turned off. "Batteries fell out. Looks like the guy didn't make it too far, he got bitten right out the door. There's also the letter." Vince said, opening it and reading it out loud. "Dearest Reena. I know I have been awful, and neglecting, but I love you! I have put a map from Wellington back to our house. I know they won't et me in there, but hopefully this will convince you to come back here. Your dearest, Antonio." "Hey! We can reverse that map, and go from here to wellington!" Kenny said, as Vince smiled, turned it upside-down, and they got moving
Shuddup
I'm kind of confused about the post its. But lol ROBERT IS EVIL!!! How did nobody hear what Robert said to Eddie at the end? At least you added to his personality
. Eddie should tell them though that Robert is bad
Yes i am kinda confussed about that aswell but...who know's.
Edit: Forget it:D...Micheals backstory is fine now!
Sorry! Too late then I just assumed it happened before and he used his sadness to join the brotherhood. And isn't it Brother Ryan?
Yes it is " brother Ryan " ofc...my mistake.
Edit: It all makes perfect sense now! Thanks.
Ok, I did have a point for those post-its, I just didn't write it. Would you guys like me to edit that on? Because that won't take long.
Yes Edit it please, it would be nice to see what happened beetwen the 2of them, or why Eddie wouldn't tell the group about it.
Ok, literally Robert snuck up on him when he wasn't looking and beat him up, using "I thought you were a walker" as an excuse. The first time he'd thought it was malicious, is when Robert said it was intentional. The post-it notes, on the other hand......Look, I'm tied, and I'll edit it in in the morning, but right now......sleep!
The backstory is perfect and everything...but why did Drew die after he got shot in the leg? Did the priest's have poisened arrows?:D
Edit: Okay that makes sense aswell...sry
By the way i loved the part " Blood was all over the grass in long red streaks ". Fits in perfectly since this is the name of the episode!
Since he was small I guess he didn't have as much blood as most people and during the 5 minute-ish fight he just couldn't survive much longer. So when he was crawling for help he just lost too much blood and died before they could patch him up.
Just like a phoenix " The Walking Mustache " will rise out of the ashes after death and will return even bigger and even better.
My name shall be rememberd and never forgotten. Here i am back again, ready to fullfil my task.
I'm confused? Why would they not take the wheelchair guy. Oh damn... Please don't make it another Crawford
??? So are you saying you are him?
Well...yes i am me.
By the way, here is my next Post!
" So...Jane... " Wyatt shyly said. " Yes Wyatt? " Jane responded. " I was just wondering if the two of us...maybe someday we could...we should get to know each other a little better. " Wyatt said and he seemed a little broken. " I think that's a great idea Wyatt. Why don't you start? I would really enjoy a conversation right now. " Jane happily responded with a smile on her face. " Okay uhmm i am Wyatt, but i gues you know that already. I am ehhm... " Wyatt quietly whispered and he seemed very nervous. " What did you say Wyatt? I can't understand you when u are peeping like that. " Jane said and was coming a bit closer towards Wyatt. Wyatt was so perplexed about this that he totally forgot about what he was trying to tell her, so he just told her the first thing that came up to his mind. " You see Jane ehhhm...you know one time my friend Eddie was going out with this girl named Abigal, she told him that she was 5 years old or something and her dad toke her to a freak show. They saw some crazy shit right there, there was a chick with two heads, a dude with lobster hands and some kind of monkey human thing with a dick for a face and she also said there was a little girl in there with the size of an apple but he called bullshit on that...the point is they saw some guy standing in there bucked naked and singing this weird song... " Wyatt was interrupted by James, he was the advanced guard of their little group and he just came back from his watch. " I am such an idiot...why am i telling her this stupid story? " He thought. " What you wanna hear first guys? The good news or the bad news? " James asked and Jane answerd him. " The good news James, we could all use some good news right now. " She answered. " Well the good news are there is still no sign of this crazy priests you were talking about before Wyatt, i think we should find some place safe and stay there to sleep over night. " He said. " And the bad news? " Wyatt asked. " The bad news are, there are still many miles of road ahead of us and it's getting dark already. There also is a little group of Walkers about 500meters in this direction. " James said while he was pointing at the direction he just came back from. " That's how it's gonna be then. We need to get pass by this Walkers and keep heading towards Wellington. If there is any place in this world where we can be safe and where we will find our friends again, it's Wellington. " Wyatt said and they all agreed on that. " I better get back on watch again. " James said and walked back towards the direction he just came from. As soon as he disappeared an awkward sylence occured and Wyatt was feeling very ashamed of himself. " I wanna hear the end of the story Wyatt. " Jane said and she was leering into Wyatts face. " Yeah right...so ehhm the guy was singing this weird song you know and then the guy peed on her dad. " Wyatt said and he still couldn't believe what an idiot he was. Jane suddenly started laughing tears and Wyatt almost couldn't believe it. " Let's Tom Cruise our way out of here Wyatt. " She said and Wyatt was to astound to give her an answer.
LOL that awkward story Eddie was telling! Also isn't James dead? In some post they were climbing the wall so Wyatt lifted Jane and James lifted Wyatt. But no one could lift James so he died. Btw why you have two accounts?
My other account was banned for some unknown reason, so i had to create a new one! (The story must go on after all).
It was the part that maxbear wrote, but we decided to cut it out of the story...so James never died in any of our Posts.
Edit: Yes we agreed to abandon that Post, because episode2 was already over when he wrote it. So James is still alive after all (Yea! More people to kill off!:)
Ohhh. That explains. Okay in the case James is alive because I believe we abandoned that post.
Unknown reason ban? Damn I'm scared now
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"We need to get to Wellington it's safe there" Michael stated breaking the silence of the death of Drew. "But my friends..." Lola said. "I will go back to look for them but you have to go there now!" Michael said more angrily. "My sister is out there somewhere we need to look for her!" Breanna said. "I'll gather up any of your friends but you have to promise me you will get to Wellington safely." Michael said. "We promise" Lola and Breanna said in unison. "Its settled then. Joe you better make sure these two make it there safely or I will hunt you down." Michael said. Lola hugged Michael goodbye, Breanna awkwardly waved and Joe shook his hand "Don't worry shes in good hands now" Joe said. (Don't make anyone else evil! Robert is enough for this episode)
Kenny's group set up for the night. As they all settled in and ate some food they all went to sleep... Robert was on watch. Robert walked toward Eddie and put a bag over Eddie's head. Eddie tried to scream as he awoke but he was then knocked out. Eddie awoke tied to a tree his mouth gagged "You made a mistake fighting back at the town. And now I'm going to make sure that the job is done." Robert said evilly and put his gun to Eddie's forehead. Robert laughed as he watched Eddie struggle and then... he pulled the trigger. Robert walked back to camp and Kenny was up and came toward him "Why did you shoot?" Kenny asked. "A walker had me pinned down I had no choice." Robert replied innocently. "Well the walkers are going to start coming now. We better get moving." Kenny said a little angry. The group awoke and started down the road. A silhouette was walking towards them. He wore a hood and had a bow on his back. "Guys... Where's Eddie?" Caitlyn said behind them.
Sorry about Eddie. Robert needed to finish the "job"
I leave a lot of questions unanswered in my posts intentionally so that others can come up with their own conclusion, and make it part of the story. But sometimes nobody answers the question Ex. Why did Tavia drive away? Nobody bothered to answer that! Sometimes, when I leave unanswered questions in the post, fill them in yourself! That's often the point! Although, sometimes, I do just forget to answer a question.
" Jesus are you fucking kidding me? " Wow...Eddies death kinda shoked me right now. I will make Kenny (or Vince) kill that son of a bitch the first chance i get!
Edit: You seem to forget that Robert isn't the only evil person out there...don't forget about " The awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel! ".
We assumed Tavia drove away because there were a bunch of walkers. Although when Bonnie, Russel, and Vince got to the road it was "Empty"
Dammit, I thought Walk- Clemintine-Everett was doing Nate and Russel, as well as Wyatt and Jane, Blades was doing Micheal and Lola, and I was doing Kenny and Vince's group. I guess not. Anyway, posting, still for Kenny's group (I had a big chunk of story all planned out, and Eddie's death screws all of it up), so from this point on, I'll pretty much be winging it until I can string a story together. Also, kindly requesting that I do the bulk of this one. Feel free to add to it, and I don't want it to be sacred to me or anything, I just kinda want to handle most of it, at least for a while. Also, the entire part is a narration that is entirely there to explain the relationships between the group, specifically Robert's relationship with the group, especially how they suspect him. So sorry if that breaks up the flow of the game, it just had to be done, It mostly consists of what they think of each other, but don't share, which to explain in non-explanatory-text-chunk form would require a series of self-monologues, which I hate.
Moving down the road, Kenny started to grow suspicious of Robert. He was almost....cartoonish with how innocent and naive he was.......or was pretending to be. Vince was kind of picking up on small amounts of passive aggression, just barely noticeable, coating every word he was saying. Not suspicious, but certainly annoying. Catilyn denied seeing any suspicious activity, as her and Robert constantly had conversations about very poetic things, that they both loved, and she thought of him as a lost puppy. Sad, defenseless, and adorable. Although she saw the most red flags with Robert, such as mutilated weasels, rabbits, and cats, in the bushes in close proximity to his tent, she ignored them. She refused to see him as anything else then a perfect boyfriend......he saw her as a sex object. He'd get close to her, start up a relationship, they'd have sex, and then he'd dispose of her. Plus he got a thrill off the idea of her not seeing it coming, and seeing the look on her face as she died. And the sad part was.......it was working.
Guys we already talked this though...the part with Tavia and the car i mean. They were attacked by a group of Walkers and the Walkers where chasing after them. Tavia crashed the car in a move of frusttration and then they got seperated from each other, Shel and Becca running of on their own, Tavia running into the wood because she was chased by one of the Walkers and Wyatt was saved by Kenny. About the wheelchair part on the other hand...
Shocked in good way or bad? Here's my list of people who need to live to see next episode in no specific order.
Breanna & Caitlyn (need to reunite!)
Kenny(The stache must live a little longer! But he is too beast to be living this long...)
Jane & James & Joe (Haha all J names. They all need more development!)
Lola(She's been through a lot and deserves more time)
So since this episode is for killing so far we have killed, Drew, and Eddie. People I think should die if we needed to kill anyone.
Vince(Been around here for too long. This will also add to more Lola development!)
Wyatt(Make sure he finds out Eddie is dead first! And he does weed. Look what happened to Eddie.)
Robert(Our beloved villain. Kill him in the end if he should die.)
I'm assuming the awesome adventures of Russel and Papa Nate are not DLC and part of episode 3 so:
Thomas & Dylan (These fools need to be taught a lesson)
Russel (He doesn't seem the survivor type to me.)
Michael and Nate however I want their status to end off as unknown. They are beasts and need to just disappear before they get killed
Oh. Sorry. I didn't think we all had our own.
I was very shocked/suprised and that is a good thing, because that what's the Walking Dead is all about. I didn't saw it coming.
I agree that Nates gang needs to die (except Papa nate and Nate Junior ofc), i also think we should kill 1 or 2 of the old group (Vince,Eddie). But i don't think we necessarilly need to keep everyone of the new people alive. Killing some of them off will lead to character developments for others (for example killing Breanna will develope Caithlyn's character). Our beloved Villian Robert needs to die ofcourse, he dissgusts me even more than Nates gang at the moment:D. And yes the Mustache man must live on aswell!
Well we did never say that we all had our own parts (except the awsome adventures of Papa Nate and his boy Russel, that's my part:) , but if that's how you guys wanna do it i can agree on that. I don't care to much to be honest.
Me neither I just do what ever part I feel like doing
Haha Eddie hardly lived a whole episode. Yeah maybe one more death from the old group. I'm suggesting Vince but that's just me.
Next episode I'm thinking they get to Wellington and stay there for most of the episode (fingers crossed its safe and not another Woodbury!) I want it to be a good place where we can get to know our characters more. And while our characters are developing Robert is secretly murdering people. But episode 5 they need to leave Wellington maybe because people were getting murdered(sneaky Robert) and they didn't think it was safe anymore. For new characters to die yes I agree Breanna should die at some point but when everyone is at Wellington maybe Robert murders her and then that causes group to leave at the end of episode 4. Also Wellington should be found at end of episode 3. This is just my idea. What do you think it should be like?
WHAT DA FACK! NOOOOOO. Robert damn you... So much for the sister reuniting...
Hes so good he needs to live to the next episode. (I'm serious)
Just random thing I thought about. When Kenny suspects Robert was killer. Robert runs away. The whole group is at Wellington. An escaped Brother Ryan, Carver, and Robert come to Wellington with an army. But don't actually do that I just thought I should share this random idea.