100% agree. Hsp you shouldn't act like that. They don't steal people. I'm on the 400 days one, the Zyphon one and this one. I used to be on the tales one but I just gave up because I didn't want to balance 4 fan-fics.
(Please listen to this: )
Slowly reloading the gun, Jack's hands start to tremble. Breathing becomes harder by the second. A mix of tears … moreand rain covers his blood-stained face. Reaching for the red liquid, he drops the gun and falls to his knees. Quietly sobbing , he stares at Sarah's pale face. A feeling of rage rushes through his mind as Jeremy sticks out his hand, offering to pull him from the dirt. He flinches when Jack emits a horrifying chuckle and rises to his feet all by himself. The loaded gun hangs loosely within the palm of his hand, his long, blonde locks sway before his wide-open eyes. ''Jack?'' Jeremy gasps while raising his arms, ''Just, put the gun down, man.'' The grim-looking man continues his chuckle, slowly twisting it into a horrifying cry of anger. ''Just put it down!? I've got nothing left to live for! EVERYONE IS DEAD!'' Jeremy moves closer, a fatal mistake. Jack pulls his gun once again and aims it directly at Jeremy… [view original content]
The 6 of them, (And one kitten) all rush towards the back of the settlement. "Frank, can you pick me up I can't reach the top of the fence." … moreClementine says, as Frank lifts her up weightlessly. Clementine looks over and her face instantly goes pale.
She sees many armored men, with M-16's, grenades, and other weapons. Along with 4 huge military trucks.
Frank, who doesn't see what is going on, on the other side pushes Clementine over the fence. She wouldn't have had enough time to get back over, so she bolted down the other side of the fence.
Then Danielle is picked up, and before Frank pushes her over, Danielle screams. "There's more of them!" Then Bryan and Kenny exchange a look. "I'm going after her." Kenny says.
Kieranthebroski was banned.
I found this rediculous, Shaundi got so many chances and yet I got 0.
I don't even know why I was banned, di… moredn't tell me at all. I msged a mod for now but I won't be posting here for a while until mods sort that out.,
Kieranthebroski was banned.
I found this rediculous, Shaundi got so many chances and yet I got 0.
I don't even know why I was banned, di… moredn't tell me at all. I msged a mod for now but I won't be posting here for a while until mods sort that out.,
Bryan now releases his grasp off Jack's arm and yells at Frank: "What the hell was that? Did you just throw her over the fence?!" "Well, errr, no, she- she just... she just hopped over." responses Frank, when Bryan nudges him and beats on the barricade, screaming: "Clementine!! Sweetie, just stay there and be quiet, I'll be right there - hang on!". Then he cringes and falls to the ground. "Steady, my friend, don't waste your power. I'll go get her - it was my fault after all..." says Frank to Bryan. "I said I'll do it!! She's MY daughter!!" yells Kenny as Bryan laughs at him scornfully: "You suck at being a father! Prove me wrong and go get her NOW!" For a little moment Kenny's and Bryan's eyes meet each other and Kenny is about to lose his temper, but then he eventually drops it for the well-being of Clementine. Frank looks at Kenny's leg, putting on a sceptical face. "Um... I'm not sure that's possible." "Shut up, Frank, and help me - we got no time for this!", says Kenny, as he hands his crook over to Danielle. "Pascucci never told me that you're all so charming... Let's do it." Frank says and Kenny then yells over the fence: "Clementine - can you hear me?" Clementine doesn't answer. "Would you please throw it over as soon as I am on the other side?" asks Kenny, and Danielle answers: "Sure." She looks very worried and Kenny turns back to the fence, as she finally dares to say: "Kenny - please be careful...".
Bang. Clementine's vision gets blurry and she can feel something liquid flowing over her face. Her head begins to feel heavy, then aching. Shit... must've hit a stone or something... Trying to gasp for air she suddenly feels cold and smelly pieces of flesh gripping her mouth, so she can neither make a noise, nor breath properly. Then she feels warm and smelly breath on her neck. "...ssssshhhh... not a sound...". The stranger ditches her gun. Her pulse raises and she starts to panick, trying to alarm her friends, but she fails. She can hear the dull noise of Kenny, while being dragged away by the brusque man: "Clementine - can you hear me?". Her eyes get wet because of the pain of his palms being wrapped around her face so she can't yell for help. "Sshhh-shhh...".
Clem first can hear noises and voices coming closer, but after a minute the sounds appear to be more distant, as they both climb a hill. Suddenly a talkie cracks and a voice appears: "Ralph, where are you? We have localized a few survivors.". The man then presses her against his body and holding her mouth even tighter as he speaks: "I can't right now, can't you do it without me...? Pete, are you there?". Clem tries to get rid of his arm and pulls it with both her hands but it's needless. "What can be so important right now?! Answer me now, Ralph.". Crack "Well, how to explain...". As he talks to his mate Clementine notices a large knife on his belt and she reacts in an instant: she grabs the knife and stabs him into his upper thigh lightning fast. His scream is ear-shattering and Clementine runs as fast as she can. Crack "What the hell - Ralph?!! Raaaaaalph!!!! Jesus!! We're coming!". Just run, run as fast as you can... oh no, I can hardly breath. And she runs, and runs, and runs. Then she can hear soldiers so hanges the direction. Where to, Clem? You need an idea - hurry! Not a minute later she can hear more people and she changes her route once again. I am caught, oh my god, they'll get me...
Thanks for being cool about it. I don't really care about downvotes, but it's not needed just because we disagree with you on the subject. :P (I was talking to whoever disliked us, not you Missus)
Though your lack of personality was disturbing, we all love you. (Melody did.) You died trying to protect everyone else... (stupid Jack!)
Now let me just say something, never get into a relationship in the Apocalypse. Think about it, the love triangle, Melody, Gus, and Jeremy. We all know how that turned out...
But I suppose now you can be with them... (Not sure how you feel since Gus and Melody were there before you.. O.O... But, if that don't work then you still got your ol' pal Dave. Rest in peace Jeremy.
Tribute for Jeremy...
Though your lack of personality was disturbing, we all love you. (Melody did.) You died trying to protect everyone el… morese... (stupid Jack!)
Now let me just say something, never get into a relationship in the Apocalypse. Think about it, the love triangle, Melody, Gus, and Jeremy. We all know how that turned out...
But I suppose now you can be with them... (Not sure how you feel since Gus and Melody were there before you.. O.O... But, if that don't work then you still got your ol' pal Dave. Rest in peace Jeremy.
Constantly tripping over roots and branches, Clementine rushes through the dark forest. The rain has made the ground wet, leaving it muddy and hard to traverse. Anxiously panting, she picks up faint screams from behind a steep hill. As she desperately tries to find a safe hiding spot, a set of flashlights light up the dark canopy above her. No way to escape, she quickly runs for the thickest tree and ducks behind it. Barely a second later the shouts from before sound horrifyingly close. ''I saw her going this way, we'll find her in no time at all.'' one of the pursuers convincingly shouts to his accomplice. Breathing as quietly as she possibly can, Clementine feels her heart pounding in her chest. Lee's last words echo through the little girl's mind when she latches onto a thick, pointy branch. You're smarter than all of them. After a few tense seconds a set of noisy footsteps approach her. When the light of the lantern has reached the ground near her tree, Clementine jumps out from her cover and lets out a terrifying cry of war before sticking the large branch into the chest of her unprepared victim, who immediately collapses. Having caught his attention, the other man takes a shot at her, barely missing her leg. She takes cover behind a boulder and picks up the dead soldier's pistol, making sure it's loaded. Still catching her breath, Clementine doubtfully taunts the other soldier about his inability to kill a ten-year-old.
''You little fucking... brat!'' he shouts before running at her, shooting his heavy gun in her general direction. Clementine swiftly stands up from her cover and with one well-placed shot she scrapes the side of his throat. Grasping for his damaged neck, the soldier falls to the mud-covered ground. She crouches down next to him and picks up his hunting knife. ''I'm sorry...'' she whispers while sticking the knife into his head. She picks up the man's walkie-talkie before rising back to her feet with one thought constantly surging through her mind. She needs to find her group, and she needs to find them fast.
No. however i can tell u where my name from. im pretty loud and noisy and zasca in spanish means Bang! or Crash. dont ask me how i got that im not even spanish!!!
No. however i can tell u where my name from. im pretty loud and noisy and zasca in spanish means Bang! or Crash. dont ask me how i got that im not even spanish!!!
(Listen to this: )
Constantly tripping over roots and branches, Clementine rushes through the dark forest. The rain has made the ground we… moret, leaving it muddy and hard to traverse. Anxiously panting, she picks up faint screams from behind a steep hill. As she desperately tries to find a safe hiding spot, a set of flashlights light up the dark canopy above her. No way to escape, she quickly runs for the thickest tree and ducks behind it. Barely a second later the shouts from before sound horrifyingly close. ''I saw her going this way, we'll find her in no time at all.'' one of the pursuers convincingly shouts to his accomplice. Breathing as quietly as she possibly can, Clementine feels her heart pounding in her chest. Lee's last words echo through the little girl's mind when she latches onto a thick, pointy branch. You're smarter than all of them. After a few tense seconds a set of noisy footsteps approach her. When the light of the lantern has… [view original content]
I banned your other account for seven days for trolling/derailing threads (see the other fan fic thread). I wrote up a public explanation you were supposed to be able to see, but for whatever reason, it evidently did not go through. I've also read of other users not being able to see ban duration. Is this the case for you?
If you can, please go to your original profile and take a screen capture of your ban notice and post it from your alternate profile. Of course, you don't have to, but I'm sure you and other users like seeing why they were banned and for how long going off your post above, and this would only help.
I'm just a community volunteer so I cannot fix this myself, but I will try to get word of this to the right people.
Kieranthebroski was banned.
I found this rediculous, Shaundi got so many chances and yet I got 0.
I don't even know why I was banned, di… moredn't tell me at all. I msged a mod for now but I won't be posting here for a while until mods sort that out.,
Hey Blind, I believe PMs to mods don't seem to work properly? I sent you and Vain a PM regarding a troll in our forum posting disgusting things happening to Clem. Unfortunately it hasn't been removed yet, you can still see it on page 51, the post by @InteractivegamerZ05
We all hope that it gets finally removed. Thanks in anticipation.
I don't even know why I was banned, didn't tell me at all. I msged a mod for now but I won't be posting here for a while until mods sort that … moreout.,
PMs temporarily are not showing up on profile feeds as a glitch, which is being looked into. Can you link me to the PM conversation?
Hey Blind, I believe PMs to mods don't seem to work properly? I sent you and Vain a PM regarding a troll in our forum posting disgusting thing… mores happening to Clem. Unfortunately it hasn't been removed yet, you can still see it on page 51, the post by @InteractivegamerZ05
We all hope that it gets finally removed. Thanks in anticipation.
Running and tripping over her feet Clem ignores the constant messages being yelled through her new Talkie. Then she can hear voices not far away from her. I need to deactivate the sound of the walkie so they can't hear it. Breathing gets harder and harder gradually. A minute later Clem can hardly walk and luckily she finds a perfect place to gain a little power: a hole inbetween two rocks. She hides inside of it and closes her eyes, relieved.
A sound of sniffing awakes her. When she opens her eyes a german shepherd looks right into her face and starts to bark, alarming the others. Shit
Struggling to climb the wall by himself, Frank helps Kenny up the large barricade. While catching his breath, Kenny reaches for the crutches Danielle has thrown next to him and makes sure to lay them down as close as possible. Faint growls in the distance get cut off by the sound of gunshot. ''Shit, we've got to go faster!'', Kenny yells at the anxious group below him. Frank proceeds to push Danielle up the barricade, followed by Bryan, who reluctantly accepts his aid. When he begins to climb up himself, the gunshot has moved dangerously close to their location. The group rushes to the other side of the barricade and starts to climb down one by one. Kenny throws his crutches to the soggy ground when Frank reaches out to help him get off the wall. He latches onto his hands and carefully jumps down, looking around him with a panicky expression. He grasps the crutches out of Danielle's helpful hands and starts shouting. ''Clementine!? Clem!? Where are you?'' As the group starts to notice Clementine's absence, they look around them, screaming in despair. But when it becomes obvious that their calls won't help in their search for the little girl, Kenny commands the group to be silent. ''Standing around, screaming like a bunch of morons won't help us. She probably just ran into the woods to stay away from those soldiers.'' Bryan looks up in surprise as the stream of rain comes to a sudden stop. He crouches down, checking the ground for tracks. Two sets of footsteps embedded into the mud catch his attention. ''It seems like someone, or something took her.'' Shocked by the revelation, Kenny hurries into the forest as fast as his leg allows him to. The rest of the group follows him, but soon lose him and his tracks. ''Goddammit Kenny...'' Bryan mutters to himself.
- In the forest -
(Listen to this: )
Staring right into the loudly barking dog's eyes, a bolt of adrenaline rushes through Clementine's veins. She pulls out her hunting knife and stabs the dog right in the neck. Horrified by her own reaction she gasps in fear. When more deep voices approach, she quickly crawls over the dog's body and back into the dark forest. The rain has let up, but the ground is still as wet and hard to traverse as before. As she dodges roots and smaller trees, the barks and screams move closer by the second. When they finally appear to fade away, the path ends and Clementine finds herself looking over a cliff. A terrified scream escapes her mouth as her speed nearly causes her to fall of into the deep valley. Regaining her balance, she turns around while pulling her gun. Knowing it's loaded she threateningly aims it at the darkness in front of her. ''I'm not afraid! Come at me!'' Her voice is cracking and high-pitched, making her threats feel weak. The forest stays silent, occasional growls of stray walkers aside. A sense of reliefs fills her mind. She slightly loosens the grip around her gun and starts thinking about her next step. The soldiers and dogs have apparently lost track of her, leaving her alone in relative safety. Now she has the choice, should she stay in the woods, hoping for her friends to find her, or should she go back into the danger-zone to find them?
Struggling to climb the wall by himself, Frank helps Kenny up the large barricade. While catching his breath, Kenny reaches for the crutches D… moreanielle has thrown next to him and makes sure to lay them down as close as possible. Faint growls in the distance get cut off by the sound of gunshot. ''Shit, we've got to go faster!'', Kenny yells at the anxious group below him. Frank proceeds to push Danielle up the barricade, followed by Bryan, who reluctantly accepts his aid. When he begins to climb up himself, the gunshot has moved dangerously close to their location. The group rushes to the other side of the barricade and starts to climb down one by one. Kenny throws his crutches to the soggy ground when Frank reaches out to help him get off the wall. He latches onto his hands and carefully jumps down, looking around him with a panicky expression. He grasps the crutches out of Danielle's helpful hands and starts shouting. ''Clementine!? Clem!? Where … [view original content]
I banned your other account for seven days for trolling/derailing threads (see the other fan fic thread). I wrote up a public explanation you … morewere supposed to be able to see, but for whatever reason, it evidently did not go through. I've also read of other users not being able to see ban duration. Is this the case for you?
If you can, please go to your original profile and take a screen capture of your ban notice and post it from your alternate profile. Of course, you don't have to, but I'm sure you and other users like seeing why they were banned and for how long going off your post above, and this would only help.
I'm just a community volunteer so I cannot fix this myself, but I will try to get word of this to the right people.
"What should I do...?" The thoughts go through Clementine's head, spinning around, and around. If I go back, I could die... But if I stay here then I'll never see them again.. Her thoughts are interrupted by the sound of walkers. "Shit!" Clementine says, as she looks in front of her.
A massive amount of walkers stand in front of her. "No..." Clementine says, doubtful if she will live any longer. With few weapons to protect herself, Clementine runs forward, trying to get away. She had begun to get surrounded, and shoots the last 9 bullets in her pistol. She then trys running to get away.
She had been running so fast, looking back to see the whereabouts of the other walkers when she runs straight into a tree, and gets knocked down. Felling sick, and terrible, she couldn't get herself to stand up. She grabs her hunting knife out of her pocket, and gets it ready.
A walker comes falling on top of her. She tries cutting it, but couldn't get it deep enough. It opens it's mouth wide, and right when it seems all hope is lost, a bullet pierces straight through his eyeball and it goes falling to the ground. The bullet nearly hits Clementine's hand, and then she turns around.
I don't know, the Lee hallucination does feel a little cheap all things considered, besides, her mind is currently going through the process of making a decision, in which she favors neither, so having her mind all of a sudden imagine Lee telling her to go back feel a bit cheap and forced and makes really zero sense, as this situation really has nothing to do with Lee that would remind her of him. Do still like that you do somewhat refer to Lee, but i do also wish it had some sort of personality reference.
Also, we could make a more interesting situation with having this choice here, rather than just making her go back.
This could be somewhat of the perfect moment to split her up with the group though.
"What should I do...?" The thoughts go through Clementine's head, spinning around, and around. If I go back, I could die... But if I stay here… more then I'll never see them again.. Her thoughts are interrupted by the sound of walkers. "Shit!" Clementine says, as she looks in front of her.
A massive amount of walkers stand in front of her. "No..." Clementine says, doubtful if she will live any longer. With few weapons to protect herself, Clementine runs forward, trying to get away. She had begun to get surrounded, and shoots the last 9 bullets in her pistol. She then trys running to get away.
She had been running so fast, looking back to see the whereabouts of the other walkers when she runs straight into a tree, and gets knocked down. Felling sick, and terrible, she couldn't get herself to stand up. She grabs her hunting knife out of her pocket, and gets it ready.
A walker comes falling on top of her. She tries cutting it, but couldn't get it… [view original content]
I don't know, the Lee hallucination does feel a little cheap all things considered, besides, her mind is currently going through the process o… moref making a decision, in which she favors neither, so having her mind all of a sudden imagine Lee telling her to go back feel a bit cheap and forced and makes really zero sense, as this situation really has nothing to do with Lee that would remind her of him. Do still like that you do somewhat refer to Lee, but i do also wish it had some sort of personality reference.
Also, we could make a more interesting situation with having this choice here, rather than just making her go back.
This could be somewhat of the perfect moment to split her up with the group though.
Making her go back seems just a bit to obvious and boring, we could make it way better if we make her go the other way because of some sort of resistance maybe, splitting the group apart even more, and splitting her with the settlement AND these military type guys.
And there still is the Lee thing...
I just find it odd considering how it is her own hallucination, her own hallucination being created from her mind, and she is currently going through the process of these two options, in which she favors neither. So Lee should neither favor either one of them. Also, there is no exact personality with this Lee, and also, nothing here reminds Clem of Lee.
And again, you told me it could've been because she was stressed that she was thinking about Lee, well, that equals to it being very forced. She could've thought of anyone such as Kenny or Bryan.
Making her go back seems just a bit to obvious and boring, we could make it way better if we make her go the other way because of some sort of… more resistance maybe, splitting the group apart even more, and splitting her with the settlement AND these military type guys.
And there still is the Lee thing...
I just find it odd considering how it is her own hallucination, her own hallucination being created from her mind, and she is currently going through the process of these two options, in which she favors neither. So Lee should neither favor either one of them. Also, there is no exact personality with this Lee, and also, nothing here reminds Clem of Lee.
And again, you told me it could've been because she was stressed that she was thinking about Lee, well, that equals to it being very forced. She could've thought of anyone such as Kenny or Bryan.
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They are thieves! Kidding. No, really. No downvotes, please.
kewl
feedback appreciated.
Well, I don't really get the last sentence ''I'm going after her.'' Who is Kenny referring to here?
Not bad, not bad... hope the spldiers don't take notice of them
Clem, since she's on the other side but to small to climb back
Kieranthebroski was banned.
I found this rediculous, Shaundi got so many chances and yet I got 0.
I don't even know why I was banned, didn't tell me at all. I msged a mod for now but I won't be posting here for a while until mods sort that out.,
You were banned!? Why?
Apparently not
That's... weird. I mean: I even had the audacity to critisize noone else but puzzlebox and I am sure Vaina liked to ban me, but I wasn't.
Bryan now releases his grasp off Jack's arm and yells at Frank: "What the hell was that? Did you just throw her over the fence?!" "Well, errr, no, she- she just... she just hopped over." responses Frank, when Bryan nudges him and beats on the barricade, screaming: "Clementine!! Sweetie, just stay there and be quiet, I'll be right there - hang on!". Then he cringes and falls to the ground. "Steady, my friend, don't waste your power. I'll go get her - it was my fault after all..." says Frank to Bryan. "I said I'll do it!! She's MY daughter!!" yells Kenny as Bryan laughs at him scornfully: "You suck at being a father! Prove me wrong and go get her NOW!" For a little moment Kenny's and Bryan's eyes meet each other and Kenny is about to lose his temper, but then he eventually drops it for the well-being of Clementine. Frank looks at Kenny's leg, putting on a sceptical face. "Um... I'm not sure that's possible." "Shut up, Frank, and help me - we got no time for this!", says Kenny, as he hands his crook over to Danielle. "Pascucci never told me that you're all so charming... Let's do it." Frank says and Kenny then yells over the fence: "Clementine - can you hear me?" Clementine doesn't answer. "Would you please throw it over as soon as I am on the other side?" asks Kenny, and Danielle answers: "Sure." She looks very worried and Kenny turns back to the fence, as she finally dares to say: "Kenny - please be careful...".
Bang. Clementine's vision gets blurry and she can feel something liquid flowing over her face. Her head begins to feel heavy, then aching. Shit... must've hit a stone or something... Trying to gasp for air she suddenly feels cold and smelly pieces of flesh gripping her mouth, so she can neither make a noise, nor breath properly. Then she feels warm and smelly breath on her neck. "...ssssshhhh... not a sound...". The stranger ditches her gun. Her pulse raises and she starts to panick, trying to alarm her friends, but she fails. She can hear the dull noise of Kenny, while being dragged away by the brusque man: "Clementine - can you hear me?". Her eyes get wet because of the pain of his palms being wrapped around her face so she can't yell for help. "Sshhh-shhh...".
Clem first can hear noises and voices coming closer, but after a minute the sounds appear to be more distant, as they both climb a hill. Suddenly a talkie cracks and a voice appears: "Ralph, where are you? We have localized a few survivors.". The man then presses her against his body and holding her mouth even tighter as he speaks: "I can't right now, can't you do it without me...? Pete, are you there?". Clem tries to get rid of his arm and pulls it with both her hands but it's needless. "What can be so important right now?! Answer me now, Ralph.". Crack "Well, how to explain...". As he talks to his mate Clementine notices a large knife on his belt and she reacts in an instant: she grabs the knife and stabs him into his upper thigh lightning fast. His scream is ear-shattering and Clementine runs as fast as she can. Crack "What the hell - Ralph?!! Raaaaaalph!!!! Jesus!! We're coming!".
Just run, run as fast as you can... oh no, I can hardly breath. And she runs, and runs, and runs. Then she can hear soldiers so hanges the direction. Where to, Clem? You need an idea - hurry! Not a minute later she can hear more people and she changes her route once again. I am caught, oh my god, they'll get me...
I don't even know. They didn't tell me.
Thanks for being cool about it. I don't really care about downvotes, but it's not needed just because we disagree with you on the subject. :P (I was talking to whoever disliked us, not you Missus)
Tribute for Jeremy...
Though your lack of personality was disturbing, we all love you. (Melody did.) You died trying to protect everyone else... (stupid Jack!)
Now let me just say something, never get into a relationship in the Apocalypse. Think about it, the love triangle, Melody, Gus, and Jeremy. We all know how that turned out...
But I suppose now you can be with them... (Not sure how you feel since Gus and Melody were there before you.. O.O... But, if that don't work then you still got your ol' pal Dave. Rest in peace Jeremy.
Changed my latest post a little so it makes sense
Yeah, Rest in Peace
(Listen to this:
)
Constantly tripping over roots and branches, Clementine rushes through the dark forest. The rain has made the ground wet, leaving it muddy and hard to traverse. Anxiously panting, she picks up faint screams from behind a steep hill. As she desperately tries to find a safe hiding spot, a set of flashlights light up the dark canopy above her. No way to escape, she quickly runs for the thickest tree and ducks behind it. Barely a second later the shouts from before sound horrifyingly close. ''I saw her going this way, we'll find her in no time at all.'' one of the pursuers convincingly shouts to his accomplice. Breathing as quietly as she possibly can, Clementine feels her heart pounding in her chest. Lee's last words echo through the little girl's mind when she latches onto a thick, pointy branch. You're smarter than all of them. After a few tense seconds a set of noisy footsteps approach her. When the light of the lantern has reached the ground near her tree, Clementine jumps out from her cover and lets out a terrifying cry of war before sticking the large branch into the chest of her unprepared victim, who immediately collapses. Having caught his attention, the other man takes a shot at her, barely missing her leg. She takes cover behind a boulder and picks up the dead soldier's pistol, making sure it's loaded. Still catching her breath, Clementine doubtfully taunts the other soldier about his inability to kill a ten-year-old.
''You little fucking... brat!'' he shouts before running at her, shooting his heavy gun in her general direction. Clementine swiftly stands up from her cover and with one well-placed shot she scrapes the side of his throat. Grasping for his damaged neck, the soldier falls to the mud-covered ground. She crouches down next to him and picks up his hunting knife. ''I'm sorry...'' she whispers while sticking the knife into his head. She picks up the man's walkie-talkie before rising back to her feet with one thought constantly surging through her mind. She needs to find her group, and she needs to find them fast.
No. however i can tell u where my name from. im pretty loud and noisy and zasca in spanish means Bang! or Crash. dont ask me how i got that im not even spanish!!!
Cool. Mine is from a Kenny quote actually
Superb. Like all your posts
I banned your other account for seven days for trolling/derailing threads (see the other fan fic thread). I wrote up a public explanation you were supposed to be able to see, but for whatever reason, it evidently did not go through. I've also read of other users not being able to see ban duration. Is this the case for you?
If you can, please go to your original profile and take a screen capture of your ban notice and post it from your alternate profile. Of course, you don't have to, but I'm sure you and other users like seeing why they were banned and for how long going off your post above, and this would only help.
I'm just a community volunteer so I cannot fix this myself, but I will try to get word of this to the right people.
PMs temporarily are not showing up on profile feeds as a glitch, which is being looked into. Can you link me to the PM conversation?
Hey Blind, I believe PMs to mods don't seem to work properly? I sent you and Vain a PM regarding a troll in our forum posting disgusting things happening to Clem. Unfortunately it hasn't been removed yet, you can still see it on page 51, the post by @InteractivegamerZ05
We all hope that it gets finally removed. Thanks in anticipation.
Got it. Thank you.
Running and tripping over her feet Clem ignores the constant messages being yelled through her new Talkie. Then she can hear voices not far away from her. I need to deactivate the sound of the walkie so they can't hear it. Breathing gets harder and harder gradually. A minute later Clem can hardly walk and luckily she finds a perfect place to gain a little power: a hole inbetween two rocks. She hides inside of it and closes her eyes, relieved.
A sound of sniffing awakes her. When she opens her eyes a german shepherd looks right into her face and starts to bark, alarming the others. Shit
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Struggling to climb the wall by himself, Frank helps Kenny up the large barricade. While catching his breath, Kenny reaches for the crutches Danielle has thrown next to him and makes sure to lay them down as close as possible. Faint growls in the distance get cut off by the sound of gunshot. ''Shit, we've got to go faster!'', Kenny yells at the anxious group below him. Frank proceeds to push Danielle up the barricade, followed by Bryan, who reluctantly accepts his aid. When he begins to climb up himself, the gunshot has moved dangerously close to their location. The group rushes to the other side of the barricade and starts to climb down one by one. Kenny throws his crutches to the soggy ground when Frank reaches out to help him get off the wall. He latches onto his hands and carefully jumps down, looking around him with a panicky expression. He grasps the crutches out of Danielle's helpful hands and starts shouting. ''Clementine!? Clem!? Where are you?'' As the group starts to notice Clementine's absence, they look around them, screaming in despair. But when it becomes obvious that their calls won't help in their search for the little girl, Kenny commands the group to be silent. ''Standing around, screaming like a bunch of morons won't help us. She probably just ran into the woods to stay away from those soldiers.'' Bryan looks up in surprise as the stream of rain comes to a sudden stop. He crouches down, checking the ground for tracks. Two sets of footsteps embedded into the mud catch his attention. ''It seems like someone, or something took her.'' Shocked by the revelation, Kenny hurries into the forest as fast as his leg allows him to. The rest of the group follows him, but soon lose him and his tracks. ''Goddammit Kenny...'' Bryan mutters to himself.
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Staring right into the loudly barking dog's eyes, a bolt of adrenaline rushes through Clementine's veins. She pulls out her hunting knife and stabs the dog right in the neck. Horrified by her own reaction she gasps in fear. When more deep voices approach, she quickly crawls over the dog's body and back into the dark forest. The rain has let up, but the ground is still as wet and hard to traverse as before. As she dodges roots and smaller trees, the barks and screams move closer by the second. When they finally appear to fade away, the path ends and Clementine finds herself looking over a cliff. A terrified scream escapes her mouth as her speed nearly causes her to fall of into the deep valley. Regaining her balance, she turns around while pulling her gun. Knowing it's loaded she threateningly aims it at the darkness in front of her. ''I'm not afraid! Come at me!'' Her voice is cracking and high-pitched, making her threats feel weak. The forest stays silent, occasional growls of stray walkers aside. A sense of reliefs fills her mind. She slightly loosens the grip around her gun and starts thinking about her next step. The soldiers and dogs have apparently lost track of her, leaving her alone in relative safety. Now she has the choice, should she stay in the woods, hoping for her friends to find her, or should she go back into the danger-zone to find them?
Please, That1Guy...
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Then Kenny farted.
Your like the 10th person making that very same knee-slapper. Clever. Laughed so much. Not.
First time in this thread and my purpose was kinda make someone angry
Sorry, you're late
yeah i think either fake zasca or that guy with the wired gravatar of a mole on a computer did that
So, Zasca, when are you going to write again?
"What should I do...?" The thoughts go through Clementine's head, spinning around, and around. If I go back, I could die... But if I stay here then I'll never see them again.. Her thoughts are interrupted by the sound of walkers. "Shit!" Clementine says, as she looks in front of her.
A massive amount of walkers stand in front of her. "No..." Clementine says, doubtful if she will live any longer. With few weapons to protect herself, Clementine runs forward, trying to get away. She had begun to get surrounded, and shoots the last 9 bullets in her pistol. She then trys running to get away.
She had been running so fast, looking back to see the whereabouts of the other walkers when she runs straight into a tree, and gets knocked down. Felling sick, and terrible, she couldn't get herself to stand up. She grabs her hunting knife out of her pocket, and gets it ready.
A walker comes falling on top of her. She tries cutting it, but couldn't get it deep enough. It opens it's mouth wide, and right when it seems all hope is lost, a bullet pierces straight through his eyeball and it goes falling to the ground. The bullet nearly hits Clementine's hand, and then she turns around.
"Kenny!"
I don't know, the Lee hallucination does feel a little cheap all things considered, besides, her mind is currently going through the process of making a decision, in which she favors neither, so having her mind all of a sudden imagine Lee telling her to go back feel a bit cheap and forced and makes really zero sense, as this situation really has nothing to do with Lee that would remind her of him. Do still like that you do somewhat refer to Lee, but i do also wish it had some sort of personality reference.
Also, we could make a more interesting situation with having this choice here, rather than just making her go back.
This could be somewhat of the perfect moment to split her up with the group though.
It still does split her up with the group. Remember they all left the battlefield.
Making her go back seems just a bit to obvious and boring, we could make it way better if we make her go the other way because of some sort of resistance maybe, splitting the group apart even more, and splitting her with the settlement AND these military type guys.
And there still is the Lee thing...
I just find it odd considering how it is her own hallucination, her own hallucination being created from her mind, and she is currently going through the process of these two options, in which she favors neither. So Lee should neither favor either one of them. Also, there is no exact personality with this Lee, and also, nothing here reminds Clem of Lee.
And again, you told me it could've been because she was stressed that she was thinking about Lee, well, that equals to it being very forced. She could've thought of anyone such as Kenny or Bryan.
Well... erm... Do you want me to... Do you want me to change it..?