There was nothing much planned - I thought three to four pages per episode might suffice.
BTTF I wonder what happens Comic first draft ever
INT. Doc's garage, 1986
The comic begins with Marty rocking all over Doc's belongings. He has the greatest garage band ever, because he has inherited Doc's garage.
Marty (improvises a "miss you so" song): "Jen, I really miss Doc"
Jennifer: "That guy knocks me out, puts me alone on a dumpster in a dark alley while I'm unconscious and lets me rot in a dystopian society... and my boyfriend MISSES him. Figures!"
*FLASH* - The DeLorean appears (I actually illustrated this panel in the art thread).
The DeLorean has crashed through the roof, standing on its nose. Apparently, one can reach 88 mph conveniently by falling.
Marty: "What in the hell..."
Ominous voice: "You've got to come back with us..."
Marty: "DAD??? Errr... George?? MOM??? Errrr... Lorraine??"
Young George and Lorraine climb out of the vertical DeLorean, in their Enchantment under the Sea clothes. They seem to have come from exactly that evening.
George: "I know... that you are my son... but there's one thing... I want to know..."
Marty: "What, what??"
George: "Does that mean I am ALSO... an alien from the planet Vulcan?"
Marty doesn't know how to respond.
George: "Get in the car! We got to go back!"
Marty: "Where will we go??"
George: "There's trouble in 1931!"
We see George, Lorraine, Marty, his increasingly battered guitar and Jennifer sitting in the DeLorean.
Marty: "Shouldn't we get the DeLorean back on the street to reach 88 mph?"
George: "Where we're going, they haven't actually built many streets. Also, as my son, you are quite an epic fail at thinking four-dimensionally."
The DeLorean rotates on its nose, reaching 88 mph and vanishing in a flash.
INT. Hill Valley High school, 1931. We see George and Marty.
Marty: "Now tell me, why are we here?"
George: "Something's wrong with time, we have to help a friend of yours."
Marty: "And where's Jennifer??"
George: "I sedated her and put her outside on a dumpster. She'll be OK!"
Marty looks around the corner and sees... young Doc Brown. Doc is waving a self-built phaser cannon, looking wild and paranoid, drooling.
Doc (looking around): "Vere are zey... ze fools... I hev to kill zem all..."
Marty: "That's heavy, George! Doc is ... EVIL???"
George: "Yes, something went wrong... you have to lead him on the right way again... just like you did with me."
Marty: "What, what??"
George (putting a silly orange-blonde wig on his head): "Good thing I look just look like Young Doc. I will go to class for him while you set things right!"
Marty: "WHAT?? WHAT??"
George (running away): "Good luck, Darth!"
Marty: "DARTH??"
Next scene was supposed to play out just like the shoot-out from BTTF III, but with the simple twist that Doc's phaser cannon doesn't work: Marty knows that Doc doesn't invent anything that works until 1955.
In the next episode, Doc could say "This is heavy!" and Marty would slap him in return...
And the circle of life would be complete.
I was going to save something like that for a later episode. I may continue the joke in episode 2, where Biff (or his ancestor) is going to... Oh, can't spoil it!
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Hey, why don't you give you're idea to Majus to see if he can execute it as a comic?
All right, here we go.
There was nothing much planned - I thought three to four pages per episode might suffice.
BTTF I wonder what happens Comic first draft ever
INT. Doc's garage, 1986
The comic begins with Marty rocking all over Doc's belongings. He has the greatest garage band ever, because he has inherited Doc's garage.
Marty (improvises a "miss you so" song): "Jen, I really miss Doc"
Jennifer: "That guy knocks me out, puts me alone on a dumpster in a dark alley while I'm unconscious and lets me rot in a dystopian society... and my boyfriend MISSES him. Figures!"
*FLASH* - The DeLorean appears (I actually illustrated this panel in the art thread).
The DeLorean has crashed through the roof, standing on its nose. Apparently, one can reach 88 mph conveniently by falling.
Marty: "What in the hell..."
Ominous voice: "You've got to come back with us..."
Marty: "DAD??? Errr... George?? MOM??? Errrr... Lorraine??"
Young George and Lorraine climb out of the vertical DeLorean, in their Enchantment under the Sea clothes. They seem to have come from exactly that evening.
George: "I know... that you are my son... but there's one thing... I want to know..."
Marty: "What, what??"
George: "Does that mean I am ALSO... an alien from the planet Vulcan?"
Marty doesn't know how to respond.
George: "Get in the car! We got to go back!"
Marty: "Where will we go??"
George: "There's trouble in 1931!"
We see George, Lorraine, Marty, his increasingly battered guitar and Jennifer sitting in the DeLorean.
Marty: "Shouldn't we get the DeLorean back on the street to reach 88 mph?"
George: "Where we're going, they haven't actually built many streets. Also, as my son, you are quite an epic fail at thinking four-dimensionally."
The DeLorean rotates on its nose, reaching 88 mph and vanishing in a flash.
INT. Hill Valley High school, 1931. We see George and Marty.
Marty: "Now tell me, why are we here?"
George: "Something's wrong with time, we have to help a friend of yours."
Marty: "And where's Jennifer??"
George: "I sedated her and put her outside on a dumpster. She'll be OK!"
Marty looks around the corner and sees... young Doc Brown. Doc is waving a self-built phaser cannon, looking wild and paranoid, drooling.
Doc (looking around): "Vere are zey... ze fools... I hev to kill zem all..."
Marty: "That's heavy, George! Doc is ... EVIL???"
George: "Yes, something went wrong... you have to lead him on the right way again... just like you did with me."
Marty: "What, what??"
George (putting a silly orange-blonde wig on his head): "Good thing I look just look like Young Doc. I will go to class for him while you set things right!"
Marty: "WHAT?? WHAT??"
George (running away): "Good luck, Darth!"
Marty: "DARTH??"
Next scene was supposed to play out just like the shoot-out from BTTF III, but with the simple twist that Doc's phaser cannon doesn't work: Marty knows that Doc doesn't invent anything that works until 1955.
(Yep, that was basically it for episode one.
I'm still up to be Marty again if you want.
Ha!
Good, it would stink to have to find another good Marty.
And the circle of life would be complete.
I was going to save something like that for a later episode. I may continue the joke in episode 2, where Biff (or his ancestor) is going to... Oh, can't spoil it!
If anyone has any ideas of what you want to see next time, post 'em here! (should probably start a new thread, maybe that would get more responses!)