Continuing upon the end of S1(fan-fic)

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  • Yes, I can.

    TheMissus posted: »

    TEST: Can you read this? My feed shows me the last post was made 0 seconds ago and it doesn't change even after logout or F5

  • Yep!

    TheMissus posted: »

    TEST: Can you read this? My feed shows me the last post was made 0 seconds ago and it doesn't change even after logout or F5

  • Yep im chanbging it so that lily gets kicked out.... SOMEONE IS GONNA DIE!!!!! HAHAHAHA

    TheMissus posted: »

    He's from Australia afaik. 6 hours maybe is too little time, let's say 12. Is that ok? Reply if you agree/disagree

  • Done

    TheMissus posted: »

    Looks like He wants to continue. I'm in standby mode as well, that's sad

  • Done

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    Good idea.

  • Done

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Yep im chanbging it so that lily gets kicked out.... SOMEONE IS GONNA DIE!!!!! HAHAHAHA

  • Puglife

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    I didn't even know who Danielle was... Pretty cool! (On a side note, I think Miranda the pug should survive no matter what, she's awesome!)

  • Im making a word with all our posts on it. il let you know when it is finished (Its like a backup

  • the only thing thats wrong with this post is that after looking at kennys hand to hand fighting technique in episode 1 3 and 4 he is crap

    darnitben posted: »

    .. Drive past eyeing him sadly, that's when a man comes running down the street covered in blood, the man has a familir mushtache. " it's Kenn

  • Ive been doing that for a while because I was bored. :3

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Im making a word with all our posts on it. il let you know when it is finished (Its like a backup

  • Oh. il stop then XD thanks

    Jay_Elem posted: »

    Ive been doing that for a while because I was bored.

  • Anytime unless it like 4 A.M. then not that time.

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Oh. il stop then XD thanks

  • i just sorta wrote and i dont know where to go with the story. someone go

  • Wow, THAT was an awesome twist! Thanks for the changes :) I found it very cool that Eva had a crush for Jacob, but 6 months? We said the group comes to the farm and we jumped 12weeks/3months. Anyway, Thanks

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Done

  • edited January 2014

    Continuing with Clementine's group:
    Clementine and the others have been waiting desperately for one more statement from Danielle, the scared girl on the radio, but the talkie stays still. "Jesus Christ... The fuck was that?!" yelled Pascucci looking at Clem and Kenny who lowered his head. "Remember when I told you 'bout that frickin lady who had stolen our RV and then attacked us a few weeks later? Well, her name was Lilly." Charlie interrupts: "But there's plenty of women with that name. My neighbour's name was Lilly... before she got eaten by a walker.. And my aunt is Lilly, too.". "You're probably right, kid." Then he looks very angry at Clementine: "You know something we don't - who was the person you were talking with BEFORE that Danielle?! Tell me, Clem - was it Lilly?!" Clem stutters : "N-noo.. I don't know who it was. I was just about to tell you but then Pascucci came.. and...." She looks at both Kenny and Pascucci and they look both very pissed "It WASN'T Lilly, I would have recognised her voice. I tried to communicate with Jessica, but then the voice appeared saying 'helllo, who are you" and then it was gone..." Kenny sighs: "Alright, this was the last time you played with the talkie. Anyway, we should be careful, because the Lilly Clem and I know isn't up for good, stealing cars, threatening and even killing she's a serious threat to our group. Maybe it WAS her.. Enough now. Let's eat."

    The campfire feels so good that Clementine and Charlie sit as close to the flames as possible. The ruin is not really comfortable but at least there's no snow in it. While they're eating Pascucci asks Kenny for details about Lilly when the subject eventually gets changed:
    "I remember when you told me about the sick dairy people... Fuck man, how can people be capable of doing such horrible things? Never imagined the world becoming like this..". Charlie puts more dry wood into the fire (it was really hard to find it as it snowed last night). Then he speaks: "Whatever is going on: the people on the radio can't be far from here. What should we do?". "Let's just keep moving," says Clem "I don't want any trou...-" She gets cut off by Kenny: "I hope it WAS Lilly - this time I'll get her, I swear: I KILL her for causing all this trouble we've been through. My leg still hurts. She is a threat to whole mankind!". "Alright, Ken - I am really sure it wasn't her. Clem even said so. Besides the girl's right. Let's keep moving. There's a few towns around this area. Let's scout for usable stuff and find an intact building, tomorrow. This place here isn't the coziest camp. Alright: Let's go to sleep now." says Pascucci.

    Clem and Charlie make themself comfortable in the jeep that is parked near the fireplace while Kenny and Pascucci stay guard. "I hate how he treats you like a toddler." says Charlie. "Yes. And he's even not aware of his behaviour. I really miss Jessica. And Eddie...". she replies. "I wonder if Miranda's alright.". "Hope so, Charlie.". Clementine takes a deep breath and finally tells Charlie about the first voice on the phone: "It WAS our Lilly." "What? Clem, how can you be so sure?". Clementine tells him everything. "We have to tell him! He gotta kill her - she obviously is a threat for us." "Yes, she is, Charlie. And that's why we have to avoid her - she is unpredictable and dangerous. I used to like her but today I know very well that she can't be trusted anymore. She just snaps and then you're screwed. We don't tell him, because if we do he will try to find her no matter what, and then we're going to be in real danger." Charlie shakes his head, saying "I don't know... let's sleep on this". "There's no sleeping-on-it: we are not going to tell him - and you will listen to ME this time, Charlie. Good Night.".

    Please continue with Clem's story

  • I always try to imagine the scenes playing out in my head, and let me tell you, this was extremely emotional! Love it!

    TheMissus posted: »

    Wow, THAT was an awesome twist! Thanks for the changes I found it very cool that Eva had a crush for Jacob, but 6 months? We said the group comes to the farm and we jumped 12weeks/3months. Anyway, Thanks

  • edited January 2014

    ''I still think we should tell him.''

    It was early morning, the sun had just risen above the snowy hills. The group was packing what little supplies they had left. Charlie was still trying to convince Clementine to tell Kenny about Lilly.

    ''No, if we tell Kenny the truth he will stop at nothing to find her.'', Clementine looked away from Charlie, ''He nearly died before, I'm afraid he might not survive a second time. My decision is final.''

    After everyone had packed their bags the group continued to travel farther up north. The journey was long and mostly uneventful, but after hours worth of traveling and when the sun was just about to set, the group noticed faint sources of light in a distant building.

    ''I see some light over there.'', Pascucci was the first to notice, he grabbed his binoculars and took a peek.

    ''Watch out, there might be some snipers in there.'', Kenny said while laying on the ground, covering his coat in snow as a means of camouflage.

    Charlie grabbed his rifle and looked through the scope, ''Do you see anything?'', Clementine asked.

    ''I see the shadow of... one, I mean two guys. One of them is sharpening a big knife and...'', Charlie gasped, ''What's the matter?'', Clementine asked nervously, ''Talk to me Charlie, what's going on?''.

    ''It's... it's a huge settlement, I see lots of people.'', Pascucci was looking through the binoculars Eva had given him back at the farm. Charlie was still speechless, ''Charlie?''.

    ''That son of a...'', Charlie whispered to himself.

    Charlie suddenly stood up, his young face in the dark, cold look he had when Clementine first met him, an expression that didn't fit his age, he pulled his hood over his head and ran away, the rest of the group followed.

    ''What the hell is that boy doing?'', Kenny shouted angrily, ''Come back here!''.

  • No thats not possible. it takes 6 months for a broken bone to fully heal. clem would be on crotchers

    TheMissus posted: »

    Wow, THAT was an awesome twist! Thanks for the changes I found it very cool that Eva had a crush for Jacob, but 6 months? We said the group comes to the farm and we jumped 12weeks/3months. Anyway, Thanks

  • Very good

    Note: Due to an earlier post - whoever is going to be the next: Make sure that in the end Kenny's going to be in the butchers chamber with Jeremy and Pascucci outisde the building peeking through a small window into that chamber

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    ''I still think we should tell him.'' It was early morning, the sun had just risen above the snowy hills. The group was packing what little

  • Miranda didn't choose the pug life, the pug life chose her...

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Puglife

  • edited January 2014

    That's exactly what I was trying to build up to, and when Kenny reaches the window, it should probably switch back to Jeremy.

    NOTE: Charlie knows the butcher from his old settlement. He killed someone very close to Charlie, or he was the person who made him fight his own brother.

    TheMissus posted: »

    Very good Note: Due to an earlier post - whoever is going to be the next: Make sure that in the end Kenny's going to be in the butchers chamber with Jeremy and Pascucci outisde the building peeking through a small window into that chamber

  • Nice, though i do have some thoughts.

    So, Lilly tried to kill her JUST for that? Ah well, i guess she really did get insane huh? I just find it somewhat odd.

    Jacob was also shot in the shoulder, which is a little odd to specify if he dies anyways, just found that a little odd to, oh daz odds! xP.

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    **DLC: Plane crash explained** Lilly Knew she wasnt going to make it. the plane was going down hard and that was partially her fault. What

  • Didn't one of the "New Crawford" guys kill Charlie's mom, in which Charlie killed him? :P.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    That's exactly what I was trying to build up to, and when Kenny reaches the window, it should probably switch back to Jeremy. NOTE: Charlie

  • Thought this too, but I am not really sure... Another note: Tavia's town was barricaded with large Trucks and stuff

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Didn't one of the "New Crawford" guys kill Charlie's mom, in which Charlie killed him? :P.

  • Yea that's true. Also Charlie had to kill his own brother right? So That_1_Guy I don't know about the family bit. Maybe his Father? I dunno

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Didn't one of the "New Crawford" guys kill Charlie's mom, in which Charlie killed him? :P.

  • edited January 2014

    But wasn't New Crawford overrun by the giant horde? The most important part is that the Butcher killed someone very close to Charlie, it could also be the person who made him fight his brother.

    (To be honest, I'm losing track of the story because of the complexity, but that's okay.)

    Yea that's true. Also Charlie had to kill his own brother right? So That_1_Guy I don't know about the family bit. Maybe his Father? I dunno

  • Yeah, it can just be someone close to him :P.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    But wasn't New Crawford overrun by the giant horde? The most important part is that the Butcher killed someone very close to Charlie, it could

  • edited January 2014

    Now I remember: The New Crawford guy who was trying to bring Charlie back was the one who forces him to fight his siblings. Because he also killed Charlie's mom Charlie shot him from behind

    Edit: The Butcher can be someone from New Crawford and he managed to flee from the horde

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Yeah, it can just be someone close to him :P.

  • That's probably the best choice. He probably killed someone Charlie loved, but someone we haven't heard about yet.

    TheMissus posted: »

    Now I remember: The New Crawford guy who was trying to bring Charlie back was the one who forces him to fight his siblings. Because he also ki

  • Thanks, everyone. The glitch is gone now

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    yep

  • edited January 2014

    Kenny immediatelly runs after him. "Clementine, please get back into the car and stay in there." says Pascucci nevrously, trying not to yell so nobody gets attracted.Clem gives him an evil stare: "I'm not a baby.". "I know. This is not a task for a baby but the opposite: you gotta stay guard so noone steals our car - remember when Lilly has stolen the RV? We got vital supplies which need to be watched. Do you still have the gun?" Pascucci asks. "Yes.". "Very well. Try not to use it. Get this." Pascucci hands Clementine an ice pick. "Gotta go now. Be careful.". Then Pascucci runs away, towards a large barricade and eventually Clem loses sight of him.

    Inside the car she makes sure the doors are all locked so nobody gets inside. Her dad showed her how to do it. First Clem tries to catch sight of what's going on outside. But after a while the silence leads her to daydreaming about her parents, and then Lee. She sighs. How many people I've got to know didn't make it? And how is the farm group doing? After two weeks being with Kenny I know I should have stayed. We've had something like a routine, and a familar surrounding. We've had beds and the feeling of safety. Besides Kenny constantly switches between sweet, overprotective and ignorant. At least I have Charlie. A knock brings her back into reality. There is a girl standing infront of the window, knocking. She's young, approximately 11years old and has dark blonde curly hair. "Pleeease. Let me in!" She whispers nervously. "Who are you?". "I'm Danielle. Gonna tell you everything but please let me in first!". Clementine is shocked - the girl from the radio! She hesitates, then saying "Are you armed?". "No, that's why I need to come in!". As she has a feeling the girl's no trouble she finally lets her into the car.

    Continue with either the jeep or Charlie, Kenny and Pascucci

  • Yes, probably. But we said several times 12 weeks between arrival at the farm and Jeremy's story, right?

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    No thats not possible. it takes 6 months for a broken bone to fully heal. clem would be on crotchers

  • edited January 2014

    Danielle was desperately gasping for air, her face was as pale as the white snow covering the hills and her eyes were wide open. Clementine was worried, and anxiously looked out the window. What kind of horrific being could have scared this girl so badly?

    ''Danielle, what is going on?'', Clementine's question was answered by the sound of a gunshot nearby, she told the girl to hide under the backseat. She grabbed the gun from her pocket and took a peek out the window. She was shocked when she saw the familiar silhouette of a tall woman with long hair.

    ''Lilly.''

    -SCENE SWAP-

    Charlie climbed over the chain link fence, cutting himself badly on the barbed wire covering the top. The pain was unbearable but New Crawford had taught him to always stay strong. That horrible place. The place that took his family, and made him fight his brother to the death. His brother had let him win, that was the strategy they had come up with. Charlie had to choke him to death, his eyes were closed, but his ears uncovered. The horrible screams of a crowd cheering for his death still haunted his dreams to this day.

    ''Charlie, come back here!'', Kenny and Pascucci had nearly caught up, but had to take the long way around the fence. Charlie took the fire-escape and had reached the light source on the third floor. He was just about to break the glass when he was pushed away by Kenny.

    ''What the hell are you doing, kid?'', Kenny whispered while trying to catch his breath.

    ''I'm avenging the death of my family, that bastard was with New Crawford, and I'm not going to rest until everyone of those assholes is dealt with, do you hear me!?'', Charlie replied with tears rolling from his eyes, he was crying, but there was no sound.

    ''So you were just going to barge in there and kill him?'', Pascucci had overheard the conversation, ''We're a group, and a group works together. We could have helped, you know.''

    Pascucci sneaked over to Charlie and helped him back on his feet, Charlie wiped off his tears and looked at Kenny who took a quick peek through the window.

    ''I'll take a look at who we're dealing with here, stay low and don't make a sound.''

  • Omg, what a suspense - very well done!

    Who's next?

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    Danielle was desperately gasping for air, her face was as pale as the white snow covering the hills and her eyes were wide open. Clementine wa

  • Something like that, yes.

    TheMissus posted: »

    Yes, probably. But we said several times 12 weeks between arrival at the farm and Jeremy's story, right?

  • I'm up next :).

  • I left it up to the writer who writes when we go to the farm. you can decide weither he lives or dies. and lilly killed doug/carley for the medical supplies in HER secret stash witch was probably not alot

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Nice, though i do have some thoughts. So, Lilly tried to kill her JUST for that? Ah well, i guess she really did get insane huh? I just fin

  • SPOILER ALERT FOR MY NEXT POST

    I wondered, how free are we allowed to kill a character? Gotta ask before i post.

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