I think lust is a more appropriate word instead of love for that scene :P Nick allowed pleasure to take over, and so the curse infected him before he could expel it... I suppose love was there... or was it???
The Prince is a knobhead :P
Death is rarely disappointed in his Harbinger, but Nick really fucked up this time. Damien should be at Penny's instead of reading Playboy! XP
Yeah but at least Isaiah has control over his curse, Nick doesn't, as you will see next chapter
Oh man, Jayne. You gave Nick The Kiss. I was hoping he'd be able to overcome this but man...that scene was described beautifully. They have … moresuch passion; I love Jayne and even though she was changing him, you can still feel the love in a weird way.
And the Prince is one sneaky SOB, I'll tell you this much. XD And wow....Death's reaction really pissed me off in a small way BUT I can understand why he feels this way...And now Damien. XD Bet he needs a snack, assuming he was having 'fun' before entering the apartment. lol Don't feel bad, Nick. Isaiah didn't ask to be a Vamp either. :P
Dude the emotional attachment this story had! You feel bad for those involved and Gertraud with her Fanta really hit me hard. Although not a… more fan, I will take that coke. :P I too loved the description of their night out and although there were a few bumps, it was needed, since they are in the middle of a war and that would make anyone lose their cool.
I knew Cola exist during that time but I had no idea Fanta did too, I learned something. Lol
I had a gif to express the feels displayed … morein ths chapter but I've lost it. Nevertheless, I look forward to Gertraud' and co. adventure and where you take them into the cold war.
Nice chapter
‘I am a woman, yes, but not a lady. YOU of all people should know that after all this time.’ She said in mockery.
… more ‘Fine’ I said ‘Get in the damned car.’ I said in feigned annoyance.
‘That is more like it.’
Well.... these two certainly know how to act around each other!! :O
‘Why not help me carry the stuff down?’ I called after her.
‘Because I need an o so strong man to do it for me.’
I knew she was being sarcastic, but I went along with it. ‘Seriously?’
‘No’
Gertraud is something else entirely!! XP
That was quite a tender moment between them; it was really sweet to see their barriers of sarcasm fall and for them to say what they really think about one another :')
I look forward to more! XD
Rose Red, I don't like you atm, and now JJ makes you a homophobe... FUCK YOU, BITCH! (Tbh, Rose really doesn't strike me as that sort of person in Fables, but for the purposes of this story...)
Oh man, I really hope Lyla understands, the difference between Lyla and Rose is Lyla literally has claws!!
Why couldn't he be like the other guys: Beer, ass, tits, pussy
Replace Beer with Spirits or cocktails and you have me :P
Two days later
Still nothing. Robert called several times and left many messages on Frank's phone but none were ever answered. He left it… more alone; he tried to visit Frank at work but every time he made his visits, either he was gone, on break or took the day off. Now, he was avoiding Robert but why? He wanted to talk and start over. Robert wanted to be apart of the world he ignored for too long.
He left one more call that morning:
'Hey Frank, its me again. I just wanted to talk and see how oyu're doing. Not sure if you're getting my messages. I went by your work but they said you've been ill again....Ummm, when you get this, call me back, okay? Wanna hang. Miss you....'
That was it for the morning. Robert could not create another message as so, if Frank did not return his last few couple. Sitting at the foot of his bed, the apartment was quiet; Gren was over at Lyla and Georgie's place, helping to set up a pool for the kids and RJ w… [view original content]
You're right Nick knows that feeling as well (thank you Lyla Smith) XD
Brandy terrifies me! But I look forward to seeing her in a 'calmer' light in the future, I always like to see the toughest and deadliest of characters have soft sides where they just make you melt like jelly. You see them in this place of cuddly happiness and think "Oh wow, you DO possess a kind heart" :')
The Tweedles do have potential in stories, I used them as demonstration dummies for Nick in TDAU... I hope this one gets his throat ripped out! >:D
More of a phrase then anything, my good man. Because let's be honest....who wouldn't choke on blood, if you pulled something like this out? … moreXD
Yeah Brandy may come off as so but she means well. She's a little 'stuck' at the moment; she wants to kill Isaiah but needs him to locate the source of the issue but looks like the problem is looking for brandy, too.
I hate that fucktard, too but I have not used him yet and have a reason for him, too....I always do. :P
Lyla Smith has that affect on everyone. She appreciates it, though.
Brandy is that person. If no one has noticed, I take characters with 'no heart' and try to find the good in them all. she will eventually come through once she gets some candy in her mouth. Sweet, yummy candy.
Dee will have potential in this and in the future, should I continue to write after Gremily's tale.
You're right Nick knows that feeling as well (thank you Lyla Smith) XD
Brandy terrifies me! But I look forward to seeing her in a 'calme… morer' light in the future, I always like to see the toughest and deadliest of characters have soft sides where they just make you melt like jelly. You see them in this place of cuddly happiness and think "Oh wow, you DO possess a kind heart" :')
The Tweedles do have potential in stories, I used them as demonstration dummies for Nick in TDAU... I hope this one gets his throat ripped out! >:D
Hmm, I can tell the way from RJ's dialogue is that he's older and a little more mature than from what I last read about him. Let me guess, early teens? 10? 11?
Glad he understands Robert's 'dilemma', of course.
Robert, RJ and Gren sat outside. Robert picked at his burger, unsatisfied with the morning. He was dreading telling his son and if Gren kick… moreed his knee one last time, frenchfries were heading straigh for his nose. He knew what Gren was trying to do; grab his attention and pull it towards his son but robert had fear. That's all he could picture.
RJ not understanding, leaving the table and storming all the way back to his mother's home. Screaming he didn't want a 'gay' dad and that Georgie was his only dad. React like everyone else. Scream, leave, point and ridicule. Lose his only son for his selfish ways of suddenly 'needing' to be truthful with everyone.
But Gren surprised his brother last night; he was expecting Gren to do the exact same things, yet he welcomed Robert with open arms. Listened and loved his brother, despite the words coming from his mouth. Robert sighs. He looks over at his son, now chowing down on his third Whopper. Th… [view original content]
Tbh, Rose really doesn't strike me as that sort of person in Fables, but for the purposes of this story...)
Think she was hurt more then anything. I agree with you. Rose seems like she'd understand but because it was Robert and the two were fooling around and she wanted his D. Anger makes people act horribly.
FEELS!!!! T_T
Rose Red, I don't like you atm, and now JJ makes you a homophobe... FUCK YOU, BITCH! (Tbh, Rose really doesn't strike me as… more that sort of person in Fables, but for the purposes of this story...)
Oh man, I really hope Lyla understands, the difference between Lyla and Rose is Lyla literally has claws!!
Why couldn't he be like the other guys: Beer, ass, tits, pussy
Replace Beer with Spirits or cocktails and you have me :P
I look forward to what comes next dude! XD
Frank is still within this recluse? He has to pick up the phone eventually. Well, I hope things turn around with him.
Heavens above. I anticipated Roses reaction as being something like that. Dear me, that was scolding. I do not really blame her, but still, ouch! This just makes me dread to think how Lyla, his wife, will react.
Two days later
Still nothing. Robert called several times and left many messages on Frank's phone but none were ever answered. He left it… more alone; he tried to visit Frank at work but every time he made his visits, either he was gone, on break or took the day off. Now, he was avoiding Robert but why? He wanted to talk and start over. Robert wanted to be apart of the world he ignored for too long.
He left one more call that morning:
'Hey Frank, its me again. I just wanted to talk and see how oyu're doing. Not sure if you're getting my messages. I went by your work but they said you've been ill again....Ummm, when you get this, call me back, okay? Wanna hang. Miss you....'
That was it for the morning. Robert could not create another message as so, if Frank did not return his last few couple. Sitting at the foot of his bed, the apartment was quiet; Gren was over at Lyla and Georgie's place, helping to set up a pool for the kids and RJ w… [view original content]
Boy, I don't know why I expected better things from Rose. Ugh... I just... want to slap her for saying those hurtful things, man. I know, it's surprising to see those words coming from a fan of hers.
Two days later
Still nothing. Robert called several times and left many messages on Frank's phone but none were ever answered. He left it… more alone; he tried to visit Frank at work but every time he made his visits, either he was gone, on break or took the day off. Now, he was avoiding Robert but why? He wanted to talk and start over. Robert wanted to be apart of the world he ignored for too long.
He left one more call that morning:
'Hey Frank, its me again. I just wanted to talk and see how oyu're doing. Not sure if you're getting my messages. I went by your work but they said you've been ill again....Ummm, when you get this, call me back, okay? Wanna hang. Miss you....'
That was it for the morning. Robert could not create another message as so, if Frank did not return his last few couple. Sitting at the foot of his bed, the apartment was quiet; Gren was over at Lyla and Georgie's place, helping to set up a pool for the kids and RJ w… [view original content]
Tbh, Rose really doesn't strike me as that sort of person in Fables, but for the purposes of this story...)
Think she was hurt more … morethen anything. I agree with you. Rose seems like she'd understand but because it was Robert and the two were fooling around and she wanted his D. Anger makes people act horribly.
Lyla Smith has that affect on everyone. She appreciates it, though.
Brandy is that person. If no one has noticed, I take characters with… more 'no heart' and try to find the good in them all. she will eventually come through once she gets some candy in her mouth. Sweet, yummy candy.
Dee will have potential in this and in the future, should I continue to write after Gremily's tale.
Ah, us men. We always tend to fall for the girl, do we not? I did not expect Nick to be able to let his guard down for such to happen, but alas, I do not blame him either.
Death's words were rather chilling. And so another adventure begins!
So I somehow managed to find the inspiration to write this, tbh I put it down to a lot of music If you have any questions about the previou… mores chapter then don't hesitate to ask! Enjoy!!! (This chapter is a bit 'graphic'...)
Vampire Challenge Chapter 3 – You Can’t Fight It
“Jayne?... J-Jayne?” Nick continued to cradle his love, she didn’t move a muscle; Nick pressed his ear against Jayne’s chest and listened intently for a heartbeat, yet there was no such thump present anymore. Nick could’ve sworn that tears were tugging at the corners of his eyes, but those salty drops of sadness never flowed, he wouldn’t let them.
But then Jayne’s body went from limp to stiff, she opened her eyes revealing that they had turned a hideous shade of red. Her skin went pale and cold, her breathe was slow and forced; she rose up onto her feet from a lying position, like something out of a horror movie. Nick crawled backwards a little as Jayne looked at he… [view original content]
I got past the shame a long time ago, but I thank you for the kind words. One forgets they have a face like mine after having it for their entire life. Besides, it looked worse once upon a time. Much worse.
On the topic of anatomies, how is it going with your weight loss attempt?
This may be a bit (fine, it is very) off topic, but I feel the need to post this
As of my posting this, it most likely Saturday evening from the perspective of most on this thread. However, I am in Australia and thus, from my perspective, it is Sunday morning. I shall take a moment to say this.
Happy Mothers Day to my Mum and to all mothers out there.
Actually, I should make a discussion from this in the general discussions area.
I got past the shame a long time ago, but I thank you for the kind words. One forgets they have a face like mine after having it for their e… morentire life. Besides, it looked worse once upon a time. Much worse.
On the topic of anatomies, how is it going with your weight loss attempt?
Ah, us men. We always tend to fall for the girl, do we not? I did not expect Nick to be able to let his guard down for such to happen, but a… morelas, I do not blame him either.
Death's words were rather chilling. And so another adventure begins!
Rest in peace, Damien.
Besides, it looked worse once upon a time. Much worse.
Wow Frontonasal Dysplasia... I still feel very sorry for you
It is noticeable in my face already it would seem, just gotta keep at it
He loves Jayne so much already, and when she's giving off vibes that he's never experienced from her before, then he's not gonna say no :P
Death is like that sometimes
Who said he was dead?
Nick hasn't lost everything, I'm dealing with him lacking his more useful powers in my current story on this thread (not the Vampire Challenge) It'll take more than just silver and runes to kill this Devil...
Who said he was dead?
No one. I was making fun of the fact that Damien was his target (I wonder how long Nick will last without his special abilities, though?)
This may be a bit (fine, it is very) off topic, but I feel the need to post this
As of my posting this, it most likely Saturday evening f… morerom the perspective of most on this thread. However, I am in Australia and thus, from my perspective, it is Sunday morning. I shall take a moment to say this.
Happy Mothers Day to my Mum and to all mothers out there.
Actually, I should make a discussion from this in the general discussions area.
I figured the vampire god would have some blood to go with his ice cream. I'm surprised he didn't. :P
Like the others have said, I enjoy his humor as well, definitely something you wouldn't expect from his position.
Caine stood in Claires body but that didn't mean he couldn't hear her. He summoned a glass vial and filled it with his blood.
"What are you doing?" Claire asked
"I'm going to help your love of course." He smiled
"Is it safe!? What if it kills him!?" She said in a worried tone.
"Your, I hope for your sake, future husband will not be hurt. The only trait that can be passed to him is being able to stand in sunlight. This would hurt no vampire." He said "However getting him to comprise will be complicated."
If Claire was in her body instead of her own head her cheeks would probably be red due to the husband comment but she was more focused on the 'getting him to compromise' part worried her. "What are you going to do!?" She said
Caine began to make Claires body move out of the Crypt...
Outside of the Crypt...
Ride and Kieron heard the gate open. Ride watched as Kieron ran over and stand in front of Claire, Ride began to stand and walk over as she noticed Claire had drawn a sword and was now pointing it at Kieron. Rides heart began to race as she ran over, and then her heart shattered when Claire stabbed Kieron. She fell to her knees, tears began to fill her eyes. She covered her eyes and began to sob.
Kieron started to cry and looked up. "Claire...how did it come to this? A while ago we were having dinner with my mom..." He said smiling.
Claire thrusted the sword further into Kierons stomach. He let out a small cry of pain. She smiled "This all started when she decided to fall for the Tremeres trick." She said.
Kieron coughed up the blood in his mouth, with his hand on the blade he pulled Claire closer to him but the blade was now all the way through his stomach. Tears still falling down his face. "I know...and I should have taken action sooner...and I'm willing to pay the price, but I won't let you take her from me, Claire I WON'T LOSE YOU!!!" He yelled
Caine could hear Claires cries in his head. He would have to apologize a hundred times over but she would never forgive him for his actions, Caine knew that Kieron would not cooperate with him however and this was his way of getting him to. Caine kicked Kieron off the sword. He walked over uncorking the glass vial, Caine began to unbutton Kierons Cotton vest and and collard shirt. He began to pour his blood on the sword wound. To make sure it'd take a while for Kieron to catch up he pulled the wound open a little. He began to walk away...
"If you want to save Claire you'll have to save her! After I use her body to kill Dracula!" He said
Caine however was lying, he would give up Claires body when he dealt with Dracula himself. And then he'd talk to Claire and Kieron in person to explain his actions. Caine was gone in the blink of an eye. Kierons body began to twitch he was not only in pain but he was crying as well. Ride looked up and saw her son lying in his own blood she got up and ran over to him. There was a moderately sized hole in his chest. She tried calming him down.
"Kieron, Kieron! You have to calm down or you'll lose more blood than you have!" She said trembling, and tears running down her face.
Kieron realized he should stop and tried to stop crying. Ride tried to stop trembling and stop crying however what she was about to do wouldn't allow it. She lifted her hands.
"Now this is going to hurt. Really bad, but it's the only way okay?" She said sobbing.
Kieron nodded. Ride began to activate her blood magic, however her blood magic was not offensive but rather in a supportive way. She began to sow Kierons chest back together, the muscles began to attach to each other on each half of Kierons stomach. He began to scream in agony during this process. Ride kept sobbing and trembling.
"I'm sorry sweetie, I'm so sorry. I'm sorry, it'll be over soon." Ride sobbed her voice trembling.
After three minutes there was a blood stitch in Kierons chest. Kieron however passed out due to pain, Ride lifted his head and let him rest on her lap. Tears were still falling from her face she wrapped her arms around him, she hoped he would wake up soon...
Near the Princes hideout...
"CAINE! You said you wouldn't hurt Kieron!!!" She yelled at him.
Caine felt awful for what he did but he stood by it. "He wasn't going to just let me cut open his wrist, and plus would you want him here!? He could be collateral damage!"
"I don't give a fuck! What you did was out of line! You should've asked me first!" She shouted.
Caine began to feel dread and regret. "Claire...I promise what I did was necessary. I promised I'd bring light to your life, and I'm going to do exactly that."
"How do I know I can trust you!?" Claire said
"You'll just have to I guess..." Caine said moving into the princes hideout...
In the Princes room...
The prince was finishing up his dinner when he saw a shadow out of the corner of his eye. He stood.
"So the whore found me first huh?" He said smiling.
Caine grabbed him by the throat and slammed him through the table smashing him into the ground. "Actually it's me...Caine." He smiled with his fangs beginning to grow.
Dracula hissed. "You think I'm scared of you? Please. By staying alive I get stronger while you sleep." He said
Caine could hear the soldiers start pouring into the room. Caine lifted Dracula. "You may get stronger, but I am one of the strongest beings to walk this earth, seems like you are trying to ruin the balance of it. So it's time to put you in your place. Shall we go somewhere else and finish this? I have a friend that will mop up these...things." Caine grinned
Dracula spit in Caines face "Who Kieron!? Well I should personally thank him actually, his years of being experimented like the rat he is, has created such beautiful creatures!"
Caine began to get furious however he didn't want to kill Dracula, so he tried to maintain some composure. "You know I hate it when people talk about Family like that."
"Enough talking about that dirt rat fledgling, where shall we go? I'm itching to dig my claws and fangs in you." Dracula grinned.
Caines gripped tightened. "How about where you used to reside? Rocky mountains?"
"Oh I love home field advantage!" Dracula said
Caine sprouted vampiric wings and began to fly towards the Rocky mountains...
That's it! Any questions or comments or anything else let me know!
I was torn with her reaction but she's angry, hurt and confused. She'll come around but like I mentioned to the others, she is angry and when peopl are hurt, they say and do stupid shit.
Boy, I don't know why I expected better things from Rose. Ugh... I just... want to slap her for saying those hurtful things, man. I know, it's surprising to see those words coming from a fan of hers.
A fantastic job, as usual!
Frank is indeed still hiding at the moment. Robert will contact him but it might not be what is expected...:(
I'm torn sbout rose's reaction. Some say she overreacted but it was also for a purpose. she was angry and pie said it above. When people are angry, they act and do things. Lyla was actually his ex-girlfriend and we shall she her reaction next.
Frank is still within this recluse? He has to pick up the phone eventually. Well, I hope things turn around with him.
Heavens above. I an… moreticipated Roses reaction as being something like that. Dear me, that was scolding. I do not really blame her, but still, ouch! This just makes me dread to think how Lyla, his wife, will react.
Well done as usual.
Pie said it before I could. When someone is angry, they say horrible things. Rose will come around but it will take time. Lyla's reaction will be next.
FEELS!!!! T_T
Rose Red, I don't like you atm, and now JJ makes you a homophobe... FUCK YOU, BITCH! (Tbh, Rose really doesn't strike me as… more that sort of person in Fables, but for the purposes of this story...)
Oh man, I really hope Lyla understands, the difference between Lyla and Rose is Lyla literally has claws!!
Why couldn't he be like the other guys: Beer, ass, tits, pussy
Replace Beer with Spirits or cocktails and you have me :P
I look forward to what comes next dude! XD
He's 12 in this story. I wanted to age him just enough. I had forgotten that he and the Porgie have a huge age gap. Thankfully, pie brought that up. forgot. XD
Hmm, I can tell the way from RJ's dialogue is that he's older and a little more mature than from what I last read about him. Let me guess, early teens? 10? 11?
Glad he understands Robert's 'dilemma', of course.
Yay you managed to write a section. Told you (or was it pie) that needed some music! The Kiss of death pretty much. Damn. I enjoyed the scene were she was lustful and took a bite into Nick. i was wondering how this would mess with him but you covered that on the bottom. Death, no offense, was being a dick about it but in a way, I can understand. SOME way. Damien is something else, isn't he? :P I love this song too, btw! Wonder how the curse will mess with Nick now.
So I somehow managed to find the inspiration to write this, tbh I put it down to a lot of music If you have any questions about the previou… mores chapter then don't hesitate to ask! Enjoy!!! (This chapter is a bit 'graphic'...)
Vampire Challenge Chapter 3 – You Can’t Fight It
“Jayne?... J-Jayne?” Nick continued to cradle his love, she didn’t move a muscle; Nick pressed his ear against Jayne’s chest and listened intently for a heartbeat, yet there was no such thump present anymore. Nick could’ve sworn that tears were tugging at the corners of his eyes, but those salty drops of sadness never flowed, he wouldn’t let them.
But then Jayne’s body went from limp to stiff, she opened her eyes revealing that they had turned a hideous shade of red. Her skin went pale and cold, her breathe was slow and forced; she rose up onto her feet from a lying position, like something out of a horror movie. Nick crawled backwards a little as Jayne looked at he… [view original content]
Hey all, thread master here with another announcement (sort of). :P
Over the past few weeks, I was thinking on making a picture for my Irish Fable: Fayde Everwind. And no -in case if you were wondering- it's not going to be a normal picture this time. Instead, it's going to be racy. I'm talking cleavage with a suggestive pose, but mostly cleavage (and probably a flirty smile added into the mix as well ;D).
So, in other words, do you guys think I should consider drawing such a picture? Yes or no? If any of you are uncomfortable with the current question at hand - you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
Hey all, thread master here with another announcement (sort of). :P
Over the past few weeks, I was thinking on making a picture for my Ir… moreish Fable: Fayde Everwind. And no -in case if you were wondering- it's not going to be a normal picture this time. Instead, it's going to be racy. I'm talking cleavage with a suggestive pose, but mostly cleavage (and probably a flirty smile added into the mix as well ;D).
So, in other words, do you guys think I should consider drawing such a picture? Yes or no? If any of you are uncomfortable with the current question at hand - you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
The feels! I know!
Pie said it before I could. When someone is angry, they say horrible things. Rose will come around but it will take time. Lyla's reaction will be next.
Awesome, dude! Glad you like this so far.
I was thinking that the content of that seduction scene would be too much for this forum, but I haven't been banned yet (then again Pie has written more risqué stuff than me)
Death is furious that Nick let something so simple infect him... he may come around though
Damien is used to this sort of behaviour by now, though Nick will be the one paying for his new wall :P
Nick's curse only affects him at night... I mentioned this in a comment to Tetra not too long ago, the curse aggravates Nick's aggression and fills him with a desire for blood. Anyone before him could be a victim, even close friends and family...
Yay you managed to write a section. Told you (or was it pie) that needed some music! The Kiss of death pretty much. Damn. I enjoyed the sc… moreene were she was lustful and took a bite into Nick. i was wondering how this would mess with him but you covered that on the bottom. Death, no offense, was being a dick about it but in a way, I can understand. SOME way. Damien is something else, isn't he? :P I love this song too, btw! Wonder how the curse will mess with Nick now.
Hey all, thread master here with another announcement (sort of). :P
Over the past few weeks, I was thinking on making a picture for my Ir… moreish Fable: Fayde Everwind. And no -in case if you were wondering- it's not going to be a normal picture this time. Instead, it's going to be racy. I'm talking cleavage with a suggestive pose, but mostly cleavage (and probably a flirty smile added into the mix as well ;D).
So, in other words, do you guys think I should consider drawing such a picture? Yes or no? If any of you are uncomfortable with the current question at hand - you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
Hey all, thread master here with another announcement (sort of). :P
Over the past few weeks, I was thinking on making a picture for my Ir… moreish Fable: Fayde Everwind. And no -in case if you were wondering- it's not going to be a normal picture this time. Instead, it's going to be racy. I'm talking cleavage with a suggestive pose, but mostly cleavage (and probably a flirty smile added into the mix as well ;D).
So, in other words, do you guys think I should consider drawing such a picture? Yes or no? If any of you are uncomfortable with the current question at hand - you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
Hey all, thread master here with another announcement (sort of). :P
Over the past few weeks, I was thinking on making a picture for my Ir… moreish Fable: Fayde Everwind. And no -in case if you were wondering- it's not going to be a normal picture this time. Instead, it's going to be racy. I'm talking cleavage with a suggestive pose, but mostly cleavage (and probably a flirty smile added into the mix as well ;D).
So, in other words, do you guys think I should consider drawing such a picture? Yes or no? If any of you are uncomfortable with the current question at hand - you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
Caine seems rather heavy handed, doesn't he? I am not sure what to make of what is happening at the moment with Claires "possession". I really do not. I am actually somewhat confused.
Correct me if I am wrong:
So Caine has possessed Claire in order to kill Dracula and has made it so that he could do it without interfearence from Kieron but also manipulated things to ensure that Kieron does arrive after he has finished the job and given up Claires body?
It sounds as if a great standoff is about to begin. I shall await the next chapter in alacrity.
The Assault... Finale
Caine stood in Claires body but that didn't mean he couldn't hear her. He summoned a glass vial and filled it with … morehis blood.
"What are you doing?" Claire asked
"I'm going to help your love of course." He smiled
"Is it safe!? What if it kills him!?" She said in a worried tone.
"Your, I hope for your sake, future husband will not be hurt. The only trait that can be passed to him is being able to stand in sunlight. This would hurt no vampire." He said "However getting him to comprise will be complicated."
If Claire was in her body instead of her own head her cheeks would probably be red due to the husband comment but she was more focused on the 'getting him to compromise' part worried her. "What are you going to do!?" She said
Caine began to make Claires body move out of the Crypt...
Outside of the Crypt...
Ride and Kieron heard the gate open. Ride watched as Kieron ran over and stand in front of… [view original content]
Just a short bite of a chapter to overcome my writers block.
Chapter 23: Ich schlafe kann nicht. August 13. 1961.
I awoke that morning prior to dawn. Gertraud was still asleep, as was indicated by her inhuman snoring.
I clumsily dressed into my suit, coat, hat and riding gloves with as much effort I could muster in my state of tiredness. I gave my hair a quick slick back with my comb, not bothering with product this time. I needed fresh air.
Walking outside, I felt the cold of the early morning slap my face, energising me and eroding the tiredness within.
I would find myself in the position of being unable to sleep some nights. The buzzing and scents of the city, while it no longer tortured my senses as it did when I and she first arrived, I found can excite them and render me restless . On these nights, I would go out for some time and return sometime later. Gertraud knew of this and thus had no issues waking up only to find me gone, or at least she accepted it for what it is and allowed it for my benifit.
As I drove through the night time streets, I slowly became more relaxed and at ease; the steady rumble of the engine drowning out sound and the car‘s body shielding me from the scents. The wanting to sleep slowly, but surely, crept upon my eyes as the minutes and streetlamps passed. Eventually, I decided to head home, barely noticing the barbed wire and fences being erected and worked upon before the Brandenburg gate.
AUTHOR’S NOTE: The story shall be rather relaxed for a while yet. The really good material between Gertraud and Alfred happens after the beginning of the current millenium. I apologise to those whom I may have disappointed on this (especially you, Pie. I am aware of your enthusiasm you held with this part of the story), but I have come to the conclusion that the material provided for the Cold War in West Berlin does not extend far beyond the Berlin Wall and the Berlin airlift: neither of which I felt could be incorperated into a set of chapters in the context of Traudl and Al. I shall include outside events in single chapters (Cuban Missle Crisis, Vietnam War, etc), but Gertraud and Alfred will not be directly involved with these happenings.
Comments
I think lust is a more appropriate word instead of love for that scene :P Nick allowed pleasure to take over, and so the curse infected him before he could expel it... I suppose love was there... or was it???
The Prince is a knobhead :P
Death is rarely disappointed in his Harbinger, but Nick really fucked up this time. Damien should be at Penny's instead of reading Playboy! XP
Yeah but at least Isaiah has control over his curse, Nick doesn't, as you will see next chapter
Technically, the Cold War was not a war but rather a political standoff without the element of fighting.
They had to have something like this happen. Alfred had that bottled up inside those past five years and was in a state of self loathing.
Around the time of this chapter, Fanta was discontinued (Gertraud just had five more years to wait).
I have suceeded in my evil plot to bring feels upon all. Mwuahaha!
There communication is rather eccentric at best.
Just as I intended. They needed a moment like that. This may sound odd, but I enjoyed writing this despite that I was also saddened by it.
FEELS!!!! T_T
Rose Red, I don't like you atm, and now JJ makes you a homophobe... FUCK YOU, BITCH! (Tbh, Rose really doesn't strike me as that sort of person in Fables, but for the purposes of this story...)
Oh man, I really hope Lyla understands, the difference between Lyla and Rose is Lyla literally has claws!!
Replace Beer with Spirits or cocktails and you have me :P
I look forward to what comes next dude! XD
You're right
Nick knows that feeling as well (thank you Lyla Smith) XD
Brandy terrifies me! But I look forward to seeing her in a 'calmer' light in the future, I always like to see the toughest and deadliest of characters have soft sides where they just make you melt like jelly. You see them in this place of cuddly happiness and think "Oh wow, you DO possess a kind heart" :')
The Tweedles do have potential in stories, I used them as demonstration dummies for Nick in TDAU... I hope this one gets his throat ripped out! >:D
Lyla Smith has that affect on everyone.
She appreciates it, though.
Brandy is that person. If no one has noticed, I take characters with 'no heart' and try to find the good in them all. she will eventually come through once she gets some candy in her mouth.
Sweet, yummy candy.
Dee will have potential in this and in the future, should I continue to write after Gremily's tale.
Hmm, I can tell the way from RJ's dialogue is that he's older and a little more mature than from what I last read about him. Let me guess, early teens? 10? 11?
Glad he understands Robert's 'dilemma', of course.
And scar everyone for life? Nope (I am joking with that part. Still, you have seen my face < joke too).
Think she was hurt more then anything. I agree with you. Rose seems like she'd understand but because it was Robert and the two were fooling around and she wanted his D. Anger makes people act horribly.
Frank is still within this recluse? He has to pick up the phone eventually. Well, I hope things turn around with him.
Heavens above. I anticipated Roses reaction as being something like that. Dear me, that was scolding. I do not really blame her, but still, ouch! This just makes me dread to think how Lyla, his wife, will react.
Well done as usual.
I have indeed, nothing to be ashamed of. We're not evil people
Boy, I don't know why I expected better things from Rose. Ugh... I just... want to slap her for saying those hurtful things, man. I know, it's surprising to see those words coming from a fan of hers.
A fantastic job, as usual!
Anger is a person's biggest problem sometimes...
Eh, Nick still loves her at least :P
Uhhh. stop teasing me with Candy Angel! XD
I see
Ah, us men. We always tend to fall for the girl, do we not? I did not expect Nick to be able to let his guard down for such to happen, but alas, I do not blame him either.
Death's words were rather chilling. And so another adventure begins!
Rest in peace, Damien.
I got past the shame a long time ago, but I thank you for the kind words. One forgets they have a face like mine after having it for their entire life. Besides, it looked worse once upon a time. Much worse.
On the topic of anatomies, how is it going with your weight loss attempt?
This may be a bit (fine, it is very) off topic, but I feel the need to post this
As of my posting this, it most likely Saturday evening from the perspective of most on this thread. However, I am in Australia and thus, from my perspective, it is Sunday morning. I shall take a moment to say this.
Happy Mothers Day to my Mum and to all mothers out there.
Actually, I should make a discussion from this in the general discussions area.
Wow
Frontonasal Dysplasia... I still feel very sorry for you 
It is noticeable in my face already it would seem, just gotta keep at it
He loves Jayne so much already, and when she's giving off vibes that he's never experienced from her before, then he's not gonna say no :P
Death is like that sometimes
Who said he was dead?
Good to hear.
No one. I was making fun of the fact that Damien was his target (I wonder how long Nick will last without his special abilities, though?)
Nick hasn't lost everything, I'm dealing with him lacking his more useful powers in my current story on this thread (not the Vampire Challenge) It'll take more than just silver and runes to kill this Devil...
It's 00:51am in England, so it's Sunday for me as well :P
I was going to suggest that but, decided to do something unexpected. Lol
The Assault... Finale
Caine stood in Claires body but that didn't mean he couldn't hear her. He summoned a glass vial and filled it with his blood.
"What are you doing?" Claire asked
"I'm going to help your love of course." He smiled
"Is it safe!? What if it kills him!?" She said in a worried tone.
"Your, I hope for your sake, future husband will not be hurt. The only trait that can be passed to him is being able to stand in sunlight. This would hurt no vampire." He said "However getting him to comprise will be complicated."
If Claire was in her body instead of her own head her cheeks would probably be red due to the husband comment but she was more focused on the 'getting him to compromise' part worried her. "What are you going to do!?" She said
Caine began to make Claires body move out of the Crypt...
Outside of the Crypt...
Ride and Kieron heard the gate open. Ride watched as Kieron ran over and stand in front of Claire, Ride began to stand and walk over as she noticed Claire had drawn a sword and was now pointing it at Kieron. Rides heart began to race as she ran over, and then her heart shattered when Claire stabbed Kieron. She fell to her knees, tears began to fill her eyes. She covered her eyes and began to sob.
Kieron started to cry and looked up. "Claire...how did it come to this? A while ago we were having dinner with my mom..." He said smiling.
Claire thrusted the sword further into Kierons stomach. He let out a small cry of pain. She smiled "This all started when she decided to fall for the Tremeres trick." She said.
Kieron coughed up the blood in his mouth, with his hand on the blade he pulled Claire closer to him but the blade was now all the way through his stomach. Tears still falling down his face. "I know...and I should have taken action sooner...and I'm willing to pay the price, but I won't let you take her from me, Claire I WON'T LOSE YOU!!!" He yelled
Caine could hear Claires cries in his head. He would have to apologize a hundred times over but she would never forgive him for his actions, Caine knew that Kieron would not cooperate with him however and this was his way of getting him to. Caine kicked Kieron off the sword. He walked over uncorking the glass vial, Caine began to unbutton Kierons Cotton vest and and collard shirt. He began to pour his blood on the sword wound. To make sure it'd take a while for Kieron to catch up he pulled the wound open a little. He began to walk away...
"If you want to save Claire you'll have to save her! After I use her body to kill Dracula!" He said
Caine however was lying, he would give up Claires body when he dealt with Dracula himself. And then he'd talk to Claire and Kieron in person to explain his actions. Caine was gone in the blink of an eye. Kierons body began to twitch he was not only in pain but he was crying as well. Ride looked up and saw her son lying in his own blood she got up and ran over to him. There was a moderately sized hole in his chest. She tried calming him down.
"Kieron, Kieron! You have to calm down or you'll lose more blood than you have!" She said trembling, and tears running down her face.
Kieron realized he should stop and tried to stop crying. Ride tried to stop trembling and stop crying however what she was about to do wouldn't allow it. She lifted her hands.
"Now this is going to hurt. Really bad, but it's the only way okay?" She said sobbing.
Kieron nodded. Ride began to activate her blood magic, however her blood magic was not offensive but rather in a supportive way. She began to sow Kierons chest back together, the muscles began to attach to each other on each half of Kierons stomach. He began to scream in agony during this process. Ride kept sobbing and trembling.
"I'm sorry sweetie, I'm so sorry. I'm sorry, it'll be over soon." Ride sobbed her voice trembling.
After three minutes there was a blood stitch in Kierons chest. Kieron however passed out due to pain, Ride lifted his head and let him rest on her lap. Tears were still falling from her face she wrapped her arms around him, she hoped he would wake up soon...
Near the Princes hideout...
"CAINE! You said you wouldn't hurt Kieron!!!" She yelled at him.
Caine felt awful for what he did but he stood by it. "He wasn't going to just let me cut open his wrist, and plus would you want him here!? He could be collateral damage!"
"I don't give a fuck! What you did was out of line! You should've asked me first!" She shouted.
Caine began to feel dread and regret. "Claire...I promise what I did was necessary. I promised I'd bring light to your life, and I'm going to do exactly that."
"How do I know I can trust you!?" Claire said
"You'll just have to I guess..." Caine said moving into the princes hideout...
In the Princes room...
The prince was finishing up his dinner when he saw a shadow out of the corner of his eye. He stood.
"So the whore found me first huh?" He said smiling.
Caine grabbed him by the throat and slammed him through the table smashing him into the ground. "Actually it's me...Caine." He smiled with his fangs beginning to grow.
Dracula hissed. "You think I'm scared of you? Please. By staying alive I get stronger while you sleep." He said
Caine could hear the soldiers start pouring into the room. Caine lifted Dracula. "You may get stronger, but I am one of the strongest beings to walk this earth, seems like you are trying to ruin the balance of it. So it's time to put you in your place. Shall we go somewhere else and finish this? I have a friend that will mop up these...things." Caine grinned
Dracula spit in Caines face "Who Kieron!? Well I should personally thank him actually, his years of being experimented like the rat he is, has created such beautiful creatures!"
Caine began to get furious however he didn't want to kill Dracula, so he tried to maintain some composure. "You know I hate it when people talk about Family like that."
"Enough talking about that dirt rat fledgling, where shall we go? I'm itching to dig my claws and fangs in you." Dracula grinned.
Caines gripped tightened. "How about where you used to reside? Rocky mountains?"
"Oh I love home field advantage!" Dracula said
Caine sprouted vampiric wings and began to fly towards the Rocky mountains...
That's it! Any questions or comments or anything else let me know!
I was torn with her reaction but she's angry, hurt and confused. She'll come around but like I mentioned to the others, she is angry and when peopl are hurt, they say and do stupid shit.
Thanks, dude. Glad this is working out so far.
Frank is indeed still hiding at the moment. Robert will contact him but it might not be what is expected...:(
I'm torn sbout rose's reaction. Some say she overreacted but it was also for a purpose. she was angry and pie said it above. When people are angry, they act and do things. Lyla was actually his ex-girlfriend and we shall she her reaction next.
The feels! I know!
Pie said it before I could. When someone is angry, they say horrible things. Rose will come around but it will take time. Lyla's reaction will be next.
Awesome, dude! Glad you like this so far.
He's 12 in this story.
I wanted to age him just enough. I had forgotten that he and the Porgie have a huge age gap. Thankfully, pie brought that up. forgot. XD
RJ loves his father, no matter what.
Yay you managed to write a section.
Told you (or was it pie) that needed some music! 
The Kiss of death pretty much. Damn. I enjoyed the scene were she was lustful and took a bite into Nick. i was wondering how this would mess with him but you covered that on the bottom. Death, no offense, was being a dick about it but in a way, I can understand. SOME way. Damien is something else, isn't he? :P I love this song too, btw! 
Wonder how the curse will mess with Nick now.
Hey all, thread master here with another announcement (sort of). :P
Over the past few weeks, I was thinking on making a picture for my Irish Fable: Fayde Everwind. And no -in case if you were wondering- it's not going to be a normal picture this time. Instead, it's going to be racy. I'm talking cleavage with a suggestive pose, but mostly cleavage (and probably a flirty smile added into the mix as well ;D).
So, in other words, do you guys think I should consider drawing such a picture? Yes or no? If any of you are uncomfortable with the current question at hand - you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
Do it! You know already I'm on board, coming from the guy who's placed his girls in rather 'racy' poses and what not. XD
Why am I terrified of Lyla right now??
Come on Lyla, please understand... I don't want Robert to suffer anymore! T_T
It was you that suggested music
I was thinking that the content of that seduction scene would be too much for this forum, but I haven't been banned yet (then again Pie has written more risqué stuff than me)
Death is furious that Nick let something so simple infect him... he may come around though
Damien is used to this sort of behaviour by now, though Nick will be the one paying for his new wall :P
Nick's curse only affects him at night... I mentioned this in a comment to Tetra not too long ago, the curse aggravates Nick's aggression and fills him with a desire for blood. Anyone before him could be a victim, even close friends and family...
This is my favourite Alice Cooper song! XD
YES!
Uncomfortable no longer applies to me on this thread anyways :P
How could I object to a picture of that nature?
Do it. I implore you to do it and upload it ASAP!
I say do it! You've also reminded me that I have my sketch book, pencils and colored pencils since I forgot them in my parents home to begin with! XD
Caine seems rather heavy handed, doesn't he? I am not sure what to make of what is happening at the moment with Claires "possession". I really do not. I am actually somewhat confused.
Correct me if I am wrong:
So Caine has possessed Claire in order to kill Dracula and has made it so that he could do it without interfearence from Kieron but also manipulated things to ensure that Kieron does arrive after he has finished the job and given up Claires body?
It sounds as if a great standoff is about to begin. I shall await the next chapter in alacrity.
Just a short bite of a chapter to overcome my writers block.
Chapter 23: Ich schlafe kann nicht. August 13. 1961.
I awoke that morning prior to dawn. Gertraud was still asleep, as was indicated by her inhuman snoring.
I clumsily dressed into my suit, coat, hat and riding gloves with as much effort I could muster in my state of tiredness. I gave my hair a quick slick back with my comb, not bothering with product this time. I needed fresh air.
Walking outside, I felt the cold of the early morning slap my face, energising me and eroding the tiredness within.
I would find myself in the position of being unable to sleep some nights. The buzzing and scents of the city, while it no longer tortured my senses as it did when I and she first arrived, I found can excite them and render me restless . On these nights, I would go out for some time and return sometime later. Gertraud knew of this and thus had no issues waking up only to find me gone, or at least she accepted it for what it is and allowed it for my benifit.
As I drove through the night time streets, I slowly became more relaxed and at ease; the steady rumble of the engine drowning out sound and the car‘s body shielding me from the scents. The wanting to sleep slowly, but surely, crept upon my eyes as the minutes and streetlamps passed. Eventually, I decided to head home, barely noticing the barbed wire and fences being erected and worked upon before the Brandenburg gate.
AUTHOR’S NOTE: The story shall be rather relaxed for a while yet. The really good material between Gertraud and Alfred happens after the beginning of the current millenium. I apologise to those whom I may have disappointed on this (especially you, Pie. I am aware of your enthusiasm you held with this part of the story), but I have come to the conclusion that the material provided for the Cold War in West Berlin does not extend far beyond the Berlin Wall and the Berlin airlift: neither of which I felt could be incorperated into a set of chapters in the context of Traudl and Al. I shall include outside events in single chapters (Cuban Missle Crisis, Vietnam War, etc), but Gertraud and Alfred will not be directly involved with these happenings.
Did anyone get the end?