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  • [Take the riches to Braavos]

    [Mark's]

    Hunter Dawson ''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora

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    Take the riches to Braavos]

    [Mark's]

    Hunter Dawson ''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora

  • [Take the soldiers to Braavos] [Mark's] (because of the Azor Ahai thing)

  • [Take the soldiers to Braavos] [Mark's]

  • Take the soldiers to Braavos and Mark's :)

  • Take the soldiers to Braavos Mark's

  • [Take the soldiers to Braavos] [Mark's]

    Hunter Dawson ''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora

  • [Go there only with the ship]

    [Mark's]

    Hunter Dawson ''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora

  • [Take the soldiers to Braavos]

    [Mark]

  • [Take the riches to Braavos]

    [Mark's]

    Hunter Dawson ''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora

  • [Take the soldiers to Braavos] and [Mark's] I hope you enjoy your vacation wherever you're going :)

    Hunter Dawson ''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora

  • "I want to go to Ironrath,part of my family is there" Melisandre looks at him disappointed and gestures him away,he gets on a horse and starts galloping for Ironrath. He had a strong ache at the wound on his stomach,he could still feel the salt burning. When he got to Ironrath he saw Talia walking by the gate,and when she saw him,she ran out and hugged Mark,who was still on his horse,he hugged her and kissed her head "I thought you would die!" Talia said,frightened "Nothing is going to kill me" He said smiling,he then got off his horse and entered the gate. He knew Rodrik was going to cheer him up,he entered the great hall and saw Rodrik sitting by the table "Mark! I'm glad to see you in one piece!" Rodrik said and hugged Mark "Here,sit" Rodrik said and pulled back a chair for Mark,he sat down and thanked Rodrik,then he drank a cup of wine "How was the battle like?" Rodrik said,Talia was sitting by his side "I did everything i could to protect your sister,and it cost my sworn sword's life." Mark said,his eyes welling up at the thought of Yara "I'm really sorry. I can't imagine how it must've been like" Rodrik said "The red wedding was worse,trust me" Mark said,reassuring him. "I would like go stay here to Ironrath for a few days,if you don't mind." Mark said to Rodrik "You're always welcome here" Talia said,smiling at him. he was glad that he could protect those people,Mark is a trustworthy person,he doesn't like cunning people. "Uhm,Mark...You should come to my rooms as fast as you can" Talia said,and went to her rooms,a satisfied smile on her face. Mark was really eager to find out what she has planned,and he entered her room instantly. He closed the door behind him,Talia took her hands together "We are going to be betrothed,the wedding will be in three days" Talia said,Mark covered his mouth in disbelief "It's finally happening!" He shouted out,Talia looked in his eyes, and softly kissed Mark,they locked in a deep,but sweet kiss. They were happy,but Mark knew that wonder wasn't going to last forever. They pulled away "Now go rest in your chambers,you need some rest" She said and caressed his chest,he went to a room and laid in the comfortable and warm bed. He dreamed about his wedding,Talia and him were kissing,but Ludd Whitehill interrupted the wedding and killed all of his soldiers,then he ordered his soldiers to punish Talia,Mark woke up screaming and Talon,who was by the end of his bed,jumped. "Had a nightmare,my lord?" He asked,and Mark nodded "They don't mean nothing,don't worry about it" He reassured him "My lord,i received a letter,a lord wants your help" Talon said,and Mark found those words reassuring,Talon gave him the letter and he opened it

    "Lord Logan,i've heard from my closest friend and whisperer that you have a grudge against House Whitehill,perhaps we have a common enemy,would you like to be House Ravencrest's friend? The house,though,still has to be formed.

    Damon Ravencrest"

    He closed the letter with mixed emotions. He had planned to buy a gift for Talia,right from King's Landing,but he now had the chance to form an alliance. But it is a weak alliance,maybe a waste of time. He was torn...

    [Buy The gift for Talia] [Agree to Damon's offer and invite him to Smithon]

    So guys! Did you like the chapter? Actually tell me in the comments!

    Is Mark going to team up with Damon? Will they free Saya from Gryff?

    Whose part would you like to see next?

    [Mark's] [Kieron's Jarger's and Philip's] [New Character]

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    [Agree to Damon's offer and invite him to Smithon] and [New Character] I like the chapter! Did this happen after Gryff was caught? Or before he arrived at Ironrath?

    "I want to go to Ironrath,part of my family is there" Melisandre looks at him disappointed and gestures him away,he gets on a horse and star

  • [Agree to Damon's offer and invite him to Smithon] [New Character] Are there any characters in Kings Landing? Listened to the Rains of Castamere and I'm in a Lannister mood

    "I want to go to Ironrath,part of my family is there" Melisandre looks at him disappointed and gestures him away,he gets on a horse and star

  • [Agree to Damon's offer and invite him to Smithon] [New Character]

  • If there is one thing that surprised me is that there are few characters having House Lannister as their liege house. And,on 50 people,i think Jarger and Kieron were the only ones who were in King's Landing,i'll search more thouroughly for that kind of character

    [Agree to Damon's offer and invite him to Smithon] [New Character] Are there any characters in Kings Landing? Listened to the Rains of Castamere and I'm in a Lannister mood

  • Gryff wasn't caught,he is just about to show up to Ironrath to garrison the hold,the reason Rodrik didn't tell Mark is because he didn't want him to worry,or get him to go back to Smithon,which,at the moment is being cleaned by Melisandre's soldiers

  • [Buy The gift for Talia] [New Character]

  • edited August 2015

    [Agree to Damon's offer and invite him to Smithon]

    [New Character]

    "I want to go to Ironrath,part of my family is there" Melisandre looks at him disappointed and gestures him away,he gets on a horse and star

  • edited August 2015

    [Agree to Damon's offer and invite him to Smithon] [New Character]

    "I want to go to Ironrath,part of my family is there" Melisandre looks at him disappointed and gestures him away,he gets on a horse and star

  • Cool thanks for explaining that, it makes more sense now!

    Gryff wasn't caught,he is just about to show up to Ironrath to garrison the hold,the reason Rodrik didn't tell Mark is because he didn't want him to worry,or get him to go back to Smithon,which,at the moment is being cleaned by Melisandre's soldiers

  • Guys i'm not writing today, the wifi is being taken down for a day in my hotel and i left home the number of my ipad,i will write tomorrow. i hope you can understand,i'm really really sorry (and angry at the hotel owner :)

  • NEW CHAPTER FINALLY!

    Merrik

    Merrik was sleeping when one of his friends,Frord,woke him up "Merrik,we have to go hunting" Frord said to him,Merrik nodded confident. He lived in the wildling community White Tree,in a little wooden house. He got up and stretched out,then he followed Frord out of the tent. He slept with clothes on because Winter had gotten colder "Maybe this is a sign" Merrik thinks "We spotted a big fat bear near the Haunted Forest,i don't care if you are scared,we need to kill it" Frord says,Merrik cringes. The thought of him going near the Haunted Forest made him cringe. He then took out his bow,which was in a shoulder pocket "Let's do this" Merrik said and smiled to Frord,they then set out to the Haunted Forest. "Is Garen coming?" Merrik asks Frord "No,he is hunting with another group" Garen was another friend of his. "Let's hope he is alright then" Merrik says,Frord nods hopeful and embraces his spear and Merrik his bow. "Is that yours? It's really great" Frord says to Merrik "It's my father's. I took it when he died" He says,grasping his necklace made of Direwolf teeth,the same direwolf who killed his father "What killed your father?" Frord asks respectfully "A direwolf. Look at him now" Merrik says and shows the necklace,Frord chuckles. The two then hear a growl and get on the ground "Was that it?" Merrik asks,and Frord nods "He was here the whole time" He confirms "Let me have a shot at him" Merrik says and takes his bow,he gets an arrow,aims to the bear,who had spotted them,and shot the arrow right in his neck. The bear cried out and his legs gave out,Merrik then got up and screamed "HA HA! Nobody gets away from me!" Merrik says,Frord gets up. "Maybe you shouldn't scream so loud" Frord says to him "Me?! I am not screamimg too hard! THE STUPID BEAR GOT WHAT HE DESERVES!" Merrik jumped in happiness,but the bear got on his feet again "AAAH!" Merrik yells,before the bear tackles him to the ground. Merrik squirmed in it's grasp but the bear wouldn't let go. Merrik had a slender built,so the bear overpowered him easily. Frord took out his knife and plunged it in the bear's leg,which was crushing Merrik to the ground. The bear let go of Merrik and charged at Frord,knocking him to the ground,Merrik got up and shot another arrow at the bear,the bear cried out again and got off of Frord,to charge at Merrik,who shot another arrow at him. The bear was now struggling to breathe,and his legs gave out before reaching Merrik. Merrik then helped Frord to his feet "Are you ok?" He asked "Yes,thank you" Frord thanked him and shook his hand. The two then lifted the bear up and headed towards their camp. Merrik occasionally heard rustling in the woods behind him but he arrived at his camp easily. A few soldiers and wildlings cheered as Merrik and Frord made the bear fall to the ground. "Skin him and cook the flesh,give the pelt to who wants it." Merrik said,he felt like a hero for bringing back a bear to his camp,the people could live another day,but in the cold winds of winter,nothing is going to last forever. "Hey,Merrik! I saw you caught a big fish today!" Garen said to Merrik. "GAREN!" Merrik said and hugged him,then pat his shoulder "Hey,there is no time for hugs,okay? I need you to do something for me. " Garen said "What?" Merrik said and sighed "We saw movements around the village,the guards say that a wildling female with silver hair,maybe Sylvi,could be around here with his brother." Garen said with a worried tone. Merrik knew who Sylvi was,and he worried she could be getting her revenge. "I have to try and capture her?" Merrik asked and Garen nodded "I'm sorry" Garen said,and Merrik set out to the village's end. When he got there he started to look around. He was getting colder so he decided to stay in a small wooden house,which was right in front of him. He entered and sat down on a chair,he then opened the door to look towards the woods,which were behind the village "If she wants to enter the village she will do it through here" He said out loud,pointing to the woods which offered protection from the village's guards,and offered secure access to the village. He then thought about Sylvi's story: How she was thought as an ill omen for the village,and how they kicked her and his baby brother out,to die in the cold. "That girl is too tough to die" Merrik says,his head getting heavier. He sits more comfortably in the chair and closes his eyes.

    He wakes up a few hours later to a rustling sound. He got up and embraced his bow. Then he saw her. Sylvi was standing in the woods and was gesturing him to come to her. She then got on her knees and clasped her hands together,in a begging motion. "Should i get closer?" Merrik ponders....

    [Go towards the woods] [Stay in the house and hide] [Shoot an arrow to her]

    SO GUYS! This part is over! Did you like it? Tell it to me in the comments!

    Whose part would you like to see next?

    [Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's] [Damon and Saya's] [Mark's] [Hunter's]

  • [Go towards the moon]
    [Damon and Saya's]

    NEW CHAPTER FINALLY! Merrik Merrik was sleeping when one of his friends,Frord,woke him up "Merrik,we have to go hunting" Frord said to

  • Great chapter as always!

    Magicmel13 posted: »

    [Go towards the moon] [Damon and Saya's]

  • [Go towards the woods] [Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's]

    NEW CHAPTER FINALLY! Merrik Merrik was sleeping when one of his friends,Frord,woke him up "Merrik,we have to go hunting" Frord said to

  • I mean woods, I don't know why it says moon

    Magicmel13 posted: »

    [Go towards the moon] [Damon and Saya's]

  • [Go towards the woods] [Damon and Saya's]

    Yeah, great chapter. Keep up that work.

  • Thank you! When i get back home the chapters will be longer!

    Schlappen posted: »

    [Go towards the woods] [Damon and Saya's] Yeah, great chapter. Keep up that work.

  • [Go towards the woods] [Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's]

    NEW CHAPTER FINALLY! Merrik Merrik was sleeping when one of his friends,Frord,woke him up "Merrik,we have to go hunting" Frord said to

  • [Go towards the woods] [Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's]

    NEW CHAPTER FINALLY! Merrik Merrik was sleeping when one of his friends,Frord,woke him up "Merrik,we have to go hunting" Frord said to

  • Damon Ravencrest
    (The reason i didn't do Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's is because that chapter is going to be hella long)

    Damon took Saya's hand "You're not taking her with you" Gryff's head was shaking in anger "KILL THESE DOGS!" He said to all the smallfolk,Damon's sellswords unsheathed their swords and charged at the smallfolk. Damon took out his sword and stabbed a smallfolk right in the stomach,killing him. "Harold! They have no armor nor training! We'll take them out with ease!" Damon said to Harold,who wasn't a very good fighter. He nodded and started slashing away at countless smallfolk. Damon lost sight of Saya,he hoped she was alright. After the sellswords killed twenty men the other smallfolk surrendered,tossing their weapons to the ground. "SAYA!" He screamed "I'm here" She said,standing beside Gryff and his now dead horse. "I'll have your head for this" Gryff threatens Saya,and she kicks him in the crotch,he wails in pain and waves his hand. In the same moment a bowman shoots an arrow to Saya,who gets hit in the shoulder,the same bowman gallops with an horse to Gryff and he quickly gets on it. They run away but Harold grabs the bow from the ground,he shoots an arrow at the bowman and hits him in the head,killing him instantly "GOOD SHOT!" Damon said patting Harold on the shoulder,but Gryff took control of the horse and successfully escaped. Damon then turned to Saya "He will make us pay" Saya laughed at the remark "Seriously,this will cost us dearly" Damon said,and Saya sadly nodded,looking at the ground. Damon then turns to the smallfolk "WHAT IS THE NAME OF THIS VILLAGE?" He asks "This is Ravenvale,a humble village of farmers" The farmer who wielded the Arakh said "NOW RAVENVALE IS HOUSE RAVENCREST'S!" Damon says,the farmers shrug "Can we still work?" A farmer says "Yes,you can. But i am going to take all of your weapons" Damon says,the farmer nods and all the farmers step away from their weapons "Have at it guys" Damon gestures to his sellswords,who walk towards the weapons and take all kinds: Bows,crossbows,pikes,spears "This is mine though" Damon says,and picks up the Arakh. He always loved that weapon,he now could see if it was powerful as he thought it was. When the sellswords are done picking up weapons,there is nothing left on the ground. "What about me?" Harold says,Damon then sees a small book sticking out of a farmer's pocket, "House Frey's fares". Damon took the book recklessly and the farmer shrugged "I can't read anyway" He said "Let's go then" Damon says to his group "We have a wedding to plan,maybe" He added,and got on his horse,they then started galloping towards The Twins,the farmers waving at them "Can i have that book?" Harold said while galloping,Damon threw it towards him and he caught it "Thank you" Harold smiles,Saya then gallops closer to Damon "It was really nice of you,saving me i mean" Saya says and smiles "You'll be my best soldier,when i will have my own House." Damon said and Saya looked at him in his eyes "I won't stick around for much,i swore to escort you to Winterfell,but i guess you won't be going there now. I will escort you to the Twins and i will go on my own road,maybe even do some jobs for the Freys." She says,Damon then looks forward,knowing that Saya will eventually go away saddens him,almost scares him. "It is your life" He says coldly,they occasionally glance at each other but they don't talk. When they get to the Twins,a guard stops them "Halt! Who are you?" The guard says to Damon "I am Damon Ravencrest. I am looking forward to build my House under Walder Frey's protection" He says,the guard fidgets with his spear "So you don't even have a hold yet?"The guard asks "That's it,they are going to turn us away" Damon thinks "We don't" He says,the guard then nods "I will see that Walder Frey comes here in a few moments,please wait" The guard says and walks away. Damon is flooded with hope,maybe Walder Frey will accept his offer,but is it really worth it? There are other great houses who could accept him: House Bolton,House Arryn and maybe even House Baratheon of Dragonstone. This last one really caught Damon's attention and amazed him. He heard Stannis was going to the Wall,he wanted to go there too. "I guess it's the end of the road for me then" Saya said and looked at Damon "Can't you stay with me? I'll pay you" Damon pleaded. It's funny how a few hours earlier they were fighting "It's not what my father would do" She said and hugged Damon "Don't cry..." Damon cooed her "Who said i was crying?" Saya asked,her eyes normal "Ehm..." Damon started,but was cut by Saya's laugh "I will miss you" She says,the two are interrupted by Walder Frey "Who are you,boy?" He asked,Damon quickly got off his horse and knelt before him "I am Damon Ravencrest,i look forward to build my house under your protection" Walder Frey nods "I allow you to do that,you just have to marry one of my many daughters" He smiles,hopeful. His wasn't a sly smile,but a joyful one,almost as if he needed Damon. Damon spoke up....

    [Agree] [Refuse,go to Winterfell to seek House Bolton's protection] [Refuse,Go to the wall to wait for Stannis] [Refuse,go to the Vale to seek House Arryn's protection]

    So guys! Part's over! Liked it? Actually tell me that in the comments!

    Whose part would you like to see next?

    [Hunter's] [Mark's] [Damon and Saya] [Merrik's] [New Character] [New Mark's POV (Talon)]

  • [Agree]
    [New Character] good chapter !

    • [Agree]
    • [New Character]

    Damon Ravencrest (The reason i didn't do Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's is because that chapter is going to be hella long) Damon took Sa

  • [Go towards the woods]

    NEW CHAPTER FINALLY! Merrik Merrik was sleeping when one of his friends,Frord,woke him up "Merrik,we have to go hunting" Frord said to

  • [Refuse,go to the Vale to seek House Arryn's protection]

    [New Mark's POV (Talon)]

    Damon Ravencrest (The reason i didn't do Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's is because that chapter is going to be hella long) Damon took Sa

  • thanks man

    alikir34 posted: »

    [Agree] [New Character] good chapter !

  • [Agree]
    [New Character]

  • [Agree] [Hunter's]

  • Hi guys! New chapter!

    Megan Tuttle

    "Megan!" Duncan shouted to Megan,who sighed and turned to him "What is it father?" She said "I need you to train some recruits,do me this favor" Duncan said with pleading eyes,she sighed again and turned to the group of recruits "Yes,father" She groaned. She still was angry with him for sending her cousin,Gared on the wall "Let's start with some sparring,as Ser Royland teached you the basics!" Megan said,unsheathing her scimitar. "I don't fight with women! I would beat you in some seconds!" A prideful boy said,Megan walked up to him and punched him in the nose,then he took his arm and tripped him to the ground "This is the first one to lose!" Megan said,and started prancing around him,confusing him. He got up and tried to hit her,she parried with her sword and hit his face with the hilt of her sword,then she kicked him on the ground and held up her scimitar at his neck ""You're dead!" She said with pride,another recruit tried to hit her in the back but she turned around and dodged the slash,she then took his sword away and held up her sword to his neck "Get a good grip on your sword!" She said,and continued sparring with the recruits,always winning. As she sparred,her thoughts went to Gared "Is he still alive? The wall can be a hard place for newcomers" She thought. A recruit then spoke up "We will tell Ser Royland our train isn't hard enough,and we'll come to spar tomorrow." Megan was surprised "Here is one with some brains! Recruits,he will be the leader of this little group,follow his command" She said,and the recruit slightly smiled. The group of recruits started to follow their new leader to Ser Royland's training camp. She sighed "How much recruits am i going to train?" She then saw Gryff Whitehill entering Ironrath with a garrison of twenty men,she saw Rodrik staring at him with hate and the smallfolk hiding in their houses. She tried to stop them "What are you going to do?" She said,and Harys punched her to the ground "Out of our way" He said,clutching his stomach,where a fatal wound had been healed. She clutched her nose,which was bleeding,and crawled away from them,she saw Gryff talking to Rodrik,but she couldn't make out the words. She saw Gryff enter Ironrath's castle then she passed out. She was waken by Lord Logan's pleads "Megan,wake up" He said shaking her body,she groaned and stumbled to her feet groggily,Lord Logan made her lean on him "Why are you helping me?" She asked "Rodrik helped me,i'll repay him by helping one of his trusted soldiers" He said,Megan then gentlypushed him away and leaned on a wall. "Are you okay?" He asked her,she nodded and he went to hide behind a wall "Why are you hiding for?" She asks "A man wants me dead. If he catches me i am dead,he has a full garrison at command" He says "Go hide,i will be okay" She said to him "I really am sorry to leave you,but the soldiers won't do anything to you" She nodded "Thank you for helping me,i guess" She said to him,and he hid behind a barrel full of potatoes. She wobbled on her feet but eventually she walked until entering Ser Royland's training camp,she saw the recruits there "Are you hurt?" The leader of the recruits said,and made her sit on a small stack of wood. "Yes,i just need to talk to Rodrik,do you know where he is?" She asked him,he nodded "He's in the Great Hall,he asked for you some hours ago,we sent Lord Logan" He said,she sighed "I guess i will head there" She got up and started to walk to the Great Hall. "Why are the whitehills here? I am sure they are going to start a war,and i feel like we will lose it" She thought,sadness seeping into her. She then entered the Great Hall,looking forward to talk with Rodrik. When she entered the great hall she saw him by the table "Rodrik,can i do anything to help?" He smiled,he knew he could trust Megan. She was the most loyal soldier to his house,and he knew she would have helped "Whitehill forces are getting stronger,i need you to go to Highpoint,as a turncloak,tell Whitehill that you have some information regarding the forresters,and that you are willing to work with them,instead,hinder all their operations,and send us ravens to inform us of the situation." He said,she thought for some time "What if i go to Winterfell and do that with House Bolton instead?" She suggested "You could do that!" Rodrik said,Megan now made up her mind...

    [Work as a spy in House Bolton] [Work as a spy in House Whitehill] [Suggest you stay in Ironrath instead]

    So guys! Did you like the chapter? Actually tell me in the comments! I will write the longest chapter in the book yet tomorrow,but now you choose who you want

    Whose part would you like to see next?

    [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Mark's] [Merrik's] [Damon and Saya's] [Hunter's]

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