Yeah, I like this amount too. Damn, thats a lot of reading that you are going to be doing! Enjoy reading your creation! Are you reading for your own amusement, or do you have a purpose for re-reading?
DIFFERENT OUTCOMES: Second Half Of Chapter 4
If Star told the RV group to wait until morning, a few bandits would sneak up up to them whi… morele they're sleeping. They would kill who ever was voted to keep watch, the bandits would kill two more people from the RV group, before the others decide to fight back. The group would get split up during the gunfire, who ever survived would be alone until they regroup later on. If Star said nothing, the group would split up on who wants to attack now, and who wants to wait. The people who waited would hear all the gunfire and then rush to see what's going on, they would notice their group members have died and then they would have to decide to leave or try to kill the bandits off, if they stay, they would all die. If Latte tried to help NDY, he shoot the bandit holding the gun, NDY would pick it up and shoot the bandit next to him that was holding the machete, Romy would die by the walkers, and NDY would… [view original content]
Goddamn Pro you went out in bang (literally and figuratively) with Chapter 4. Can't wait for the beginnings of Chapter 5. RIP to all those who have died. Night peeps!
So, this was the "speech" I wrote for when Tobi was about to die. Too bad Shadow wasn't there, but this is what he would of said
"SHUT UP, TOBI! You had this coming from the very beginning. What was this community of yours? You made us do all your work while your lazy ass just commanded us. We are the real survivors, not you."
Thankfully Pro added just a tiny bit of it.
."Shadow told me that you didn't do anything but sit on your lazy ass while you forced everyone to do all the work. What type of leader are you, Tobi?
Going to see where I left off, and then start Ch.5. But I did say that it was going to be the shortest chapter, so there might not be that m… moreany votes.
How do you think Shadow's character would have been if he joined Tobi?
What do you think will happen with the mansion group?
Star, Scarlet and Juicy will return this chapter. What do you think will happen with them?
I'm not quite sure he would be ALIVE if he joined Tobi at this point :L
They'll relocate to another place.
They'll meet the original group, somehow. They must. XD
Tobi would have taught Shadow about survival of the fittest. He would have brainwashed him into hating the world, and hardened him as well. Shadow would have stopped caring about people, and start to become evil. He would have seen Tobi as a new father figure, and he would have been Tobi's protégé. Basically, Shadow would have slowly start turning into Tobi.
This is what I wanted, because I thought it would have been more interesting, but you guys voted differently.
Tobi would have taught Shadow about survival of the fittest. He would have brainwashed him into hating the world, and hardened him as well. … moreShadow would have stopped caring about people, and start to become evil. He would have seen Tobi as a new father figure, and he would have been Tobi's protégé. Basically, Shadow would have slowly start turning into Tobi.
This is what I wanted, because I thought it would have been more interesting, but you guys voted differently.
stopped caring about people
seen Tobi as a new father figure
Tobi's protégé
Damn, @TDMshadowCP ! You'd be pretty badass and probably take over after Tobi died. xD
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I know, bro. It's like over 500 Pages, lol, ugh. but yeah, I have to see something before I start Ch.5.
Majority of the choices kill me everytime I would have to win the lotto to still be alive now XD
Lol, but you did survive for a very long time. You were lucky, real lucky... for a while. B^]
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Jesus Christ I'm going to have a lot of catching up to do. Now to remember what pg. that I read last...
Um, if I remember correctly, probably a bit before the RV group reached the junkyard?
Thanks! It seems the last pg. I was on was 60 (I think I missed some/a lot of votes). Right now I'm at the part after WTD death.
Ah, okay. You're close to the ending, then. B^]
Yeah, haha, but I'll start Ch.5 this week, don't know what day, but definitely this week.
Goddamn Pro you went out in bang (literally and figuratively) with Chapter 4. Can't wait for the beginnings of Chapter 5. RIP to all those who have died. Night peeps!
I got bored, @LeeTheProfessional
Incase you can't read it:
Pru: Lel ur choices
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Pru pls
Pru Pls
Pru pls
So, this was the "speech" I wrote for when Tobi was about to die. Too bad Shadow wasn't there, but this is what he would of said
"SHUT UP, TOBI! You had this coming from the very beginning. What was this community of yours? You made us do all your work while your lazy ass just commanded us. We are the real survivors, not you."
Thankfully Pro added just a tiny bit of it.
Going to see where I left off, and then start Ch.5. But I did say that it was going to be the shortest chapter, so there might not be that many votes.
How do you think Shadow's character would have been if he joined Tobi?
What do you think will happen with the mansion group?
Star, Scarlet and Juicy will return this chapter. What do you think will happen with them?
"Oh boy, I can't wait to catch up on FotD!"
I'm not quite sure he would be ALIVE if he joined Tobi at this point :L
They'll relocate to another place.
They'll meet the original group, somehow. They must. XD
Lol, I would have left Shadow alive if he joined Tobi. He would have probably managed to escape, and then he would have his own side story in Ch.5.
Maybe hardened then?
My thought process was that why would an even crazier Carver keep a Ben around?
But I guess:
Tobi would have taught Shadow about survival of the fittest. He would have brainwashed him into hating the world, and hardened him as well. Shadow would have stopped caring about people, and start to become evil. He would have seen Tobi as a new father figure, and he would have been Tobi's protégé. Basically, Shadow would have slowly start turning into Tobi.
This is what I wanted, because I thought it would have been more interesting, but you guys voted differently.
Damn, @TDMshadowCP ! You'd be pretty badass and probably take over after Tobi died. xD
But, it also would have led to Rafoli dying a lot sooner, and maybe even Guilty as well.
The choices, the choices
None I can deal with XD
"God dammit!" ~Kenny 205