Since everyone else is doing it... I don't know if I'll be able to post in a while, so here's some fan ficitons you should think about joini… moreng!
Ready Aim Fire by Gustav_Kenny
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85780/ready-aim-fire-wait-what-number-is-this-like-my-fifth-story-on-the-forums-holy-shit
Trapped by Finlander
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85952/trapped-interactive-murder-mystery-character-submit-open
Raining by NoHopeLeft
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85647/raining-murder-mystery-interactive-story
The Dead's Redemption by mr.quality
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85962/the-dead-s-redemption-forum-story
Medieval Tale by maxbear29
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85948/maxbear29-s-medieval-tale-actual-story-part-link-to-where-you-submit-characters-inside
Superhero Fan fic by blueneon
http://www.telltalegames.c… [view original content]
Since everyone else is doing it... I don't know if I'll be able to post in a while, so here's some fan ficitons you should think about joini… moreng!
Ready Aim Fire by Gustav_Kenny
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85780/ready-aim-fire-wait-what-number-is-this-like-my-fifth-story-on-the-forums-holy-shit
Trapped by Finlander
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85952/trapped-interactive-murder-mystery-character-submit-open
Raining by NoHopeLeft
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85647/raining-murder-mystery-interactive-story
The Dead's Redemption by mr.quality
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85962/the-dead-s-redemption-forum-story
Medieval Tale by maxbear29
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85948/maxbear29-s-medieval-tale-actual-story-part-link-to-where-you-submit-characters-inside
Superhero Fan fic by blueneon
http://www.telltalegames.c… [view original content]
Since everyone else is doing it... I don't know if I'll be able to post in a while, so here's some fan ficitons you should think about joini… moreng!
Ready Aim Fire by Gustav_Kenny
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85780/ready-aim-fire-wait-what-number-is-this-like-my-fifth-story-on-the-forums-holy-shit
Trapped by Finlander
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85952/trapped-interactive-murder-mystery-character-submit-open
Raining by NoHopeLeft
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85647/raining-murder-mystery-interactive-story
The Dead's Redemption by mr.quality
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85962/the-dead-s-redemption-forum-story
Medieval Tale by maxbear29
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85948/maxbear29-s-medieval-tale-actual-story-part-link-to-where-you-submit-characters-inside
Superhero Fan fic by blueneon
http://www.telltalegames.c… [view original content]
Back Story: He inherited 3 Grand from his father before this and also got his first Katana. His family were killed in cold blood by a gang named "The Bloodthirsts" He's been on his own ever since.
Appearance:Black Hoodie, Short hair, Black mask over his mouth,
Name: Garrett Senphen (pronounced senfen)
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Personality: Quiet, Lone Wolf
Back Story: He inherited 3 Grand fr… moreom his father before this and also got his first Katana. His family were killed in cold blood by a gang named "The Bloodthirsts" He's been on his own ever since.
Appearance:Black Hoodie, Short hair, Black mask over his mouth,
Group:None yet
I'm back and I'll finish up the story because I don't have the strength to bring it out longer. It'll hopefully be finished soon, no votes, just story. It might be a little rushed, sorry.
I'm back and I'll finish up the story because I don't have the strength to bring it out longer. It'll hopefully be finished soon, no votes, just story. It might be a little rushed, sorry.
I'm back and I'll finish up the story because I don't have the strength to bring it out longer. It'll hopefully be finished soon, no votes, just story. It might be a little rushed, sorry.
I'm back and I'll finish up the story because I don't have the strength to bring it out longer. It'll hopefully be finished soon, no votes, just story. It might be a little rushed, sorry.
“--victims have been found tied up. Police are working on finding the criminals. Are they really bad? Who are these mysterious robbers? Are they the same people that killed—“ Kari turned off the TV. She paced, and then stood at the window. Juan got up from his chair and sipped his coffee. “Kari we’ve done this before. We’ll get them.” Juan tells her.
She said nothing. Maybe some music will lighten the mood, Juan thought. He sits down in front of the piano and played on of his favorite pieces. It was soothing. “Okay, let’s go.” Kari said leaving the window. Juan got up and they went outside. It was beginning to get chilly, it was October, and winter would be coming soon. Juan pulled out a cigarette and started smoking. Kari got in the car, and Juan did too when he was finished.
“I’ll ask the people who knew Rodrigo. You can check out the school get a feel for it, and the kids in it. Look for anything suspicious, and try not to be suspicious or noticed.” Juan told her.
“Of course Gael, I know. Good luck out there.” She says as the car stops. Juan watches her walk towards the school. Juan drives towards the building Rodrigo lived in. First he would check out his apartment. He takes the stairs to the 5th floor, he usually took the stairs now because of an incident with one case in the elevator. He found the room and it was locked. Of course, but luckily he knew how to pick a lock. Once he was finished he opened the door. It was just one room. There was a bed in the middle. The floor was littered with clothes and garbage. There was also a T.V, a computer, and a few video games. His computer was still on.
Juan brushed some trash off the chair and sat on it. He scanned through the computer. Just a youtube channel and a few unimportant files. Something was wrong. There was a video uploaded just today. Juan clicks on it…
There was a gun that the person showed on the camera. Then the person began running around the rooftops. Juan thought the figure was a male. There was a muffled sound of a voice calling out something from the street. The camera pans downward. The person on screen jumps down, and pulls out the gun. He then shoots Rodrigo right in the head. Then the video ends.
The killer must have been here… But the apartment showed no signs of infiltration. Maybe his account was hacked. Juan searched the room a little more thoroughly but he couldn’t find anything of importance. But wait… There was a message on the phone.
“Hey Rodrigo, I need some help, there’s money in it, so call me back when you get this.”
The caller I.D revealed it as Max Anderson. He was one of the people kidnapped. Juan would have to ask him and his friend some questions. He dialed Kari on his cell… “Kari, the two men that were kidnapped might know something. Could you meet up with me at lunch at my apartment?”
“Oui. See you there.” She says.
Kari Lynette
A bit earlier…
She approached the school, and straightens her wine colored vest, and black trousers with white stripes, with her hands. She pulls her black trench coat closer about herself, opens the door, and walks inside. Everyone must have been in class at the time because the halls were empty. The bell rung, and the students were already filled the halls. She stood by the wall in a more secluded area. One kid was in a rush and she bumped into her with her stuff, and she dropped it.
“I’m so sorry!” She said quickly bending down to pick it up. One guy was staring at her rear side, and Kari glared at him, he quickly looked away and speedily walked around the corner. “Are you okay? I’ll be careful next time. So sorry miss.” She said walking away looking embarrassed, but then she caught a glimpse of her face. “OH MY GOSH! IT’S YOU!” She almost yells. “I’m Erika your biggest fan, can I have your autograph? What are you doing here?” She said bursting with questions and getting out a pen.
Kari smiled took the pen and signed whatever he girl put in front of her. “I have important business here. It was nice to meet you.” Kari said shaking her hand. Erika was a bit downcast that she had to go, but she seemed still overjoyed to have met her. Kari knew that wasn’t very professional, she wasn’t supposed to be noticed. But it didn’t matter. She strolled through the halls, listening to conversations, and asking a few questions to some people. It seemed pretty normal. As she was about to leave, that’s when it happened.
Some guy was beating up some kid against a locker. Some people watched and laughed, others ran, no one seemed to care. Kari pushed the boy aside, and he seemed exhilaratingly excited. “Come on Melvin. Hiding behind a girl are you? I’ll see you tomorrow.” He laughs and walks away.
“Th-Thanks.” Melvin says.
“You’re welcome. Make sure you tell a teacher about this. Oh and do you know his name?” She said as he began to walk away wiping the blood from his nose. “Kyle Milligan.” He said and then disappeared upstairs. It wasn’t much. But on the ground… There was a small bag with some powder in it. It must have fell out of the assailant’s pocket. At least it was something. She called Juan.
“Gael I’m on my way back. There is someone who may be of interest. Kyle Milligan. Seems to be involved with drugs, and very aggressive.” She said.
“Good work, see you there.” Juan replied hanging up.
She headed towards the exit. As she opened the door she felt a bag being pulled over her head. She was just about to shoot the person behind her but something hard hit her head and she went unconscious.
Elizabeth Sanders
“WHERE IS SHE!” She yelled into the phone. The person had already hung up by then. Elizabeth began crying, she wanted to just shoot herself. No, she was going after whoever did it. She would find Ashley, her little girl… She saw the news people outside so she went into the garage, got into the car, and drove past them.
“Who could have done it? Who would have taken her? I… I miss her so much.” Elizabeth said smashing her fist against the chair. Where was she going to go? She had no evidence, or clues, the FBI told her to calm down, and let go of it, that they would find her, but Elizabeth knew that they wouldn’t find her. She had to find her. Someone called her cell phone…
Jay? “Hey mom! I came to pick up Ashley but the school was closed, and Melvin hasn’t gotten home. York is outside our house with that lady. What’s going on?” Jay said.
“Jay just… Don’t worry about it. Stay at your friends or something tonight. Please, just be safe, and don’t be scared.” Elizabeth said hanging up, trying to keep back tears.
She looked up and she was driving right into a brick wall! She jerked the wheel to the left, but the car still crashed.
“Hey Kyle y’know that thing we’ve been planning? We’re doing it now. We split up to get as much as we can. Watch yourself alright?” Gage said.
“Yeah yeah.” Kyle said with his two garbage bags, and backpack slung over shoulder.
“Then get moving.” Gage said as they both ran off into the night. Gage broke into over fifty houses in an hour scavenging all he could. With the advanced techniques and stealth that he had, he managed to slip past without getting caught. On his 71st house however, there was a man pointing a gun at him, as he was about to jump out of the window.
“Drop it all now.” He said.
“I can’t.” Gage said and he jumped.
He felt the bullet pass through his shoulder. “FUCK!” He said as he hit the ground and the pain in his shoulder increased. The man began shooting out the window though his shots missed. Gage kept on running, making a break for the spot. He hoped Kyle had better luck; Gage had only got 40% the amount of what he really needed. They needed a supply that would last them months.
He finally made it, dropped his stuff on the floor, and took off his shirt. Blood oozed down his breast. He got a wet towel and washed it, he winced, and cringed. Luckily the bullet went straight through. Gage began to work on fixing it up.
Hope Ricky
“All students… Please go to the auditorium for an important assembly. Do not leave the school grounds. All staff must go to the staff room.” The principal said over the speakers.
Weird, Hope thought to himself. Everyone got up from their seats and filed out. It was complete confusion. As they went inside it was dark, but people began to sit down, some were leaving. There was a spotlight pointing at the stage. Once everybody was seated, and the room was silent something dropped into the spotlight lifeless and bloody. Hope recognized it it was his teacher.
Faith
She looked up at the twinkling stars beside Jaylen. “I miss Otto. I mean, he kind of was an asshole, but not to us. He should have never gone to that drug thing.” Faith said sadly.
“Yeah, he was a cool dude. But sometimes we make mistakes, and we can’t change them. Sometimes we have to escape from them before they destroy us.” Jaylen said sighing.
“Do you think he’ll ever come back?”
“Maybe one day…”
“You know… Faith… I’ve kind of realized that… I like you.” Jaylen said awkwardly.
She had never thought of him in that way, just as a friend. But maybe she did have feelings for him, she wasn’t sure. He seemed pretty speechless. She moved in to kiss him. His lips felt warm, and he was taken aback by the action. It lasted for five seconds but then Faith pulled back, she shouldn’t be doing this, she had to stick to her mission.
Jaylen was okay with it, he just sat back, and they both lay there under the stars. Ariel’s voice cuts in after a few minutes. “Okay lovebirds, have you heard what’s going on? The school has been locked down by some terrorists!”
Meh I'll still do voting and back to regular pace, but I'll try to get this finished A.S.A.P.
Sorry no voting this round but I got 2 parts out just to get things rolling again.
Juan Gael Santos
“--victims have been found tied up. Police are working on finding the criminals. Are they really bad? Who are these myst… moreerious robbers? Are they the same people that killed—“ Kari turned off the TV. She paced, and then stood at the window. Juan got up from his chair and sipped his coffee. “Kari we’ve done this before. We’ll get them.” Juan tells her.
She said nothing. Maybe some music will lighten the mood, Juan thought. He sits down in front of the piano and played on of his favorite pieces. It was soothing. “Okay, let’s go.” Kari said leaving the window. Juan got up and they went outside. It was beginning to get chilly, it was October, and winter would be coming soon. Juan pulled out a cigarette and started smoking. Kari got in the car, and Juan did too when he was finished.
“I’ll ask the people who knew Rodrigo. You can check out the school get a feel for it, and the kids in it. Look for anything suspicious, and t… [view original content]
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Since everyone else is doing it... I don't know if I'll be able to post in a while, so here's some fan ficitons you should think about joining!
Ready Aim Fire by Gustav_Kenny
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85780/ready-aim-fire-wait-what-number-is-this-like-my-fifth-story-on-the-forums-holy-shit
Trapped by Finlander
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85952/trapped-interactive-murder-mystery-character-submit-open
Raining by NoHopeLeft
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85647/raining-murder-mystery-interactive-story
The Dead's Redemption by mr.quality
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85962/the-dead-s-redemption-forum-story
Medieval Tale by maxbear29
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85948/maxbear29-s-medieval-tale-actual-story-part-link-to-where-you-submit-characters-inside
Superhero Fan fic by blueneon
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85057/interactie-story-line-here-yes-i-am-doing-one-too-stop-asking-irrelevant-questions-deadlock
Viva La Forum Revolution by GoldenPaladin
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/85751/viva-la-forum-revolution-interactive-story
Awww, thanks!
Thank you!
Of course, quality stuff
No problem, anything for a fellow chat bro
I see what you did there...
This seems awfully familiar
Let the force (Chat) be with you. :P
It dose?
Do you remember?
No. Not really.
Doesn't matter. But I'll just say you are amazing.
Thanks!
If anybody wants to take over, be my guest.
Thanks for the mention, Raging
Name: Garrett Senphen (pronounced senfen)
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Personality: Quiet, Lone Wolf
Back Story: He inherited 3 Grand from his father before this and also got his first Katana. His family were killed in cold blood by a gang named "The Bloodthirsts" He's been on his own ever since.
Appearance:Black Hoodie, Short hair, Black mask over his mouth,
Group:None yet
Raging Left, this story is on hold I guess, until someone takes over.
Oh.
I'm back and I'll finish up the story because I don't have the strength to bring it out longer. It'll hopefully be finished soon, no votes, just story. It might be a little rushed, sorry.
Cool, Even though you're probably not gonna be here for long, it's good to see you.
I think I'm going to stick around.
Couldn't leave you guys.
And thus is why you're one of the greats!
:P
You give me too much credit.
I remember what we talked about in PM, I give you the right amount of credit.
There's more. That was just the brief, but thanks. Good to be back I guess.
Feel free to PM me about it...I'm only doing my homework. I'll listen buddy, get it all out.
AHGAGSGSHSHDHDHSHSHDKKDJDJDBDH
High on adrenaline I see.
It's good to see you again!
Is this a thing now?.?.?
:P
Yes.
Idk
HALLELUJAH! Saltlick123 is praising the SaltGod right now
Don't worry about it, it's no big deal, so long as it's entertaining
Juan Gael Santos
“--victims have been found tied up. Police are working on finding the criminals. Are they really bad? Who are these mysterious robbers? Are they the same people that killed—“ Kari turned off the TV. She paced, and then stood at the window. Juan got up from his chair and sipped his coffee. “Kari we’ve done this before. We’ll get them.” Juan tells her.
She said nothing. Maybe some music will lighten the mood, Juan thought. He sits down in front of the piano and played on of his favorite pieces. It was soothing. “Okay, let’s go.” Kari said leaving the window. Juan got up and they went outside. It was beginning to get chilly, it was October, and winter would be coming soon. Juan pulled out a cigarette and started smoking. Kari got in the car, and Juan did too when he was finished.
“I’ll ask the people who knew Rodrigo. You can check out the school get a feel for it, and the kids in it. Look for anything suspicious, and try not to be suspicious or noticed.” Juan told her.
“Of course Gael, I know. Good luck out there.” She says as the car stops. Juan watches her walk towards the school. Juan drives towards the building Rodrigo lived in. First he would check out his apartment. He takes the stairs to the 5th floor, he usually took the stairs now because of an incident with one case in the elevator. He found the room and it was locked. Of course, but luckily he knew how to pick a lock. Once he was finished he opened the door. It was just one room. There was a bed in the middle. The floor was littered with clothes and garbage. There was also a T.V, a computer, and a few video games. His computer was still on.
Juan brushed some trash off the chair and sat on it. He scanned through the computer. Just a youtube channel and a few unimportant files. Something was wrong. There was a video uploaded just today. Juan clicks on it…
There was a gun that the person showed on the camera. Then the person began running around the rooftops. Juan thought the figure was a male. There was a muffled sound of a voice calling out something from the street. The camera pans downward. The person on screen jumps down, and pulls out the gun. He then shoots Rodrigo right in the head. Then the video ends.
The killer must have been here… But the apartment showed no signs of infiltration. Maybe his account was hacked. Juan searched the room a little more thoroughly but he couldn’t find anything of importance. But wait… There was a message on the phone.
“Hey Rodrigo, I need some help, there’s money in it, so call me back when you get this.”
The caller I.D revealed it as Max Anderson. He was one of the people kidnapped. Juan would have to ask him and his friend some questions. He dialed Kari on his cell… “Kari, the two men that were kidnapped might know something. Could you meet up with me at lunch at my apartment?”
“Oui. See you there.” She says.
Kari Lynette
A bit earlier…
She approached the school, and straightens her wine colored vest, and black trousers with white stripes, with her hands. She pulls her black trench coat closer about herself, opens the door, and walks inside. Everyone must have been in class at the time because the halls were empty. The bell rung, and the students were already filled the halls. She stood by the wall in a more secluded area. One kid was in a rush and she bumped into her with her stuff, and she dropped it.
“I’m so sorry!” She said quickly bending down to pick it up. One guy was staring at her rear side, and Kari glared at him, he quickly looked away and speedily walked around the corner. “Are you okay? I’ll be careful next time. So sorry miss.” She said walking away looking embarrassed, but then she caught a glimpse of her face. “OH MY GOSH! IT’S YOU!” She almost yells. “I’m Erika your biggest fan, can I have your autograph? What are you doing here?” She said bursting with questions and getting out a pen.
Kari smiled took the pen and signed whatever he girl put in front of her. “I have important business here. It was nice to meet you.” Kari said shaking her hand. Erika was a bit downcast that she had to go, but she seemed still overjoyed to have met her. Kari knew that wasn’t very professional, she wasn’t supposed to be noticed. But it didn’t matter. She strolled through the halls, listening to conversations, and asking a few questions to some people. It seemed pretty normal. As she was about to leave, that’s when it happened.
Some guy was beating up some kid against a locker. Some people watched and laughed, others ran, no one seemed to care. Kari pushed the boy aside, and he seemed exhilaratingly excited. “Come on Melvin. Hiding behind a girl are you? I’ll see you tomorrow.” He laughs and walks away.
“Th-Thanks.” Melvin says.
“You’re welcome. Make sure you tell a teacher about this. Oh and do you know his name?” She said as he began to walk away wiping the blood from his nose. “Kyle Milligan.” He said and then disappeared upstairs. It wasn’t much. But on the ground… There was a small bag with some powder in it. It must have fell out of the assailant’s pocket. At least it was something. She called Juan.
“Gael I’m on my way back. There is someone who may be of interest. Kyle Milligan. Seems to be involved with drugs, and very aggressive.” She said.
“Good work, see you there.” Juan replied hanging up.
She headed towards the exit. As she opened the door she felt a bag being pulled over her head. She was just about to shoot the person behind her but something hard hit her head and she went unconscious.
Elizabeth Sanders
“WHERE IS SHE!” She yelled into the phone. The person had already hung up by then. Elizabeth began crying, she wanted to just shoot herself. No, she was going after whoever did it. She would find Ashley, her little girl… She saw the news people outside so she went into the garage, got into the car, and drove past them.
“Who could have done it? Who would have taken her? I… I miss her so much.” Elizabeth said smashing her fist against the chair. Where was she going to go? She had no evidence, or clues, the FBI told her to calm down, and let go of it, that they would find her, but Elizabeth knew that they wouldn’t find her. She had to find her. Someone called her cell phone…
Jay? “Hey mom! I came to pick up Ashley but the school was closed, and Melvin hasn’t gotten home. York is outside our house with that lady. What’s going on?” Jay said.
“Jay just… Don’t worry about it. Stay at your friends or something tonight. Please, just be safe, and don’t be scared.” Elizabeth said hanging up, trying to keep back tears.
She looked up and she was driving right into a brick wall! She jerked the wheel to the left, but the car still crashed.
Gage Milligan
“Hey Kyle y’know that thing we’ve been planning? We’re doing it now. We split up to get as much as we can. Watch yourself alright?” Gage said.
“Yeah yeah.” Kyle said with his two garbage bags, and backpack slung over shoulder.
“Then get moving.” Gage said as they both ran off into the night. Gage broke into over fifty houses in an hour scavenging all he could. With the advanced techniques and stealth that he had, he managed to slip past without getting caught. On his 71st house however, there was a man pointing a gun at him, as he was about to jump out of the window.
“Drop it all now.” He said.
“I can’t.” Gage said and he jumped.
He felt the bullet pass through his shoulder. “FUCK!” He said as he hit the ground and the pain in his shoulder increased. The man began shooting out the window though his shots missed. Gage kept on running, making a break for the spot. He hoped Kyle had better luck; Gage had only got 40% the amount of what he really needed. They needed a supply that would last them months.
He finally made it, dropped his stuff on the floor, and took off his shirt. Blood oozed down his breast. He got a wet towel and washed it, he winced, and cringed. Luckily the bullet went straight through. Gage began to work on fixing it up.
Hope Ricky
“All students… Please go to the auditorium for an important assembly. Do not leave the school grounds. All staff must go to the staff room.” The principal said over the speakers.
Weird, Hope thought to himself. Everyone got up from their seats and filed out. It was complete confusion. As they went inside it was dark, but people began to sit down, some were leaving. There was a spotlight pointing at the stage. Once everybody was seated, and the room was silent something dropped into the spotlight lifeless and bloody. Hope recognized it it was his teacher.
Faith
She looked up at the twinkling stars beside Jaylen. “I miss Otto. I mean, he kind of was an asshole, but not to us. He should have never gone to that drug thing.” Faith said sadly.
“Yeah, he was a cool dude. But sometimes we make mistakes, and we can’t change them. Sometimes we have to escape from them before they destroy us.” Jaylen said sighing.
“Do you think he’ll ever come back?”
“Maybe one day…”
“You know… Faith… I’ve kind of realized that… I like you.” Jaylen said awkwardly.
She had never thought of him in that way, just as a friend. But maybe she did have feelings for him, she wasn’t sure. He seemed pretty speechless. She moved in to kiss him. His lips felt warm, and he was taken aback by the action. It lasted for five seconds but then Faith pulled back, she shouldn’t be doing this, she had to stick to her mission.
Jaylen was okay with it, he just sat back, and they both lay there under the stars. Ariel’s voice cuts in after a few minutes. “Okay lovebirds, have you heard what’s going on? The school has been locked down by some terrorists!”
Meh I'll still do voting and back to regular pace, but I'll try to get this finished A.S.A.P.
Sorry no voting this round but I got 2 parts out just to get things rolling again.
Good Job! Take your time though since you probably have a lot of other stuff going on, but Great
Amazing Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
R.I.P Elizabeth