I'd like some help. I'm still working on Episode 2 of my S3. And I need some assistance also some pointers. I plan to at around Episode 4,… more a large group comes calling to take Howe's by force. But Clementine, and a squad of soldiers she's just befriended stand ready to defend their home.
Even though I never saw an episode, I feel this battle will just be a repeat of the Season 3 finale of the TV show. How can I have a battle but not have it be just like the show? Also, should Howe's remain intact or be destroyed? Opinions and feedback will be greatly appreciated.
E01: On The Guard - hint: Q-S1: "You're gonna have to depend on the honesty of strangers if you're gonna make it. And if those same people get to questioning yours... you're gonna be in trouble." NQ: Trust and Hostility
E02: Left Behind - hint: Q-S1: "I'll miss you." NQ: Regret and Suffering
E03: New Rules - hint: Q-S2: "You should be doing this, not me. Tending a fire so you can cook and stay warm... It's something you have to be able to do, Clementine. Otherwise..." NQ: Learning and Conditions
E04: A Dark Place - hint: Q-S1: "Don't know, don't care. As far as I'm concerned those fuckers got what was coming to them. I have about as much sympathy for them as they did for the sick, the old and anyone else they didn't think was fit to belong in their little paradise. So yeah, fuck 'em." Q-S2: "When I look at Kenny now, he seems broken. I just wanna survive, and that means picking the right sides." NQ: Insanity and Harshness
E05: The Aftermath - hint: Q-S2: "When I look at Kenny now, he seems broken. I just wanna survive, and that means picking the right sides." Q-S3: ... NQ: Redemption and Forgiveness
Thank all for your patience. And without further adieu:
EPISODE 2: GATHERING OF STRANGERS
Clementine wakes up in a cot. A military soldier (Cpl. Tompkins, MD) is by her side. Tompkins tells Clem she and Jane are alright and well. The two of them have been found and been unconscious for three days. Tompkins calls in her commanding officer, 1st Lieutenant Jerome Klein, who then asks who she is, what she and her friend were doing out in that torrent? Clementine (depending on players choice) tells the truth, or alternates some facts.
Clementine dresses back into her street clothes (was wearing a medical apron) and is brought before the troop consisting of the Lieutenant, his second in command First Sgt. Phelps, Cpl. Tompkins and ten others (Corporal Bradford, Private 1st Class Hanh, Private 1st Class Miles, Private 1st Class Nathan, Private 1st Class Eleonore, Specialist Stevens, and Privates Abel, Clifton, Gary and Oscar; all members of the Tennessee Army National Guard. Two others are with them at the moment, civilians whom only been with them a few weeks. Clem is introduced to each soldier and their profession.
Suddenly, Jane emerges holding Pvt. Gary hostage, a scalpel to his throat. Some of them aim w/ their sidearms. The two civilians enter, a man and a woman. The man identified as Felipe by one of the troops, is given the situation by Sgt. Phelps. Felipe then tries to diffuse the situation. As he walks toward Jane, Clementine sees the woman, whom sees her as well...
Clementine is staring at Christa! She runs forward and they embrace. Jane is surprised that Clem knows this woman and lets go off Gary and surrenders her weapon. Christa is very happy to see Clementine alive and well. Clem feared her friend dead from the bandits a month ago.
She admits thanks to Clem helping her (going by my choices), Christa escaped the bandits who held her up. She hid near a large fallen tree until the heat died down. After a few hours, she returned to the campsite but couldn't find her, Christa began to fear the worse. She continued north to Wellington but the weather continued to drop, Christa took shelter at a church on the outskirts of Lenoir. Then, one day she heard an engine and saw lights. That was when she met Felipe.
Long story short, they interacted, came to an understanding and Felipe agreed to try and reach Wellington if possible. The two of them made it as far as Spruce Pine, NC. There, they met some of the soldiers before them doing long term recon for anything of value. And the two of them were taking here and they all have been trying to stay alive.
Clementine is glad to see Christa is ok and in better spirits. Christa repeats she feared the worse when she couldn't find Clem, but she didn't fully give in cause she knew Clementine was stronger than she looked. "That sounds like something Lee would say"
Clem proceeds to tell what happened since they got separated. Christa chokes at hearing about Kenny's passing; she then proceeds to chew out Jane for her gambit and Jane tries to defend herself. Clementine says what happened with Kenny was her choice and she forgave the both of them. Christa reluctantly understands.
Once outside, it's shown that the military squad have taken refugee in an auto salvage yard; lots of junk cars, including truck trailers which they got from a truck stop a couple of miles up the road. Clementine explains she and Jane have taken up residence in a fortified Howe's Hardware about twenty miles back. The Lt and Sarge discuss a possibility of joining up with the two women and make something of the establishment. With some semi-auto weapons and a large amount of MRE's to give as a gesture of good faith, the squad enters Clementine's group.
(Have to stop, it's late and the rest will be given in the following week. Opinions and feedback always appreciated.)
Thank all for your patience. And without further adieu:
EPISODE 2: GATHERING OF STRANGERS
Clementine wakes up in a cot. A military so… moreldier (Cpl. Tompkins, MD) is by her side. Tompkins tells Clem she and Jane are alright and well. The two of them have been found and been unconscious for three days. Tompkins calls in her commanding officer, 1st Lieutenant Jerome Klein, who then asks who she is, what she and her friend were doing out in that torrent? Clementine (depending on players choice) tells the truth, or alternates some facts.
Clementine dresses back into her street clothes (was wearing a medical apron) and is brought before the troop consisting of the Lieutenant, his second in command First Sgt. Phelps, Cpl. Tompkins and ten others (Corporal Bradford, Private 1st Class Hanh, Private 1st Class Miles, Private 1st Class Nathan, Private 1st Class Eleonore, Specialist Stevens, and Privates Abel, Clifton, Gary and Oscar; all members … [view original content]
Episode 1:
* Jane/Kenny death
*
* Clem alone with AJ
*
* Clem meets for the first time Alan, a pilot
Episode 2:
* Clem e… morenters Alan's group
*
* Christa is in the group
Episode 3:
* The group goes in search of supplies
*
* The group find an airport and settle there
*
* Airport is attacked by zombies and they reach to get in and kill the majority of people
Episode 4:
* The remaining group find a helicopter
*
* Everyone die except Clem, Christa, AJ and Alan
Episode 5:
* Clem, Christa and Alan try to start the helicopter while defending the place
*
* Christa die to protect AJ and redeem herself from having killed his son
*
* Clem, AJ and Alan escape with helicopter
Episode 1: Depending on your ending, the first episode diverges in a few directions:
ALONE AT WELLINGTON
The first episode begins with a t… moreime skip. Clementine is now 14, where as A.J. is now three. They are shown in a thriving Wellington-- a community that has lasted well throughout the years that were skipped. Clementine will then, after a day's work in Wellington, hear something. When she goes to check out the noise, she'll see that Wellington is being invaded by walkers. Despite Clementine's choices, she and a few other survivors from Wellington will be forced out into the open.
WITH JANE
The episode will start in two different ways, depending on your choice whether or not to let the family stay in Episode 5:
FAMILY STAYS:
The time skip still occurs. Howe's hardware is still standing-- and the family has been living along with Jane and Clementine for a few years now. It's all been going well until a suspicious group approaches the ga… [view original content]
Using military vehicles (a M1117 Guardian Armored Security Vehicle [3+1passenger], an LAV-25 Light Armored Vehicle [3+6], a M1126 Infantry Carrier Vehicle aka Stryker [2+9] [all crew capacity according to wikipedia data] and a M1081 LMTVs to transport MRE's and additional weapons and ammo.
With three miles to go, someone waves the convoy down; it's Patricia. Clementine and Jane exit their rides along with Lt. Klein and two others, Patricia explains Gill and Randy are in the woods; Randy is horribly wounded. Clem demands where AJ is, "They...have him" she utters in fear.
A large party of strangers rolled into Howe's two days after the storm passed. After the water levels lowered, Randy hoped to find out what happened to Clementine and Jane, then they came. All of them were heavily armed; Randy tried diplomacy but was beaten up and all three of them were driven out. AJ was kept, for unknown reasons. Christa asks who would do this; no names were given but the leader of the groups name was Bryce.
Felipe's expression sours, and confesses he's an escapee. Not a member, but rather one of the people enslaved by this party. He was with a group of seven people when the outbreak occurred. After many months settling in a town in Pennsylvania, they were disturbed by the sounds of revving engines & heavy vehicles. Their settlement was broken into and all of them were forced into the street by tear gas. Felipe plus the six others were brought before their leader: a man, shaggy brownish-auburn hair, six foot one, medium build, mid-30s named Bryce. He claimed to be part of a movement that enforces protection. Felipe's group kindly declined but to Bryce he felt they needed a lesson. Some members killed one of Felipe's group w/out hesitation. Then, the six of them were hunted for sport. One pleaded for mercy and surrendered, killed immediately. Felipe and two girls who were his closest friends stayed together. The others Felipe wasn't sure, but he knew they'd more than likely be dead. All three were caught and beaten severely. Reeling in pain, Felipe heard a blade unsheathed, followed by a pair of quick screams and then silence. Bryce congratulated Felipe on being able to remain himself in spite of the hunt and the final one standing. This group kept him alive and took him back to their base camp in Greeneville. Once healed, Felipe became part of a group of laborers; assisting in weapons cataloging, cooking and in assortment of mediocre chores but he suspected Bryce was keeping him alive for another sinister purpose.
One member of the camp snickered upon giving him an answer: Apparently Bryce has a hobby: he's a sadist, who selects unique individuals whom he breaks down through psychological and physical abuse. He doesn't just break their minds: he destroys their souls! Once satisfied with his handiwork, Bryce releases them into the wild for the lurkers to feast.
A week or so ago, some members brought back one found near Georgia's border...
Jane interrupts saying there is no way those people are taking Howe's from them and threatens to bring Felipe to them, Clementine intervenes but Felipe does say it's his fault he escaped and they found Howe's. Lt. Klein forms a plan, he has half the squad tend to Randy, Gill and Patricia, then take all except the Stryker and one of the LMTVs to a tire ship under a highway a mile or so back and wait if anything happens. Klein requests Christa stay with them as well. She tells Clem to be careful.
So, Clementine, Jane, Felipe, Lt. Klein, Sgt. Phelps, PFC Hanh, and Privates Clifton, Gary and Abel drive up to Howe's in the Stryker and a 2 1/2 ton truck of supplies, hoping to try again with diplomacy. Upon entering the parking lot, shots ring around them. Jane sees other military like vehicles and trucks, parked close to the main building. Through a megaphone, one person orders them to come out and lay down their weapons. The orders are followed and the eight of them are led into Howe's. A good number of around sixty people are inside, each armed. One walks forward holding a crying AJ. Felipe grimly recognizes Bryce.
Bryce claims new ownership of the establishment, by waving an arm when talking. Clementine sees he's wearing a leather jacket with what looks like a vulture holding a bat wrapped in barbed wire. Above it is one word: SAVIORS. Handing the baby to one of his female subordinates, Bryce says hi to Felipe, then punches him hard in the face and stomach, explaining he won't escape the Saviors again. Clementine states this is her friends home and demands to give back AJ. Bryce replies without a word as AJ is put in Clementine's arms. Klein urges to consider helping one another, not resort to barbarism, he then shows the truck filled with weapons and MRE's as a down payment for this negotiation. Bryce stares at the truck and then at his guests, "I've got a better idea" then draws his sidearm putting a round between Klein's eyes. The others gape in horror. Bryce eyes Felipe, other Saviors gun down the lower class soldiers. Sgt Phelps is wounded but kept alive.
Felipe shouts why, they surrendered. Bryce coldly responds cause Felipe cares for them. Others have their eyes on Jane and Clementine. Bryce halts it, saying the dead soldiers are suitable punishment. Clementine's gut tells this man wasn't done yet. A Savior grabs AJ out of Clem's arms, Bryce expects the four of them to accept his groups protection...or else.
Just now, two men come into view with a figure in tow. Clem and Felipe gasp. Before them is someone Clementine didn't expect to see again...Lilly! Her clothes are very worn, she appears bruised and hasn't slept in days. Felipe grits his teeth, Clementine just now realizes he knows Lilly and was the person the Saviors found on the Georgian border from Felipe's tale. Lowering his head, Felipe surrenders, claiming he won't run anymore. Satisfied with the answer, Bryce orders the remainder to be taken back to their camp in Greeneville. The final movement is in the final stages. As they are being up into one of their military trucks, Lilly, dazed but looks downward, "Clementine...?" Clem looks sad and says nothing, the choice on what to say will be left up to the player in the next episode. Fade to black.
Apologizes for some of the dark moments, but this is the Walking Dead. Next episode, learn what Bryce's movement is planning, and Clem learns from Felipe his story about Lilly.
Sorry about the lack of updates, but I've decided to scrap what I've inputed and after reading some posts on themes viewers wish to see in Season 3, I'm giving my concept a complete overhaul. Plz be patient, art or quality work takes time.
My redo of a Season 3 concept is still underway. But I have a question for any Lilly fans (Lilly haters, if any are reading this, please...no guff). I'm having Clementine find Christa and Lilly together at an abandoned church on the outskirts of Johnson City, near Elizabethton where Howe's is.
Once reunited, later in one of the chapters, Clem returns to Howe's to learn from Christa she's locked herself in Carver's office and will only speak with Clem.
I pictured Lilly broken, but also I want to show she has not given in. But I want to keep her in a depressive state and try to have Clem bring her back, restore her soul if you will, for a big battle will occur for Howe's later. Suggestions, anyone? I don't want Lilly to be hopeless or wimpy. Just lost at the moment.
A cross country trip from Georgia to California. Its a Buddy Buddy comedy starring Arvo, and Nate. In this story, instead of it being emotionally driven it would be about choices about morality, what you would do to survive.
Episode 1: Where are my PILLS?: Nate is searching for Arvo, he never delivered the pills he was supposed to, so he drives up to the location where Arvo was stashing the pills, and finds them gone. He searches the house, finds tracks. He follows them until running into Arvo.
Episode 2: Unexpected Stop? Nate decides to take Arvo with him, on a road trip to California. They run into another group, they offer a decent amount of supplies for Arvo. Well Nate needs gas for his truck so, he has to make something work.
Episode 3: Zero fucks Nate drives to his safe house in Nevada, he picks on Arvo the entire way there. Arvo cries about his sister, Nate can either console or mock him.
They run into a woman while driving, and Nate tries to play it smooth, while he tosses Arvo in the back of his cab.
Episode 4: Get the fudge out. Nate arrives at the safe house with Arvo to find a family of squatters taking refuge inside. He has to vacate the squatters so he can reach his ammo cache.
Episode 5."CALIFORNIA" They reach California, the three of them. Nate visits a house, you don't know why in search of something.
Main idea of the season:
A cross country trip from Georgia to California. Its a Buddy Buddy comedy starring Arvo, and Nate. In this… more story, instead of it being emotionally driven it would be about choices about morality, what you would do to survive.
Episode 1: Where are my PILLS?: Nate is searching for Arvo, he never delivered the pills he was supposed to, so he drives up to the location where Arvo was stashing the pills, and finds them gone. He searches the house, finds tracks. He follows them until running into Arvo.
Episode 2: Unexpected Stop? Nate decides to take Arvo with him, on a road trip to California. They run into another group, they offer a decent amount of supplies for Arvo. Well Nate needs gas for his truck so, he has to make something work.
Episode 3: Zero fucks Nate drives to his safe house in Nevada, he picks on Arvo the entire way there. Arvo cries about his sister, Nate can either console or mock him.… [view original content]
Episode 1:
* Jane/Kenny death
*
* Clem alone with AJ
*
* Clem meets for the first time Alan, a pilot
Episode 2:
* Clem e… morenters Alan's group
*
* Christa is in the group
Episode 3:
* The group goes in search of supplies
*
* The group find an airport and settle there
*
* Airport is attacked by zombies and they reach to get in and kill the majority of people
Episode 4:
* The remaining group find a helicopter
*
* Everyone die except Clem, Christa, AJ and Alan
Episode 5:
* Clem, Christa and Alan try to start the helicopter while defending the place
*
* Christa die to protect AJ and redeem herself from having killed his son
*
* Clem, AJ and Alan escape with helicopter
Premise : it's three days into the outbreak. Don is a National Guard sergeant and part of the disastrous Battle of Macon, the aftermath of which is shown and mentioned in S1E3. When a sudden death forces him to take command of his squad, Don is left to make tactical and personal decision that will affect not only his people, but countless other survivors in the area.
Episode One : Broken Arrow
After being rescued just in time from the compromised SaveLots Quarantine, Don's squad is redeployed to a rural campsite just outside of Macon. There, they formulate a plan of action for dealing with other survivors. When a routine patrol leads them to a group of armed survivors, Don must carefully defuse an argument with a group of bikers. Eventually, the search for supplies and a young hostage leads the squad and their temporary allies to a bandit camp, and Don must decide on a plan of action before it's too late.
Choices
1.) Make a tough choice at SaveLots : [Help Civilians] or [Leave Civilians]
2.) Decide a killer's fate : [Forgive the pilot] or [Abandon the pilot] or [Kill the pilot]
3.) Deal with some survivors : [Be friendly] or [Detain them] or [Attack them]
4.) Choose a battle-plan : [Go loud and risk the walkers] or [Sneak in with less protection]
5.) Resolve the hostage situation : [Risk shooting] or [Try to distract]
I'll write more as I come up with it.
Episode Previews
Episode 2 : Best Laid Plans - An investigation into a gory bear-trap maiming leads Don and Corporal Reyes to an old motel, but can the group inside really be responsible. More importantly, can they find out without being discovered? Later, Don is forced to decide between his loyalty to one of his own and his loyalties to the mission. Whatever he choose, hell will follow.
Episode 3: Operation Houseboat - The squad is constantly harassed by an enigmatic sniper and the threat of an impending herd. Meanwhile, the government declares a general retreat and announces a plan to withdraw as many soldiers from the mainland as possible. Don and his squad must decide whether to evacuate or stay and desert.
I'd like to experience a twist where in a family of four, we expect the father to outlive his children and the story initially sets up the father to have his story arc in almost the exact same way as Kenny had in Season 1 (and 2 to an extent).
There will be an event where the lives of the mother and children are in grave danger, to the point where it appears that the father will eventually come to face with the loss of his entire family. Then suddenly, the father is the intended and inevitable victim all along, and the mother and children are the true survivors.
From thereon, the story focuses towards the mother's struggle to keep her two children safe, going through sheer hell to ensure that herself and her children will not suffer the same fate as the father/husband had. Instead of killing them off, we see how much the have changed from reasonable family who were able to survive in the zombie apocalypse, to a mother who will do anything to ensure that her children will continue to live, while the children are struggling with the lost of their father as well as the sudden change of attitude and morals with their living mother.
Comments
Add a twist to it, like the group agrees to to give up Howe's and then comes back later to reclaim it when they have enough weapons.
I like that. Anyone else? Options or collaborations will be greatly appreciated.
Wait...
Forgive me, I'm confused.
Which "group" are you referring to, Clem's or the primary antagonists?
That's up to you, it's your story.
Ok, thanks.
Season 5 Episode 1 thing is nearly finished!
Made a new discussion with a very similar idea to this, so post all of your stories and fics HERE: http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/92600/the-walking-dead-game-season-3-and-beyond-fics?new=1
E01: On The Guard - hint: Q-S1: "You're gonna have to depend on the honesty of strangers if you're gonna make it. And if those same people get to questioning yours... you're gonna be in trouble." NQ: Trust and Hostility
E02: Left Behind - hint: Q-S1: "I'll miss you." NQ: Regret and Suffering
E03: New Rules - hint: Q-S2: "You should be doing this, not me. Tending a fire so you can cook and stay warm... It's something you have to be able to do, Clementine. Otherwise..." NQ: Learning and Conditions
E04: A Dark Place - hint: Q-S1: "Don't know, don't care. As far as I'm concerned those fuckers got what was coming to them. I have about as much sympathy for them as they did for the sick, the old and anyone else they didn't think was fit to belong in their little paradise. So yeah, fuck 'em." Q-S2: "When I look at Kenny now, he seems broken. I just wanna survive, and that means picking the right sides." NQ: Insanity and Harshness
E05: The Aftermath - hint: Q-S2: "When I look at Kenny now, he seems broken. I just wanna survive, and that means picking the right sides." Q-S3: ... NQ: Redemption and Forgiveness
Thank all for your patience. And without further adieu:
EPISODE 2: GATHERING OF STRANGERS
Clementine wakes up in a cot. A military soldier (Cpl. Tompkins, MD) is by her side. Tompkins tells Clem she and Jane are alright and well. The two of them have been found and been unconscious for three days. Tompkins calls in her commanding officer, 1st Lieutenant Jerome Klein, who then asks who she is, what she and her friend were doing out in that torrent? Clementine (depending on players choice) tells the truth, or alternates some facts.
Clementine dresses back into her street clothes (was wearing a medical apron) and is brought before the troop consisting of the Lieutenant, his second in command First Sgt. Phelps, Cpl. Tompkins and ten others (Corporal Bradford, Private 1st Class Hanh, Private 1st Class Miles, Private 1st Class Nathan, Private 1st Class Eleonore, Specialist Stevens, and Privates Abel, Clifton, Gary and Oscar; all members of the Tennessee Army National Guard. Two others are with them at the moment, civilians whom only been with them a few weeks. Clem is introduced to each soldier and their profession.
Suddenly, Jane emerges holding Pvt. Gary hostage, a scalpel to his throat. Some of them aim w/ their sidearms. The two civilians enter, a man and a woman. The man identified as Felipe by one of the troops, is given the situation by Sgt. Phelps. Felipe then tries to diffuse the situation. As he walks toward Jane, Clementine sees the woman, whom sees her as well...
Clementine is staring at Christa! She runs forward and they embrace. Jane is surprised that Clem knows this woman and lets go off Gary and surrenders her weapon. Christa is very happy to see Clementine alive and well. Clem feared her friend dead from the bandits a month ago.
She admits thanks to Clem helping her (going by my choices), Christa escaped the bandits who held her up. She hid near a large fallen tree until the heat died down. After a few hours, she returned to the campsite but couldn't find her, Christa began to fear the worse. She continued north to Wellington but the weather continued to drop, Christa took shelter at a church on the outskirts of Lenoir. Then, one day she heard an engine and saw lights. That was when she met Felipe.
Long story short, they interacted, came to an understanding and Felipe agreed to try and reach Wellington if possible. The two of them made it as far as Spruce Pine, NC. There, they met some of the soldiers before them doing long term recon for anything of value. And the two of them were taking here and they all have been trying to stay alive.
Clementine is glad to see Christa is ok and in better spirits. Christa repeats she feared the worse when she couldn't find Clem, but she didn't fully give in cause she knew Clementine was stronger than she looked. "That sounds like something Lee would say"
Clem proceeds to tell what happened since they got separated. Christa chokes at hearing about Kenny's passing; she then proceeds to chew out Jane for her gambit and Jane tries to defend herself. Clementine says what happened with Kenny was her choice and she forgave the both of them. Christa reluctantly understands.
Once outside, it's shown that the military squad have taken refugee in an auto salvage yard; lots of junk cars, including truck trailers which they got from a truck stop a couple of miles up the road. Clementine explains she and Jane have taken up residence in a fortified Howe's Hardware about twenty miles back. The Lt and Sarge discuss a possibility of joining up with the two women and make something of the establishment. With some semi-auto weapons and a large amount of MRE's to give as a gesture of good faith, the squad enters Clementine's group.
(Have to stop, it's late and the rest will be given in the following week. Opinions and feedback always appreciated.)
Nice!
Episode 1:
Episode 2:
Episode 3:
Episode 4:
Episode 5:
...And Alan dies in EP1 S4 :P
U MADE MY DAY! XD
Finally, someone actually comes up with a feasible theory.
And Clem meets a new group
That dies in S5 E1 :'D
And now finishing Ep 2
Using military vehicles (a M1117 Guardian Armored Security Vehicle [3+1passenger], an LAV-25 Light Armored Vehicle [3+6], a M1126 Infantry Carrier Vehicle aka Stryker [2+9] [all crew capacity according to wikipedia data] and a M1081 LMTVs to transport MRE's and additional weapons and ammo.
With three miles to go, someone waves the convoy down; it's Patricia. Clementine and Jane exit their rides along with Lt. Klein and two others, Patricia explains Gill and Randy are in the woods; Randy is horribly wounded. Clem demands where AJ is, "They...have him" she utters in fear.
A large party of strangers rolled into Howe's two days after the storm passed. After the water levels lowered, Randy hoped to find out what happened to Clementine and Jane, then they came. All of them were heavily armed; Randy tried diplomacy but was beaten up and all three of them were driven out. AJ was kept, for unknown reasons. Christa asks who would do this; no names were given but the leader of the groups name was Bryce.
Felipe's expression sours, and confesses he's an escapee. Not a member, but rather one of the people enslaved by this party. He was with a group of seven people when the outbreak occurred. After many months settling in a town in Pennsylvania, they were disturbed by the sounds of revving engines & heavy vehicles. Their settlement was broken into and all of them were forced into the street by tear gas. Felipe plus the six others were brought before their leader: a man, shaggy brownish-auburn hair, six foot one, medium build, mid-30s named Bryce. He claimed to be part of a movement that enforces protection. Felipe's group kindly declined but to Bryce he felt they needed a lesson. Some members killed one of Felipe's group w/out hesitation. Then, the six of them were hunted for sport. One pleaded for mercy and surrendered, killed immediately. Felipe and two girls who were his closest friends stayed together. The others Felipe wasn't sure, but he knew they'd more than likely be dead. All three were caught and beaten severely. Reeling in pain, Felipe heard a blade unsheathed, followed by a pair of quick screams and then silence. Bryce congratulated Felipe on being able to remain himself in spite of the hunt and the final one standing. This group kept him alive and took him back to their base camp in Greeneville. Once healed, Felipe became part of a group of laborers; assisting in weapons cataloging, cooking and in assortment of mediocre chores but he suspected Bryce was keeping him alive for another sinister purpose.
One member of the camp snickered upon giving him an answer: Apparently Bryce has a hobby: he's a sadist, who selects unique individuals whom he breaks down through psychological and physical abuse. He doesn't just break their minds: he destroys their souls! Once satisfied with his handiwork, Bryce releases them into the wild for the lurkers to feast.
A week or so ago, some members brought back one found near Georgia's border...
Jane interrupts saying there is no way those people are taking Howe's from them and threatens to bring Felipe to them, Clementine intervenes but Felipe does say it's his fault he escaped and they found Howe's. Lt. Klein forms a plan, he has half the squad tend to Randy, Gill and Patricia, then take all except the Stryker and one of the LMTVs to a tire ship under a highway a mile or so back and wait if anything happens. Klein requests Christa stay with them as well. She tells Clem to be careful.
So, Clementine, Jane, Felipe, Lt. Klein, Sgt. Phelps, PFC Hanh, and Privates Clifton, Gary and Abel drive up to Howe's in the Stryker and a 2 1/2 ton truck of supplies, hoping to try again with diplomacy. Upon entering the parking lot, shots ring around them. Jane sees other military like vehicles and trucks, parked close to the main building. Through a megaphone, one person orders them to come out and lay down their weapons. The orders are followed and the eight of them are led into Howe's. A good number of around sixty people are inside, each armed. One walks forward holding a crying AJ. Felipe grimly recognizes Bryce.
Bryce claims new ownership of the establishment, by waving an arm when talking. Clementine sees he's wearing a leather jacket with what looks like a vulture holding a bat wrapped in barbed wire. Above it is one word: SAVIORS. Handing the baby to one of his female subordinates, Bryce says hi to Felipe, then punches him hard in the face and stomach, explaining he won't escape the Saviors again. Clementine states this is her friends home and demands to give back AJ. Bryce replies without a word as AJ is put in Clementine's arms. Klein urges to consider helping one another, not resort to barbarism, he then shows the truck filled with weapons and MRE's as a down payment for this negotiation. Bryce stares at the truck and then at his guests, "I've got a better idea" then draws his sidearm putting a round between Klein's eyes. The others gape in horror. Bryce eyes Felipe, other Saviors gun down the lower class soldiers. Sgt Phelps is wounded but kept alive.
Felipe shouts why, they surrendered. Bryce coldly responds cause Felipe cares for them. Others have their eyes on Jane and Clementine. Bryce halts it, saying the dead soldiers are suitable punishment. Clementine's gut tells this man wasn't done yet. A Savior grabs AJ out of Clem's arms, Bryce expects the four of them to accept his groups protection...or else.
Just now, two men come into view with a figure in tow. Clem and Felipe gasp. Before them is someone Clementine didn't expect to see again...Lilly! Her clothes are very worn, she appears bruised and hasn't slept in days. Felipe grits his teeth, Clementine just now realizes he knows Lilly and was the person the Saviors found on the Georgian border from Felipe's tale. Lowering his head, Felipe surrenders, claiming he won't run anymore. Satisfied with the answer, Bryce orders the remainder to be taken back to their camp in Greeneville. The final movement is in the final stages. As they are being up into one of their military trucks, Lilly, dazed but looks downward, "Clementine...?" Clem looks sad and says nothing, the choice on what to say will be left up to the player in the next episode. Fade to black.
Apologizes for some of the dark moments, but this is the Walking Dead. Next episode, learn what Bryce's movement is planning, and Clem learns from Felipe his story about Lilly.
Sorry about the lack of updates, but I've decided to scrap what I've inputed and after reading some posts on themes viewers wish to see in Season 3, I'm giving my concept a complete overhaul. Plz be patient, art or quality work takes time.
My redo of a Season 3 concept is still underway. But I have a question for any Lilly fans (Lilly haters, if any are reading this, please...no guff). I'm having Clementine find Christa and Lilly together at an abandoned church on the outskirts of Johnson City, near Elizabethton where Howe's is.
Once reunited, later in one of the chapters, Clem returns to Howe's to learn from Christa she's locked herself in Carver's office and will only speak with Clem.
I pictured Lilly broken, but also I want to show she has not given in. But I want to keep her in a depressive state and try to have Clem bring her back, restore her soul if you will, for a big battle will occur for Howe's later. Suggestions, anyone? I don't want Lilly to be hopeless or wimpy. Just lost at the moment.
Episode 1-5: No Clementine.
As far as I can tell
Episode 1-5: Bad and Inconsistent Writing
A cross country trip from Georgia to California. Its a Buddy Buddy comedy starring Arvo, and Nate. In this story, instead of it being emotionally driven it would be about choices about morality, what you would do to survive.
Episode 1: Where are my PILLS?: Nate is searching for Arvo, he never delivered the pills he was supposed to, so he drives up to the location where Arvo was stashing the pills, and finds them gone. He searches the house, finds tracks. He follows them until running into Arvo.
Episode 2: Unexpected Stop? Nate decides to take Arvo with him, on a road trip to California. They run into another group, they offer a decent amount of supplies for Arvo. Well Nate needs gas for his truck so, he has to make something work.
Episode 3: Zero fucks Nate drives to his safe house in Nevada, he picks on Arvo the entire way there. Arvo cries about his sister, Nate can either console or mock him.
They run into a woman while driving, and Nate tries to play it smooth, while he tosses Arvo in the back of his cab.
Episode 4: Get the fudge out. Nate arrives at the safe house with Arvo to find a family of squatters taking refuge inside. He has to vacate the squatters so he can reach his ammo cache.
Episode 5."CALIFORNIA" They reach California, the three of them. Nate visits a house, you don't know why in search of something.
I would watch that sitcom x)
My name is Alan and I always wanted to be a pilot like my dad (may he rest in peace), with that logic your story is the best, congratulations!
Premise : it's three days into the outbreak. Don is a National Guard sergeant and part of the disastrous Battle of Macon, the aftermath of which is shown and mentioned in S1E3. When a sudden death forces him to take command of his squad, Don is left to make tactical and personal decision that will affect not only his people, but countless other survivors in the area.
Episode One : Broken Arrow
After being rescued just in time from the compromised SaveLots Quarantine, Don's squad is redeployed to a rural campsite just outside of Macon. There, they formulate a plan of action for dealing with other survivors. When a routine patrol leads them to a group of armed survivors, Don must carefully defuse an argument with a group of bikers. Eventually, the search for supplies and a young hostage leads the squad and their temporary allies to a bandit camp, and Don must decide on a plan of action before it's too late.
Choices
1.) Make a tough choice at SaveLots : [Help Civilians] or [Leave Civilians]
2.) Decide a killer's fate : [Forgive the pilot] or [Abandon the pilot] or [Kill the pilot]
3.) Deal with some survivors : [Be friendly] or [Detain them] or [Attack them]
4.) Choose a battle-plan : [Go loud and risk the walkers] or [Sneak in with less protection]
5.) Resolve the hostage situation : [Risk shooting] or [Try to distract]
I'll write more as I come up with it.
Episode Previews
Episode 2 : Best Laid Plans - An investigation into a gory bear-trap maiming leads Don and Corporal Reyes to an old motel, but can the group inside really be responsible. More importantly, can they find out without being discovered? Later, Don is forced to decide between his loyalty to one of his own and his loyalties to the mission. Whatever he choose, hell will follow.
Episode 3: Operation Houseboat - The squad is constantly harassed by an enigmatic sniper and the threat of an impending herd. Meanwhile, the government declares a general retreat and announces a plan to withdraw as many soldiers from the mainland as possible. Don and his squad must decide whether to evacuate or stay and desert.
EPISODE 1: CLEMENTINE DOES A THING
EPISODE 2: GROUP MEMBER DOES A THING
EPISODE 3: GROUP MEMBER DIES
EPISODE 4: CLEMENTINE DOES ANOTHER THING
EPISODE 5: ALL THE THINGS WERE BAD THINGS AND EVERYONE DIES
I would make it more like the Wyatt/ Eddie part from 400 days, everyone loves a good bromance.
I'd like to experience a twist where in a family of four, we expect the father to outlive his children and the story initially sets up the father to have his story arc in almost the exact same way as Kenny had in Season 1 (and 2 to an extent).
There will be an event where the lives of the mother and children are in grave danger, to the point where it appears that the father will eventually come to face with the loss of his entire family. Then suddenly, the father is the intended and inevitable victim all along, and the mother and children are the true survivors.
From thereon, the story focuses towards the mother's struggle to keep her two children safe, going through sheer hell to ensure that herself and her children will not suffer the same fate as the father/husband had. Instead of killing them off, we see how much the have changed from reasonable family who were able to survive in the zombie apocalypse, to a mother who will do anything to ensure that her children will continue to live, while the children are struggling with the lost of their father as well as the sudden change of attitude and morals with their living mother.