**[Go to Philip] ** I love this chapter a lot! I like how Jarger's story is going, and how it ties in to Martin's books. I would like to see interaction between Littlefinger and Phillip, that would be pretty awesome!! Keep up the great work!!
''Ok,you can come with me.'' Damon said to Saya ''Thank you,it will be a pleasure protecting you,even more if you tell good jokes'' She says,and drinks a sip of her ale ''Is that your sword?'' He says,pointing to the sword she had with her ''No,i'll just sell it to make some silver,i fight with these'' She says,and takes out two double sided daggers. ''You like them?'' She asks Damon ''Yes,they seem pretty lethal'' He said and took a better look at them ''How much did you pay them?'' He asked,Saya had a sad look on her face ''They were my father's. When he died i took them,he was a sellsword too.'' She said,her eyes shining,Damon then smiled ''I bet he was great'' He said ''I'll just humor her so she'll fight well with me'' He thought to himself,Saya looked at him ''He was great,he did a lot of jobs'' She said ''How did he die?'' He asked her,she shook her head,her red locks flowing in Damon's face ''He died of illness. No one was tough enough to kill him'' She said and laughed to herself ''Well,you should be happy then'' Damon said and drank some ale ''I am'' She smiles and finishes her ale,a grizzly looking person gets closer to Damon and looks him in the face ''I'm waiting'' He said,his palm opened in front of him,asking for money ''Why?'' Damon asked ''A small tax'' He said,and laughed,then took out a dagger ''Take that dagger out of his face'' Saya said,the man turned to her and took the dagger closer to her throat ''You have to pay a tax! It's my right to-'' He was interrupted by Saya kicking him in the face and taking out her double sided daggers. The man lunged towards her with a knife but she disarmed him easily and put the daggers close to his throat ''Leave him be'' Damon said,and Saya reluctantly let go of the man ''You will pay for this'' The man said,pointing towards Saya,and stormed out of the door. ''You said you're one who appreciates good jokes?'' Damon said to Saya,who nodded ''He'll make us PAY'' Damon said,laughing. Saya looked at him and shook his head ''This was really bad'' She said and exited the pub with Damon,Harold was waiting outside with a sellsword. When he saw Damon he ran towards him ''She's coming with us?'' He asks,a polite smile on his face ''Yes,i am. I'm Saya'' She says and vigorously shakes Harold's hand. He laughs ''So we're going to get going? Should i warn everybody to come here?'' Harold asks,Damon nods ''Be sure to bring the sack of food we spared,maybe we'll give it to the Manderlys'' Harold nods and runs towards the ship. ''Is this yours?'' Saya asks Damon,looking at his ship like it was gold. Its sails were red,like the lannister's insignia. ''Yes,i bought it for 25 gold dragons'' Saya looks at him ''Willing to pay me too?'' She asks ''No'' Damon simply says and smiles at her ''Careful. You never know who can slit your throat while you sleep'' She smiles ''I have my 45 sellswords know you could be thinking about murdering me,they'll do unspeakable things to you'' He flashes her a challenging look. He was always a prideful and cocky person,he wasn't going to back down from her. ''Here are the sellswords guys!'' Harold says,coming back with all the sellswords ''Guys! If i get killed in my sleep be sure to take my gold and kill her!'' Damon says and points at Saya ''Shut up'' She whispers and steps on his foot ''We will crush the dwarf if we have to. Where do we go?'' The captain of all sellswords asks,Saya seems pretty offended. ''You'll pay for this'' She says to Damon ''I've heard this sentence three times in three minutes'' He said,Saya couldn't help but laugh. ''We go north. Let's see how far can we go until someone gets in our way!'' Damon says,and after having bought enough horses for everyone,the group of sellswords,Saya,Harold and Damon start galloping to the north.
Reader: Why is this chapter so short!
Thewalkingamonthrone: Littlefinger's voice Relax! I will be writing another chapter today,and it will be the beginning of a character's second chapter! You get to choose who!
Whose character's beginning of second chapter do you want?
[Kieron's/Jarger's/Philip's][Mark's][Brandon,Thomas and Kevin's]
Morning guys! New chapter
Damon Ravencrest
''Ok,you can come with me.'' Damon said to Saya ''Thank you,it will be a pleasure protectin… moreg you,even more if you tell good jokes'' She says,and drinks a sip of her ale ''Is that your sword?'' He says,pointing to the sword she had with her ''No,i'll just sell it to make some silver,i fight with these'' She says,and takes out two double sided daggers. ''You like them?'' She asks Damon ''Yes,they seem pretty lethal'' He said and took a better look at them ''How much did you pay them?'' He asked,Saya had a sad look on her face ''They were my father's. When he died i took them,he was a sellsword too.'' She said,her eyes shining,Damon then smiled ''I bet he was great'' He said ''I'll just humor her so she'll fight well with me'' He thought to himself,Saya looked at him ''He was great,he did a lot of jobs'' She said ''How did he die?'' He asked her,she shook her head,her red locks flowing in Damon's … [view original content]
Morning guys! New chapter
Damon Ravencrest
''Ok,you can come with me.'' Damon said to Saya ''Thank you,it will be a pleasure protectin… moreg you,even more if you tell good jokes'' She says,and drinks a sip of her ale ''Is that your sword?'' He says,pointing to the sword she had with her ''No,i'll just sell it to make some silver,i fight with these'' She says,and takes out two double sided daggers. ''You like them?'' She asks Damon ''Yes,they seem pretty lethal'' He said and took a better look at them ''How much did you pay them?'' He asked,Saya had a sad look on her face ''They were my father's. When he died i took them,he was a sellsword too.'' She said,her eyes shining,Damon then smiled ''I bet he was great'' He said ''I'll just humor her so she'll fight well with me'' He thought to himself,Saya looked at him ''He was great,he did a lot of jobs'' She said ''How did he die?'' He asked her,she shook her head,her red locks flowing in Damon's … [view original content]
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he could see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mark on the head with the hilt of his sword ''What are you doing?!'' Mark screams,grabbing his head in his hands. ''Stay down! Lord Whitehill will make you pay for this.'' The guard says,then he heards a door open,and sees Lord Whitehill's fourthborn Gryff Whitehill and his brother,the secondborn Ebbert Whitehill enter the room. Gryff goes towards Mark's cell with his fists balled,when he opens the door,he grabs Mark by the throat and starts punching him in the crotch ''You'll feel the same pain my father felt!'' He yelled at him,Mark was retching from the pain and he was balling his fists to avoid screaming. ''Brother stop'' Ebbert said from behind him ''Why? He has to pay!'' Gryff said,and started choking Mark. ''Not this way,i know other methods'' He said,and smiled. Gryff reluctantly got up and exited the cell,while Ebbert entered. Mark took his chances and got up,and tried to overpower Ebbert,who smashed in his head a strong bell,making him fall to the ground,he then took Mark's body in his hands and tied him to the cell's wall. ''You'll regret this.'' Mark said,his hands and feet tied to the rope ''I doubt i will,as long as you are here'' Ebbert said,and took a bucket full of nettles which was sitting outside the cell. Ebbert then took out a knife from his pockets and slowly slid it across Mark's arm,cutting it and letting a drop of hot blood fall to the ground ''I met a maester to be one time at the citadel,i recall his name was Qyburn,he studied many things: Poisons,medicines,human body,all while he dissected bodies.'' Ebbert said,getting a handful of nettles from the bucket ''Oh no'' Mark thought,he didn't want Ebbert to do what he thought ''But i don't want to do that. All i want is to protect my family,and you are our enemy'' He said,looking in his eyes,then holding the cut open with his two fingers ''You know who Ramsay Bolton is,right? The warden of the north. I visited him one time and i saw his little servant,he called him Reek,i thought i'd do the same to you. But you'll feel more pain than him,i assure you'' Mark's eyes widened,Ebbert then thrusted the nettles inside of Mark's cut,then held it close ''FUUUCK! AAAAAHHHHHHH'' Mark let out a blood curling scream,he was squirming against Ebbert's grasp,hot searing pain burning into his cut,he could already feel the cut swelling,smoke exiting his arm,probably because the nettles had touched blood. He then heard again the valyrian voice from before. He couldn't give up,he wasn't going to. Ebbert then grabbed a wooden salt bowl ''Like breaking bread and salt together,but just with the salt!'' He said,and then emptied the whole bowl on his cut. Mark was screaming and crying. ''We're done here today. Tomorrow i'll come once again to check on you'' Ebbert said,and left Mark alone in the cold,darkness of his cell. His arm burning.
The morning after Mark got up from his cell floor because he heard thumping on the brick wall of his cell,he checked his arm and saw that the wound had festered,a yellow liquid sizzling out of it. A brick then came loose. ''Mark!'' A familiar voice whispered ''Talon?'' Mark asked,and Talon's head peeked out of the brick wall ''You're hideous as before!'' Mark said,hugging his face ''Apparently Stannis Baratheon sent some soldiers to free you.'' Mark's eyes widened. Stannis Baratheon? One of the five kings who is guided by a priestess of asshai? Mark then understood ''Get me out of here and let's g-'' Ebbert Whitehill came in the room and Talon put the loose brick on the wall again ''Here's my little cub!'' Ebbert said,Mark then faked a scream ''What is it now?'' Ebbert Whitehill said,and before he could come in the cell,Mark got a hold of his Five Links,which Maesters wear to get recognized as one,and put them around his throat. ''Please...'' Ebbert begged,but Mark strengthened his grip,and he kept tightening the chains,when he heard a cracking sound. Ebbert now fell dead to the floor,his neck snapped. ''We've got to go!'' Talon said,pushing the brick out,and Mark kicked a few more bricks out,opening out a narrow passage,he squeezed out of the hole. He saw an old man with Talon ''I'm Davos Seaworth,you are needed by Melisandre,you can stay in your lands but she will come soon.'' He says,Mark then hugs Talon ''Why did you come here?'' ''I couldn't leave you behind'' He said. The small group of men then escaped the castle by using a wide tunnel under Highpoint. When they reached the open air Mark breathed in the air again,Light blinding him. He then saw a horse get closer to them ''Lift him up'' A voice said,he still was half blinded,he then felt Talon and Davos lifting him up ''Don't worry,we won't hurt you'' Davos said,then the horse started galloping,when he got used to the light,he could see a figure wearing a red dress and cape riding the horse. ''Who are you?'' He asked,the figure put a hand on his face and caressed it ''The Light is strong in you'' A female voice said ''May i know your name?'' ''Not now. You must rest,i will take you to your home,but you'll have to do what i tell you'' He then felt his eyes grow heavy,and a heavy weariness come upon him. He then fell asleep
When he woke up he was at Smithon,still on the woman's horse. ''Who did this to your Home must suffer'' The woman said,he felt the woman was on his side. ''Are you willing to help me?'' He said ''I will do everything in my power to help you. The Darkness is coming and you may be the one to defeat it'' She said,then she turned towards him,her eyes piercing his. Her red hair were flowing in the air and she got off the horse. Mark got off the horse too and entered his castle's gates. Bodies were everywhere,some were still breathing,he assumed he only stayed one night in Highpoint ''Check for wounded'' Davos said to his soldier,and they did. He went over to Yara,hoping she would breathe.But Yara was dead,he closed her eyes and walked over to the red woman ''What's your name?'' He asked ''I am Melisandre of Asshai. Some call me Red Priestess'' She says,her gaze fixated on Mark. ''Did you revive me in some way?'' Melisandre was still looking at him ''I didn't. I asked The Lord Of Light,and he did.'' She said ''What can i do now?'' ''I will see that Smithon is cleaned and repaired,in the meantime you could come with me.'' She said ''Where?'' Mark asks ''Where the Lord Of Light wants us to be.'' She says
[Follow Melisandre][Ask to go to Ironrath]
Chapter's done! Tell me if you liked it or if you would like something more to be implemented in the story
Also,whose Character's beginning of second chapter would you like to see next?
[Jarger Kieron and Philip's][Hunter's][Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he co… moreuld see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mar… [view original content]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he co… moreuld see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mar… [view original content]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he co… moreuld see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mar… [view original content]
NEW CHARACTER!
Hunter Dawson
Hunter was sleeping in his tent,in Daenerys Targaryen's camp close to Meereen,Hunter is Daenerys' second… more in command,making him feel close to her,emotionally too. He got up from his small bed,and put on his armor. He then got a random sword from the rack that was in his tent,he was a pit fighter,so he didn't care about naming his weapon. He uses every weapon he can find and is good at it ''Maybe that's why Dany chose me'' He smirked,then he remembered about Jorah Mormont,her best friend. His face darkened at the thought of him being with her,he was jealous of Daenerys,and if he could,he'd kill Jorah. ''Hunter?'' A guard peeked in his tent,Hunter turned to him ''Yes?'' He said,with a tough tone ''Queen Daenerys asks for you'' He smiled,then exited the tent. When he arrived at her tent,he entered and knelt to her ''My Queen'' Daenerys smiled ''Rise'' She said,and he rose from the ground. ''We will take Meereen… [view original content]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he co… moreuld see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mar… [view original content]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he co… moreuld see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mar… [view original content]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he co… moreuld see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mar… [view original content]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he co… moreuld see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mar… [view original content]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he co… moreuld see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mar… [view original content]
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword flew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and Viserion,who snarl at Hunter ''What are you doing here?!'' She asks,her eyes burning from the anger ''Khaleesi,a man found himself wounded in battle,i had to rescue him'' Daenerys slaps him across the face,forming a white mark on the spot she hit. ''I DON'T CARE ABOUT OUR MEN I CARE ABOUT TAKING THE CITY!'' She says,Rhaegal lunges towards Hunter,his mouth wide open,but he dodges and pushes the little dragon away. ''DON'T YOU DARE!'' Daenerys says to Hunter,and steps towards him,Rhaegal then breathes a wave of fire towards Hunter,which hit him on the chest,his armor was burning,he tried to take it off ''DANY! PLEASE DO SOMETHING!'' He said,he could feel his skin getting burned now,the armor was melting down,he broke half of his armor causing the fire to spread to his body,Daenerys then put her hands on his armor and pulled it off of him. Her hands perfectly fine. Hunter then got on his knees,the pain on his chest was too much. Daenerys got close to him and got on her knees ''Are you hurt?'' She asked him ''It will eventually disappear'' Hunter said coldly,he knew Daenerys was reckless,but she cared about the people close to her. ''I really am sorry,you did well,saving my soldier.'' She said,her hand caressing his cheek ''Why is your hand not burned?'' Hunter asked Dany,she looked on the ground ''I am a Targaryen,you should know by now that i am immune to fire.'' She said,then got him to his feet and made him lean on her ''Take me to that soldier and i will see that he is healed and brought to a tent.'' Daenerys said,Hunter nodded. He knew she was only doing it for him. She probably didn't care about a foot soldier. The two entered in Meereen,Hunter's hand in Dany's ''You brought him very far from the battle,i see.'' Daenerys says,then a hidden soldier ambushes the two,he punches Hunter in the face,making him fall to the ground,and then unsheathes a dirk. ''Hunter!'' Daenerys tries to shake him awake,but he was knocked out. ''Daenerys Targaryen in person'' The soldier says,then lunges at her with a knife,she takes his arm,in an attempt to block the knife,but he shakes her away,then slaps her across the face,making her fall to the ground. Hunter gets up with all the force he can muster and tackles the man to the ground,the man then shakes free of Hunter and swings his dirk at him,but Hunter barely dodges and gets a long cut all the way from his wrist to upper arm. The soldier then punches Hunter but he blocks the punch and twists his arm,breaking it. ''GO HUNTER!'' Daenerys says,and swings her hand in a punching motion,Hunter was happy that he got her attention,and now was the time to show it. He got the dirk from his hand and stuck it in his armpit,then he twisted the arm once again,so he could get the dirk out. He took it out and stabbed the man in the stomach. He was now on the ground,barely alive. ''Should i take him prisoner?'' Hunter says ''No,let him die!'' Daenerys says,then smiles at Hunter ''You were awesome! You saved my life,thank you.'' She said,and kissed him on the cheek,he blushed. ''LOOK OUT!'' Dany said,but Hunter got stabbed in the back,by another foot soldier,then he fell to the ground. ''NO!'' Dany said and ran towards hunter,but the soldier got his spear up and lunged at Daenerys,who barely dodged the shot and fell to the ground. ''This is what happens when you meddle in our affairs!'' The soldier says and tries to spear Dany,but Hunter trips him down,the soldiers gets back up instantly and picks his spear up. He then brings the spear down on Hunter's chest,he dodged the spear and the wounded soldier he saved came to the rescue ''TAKE THIS!'' He said,bringing his sword up and sticking it on his shoulder,then he punched him to the ground and brought the sword down in his chest,impaling him. ''Thanks....'' Hunter said between gasps, Daenerys was still on the ground,the soldier got her to her feet and then came to help Hunter ''Give me your hand'' Hunter gives him his hand and the soldiers pulls him up ''They didn't stab you someplace lethal. He will be okay'' He then reassures Dany ''Is he the soldier you were talking about?'' Dany talks sweetly to Hunter ''Yes...i haven't got his name yet...'' Hunter says to Dany,who then gazes towards the soldier ''I am one of your soldiers Khaleesi, Thorin Halfhand'' He said,it was clear to the two that he was a Westerosi ''Go back to the camp we made outside Meereen,in my tent.'' Dany says to the man ''In your tent?'' ''The dragons will kill you if you do something rash,now go'' Dany says,and makes Hunter lean on her. They encounter Jorah Mormont's group of men when they were about to get out of the city ''Daenerys!'' He said and went to hug her,to do so he pushed Hunter out of the way,who wobbled for a couple of meters then fell down ''Jorah!'' Dany said and went to help up Hunter,Jorah's face burns from anger ''What the hell is this,huh? Now because he's wounded he's your personal puppy.'' ''He is my second in command. I won't let him down'' She says,and holds his chest with one hand,with the intent of making Jorah jealous ''You'll be sorry'' Jorah pointed towards Hunter and got out of the city into the camp. Daenerys and Hunter followed him and his men. ''I am really sorry about what happened today.'' Daenerys said ''I can't control the dragons anymore'' ''Lock them up,it's the only way'' Daenerys holds back a few tears ''Don't be scared of crying in front of me.'' He said,and she nodded,a weak tear flowing down her face. Then she shook her head ''The most important thing is we took Meereen'' She said ''I can't wait to see you on the iron throne'' Daenerys looks at him and genuinely smiles ''Who would you make hand of the queen?'' Hunter says out of curiosity,Daenerys then thinks ''Can't there be two?'' ''No,only one'' Hunter said,Daenerys then sighed ''I don't know. You have the ability of command and brute force,Jorah has charm and charisma.'' She says,Hunter then takes her cheeks in his hands ''What are you doing?'' Daenerys asked him ''I can be charming too'' He said and kissed her on her lips,his tongue begged for entrance but she pulled away from him,her face shocked'' Hunter then smiled at her ''What? Don't you agree with me?'' Daenerys looks at him ''I would believe you now.'' She said,and touched her lips with her hand,then kissed it. ''So i will be the hand of the queen?'' He says again ''Maybe'' She teases him. He was really torn,between his loyalty for Dany and for his thirst of power. ''Here we are'' She said to him,and entered her tent. The wounded soldier was sitting on a small bed ''Thorin,are you from Westeros?'' Daenerys asks ''I am'' He says ''We want to know more'' Hunter says ''I cleaned King Robert's rooms during his reign. After that i was exiled to Essos.'' ''King Robert?'' Hunter thought ''I once received a raven from House Stark,informing me on Robert Baratheon's will to kill Dany. ''Lock him up. Feed him every day but be sure to keep him locked up.'' Hunter says with a serious expression to Dany,who follows his orders ''Guards,do as he says.'' Daenerys says ''I WAS JUST FOLLOWING YOUR ORDERS,YOUR GRACE!'' Thorin screams as he gets dragged away by the guards. ''Thank you,Hunter,go rest'' Daenerys says and Hunter exits the tent,Daenerys stops him and kisses him. He doesn't kiss back but smiles,he then goes to his tent and lays down on his bed.
He wakes up the morning after,with a letter on his pillow,right by his head,he rubs his eyes and reads it
''Hi Hunter,meet me in my tent. We need to talk. Dany''
He smiles at the letter,gets up and goes to Daenerys' tent ''Good Morning Hunter'' Dany says smiling,she was outside the tent,sitting in her chair which was tucked under a table she set up for eating,she gestured to a chair near her and Hunter sat down ''Here,eat the bacon you giant'' She says and gives him a plate with some bacon,she drinks some wine ''I suggest you try it too'' She says,he takes the flagon and pours some wine in his cup,drinking some ''It is very spiced'' He said ''It's just like me.'' ''Hot?'' He thought,but kept his mouth shut ''So,i need you to talk about Jorah. I need you two to cooperate and break Thorin. He needs to talk,and i need to know the truth ''I don't kn-'' Hunter was interrupted by Daenerys ''You will do as i say'' Her lillac eyes staring into his ''I will. My queen,sorry.'' He said,and ate some of the bacon. The two talked for some time and then Jorah came towards the two ''Are you two eating?'' ''What does it look like?'' Daenerys says ''Mind if i join?'' ''No,absolutely. Help yourself with everything'' Daenerys says kindly to him,then glances at Hunter,her eyebrows cocking ''Want some bacon? Or you prefer other meats?'' Hunter says and points towards the plates filled with Duck,Honey basted Rabbit, and Westerosi Mutton. ''What is this kindness?'' Jorah says,quite surprised,and looks at Hunter ''We two need to stop kicking each other. We need to cooperate and we need to command our Khaleesi's army'' Hunter says,Jorah beats his hands down on the table ''Finally you understood what's best for this House!'' He said,and helped himself with some wine. He was right,and Hunter knew that. He was selfish for thinking only about him and Dany. ''We need to talk to Thorin.'' Hunter said to Jorah ''The one who you took prisoner? Good job by the way'' He said ''Yes,we need to break him into talking. Daenerys wants that.'' Jorah looks at Dany,and then nods to Hunter ''I'm in.''
The two then get up from the table and go towards his cell,which was in a tent close to Jorah's ''I don't have anything to tell you!'' The man says just when he sees Jorah ''I have someone for you!'' Jorah says,and Hunter enters the tent ''You won't touch me'' He says,then Hunter unlocks his cage and starts beating him ''You knew King Robert! He wanted to kill Daenerys!'' He says,Thorin is quite frightened and when Hunter uncovered his lie,his eyes widened ''I was told that i were to kill the Targaryen girl,that Robert would have sent his whole army to Essos if i was uncovered. But now that he is dead,Joffrey Baratheon won't raise a finger. I am in your hands...Don't kill me,please. I wasn't planning on doing it! I don't kill women!'' He said,teary eyed. Hunter looked at him with a pitiful expression,but he was suspicious ''Joffrey Baratheon...How could he have possibly known that Robert died and Joffrey claimed the throne?'' Hunter looked at Jorah,and Daenerys entered the tent,he looked at Hunter in his eyes,and he in hers...
[Spare Thorin][Kill Thorin and send a raven to King's Landing][Spare Thorin but order him to send ravens to King's Landing]
Did you like the chapter,guys? I think it was good. The reason i didn't write yesterday was that my connection didn't work. I am really sorry.
Chose whose chapter i should do next!
[Brandon Thomas and Kevin's][Jarger,Kieron and Philip's][Damon and Saya's]
Hunter Dawson
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword … moreflew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and … [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword … moreflew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and … [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword … moreflew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and … [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword … moreflew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and … [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword … moreflew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and … [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword … moreflew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and … [view original content]
You all chose to [Kill Thorin and send a raven to King's Landing] You will see the consequences of this in the next chapter...and i fear they won't be good.
Hunter Dawson
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword … moreflew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and … [view original content]
''Sansa,we have to go!'' Kieron says to Sansa,who looks at him and grabs his hand,then turns to the man who was behind them ''You know the way?'' Kieron said ''Yes,i do. Follow me'' He said and started to run away from the scene,the two followed him for a good ten minutes,when they realized they reached the Blackwaters,''I am Dontos Hollard by the way'' Dontos said,pushing a small boat into the water and getting the two in ''Nice to meet you'' Sansa said,and the man smiled ''Give me a hand please'' Dontos asked Kieron,and the two rowed together until they saw a small ship,waiting for them ''We are almost there.'' Dontos said,Kieron knew that the choice he made was going to change his life. When they got to the small ship,a tall,thin man met the three. ''I did what you wanted,i want my pay now'' Dontos said to the man,but a couple of crossbowmen appeared from behind him and shot Dontos to death ''NO!'' Sansa screamed,and hugged Kieron,the crossbowmen aimed to Kieron and one bolt hit him in the shoulder,and he fell to his knees. Sansa got in front of him ''Don't kill him. Please'' She said,still shielding Kieron ''Sansa,come here'' The man said ''Not before you let him on your ship'' Sansa said,the man grunted ''Let him on the boat'' He said to the crossbowmen,and they lowered their crossbows. Kieron then got on the ship,and then the man stretched his hand out to Sansa ''Now come on,darling'' He said to her,she grabbed his hand and he pulled him on the boat. Kieron got close to the man ''Who are you?'' He asked ''I am what i tell you,but that is never the truth'' He said,to him ''Just call me Littlefinger,that is what everybody calls me'' He sneered to Kieron ''He can be a bit....witty'' Sansa said to Kieron ''I noticed.'' Kieron said,then Littlefinger gestured to his men ''See that they are in my finest chambers,and if you want to bother someone,do it with him'' He said,pointing at Kieron ''We will'' The man said and the two were brought to two chambers,Sansa wanted to enter Kieron's ''You can't,go in the other one.'' A soldier said,Sansa then turned around,towering over the short soldier ''I go where i want. Is this worth losing your job?'' Sansa said to the man,then turned to Kieron,who opened the door ''Are you going to enter?'' Sansa told him,but he stepped back and held the door open for her ''You first'' He said,Sansa smiled briefly and entered the room,before Kieron could close the door he heard the short soldier ''Whore...'' Kieron then closed the door and grunted. He saw Sansa on the bed,sadly looking at the wall ''Hey,are you alright?'' He said,sitting on the bed next to her ''I wonder where my sister is.'' ''Arya Stark? She will be alright,she is really tough. The one time she was in King's Landing i saw her bother a cat. I told her to leave him alone,and she threatened me that her father would see me hanged.'' Sansa laughed and she looked at him ''I hope you're right,i would do anything to hug her right now. When we were at Winterfell we always fought,and she always thought i didn't love her. I would give anything to anyone to go back to those times'' Kieron smiled ''I wish i could've been at Winterfell,being your guard.'' Sansa looked at him,and smiled at him. ''In King's Landing i always protected snakes like Margaery Tyrell,or accepted jobs from the Queen Regent'' When he mentioned this,Sansa sat up straight on the bed,almost as if the word made her jump ''I won't do that now,wherever we will go now i will see that you are protected from anyone'' Sansa then lays down on the bed,and Kieron too. The two fall asleep hugged to each other.
When they wake up they go on the ship's deck and see that they arrived to the Eyrie ''Wow...This place is beautiful!'' Kieron says in absolute awe,Sansa looks scared ''This is my aunt's House seat. House Arryn'' She says,a look of complete panic on her face ''Isn't that a good thing?'' He says,she grabs his hands and looks him in the eyes ''You do not know her true side and you must never wake it.'' She says,then Littlefinger,who was on the ship's deck,walks towards the two,and takes Sansa away from Kieron. Kieron decided to sit on a crate that was close to the edge of the ship and looks at the Eyrie,getting closer minute after minute. He occasionally glances towards Sansa and Littlefinger,he sees him caressing her face,talking with her,and smiling,as he was the happiest man in the world. The thing that made Kieron suspicious was,that Sansa wasn't smiling,she was scared,he could see it in her eyes. The poor girl watched a king die a horrible death,and survived his tortures and humiliations,she was a true girl of the North. In fact she was a Daughter Of the North,she appeared so fierce and fearless to Kieron's eyes,but Littlefinger seems to scare her. When they finished talking,Littlefinger's men were already getting off the ship. Sansa walked towards Kieron and offered him her hand ''Let's go'' She said,and Kieron took her hand and got her off the ship,then he got off too. Sansa was still locking hands with him,and she was smiling. She saw a man looking at her ''Who are you?'' Sansa asked to the man ''I'm Jarger Waters, i was a gold cloak in King's Landing and i broke my vows to come here,i even talked with you for some time in King's Landing,my lady,don't you remember?'' The man said,and kissed Sansa's hand,she smiled ''You are courteous,Jarger. But i'm afraid i don't recall your face or your name at all. We can still know each other though'' She says and shyly smiles,Kieron could feel a bit of rage towards Jarger,was he feeling jealous? ''I'm Kieron! Nice to meet you!'' He said to the Jarger,and shook his hand ''Nice to meet you.'' Jarger said,then Kieron then took Sansa's hand and started dragging her away ''We could have some breakfast,we haven't eaten since yesterday'' He said,but Sansa turned to him ''Are you jealous?'' She said and smiled knowingly ''Of what?'' Kieron tried to cover his jealousy,but failed miserably ''He isn't going to be my guard,i assure you. Now let's all go to have some breakfast'' She said and glanced towards Littlefinger,and saw him staring at her,she then jumped and got startled,then he took Kieron and Jarger by their hands ''Let's go,now'' She said,and the three went to a small camp,with a big wooden table filled with meats,wines,spices,and sweets. ''Was it made for us?'' Kieron asked Sansa ''Petyr probably set this up for me.'' She said ''Who is Petyr?'' He asked her ''The man who's commonly called Littlefinger. Now let's sit down and eat something,i'm hungry'' She said and sat down on a wooden chair,then Kieron went to sit next to her,but Jarger was doing the same thing ''You can't sit down on the same chair'' Sansa pointed out the obvious,winking at Kieron ''It's okay!'' Kieron said,trying to mask his jealousy and made Jarger sit next to Sansa,while he was next to Jarger. ''So,why are you here Sansa?'' Jarger asked her,looking her in the eyes ''King Joffrey died at his wedding with Margaery Tyrell,and i ran away from King's Landing'' She said,leaning on the table and caressing Kieron's hair ''He helped me'' She said,obviously knowing that Kieron was jealous of her ''Seriously? Tell me more'' Jarger said,and the two went on with their stories,Kieron blocked the two's talk,and focused on a piece of bacon on his plate ''At least you don't get to suffer jealousy like me'' He says to the piece of bacon and eats it,he noticed the two stopped talking,Sansa looking at him flabbergastered ''Did you just talk to that piece of bacon?'' She said,and burst out laughing. Kieron hid his face for the shame,and he decided to have a walk around the Eyrie. He saw the castle,he saw the soldier's camps,he admired the vast nature he had around him,his awe was interrupted by Sansa ''Can i walk with you?'' She asked Kieron ''Sure you can'' He said,he was surprised: He didn't think she was going to ask him. He thought he had to ask her. She took his hand and started walking with him towards a small river, ''This place is awesome,not because of the people who live in it,but because of it's great nature'' She says to Kieron,looking at him,he looked back ''It's awesome,i could even get a job here!'' He says,and Sansa lightens up ''I could ask Aunt Lysa to make you her guard! You have experience!'' She says ''Would you do that for me?'' She stops and grabs both of his hands ''Of course i would,i am scared of my Aunt,but you saved my life. And i think you could be the only trustable friend i have.'' She says to him ''Friend? Just a friend?'' Kieron thinks ''You are really kind Sansa.'' He says,then notices that the river was close ''Let's go to the river'' He says,and walks towards it. ''Wow,this water is so clean you can see yourself in it'' Sansa says,looking at her reflection,then Kieron jokingly pushed her in the river,Sansa let out a cry,and then splashed some water to Kieron,the two laughed,but then Littlefinger quickly walked towards the two,when Sansa saw him,she got scared,and Kieron helped her out of the water ''It's nothing,we were just having fun'' Sansa says to Littlefinger ''SANSA! GO IMMEDIATELY TO THE CASTLE! I WILL TELL AUNT LYSA OF YOUR DISOBEDIENCE!'' Littlefinger snarled to Sansa,whose eyes widened,and Kieron saw a tear flowing down her face,she then ran towards the caslte.Littlefinger then turned to Kieron,a disdainful expression forming on his face ''You need to stay away from her. This isn't a game,you can't have her,and you can't talk with her. If you don't listen to me,i will handle matters personally'' He said,and walked away. Kieron didn't know what to do,should he try to go to the castle and talk with Lysa Arryn? Maybe convince her to be her,or Sansa's personal guard,so he couldn't be touched by Littlefinger. But again,Littlefinger didn't care. He could just go to the castle and ask Lysa Arryn if she needed some personal bodyguards.
[Go to the Castle and ask to become Sansa's guard][Go to the castle and ask to become Lysa Arryn's guard][Stay away from the castle,and Sansa]
(If you watch the show,you know what's the best choice)
(Oh surprise) Philip's POV
Philip walked towards Littlefinger's ship,but he didn't find him,so he decided to make him wait there. He saw him in the distance with an angry expression,but as soon as Littlefinger saw him he became cool. ''Hi,my friend!'' Littlefinger said to Philip ''We aren't friends,Petyr,and you perfectly know that.'' He knew that he had to have a quick wit to outsmart him ''You are right. We aren't,but we know each other'' ''Define 'Know''' Philip said to Littlefinger ''We have business that concerns the both of us.'' Littlefinger said ''About Sansa?'' Philip said ''Yes! About Sansa'' Petyr said ''What would you want me to do?'' Philip asked ''Since when Mord fucked a girl?'' Petyr said,not a single gram of guilt showing in his words ''Quite the time,what do i get in exchange?'' Philip said ''You didn't even heard what i wanted you to do'' Petyr said ''You want Mord to try fuck the girl,then you will run to her and you will protect her from him,you will hurt him,in some way,and he will fake an injury,so you will be a hero in the girl's eyes'' Philip fired back,he knew there was a battle of intrigues between them,and he felt like he won it ''You know what to do. Impressive'' Littlefinger said,and clapped his hands. ''I will tell Mord to do what you told me,it will be tonight.'' Philip said,and shook Petyr's hand ''You will be richly rewarded,i won't forget this'' Littlefinger said ''I doubt you won't'' Philip thought,but just smiled to him. He knew what to do and when,he just needed to wait the night.
So guys! Chapter is over! Tell me if you enjoyed it! Philip is joining the dark side! How will this play out? What if Kieron becomes Sansa's guard and stops the two's act? What will happen?
What chapter you want to see next?
[Still Kieron's,Jarger's and Philip's][Damon and Saya's][Hunter's][Mark's][Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
Kieron Cantell
''Sansa,we have to go!'' Kieron says to Sansa,who looks at him and grabs his hand,then turns to the man who was behind the… morem ''You know the way?'' Kieron said ''Yes,i do. Follow me'' He said and started to run away from the scene,the two followed him for a good ten minutes,when they realized they reached the Blackwaters,''I am Dontos Hollard by the way'' Dontos said,pushing a small boat into the water and getting the two in ''Nice to meet you'' Sansa said,and the man smiled ''Give me a hand please'' Dontos asked Kieron,and the two rowed together until they saw a small ship,waiting for them ''We are almost there.'' Dontos said,Kieron knew that the choice he made was going to change his life. When they got to the small ship,a tall,thin man met the three. ''I did what you wanted,i want my pay now'' Dontos said to the man,but a couple of crossbowmen appeared from behind him and shot Dontos to death ''NO!'' Sansa screamed,and hugg… [view original content]
[Stay away from the castle,and Sansa] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] Love the chapter, you really explained the type of situation Sansa is in really well through Kieron's view!
Question: Does your fanfiction run closer to the books or the show?
Kieron Cantell
''Sansa,we have to go!'' Kieron says to Sansa,who looks at him and grabs his hand,then turns to the man who was behind the… morem ''You know the way?'' Kieron said ''Yes,i do. Follow me'' He said and started to run away from the scene,the two followed him for a good ten minutes,when they realized they reached the Blackwaters,''I am Dontos Hollard by the way'' Dontos said,pushing a small boat into the water and getting the two in ''Nice to meet you'' Sansa said,and the man smiled ''Give me a hand please'' Dontos asked Kieron,and the two rowed together until they saw a small ship,waiting for them ''We are almost there.'' Dontos said,Kieron knew that the choice he made was going to change his life. When they got to the small ship,a tall,thin man met the three. ''I did what you wanted,i want my pay now'' Dontos said to the man,but a couple of crossbowmen appeared from behind him and shot Dontos to death ''NO!'' Sansa screamed,and hugg… [view original content]
Kieron Cantell
''Sansa,we have to go!'' Kieron says to Sansa,who looks at him and grabs his hand,then turns to the man who was behind the… morem ''You know the way?'' Kieron said ''Yes,i do. Follow me'' He said and started to run away from the scene,the two followed him for a good ten minutes,when they realized they reached the Blackwaters,''I am Dontos Hollard by the way'' Dontos said,pushing a small boat into the water and getting the two in ''Nice to meet you'' Sansa said,and the man smiled ''Give me a hand please'' Dontos asked Kieron,and the two rowed together until they saw a small ship,waiting for them ''We are almost there.'' Dontos said,Kieron knew that the choice he made was going to change his life. When they got to the small ship,a tall,thin man met the three. ''I did what you wanted,i want my pay now'' Dontos said to the man,but a couple of crossbowmen appeared from behind him and shot Dontos to death ''NO!'' Sansa screamed,and hugg… [view original content]
Kieron Cantell
''Sansa,we have to go!'' Kieron says to Sansa,who looks at him and grabs his hand,then turns to the man who was behind the… morem ''You know the way?'' Kieron said ''Yes,i do. Follow me'' He said and started to run away from the scene,the two followed him for a good ten minutes,when they realized they reached the Blackwaters,''I am Dontos Hollard by the way'' Dontos said,pushing a small boat into the water and getting the two in ''Nice to meet you'' Sansa said,and the man smiled ''Give me a hand please'' Dontos asked Kieron,and the two rowed together until they saw a small ship,waiting for them ''We are almost there.'' Dontos said,Kieron knew that the choice he made was going to change his life. When they got to the small ship,a tall,thin man met the three. ''I did what you wanted,i want my pay now'' Dontos said to the man,but a couple of crossbowmen appeared from behind him and shot Dontos to death ''NO!'' Sansa screamed,and hugg… [view original content]
First of all,thank you for appreciating the book. My book does run closer to the show,as i know it better. I've read the books,but now i should read them again,so i could even make some cameos of it (Like Mord,Tyrion's jailer in season 1 of the show)
[Stay away from the castle,and Sansa] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] Love the chapter, you really explained the type of situation Sansa is in really well through Kieron's view!
Question: Does your fanfiction run closer to the books or the show?
Comments
[Save the Man] Good Chapter ^^
and [Go to the Pier and wait for Sansa]
There will probably be some interaction between the two,maybe Kieron and Jarger will fight for Sansa...who knows
Morning guys! New chapter
Damon Ravencrest
''Ok,you can come with me.'' Damon said to Saya ''Thank you,it will be a pleasure protecting you,even more if you tell good jokes'' She says,and drinks a sip of her ale ''Is that your sword?'' He says,pointing to the sword she had with her ''No,i'll just sell it to make some silver,i fight with these'' She says,and takes out two double sided daggers. ''You like them?'' She asks Damon ''Yes,they seem pretty lethal'' He said and took a better look at them ''How much did you pay them?'' He asked,Saya had a sad look on her face ''They were my father's. When he died i took them,he was a sellsword too.'' She said,her eyes shining,Damon then smiled ''I bet he was great'' He said ''I'll just humor her so she'll fight well with me'' He thought to himself,Saya looked at him ''He was great,he did a lot of jobs'' She said ''How did he die?'' He asked her,she shook her head,her red locks flowing in Damon's face ''He died of illness. No one was tough enough to kill him'' She said and laughed to herself ''Well,you should be happy then'' Damon said and drank some ale ''I am'' She smiles and finishes her ale,a grizzly looking person gets closer to Damon and looks him in the face ''I'm waiting'' He said,his palm opened in front of him,asking for money ''Why?'' Damon asked ''A small tax'' He said,and laughed,then took out a dagger ''Take that dagger out of his face'' Saya said,the man turned to her and took the dagger closer to her throat ''You have to pay a tax! It's my right to-'' He was interrupted by Saya kicking him in the face and taking out her double sided daggers. The man lunged towards her with a knife but she disarmed him easily and put the daggers close to his throat ''Leave him be'' Damon said,and Saya reluctantly let go of the man ''You will pay for this'' The man said,pointing towards Saya,and stormed out of the door. ''You said you're one who appreciates good jokes?'' Damon said to Saya,who nodded ''He'll make us PAY'' Damon said,laughing. Saya looked at him and shook his head ''This was really bad'' She said and exited the pub with Damon,Harold was waiting outside with a sellsword. When he saw Damon he ran towards him ''She's coming with us?'' He asks,a polite smile on his face ''Yes,i am. I'm Saya'' She says and vigorously shakes Harold's hand. He laughs ''So we're going to get going? Should i warn everybody to come here?'' Harold asks,Damon nods ''Be sure to bring the sack of food we spared,maybe we'll give it to the Manderlys'' Harold nods and runs towards the ship. ''Is this yours?'' Saya asks Damon,looking at his ship like it was gold. Its sails were red,like the lannister's insignia. ''Yes,i bought it for 25 gold dragons'' Saya looks at him ''Willing to pay me too?'' She asks ''No'' Damon simply says and smiles at her ''Careful. You never know who can slit your throat while you sleep'' She smiles ''I have my 45 sellswords know you could be thinking about murdering me,they'll do unspeakable things to you'' He flashes her a challenging look. He was always a prideful and cocky person,he wasn't going to back down from her. ''Here are the sellswords guys!'' Harold says,coming back with all the sellswords ''Guys! If i get killed in my sleep be sure to take my gold and kill her!'' Damon says and points at Saya ''Shut up'' She whispers and steps on his foot ''We will crush the dwarf if we have to. Where do we go?'' The captain of all sellswords asks,Saya seems pretty offended. ''You'll pay for this'' She says to Damon ''I've heard this sentence three times in three minutes'' He said,Saya couldn't help but laugh. ''We go north. Let's see how far can we go until someone gets in our way!'' Damon says,and after having bought enough horses for everyone,the group of sellswords,Saya,Harold and Damon start galloping to the north.
Reader: Why is this chapter so short!
Thewalkingamonthrone: Littlefinger's voice Relax! I will be writing another chapter today,and it will be the beginning of a character's second chapter! You get to choose who!
Whose character's beginning of second chapter do you want?
[Kieron's/Jarger's/Philip's] [Mark's] [Brandon,Thomas and Kevin's]
[Mark's] As much as I want to see more in the Eyrie, I feel like this is a good time to see what type of situation Mark is in at the moment.
Wait wait wait, Mark is alive??? Biggest plot twist yet! [Mark's]
[Mark's]
[mark]
Mark Logan
He could only see Darkness. His muscles were getting weaker,he could feel his armor soaking in blood. But the only thing he could see was Darkness. He could hear the voices of some soldiers,he could feel his body getting tossed somewhere,and a metallic clank of a prison door. Mark was feeling a piercing pain in his chest,then he felt his heart gave out,but his mind was still alive,he couldn't hear and smell. But he could think. He continued staring at the Darkness,until he heard a voice speaking in Valyrian,he continued listening at it for one minute,the words were like white noise to him ''I should learn Valyrian tongue'' He thinks,then he bolts awake and gets up pretty easily,he realized he was at Highpoint.The man guarding his cell got scared ''How did you do it?'' He asked Mark ''I don't know'' Mark said,and brought his hand to his stomach,he was surprised to see there was no blood. The guard ran towards his cell and hit Mark on the head with the hilt of his sword ''What are you doing?!'' Mark screams,grabbing his head in his hands. ''Stay down! Lord Whitehill will make you pay for this.'' The guard says,then he heards a door open,and sees Lord Whitehill's fourthborn Gryff Whitehill and his brother,the secondborn Ebbert Whitehill enter the room. Gryff goes towards Mark's cell with his fists balled,when he opens the door,he grabs Mark by the throat and starts punching him in the crotch ''You'll feel the same pain my father felt!'' He yelled at him,Mark was retching from the pain and he was balling his fists to avoid screaming. ''Brother stop'' Ebbert said from behind him ''Why? He has to pay!'' Gryff said,and started choking Mark. ''Not this way,i know other methods'' He said,and smiled. Gryff reluctantly got up and exited the cell,while Ebbert entered. Mark took his chances and got up,and tried to overpower Ebbert,who smashed in his head a strong bell,making him fall to the ground,he then took Mark's body in his hands and tied him to the cell's wall. ''You'll regret this.'' Mark said,his hands and feet tied to the rope ''I doubt i will,as long as you are here'' Ebbert said,and took a bucket full of nettles which was sitting outside the cell. Ebbert then took out a knife from his pockets and slowly slid it across Mark's arm,cutting it and letting a drop of hot blood fall to the ground ''I met a maester to be one time at the citadel,i recall his name was Qyburn,he studied many things: Poisons,medicines,human body,all while he dissected bodies.'' Ebbert said,getting a handful of nettles from the bucket ''Oh no'' Mark thought,he didn't want Ebbert to do what he thought ''But i don't want to do that. All i want is to protect my family,and you are our enemy'' He said,looking in his eyes,then holding the cut open with his two fingers ''You know who Ramsay Bolton is,right? The warden of the north. I visited him one time and i saw his little servant,he called him Reek,i thought i'd do the same to you. But you'll feel more pain than him,i assure you'' Mark's eyes widened,Ebbert then thrusted the nettles inside of Mark's cut,then held it close ''FUUUCK! AAAAAHHHHHHH'' Mark let out a blood curling scream,he was squirming against Ebbert's grasp,hot searing pain burning into his cut,he could already feel the cut swelling,smoke exiting his arm,probably because the nettles had touched blood. He then heard again the valyrian voice from before. He couldn't give up,he wasn't going to. Ebbert then grabbed a wooden salt bowl ''Like breaking bread and salt together,but just with the salt!'' He said,and then emptied the whole bowl on his cut. Mark was screaming and crying. ''We're done here today. Tomorrow i'll come once again to check on you'' Ebbert said,and left Mark alone in the cold,darkness of his cell. His arm burning.
The morning after Mark got up from his cell floor because he heard thumping on the brick wall of his cell,he checked his arm and saw that the wound had festered,a yellow liquid sizzling out of it. A brick then came loose. ''Mark!'' A familiar voice whispered ''Talon?'' Mark asked,and Talon's head peeked out of the brick wall ''You're hideous as before!'' Mark said,hugging his face ''Apparently Stannis Baratheon sent some soldiers to free you.'' Mark's eyes widened. Stannis Baratheon? One of the five kings who is guided by a priestess of asshai? Mark then understood ''Get me out of here and let's g-'' Ebbert Whitehill came in the room and Talon put the loose brick on the wall again ''Here's my little cub!'' Ebbert said,Mark then faked a scream ''What is it now?'' Ebbert Whitehill said,and before he could come in the cell,Mark got a hold of his Five Links,which Maesters wear to get recognized as one,and put them around his throat. ''Please...'' Ebbert begged,but Mark strengthened his grip,and he kept tightening the chains,when he heard a cracking sound. Ebbert now fell dead to the floor,his neck snapped. ''We've got to go!'' Talon said,pushing the brick out,and Mark kicked a few more bricks out,opening out a narrow passage,he squeezed out of the hole. He saw an old man with Talon ''I'm Davos Seaworth,you are needed by Melisandre,you can stay in your lands but she will come soon.'' He says,Mark then hugs Talon ''Why did you come here?'' ''I couldn't leave you behind'' He said. The small group of men then escaped the castle by using a wide tunnel under Highpoint. When they reached the open air Mark breathed in the air again,Light blinding him. He then saw a horse get closer to them ''Lift him up'' A voice said,he still was half blinded,he then felt Talon and Davos lifting him up ''Don't worry,we won't hurt you'' Davos said,then the horse started galloping,when he got used to the light,he could see a figure wearing a red dress and cape riding the horse. ''Who are you?'' He asked,the figure put a hand on his face and caressed it ''The Light is strong in you'' A female voice said ''May i know your name?'' ''Not now. You must rest,i will take you to your home,but you'll have to do what i tell you'' He then felt his eyes grow heavy,and a heavy weariness come upon him. He then fell asleep
When he woke up he was at Smithon,still on the woman's horse. ''Who did this to your Home must suffer'' The woman said,he felt the woman was on his side. ''Are you willing to help me?'' He said ''I will do everything in my power to help you. The Darkness is coming and you may be the one to defeat it'' She said,then she turned towards him,her eyes piercing his. Her red hair were flowing in the air and she got off the horse. Mark got off the horse too and entered his castle's gates. Bodies were everywhere,some were still breathing,he assumed he only stayed one night in Highpoint ''Check for wounded'' Davos said to his soldier,and they did. He went over to Yara,hoping she would breathe.But Yara was dead,he closed her eyes and walked over to the red woman ''What's your name?'' He asked ''I am Melisandre of Asshai. Some call me Red Priestess'' She says,her gaze fixated on Mark. ''Did you revive me in some way?'' Melisandre was still looking at him ''I didn't. I asked The Lord Of Light,and he did.'' She said ''What can i do now?'' ''I will see that Smithon is cleaned and repaired,in the meantime you could come with me.'' She said ''Where?'' Mark asks ''Where the Lord Of Light wants us to be.'' She says
[Follow Melisandre] [Ask to go to Ironrath]
Chapter's done! Tell me if you liked it or if you would like something more to be implemented in the story
Also,whose Character's beginning of second chapter would you like to see next?
[Jarger Kieron and Philip's] [Hunter's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
[Ask to go to Ironrath] and I don't know why but I'm craving Essos so [Hunter]
[follow Melisandre] [Hunter's]
[Ask to go to Ironrath] and [Brandon,Thomas, and Kevin]
I mean [ask to go to ironrath] and [Hunter's]
[Save the Man]
[Ask to go to Ironrath.] and [Brandon, Thomas, and Kevin.]
The return!! [Ask to go to Ironrath] and [Hunter]
[Ask to go to Ironrath] and [Hunter] please
[Ask to go to Ironrath] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] Good job on this chapter as always!
[follow Melisandre] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's
[Ask to go to Ironrath] [Hunter's]
Thanks
You chose to [Go to Ironrath].... i will say this for no spoilers (?) Melisandre Won't Forget that.
So does Mark just go to Ironrath or ask her?
Hunter Dawson
''Help!'' The man screamed,Hunter lunged at the soldier who was about to kill the man,and threw his sword at him,the sword flew through the air and stuck into the man's neck,killing him instantly. Hunter then grabbed the soldier and picked him up,he then ran away from the battle to get him to a safe spot. ''Thank you,i owe you my life.'' The man says,his eyes shining and looking at him ''Are you badly hurt?'' ''No,i think i'll be alright,just put me down so i will rest for a minute '' The man asked,Hunter put him down and he sighed ''It feels better to be away from the battle'' Hunter looks at him suspicious ''Everybody feels that way'' Hunter says,the man gets his spear from the ground and points towards Meereen's exit ''You should warn the Khaleesi. She will understand,i hope'' He says,and then Hunter starts to run to the exit of Meereen into Dany's camp,when he enters her tent,he finds her with her two dragons,Rhaegal and Viserion,who snarl at Hunter ''What are you doing here?!'' She asks,her eyes burning from the anger ''Khaleesi,a man found himself wounded in battle,i had to rescue him'' Daenerys slaps him across the face,forming a white mark on the spot she hit. ''I DON'T CARE ABOUT OUR MEN I CARE ABOUT TAKING THE CITY!'' She says,Rhaegal lunges towards Hunter,his mouth wide open,but he dodges and pushes the little dragon away. ''DON'T YOU DARE!'' Daenerys says to Hunter,and steps towards him,Rhaegal then breathes a wave of fire towards Hunter,which hit him on the chest,his armor was burning,he tried to take it off ''DANY! PLEASE DO SOMETHING!'' He said,he could feel his skin getting burned now,the armor was melting down,he broke half of his armor causing the fire to spread to his body,Daenerys then put her hands on his armor and pulled it off of him. Her hands perfectly fine. Hunter then got on his knees,the pain on his chest was too much. Daenerys got close to him and got on her knees ''Are you hurt?'' She asked him ''It will eventually disappear'' Hunter said coldly,he knew Daenerys was reckless,but she cared about the people close to her. ''I really am sorry,you did well,saving my soldier.'' She said,her hand caressing his cheek ''Why is your hand not burned?'' Hunter asked Dany,she looked on the ground ''I am a Targaryen,you should know by now that i am immune to fire.'' She said,then got him to his feet and made him lean on her ''Take me to that soldier and i will see that he is healed and brought to a tent.'' Daenerys said,Hunter nodded. He knew she was only doing it for him. She probably didn't care about a foot soldier. The two entered in Meereen,Hunter's hand in Dany's ''You brought him very far from the battle,i see.'' Daenerys says,then a hidden soldier ambushes the two,he punches Hunter in the face,making him fall to the ground,and then unsheathes a dirk. ''Hunter!'' Daenerys tries to shake him awake,but he was knocked out. ''Daenerys Targaryen in person'' The soldier says,then lunges at her with a knife,she takes his arm,in an attempt to block the knife,but he shakes her away,then slaps her across the face,making her fall to the ground. Hunter gets up with all the force he can muster and tackles the man to the ground,the man then shakes free of Hunter and swings his dirk at him,but Hunter barely dodges and gets a long cut all the way from his wrist to upper arm. The soldier then punches Hunter but he blocks the punch and twists his arm,breaking it. ''GO HUNTER!'' Daenerys says,and swings her hand in a punching motion,Hunter was happy that he got her attention,and now was the time to show it. He got the dirk from his hand and stuck it in his armpit,then he twisted the arm once again,so he could get the dirk out. He took it out and stabbed the man in the stomach. He was now on the ground,barely alive. ''Should i take him prisoner?'' Hunter says ''No,let him die!'' Daenerys says,then smiles at Hunter ''You were awesome! You saved my life,thank you.'' She said,and kissed him on the cheek,he blushed. ''LOOK OUT!'' Dany said,but Hunter got stabbed in the back,by another foot soldier,then he fell to the ground. ''NO!'' Dany said and ran towards hunter,but the soldier got his spear up and lunged at Daenerys,who barely dodged the shot and fell to the ground. ''This is what happens when you meddle in our affairs!'' The soldier says and tries to spear Dany,but Hunter trips him down,the soldiers gets back up instantly and picks his spear up. He then brings the spear down on Hunter's chest,he dodged the spear and the wounded soldier he saved came to the rescue ''TAKE THIS!'' He said,bringing his sword up and sticking it on his shoulder,then he punched him to the ground and brought the sword down in his chest,impaling him. ''Thanks....'' Hunter said between gasps, Daenerys was still on the ground,the soldier got her to her feet and then came to help Hunter ''Give me your hand'' Hunter gives him his hand and the soldiers pulls him up ''They didn't stab you someplace lethal. He will be okay'' He then reassures Dany ''Is he the soldier you were talking about?'' Dany talks sweetly to Hunter ''Yes...i haven't got his name yet...'' Hunter says to Dany,who then gazes towards the soldier ''I am one of your soldiers Khaleesi, Thorin Halfhand'' He said,it was clear to the two that he was a Westerosi ''Go back to the camp we made outside Meereen,in my tent.'' Dany says to the man ''In your tent?'' ''The dragons will kill you if you do something rash,now go'' Dany says,and makes Hunter lean on her. They encounter Jorah Mormont's group of men when they were about to get out of the city ''Daenerys!'' He said and went to hug her,to do so he pushed Hunter out of the way,who wobbled for a couple of meters then fell down ''Jorah!'' Dany said and went to help up Hunter,Jorah's face burns from anger ''What the hell is this,huh? Now because he's wounded he's your personal puppy.'' ''He is my second in command. I won't let him down'' She says,and holds his chest with one hand,with the intent of making Jorah jealous ''You'll be sorry'' Jorah pointed towards Hunter and got out of the city into the camp. Daenerys and Hunter followed him and his men. ''I am really sorry about what happened today.'' Daenerys said ''I can't control the dragons anymore'' ''Lock them up,it's the only way'' Daenerys holds back a few tears ''Don't be scared of crying in front of me.'' He said,and she nodded,a weak tear flowing down her face. Then she shook her head ''The most important thing is we took Meereen'' She said ''I can't wait to see you on the iron throne'' Daenerys looks at him and genuinely smiles ''Who would you make hand of the queen?'' Hunter says out of curiosity,Daenerys then thinks ''Can't there be two?'' ''No,only one'' Hunter said,Daenerys then sighed ''I don't know. You have the ability of command and brute force,Jorah has charm and charisma.'' She says,Hunter then takes her cheeks in his hands ''What are you doing?'' Daenerys asked him ''I can be charming too'' He said and kissed her on her lips,his tongue begged for entrance but she pulled away from him,her face shocked'' Hunter then smiled at her ''What? Don't you agree with me?'' Daenerys looks at him ''I would believe you now.'' She said,and touched her lips with her hand,then kissed it. ''So i will be the hand of the queen?'' He says again ''Maybe'' She teases him. He was really torn,between his loyalty for Dany and for his thirst of power. ''Here we are'' She said to him,and entered her tent. The wounded soldier was sitting on a small bed ''Thorin,are you from Westeros?'' Daenerys asks ''I am'' He says ''We want to know more'' Hunter says ''I cleaned King Robert's rooms during his reign. After that i was exiled to Essos.'' ''King Robert?'' Hunter thought ''I once received a raven from House Stark,informing me on Robert Baratheon's will to kill Dany. ''Lock him up. Feed him every day but be sure to keep him locked up.'' Hunter says with a serious expression to Dany,who follows his orders ''Guards,do as he says.'' Daenerys says ''I WAS JUST FOLLOWING YOUR ORDERS,YOUR GRACE!'' Thorin screams as he gets dragged away by the guards. ''Thank you,Hunter,go rest'' Daenerys says and Hunter exits the tent,Daenerys stops him and kisses him. He doesn't kiss back but smiles,he then goes to his tent and lays down on his bed.
He wakes up the morning after,with a letter on his pillow,right by his head,he rubs his eyes and reads it
''Hi Hunter,meet me in my tent. We need to talk. Dany''
He smiles at the letter,gets up and goes to Daenerys' tent ''Good Morning Hunter'' Dany says smiling,she was outside the tent,sitting in her chair which was tucked under a table she set up for eating,she gestured to a chair near her and Hunter sat down ''Here,eat the bacon you giant'' She says and gives him a plate with some bacon,she drinks some wine ''I suggest you try it too'' She says,he takes the flagon and pours some wine in his cup,drinking some ''It is very spiced'' He said ''It's just like me.'' ''Hot?'' He thought,but kept his mouth shut ''So,i need you to talk about Jorah. I need you two to cooperate and break Thorin. He needs to talk,and i need to know the truth ''I don't kn-'' Hunter was interrupted by Daenerys ''You will do as i say'' Her lillac eyes staring into his ''I will. My queen,sorry.'' He said,and ate some of the bacon. The two talked for some time and then Jorah came towards the two ''Are you two eating?'' ''What does it look like?'' Daenerys says ''Mind if i join?'' ''No,absolutely. Help yourself with everything'' Daenerys says kindly to him,then glances at Hunter,her eyebrows cocking ''Want some bacon? Or you prefer other meats?'' Hunter says and points towards the plates filled with Duck,Honey basted Rabbit, and Westerosi Mutton. ''What is this kindness?'' Jorah says,quite surprised,and looks at Hunter ''We two need to stop kicking each other. We need to cooperate and we need to command our Khaleesi's army'' Hunter says,Jorah beats his hands down on the table ''Finally you understood what's best for this House!'' He said,and helped himself with some wine. He was right,and Hunter knew that. He was selfish for thinking only about him and Dany. ''We need to talk to Thorin.'' Hunter said to Jorah ''The one who you took prisoner? Good job by the way'' He said ''Yes,we need to break him into talking. Daenerys wants that.'' Jorah looks at Dany,and then nods to Hunter ''I'm in.''
The two then get up from the table and go towards his cell,which was in a tent close to Jorah's ''I don't have anything to tell you!'' The man says just when he sees Jorah ''I have someone for you!'' Jorah says,and Hunter enters the tent ''You won't touch me'' He says,then Hunter unlocks his cage and starts beating him ''You knew King Robert! He wanted to kill Daenerys!'' He says,Thorin is quite frightened and when Hunter uncovered his lie,his eyes widened ''I was told that i were to kill the Targaryen girl,that Robert would have sent his whole army to Essos if i was uncovered. But now that he is dead,Joffrey Baratheon won't raise a finger. I am in your hands...Don't kill me,please. I wasn't planning on doing it! I don't kill women!'' He said,teary eyed. Hunter looked at him with a pitiful expression,but he was suspicious ''Joffrey Baratheon...How could he have possibly known that Robert died and Joffrey claimed the throne?'' Hunter looked at Jorah,and Daenerys entered the tent,he looked at Hunter in his eyes,and he in hers...
[Spare Thorin] [Kill Thorin and send a raven to King's Landing] [Spare Thorin but order him to send ravens to King's Landing]
Did you like the chapter,guys? I think it was good. The reason i didn't write yesterday was that my connection didn't work. I am really sorry.
Chose whose chapter i should do next!
[Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Jarger,Kieron and Philip's] [Damon and Saya's]
Who knows....
A little hint:
(?) Talia is scared.
[Spare Thorin but order him to send ravens to King's Landing] and [Jarger,Kieron and Philip's]
[Spare Thorin] and [Brandon,Thomas, Kevin's]
[Kill Thorin and send a raven to King's Landing] [Jarger, Kieron and Philips]
[Kill Thorin and send a raven to King's Landing] Boy, you know Joffrey will raise a finger and [Jarger, Kieron and Philip's]
Yours is a good thinking...but i won't spoil the consequences...
[Spare Thorin but order him to send ravens to King's Landing] and [Jarger,Kieron and Philip's]
[Kill Thorin and send a raven to Kings Landing] anddddd [Jarger, Kieron and Philip's]
[Kill Thorin and send a raven to King's Landing] and [Jarger, Kieron and Philip's] Joffery had to insist upon being mentioned XD
You all chose to [Kill Thorin and send a raven to King's Landing] You will see the consequences of this in the next chapter...and i fear they won't be good.
[Kill Thorin and send a raven to King's Landing] aaaand Brandon, Thomas, and Kevin.
Kieron Cantell
''Sansa,we have to go!'' Kieron says to Sansa,who looks at him and grabs his hand,then turns to the man who was behind them ''You know the way?'' Kieron said ''Yes,i do. Follow me'' He said and started to run away from the scene,the two followed him for a good ten minutes,when they realized they reached the Blackwaters,''I am Dontos Hollard by the way'' Dontos said,pushing a small boat into the water and getting the two in ''Nice to meet you'' Sansa said,and the man smiled ''Give me a hand please'' Dontos asked Kieron,and the two rowed together until they saw a small ship,waiting for them ''We are almost there.'' Dontos said,Kieron knew that the choice he made was going to change his life. When they got to the small ship,a tall,thin man met the three. ''I did what you wanted,i want my pay now'' Dontos said to the man,but a couple of crossbowmen appeared from behind him and shot Dontos to death ''NO!'' Sansa screamed,and hugged Kieron,the crossbowmen aimed to Kieron and one bolt hit him in the shoulder,and he fell to his knees. Sansa got in front of him ''Don't kill him. Please'' She said,still shielding Kieron ''Sansa,come here'' The man said ''Not before you let him on your ship'' Sansa said,the man grunted ''Let him on the boat'' He said to the crossbowmen,and they lowered their crossbows. Kieron then got on the ship,and then the man stretched his hand out to Sansa ''Now come on,darling'' He said to her,she grabbed his hand and he pulled him on the boat. Kieron got close to the man ''Who are you?'' He asked ''I am what i tell you,but that is never the truth'' He said,to him ''Just call me Littlefinger,that is what everybody calls me'' He sneered to Kieron ''He can be a bit....witty'' Sansa said to Kieron ''I noticed.'' Kieron said,then Littlefinger gestured to his men ''See that they are in my finest chambers,and if you want to bother someone,do it with him'' He said,pointing at Kieron ''We will'' The man said and the two were brought to two chambers,Sansa wanted to enter Kieron's ''You can't,go in the other one.'' A soldier said,Sansa then turned around,towering over the short soldier ''I go where i want. Is this worth losing your job?'' Sansa said to the man,then turned to Kieron,who opened the door ''Are you going to enter?'' Sansa told him,but he stepped back and held the door open for her ''You first'' He said,Sansa smiled briefly and entered the room,before Kieron could close the door he heard the short soldier ''Whore...'' Kieron then closed the door and grunted. He saw Sansa on the bed,sadly looking at the wall ''Hey,are you alright?'' He said,sitting on the bed next to her ''I wonder where my sister is.'' ''Arya Stark? She will be alright,she is really tough. The one time she was in King's Landing i saw her bother a cat. I told her to leave him alone,and she threatened me that her father would see me hanged.'' Sansa laughed and she looked at him ''I hope you're right,i would do anything to hug her right now. When we were at Winterfell we always fought,and she always thought i didn't love her. I would give anything to anyone to go back to those times'' Kieron smiled ''I wish i could've been at Winterfell,being your guard.'' Sansa looked at him,and smiled at him. ''In King's Landing i always protected snakes like Margaery Tyrell,or accepted jobs from the Queen Regent'' When he mentioned this,Sansa sat up straight on the bed,almost as if the word made her jump ''I won't do that now,wherever we will go now i will see that you are protected from anyone'' Sansa then lays down on the bed,and Kieron too. The two fall asleep hugged to each other.
When they wake up they go on the ship's deck and see that they arrived to the Eyrie ''Wow...This place is beautiful!'' Kieron says in absolute awe,Sansa looks scared ''This is my aunt's House seat. House Arryn'' She says,a look of complete panic on her face ''Isn't that a good thing?'' He says,she grabs his hands and looks him in the eyes ''You do not know her true side and you must never wake it.'' She says,then Littlefinger,who was on the ship's deck,walks towards the two,and takes Sansa away from Kieron. Kieron decided to sit on a crate that was close to the edge of the ship and looks at the Eyrie,getting closer minute after minute. He occasionally glances towards Sansa and Littlefinger,he sees him caressing her face,talking with her,and smiling,as he was the happiest man in the world. The thing that made Kieron suspicious was,that Sansa wasn't smiling,she was scared,he could see it in her eyes. The poor girl watched a king die a horrible death,and survived his tortures and humiliations,she was a true girl of the North. In fact she was a Daughter Of the North,she appeared so fierce and fearless to Kieron's eyes,but Littlefinger seems to scare her. When they finished talking,Littlefinger's men were already getting off the ship. Sansa walked towards Kieron and offered him her hand ''Let's go'' She said,and Kieron took her hand and got her off the ship,then he got off too. Sansa was still locking hands with him,and she was smiling. She saw a man looking at her ''Who are you?'' Sansa asked to the man ''I'm Jarger Waters, i was a gold cloak in King's Landing and i broke my vows to come here,i even talked with you for some time in King's Landing,my lady,don't you remember?'' The man said,and kissed Sansa's hand,she smiled ''You are courteous,Jarger. But i'm afraid i don't recall your face or your name at all. We can still know each other though'' She says and shyly smiles,Kieron could feel a bit of rage towards Jarger,was he feeling jealous? ''I'm Kieron! Nice to meet you!'' He said to the Jarger,and shook his hand ''Nice to meet you.'' Jarger said,then Kieron then took Sansa's hand and started dragging her away ''We could have some breakfast,we haven't eaten since yesterday'' He said,but Sansa turned to him ''Are you jealous?'' She said and smiled knowingly ''Of what?'' Kieron tried to cover his jealousy,but failed miserably ''He isn't going to be my guard,i assure you. Now let's all go to have some breakfast'' She said and glanced towards Littlefinger,and saw him staring at her,she then jumped and got startled,then he took Kieron and Jarger by their hands ''Let's go,now'' She said,and the three went to a small camp,with a big wooden table filled with meats,wines,spices,and sweets. ''Was it made for us?'' Kieron asked Sansa ''Petyr probably set this up for me.'' She said ''Who is Petyr?'' He asked her ''The man who's commonly called Littlefinger. Now let's sit down and eat something,i'm hungry'' She said and sat down on a wooden chair,then Kieron went to sit next to her,but Jarger was doing the same thing ''You can't sit down on the same chair'' Sansa pointed out the obvious,winking at Kieron ''It's okay!'' Kieron said,trying to mask his jealousy and made Jarger sit next to Sansa,while he was next to Jarger. ''So,why are you here Sansa?'' Jarger asked her,looking her in the eyes ''King Joffrey died at his wedding with Margaery Tyrell,and i ran away from King's Landing'' She said,leaning on the table and caressing Kieron's hair ''He helped me'' She said,obviously knowing that Kieron was jealous of her ''Seriously? Tell me more'' Jarger said,and the two went on with their stories,Kieron blocked the two's talk,and focused on a piece of bacon on his plate ''At least you don't get to suffer jealousy like me'' He says to the piece of bacon and eats it,he noticed the two stopped talking,Sansa looking at him flabbergastered ''Did you just talk to that piece of bacon?'' She said,and burst out laughing. Kieron hid his face for the shame,and he decided to have a walk around the Eyrie. He saw the castle,he saw the soldier's camps,he admired the vast nature he had around him,his awe was interrupted by Sansa ''Can i walk with you?'' She asked Kieron ''Sure you can'' He said,he was surprised: He didn't think she was going to ask him. He thought he had to ask her. She took his hand and started walking with him towards a small river, ''This place is awesome,not because of the people who live in it,but because of it's great nature'' She says to Kieron,looking at him,he looked back ''It's awesome,i could even get a job here!'' He says,and Sansa lightens up ''I could ask Aunt Lysa to make you her guard! You have experience!'' She says ''Would you do that for me?'' She stops and grabs both of his hands ''Of course i would,i am scared of my Aunt,but you saved my life. And i think you could be the only trustable friend i have.'' She says to him ''Friend? Just a friend?'' Kieron thinks ''You are really kind Sansa.'' He says,then notices that the river was close ''Let's go to the river'' He says,and walks towards it. ''Wow,this water is so clean you can see yourself in it'' Sansa says,looking at her reflection,then Kieron jokingly pushed her in the river,Sansa let out a cry,and then splashed some water to Kieron,the two laughed,but then Littlefinger quickly walked towards the two,when Sansa saw him,she got scared,and Kieron helped her out of the water ''It's nothing,we were just having fun'' Sansa says to Littlefinger ''SANSA! GO IMMEDIATELY TO THE CASTLE! I WILL TELL AUNT LYSA OF YOUR DISOBEDIENCE!'' Littlefinger snarled to Sansa,whose eyes widened,and Kieron saw a tear flowing down her face,she then ran towards the caslte.Littlefinger then turned to Kieron,a disdainful expression forming on his face ''You need to stay away from her. This isn't a game,you can't have her,and you can't talk with her. If you don't listen to me,i will handle matters personally'' He said,and walked away. Kieron didn't know what to do,should he try to go to the castle and talk with Lysa Arryn? Maybe convince her to be her,or Sansa's personal guard,so he couldn't be touched by Littlefinger. But again,Littlefinger didn't care. He could just go to the castle and ask Lysa Arryn if she needed some personal bodyguards.
[Go to the Castle and ask to become Sansa's guard] [Go to the castle and ask to become Lysa Arryn's guard] [Stay away from the castle,and Sansa]
(If you watch the show,you know what's the best choice)
(Oh surprise) Philip's POV
Philip walked towards Littlefinger's ship,but he didn't find him,so he decided to make him wait there. He saw him in the distance with an angry expression,but as soon as Littlefinger saw him he became cool. ''Hi,my friend!'' Littlefinger said to Philip ''We aren't friends,Petyr,and you perfectly know that.'' He knew that he had to have a quick wit to outsmart him ''You are right. We aren't,but we know each other'' ''Define 'Know''' Philip said to Littlefinger ''We have business that concerns the both of us.'' Littlefinger said ''About Sansa?'' Philip said ''Yes! About Sansa'' Petyr said ''What would you want me to do?'' Philip asked ''Since when Mord fucked a girl?'' Petyr said,not a single gram of guilt showing in his words ''Quite the time,what do i get in exchange?'' Philip said ''You didn't even heard what i wanted you to do'' Petyr said ''You want Mord to try fuck the girl,then you will run to her and you will protect her from him,you will hurt him,in some way,and he will fake an injury,so you will be a hero in the girl's eyes'' Philip fired back,he knew there was a battle of intrigues between them,and he felt like he won it ''You know what to do. Impressive'' Littlefinger said,and clapped his hands. ''I will tell Mord to do what you told me,it will be tonight.'' Philip said,and shook Petyr's hand ''You will be richly rewarded,i won't forget this'' Littlefinger said ''I doubt you won't'' Philip thought,but just smiled to him. He knew what to do and when,he just needed to wait the night.
So guys! Chapter is over! Tell me if you enjoyed it! Philip is joining the dark side! How will this play out? What if Kieron becomes Sansa's guard and stops the two's act? What will happen?
What chapter you want to see next?
[Still Kieron's,Jarger's and Philip's] [Damon and Saya's] [Hunter's] [Mark's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
[Stay away from the castle, and sansa] and [Brandon, Thomas, and Kevin's]
[Stay away from the castle,and Sansa] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] Love the chapter, you really explained the type of situation Sansa is in really well through Kieron's view!
Question: Does your fanfiction run closer to the books or the show?
[Stay away from the castle,and Sansa] and [Brandon, Thomas, and Kevin's.]
[Stay away from the castle and Sansa] [Brandon, Thomas and Kevin's]
First of all,thank you for appreciating the book. My book does run closer to the show,as i know it better. I've read the books,but now i should read them again,so i could even make some cameos of it (Like Mord,Tyrion's jailer in season 1 of the show)