You chose to [Stay Away from the castle and Sansa] And i can say that you made the right choice,will Sansa try and get close to Kieron again? Or Will Littlefinger keep her from doing this? I can say that Kieron will live,because if you would have chosen to become Lysa Arryn's guard Littlefinger would have killed her,and Kieron,with Philip's help
You chose to [Stay Away from the castle and Sansa] And i can say that you made the right choice,will Sansa try and get close to Kieron again… more? Or Will Littlefinger keep her from doing this? I can say that Kieron will live,because if you would have chosen to become Lysa Arryn's guard Littlefinger would have killed her,and Kieron,with Philip's help
First of all,thank you for appreciating the book. My book does run closer to the show,as i know it better. I've read the books,but now i should read them again,so i could even make some cameos of it (Like Mord,Tyrion's jailer in season 1 of the show)
''Why are the wildlings attacking us?'' Kevin asked,terrified,looking at Castle Black ''They are planning to slaughter us all'' Thomas said,unsheathing his sword ''Let's go fight them!'' He said,starting to run towards Castle Black,Brandon and Kevin followed. Thomas' legs were still sore from running away from wights,but it wasn't going to stop him from killing wildlings. They ran until they reached Castle Black's gates,which were shut obviously,but there were no wildlings around them. ''WE ARE ALMOST THERE!'' Kevin said,but when they got to the door they didn't open ''IT'S US! OPEN UP!'' Brandon said,banging on the gates,but there seemed to be nobody in the castle,Brandon looked back and saw that a wildling army was coming ''THEY'LL KILL US! LET US IN AND WE WILL FIGHT!'' Brandon said,then the three decided to climb the walls,as the army was getting close ''BRANDON! CATCH ME!'' Kevin said,who slipped on his hand,and Brandon catched him,then threw him over the gates,the two were now climbing,when an arrow stuck into the wall,a couple centimeters away from Thomas' head ''ARE YOU OKAY?'' Brandon asks,throwing himself over the gates,Thomas does so too,and falls into the yard of castle black with Brandon and Kevin,all the brothers were hid in corners,to ambush them. They gestured sorry and the three nodded,then went to hide. As the wildlings' yells grew louder,and closer,Brandon,Kevin and Thomas were hugging their swords ''Hilda will shatter some heads tonight'' Kevin said,hugging his beloved two handed axe. All the crows were met with a rain of arrows,but luckily they were under their battlements,so they couldn't get them. They all then heard a loud thud,and heard the gates shattering under a giant's mace. The wildlings entered Castle Black and all the crows jumped out,sword ready,Brandon jumped out of his hiding spot and killed one wildling with his sword,slitting his throat,war bursted out in the castle,the three immediately lost each other and were fighting on their own, Thomas was fighting two wildling guys,one of them went for a slash,but he parried it and stuck the sword in his stomach,the other one took his chances and hit Thomas while he was taking his sword out of his friend's body,and hit him in the shoulder,his pauldrons softened the blow,but he got stunned and fell to the ground. The wildling then brought up his axe and made it fall on Thomas,he easily dodged it and got up,the wildling then slashed his axe at him once again,he ducked on the ground,and tripped him. The wildling fell to the ground,he was getting to his axe,but Thomas got to it first and tried to choke him with it,he headbutted Thomas and freed himself,but Thomas still had the axe in his hands,and brought it down on his back,killing him. Then he saw Jon Snow on the elevator of the wall,slowly getting to the ground,but then he felt a sharp pain in his back,and he felt an arrow stuck in him,he turned around and he saw a red haired female wildling,with a bow. He ran towards her but she shot another arrow at him,hitting him in the chest,he dropped to his knees and coughed up some blood,he saw the wildling smiling,almost as if she was enjoying his pain. She then cocked another arrow in her bow,but a crow took her down,he was clutching his chest,he already broke the arrow. He could only hear muffled screams and battle sounds,he got up and grabbed his sword,he walked towards the elevator,where he could see Kevin being overpowered by two wildlings,he got close to them and killed one of them,then Kevin easily freed himself and got up ''THOMAS! YOU'RE HURT!'' He said,Thomas then fell to the ground,all senses leaving him. The last words he could hear before passing out were Kevin's screams and pleads.
Kevin's POV
''THOMAS! WAKE UP! WE STILL HAVE SOME FIGHTING TO DO!'' Kevin shook Thomas' body,but he wasn't moving,Kevin felt a hand touch his shoulder ''YOU! WE NEED SOME MEN ON THE WALL! YOU CAN COME!'' Jon Snow said to Kevin ''Let's...Let's go then.'' Kevin said,but before going to the elevator,he dragged Thomas closer to the elevator,where he was a little bit more protected. He then got on the elevator and saw it go up. He sat down wondering if he would have survived the night,he survived wights,so,why couldn't he survive a simple wildling assault? When he got atop of the wall, he knew why. There were giants punching the wall,and just then,Jon Snow remembered ''WE CAN'T LET THEM DESTROY THE INNER GATE! GRENN! TAKE A FEW MEN AND HOLD IT!'' He said to Grenn,who was close to Kevin ''WE WILL!'' He said,and gestured to Kevin and a few other men to follow him. When they got to the inner gate,they put themselves behind the locked gate. They heard a giant break the door,and they saw him enter the small narrow corridor,which led to the gate they were behind. ''THE SEVEN SAVE US!'' A terrified man said ''THE GODS AREN'T DOWN HERE! JUST US'' Grenn said,the giant was now starting to run towards the gate "Night gathers, and now my watch begins. It shall not end until my death. I shall take no wife, hold no lands, father no children. I shall wear no crowns and win no glory. I shall live and die at my post.'' The giant was now picking up his pace,Kevin started to chant alongside his brothers '' I am the sword in the darkness. I am the watcher on the walls. I AM THE SHIELD THAT GUARDS THE REALMS OF MEN!. I PLEDGE MY LIFE AND HONOR TO THE NIGHT'S WATCH, FOR THIS NIGHT AND ALL THE NIGHTS TO COME!." Kevin finished his vows,and the giant easily ran through the gate,Kevin aimed and threw Hilda to his head,and hit him spot on,the last thing he saw before getting crushed by the Giant was the other brothers' desperate screams of pain.
Brandon's POV
The wildling forces were slaughtering all the crows,Brandon was fighting with some wildling soldiers when a boy took him away from the battle ''You need to help me find some arrows'' He said,Brandon nodded,and found a quiver in the distance,he took it and went to the boy,who thanked him and cocked an arrow,hitting a wildling female on the back. He saw Jon Snow teary eyed,that made him suspicious,but he decided to get in the fray once again,and saw that wildlings were pouring out of every corner of Castle Black,he tossed his sword to the ground,and dropped to his knees. He watched in slow motion as a lot of crows were being slaughtered under the axes and swords of the wildlings. He then was knocked into reality as a wildling soldiers grabbed him from his neck and slammed his head repeatedly in a piece of wood that was nearby,he then played dead,and the wildling let him go. He then decided to look for his friends,he saw Kevin go on the wall,but he didn't see Thomas...
[Go to the elevator and save Thomas][Go up the elevator and save Kevin]
So guys,this part is over,i hope you liked it! Actually tell me if you did in the comments! What will happen? Who will live and die,at the wall? We will find out in the next part.
Whose part you want to see next?
[Kieron's,Jarger's and Philip's][Hunter's][Damon and Saya's][Mark's][NEW CHARACTER]
[Go to the elevator and save Thomas] and [Damon and Saya's] Loved this chapter a lot, I liked the way you describe the attack on Castle Black! Kevin saying his vows during the fight was extremely epic! Keep it up, and know that a lot people appreciate your work!
New chapter guys!
Thomas' POV
''Why are the wildlings attacking us?'' Kevin asked,terrified,looking at Castle Black ''They are plannin… moreg to slaughter us all'' Thomas said,unsheathing his sword ''Let's go fight them!'' He said,starting to run towards Castle Black,Brandon and Kevin followed. Thomas' legs were still sore from running away from wights,but it wasn't going to stop him from killing wildlings. They ran until they reached Castle Black's gates,which were shut obviously,but there were no wildlings around them. ''WE ARE ALMOST THERE!'' Kevin said,but when they got to the door they didn't open ''IT'S US! OPEN UP!'' Brandon said,banging on the gates,but there seemed to be nobody in the castle,Brandon looked back and saw that a wildling army was coming ''THEY'LL KILL US! LET US IN AND WE WILL FIGHT!'' Brandon said,then the three decided to climb the walls,as the army was getting close ''BRANDON! CATCH ME!'' Kevin said,who slipped on hi… [view original content]
Haha,thank you. I love how you guys don't vote for your own character's chapter but you actually vote the ones we haven't seen in a long time. About Kevin's scene,i remembered Grenn saying it in the show,still another ''cameo'' or appearance or honorable mention. Working big time to write the chapters well.
New chapter guys!
Thomas' POV
''Why are the wildlings attacking us?'' Kevin asked,terrified,looking at Castle Black ''They are plannin… moreg to slaughter us all'' Thomas said,unsheathing his sword ''Let's go fight them!'' He said,starting to run towards Castle Black,Brandon and Kevin followed. Thomas' legs were still sore from running away from wights,but it wasn't going to stop him from killing wildlings. They ran until they reached Castle Black's gates,which were shut obviously,but there were no wildlings around them. ''WE ARE ALMOST THERE!'' Kevin said,but when they got to the door they didn't open ''IT'S US! OPEN UP!'' Brandon said,banging on the gates,but there seemed to be nobody in the castle,Brandon looked back and saw that a wildling army was coming ''THEY'LL KILL US! LET US IN AND WE WILL FIGHT!'' Brandon said,then the three decided to climb the walls,as the army was getting close ''BRANDON! CATCH ME!'' Kevin said,who slipped on hi… [view original content]
New chapter guys!
Thomas' POV
''Why are the wildlings attacking us?'' Kevin asked,terrified,looking at Castle Black ''They are plannin… moreg to slaughter us all'' Thomas said,unsheathing his sword ''Let's go fight them!'' He said,starting to run towards Castle Black,Brandon and Kevin followed. Thomas' legs were still sore from running away from wights,but it wasn't going to stop him from killing wildlings. They ran until they reached Castle Black's gates,which were shut obviously,but there were no wildlings around them. ''WE ARE ALMOST THERE!'' Kevin said,but when they got to the door they didn't open ''IT'S US! OPEN UP!'' Brandon said,banging on the gates,but there seemed to be nobody in the castle,Brandon looked back and saw that a wildling army was coming ''THEY'LL KILL US! LET US IN AND WE WILL FIGHT!'' Brandon said,then the three decided to climb the walls,as the army was getting close ''BRANDON! CATCH ME!'' Kevin said,who slipped on hi… [view original content]
New chapter guys!
Thomas' POV
''Why are the wildlings attacking us?'' Kevin asked,terrified,looking at Castle Black ''They are plannin… moreg to slaughter us all'' Thomas said,unsheathing his sword ''Let's go fight them!'' He said,starting to run towards Castle Black,Brandon and Kevin followed. Thomas' legs were still sore from running away from wights,but it wasn't going to stop him from killing wildlings. They ran until they reached Castle Black's gates,which were shut obviously,but there were no wildlings around them. ''WE ARE ALMOST THERE!'' Kevin said,but when they got to the door they didn't open ''IT'S US! OPEN UP!'' Brandon said,banging on the gates,but there seemed to be nobody in the castle,Brandon looked back and saw that a wildling army was coming ''THEY'LL KILL US! LET US IN AND WE WILL FIGHT!'' Brandon said,then the three decided to climb the walls,as the army was getting close ''BRANDON! CATCH ME!'' Kevin said,who slipped on hi… [view original content]
New chapter guys!
Thomas' POV
''Why are the wildlings attacking us?'' Kevin asked,terrified,looking at Castle Black ''They are plannin… moreg to slaughter us all'' Thomas said,unsheathing his sword ''Let's go fight them!'' He said,starting to run towards Castle Black,Brandon and Kevin followed. Thomas' legs were still sore from running away from wights,but it wasn't going to stop him from killing wildlings. They ran until they reached Castle Black's gates,which were shut obviously,but there were no wildlings around them. ''WE ARE ALMOST THERE!'' Kevin said,but when they got to the door they didn't open ''IT'S US! OPEN UP!'' Brandon said,banging on the gates,but there seemed to be nobody in the castle,Brandon looked back and saw that a wildling army was coming ''THEY'LL KILL US! LET US IN AND WE WILL FIGHT!'' Brandon said,then the three decided to climb the walls,as the army was getting close ''BRANDON! CATCH ME!'' Kevin said,who slipped on hi… [view original content]
After some hours of endless galloping,the group decided to stop. Damon then got off his horse ''SELLSWORDS! ARE YOU TIRED?'' He says ''NO! WE AREN'T!'' They say ''Then we just stopped for nothing'' Damon said,the sellswords laughed. ''You reallly are stupid'' Saya says to him ''And you don't have a name for yourself,i am a Ravencrest,while you'll never be someone'' He says,her eyes well up and she turns away from him ''Your words are sharper than swords'' She says ''I'll take it as a compliment'' ''I want to be paid,when you get to Winterfell'' She says ''Ok,ok,i'll pay you'' Damon says ''I never will'' He thinks,Saya then turns around to look at him,then she turns to the sellswords ''LET'S MAKE THIS WORTH! I SAY THAT DAMON HAS TO PROVE HIMSELF TO YOU!'' Saya said ''I CHALLENGE YOU TO A FIST FIGHT!'' She says,the sellswords start chanting ''YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!'' And started to form a circle around the two ''IT WASN'T SUPPOSED TO GET TO THIS POINT!'' Harold says,while getting pushed by some sellswords.Saya then throws some sand on Damon's eyes ''I wasn't ready!'' He said,but it was too late,sand was stinging in his eyes,and Saya already punched him to the ground,she then got on top of him ''How about i take you to King's Landing instead? You'll make a fine whore!'' Damon says,taunting her,but she landed a punch on his nose,smashing it,she then continued to pummel him until he gave up ''GET OFF OF ME!'' He says,and Saya does so. She gets up and all the sellswords go cheering towards her,Damon is fuming,he gets up and goes to his friend,Harold ''She now has earned their respect,what can i do now?!'' He says ''I am afraid nothing,my friend'' He says,and the two get on their horses ''LET'S GO MEN!'' Damon says ''THEY'LL GO WHENEVER I TELL THEM TO!'' Saya says,a challenging smile on her face,Damon grips his horse's reins harder and speeds away from Saya and his men alongside Harold ''SHE NOW HAS EARNED THEIR RESPECT! UNBELIEVABLE!'' He says again ''Just don't worry about it man,remember that she is still one of your sellswords.'' Harold says ''One day i'll have my fucking house,and then she will be working for me!'' He says,and Saya hears ''What's that?'' She says,but Damon doesn't pay attention to her,they arrive to a sacked city,and they decide to ask a red headed woman the name of it ''You are at Smithon,the seat of House Logan,Lord Logan could be Azor Ahai and you have no right to be here.'' She says,and coldly kicks away Damon,who kicks a nearby rock,stubbing his toe ''FUCK!'' He screams in pain ''Haha! I hope that what you don't have in Strength,you have in intelligence.'' Saya says and laughs ''One day,i'll form House Ravencrest,and maybe you could work for me!'' He says ''I like the sound of that'' Saya says,then gets on her horse ''Should we go?'' She says ''Yes.'' Damon gets on his horse,and Harold on his,but before he does that,he shooks his head in disappointment at Saya ''Do that again and i'll break that pretty neck of yours'' She says,and taunts him. Harold then speeds away with Damon ''Now i can't stand her! What have you got in mind? Kick her out of the group?'' He says ''We could make a truce,or something!'' Damon says ''You should be start to be look for your future House's allies,Damon'' Harold says,and Damon's face lightens up ''We are close to the Twins,maybe Walder Frey can be a precious ally,he always looks for someone to marry their daughters!'' Damon says,slightly excited at the idea of having a so powerful ally ''Maybe,but Robb Stark died in his own wedding'' Harold said ''Robb Stark married a volantene,or lysene,i don't remember,woman,and not one of Walder Frey's daughters. He deserved to die,in fact he let Edmure marry her daughter,and he still lives.'' Damon says,and Harold can't do nothing but agree with him: Everything he said was logical and right,he would make for a fine Lord. ''You're right! So it's settled then?'' He says,and they arrive at a small village,they get off their horses. Saya comes closer to Damon ''Let's go look for something in this small village! Maybe it could become House Ravencrest's.'' She says,smiling at him,he surprisingly smiled at her ''You are right,let's go check it out.'' They entered the village on foot. The smallfolk was looking at the group of sellswords ''WELL MET,SMALLFOLK OF THIS VILLAGE! I NEED YOU TO TELL ME WHO IS IT'S OWNER,IT WILL EVENTUALLY BECOME HOUSE RAVENCREST'S LANDS!'' Damon says ''YOU CAN'T DO THAT!'' The blonde man from the pub spoke up ''Why does everybody make me feel like a chicken?'' Damon thinks ''AND WHO ARE YOU,MY FELLOW PEASANT?'' Damon said,with a prideful voice ''I'M THE ONE YOUR GIRL FOUGHT IN A PUB!'' He said,pointing at Saya ''I'M GRYFF WHITEHILL,A FIERCE MEMBER OF HOUSE WHITEHILL,AND YOU WILL HAND OVER THE GIRL TO ME! OR YOU'LL SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!'' He said,the smallfolk take out their weapons: Shortswords,dirks,daggers,one even had an Arakh,which made Damon chuckle ''Listen to him,Damon,and hand me over to him'' Saya says,a selfless tone in her voice,a tone Damon never heard ''Why? I won't give you up,even though you are a little bit prideful...'' Damon sarcastically says ''I don't want to bring trouble to you,trust me,Damon,i will be fine'' She says,gripping his hand ''They are smallfolk,they aren't trained! And besides,do you even have an idea of what that guy will do to you?!'' He says,but she lets go of his hand ''GRYFF!'' She says...Damon could still stop her....
[Stop Saya][Let Saya go]
End of the part! Did you like it? Actually,tell me that in the comments! How will it end? Will House Ravencrest be created? We will find out,maybe,in the next part! And don't hesitate to ask me what the less popular choice would have caused (MyMotherInsisted is a good example Wink Wink)
Whose part would you like to see next?
[Kieron's Jarger's and Philip's][Mark's][Hunter's][Damon and Saya's]
Damon Ravencrest
After some hours of endless galloping,the group decided to stop. Damon then got off his horse ''SELLSWORDS! ARE YOU TIRE… moreD?'' He says ''NO! WE AREN'T!'' They say ''Then we just stopped for nothing'' Damon said,the sellswords laughed. ''You reallly are stupid'' Saya says to him ''And you don't have a name for yourself,i am a Ravencrest,while you'll never be someone'' He says,her eyes well up and she turns away from him ''Your words are sharper than swords'' She says ''I'll take it as a compliment'' ''I want to be paid,when you get to Winterfell'' She says ''Ok,ok,i'll pay you'' Damon says ''I never will'' He thinks,Saya then turns around to look at him,then she turns to the sellswords ''LET'S MAKE THIS WORTH! I SAY THAT DAMON HAS TO PROVE HIMSELF TO YOU!'' Saya said ''I CHALLENGE YOU TO A FIST FIGHT!'' She says,the sellswords start chanting ''YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!'' And started to form a circle around the two ''IT WASN'T … [view original content]
Damon Ravencrest
After some hours of endless galloping,the group decided to stop. Damon then got off his horse ''SELLSWORDS! ARE YOU TIRE… moreD?'' He says ''NO! WE AREN'T!'' They say ''Then we just stopped for nothing'' Damon said,the sellswords laughed. ''You reallly are stupid'' Saya says to him ''And you don't have a name for yourself,i am a Ravencrest,while you'll never be someone'' He says,her eyes well up and she turns away from him ''Your words are sharper than swords'' She says ''I'll take it as a compliment'' ''I want to be paid,when you get to Winterfell'' She says ''Ok,ok,i'll pay you'' Damon says ''I never will'' He thinks,Saya then turns around to look at him,then she turns to the sellswords ''LET'S MAKE THIS WORTH! I SAY THAT DAMON HAS TO PROVE HIMSELF TO YOU!'' Saya said ''I CHALLENGE YOU TO A FIST FIGHT!'' She says,the sellswords start chanting ''YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!'' And started to form a circle around the two ''IT WASN'T … [view original content]
Damon Ravencrest
After some hours of endless galloping,the group decided to stop. Damon then got off his horse ''SELLSWORDS! ARE YOU TIRE… moreD?'' He says ''NO! WE AREN'T!'' They say ''Then we just stopped for nothing'' Damon said,the sellswords laughed. ''You reallly are stupid'' Saya says to him ''And you don't have a name for yourself,i am a Ravencrest,while you'll never be someone'' He says,her eyes well up and she turns away from him ''Your words are sharper than swords'' She says ''I'll take it as a compliment'' ''I want to be paid,when you get to Winterfell'' She says ''Ok,ok,i'll pay you'' Damon says ''I never will'' He thinks,Saya then turns around to look at him,then she turns to the sellswords ''LET'S MAKE THIS WORTH! I SAY THAT DAMON HAS TO PROVE HIMSELF TO YOU!'' Saya said ''I CHALLENGE YOU TO A FIST FIGHT!'' She says,the sellswords start chanting ''YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!'' And started to form a circle around the two ''IT WASN'T … [view original content]
Damon Ravencrest
After some hours of endless galloping,the group decided to stop. Damon then got off his horse ''SELLSWORDS! ARE YOU TIRE… moreD?'' He says ''NO! WE AREN'T!'' They say ''Then we just stopped for nothing'' Damon said,the sellswords laughed. ''You reallly are stupid'' Saya says to him ''And you don't have a name for yourself,i am a Ravencrest,while you'll never be someone'' He says,her eyes well up and she turns away from him ''Your words are sharper than swords'' She says ''I'll take it as a compliment'' ''I want to be paid,when you get to Winterfell'' She says ''Ok,ok,i'll pay you'' Damon says ''I never will'' He thinks,Saya then turns around to look at him,then she turns to the sellswords ''LET'S MAKE THIS WORTH! I SAY THAT DAMON HAS TO PROVE HIMSELF TO YOU!'' Saya said ''I CHALLENGE YOU TO A FIST FIGHT!'' She says,the sellswords start chanting ''YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!'' And started to form a circle around the two ''IT WASN'T … [view original content]
Damon Ravencrest
After some hours of endless galloping,the group decided to stop. Damon then got off his horse ''SELLSWORDS! ARE YOU TIRE… moreD?'' He says ''NO! WE AREN'T!'' They say ''Then we just stopped for nothing'' Damon said,the sellswords laughed. ''You reallly are stupid'' Saya says to him ''And you don't have a name for yourself,i am a Ravencrest,while you'll never be someone'' He says,her eyes well up and she turns away from him ''Your words are sharper than swords'' She says ''I'll take it as a compliment'' ''I want to be paid,when you get to Winterfell'' She says ''Ok,ok,i'll pay you'' Damon says ''I never will'' He thinks,Saya then turns around to look at him,then she turns to the sellswords ''LET'S MAKE THIS WORTH! I SAY THAT DAMON HAS TO PROVE HIMSELF TO YOU!'' Saya said ''I CHALLENGE YOU TO A FIST FIGHT!'' She says,the sellswords start chanting ''YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!'' And started to form a circle around the two ''IT WASN'T … [view original content]
Damon Ravencrest
After some hours of endless galloping,the group decided to stop. Damon then got off his horse ''SELLSWORDS! ARE YOU TIRE… moreD?'' He says ''NO! WE AREN'T!'' They say ''Then we just stopped for nothing'' Damon said,the sellswords laughed. ''You reallly are stupid'' Saya says to him ''And you don't have a name for yourself,i am a Ravencrest,while you'll never be someone'' He says,her eyes well up and she turns away from him ''Your words are sharper than swords'' She says ''I'll take it as a compliment'' ''I want to be paid,when you get to Winterfell'' She says ''Ok,ok,i'll pay you'' Damon says ''I never will'' He thinks,Saya then turns around to look at him,then she turns to the sellswords ''LET'S MAKE THIS WORTH! I SAY THAT DAMON HAS TO PROVE HIMSELF TO YOU!'' Saya said ''I CHALLENGE YOU TO A FIST FIGHT!'' She says,the sellswords start chanting ''YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!'' And started to form a circle around the two ''IT WASN'T … [view original content]
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jorah's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too truthful.'' Daenerys said,and exited the tent ''Go do what you want men,i will speak to the people of Meereen.'' Dany said,watching the two with a disappointed gaze. ''What now?'' Jorah said,lifting his arms up ''Come to my tent,we have a raven to send'' Hunter said,with an idea in mind ''I'll get the raven'' Jorah said and bolted out of the tent,Hunter then ran to his tent,not before taking a seal from Thorin's body,it was the Baratheon Stag. When he got to his tent Jorah was already there,he sat down on the table they were eating that morning. He started to write a letter
''There is still no available information regarding the plans of Daenerys Targaryen'' He figured he would've already learned his name and already told Joffrey ''However,i learned that the Khaleesi has some connections with House Martell of Dorne,which i know you are rival with. I advice you then to show the Martells the meaning of respect towards the King and the realm. They almost caught me so i escaped from them,i went to Braavos,be sure to send ravens there for further contacts.
You still have friends in Essos,my King.
Thorin Halfhand
He then closed the letter,put some sealing wax on it,and sealed it,with the fiery Stag of house Baratheon. Little did he know,that King Joffrey was now dead,and that letter could end up in bad hands. He put the letter in the raven's mouth,and made him fly. ''Now that we have settled this,we should go talk to Dany'' Jorah said,Hunter nodded. It was incredible how he thought of kicking his knee in full battle,now they were friends. ''Let's go then'' Jorah said and went to Dany's tent,Hunter followed him. While they were walking,Hunter thinks about Dany being on the throne. He didn't like her on many point of views: She was too cruel,too determined. She wouldn't make for a good queen ''Maybe Cersei is even better...'' Hunter thinks ''You seem thoughtful,is something bothering you?'' Jorah said,Hunter nodded ''Should Dany win the throne?'' Hunter asked ''Maybe'' Jorah said,Hunter knew he thought the same,but he was more loyal to her. ''She won't endure a day,in some time she will start having problems in Meereen,if you tell me.'' Hunter said,Jorah cocked his head to the side ''How can you know?'' He asks ''She probably will try to bend the people to her rule,but the people are free. And Dany deeply doesn't want that. She took the city only because it is helpful,not because of the people'' Hunter said,and Jorah shyly nodded. ''You're right too. I can't tell you're wrong.'' He says,and they get to Dany's tent. Hunter enters first ''Hi'' Dany said and smiled ''Hi Daenerys'' Hunter and Jorah said at the unison ''We sent a raven to King's Landing'' Hunter said,and Dany listened ''What did you say?'' She asked ''We created hostility between House Martell and House Lannister,said that the Martells have some connections with you.'' Dany's eyes widened ''Why did you say that? I have no connections with them,and besides,if they were to find out they will understand Thorin died.'' Dany said ''The Martells and the Lannisters always have been rivals since a distasteful act by Gregor Clegane,who killed Elia Martell'' Hunter said,and gave Dany a book of House Martell's history ''You can read this for details,and besides,the Lannisters will never ask if that's true to the Martells,they barely talk to each other.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys had a relieved look on her face ''I told them that I,Thorin,would be going to Braavos,that Daenerys Targaryen caught me writing.'' Dany's face tensed up ''What does this mean?'' Hunter gestured Jorah to get out of the tent,and so he did. Hunter took Dany's cheeks in his hands ''I am going to Braavos.'' Dany got away from him,and covered her face with her hands,then she turned to look at him ''Please don't do it!'' She said,a tear running down her cheek ''I have to,i already sent the raven,they never would have believed that Thorin wasn't discovered,he could've wrote to them before we killed him,when he was imprisoned.'' He said,Dany knew it was the right thing to do,but a part of her heart was Hunter,and a part of his Dany. They were tied together by a strong bond,maybe Friendship,or maybe something even more powerful,Love. ''I am lost without you.'' She said,and cried her tears in his chest,she was cruel with strangers,but she cared about the ones loyal to her. Hunter thought about things she had to endure in her still short life: Her betrothal to Khal Drogo at such a young age,her brother Viserys treating her bad,her whole family slaughtered in Robert's rebellion. He cried a tear of compassion,and caressed her shoulders ''I have to go,i'll be ok.'' He said,his voice cracking ''Promise me you won't die'' She says ''I will'' ''Your Queen pretends it'' She says,trying to be tough ''I am going to miss you,maybe i won't even see you again'' Hunter said,and Dany held back her tears ''You will,trust me. I will send my best soldiers with you.'' She says,wiping off her tears,her face turned back to normal. He could still see sadness in her eyes ''If you conquer the Iron Throne,i want you to name Jorah the Hand of the Queen'' Hunter says ''Just to pass it to me when i return'' He adds,he then runs a hand through her silver hair,and the two lock in a deep,farewell kiss. Hunter could feel the hot tears of Dany burning his cheek,he wishes to stay forever in her embrace,feel her body,and see her eyes,but now he will no more. He then gently caressed her cheek ''I'm going now,see that some soldiers come with me,and give me one of your best ships'' He says ''I will,Hunter Dawson'' She said,he slowly walked out of the tent,always looking at her,and when he got outside the tent,he struggled to turn around and go towards the pier. When he got there,tears were flowing on his face,but he quickly wiped them off. He felt ashamed. A soldier then got close to him ''Daenerys Targaryen said i have to take you to Braavos,i have soldiers with me'' He says,a sharp accent in his voice,and twenty soldiers walk towards him.'' Hunter then got on the ship ''But ser! Braavos is no city for sellswords! You have to go there alone! I will fill your ship with some spices and riches,and fine clothes. You could then pass off as a rich person,and have an easy life in Braavos!'' An elegant spicer told him. ''What if i go alone? They don't know Braavos,they've never been there,i was. It's a city full of bandits,either they will slaughter my soldiers or rob me of all of my goods. It's better to go alone...?'' He thought
[Take the soldiers to Braavos][Take the riches to Braavos][Go there only with the ship]
So guys! Enjoyed the chapter? I'm sure you'll tell me in the comments!
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT READ!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will be going on vacation for a week,i will be writing from my Ipad,there is nothing bad,there still will be one part a day,it may be shorter though,but i assure you it won't. Thank you for reading,it's important
Whose part would you like to see next?
[Mark's][Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's][Damon and Saya's][New character]
Hunter Dawson
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora… moreh's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too trut… [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora… moreh's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too trut… [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora… moreh's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too trut… [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora… moreh's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too trut… [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora… moreh's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too trut… [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora… moreh's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too trut… [view original content]
Hunter Dawson
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jora… moreh's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too trut… [view original content]
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You chose to [Stay Away from the castle and Sansa] And i can say that you made the right choice,will Sansa try and get close to Kieron again? Or Will Littlefinger keep her from doing this? I can say that Kieron will live,because if you would have chosen to become Lysa Arryn's guard Littlefinger would have killed her,and Kieron,with Philip's help
What would've happened if he asked to be Sansa's guard? Would it have been the same outcome?
Cool, thanks for explaining that!
It would've been almost the same as Lysa Arryn's decision,but he wouldn't be killed, he would've been sent to the wall
Now I feel really relieved I didn't choose any of the other decisions XD
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New chapter guys!
Thomas' POV
''Why are the wildlings attacking us?'' Kevin asked,terrified,looking at Castle Black ''They are planning to slaughter us all'' Thomas said,unsheathing his sword ''Let's go fight them!'' He said,starting to run towards Castle Black,Brandon and Kevin followed. Thomas' legs were still sore from running away from wights,but it wasn't going to stop him from killing wildlings. They ran until they reached Castle Black's gates,which were shut obviously,but there were no wildlings around them. ''WE ARE ALMOST THERE!'' Kevin said,but when they got to the door they didn't open ''IT'S US! OPEN UP!'' Brandon said,banging on the gates,but there seemed to be nobody in the castle,Brandon looked back and saw that a wildling army was coming ''THEY'LL KILL US! LET US IN AND WE WILL FIGHT!'' Brandon said,then the three decided to climb the walls,as the army was getting close ''BRANDON! CATCH ME!'' Kevin said,who slipped on his hand,and Brandon catched him,then threw him over the gates,the two were now climbing,when an arrow stuck into the wall,a couple centimeters away from Thomas' head ''ARE YOU OKAY?'' Brandon asks,throwing himself over the gates,Thomas does so too,and falls into the yard of castle black with Brandon and Kevin,all the brothers were hid in corners,to ambush them. They gestured sorry and the three nodded,then went to hide. As the wildlings' yells grew louder,and closer,Brandon,Kevin and Thomas were hugging their swords ''Hilda will shatter some heads tonight'' Kevin said,hugging his beloved two handed axe. All the crows were met with a rain of arrows,but luckily they were under their battlements,so they couldn't get them. They all then heard a loud thud,and heard the gates shattering under a giant's mace. The wildlings entered Castle Black and all the crows jumped out,sword ready,Brandon jumped out of his hiding spot and killed one wildling with his sword,slitting his throat,war bursted out in the castle,the three immediately lost each other and were fighting on their own, Thomas was fighting two wildling guys,one of them went for a slash,but he parried it and stuck the sword in his stomach,the other one took his chances and hit Thomas while he was taking his sword out of his friend's body,and hit him in the shoulder,his pauldrons softened the blow,but he got stunned and fell to the ground. The wildling then brought up his axe and made it fall on Thomas,he easily dodged it and got up,the wildling then slashed his axe at him once again,he ducked on the ground,and tripped him. The wildling fell to the ground,he was getting to his axe,but Thomas got to it first and tried to choke him with it,he headbutted Thomas and freed himself,but Thomas still had the axe in his hands,and brought it down on his back,killing him. Then he saw Jon Snow on the elevator of the wall,slowly getting to the ground,but then he felt a sharp pain in his back,and he felt an arrow stuck in him,he turned around and he saw a red haired female wildling,with a bow. He ran towards her but she shot another arrow at him,hitting him in the chest,he dropped to his knees and coughed up some blood,he saw the wildling smiling,almost as if she was enjoying his pain. She then cocked another arrow in her bow,but a crow took her down,he was clutching his chest,he already broke the arrow. He could only hear muffled screams and battle sounds,he got up and grabbed his sword,he walked towards the elevator,where he could see Kevin being overpowered by two wildlings,he got close to them and killed one of them,then Kevin easily freed himself and got up ''THOMAS! YOU'RE HURT!'' He said,Thomas then fell to the ground,all senses leaving him. The last words he could hear before passing out were Kevin's screams and pleads.
''THOMAS! WAKE UP! WE STILL HAVE SOME FIGHTING TO DO!'' Kevin shook Thomas' body,but he wasn't moving,Kevin felt a hand touch his shoulder ''YOU! WE NEED SOME MEN ON THE WALL! YOU CAN COME!'' Jon Snow said to Kevin ''Let's...Let's go then.'' Kevin said,but before going to the elevator,he dragged Thomas closer to the elevator,where he was a little bit more protected. He then got on the elevator and saw it go up. He sat down wondering if he would have survived the night,he survived wights,so,why couldn't he survive a simple wildling assault? When he got atop of the wall, he knew why. There were giants punching the wall,and just then,Jon Snow remembered ''WE CAN'T LET THEM DESTROY THE INNER GATE! GRENN! TAKE A FEW MEN AND HOLD IT!'' He said to Grenn,who was close to Kevin ''WE WILL!'' He said,and gestured to Kevin and a few other men to follow him. When they got to the inner gate,they put themselves behind the locked gate. They heard a giant break the door,and they saw him enter the small narrow corridor,which led to the gate they were behind. ''THE SEVEN SAVE US!'' A terrified man said ''THE GODS AREN'T DOWN HERE! JUST US'' Grenn said,the giant was now starting to run towards the gate "Night gathers, and now my watch begins. It shall not end until my death. I shall take no wife, hold no lands, father no children. I shall wear no crowns and win no glory. I shall live and die at my post.'' The giant was now picking up his pace,Kevin started to chant alongside his brothers '' I am the sword in the darkness. I am the watcher on the walls. I AM THE SHIELD THAT GUARDS THE REALMS OF MEN!. I PLEDGE MY LIFE AND HONOR TO THE NIGHT'S WATCH, FOR THIS NIGHT AND ALL THE NIGHTS TO COME!." Kevin finished his vows,and the giant easily ran through the gate,Kevin aimed and threw Hilda to his head,and hit him spot on,the last thing he saw before getting crushed by the Giant was the other brothers' desperate screams of pain.
The wildling forces were slaughtering all the crows,Brandon was fighting with some wildling soldiers when a boy took him away from the battle ''You need to help me find some arrows'' He said,Brandon nodded,and found a quiver in the distance,he took it and went to the boy,who thanked him and cocked an arrow,hitting a wildling female on the back. He saw Jon Snow teary eyed,that made him suspicious,but he decided to get in the fray once again,and saw that wildlings were pouring out of every corner of Castle Black,he tossed his sword to the ground,and dropped to his knees. He watched in slow motion as a lot of crows were being slaughtered under the axes and swords of the wildlings. He then was knocked into reality as a wildling soldiers grabbed him from his neck and slammed his head repeatedly in a piece of wood that was nearby,he then played dead,and the wildling let him go. He then decided to look for his friends,he saw Kevin go on the wall,but he didn't see Thomas...
[Go to the elevator and save Thomas] [Go up the elevator and save Kevin]
So guys,this part is over,i hope you liked it! Actually tell me if you did in the comments! What will happen? Who will live and die,at the wall? We will find out in the next part.
Whose part you want to see next?
[Kieron's,Jarger's and Philip's] [Hunter's] [Damon and Saya's] [Mark's] [NEW CHARACTER]
I assure you one thing: Sansa won't disappear from the story.
Why? Please explain
[Go to the elevator and save Thomas] and [Damon and Saya's] Loved this chapter a lot, I liked the way you describe the attack on Castle Black! Kevin saying his vows during the fight was extremely epic! Keep it up, and know that a lot people appreciate your work!
Haha,thank you. I love how you guys don't vote for your own character's chapter but you actually vote the ones we haven't seen in a long time. About Kevin's scene,i remembered Grenn saying it in the show,still another ''cameo'' or appearance or honorable mention. Working big time to write the chapters well.
[Go up the elevator and save Kevin.] and [Damon and Saya's.]
[Go up the elevator and save Thomas] and [Damon and Saya's]
[Go up the elevator and save Thomas] [Damon and Saya's]
[Go to the elevator and save Thomas] [Damon and Saya's]
Damon Ravencrest
After some hours of endless galloping,the group decided to stop. Damon then got off his horse ''SELLSWORDS! ARE YOU TIRED?'' He says ''NO! WE AREN'T!'' They say ''Then we just stopped for nothing'' Damon said,the sellswords laughed. ''You reallly are stupid'' Saya says to him ''And you don't have a name for yourself,i am a Ravencrest,while you'll never be someone'' He says,her eyes well up and she turns away from him ''Your words are sharper than swords'' She says ''I'll take it as a compliment'' ''I want to be paid,when you get to Winterfell'' She says ''Ok,ok,i'll pay you'' Damon says ''I never will'' He thinks,Saya then turns around to look at him,then she turns to the sellswords ''LET'S MAKE THIS WORTH! I SAY THAT DAMON HAS TO PROVE HIMSELF TO YOU!'' Saya said ''I CHALLENGE YOU TO A FIST FIGHT!'' She says,the sellswords start chanting ''YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!'' And started to form a circle around the two ''IT WASN'T SUPPOSED TO GET TO THIS POINT!'' Harold says,while getting pushed by some sellswords.Saya then throws some sand on Damon's eyes ''I wasn't ready!'' He said,but it was too late,sand was stinging in his eyes,and Saya already punched him to the ground,she then got on top of him ''How about i take you to King's Landing instead? You'll make a fine whore!'' Damon says,taunting her,but she landed a punch on his nose,smashing it,she then continued to pummel him until he gave up ''GET OFF OF ME!'' He says,and Saya does so. She gets up and all the sellswords go cheering towards her,Damon is fuming,he gets up and goes to his friend,Harold ''She now has earned their respect,what can i do now?!'' He says ''I am afraid nothing,my friend'' He says,and the two get on their horses ''LET'S GO MEN!'' Damon says ''THEY'LL GO WHENEVER I TELL THEM TO!'' Saya says,a challenging smile on her face,Damon grips his horse's reins harder and speeds away from Saya and his men alongside Harold ''SHE NOW HAS EARNED THEIR RESPECT! UNBELIEVABLE!'' He says again ''Just don't worry about it man,remember that she is still one of your sellswords.'' Harold says ''One day i'll have my fucking house,and then she will be working for me!'' He says,and Saya hears ''What's that?'' She says,but Damon doesn't pay attention to her,they arrive to a sacked city,and they decide to ask a red headed woman the name of it ''You are at Smithon,the seat of House Logan,Lord Logan could be Azor Ahai and you have no right to be here.'' She says,and coldly kicks away Damon,who kicks a nearby rock,stubbing his toe ''FUCK!'' He screams in pain ''Haha! I hope that what you don't have in Strength,you have in intelligence.'' Saya says and laughs ''One day,i'll form House Ravencrest,and maybe you could work for me!'' He says ''I like the sound of that'' Saya says,then gets on her horse ''Should we go?'' She says ''Yes.'' Damon gets on his horse,and Harold on his,but before he does that,he shooks his head in disappointment at Saya ''Do that again and i'll break that pretty neck of yours'' She says,and taunts him. Harold then speeds away with Damon ''Now i can't stand her! What have you got in mind? Kick her out of the group?'' He says ''We could make a truce,or something!'' Damon says ''You should be start to be look for your future House's allies,Damon'' Harold says,and Damon's face lightens up ''We are close to the Twins,maybe Walder Frey can be a precious ally,he always looks for someone to marry their daughters!'' Damon says,slightly excited at the idea of having a so powerful ally ''Maybe,but Robb Stark died in his own wedding'' Harold said ''Robb Stark married a volantene,or lysene,i don't remember,woman,and not one of Walder Frey's daughters. He deserved to die,in fact he let Edmure marry her daughter,and he still lives.'' Damon says,and Harold can't do nothing but agree with him: Everything he said was logical and right,he would make for a fine Lord. ''You're right! So it's settled then?'' He says,and they arrive at a small village,they get off their horses. Saya comes closer to Damon ''Let's go look for something in this small village! Maybe it could become House Ravencrest's.'' She says,smiling at him,he surprisingly smiled at her ''You are right,let's go check it out.'' They entered the village on foot. The smallfolk was looking at the group of sellswords ''WELL MET,SMALLFOLK OF THIS VILLAGE! I NEED YOU TO TELL ME WHO IS IT'S OWNER,IT WILL EVENTUALLY BECOME HOUSE RAVENCREST'S LANDS!'' Damon says ''YOU CAN'T DO THAT!'' The blonde man from the pub spoke up ''Why does everybody make me feel like a chicken?'' Damon thinks ''AND WHO ARE YOU,MY FELLOW PEASANT?'' Damon said,with a prideful voice ''I'M THE ONE YOUR GIRL FOUGHT IN A PUB!'' He said,pointing at Saya ''I'M GRYFF WHITEHILL,A FIERCE MEMBER OF HOUSE WHITEHILL,AND YOU WILL HAND OVER THE GIRL TO ME! OR YOU'LL SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES!'' He said,the smallfolk take out their weapons: Shortswords,dirks,daggers,one even had an Arakh,which made Damon chuckle ''Listen to him,Damon,and hand me over to him'' Saya says,a selfless tone in her voice,a tone Damon never heard ''Why? I won't give you up,even though you are a little bit prideful...'' Damon sarcastically says ''I don't want to bring trouble to you,trust me,Damon,i will be fine'' She says,gripping his hand ''They are smallfolk,they aren't trained! And besides,do you even have an idea of what that guy will do to you?!'' He says,but she lets go of his hand ''GRYFF!'' She says...Damon could still stop her....
[Stop Saya] [Let Saya go]
End of the part! Did you like it? Actually,tell me that in the comments! How will it end? Will House Ravencrest be created? We will find out,maybe,in the next part! And don't hesitate to ask me what the less popular choice would have caused (MyMotherInsisted is a good example Wink Wink)
Whose part would you like to see next?
[Kieron's Jarger's and Philip's] [Mark's] [Hunter's] [Damon and Saya's]
[Stop Saya] Fuck Gryff
[Damon and Saya's]
[Let Saya go] [Damon and Saya's]
Curious of the output.
[Stop Saya]
[Hunter's]
Indeed fuck him,maybe an alliance with house Logan?
I'm really enjoying this.
[Let Saya go] [Kieron's Jarger's and Philip's]
Thank you!
Is it bad I thought you said fuck him as in sexytimes fuck Gryff XDDDD [Stop Saya] [Hunter's]
Very bad. SER ILYN,BRING ME HIS HEAD!
[Let Saya Go] and [Hunter's]
[Stop Saya] and [Damon and Saya's]
[Stop Saya] [Hunter's]
Hunter Dawson
''I'm sorry'' Hunter told Thorin,and gave his sword to Jorah ''NO! PLEASE I WILL-'' His begging was interrupted by ser Jorah's swift cut which decapitated him. Daenerys didn't even flinch ''Was he working for someone?'' She asked ''He cleaned Robert Baratheon's rooms,and it seems like he chose him to kill you.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys felt relieved ''My enemies will all fall,and i will win the Iron Throne'' She said ''The thing is,you don't make your enemies fall,WE do'' Hunter said,pointing at himself and Jorah,Daenerys then nodded ''You will be paid well,when we will conquer the Throne.'' She said,a crazy smile on her face ''Just remember that you will play fair,and you won't kill nobody who didn't do any wrong to you.'' Hunter says ''Says who?'' Daenerys challenges him ''Says me.And i am the most cunning man in the room,apart from Jorah'' Hunter said,Jorah nodded ''It seems you're the opposite of cunning,you are too truthful.'' Daenerys said,and exited the tent ''Go do what you want men,i will speak to the people of Meereen.'' Dany said,watching the two with a disappointed gaze. ''What now?'' Jorah said,lifting his arms up ''Come to my tent,we have a raven to send'' Hunter said,with an idea in mind ''I'll get the raven'' Jorah said and bolted out of the tent,Hunter then ran to his tent,not before taking a seal from Thorin's body,it was the Baratheon Stag. When he got to his tent Jorah was already there,he sat down on the table they were eating that morning. He started to write a letter
''There is still no available information regarding the plans of Daenerys Targaryen'' He figured he would've already learned his name and already told Joffrey ''However,i learned that the Khaleesi has some connections with House Martell of Dorne,which i know you are rival with. I advice you then to show the Martells the meaning of respect towards the King and the realm. They almost caught me so i escaped from them,i went to Braavos,be sure to send ravens there for further contacts.
You still have friends in Essos,my King.
Thorin Halfhand
He then closed the letter,put some sealing wax on it,and sealed it,with the fiery Stag of house Baratheon. Little did he know,that King Joffrey was now dead,and that letter could end up in bad hands. He put the letter in the raven's mouth,and made him fly. ''Now that we have settled this,we should go talk to Dany'' Jorah said,Hunter nodded. It was incredible how he thought of kicking his knee in full battle,now they were friends. ''Let's go then'' Jorah said and went to Dany's tent,Hunter followed him. While they were walking,Hunter thinks about Dany being on the throne. He didn't like her on many point of views: She was too cruel,too determined. She wouldn't make for a good queen ''Maybe Cersei is even better...'' Hunter thinks ''You seem thoughtful,is something bothering you?'' Jorah said,Hunter nodded ''Should Dany win the throne?'' Hunter asked ''Maybe'' Jorah said,Hunter knew he thought the same,but he was more loyal to her. ''She won't endure a day,in some time she will start having problems in Meereen,if you tell me.'' Hunter said,Jorah cocked his head to the side ''How can you know?'' He asks ''She probably will try to bend the people to her rule,but the people are free. And Dany deeply doesn't want that. She took the city only because it is helpful,not because of the people'' Hunter said,and Jorah shyly nodded. ''You're right too. I can't tell you're wrong.'' He says,and they get to Dany's tent. Hunter enters first ''Hi'' Dany said and smiled ''Hi Daenerys'' Hunter and Jorah said at the unison ''We sent a raven to King's Landing'' Hunter said,and Dany listened ''What did you say?'' She asked ''We created hostility between House Martell and House Lannister,said that the Martells have some connections with you.'' Dany's eyes widened ''Why did you say that? I have no connections with them,and besides,if they were to find out they will understand Thorin died.'' Dany said ''The Martells and the Lannisters always have been rivals since a distasteful act by Gregor Clegane,who killed Elia Martell'' Hunter said,and gave Dany a book of House Martell's history ''You can read this for details,and besides,the Lannisters will never ask if that's true to the Martells,they barely talk to each other.'' Hunter said,and Daenerys had a relieved look on her face ''I told them that I,Thorin,would be going to Braavos,that Daenerys Targaryen caught me writing.'' Dany's face tensed up ''What does this mean?'' Hunter gestured Jorah to get out of the tent,and so he did. Hunter took Dany's cheeks in his hands ''I am going to Braavos.'' Dany got away from him,and covered her face with her hands,then she turned to look at him ''Please don't do it!'' She said,a tear running down her cheek ''I have to,i already sent the raven,they never would have believed that Thorin wasn't discovered,he could've wrote to them before we killed him,when he was imprisoned.'' He said,Dany knew it was the right thing to do,but a part of her heart was Hunter,and a part of his Dany. They were tied together by a strong bond,maybe Friendship,or maybe something even more powerful,Love. ''I am lost without you.'' She said,and cried her tears in his chest,she was cruel with strangers,but she cared about the ones loyal to her. Hunter thought about things she had to endure in her still short life: Her betrothal to Khal Drogo at such a young age,her brother Viserys treating her bad,her whole family slaughtered in Robert's rebellion. He cried a tear of compassion,and caressed her shoulders ''I have to go,i'll be ok.'' He said,his voice cracking ''Promise me you won't die'' She says ''I will'' ''Your Queen pretends it'' She says,trying to be tough ''I am going to miss you,maybe i won't even see you again'' Hunter said,and Dany held back her tears ''You will,trust me. I will send my best soldiers with you.'' She says,wiping off her tears,her face turned back to normal. He could still see sadness in her eyes ''If you conquer the Iron Throne,i want you to name Jorah the Hand of the Queen'' Hunter says ''Just to pass it to me when i return'' He adds,he then runs a hand through her silver hair,and the two lock in a deep,farewell kiss. Hunter could feel the hot tears of Dany burning his cheek,he wishes to stay forever in her embrace,feel her body,and see her eyes,but now he will no more. He then gently caressed her cheek ''I'm going now,see that some soldiers come with me,and give me one of your best ships'' He says ''I will,Hunter Dawson'' She said,he slowly walked out of the tent,always looking at her,and when he got outside the tent,he struggled to turn around and go towards the pier. When he got there,tears were flowing on his face,but he quickly wiped them off. He felt ashamed. A soldier then got close to him ''Daenerys Targaryen said i have to take you to Braavos,i have soldiers with me'' He says,a sharp accent in his voice,and twenty soldiers walk towards him.'' Hunter then got on the ship ''But ser! Braavos is no city for sellswords! You have to go there alone! I will fill your ship with some spices and riches,and fine clothes. You could then pass off as a rich person,and have an easy life in Braavos!'' An elegant spicer told him. ''What if i go alone? They don't know Braavos,they've never been there,i was. It's a city full of bandits,either they will slaughter my soldiers or rob me of all of my goods. It's better to go alone...?'' He thought
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