Hi guys! New chapter!
Megan Tuttle
"Megan!" Duncan shouted to Megan,who sighed and turned to him "What is it father?" She said "I need… more you to train some recruits,do me this favor" Duncan said with pleading eyes,she sighed again and turned to the group of recruits "Yes,father" She groaned. She still was angry with him for sending her cousin,Gared on the wall "Let's start with some sparring,as Ser Royland teached you the basics!" Megan said,unsheathing her scimitar. "I don't fight with women! I would beat you in some seconds!" A prideful boy said,Megan walked up to him and punched him in the nose,then he took his arm and tripped him to the ground "This is the first one to lose!" Megan said,and started prancing around him,confusing him. He got up and tried to hit her,she parried with her sword and hit his face with the hilt of her sword,then she kicked him on the ground and held up her scimitar at his neck ""You're dead!" She said with pri… [view original content]
Hi guys! New chapter!
Megan Tuttle
"Megan!" Duncan shouted to Megan,who sighed and turned to him "What is it father?" She said "I need… more you to train some recruits,do me this favor" Duncan said with pleading eyes,she sighed again and turned to the group of recruits "Yes,father" She groaned. She still was angry with him for sending her cousin,Gared on the wall "Let's start with some sparring,as Ser Royland teached you the basics!" Megan said,unsheathing her scimitar. "I don't fight with women! I would beat you in some seconds!" A prideful boy said,Megan walked up to him and punched him in the nose,then he took his arm and tripped him to the ground "This is the first one to lose!" Megan said,and started prancing around him,confusing him. He got up and tried to hit her,she parried with her sword and hit his face with the hilt of her sword,then she kicked him on the ground and held up her scimitar at his neck ""You're dead!" She said with pri… [view original content]
[Work as a spy in House Whitehill] and [Hunter's] Love the idea that Duncan is a father. I'm really curious how this book will later play out. In my play through I had Duncan be my traitor, and I can only imagine Megan finding out about him. It'd be even worse if she found out as the spy for the Whitehills. Of course Ser Royland could be the traitor too, who knows?
Hi guys! New chapter!
Megan Tuttle
"Megan!" Duncan shouted to Megan,who sighed and turned to him "What is it father?" She said "I need… more you to train some recruits,do me this favor" Duncan said with pleading eyes,she sighed again and turned to the group of recruits "Yes,father" She groaned. She still was angry with him for sending her cousin,Gared on the wall "Let's start with some sparring,as Ser Royland teached you the basics!" Megan said,unsheathing her scimitar. "I don't fight with women! I would beat you in some seconds!" A prideful boy said,Megan walked up to him and punched him in the nose,then he took his arm and tripped him to the ground "This is the first one to lose!" Megan said,and started prancing around him,confusing him. He got up and tried to hit her,she parried with her sword and hit his face with the hilt of her sword,then she kicked him on the ground and held up her scimitar at his neck ""You're dead!" She said with pri… [view original content]
Hi guys! New chapter!
Megan Tuttle
"Megan!" Duncan shouted to Megan,who sighed and turned to him "What is it father?" She said "I need… more you to train some recruits,do me this favor" Duncan said with pleading eyes,she sighed again and turned to the group of recruits "Yes,father" She groaned. She still was angry with him for sending her cousin,Gared on the wall "Let's start with some sparring,as Ser Royland teached you the basics!" Megan said,unsheathing her scimitar. "I don't fight with women! I would beat you in some seconds!" A prideful boy said,Megan walked up to him and punched him in the nose,then he took his arm and tripped him to the ground "This is the first one to lose!" Megan said,and started prancing around him,confusing him. He got up and tried to hit her,she parried with her sword and hit his face with the hilt of her sword,then she kicked him on the ground and held up her scimitar at his neck ""You're dead!" She said with pri… [view original content]
Hi guys! New chapter!
Megan Tuttle
"Megan!" Duncan shouted to Megan,who sighed and turned to him "What is it father?" She said "I need… more you to train some recruits,do me this favor" Duncan said with pleading eyes,she sighed again and turned to the group of recruits "Yes,father" She groaned. She still was angry with him for sending her cousin,Gared on the wall "Let's start with some sparring,as Ser Royland teached you the basics!" Megan said,unsheathing her scimitar. "I don't fight with women! I would beat you in some seconds!" A prideful boy said,Megan walked up to him and punched him in the nose,then he took his arm and tripped him to the ground "This is the first one to lose!" Megan said,and started prancing around him,confusing him. He got up and tried to hit her,she parried with her sword and hit his face with the hilt of her sword,then she kicked him on the ground and held up her scimitar at his neck ""You're dead!" She said with pri… [view original content]
Hi guys! New chapter!
Megan Tuttle
"Megan!" Duncan shouted to Megan,who sighed and turned to him "What is it father?" She said "I need… more you to train some recruits,do me this favor" Duncan said with pleading eyes,she sighed again and turned to the group of recruits "Yes,father" She groaned. She still was angry with him for sending her cousin,Gared on the wall "Let's start with some sparring,as Ser Royland teached you the basics!" Megan said,unsheathing her scimitar. "I don't fight with women! I would beat you in some seconds!" A prideful boy said,Megan walked up to him and punched him in the nose,then he took his arm and tripped him to the ground "This is the first one to lose!" Megan said,and started prancing around him,confusing him. He got up and tried to hit her,she parried with her sword and hit his face with the hilt of her sword,then she kicked him on the ground and held up her scimitar at his neck ""You're dead!" She said with pri… [view original content]
I want to dedicate this long chapter to FlareBattle,one of my fellow readers and followers!
Damon Ravencrest
''I will marry one of your many daughters, Lord Walder'' Damon said and knelt before him,Saya briefly smiled ''This is settles it then,come with me'' Walder said,and Damon followed him into the Twins. Walder takes Damon to a hall where all of his daughters stood. ''There are my daughters,Walda,Derwa,Waldra and Shirei,though she hasn't flowered yet'' He listed the names of his daughters,who bowed as their name was spoken. Damon noticed he didn't introduce a ginger haired girl ''Who is she?'' Damon asked Walder Frey ''Ah,she is my granddaughter...Wertha? Walra? Waldina?'' He said struggling with his memory ''I'm Merry'' The girl spoke,smiling to Damon ''Fine.'' Walder said ''You can marry her if you want,for all i care'' Walder said to Damon,who noticed those words hurt Merry. They were all ugly,but in Damon's eyes Merry was better than everyone else,or less worse. ''She will be my betrothed.'' Damon says to Walder and looks at Merry,whose eyes light up. ''You got quite the nose'' He thought,looking at Merry ''Very well then. The wedding will be in three days,you will now get to your castle,which is in the Riverlands,close to the Vale'' Walder said and pointed his finger on a dusty old map ''And you will get ready to work for me'' He said,and Merry looked at Damon,who was now exiting the castle with Walder. When he stepped out of the castle,Harold almost instantly ran towards Damon,confusing him with an endless stream of questions ''How did it go? When will the wedding be? Do you have a castle now?'' Damon calmed him down ''We have a castle,i will call it Ravenrath,it's in the Riverlands,we will now go there,i am to be married in three days.'' He answered his questions,Saya looked at him and smiled ''You did it,now i will go to seek another job.'' She said,and hugged Damon ''Be safe okay?'' He said to her,she nodded and got on her horse,she then galloped away,to seek another task. ''It's her life,she will be happy'' He thought,reassuring himself,in fact he was right. Saya's face was relaxed and well,like she had completed another task. Damon then turned to the sellswords and gave them his remaining gold ''Go find another job'' They nodded and entered one of the many inns nearby,to search a job. Harold and Damon then got on their horses and galloped to the Riverlands,in hope to find a good castle.
After a day of galloping,Harold and Damon finally reached the Riverlands,tired and thirsty they stopped to a inn to drink something to soothe their nerves. ''Will the castle be good?'' Damon asked Harold ''It's hard to say,but i think the castle will be more than decent'' Harold always had a good sixth sense,this gave Damon a lot of hope. ''Let's go'' Damon said,they paid for their drinks and they got on their horses again,a hour later they reached the destination,and they found a great castle. It had four stone towers,one on each corner of the walls,it contained a vast village in it,at least three times Winterfell's. There were a lot of smallfolk and soldiers,and the castle was at the back of the village,it had three floors. Damon was flabbergastered ''This isn't the right one,maybe it's smaller.'' He said,but a guard stopped him ''Hey! Are you Damon Ravencrest?'' The guard asked,Damon nodded ''Walder Frey ordered me to tell you that this castle is now officially yours'' The guard says,Damon is euphoric ''THIS CASTLE IS TOO MUCH!!'' He screamed,and the guard shared his joy ''It has a lot of people in it too! You'll never feel alone that is for sure!'' He said ''I'm Tyren,i'm the leader of the soldiers. I train them every day at their barracks' yard.'' He said,Damon nodded ''Enter your castle my lord!'' He said,and Damon entered Ravenrath. When he got off his horse,the smallfolk cheered for him ''THIS IS OUR NEW LORD!'' A woman said ''He seems smart!'' A man said ''He is quite handsome too!'' A young lady said,Damon then bowed to his smallfolk and they were surprised. A lord never bows to his people,but Damon just did. He walked to his castle,waving to everyone he met and then he waved at all the smallfolk,alongside Harold,before entering the castle. When he entered he saw a great table at the center of the room,goblets and platters sitting on it ''This will be the dining room!'' Harold said with euphorism ''It looks like it!'' Damon says,and walks up the stairs to the first floor. The first floor contained a few rooms containing shelves filled with books,he then saw a few musicians ''We were waiting for you my lord! Walder Frey warned us of your coming! I am Rheagar,not the Mad King's son,but a humble minstrel looking forward to satisfy you with my best songs!'' He says,he was carrying his lute,the two friends behind him waved at Damon ''These are my friends,York and Yark. They will help me in my songs!'' He says and bows to Damon ''If it please your lordship i would start singing,it's my favourite hobby'' He said ''Go ahead minstrel!'' Damon encouraged him,and he started singing a ballad about the battle of the Trident. Damon smiled and headed to the second floor. He saw that his rooms were here,and a few other dormitories,for the guests. He saw the kitchen too,he peeked in and the cooks were cooking rabbit,when they saw Damon they tipped their hat to him and cheered him. He then headed to the third floor,it was almost fully dedicated to the maester's studies. ''Lord Ravencrest! I am Maester Simon,your new master,i can treat wounds,and get you out of dangerous positions. I even studied the making of Wildfire,by order of the Queen Regent Cersei Lannister,so i could try and make some jars.'' He smiled,and shook Damon's hand,Damon saw the chains on his neck ''You are really young for a maester!'' Damon said surprised ''I am a fresher mind.'' He said,smiling. Damon knew that wildfire could come in handy ''You'll be my counsellor'' He said to the maester,and he smiled ''Sure,he will be too.'' He pointed to Harold ''It's better if you have more.'' He said. Damon then went to his chamber and saw a few elegant dresses on his bed,as well as some heavy armor. He dressed comfortably with some light padded armor ''Harold,go in town and speak to the smallfolk,ask them what they think of their new lord,if they are happy,ensure that everyone is happy and if they're not,we will solve their problems. Maester,you ensure that everyone is happy in the castle. Minstrels and cooks.'' He says and then the two get out of his room. He then lays down on his bed to sleep.
After three days,Damon got comfortable around his castle,the smallfolk got to know him better,and he warned them of Lady Ravencrest's coming. Damon finished dressing himself,he wore an elegant dress. Harold and the Maester entered his room ''Everyone is happy,the smallfolk and the people in your castle'' The two said ''The minstrel in particular confessed me his passion for singing.'' Maester Simon said and they laughed ''It's getting late,Damon,we should go.'' Harold said to Damon,he nodded and they walked out of the castle and they arrived to the gates. The two got on their horses ''Make sure nothing happens when i'm gone'' Damon says to Simon,he nods. The two then starts to gallop,with all of House Ravencrest's soldiers to their back,who were already looking forward to drink and eat. It was evening when they arrived at the Twins and the soldiers almost instantly went to the tent camps outside the Twins,looking forward to feast. Damon got off his horse and saw that Walder Frey was waiting for him outside the Twins. He walked up to him ''Well met,Damon'' Walder said,and shook his hand. He took him inside the Twins,to the dining room,which was filled with frey soldiers,Harold was in the room too. Damon met Merry's gaze,and smiled. She wasn't the prettiest of the girls,but she had something special about her,something that caught Damon's attention. Damon's gaze was fixated on hers throughout the whole wedding ceremony,and when it was over,he kissed her. The room erupted in cheers,everyone was happy and toasting to House Ravencrest. A great crowd then carried Merry and Damon to a chamber with a big bed. ''The bedding ceremony!'' Damon thought,and laughed. When the crowd left the room,he started to caress Merry's face ''Are you from essos? You look like you are'' She says ''I am'' He confirms,she smiles to him,he takes her hand but she whimpers,he then sees a cut on her hand ''What happened?'' Damon asked ''I was there,when Robb Stark got killed. There were arrows flying everywhere,Robb's wife was on the ground,bleeding from the belly. They shot at Robb and he fell to the ground,he got up but Roose Bolton stabbed him to death. Catelyn Stark killed Joyeuse,i was right next to her. I could've been the one,you know?'' Damon had a sad expression ''I'm sorry you had to see that'' She smiles ''It doesn't matter,now i am Lady Ravencrest.'' She says and kisses Damon. They start undressing each other and they consume their marriage. The day after Damon wakes up to see that Merry was gone. He looked for her but she couldn't find her. He went to Walder Frey,who was eating his breakfast at his great table ''Do you know where Merry is?'' He asked him ''She is already at your castle...how did you name it?'' Walder asks ''Ravenrath'' Walder gasps ''Ravenrath,i'll remember it for sure'' He says and laughs ''I will be going now.'' He says and heads outside,his soldiers were all disappeared ''The soldiers are already at Ravencrast too!'' Walder shouts from inside ''RAVENRATH! It's called Ravenrath!'' Damon said ''Fine.'' He heard Walder answer. He then gets on his horse and returns to Ravenrath. When he arrives,he is greeted by Merry. ''This castle is really great! I met everyone here and they are really friendly!'' Merry says ''I'm glad you like your new home!'' Damon says euphoric ''It's better than the Twins!'' She said,and Damon smiled,he entered the gates and saw Maester Simon ''My lord! A letter arrived!'' He said,and gave the letter to Damon,he broke the seal quickly and read the letter
''I think House Ravencrest could be a great ally to House Logan,therefore i accept your offer of alliance,come to Smithon as soon as you can,the location's marked on the map.''
Mark Logan
Damon then jumped from excitement. He could go there right now ''There's another thing,my lord'' Simon says ''What is it?'' Damon asks ''A messenger came,he said Ramsay Bolton wants to see you. What should i tell him?''
[Accept Ramsay's invite][Turn Down Ramsay's invite,go to Smithon instead]
So guys! This part is over! Did you like it or not? What did you think about it? Please tell me in the comments!
I am going to do the Eyrie part tomorrow,so i am going to give you this choice,do you want...
[Jarger to have the biggest role in the coming part][Kieron to have the biggest role in the coming part][Sansa's POV]
So, I just started reading this. I have to say, your writing is very good. You have skill. I really like this story and am eager to see where it goes. I may submit a character later if I remember.
Hi guys! New chapter!
I want to dedicate this long chapter to FlareBattle,one of my fellow readers and followers!
Damon Ravencrest
… more''I will marry one of your many daughters, Lord Walder'' Damon said and knelt before him,Saya briefly smiled ''This is settles it then,come with me'' Walder said,and Damon followed him into the Twins. Walder takes Damon to a hall where all of his daughters stood. ''There are my daughters,Walda,Derwa,Waldra and Shirei,though she hasn't flowered yet'' He listed the names of his daughters,who bowed as their name was spoken. Damon noticed he didn't introduce a ginger haired girl ''Who is she?'' Damon asked Walder Frey ''Ah,she is my granddaughter...Wertha? Walra? Waldina?'' He said struggling with his memory ''I'm Merry'' The girl spoke,smiling to Damon ''Fine.'' Walder said ''You can marry her if you want,for all i care'' Walder said to Damon,who noticed those words hurt Merry. They were all ugly,but in Damo… [view original content]
Thank you man! To participate more in this book you can choose your favourite choice in the last chapter! And choose who will have the biggest role in the next part. The characters are many,so it can be confusing,but if you catch up with the last chapters i made about the Eyrie or every character's,you'll know the storyline. Thank you a lot for your support!
So, I just started reading this. I have to say, your writing is very good. You have skill. I really like this story and am eager to see where it goes. I may submit a character later if I remember.
[Accept Ramsay's invite] and [Jarger to have the biggest role in the coming part] Wow thanks! Its a great chapter! Its neat to now have the perspective of two lords. That is awesome!
Hi guys! New chapter!
I want to dedicate this long chapter to FlareBattle,one of my fellow readers and followers!
Damon Ravencrest
… more''I will marry one of your many daughters, Lord Walder'' Damon said and knelt before him,Saya briefly smiled ''This is settles it then,come with me'' Walder said,and Damon followed him into the Twins. Walder takes Damon to a hall where all of his daughters stood. ''There are my daughters,Walda,Derwa,Waldra and Shirei,though she hasn't flowered yet'' He listed the names of his daughters,who bowed as their name was spoken. Damon noticed he didn't introduce a ginger haired girl ''Who is she?'' Damon asked Walder Frey ''Ah,she is my granddaughter...Wertha? Walra? Waldina?'' He said struggling with his memory ''I'm Merry'' The girl spoke,smiling to Damon ''Fine.'' Walder said ''You can marry her if you want,for all i care'' Walder said to Damon,who noticed those words hurt Merry. They were all ugly,but in Damo… [view original content]
Hi guys! New chapter!
I want to dedicate this long chapter to FlareBattle,one of my fellow readers and followers!
Damon Ravencrest
… more''I will marry one of your many daughters, Lord Walder'' Damon said and knelt before him,Saya briefly smiled ''This is settles it then,come with me'' Walder said,and Damon followed him into the Twins. Walder takes Damon to a hall where all of his daughters stood. ''There are my daughters,Walda,Derwa,Waldra and Shirei,though she hasn't flowered yet'' He listed the names of his daughters,who bowed as their name was spoken. Damon noticed he didn't introduce a ginger haired girl ''Who is she?'' Damon asked Walder Frey ''Ah,she is my granddaughter...Wertha? Walra? Waldina?'' He said struggling with his memory ''I'm Merry'' The girl spoke,smiling to Damon ''Fine.'' Walder said ''You can marry her if you want,for all i care'' Walder said to Damon,who noticed those words hurt Merry. They were all ugly,but in Damo… [view original content]
[Accept Ramsay's invite] and [Jarger to have the biggest role in the coming part] Wow thanks! Its a great chapter! Its neat to now have the perspective of two lords. That is awesome!
Jarger was talking with Gylbert when he saw Sansa exiting the castle with red,puffy eyes. He ran towards her ''Sansa,is something the matter?'' He asks her,but she shakes her head ''No,nothing'' She says,and he cocks his eyebrow ''Something must have happened'' He thought ''Are you sure?'' He asks her,and she nods,reassuring him. He then wiped some tears that were on her face away,and he went over to Gylbert ''What happened?'' Gylbert asked Jarger,who shrugged ''Lady Sansa must be sad,her eyes were red from crying.'' Jarger then took his sword out and swung it in the air ''It's a pity that girls like her are thrown in a world like this. She is too kind and pure for this world,she will soon find out.'' Jarger said,hitting a straw mannequin and waving his sword around. ''It depends on who will she marry'' Gylbert said ''Yes,she will learn how to be cunning.'' Jarger said ''Why is she here anyway?'' Gylbert asked Jarger ''She was at King's Landing,i saw her many times. She always cried,but she did it secretly,i don't think she liked being there. I always pitied her'' Jarger said,then Gylbert got up and started sparring with Jarger ''You'll have to go to the Bloody Gate in a few minutes! Be sure you are ready for the worse!'' Gylbert said and struck a crushing blow at Jarger,who dodged it,Jarger swung his sword forward and hit Gylbert in the chest,he stepped away from Jarger,then he ran at him,sword up,Jarger made him fall to the ground and kicked his sword away ''I'd say i am.'' Jarger said,ready to do his turn of guard at the Bloody Gate. He then helped Gylbert up ''Be careful! Or i'll have to go back there!'' Gylbert said,enjoying his new place at the recruits' barracks. He was the leader of all recruits,but Jarger knew he deserved it. ''I'm going to go'' Jarger said,and headed for the Bloody Gate.
After some time Jarger got to the Bloody Gate and saw that Philip was there. ''Philip! I'm Jarger,i have to guard the place'' Jarger said,Philip turned around,a mischievous smile on his face ''Yes,i know. You can sit there,because nothing is going to happen.'' He reassured Jarger,who sat down on a chair,facing the vast field where someone could show up. Jarger then unsheathed his sword and started cleaning it with a rag,and some oil. He glanced at Philip,and saw he was smiling slyly ''Something the matter?'' Jarger asked Philip,he shook his head ''No,i am just enjoying the vast ambient of the Vale'' He says,Jarger sees that he is lying,but he decides not to say anything. ''You are a man of honor,i can see it in you'' Philip says,Jarger feels complimented,for him it means that a bastard can be honorable,that is what's trying to show to people since he was born. ''I think you can be useful to me,for once.'' Philip says ''What can i do for you?'' Philip smiles widely ''I want you to train some recruits all night long.'' He said ''Only that? I can do that'' Jarger said,shrugging. Little did he know that Philip asked him on purpose. He won't be able to be around Sansa,and the plan should go smoothly. ''I knew you would accept. You're an honorable man,take this as a gift of appreciation'' Philip said and gave him a small purse of silver coins. Jarger gladly took the coins and noted that there were more than two thousand silver stags ''You can buy a new sword. Yours is getting dirty.'' Philip said,chuckling. Jarger looked at his rather dirty and rusted longsword,it reminded him of his stay in King's Landing,and the fact that he broke a vital oath. ''I will do that,this sword just brings back rotten memories'' Jarger says to Philip,whose attention is captured by Jarger ''Why? What happened?'' He asked ''I was a Kingsguard,this sword is just a reminder of how i ran away,ran from an oath that i had to swear.'' Jarger said to Philip,who smiled with a sly face ''I guess you won't be needing this sword anymore then'' He said,and took his sword,then he threw it away,making it fly away by the Bloody Gate,Jarger looks at his sword for the last time,before fixating his gaze on Philip,and he noticed he had some kind of bottle in his pocket ''What is that?'' Jarger asked,pointing to Philip's bottle,sitting in his pocket. Philip almost covered the pocket with his hand,almost as if he didn't want it to be seen. ''You clearly are quite the watcher'' Philip says,trying to keep his tone calm ''I didn't mean to offend you'' Jarger said,and Philip shook his head ''It's just some Sweetsleep,nothing to worry about,i don't sleep at night.'' Philip said,and Jarger believed him. Philip then turned to Jarger ''Your turn is almost over'' He says,and starts to take off his eyepatch,which was covering his right eye ''But do you want to know what is under this patch?'' Philip asks,Jarger doesn't dare to answer. Philip takes it off,showing the right,congested eye. It was red,and he covered it from sunlight. ''Some people are born special. The secret to win over your enemies is using your speciality. Some people do,and they win. Petyr is an example'' He says,Jarger was disturbed by the sight of his right eye,yet curious. ''Some people don't,and they perish. What is your speciality,Jarger Waters? You'll need to show it or else you will perish,along everyone else.'' He said,and turned away from him,probably going to the Castle,but he turned around,and looked at Jarger,his eyes showed no emotion,they were colder than Roose Bolton's. ''The Eyrie is no place for you. Either you adapt,or you will die here,in the warmness of the East.'' He said,and walked away. Jarger was left alone on top of the Bloody Gate ''I am starting to think that staying in King's Landing would've been better. He then got comfortable on his chairs,his eyelids were getting heavier,until he noticed a figure walking towards the Bloody Gate. He,or she,was walking wearily,almost as if worn down by an exhausting adventure. Jarger looked at the short figure,and he recognised Gared,he started screaming ''GARED! I KNEW YOU'D COME!'' He continued shouting,the figure was now closer to the Bloody Gate and Jarger sadly saw that it wasn't Gared,just a small girl with red hair ''Hey! I am looking for some jobs! Can you open the gates for me?'' The girl asked
[Open the Gates][Send her away]
Kieron's POV
''I better stay away from that castle,it can be dangerous to talk with Sansa again. If only she had some guards to protect me i could...'' Kieron said,he really bonded with Sansa,escorting her out of King's Landing,talking and being with her on Littlefinger's ship. The fact that he couldn't talk with her bugged him,but that's what he needed to do. ''Maybe i should've stayed in King's Landing'' He thought ''Away from Sansa,away from trouble. Maybe i could've become an important King's Guard,maybe i could've been rich.'' He thought,but he shrugged it off and headed to the Guard's Barracks,to get some food,he sat down at a table,which was in front of many guards' tents. One stepped out and looked at Kieron ''We are a few guards short,you could be useful,just patrol the area and make sure nothing happens'' The guard said,and gave him a blue cloak with the seal of House Arryn. ''This could not have been easier'' He thought to himself and slightly chuckled ''I will do that,thank you.'' ''Of course,you just did me a favor'' The guard said ''You get money for everyone you recruit?'' ''Yes,it's my job.'' The guard said,Kieron found this a bit strange but decided not to complain. He thanked the man and the man gave him some rashers of bacon,and some wine. While eating his mind started to wander ''What if i come back to King's Landing? I could say that i chased Joffrey's killer down,and maybe they could even reward me'' He thought,his thinking was interrupted by some footsteps behind him,he saw the same men he saw when he arrived here,he had the same eyepatch,and he was talking with a big bald man,Kieron tried to make out some of the words ''Mord,i need you....can be useful for......'' Kieron couldn't hear them because they were whispering,Kieron then saw the man showing 'Mord' a letter,and he shred it in two,the man looked angry ''Now i am going to rewrite it! You stupid shit!'' The man said and walked away,Mord was looking at him,then he shrugged and walked away,Kieron got up from his table and went to read the shredded letter ''Follow Sansa everywhere,when she goes to her chambers warn me and the plan will start.'' ''Should i warn Sansa?'' Kieron whispered to himself,he felt a sharp object slightly puncturing his back ''No you won't. In fact,you will be a part of my plan'' The man with the eyepatch said to him,a shortsword in his hand. ''Why are you doing this?'' The man laughed ''It's none of your business. We just want to assure that the girl is turned into a woman.'' Kieron cringed at this statement ''Let me go'' He demanded ''That would be a pity,what if YOU do it? I think she would feel betrayed,her only 'Friend' doing this to her...'' He trailed off,Kieron then raised his tone ''LET ME GO!'' He yelled,and threw his head backwards,hitting the man in the nose. Kieron then got up and punched the man in the face,and he fell to the ground,he then took his sword and held it to his neck,he then struck his hand,puncturing it. The man cried out,and Kieron felt a huge force hitting him on the back of his head. It was Mord. Kieron tried to get up but the man with the Eyepatch kicked Kieron in his stomach. ''You really aren't a cunning man,are you? You fell right for this set up. Littlefinger asked me to get rid of you,but i am going to offer him more.'' The man said,and hit Kieron on the back of his head. Kieron's last thought before passing out was directed to Sansa.
So guys! This part is over,and i think it's a little bit short,so if i can,i'll write more later.
Whose part do you want to see next?
[Merrik's][Hunter's][Mark's][Kieron's][Jarger's][Brandon Thomas and Kevin's][Damon and Saya][New character]
Hi guys! New chapter!
Jarger Waters
Jarger was talking with Gylbert when he saw Sansa exiting the castle with red,puffy eyes. He ran t… moreowards her ''Sansa,is something the matter?'' He asks her,but she shakes her head ''No,nothing'' She says,and he cocks his eyebrow ''Something must have happened'' He thought ''Are you sure?'' He asks her,and she nods,reassuring him. He then wiped some tears that were on her face away,and he went over to Gylbert ''What happened?'' Gylbert asked Jarger,who shrugged ''Lady Sansa must be sad,her eyes were red from crying.'' Jarger then took his sword out and swung it in the air ''It's a pity that girls like her are thrown in a world like this. She is too kind and pure for this world,she will soon find out.'' Jarger said,hitting a straw mannequin and waving his sword around. ''It depends on who will she marry'' Gylbert said ''Yes,she will learn how to be cunning.'' Jarger said ''Why is she here anyway?'' Gylb… [view original content]
Hi guys! New chapter!
Jarger Waters
Jarger was talking with Gylbert when he saw Sansa exiting the castle with red,puffy eyes. He ran t… moreowards her ''Sansa,is something the matter?'' He asks her,but she shakes her head ''No,nothing'' She says,and he cocks his eyebrow ''Something must have happened'' He thought ''Are you sure?'' He asks her,and she nods,reassuring him. He then wiped some tears that were on her face away,and he went over to Gylbert ''What happened?'' Gylbert asked Jarger,who shrugged ''Lady Sansa must be sad,her eyes were red from crying.'' Jarger then took his sword out and swung it in the air ''It's a pity that girls like her are thrown in a world like this. She is too kind and pure for this world,she will soon find out.'' Jarger said,hitting a straw mannequin and waving his sword around. ''It depends on who will she marry'' Gylbert said ''Yes,she will learn how to be cunning.'' Jarger said ''Why is she here anyway?'' Gylb… [view original content]
Hi guys! New chapter!
Jarger Waters
Jarger was talking with Gylbert when he saw Sansa exiting the castle with red,puffy eyes. He ran t… moreowards her ''Sansa,is something the matter?'' He asks her,but she shakes her head ''No,nothing'' She says,and he cocks his eyebrow ''Something must have happened'' He thought ''Are you sure?'' He asks her,and she nods,reassuring him. He then wiped some tears that were on her face away,and he went over to Gylbert ''What happened?'' Gylbert asked Jarger,who shrugged ''Lady Sansa must be sad,her eyes were red from crying.'' Jarger then took his sword out and swung it in the air ''It's a pity that girls like her are thrown in a world like this. She is too kind and pure for this world,she will soon find out.'' Jarger said,hitting a straw mannequin and waving his sword around. ''It depends on who will she marry'' Gylbert said ''Yes,she will learn how to be cunning.'' Jarger said ''Why is she here anyway?'' Gylb… [view original content]
[Open the Gates] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] I think your parts with Jarger and Phillip talking to each other are really well done! Phillip is so mysterious, and Jarger is so curious; it sets a perfect Game of Thrones mood. Also, I envisioned Philip with his eye color being red, but I can't really tell with the sentence if it means that, or if the white of his eye is just cracked and red. Maybe both.
Hi guys! New chapter!
Jarger Waters
Jarger was talking with Gylbert when he saw Sansa exiting the castle with red,puffy eyes. He ran t… moreowards her ''Sansa,is something the matter?'' He asks her,but she shakes her head ''No,nothing'' She says,and he cocks his eyebrow ''Something must have happened'' He thought ''Are you sure?'' He asks her,and she nods,reassuring him. He then wiped some tears that were on her face away,and he went over to Gylbert ''What happened?'' Gylbert asked Jarger,who shrugged ''Lady Sansa must be sad,her eyes were red from crying.'' Jarger then took his sword out and swung it in the air ''It's a pity that girls like her are thrown in a world like this. She is too kind and pure for this world,she will soon find out.'' Jarger said,hitting a straw mannequin and waving his sword around. ''It depends on who will she marry'' Gylbert said ''Yes,she will learn how to be cunning.'' Jarger said ''Why is she here anyway?'' Gylb… [view original content]
Was on holiday and missed voting for this chapter so I'll just vote for Damon's instead of the Eyrie chapter [Turn Down Ramsay's invite, go to Smithon instead] Both chapters were very good though
Hi guys! New chapter!
I want to dedicate this long chapter to FlareBattle,one of my fellow readers and followers!
Damon Ravencrest
… more''I will marry one of your many daughters, Lord Walder'' Damon said and knelt before him,Saya briefly smiled ''This is settles it then,come with me'' Walder said,and Damon followed him into the Twins. Walder takes Damon to a hall where all of his daughters stood. ''There are my daughters,Walda,Derwa,Waldra and Shirei,though she hasn't flowered yet'' He listed the names of his daughters,who bowed as their name was spoken. Damon noticed he didn't introduce a ginger haired girl ''Who is she?'' Damon asked Walder Frey ''Ah,she is my granddaughter...Wertha? Walra? Waldina?'' He said struggling with his memory ''I'm Merry'' The girl spoke,smiling to Damon ''Fine.'' Walder said ''You can marry her if you want,for all i care'' Walder said to Damon,who noticed those words hurt Merry. They were all ugly,but in Damo… [view original content]
Hi guys! New chapter!
Jarger Waters
Jarger was talking with Gylbert when he saw Sansa exiting the castle with red,puffy eyes. He ran t… moreowards her ''Sansa,is something the matter?'' He asks her,but she shakes her head ''No,nothing'' She says,and he cocks his eyebrow ''Something must have happened'' He thought ''Are you sure?'' He asks her,and she nods,reassuring him. He then wiped some tears that were on her face away,and he went over to Gylbert ''What happened?'' Gylbert asked Jarger,who shrugged ''Lady Sansa must be sad,her eyes were red from crying.'' Jarger then took his sword out and swung it in the air ''It's a pity that girls like her are thrown in a world like this. She is too kind and pure for this world,she will soon find out.'' Jarger said,hitting a straw mannequin and waving his sword around. ''It depends on who will she marry'' Gylbert said ''Yes,she will learn how to be cunning.'' Jarger said ''Why is she here anyway?'' Gylb… [view original content]
You wrote that he was an half ocular albino,so yeah,it's just the eye color,the white of the eye is white,like normal albinos. He covers it from sunlight too,but yeah i'm sorry if you didn't get that,i'll be more clear. I'm glad you liked Jarger and Philip's conversation!
[Open the Gates] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] I think your parts with Jarger and Phillip talking to each other are really well done! Phi… morellip is so mysterious, and Jarger is so curious; it sets a perfect Game of Thrones mood. Also, I envisioned Philip with his eye color being red, but I can't really tell with the sentence if it means that, or if the white of his eye is just cracked and red. Maybe both.
Was on holiday and missed voting for this chapter so I'll just vote for Damon's instead of the Eyrie chapter [Turn Down Ramsay's invite, go to Smithon instead] Both chapters were very good though
Hi guys! New chapter!
I want to dedicate this long chapter to FlareBattle,one of my fellow readers and followers!
Damon Ravencrest
… more''I will marry one of your many daughters, Lord Walder'' Damon said and knelt before him,Saya briefly smiled ''This is settles it then,come with me'' Walder said,and Damon followed him into the Twins. Walder takes Damon to a hall where all of his daughters stood. ''There are my daughters,Walda,Derwa,Waldra and Shirei,though she hasn't flowered yet'' He listed the names of his daughters,who bowed as their name was spoken. Damon noticed he didn't introduce a ginger haired girl ''Who is she?'' Damon asked Walder Frey ''Ah,she is my granddaughter...Wertha? Walra? Waldina?'' He said struggling with his memory ''I'm Merry'' The girl spoke,smiling to Damon ''Fine.'' Walder said ''You can marry her if you want,for all i care'' Walder said to Damon,who noticed those words hurt Merry. They were all ugly,but in Damo… [view original content]
Hi guys! I am sorry if no parts were written but i got an xb1....bear with me i wanted to try it out for some time I'm starting to work on the next character!
Korric was walking down the main road of Yunkai,which was littered with merchants,traders,sellswords,and charlatans of all kind. ''Korric! Here you are,i thought this job would've been your last!'' A merchant said to him,he was famous in Yunkai,he was known as one of the best sellswords you could ever find. His last job consisted in killing an enemy loyal to the crown,he knew about the capture of one of the crown's spies,he had to be taken out. Korric then spoke to the merchant ''The job is now done,the man found out who captured his friend ''He spoke Hunter Dawson and Ser Jorah's name before he died,i guess he found out they captured his friend.'' Korric said and scratched his head,then he looked down at his armor,it was made of leather and armor,and R'hllor's fiery heart was sewn where his heart spot was,it was made of iron,to soften crushing blows. He followed the Lord of Light since a Red Priest told him of his existence. It all made sense to Korric,the darkness was spreading very fast to Westeros,he heard stories about it: Kings,honor,battles,and it seemed like a much better place to him,a better place to live in. He wanted to go to Westeros,but he didn't have a ship,or acquaintances in Westeros. The merchant then gasped ''Let's hope he didn't send a raven! Or you and Hunter could be in great trouble!'' The merchant said with a sly look ''I know,that's why i am planning to get out of here'' Korric said,and the merchant sighed ''I suggest you don't,heard some bad things about Westeros...they could get you killed.'' The merchant said ''Where should i go if i am looking for adventure?'' Korric asked,hoping the merchant knew some place ''Just commit some crime in Westeros and get sent to the Wall!'' The merchant said ''If i am looking for a calm place?'' Korric asks again ''Mhm....I don't know'' The merchant trails off ''The Arbor could be an option! It's a great place to just relax and drink some Arbor Red,oh,i've heard that's the Queen Regent's favouite wine.'' The merchant said ''Where is it?'' ''South coast of Westeros,you can find it here,on this map!'' The merchant says,and takes out a map from his pocket,Korric stretches his hand,but so does the merchant,his palm wide open,Korric grunts and gives him a few gold coins,the merchant cackles ''It's here'' He pointed to a fairly large island south of Westeros,a golden rose was drawn on it ''What's this?'' Korric asked pointing to the rose ''The Arbor is the seat of House Redwyne,loyal to House Tyrell,i suggest you read some books about Westeros'' The merchant said,and Korric shook his head ''Thank you,i must go now.'' Korric said and hurried towards Yunkai's gates. When he reached them he started to see the sellswords' tent camp. He quickened his pace and thought about going to Westeros,where would he go? ''I don't even have a ship'' He sighed,and when he got to the tent camp he saw only one sellsword outside his tent,who stepped close to Korric. ''Hey man,we didn't see you for a while!'' The sellsword said and pat Korric's shoulder ''The job was pretty hard,but now it's done.'' Korric said to the man,grabbing a sword from a rack and handing it to him ''Clean this please,someone's got to do it'' Korric said,the man nodded and grabbed a rag,which was sitting on a crate full of spears. ''Hey,what's your name?'' Korric asked ''Larry'' He simply said ''Larry,do you know some people who can get me on a ship to Westeros?'' Korric blatantly asked,it was foolish of him,but he did it out of desperation,he wanted to experience real battles,honor,fighting for someone. Larry cocked an eyebrow,just for a brief moment,and Korric noticed it,but he shook it off instantly ''I happen to know someone,indeed.'' Korric's eyes lit up ''Who? How? When is the ship going to leave?'' Korric flooded him with questions ''Can you...can you keep a secret?'' Larry asked him,and Korric's eyes lit up again,but in surprise ''What is it?'' He asked,and Larry started speaking slowly ''They are the Lannisters. The Lannisters have a ship here,it was supposed to leave with the man you killed.'' Korric's eyes widened ''You traitor...YOU KNEW IT!'' Larry winced in guilt ''I couldn't tell you! But if you want to get on the ship,which is leaving from Meereen's pier,you must trust me.'' Korric then started to think ''I don't trust him,he could betray me,once a traitor forever a traitor.'' Korric gulped ''I know that i have to go to Meereen,but Larry may give me vital information...''
[Trust Larry][Do not Trust him,Go to Meereen by yourself.]
So guys! The part is over! I am sorry if i didn't write these days,but i got an xb1,so yeah (Was intrigued in Ps4 because Until Dawn) I hope you liked it! Actually tell me that in the comments!
Whose part do you want next?
[Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's][Brandon Thomas and Kevin's][Damon's][New,or already known... pov in the Eyrie (Red hair hint hint)][Hunter's][Merrik's][Megan's]
Korric Dedman
Korric was walking down the main road of Yunkai,which was littered with merchants,traders,sellswords,and charlatans of all … morekind. ''Korric! Here you are,i thought this job would've been your last!'' A merchant said to him,he was famous in Yunkai,he was known as one of the best sellswords you could ever find. His last job consisted in killing an enemy loyal to the crown,he knew about the capture of one of the crown's spies,he had to be taken out. Korric then spoke to the merchant ''The job is now done,the man found out who captured his friend ''He spoke Hunter Dawson and Ser Jorah's name before he died,i guess he found out they captured his friend.'' Korric said and scratched his head,then he looked down at his armor,it was made of leather and armor,and R'hllor's fiery heart was sewn where his heart spot was,it was made of iron,to soften crushing blows. He followed the Lord of Light since a Red Priest told him of his existence… [view original content]
Korric Dedman
Korric was walking down the main road of Yunkai,which was littered with merchants,traders,sellswords,and charlatans of all … morekind. ''Korric! Here you are,i thought this job would've been your last!'' A merchant said to him,he was famous in Yunkai,he was known as one of the best sellswords you could ever find. His last job consisted in killing an enemy loyal to the crown,he knew about the capture of one of the crown's spies,he had to be taken out. Korric then spoke to the merchant ''The job is now done,the man found out who captured his friend ''He spoke Hunter Dawson and Ser Jorah's name before he died,i guess he found out they captured his friend.'' Korric said and scratched his head,then he looked down at his armor,it was made of leather and armor,and R'hllor's fiery heart was sewn where his heart spot was,it was made of iron,to soften crushing blows. He followed the Lord of Light since a Red Priest told him of his existence… [view original content]
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[Work as a spy in House Bolton]
[Damon and Saya's]
[Work as a spy in House Bolton]
[Damon and Saya's]
[Work as a spy in House Whitehill] and [Hunter's] Love the idea that Duncan is a father. I'm really curious how this book will later play out. In my play through I had Duncan be my traitor, and I can only imagine Megan finding out about him. It'd be even worse if she found out as the spy for the Whitehills. Of course Ser Royland could be the traitor too, who knows?
[Suggest you stay in Ironrath instead] **[Damon and Saya's]
[Suggest you stay in Ironrath instead] [Damon and Saya's]
[Suggest you stay in Ironrath] and [Damon and Saya's]
We don't know what is going to happen...am i going to be portraying duncan as the traitor or the sentinel? Who knows...
Hi guys! New chapter!
I want to dedicate this long chapter to FlareBattle,one of my fellow readers and followers!
Damon Ravencrest
''I will marry one of your many daughters, Lord Walder'' Damon said and knelt before him,Saya briefly smiled ''This is settles it then,come with me'' Walder said,and Damon followed him into the Twins. Walder takes Damon to a hall where all of his daughters stood. ''There are my daughters,Walda,Derwa,Waldra and Shirei,though she hasn't flowered yet'' He listed the names of his daughters,who bowed as their name was spoken. Damon noticed he didn't introduce a ginger haired girl ''Who is she?'' Damon asked Walder Frey ''Ah,she is my granddaughter...Wertha? Walra? Waldina?'' He said struggling with his memory ''I'm Merry'' The girl spoke,smiling to Damon ''Fine.'' Walder said ''You can marry her if you want,for all i care'' Walder said to Damon,who noticed those words hurt Merry. They were all ugly,but in Damon's eyes Merry was better than everyone else,or less worse. ''She will be my betrothed.'' Damon says to Walder and looks at Merry,whose eyes light up. ''You got quite the nose'' He thought,looking at Merry ''Very well then. The wedding will be in three days,you will now get to your castle,which is in the Riverlands,close to the Vale'' Walder said and pointed his finger on a dusty old map ''And you will get ready to work for me'' He said,and Merry looked at Damon,who was now exiting the castle with Walder. When he stepped out of the castle,Harold almost instantly ran towards Damon,confusing him with an endless stream of questions ''How did it go? When will the wedding be? Do you have a castle now?'' Damon calmed him down ''We have a castle,i will call it Ravenrath,it's in the Riverlands,we will now go there,i am to be married in three days.'' He answered his questions,Saya looked at him and smiled ''You did it,now i will go to seek another job.'' She said,and hugged Damon ''Be safe okay?'' He said to her,she nodded and got on her horse,she then galloped away,to seek another task. ''It's her life,she will be happy'' He thought,reassuring himself,in fact he was right. Saya's face was relaxed and well,like she had completed another task. Damon then turned to the sellswords and gave them his remaining gold ''Go find another job'' They nodded and entered one of the many inns nearby,to search a job. Harold and Damon then got on their horses and galloped to the Riverlands,in hope to find a good castle.
After a day of galloping,Harold and Damon finally reached the Riverlands,tired and thirsty they stopped to a inn to drink something to soothe their nerves. ''Will the castle be good?'' Damon asked Harold ''It's hard to say,but i think the castle will be more than decent'' Harold always had a good sixth sense,this gave Damon a lot of hope. ''Let's go'' Damon said,they paid for their drinks and they got on their horses again,a hour later they reached the destination,and they found a great castle. It had four stone towers,one on each corner of the walls,it contained a vast village in it,at least three times Winterfell's. There were a lot of smallfolk and soldiers,and the castle was at the back of the village,it had three floors. Damon was flabbergastered ''This isn't the right one,maybe it's smaller.'' He said,but a guard stopped him ''Hey! Are you Damon Ravencrest?'' The guard asked,Damon nodded ''Walder Frey ordered me to tell you that this castle is now officially yours'' The guard says,Damon is euphoric ''THIS CASTLE IS TOO MUCH!!'' He screamed,and the guard shared his joy ''It has a lot of people in it too! You'll never feel alone that is for sure!'' He said ''I'm Tyren,i'm the leader of the soldiers. I train them every day at their barracks' yard.'' He said,Damon nodded ''Enter your castle my lord!'' He said,and Damon entered Ravenrath. When he got off his horse,the smallfolk cheered for him ''THIS IS OUR NEW LORD!'' A woman said ''He seems smart!'' A man said ''He is quite handsome too!'' A young lady said,Damon then bowed to his smallfolk and they were surprised. A lord never bows to his people,but Damon just did. He walked to his castle,waving to everyone he met and then he waved at all the smallfolk,alongside Harold,before entering the castle. When he entered he saw a great table at the center of the room,goblets and platters sitting on it ''This will be the dining room!'' Harold said with euphorism ''It looks like it!'' Damon says,and walks up the stairs to the first floor. The first floor contained a few rooms containing shelves filled with books,he then saw a few musicians ''We were waiting for you my lord! Walder Frey warned us of your coming! I am Rheagar,not the Mad King's son,but a humble minstrel looking forward to satisfy you with my best songs!'' He says,he was carrying his lute,the two friends behind him waved at Damon ''These are my friends,York and Yark. They will help me in my songs!'' He says and bows to Damon ''If it please your lordship i would start singing,it's my favourite hobby'' He said ''Go ahead minstrel!'' Damon encouraged him,and he started singing a ballad about the battle of the Trident. Damon smiled and headed to the second floor. He saw that his rooms were here,and a few other dormitories,for the guests. He saw the kitchen too,he peeked in and the cooks were cooking rabbit,when they saw Damon they tipped their hat to him and cheered him. He then headed to the third floor,it was almost fully dedicated to the maester's studies. ''Lord Ravencrest! I am Maester Simon,your new master,i can treat wounds,and get you out of dangerous positions. I even studied the making of Wildfire,by order of the Queen Regent Cersei Lannister,so i could try and make some jars.'' He smiled,and shook Damon's hand,Damon saw the chains on his neck ''You are really young for a maester!'' Damon said surprised ''I am a fresher mind.'' He said,smiling. Damon knew that wildfire could come in handy ''You'll be my counsellor'' He said to the maester,and he smiled ''Sure,he will be too.'' He pointed to Harold ''It's better if you have more.'' He said. Damon then went to his chamber and saw a few elegant dresses on his bed,as well as some heavy armor. He dressed comfortably with some light padded armor ''Harold,go in town and speak to the smallfolk,ask them what they think of their new lord,if they are happy,ensure that everyone is happy and if they're not,we will solve their problems. Maester,you ensure that everyone is happy in the castle. Minstrels and cooks.'' He says and then the two get out of his room. He then lays down on his bed to sleep.
After three days,Damon got comfortable around his castle,the smallfolk got to know him better,and he warned them of Lady Ravencrest's coming. Damon finished dressing himself,he wore an elegant dress. Harold and the Maester entered his room ''Everyone is happy,the smallfolk and the people in your castle'' The two said ''The minstrel in particular confessed me his passion for singing.'' Maester Simon said and they laughed ''It's getting late,Damon,we should go.'' Harold said to Damon,he nodded and they walked out of the castle and they arrived to the gates. The two got on their horses ''Make sure nothing happens when i'm gone'' Damon says to Simon,he nods. The two then starts to gallop,with all of House Ravencrest's soldiers to their back,who were already looking forward to drink and eat. It was evening when they arrived at the Twins and the soldiers almost instantly went to the tent camps outside the Twins,looking forward to feast. Damon got off his horse and saw that Walder Frey was waiting for him outside the Twins. He walked up to him ''Well met,Damon'' Walder said,and shook his hand. He took him inside the Twins,to the dining room,which was filled with frey soldiers,Harold was in the room too. Damon met Merry's gaze,and smiled. She wasn't the prettiest of the girls,but she had something special about her,something that caught Damon's attention. Damon's gaze was fixated on hers throughout the whole wedding ceremony,and when it was over,he kissed her. The room erupted in cheers,everyone was happy and toasting to House Ravencrest. A great crowd then carried Merry and Damon to a chamber with a big bed. ''The bedding ceremony!'' Damon thought,and laughed. When the crowd left the room,he started to caress Merry's face ''Are you from essos? You look like you are'' She says ''I am'' He confirms,she smiles to him,he takes her hand but she whimpers,he then sees a cut on her hand ''What happened?'' Damon asked ''I was there,when Robb Stark got killed. There were arrows flying everywhere,Robb's wife was on the ground,bleeding from the belly. They shot at Robb and he fell to the ground,he got up but Roose Bolton stabbed him to death. Catelyn Stark killed Joyeuse,i was right next to her. I could've been the one,you know?'' Damon had a sad expression ''I'm sorry you had to see that'' She smiles ''It doesn't matter,now i am Lady Ravencrest.'' She says and kisses Damon. They start undressing each other and they consume their marriage. The day after Damon wakes up to see that Merry was gone. He looked for her but she couldn't find her. He went to Walder Frey,who was eating his breakfast at his great table ''Do you know where Merry is?'' He asked him ''She is already at your castle...how did you name it?'' Walder asks ''Ravenrath'' Walder gasps ''Ravenrath,i'll remember it for sure'' He says and laughs ''I will be going now.'' He says and heads outside,his soldiers were all disappeared ''The soldiers are already at Ravencrast too!'' Walder shouts from inside ''RAVENRATH! It's called Ravenrath!'' Damon said ''Fine.'' He heard Walder answer. He then gets on his horse and returns to Ravenrath. When he arrives,he is greeted by Merry. ''This castle is really great! I met everyone here and they are really friendly!'' Merry says ''I'm glad you like your new home!'' Damon says euphoric ''It's better than the Twins!'' She said,and Damon smiled,he entered the gates and saw Maester Simon ''My lord! A letter arrived!'' He said,and gave the letter to Damon,he broke the seal quickly and read the letter
Damon then jumped from excitement. He could go there right now ''There's another thing,my lord'' Simon says ''What is it?'' Damon asks ''A messenger came,he said Ramsay Bolton wants to see you. What should i tell him?''
[Accept Ramsay's invite] [Turn Down Ramsay's invite,go to Smithon instead]
So guys! This part is over! Did you like it or not? What did you think about it? Please tell me in the comments!
I am going to do the Eyrie part tomorrow,so i am going to give you this choice,do you want...
[Jarger to have the biggest role in the coming part] [Kieron to have the biggest role in the coming part] [Sansa's POV]
[Turn Down Ramsay's invite,go to Smithon instead]
[Sansa's POV]
[Accept Ramsay's invite]
[Jarger to have the biggest role in the coming part]
Good story with Damon
Thank you man
Did you introduce a character? Tell me and i'll write some parts about him 
So, I just started reading this. I have to say, your writing is very good. You have skill. I really like this story and am eager to see where it goes. I may submit a character later if I remember.
Thank you man! To participate more in this book you can choose your favourite choice in the last chapter! And choose who will have the biggest role in the next part. The characters are many,so it can be confusing,but if you catch up with the last chapters i made about the Eyrie or every character's,you'll know the storyline. Thank you a lot for your support!
I did, it was korric from Yunkai
[Accept Ramsay's invite] and [Jarger to have the biggest role in the coming part] Wow thanks! Its a great chapter! Its neat to now have the perspective of two lords. That is awesome!
[Turn Down Ramsay's invite,go to Smithon instead] Good part.
[Kieron to have the biggest role in the coming part]
Thank you very much! Next part is going to be even greater,with a greater choice,maybe one that could lead the character to DEATH....
I will introduce him when everybody will vote for a new character
Hi guys! New chapter!
Jarger Waters
Jarger was talking with Gylbert when he saw Sansa exiting the castle with red,puffy eyes. He ran towards her ''Sansa,is something the matter?'' He asks her,but she shakes her head ''No,nothing'' She says,and he cocks his eyebrow ''Something must have happened'' He thought ''Are you sure?'' He asks her,and she nods,reassuring him. He then wiped some tears that were on her face away,and he went over to Gylbert ''What happened?'' Gylbert asked Jarger,who shrugged ''Lady Sansa must be sad,her eyes were red from crying.'' Jarger then took his sword out and swung it in the air ''It's a pity that girls like her are thrown in a world like this. She is too kind and pure for this world,she will soon find out.'' Jarger said,hitting a straw mannequin and waving his sword around. ''It depends on who will she marry'' Gylbert said ''Yes,she will learn how to be cunning.'' Jarger said ''Why is she here anyway?'' Gylbert asked Jarger ''She was at King's Landing,i saw her many times. She always cried,but she did it secretly,i don't think she liked being there. I always pitied her'' Jarger said,then Gylbert got up and started sparring with Jarger ''You'll have to go to the Bloody Gate in a few minutes! Be sure you are ready for the worse!'' Gylbert said and struck a crushing blow at Jarger,who dodged it,Jarger swung his sword forward and hit Gylbert in the chest,he stepped away from Jarger,then he ran at him,sword up,Jarger made him fall to the ground and kicked his sword away ''I'd say i am.'' Jarger said,ready to do his turn of guard at the Bloody Gate. He then helped Gylbert up ''Be careful! Or i'll have to go back there!'' Gylbert said,enjoying his new place at the recruits' barracks. He was the leader of all recruits,but Jarger knew he deserved it. ''I'm going to go'' Jarger said,and headed for the Bloody Gate.
After some time Jarger got to the Bloody Gate and saw that Philip was there. ''Philip! I'm Jarger,i have to guard the place'' Jarger said,Philip turned around,a mischievous smile on his face ''Yes,i know. You can sit there,because nothing is going to happen.'' He reassured Jarger,who sat down on a chair,facing the vast field where someone could show up. Jarger then unsheathed his sword and started cleaning it with a rag,and some oil. He glanced at Philip,and saw he was smiling slyly ''Something the matter?'' Jarger asked Philip,he shook his head ''No,i am just enjoying the vast ambient of the Vale'' He says,Jarger sees that he is lying,but he decides not to say anything. ''You are a man of honor,i can see it in you'' Philip says,Jarger feels complimented,for him it means that a bastard can be honorable,that is what's trying to show to people since he was born. ''I think you can be useful to me,for once.'' Philip says ''What can i do for you?'' Philip smiles widely ''I want you to train some recruits all night long.'' He said ''Only that? I can do that'' Jarger said,shrugging. Little did he know that Philip asked him on purpose. He won't be able to be around Sansa,and the plan should go smoothly. ''I knew you would accept. You're an honorable man,take this as a gift of appreciation'' Philip said and gave him a small purse of silver coins. Jarger gladly took the coins and noted that there were more than two thousand silver stags ''You can buy a new sword. Yours is getting dirty.'' Philip said,chuckling. Jarger looked at his rather dirty and rusted longsword,it reminded him of his stay in King's Landing,and the fact that he broke a vital oath. ''I will do that,this sword just brings back rotten memories'' Jarger says to Philip,whose attention is captured by Jarger ''Why? What happened?'' He asked ''I was a Kingsguard,this sword is just a reminder of how i ran away,ran from an oath that i had to swear.'' Jarger said to Philip,who smiled with a sly face ''I guess you won't be needing this sword anymore then'' He said,and took his sword,then he threw it away,making it fly away by the Bloody Gate,Jarger looks at his sword for the last time,before fixating his gaze on Philip,and he noticed he had some kind of bottle in his pocket ''What is that?'' Jarger asked,pointing to Philip's bottle,sitting in his pocket. Philip almost covered the pocket with his hand,almost as if he didn't want it to be seen. ''You clearly are quite the watcher'' Philip says,trying to keep his tone calm ''I didn't mean to offend you'' Jarger said,and Philip shook his head ''It's just some Sweetsleep,nothing to worry about,i don't sleep at night.'' Philip said,and Jarger believed him. Philip then turned to Jarger ''Your turn is almost over'' He says,and starts to take off his eyepatch,which was covering his right eye ''But do you want to know what is under this patch?'' Philip asks,Jarger doesn't dare to answer. Philip takes it off,showing the right,congested eye. It was red,and he covered it from sunlight. ''Some people are born special. The secret to win over your enemies is using your speciality. Some people do,and they win. Petyr is an example'' He says,Jarger was disturbed by the sight of his right eye,yet curious. ''Some people don't,and they perish. What is your speciality,Jarger Waters? You'll need to show it or else you will perish,along everyone else.'' He said,and turned away from him,probably going to the Castle,but he turned around,and looked at Jarger,his eyes showed no emotion,they were colder than Roose Bolton's. ''The Eyrie is no place for you. Either you adapt,or you will die here,in the warmness of the East.'' He said,and walked away. Jarger was left alone on top of the Bloody Gate ''I am starting to think that staying in King's Landing would've been better. He then got comfortable on his chairs,his eyelids were getting heavier,until he noticed a figure walking towards the Bloody Gate. He,or she,was walking wearily,almost as if worn down by an exhausting adventure. Jarger looked at the short figure,and he recognised Gared,he started screaming ''GARED! I KNEW YOU'D COME!'' He continued shouting,the figure was now closer to the Bloody Gate and Jarger sadly saw that it wasn't Gared,just a small girl with red hair ''Hey! I am looking for some jobs! Can you open the gates for me?'' The girl asked
[Open the Gates] [Send her away]
Kieron's POV
''I better stay away from that castle,it can be dangerous to talk with Sansa again. If only she had some guards to protect me i could...'' Kieron said,he really bonded with Sansa,escorting her out of King's Landing,talking and being with her on Littlefinger's ship. The fact that he couldn't talk with her bugged him,but that's what he needed to do. ''Maybe i should've stayed in King's Landing'' He thought ''Away from Sansa,away from trouble. Maybe i could've become an important King's Guard,maybe i could've been rich.'' He thought,but he shrugged it off and headed to the Guard's Barracks,to get some food,he sat down at a table,which was in front of many guards' tents. One stepped out and looked at Kieron ''We are a few guards short,you could be useful,just patrol the area and make sure nothing happens'' The guard said,and gave him a blue cloak with the seal of House Arryn. ''This could not have been easier'' He thought to himself and slightly chuckled ''I will do that,thank you.'' ''Of course,you just did me a favor'' The guard said ''You get money for everyone you recruit?'' ''Yes,it's my job.'' The guard said,Kieron found this a bit strange but decided not to complain. He thanked the man and the man gave him some rashers of bacon,and some wine. While eating his mind started to wander ''What if i come back to King's Landing? I could say that i chased Joffrey's killer down,and maybe they could even reward me'' He thought,his thinking was interrupted by some footsteps behind him,he saw the same men he saw when he arrived here,he had the same eyepatch,and he was talking with a big bald man,Kieron tried to make out some of the words ''Mord,i need you....can be useful for......'' Kieron couldn't hear them because they were whispering,Kieron then saw the man showing 'Mord' a letter,and he shred it in two,the man looked angry ''Now i am going to rewrite it! You stupid shit!'' The man said and walked away,Mord was looking at him,then he shrugged and walked away,Kieron got up from his table and went to read the shredded letter ''Follow Sansa everywhere,when she goes to her chambers warn me and the plan will start.'' ''Should i warn Sansa?'' Kieron whispered to himself,he felt a sharp object slightly puncturing his back ''No you won't. In fact,you will be a part of my plan'' The man with the eyepatch said to him,a shortsword in his hand. ''Why are you doing this?'' The man laughed ''It's none of your business. We just want to assure that the girl is turned into a woman.'' Kieron cringed at this statement ''Let me go'' He demanded ''That would be a pity,what if YOU do it? I think she would feel betrayed,her only 'Friend' doing this to her...'' He trailed off,Kieron then raised his tone ''LET ME GO!'' He yelled,and threw his head backwards,hitting the man in the nose. Kieron then got up and punched the man in the face,and he fell to the ground,he then took his sword and held it to his neck,he then struck his hand,puncturing it. The man cried out,and Kieron felt a huge force hitting him on the back of his head. It was Mord. Kieron tried to get up but the man with the Eyepatch kicked Kieron in his stomach. ''You really aren't a cunning man,are you? You fell right for this set up. Littlefinger asked me to get rid of you,but i am going to offer him more.'' The man said,and hit Kieron on the back of his head. Kieron's last thought before passing out was directed to Sansa.
So guys! This part is over,and i think it's a little bit short,so if i can,i'll write more later.
Whose part do you want to see next?
[Merrik's] [Hunter's] [Mark's] [Kieron's] [Jarger's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Damon and Saya] [New character]
[Open the Gates] red hair girl loking for help, eeee?
[New character]
[open the gate] [new character] sorry for not replying to much in the last couple of days, I was on a holiday, great chapter as always!
I hope you had a great holiday!
Thank you!
[open the gate] [new character]
Thank you!
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[New Character]
Great part. I really like this story.
I haven't submitted a character yet. But I will sometime.
[Open the Gates] and [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] I think your parts with Jarger and Phillip talking to each other are really well done! Phillip is so mysterious, and Jarger is so curious; it sets a perfect Game of Thrones mood. Also, I envisioned Philip with his eye color being red, but I can't really tell with the sentence if it means that, or if the white of his eye is just cracked and red. Maybe both.
Was on holiday and missed voting for this chapter so I'll just vote for Damon's instead of the Eyrie chapter [Turn Down Ramsay's invite, go to Smithon instead] Both chapters were very good though
[Open the Gates] [New Character]
You wrote that he was an half ocular albino,so yeah,it's just the eye color,the white of the eye is white,like normal albinos. He covers it from sunlight too,but yeah i'm sorry if you didn't get that,i'll be more clear. I'm glad you liked Jarger and Philip's conversation!
Thank you man!
Don't worry! I hope you had a great holiday,i was really worried,my conversation with my brain was like:
Brain: Maybe they're just on vacation Thewalkingamonthrone.
Me: I hope so! But i think they have forgotten about me! *Drama King
Brain: Facepalm
Me: Pats Head Sorry man
Accept ramsay's offer
Jarger
[Open the Gates] [New Character]
[Turn Down Ramsay's invite, go to Smithon instead]
Hi guys! I am sorry if no parts were written but i got an xb1....bear with me i wanted to try it out for some time
I'm starting to work on the next character!
Korric Dedman
Korric was walking down the main road of Yunkai,which was littered with merchants,traders,sellswords,and charlatans of all kind. ''Korric! Here you are,i thought this job would've been your last!'' A merchant said to him,he was famous in Yunkai,he was known as one of the best sellswords you could ever find. His last job consisted in killing an enemy loyal to the crown,he knew about the capture of one of the crown's spies,he had to be taken out. Korric then spoke to the merchant ''The job is now done,the man found out who captured his friend ''He spoke Hunter Dawson and Ser Jorah's name before he died,i guess he found out they captured his friend.'' Korric said and scratched his head,then he looked down at his armor,it was made of leather and armor,and R'hllor's fiery heart was sewn where his heart spot was,it was made of iron,to soften crushing blows. He followed the Lord of Light since a Red Priest told him of his existence. It all made sense to Korric,the darkness was spreading very fast to Westeros,he heard stories about it: Kings,honor,battles,and it seemed like a much better place to him,a better place to live in. He wanted to go to Westeros,but he didn't have a ship,or acquaintances in Westeros. The merchant then gasped ''Let's hope he didn't send a raven! Or you and Hunter could be in great trouble!'' The merchant said with a sly look ''I know,that's why i am planning to get out of here'' Korric said,and the merchant sighed ''I suggest you don't,heard some bad things about Westeros...they could get you killed.'' The merchant said ''Where should i go if i am looking for adventure?'' Korric asked,hoping the merchant knew some place ''Just commit some crime in Westeros and get sent to the Wall!'' The merchant said ''If i am looking for a calm place?'' Korric asks again ''Mhm....I don't know'' The merchant trails off ''The Arbor could be an option! It's a great place to just relax and drink some Arbor Red,oh,i've heard that's the Queen Regent's favouite wine.'' The merchant said ''Where is it?'' ''South coast of Westeros,you can find it here,on this map!'' The merchant says,and takes out a map from his pocket,Korric stretches his hand,but so does the merchant,his palm wide open,Korric grunts and gives him a few gold coins,the merchant cackles ''It's here'' He pointed to a fairly large island south of Westeros,a golden rose was drawn on it ''What's this?'' Korric asked pointing to the rose ''The Arbor is the seat of House Redwyne,loyal to House Tyrell,i suggest you read some books about Westeros'' The merchant said,and Korric shook his head ''Thank you,i must go now.'' Korric said and hurried towards Yunkai's gates. When he reached them he started to see the sellswords' tent camp. He quickened his pace and thought about going to Westeros,where would he go? ''I don't even have a ship'' He sighed,and when he got to the tent camp he saw only one sellsword outside his tent,who stepped close to Korric. ''Hey man,we didn't see you for a while!'' The sellsword said and pat Korric's shoulder ''The job was pretty hard,but now it's done.'' Korric said to the man,grabbing a sword from a rack and handing it to him ''Clean this please,someone's got to do it'' Korric said,the man nodded and grabbed a rag,which was sitting on a crate full of spears. ''Hey,what's your name?'' Korric asked ''Larry'' He simply said ''Larry,do you know some people who can get me on a ship to Westeros?'' Korric blatantly asked,it was foolish of him,but he did it out of desperation,he wanted to experience real battles,honor,fighting for someone. Larry cocked an eyebrow,just for a brief moment,and Korric noticed it,but he shook it off instantly ''I happen to know someone,indeed.'' Korric's eyes lit up ''Who? How? When is the ship going to leave?'' Korric flooded him with questions ''Can you...can you keep a secret?'' Larry asked him,and Korric's eyes lit up again,but in surprise ''What is it?'' He asked,and Larry started speaking slowly ''They are the Lannisters. The Lannisters have a ship here,it was supposed to leave with the man you killed.'' Korric's eyes widened ''You traitor...YOU KNEW IT!'' Larry winced in guilt ''I couldn't tell you! But if you want to get on the ship,which is leaving from Meereen's pier,you must trust me.'' Korric then started to think ''I don't trust him,he could betray me,once a traitor forever a traitor.'' Korric gulped ''I know that i have to go to Meereen,but Larry may give me vital information...''
[Trust Larry] [Do not Trust him,Go to Meereen by yourself.]
So guys! The part is over! I am sorry if i didn't write these days,but i got an xb1,so yeah (Was intrigued in Ps4 because Until Dawn) I hope you liked it! Actually tell me that in the comments!
Whose part do you want next?
[Jarger's Kieron's and Philip's] [Brandon Thomas and Kevin's] [Damon's] [New,or already known... pov in the Eyrie (Red hair hint hint)] [Hunter's] [Merrik's] [Megan's]
[Do not Trust him,Go to Meereen by yourself.]
[Brandon Thomas and Kevin's]
Great chapter!
[Trust Larry]
[Hunter's] Idk why
[Trust Larry]
[Megan's]
[Do not trust him, go to Meereen by yourself] [Megan's]