It's not dumb, after all it could've been a sort of cliffhanger. I actually didn't know there was a character limit. I uploaded the chapter at night, went to bed, and when I woke up I saw the chapter wasn't complete. Double facepalm for me-.
Great (complete) part! I didn't eve notice it was cut off. I thought you ended it like that on purpose. Dumb me. Anyways, great writing. Can't wait for more!
Uh, guys, it appears that the character limit in the forums cut the chapter in two. So, here's the rest.
Ah, the character limit. I am very familiar with it. Basically, every part that is considerably longer than 19000 characters gets cut off at some point after the 19000. For me, I try to finish my parts just under 19700 characters and it works every time for me, but I checked and yours got cut off at roughly 19400, so I don't really know where the limit is, only that it is somewhere between 19000 and 20000. It can be a pain in the ass if your part is only slightly above the limit.
Anyways, this was a great start! I just love your writing. I already loved it in your old story and this one reads even better. It was such an intense start. I am also hyped that Becky and Edward got introduced already. Edward has been absolutely spot on as I imagined him. As for Becky, we haven't seen much of her, but I am sure in time I'm going to like her even more than him. I mean, I already do, so I can't wait to read more about her As for the other characters, I still have fond memories of Bianca from your old story, so it was great to see her back. Colby as our protagonist is surely an interesting guy and I'm looking forward to learn more about him. And Stefan, while having a rather small role in this part was kinda badass with his plank and made an impression on me. So, as I said, a great start. The writing just had an awesome flow to it and I can't wait for the next chapter
Uh, guys, it appears that the character limit in the forums cut the chapter in two. So, here's the rest.
But at the cost of his radio, … morethat sprang away from his belt and into the void of walkers.
His sweaty hand was beginning to slip. Bianca and Edward clutched his hands, and pulled him up. He was in safety. Colby dropped onto his back, panting, admiring the night sky with blankness after the near-death experience.
“You were right, Bianca…” Colby said. “I ain’t never trusting you with a gun again.”
“I’m sorry…I’m so sorry…” Bianca murmured. Oddly enough, her tone carried a slight emotion, maybe regret?
Colby laid on his back, savoring the breath that entered his lungs. If he had given in, he might not have been breathing at that moment. “It’s okay…It just scraped me.”
“Great. Now we have no way to get out of here.” Edward said.
“We should contact Stefan, see where they at.” Bianca said.
Colby reached for his walkie-t… [view original content]
Thanks for telling me the character limit, I'll be on the lookout in the future.
It's true that Stefan and Rebecca still haven't had a big role. I wanted to write a scene earlier on highlighting them, but the chapter was getting ridiculously long, so I decided to axe some chunks for the next chapter. Also, thanks for the kind words
Uh, guys, it appears that the character limit in the forums cut the chapter in two. So, here's the rest.
Ah, the character limit. I … moream very familiar with it. Basically, every part that is considerably longer than 19000 characters gets cut off at some point after the 19000. For me, I try to finish my parts just under 19700 characters and it works every time for me, but I checked and yours got cut off at roughly 19400, so I don't really know where the limit is, only that it is somewhere between 19000 and 20000. It can be a pain in the ass if your part is only slightly above the limit.
Anyways, this was a great start! I just love your writing. I already loved it in your old story and this one reads even better. It was such an intense start. I am also hyped that Becky and Edward got introduced already. Edward has been absolutely spot on as I imagined him. As for Becky, we haven't seen much of her, but I am sure in time I'm going to lik… [view original content]
Uh, guys, it appears that the character limit in the forums cut the chapter in two. So, here's the rest.
But at the cost of his radio, … morethat sprang away from his belt and into the void of walkers.
His sweaty hand was beginning to slip. Bianca and Edward clutched his hands, and pulled him up. He was in safety. Colby dropped onto his back, panting, admiring the night sky with blankness after the near-death experience.
“You were right, Bianca…” Colby said. “I ain’t never trusting you with a gun again.”
“I’m sorry…I’m so sorry…” Bianca murmured. Oddly enough, her tone carried a slight emotion, maybe regret?
Colby laid on his back, savoring the breath that entered his lungs. If he had given in, he might not have been breathing at that moment. “It’s okay…It just scraped me.”
“Great. Now we have no way to get out of here.” Edward said.
“We should contact Stefan, see where they at.” Bianca said.
Colby reached for his walkie-t… [view original content]
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It's not dumb, after all it could've been a sort of cliffhanger. I actually didn't know there was a character limit. I uploaded the chapter at night, went to bed, and when I woke up I saw the chapter wasn't complete. Double facepalm for me-.
Ah, the character limit. I am very familiar with it. Basically, every part that is considerably longer than 19000 characters gets cut off at some point after the 19000. For me, I try to finish my parts just under 19700 characters and it works every time for me, but I checked and yours got cut off at roughly 19400, so I don't really know where the limit is, only that it is somewhere between 19000 and 20000. It can be a pain in the ass if your part is only slightly above the limit.
Anyways, this was a great start! I just love your writing. I already loved it in your old story and this one reads even better. It was such an intense start. I am also hyped that Becky and Edward got introduced already. Edward has been absolutely spot on as I imagined him. As for Becky, we haven't seen much of her, but I am sure in time I'm going to like her even more than him. I mean, I already do, so I can't wait to read more about her
As for the other characters, I still have fond memories of Bianca from your old story, so it was great to see her back. Colby as our protagonist is surely an interesting guy and I'm looking forward to learn more about him. And Stefan, while having a rather small role in this part was kinda badass with his plank and made an impression on me. So, as I said, a great start. The writing just had an awesome flow to it and I can't wait for the next chapter 
Thanks for telling me the character limit, I'll be on the lookout in the future.
It's true that Stefan and Rebecca still haven't had a big role. I wanted to write a scene earlier on highlighting them, but the chapter was getting ridiculously long, so I decided to axe some chunks for the next chapter. Also, thanks for the kind words
Awesome start! I really like this story and I am excited for more
The chapter is awesome! I can't wait to read more!
Hey, just wanted to keep you guys posted and show you I'm not inactive. I'll try to upload a chapter in the following days.
Cool can't wait!!!!
This thread's been quiet for a while. How are things?
Soon my friends soon. (IDK)
Soo it's been a while. Still waiting.