You can just write without being too worried about mistakes. We've all made mistakes in the past and other people here just correct you. Worst that can happen is that you must edit a comment. If you need any question to be answered we're here
You can just write without being too worried about mistakes. We've all made mistakes in the past and other people here just correct you. Worst that can happen is that you must edit a comment. If you need any question to be answered we're here
Jessica and Eddie are a couple, she dresses emo/scenester like
Charlie: he is twisted, a mature young boy (7yo) who's very attached to his … morerifle, also a good sense for grownups and their actions/behaviour towards kids. He likes Clementine as a new sister, wants to protect her but also to teach her in being selfconfident and brave. He can be serious as well as behaving like a typical kid. Charlie lost his mother and brothers and sisters to New Crawford
Pascucci: he is a skinny italian looking man, wears clothes with not matching colours (green and orange) ans is a friendly normal guy, who can be very brutal when the situation asks for it. He has become a fellow of Kenny's
Tyler: He is very muscular and tall, but rather quiet and shy fella. He is friendly and calm but can be proactive when needed. Tyler is very attentive. He is very devoted to Miranda the pug puppy. Also Tyler used to be a vet, so he has doctor skills
Eva: lost her frie… [view original content]
"The decision is yours Clementine, but I'd love if it you could come. Please? You're like my best friend, like a sibling. I'd like it if you went with me" Charlie said.
Clem nodded, seemingly not knowing what to do, and knew she had to make a decision soon........
"Are you sure Charlie?" Jessica asked.
"I'm sure, it's our fault that Emma died. We brought a reign of terror to this farm and I can't live with that. I'm going with Kenny and Pascucci. I want Clem to go too" Charlie said.
"Clem is staying with us! I know I seem protective, but she needs to be somewhere safe, somewhere with food" Jessica said, accidentally shouting.
"No need to shout Jess" Eddie said.
"Clementine is going with us. I've been with her since the start lady!" Kenny said.
"Guy's let's stop arguing we don't need to attract any walkers with this noise" Jacob said.
"Well I think that maybe you should all go. You've completely destroyed my family!" Eva said, sadly before rushing out of the room.
Tyler sighed "maybe she's right?" he asked.
"No, Tyler, it's best for us all to stay" Jacob replied.
"Guess you're right" Tyler said with unease.
"Clem's coming WITH US!" Jessica said.
"I don't think so! She'll be better off in an area with no walkers!" Kenny shouted.
"Hold up...why don't we let Clem decide?" Pascucci said.
They all turned around to Clementine. Clem looked at everyone, and knew she had to make an answer now...
This is my first post, so it might be the worst thing you've ever read xP
"Clementine! Charlie!" Clementine instantly wakes up. "Both of yo-" Jessica gets cut off by Kenny.
"Come on Jessica, they can make their own goddamn decisions about this, just becuase they're children doesn't mean they're somehow worse than us." says Kenny.
"They'll die out there with just you and Pascucci" says Jessica.
"The fuck's that supposed to mean? We're better off on our own, just look at Emm-" Says Kenny.
"Don't you dare say anything about her..." Eva says.
"This was one attack, ONE since these past months, i figure we're still pretty damn safe." Says Jessica.
"Safe? Oh yeah, but for how long? We need food, i figure what we have now is only one month worth of it. We've been here a long fucking time,
enough for the food around this farm to be practically non existent, and since the last attack, a lot of the things we get food from are simply not THERE anymore, we need to keep moving, for someplace safe, and better than this." Kenny says.
"The fuck do you know about someplace saf-" Jessica gets stopped by Clementine.
"SHUT UP." Clem says, everyone stops.
Jacob comes in. "What the hell is going on in here?" he says.
"Ken and Jess." Clem says angry.
"Come on you guys, we talked about this, we let THEM decide, alright? Not you Jessica, nor Kenny, so, Charlie, what do you think?" Jacob says.
"I go, end of story." Charlie says immediatly. He looks at Clementine and thinks for a little bit. "But what about you?".
"I... I..." Clementine stutters.
"Whatever you think, it's okay." Jacob says".
"Le- Lee said that i always should keep moving, and never stay at one place. This place has run it's course" Clementine says, saddened by the memories... "But, he died because of it to... I don't know..."
After a long silence, Clementine decides "I'm, I'm going".
"But please, please, think about us!" Jessica says".
Clem walks away and says without any expression "No."
The goodbyes were kept short. Jessica made one more attempt to change Clementine's mind before they left but her resolve was iron. She could never look back on, but instead keep moving forward and never give up. She had to believe in herself just like Lee had believed in her. She had demanded a gun from Kenny and had attained one shortly before they left, she would use her gun to protect those she cared about and herself. Lastly she would keep the hope that Lee had shared with her in her heart, that one day the world would go back to normal someday, even if it was far in the future. (I think this is a good time to switch back to Jeremy for a bit)
This is my first post, so it might be the worst thing you've ever read xP
"Clementine! Charlie!" Clementine instantly wakes up. "Both of yo… more-" Jessica gets cut off by Kenny.
"Come on Jessica, they can make their own goddamn decisions about this, just becuase they're children doesn't mean they're somehow worse than us." says Kenny.
"They'll die out there with just you and Pascucci" says Jessica.
"The fuck's that supposed to mean? We're better off on our own, just look at Emm-" Says Kenny.
"Don't you dare say anything about her..." Eva says.
"This was one attack, ONE since these past months, i figure we're still pretty damn safe." Says Jessica.
"Safe? Oh yeah, but for how long? We need food, i figure what we have now is only one month worth of it. We've been here a long fucking time,
enough for the food around this farm to be practically non existent, and since the last attack, a lot of the things we get food from are simply n… [view original content]
This is my first post, so it might be the worst thing you've ever read xP
"Clementine! Charlie!" Clementine instantly wakes up. "Both of yo… more-" Jessica gets cut off by Kenny.
"Come on Jessica, they can make their own goddamn decisions about this, just becuase they're children doesn't mean they're somehow worse than us." says Kenny.
"They'll die out there with just you and Pascucci" says Jessica.
"The fuck's that supposed to mean? We're better off on our own, just look at Emm-" Says Kenny.
"Don't you dare say anything about her..." Eva says.
"This was one attack, ONE since these past months, i figure we're still pretty damn safe." Says Jessica.
"Safe? Oh yeah, but for how long? We need food, i figure what we have now is only one month worth of it. We've been here a long fucking time,
enough for the food around this farm to be practically non existent, and since the last attack, a lot of the things we get food from are simply n… [view original content]
The goodbyes were kept short. Jessica made one more attempt to change Clementine's mind before they left but her resolve was iron. She could n… moreever look back on, but instead keep moving forward and never give up. She had to believe in herself just like Lee had believed in her. She had demanded a gun from Kenny and had attained one shortly before they left, she would use her gun to protect those she cared about and herself. Lastly she would keep the hope that Lee had shared with her in her heart, that one day the world would go back to normal someday, even if it was far in the future. (I think this is a good time to switch back to Jeremy for a bit)
I've tried to imply it in the posts I wrote about Jeremy, but I hope he's a cool guy. Nah that's not really the word for it, I want him to hav… moree watched a lot of movies and games and stuff. Wyatt's great for a kind a geek guy but who knows when we'll meet him. I know the word for it, I want Jeremy to be genre savvy.
I've tried to imply it in the posts I wrote about Jeremy, but I hope he's a cool guy. Nah that's not really the word for it, I want him to have watched a lot of movies and games and stuff. Wyatt's great for a kind a geek guy but who knows when we'll meet him. I know the word for it, I want Jeremy to be genre savvy.
Well I'm sure whoever goes will focus mostly on the escape where they would have to be quite, so I can start building that part of his character when he's out.
How many posts do we have on average here everyday? And do we have for the most part like 5 people writing in here, or a lot of different people? I'm sorry about the questions, but i'm most likely gonna stay here and write, so would be good to know .
I'm in Sweden so, a lot of people might write whilst i'm sleeping (in which i'm about to do now x3), so maybe you guys can say which country you live in and your timezone? Would be sorta good to know, for whatever reason :P.
Depends. sometimes we have 2 posts sopmetimes 10 it really depends on what we are doing. like now im watching the 20/20 big bash and im wating for someone to do Jeremys story. People do post while im sleeping (Being australian and all) but i catch up. its good to have more writers
How many posts do we have on average here everyday? And do we have for the most part like 5 people writing in here, or a lot of different peop… morele? I'm sorry about the questions, but i'm most likely gonna stay here and write, so would be good to know .
I'm in Sweden so, a lot of people might write whilst i'm sleeping (in which i'm about to do now x3), so maybe you guys can say which country you live in and your timezone? Would be sorta good to know, for whatever reason :P.
Depends. sometimes we have 2 posts sopmetimes 10 it really depends on what we are doing. like now im watching the 20/20 big bash and im wating… more for someone to do Jeremys story. People do post while im sleeping (Being australian and all) but i catch up. its good to have more writers
How many posts do we have on average here everyday? And do we have for the most part like 5 people writing in here, or a lot of different peop… morele? I'm sorry about the questions, but i'm most likely gonna stay here and write, so would be good to know .
I'm in Sweden so, a lot of people might write whilst i'm sleeping (in which i'm about to do now x3), so maybe you guys can say which country you live in and your timezone? Would be sorta good to know, for whatever reason :P.
Well I'm sure whoever goes will focus mostly on the escape where they would have to be quite, so I can start building that part of his character when he's out.
Good question. I didn't ignore it. I just assumed HSPlazerz part away where he/she said that Clementine just woke up, then it makes sense. Maybe this could be edited? Either way, you both made similar texts which don't contradict so I guess it's okay
Jessica and Eddie are a couple, she dresses emo/scenester like
Charlie: he is twisted, a mature young boy (7yo) who's very attached to his … morerifle, also a good sense for grownups and their actions/behaviour towards kids. He likes Clementine as a new sister, wants to protect her but also to teach her in being selfconfident and brave. He can be serious as well as behaving like a typical kid. Charlie lost his mother and brothers and sisters to New Crawford
Pascucci: he is a skinny italian looking man, wears clothes with not matching colours (green and orange) ans is a friendly normal guy, who can be very brutal when the situation asks for it. He has become a fellow of Kenny's
Tyler: He is very muscular and tall, but rather quiet and shy fella. He is friendly and calm but can be proactive when needed. Tyler is very attentive. He is very devoted to Miranda the pug puppy. Also Tyler used to be a vet, so he has doctor skills
Eva: lost her frie… [view original content]
Oh, I actually wrote that little bit of her dying as if they were sisters. Well, I guess Eva's father could have been a father-figure to Emma as well, so it still makes sense.
Jeremy tried to stop the phial from rolling any further by blocking it with his foot, but he was still a little woozy from the drugs. His foot reached the phial just too late, and landed right on top of it, leading to the tender glass breaking.
''Damnit.'', Jeremy bit his lip to try and hide the pain, the shards of glass had cut into his foot, it was bleeding heavily. To make matters worse, the breaking of the glass had caused a lot of noise, and voices could be heard from outside of the room.
In the meantime, Gus had managed to place the syringe in his hands, ''Shit, I hear someone coming.'' he whispered while dropping the syringe again, ''Just stay quiet, and act like your drugged.''.
The metal doors opened once again, and Jeremy could hear the footsteps of presumably one person walking towards him. Jeremy never was a very religious person, but now he started praying like it was the end of the world again. His silent prayers were ended with a slap in his face. Feeling a burning sensation on his left cheek Jeremy opened his eyes just a crack, and saw the silhouette of a slender woman with a grim look on her face.
''You are going to come with me.''.
Jeremy felt a bit of relief when his wrists were freed. He was still sitting on his sore knees, he opened his eyes and kept staring at the floor until the woman named Ruth finally ordered him to stand up. She noticed blood spilling from his right foot, but let Jeremy struggle to get up none the less. When Jeremy finally did get up, he took what he thought was a final glance at his seemingly drugged friend Gus.
''Don't worry, your friend will be fed, very soon.'', Ruth said before closing the metal doors.
-SCENE SWAP-
Jeremy tried to stop the phial from rolling any further by blocking it with his foot, but he was still a little woozy from the… more drugs. His foot reached the phial just too late, and landed right on top of it, leading to the tender glass breaking.
''Damnit.'', Jeremy bit his lip to try and hide the pain, the shards of glass had cut into his foot, it was bleeding heavily. To make matters worse, the breaking of the glass had caused a lot of noise, and voices could be heard from outside of the room.
In the meantime, Gus had managed to place the syringe in his hands, ''Shit, I hear someone coming.'' he whispered while dropping the syringe again, ''Just stay quiet, and act like your drugged.''.
The metal doors opened once again, and Jeremy could hear the footsteps of presumably one person walking towards him. Jeremy never was a very religious person, but now he started praying like it was the end of the world again. His silent pr… [view original content]
it's a small jar with medicine in it. you can push the syringe in it to fill it with the fluid
EDIT: I changed the name into 'phial', I think it's clearer. If so knows the correct word please share
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You don't have to do it as it's a lot of work
You can just write without being too worried about mistakes. We've all made mistakes in the past and other people here just correct you. Worst that can happen is that you must edit a comment. If you need any question to be answered we're here
Alright, got it
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Helped out even more, again, thanks ;D.
The morning passed as Clem & Charlie woke up.
"The decision is yours Clementine, but I'd love if it you could come. Please? You're like my best friend, like a sibling. I'd like it if you went with me" Charlie said.
Clem nodded, seemingly not knowing what to do, and knew she had to make a decision soon........
"Are you sure Charlie?" Jessica asked.
"I'm sure, it's our fault that Emma died. We brought a reign of terror to this farm and I can't live with that. I'm going with Kenny and Pascucci. I want Clem to go too" Charlie said.
"Clem is staying with us! I know I seem protective, but she needs to be somewhere safe, somewhere with food" Jessica said, accidentally shouting.
"No need to shout Jess" Eddie said.
"Clementine is going with us. I've been with her since the start lady!" Kenny said.
"Guy's let's stop arguing we don't need to attract any walkers with this noise" Jacob said.
"Well I think that maybe you should all go. You've completely destroyed my family!" Eva said, sadly before rushing out of the room.
Tyler sighed "maybe she's right?" he asked.
"No, Tyler, it's best for us all to stay" Jacob replied.
"Guess you're right" Tyler said with unease.
"Clem's coming WITH US!" Jessica said.
"I don't think so! She'll be better off in an area with no walkers!" Kenny shouted.
"Hold up...why don't we let Clem decide?" Pascucci said.
They all turned around to Clementine. Clem looked at everyone, and knew she had to make an answer now...
CONTINUE
This is my first post, so it might be the worst thing you've ever read xP
"Clementine! Charlie!" Clementine instantly wakes up. "Both of yo-" Jessica gets cut off by Kenny.
"Come on Jessica, they can make their own goddamn decisions about this, just becuase they're children doesn't mean they're somehow worse than us." says Kenny.
"They'll die out there with just you and Pascucci" says Jessica.
"The fuck's that supposed to mean? We're better off on our own, just look at Emm-" Says Kenny.
"Don't you dare say anything about her..." Eva says.
"This was one attack, ONE since these past months, i figure we're still pretty damn safe." Says Jessica.
"Safe? Oh yeah, but for how long? We need food, i figure what we have now is only one month worth of it. We've been here a long fucking time,
enough for the food around this farm to be practically non existent, and since the last attack, a lot of the things we get food from are simply not THERE anymore, we need to keep moving, for someplace safe, and better than this." Kenny says.
"The fuck do you know about someplace saf-" Jessica gets stopped by Clementine.
"SHUT UP." Clem says, everyone stops.
Jacob comes in. "What the hell is going on in here?" he says.
"Ken and Jess." Clem says angry.
"Come on you guys, we talked about this, we let THEM decide, alright? Not you Jessica, nor Kenny, so, Charlie, what do you think?" Jacob says.
"I go, end of story." Charlie says immediatly. He looks at Clementine and thinks for a little bit. "But what about you?".
"I... I..." Clementine stutters.
"Whatever you think, it's okay." Jacob says".
"Le- Lee said that i always should keep moving, and never stay at one place. This place has run it's course" Clementine says, saddened by the memories... "But, he died because of it to... I don't know..."
After a long silence, Clementine decides "I'm, I'm going".
"But please, please, think about us!" Jessica says".
Clem walks away and says without any expression "No."
Continue
The goodbyes were kept short. Jessica made one more attempt to change Clementine's mind before they left but her resolve was iron. She could never look back on, but instead keep moving forward and never give up. She had to believe in herself just like Lee had believed in her. She had demanded a gun from Kenny and had attained one shortly before they left, she would use her gun to protect those she cared about and herself. Lastly she would keep the hope that Lee had shared with her in her heart, that one day the world would go back to normal someday, even if it was far in the future. (I think this is a good time to switch back to Jeremy for a bit)
Oh wow, really? Thanks so much man
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Yours is better keep it I'll change mine to go after yours.
We have had this a couple of times. To prevent it make a comment like "its my turn, please wait" post it and then edit it into your Text
Got it.
"The goodbyes were kept short."
Love it
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Agreed, time for Jeremy :P.
I did that.
Very well done, btw
Really? Wow, never expected that, thank you so much!
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I'll be sure to continue around here
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Good idea - why don't you continue then
Why, You're very good. Can't wait to hear more
I've tried to imply it in the posts I wrote about Jeremy, but I hope he's a cool guy. Nah that's not really the word for it, I want him to have watched a lot of movies and games and stuff. Wyatt's great for a kind a geek guy but who knows when we'll meet him. I know the word for it, I want Jeremy to be genre savvy.
Right
and I should go to bed... It's very late and I gotta wake up in 5 hours...
I just went though.
Well I'm sure whoever goes will focus mostly on the escape where they would have to be quite, so I can start building that part of his character when he's out.
How many posts do we have on average here everyday? And do we have for the most part like 5 people writing in here, or a lot of different people? I'm sorry about the questions, but i'm most likely gonna stay here and write, so would be good to know
.
I'm in Sweden so, a lot of people might write whilst i'm sleeping (in which i'm about to do now x3), so maybe you guys can say which country you live in and your timezone? Would be sorta good to know, for whatever reason :P.
Depends. sometimes we have 2 posts sopmetimes 10 it really depends on what we are doing. like now im watching the 20/20 big bash and im wating for someone to do Jeremys story. People do post while im sleeping (Being australian and all) but i catch up. its good to have more writers
Good to know
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I like your writing and I'm glad you've joined. WELCOME !
This community is simply awesome, thank you
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Im going to play some borderlands with a bunch of guys so..... il do something later
Jigsaw voice
"Would you like to play a game?"
So was my post just ignored?
I finally finished from start. I was happy when someone used my name as a character. I don't remember who but it's cool.
Good question. I didn't ignore it. I just assumed HSPlazerz part away where he/she said that Clementine just woke up, then it makes sense. Maybe this could be edited? Either way, you both made similar texts which don't contradict so I guess it's okay
Is your name Pascucci?
Nah, cool name though. My real one is Jessica.
How about Clementine went back to sleep.She slept on it.
I think Emma was actually Eva's sister. I could be wrong though.
I thought so too and looked it up: the one who invented them wrote "friend"
Oh, I actually wrote that little bit of her dying as if they were sisters. Well, I guess Eva's father could have been a father-figure to Emma as well, so it still makes sense.
-SCENE SWAP-
Jeremy tried to stop the phial from rolling any further by blocking it with his foot, but he was still a little woozy from the drugs. His foot reached the phial just too late, and landed right on top of it, leading to the tender glass breaking.
''Damnit.'', Jeremy bit his lip to try and hide the pain, the shards of glass had cut into his foot, it was bleeding heavily. To make matters worse, the breaking of the glass had caused a lot of noise, and voices could be heard from outside of the room.
In the meantime, Gus had managed to place the syringe in his hands, ''Shit, I hear someone coming.'' he whispered while dropping the syringe again, ''Just stay quiet, and act like your drugged.''.
The metal doors opened once again, and Jeremy could hear the footsteps of presumably one person walking towards him. Jeremy never was a very religious person, but now he started praying like it was the end of the world again. His silent prayers were ended with a slap in his face. Feeling a burning sensation on his left cheek Jeremy opened his eyes just a crack, and saw the silhouette of a slender woman with a grim look on her face.
''You are going to come with me.''.
Jeremy felt a bit of relief when his wrists were freed. He was still sitting on his sore knees, he opened his eyes and kept staring at the floor until the woman named Ruth finally ordered him to stand up. She noticed blood spilling from his right foot, but let Jeremy struggle to get up none the less. When Jeremy finally did get up, he took what he thought was a final glance at his seemingly drugged friend Gus.
''Don't worry, your friend will be fed, very soon.'', Ruth said before closing the metal doors.
it's a small jar with medicine in it. you can push the syringe in it to fill it with the fluid
EDIT: I changed the name into 'phial', I think it's clearer. If so knows the correct word please share
Thanks. :P