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Jeremy tried to stop the phial from rolling any further by blocking it with his foot, but he was still a little woozy from the… more drugs. His foot reached the phial just too late, and landed right on top of it, leading to the tender glass breaking.
''Damnit.'', Jeremy bit his lip to try and hide the pain, the shards of glass had cut into his foot, it was bleeding heavily. To make matters worse, the breaking of the glass had caused a lot of noise, and voices could be heard from outside of the room.
In the meantime, Gus had managed to place the syringe in his hands, ''Shit, I hear someone coming.'' he whispered while dropping the syringe again, ''Just stay quiet, and act like your drugged.''.
The metal doors opened once again, and Jeremy could hear the footsteps of presumably one person walking towards him. Jeremy never was a very religious person, but now he started praying like it was the end of the world again. His silent pr… [view original content]
Gus is now seemingly drugged, to avoid confusion. I believe Dave is somewhere in the meat-locker or prison as well, not sure though. and the German guy is one of Tavia's henchmen, Jeremy is going to the slaughterhouse (Which he'll survive, don't worry.)
I personally feel like the Jeremy story is a little tough to write on, there's just not all that much to go on, it can honestly go anywhere from now xP.
I guess i'm a-okay (Nate reference :P) at writing if i know the specific scenario and what's sorta supposed to happen, like with my first post, but when i can somewhat control the entire story to where it's gonna go, that is sorta scary considering how much i can possibly fail at it .
So you might see me write more on Clems group rather than Jeremy simply :P.
I was also wondering where Jeremy and Clem are. I know that Clem just left the farm and all that but i mean the city, and how far away they are from eachother.
What I intended with my post was for Jeremy to go the place where they slaughter their meat (Human meat, that is.). After a long and intense fight Jeremy finally wins by killing the German butcher, and he proceeds to release the others, after putting on some clothes ;P .
In the end of this episode, Tavia's community has fallen, but Tavia is still alive, and quite some time later she encounters another, actually good, community, this is the one she will be with at the end of 400 days. (So basically, make sure Tavia doesn't die for continuity's sake.)
To answer your question, a few pages back someone made a list of all the locations our characters have been so far, including the farm. Look around google maps and try to find the closest city to the north of it.
I personally feel like the Jeremy story is a little tough to write on, there's just not all that much to go on, it can honestly go anywhere fr… moreom now xP.
I guess i'm a-okay (Nate reference :P) at writing if i know the specific scenario and what's sorta supposed to happen, like with my first post, but when i can somewhat control the entire story to where it's gonna go, that is sorta scary considering how much i can possibly fail at it .
So you might see me write more on Clems group rather than Jeremy simply :P.
I was also wondering where Jeremy and Clem are. I know that Clem just left the farm and all that but i mean the city, and how far away they are from eachother.
Okay, after a short search I think the town Jeremy currently resides in is St Stephen if it's supposed to be a small town, but it could also be a larger town named Florence. Another possibility is a city even farther up named Greensboro. But the group would have to travel very far to go up there.
What I intended with my post was for Jeremy to go the place where they slaughter their meat (Human meat, that is.). After a long and intense f… moreight Jeremy finally wins by killing the German butcher, and he proceeds to release the others, after putting on some clothes ;P .
In the end of this episode, Tavia's community has fallen, but Tavia is still alive, and quite some time later she encounters another, actually good, community, this is the one she will be with at the end of 400 days. (So basically, make sure Tavia doesn't die for continuity's sake.)
To answer your question, a few pages back someone made a list of all the locations our characters have been so far, including the farm. Look around google maps and try to find the closest city to the north of it.
Savannah National Wildlife Refuge 694 Beech Hill Lane Hardeeville, SC 29927, United States
The group then met nate and when upwards towards Yamasse but found kenny and zombie doug just outside the town of
Ridgeland, SC, United States
The only retirement home that i could fine was in ridegland.
Ridgeland Nursing Center 1516 Grays Highway Ridgeland, SC 29936, United States
The nearest cabin i could find is a bit far off. 20 minutes on foot
Lakeview Terrace SC United States
Here i have encounted a problem. there are no coffee shops near the cabin. i vote that the 2 jeeps appear the one has eddie in it is the ine clem gets into and the other one picks up kenny and charlie. the first jeep (Eddies) almost gets to the coffee shop but stops here
Yemassee, SC, United States Zahler St
The location of the shooter (When tyler was shot) is near here
Cherokee Plantation 5109 Combahee Road Yemassee, SC 29945, United States
The location of "New Crawford" is a school. thats the only way i could explain the portables
Newville School SC United States
the Coffee shop is located here
Yemassee, SC, United States Town Clerk 101 Castle Hall Road
The church is located here
Victory Baptist Church 161 Maple Ridge Road Walterboro, SC 29488, United States
The "Plane crash" scene occurs on this road
Sunrise Rd, Smoaks, SC, United States
The farm was hard to find. and i couldn't find any farms near the church. so i had to put it here: a far away place with a big patch of greenery
Old Santee Canal State Park Moncks Corner, SC 29461 United States
Okay, after a short search I think the town Jeremy currently resides in is St Stephen if it's supposed to be a small town, but it could also b… moree a larger town named Florence. Another possibility is a city even farther up named Greensboro. But the group would have to travel very far to go up there.
@Lord_zasca said:
Savannah National Wildlife Refuge 694 Beech Hill Lane Hardeeville, SC 29927, United States
The group then met n… moreate and when upwards towards Yamasse but found kenny and zombie doug just outside the town of
Ridgeland, SC, United States
The only retirement home that i could fine was in ridegland.
Ridgeland Nursing Center 1516 Grays Highway Ridgeland, SC 29936, United States
The nearest cabin i could find is a bit far off. 20 minutes on foot
Lakeview Terrace SC United States
Here i have encounted a problem. there are no coffee shops near the cabin. i vote that the 2 jeeps appear the one has eddie in it is the ine clem gets into and the other one picks up kenny and charlie. the first jeep (Eddies) almost gets to the coffee shop but stops here
Yemassee, SC, United States Zahler St
The location of the shooter (When tyler was shot) is near here
Cherokee Plantat… [view original content]
I'll clarify.
Gus is now seemingly drugged, to avoid confusion. I believe Dave is somewhere in the meat-locker or prison as well, not sure … morethough. and the German guy is one of Tavia's henchmen, Jeremy is going to the slaughterhouse (Which he'll survive, don't worry.)
Maybe Ruth was taking a leak when the guards heard the phial break and went in without her permission, seeing as she doesn't seem to be a very respected figure, it could work.
If it doesn't, I'll adapt the story so that Ruth brings him to the butcher, aka the German man.
Also: in my story Tavia told Ruth to feed on Alfredo first and then after a week not sooner they allowed to eat one of the other imprisoners. Let's solve this
I'll clarify.
Gus is now seemingly drugged, to avoid confusion. I believe Dave is somewhere in the meat-locker or prison as well, not sure … morethough. and the German guy is one of Tavia's henchmen, Jeremy is going to the slaughterhouse (Which he'll survive, don't worry.)
I feel like I'm screwing up a lot. Might have to do with the scene swaps confusing me. ' : s
But they are bringing Jeremy to the butcher because he is bleeding and possibly dying anyway, and they don't want to waste precious medical supplies on their food.
Also: in my story Tavia told Ruth to feed on Alfredo first and then after a week not sooner they allowed to eat one of the other imprisoners. Let's solve this
I feel like I'm screwing up a lot. Might have to do with the scene swaps confusing me. ' : s
But they are bringing Jeremy to the butcher be… morecause he is bleeding and possibly dying anyway, and they don't want to waste precious medical supplies on their food.
I feel like I'm screwing up a lot. Might have to do with the scene swaps confusing me. ' : s
But they are bringing Jeremy to the butcher be… morecause he is bleeding and possibly dying anyway, and they don't want to waste precious medical supplies on their food.
Jeremy can feel his heartbeat speeding while they are walking down the hallway. He tries to get free, but he's only strong enough to just take one step after another. "I knew you were trying to fool us... that's why I left the syringe and the bottle to test you. And it worked... Tavia will be very proud." Says Ruth. Jeremy looks at her appereance: she is very slender, has a short bob haircut, black hair and she's wearing black clothes. Her yellow rain boots are covered in blood and muck. As they are downstairs they don't pass any other people. Jeremy can sense the sounds of people upstairs, though. Do they know what's going on at this place? If they do: how can they have peace of mind, knowing that random people get tortured and abused - just for a warm meal? The familar sound of a metal door being opened made him stop tot hink about it any further. "Step inside." Ruth kicks him from behind so Jeremy falls on the ground and the door bangs. Very slowly he raises his head: a muscular man with the appeareance of a chunky butcher stays infront of him with a large knife in his hand. "I haven't expected to deal with another quarry today." He says with a german accent (Jeremy recognised it since he studied a year abroad - half a year in Netherlands and the rest of it in Germany. Good times...). The butcher leads him to a low table, looks at him closely and eventually demands Jeremy to sit down but he can barely do it - it's just strength-sapping. "I see... You won't be any trouble." states the butcher, turning around towards another table at the end of the room, there dealing with some kind of tools and knifes.
Jeremy takes the opportunity to look around. There's still some fresh blood on the floor, probably Alfredo's... shit... I have to get out of here, and Dave, too - it's now or never!
As he is looking for an escape Jeremy recognizes a small window with grates, but wait.. What is that? Yes, it's a face!. A black haired man looks through the tiny window. Waging his hands and obviously trying to communicate, but not with Jeremy - but who? As Jeremy turns his head into the same direction the stranger is looking to he cannot trust his eyes: A moustached man with long hair and a trucker hat is hiding behind a bunch of barrels, pointing his forefinger to his mouh telling Jeremy to be quiet...
How do Kenny and Pascucci get there? Please continue with the other story arc - Kenny, Pascucci, Clem and Charlie (2 weeks - 1 day earlier)
Clem was bored. sitting in the car alone was not the most exciting thing in the world. Kenny and pascucci had started a fire to try and cook the Rabbit they had killed and charlie was looking for more wood to make the flames grow.Instantly she remembered something she could use Clementine reached into the back of the Jeep and grabbed the Walke Talke and turned it on.
"Hello..." she said nervously
"Um....Who is this" said a voice on the radio that she didint know but still sounded strangley familiar clementine dropped the Walke talke Just as kenny called for dinner
Jeremy can feel his heartbeat speeding while they are walking down the hallway. He tries to get free, but he's only strong enough to just take… more one step after another. "I knew you were trying to fool us... that's why I left the syringe and the bottle to test you. And it worked... Tavia will be very proud." Says Ruth. Jeremy looks at her appereance: she is very slender, has a short bob haircut, black hair and she's wearing black clothes. Her yellow rain boots are covered in blood and muck. As they are downstairs they don't pass any other people. Jeremy can sense the sounds of people upstairs, though. Do they know what's going on at this place? If they do: how can they have peace of mind, knowing that random people get tortured and abused - just for a warm meal? The familar sound of a metal door being opened made him stop tot hink about it any further. "Step inside." Ruth kicks him from behind so Jeremy falls on the ground and the door bangs. Very s… [view original content]
Clementine was shocked... the voice reminded her of the shot... the sudden event... could it really be her?
"Clementine? Are you coming?" Says Kenny.
"I'm on my way..." Clem said a little bit quiet.
"She already killed her... she already took our truck, i'm done with her that... that..." Clementine said to herself.
"Come on Clementine, it's one hell of a rabbit we got here" Kenny smiled.
Clementine walked out to the fire and sat down.
"Here you go Clem." Kenny said a little slowly, wondering how Clem was.
"Are you alright Clementine? You look a little bit worried."
"I'm alright i guess..." Clementine said, still a bit shocked about her...
"Clem, it's alright if your sad, we just left the group, you might feel guilty for leaving them, for leaving Jessicas chi-" Kenny says before Clem cuts him off.
"I don't need to be reminded of that..." Clem says a little bit angry.
Charlie comes back with some more wood, looking rather happy.
"So, are we all ready for some food? I'm quite so hungry, has anyone tasted it yet? How is it?" Charlie says with a smile.
No one answers.
"Did i miss something?"
"Uh, wel-" Kenny says
"Nothing, you missed nothing." Clem says.
"Come on Clementine, whatever it is, it's alright" Kenny said.
"It's nothing! Alright? Please, i feel like you treat me way to much like a child, i can handle a frickin' gun now!" Clementine says.
"Sorry Clem... but you know i care about you, right? And if you don't care for that, Lee said tha-" Kenny says before getting stopped by Charlie.
"Don't." Charlie whipsers to Kenny.
Nobody says anything for a while until Pascucci comes.
"And where exactly have you been?" Kenny says.
"Guys, you need to hear this..." Pascucci says, worried.
"Oh no..:" Clem says to herself as she sees Pascucci holding the Walkie Talkie.
"Hey, who is this? Please, tell me! I need help... i'm all alone..." The strange voice in the Talkie says, breathing heavily...
Kenny looks suspiciously at Clementine.
"Who is this?" Kenny says.
"My name is... it's Danielle." The voice says.
"What should we do?" Charlie says.
"We need to know more about this "Danielle" before we make any decision." Kenny says.
"Sorry to ask you but, you sound a little bit young..." Pascucci says.
"I am." Danielle says.
"Well, where are you?" Kenny says.
"I'm near this place, this town with a lot of people. Though i escaped out of there." Danielle says.
"Why?" Kenny says.
"They... i saw some bandits from before, who tried to kill me, i don't know what they did to my mom... i don't want to know..." Danielle says, almost crying.
"But what i saw when i tried to escape was bad, real fucking bad..."
"They are fucking cannibals..:" She said, disgusted.
"Oh jesus... not again..." Kenny said.
Right before Kenny was about to say something, Clementine walks over to the Talkie.
"Who was the woman who talked before?" Clementine said.
Everyone looks at Clementine.
"Who was it?" Clem said.
"I don't know, i stole this from someone, her name i think was, Lilly? I don't really know though."
Ok HSP look forward to that. But I agree, we need some deaths in this thing! Also will we meet with Jessica and co? Or find their dead bodies? Or some of their dead bodies? Or maybe they're alive. Don't write them back in yet, but it'll be interesting to see if they died in future chapters.
Clementine was shocked... the voice reminded her of the shot... the sudden event... could it really be her?
"Clementine? Are you coming?" S… moreays Kenny.
"I'm on my way..." Clem said a little bit quiet.
"She already killed her... she already took our truck, i'm done with her that... that..." Clementine said to herself.
"Come on Clementine, it's one hell of a rabbit we got here" Kenny smiled.
Clementine walked out to the fire and sat down.
"Here you go Clem." Kenny said a little slowly, wondering how Clem was.
"Are you alright Clementine? You look a little bit worried."
"I'm alright i guess..." Clementine said, still a bit shocked about her...
"Clem, it's alright if your sad, we just left the group, you might feel guilty for leaving them, for leaving Jessicas chi-" Kenny says before Clem cuts him off.
"I don't need to be reminded of that..." Clem says a little bit angry.
Charlie comes back with some more wood, looking … [view original content]
Believe me, some deaths are about to come, i mean, we did after all just leave the rest of the group at the Farm, so that's somewhat of a half-death type of deal :P.
Would be real cool though to later on return and find them in which ever condition they are in .
Ok HSP look forward to that. But I agree, we need some deaths in this thing! Also will we meet with Jessica and co? Or find their dead bodies?… more Or some of their dead bodies? Or maybe they're alive. Don't write them back in yet, but it'll be interesting to see if they died in future chapters.
Thank you, i was always interested in what truly happened to her. I also thought it'd be interesting to have some sort of "secret" that some might not possibly know of, or at the very least have to think a little bit about who it is. Also nice with some sort of return, but that is not massive.
I'm thinking by the way for others that Danielle will somehow connect Jeremy and Clem together in someway.
Believe me, some deaths are about to come, i mean, we did after all just leave the rest of the group at the Farm, so that's somewhat of a half… more-death type of deal :P.
Would be real cool though to later on return and find them in which ever condition they are in .
Lilly Knew she wasnt going to make it. the plane was going down hard and that was partially her fault. What was SHE thinking? she had a small desk job and had only piloted once in her life before and that was with ascictance and in a small helicopter not something as big as this she ditched the controls and ran to the first row of seats where her backpack was sitting. lilly didn't have much. Binoculars, a small gun and a few food packs. she grabbed the parachute and put it on her back. the plane got closer and closer to the ground until lilly could see it. she ran to the emergency exit door and lept out of the plane screaming and fumbling for the parachute cord. Lilly eventually pulled it and her decent was slowed dramatically. The plane crash was defening and lilly ears had a ring in them. she noticed all the walkers shuffle over to the plane to investigate. this would buy her some time. she got closer and closer until she landed and fell onto to some soft grass she heard a car moving and stumbled closer to it but saw nothing. She examined her surroundings and saw an empty road with trees bordering it. she knew she could sleep in the trees to hide from the walkers but for the first time she was alone. with no group and no incentive or no derection. lilly walked down the road
**8 Weeks later**
Lilly studied the farm. it had 5 people but she still wasnt shure about trying to get in the group. the farm had everything she needed. food, company and a safe place. she watched as a tall brown haired man sat on the porch. she had watched him for 3 days now and not only was he very experienced with his surroundings but he was kind of cute. Lilly wasn't the type for romance but this man was tempting her. she left the trees just as the man went inside and a blonde haired muscular guy saw her. He saw her and pulled out his gun
'Woah" said lilly politely "Im not going to hurt you i just want to see if i can join this little group of yours."
"Let me talk with my associates" the man said and he went inside. as lilly waited a pug came running out at her and jumped on her. it was the first time she had been genuinly happy in the last 8 weeks. The entire group came out and the blonde haired man started talking
"Whats your name?" he asked
"Lilly" she said in response
"Okay lilly" said the man "You can join but we will be cautious and not trust you at first and if we dont like you we will kick you out understand?"
"Yes" said lilly as she waled into the house. for the first time in weeks she found something. Hope
**3 days later**
Lilly was adjusting to life on the farm well. there was no worry about walkers or food, it was happyness and she felt that he belonged here. All the people where nice though she was uncertian about Eva. she wasn't very open about anything and she seemed to keep her distance from her. Jacob on the other hand was the best. not only was he strong and cute but he had a good personality. he could be tough when the time called for it and he was really growing on lilly. She had finished working on the Potatoes and was called in for dinner. just as she got near the house she heared Eva and jacob talking
"So...uhh..." Eva began
"What is it?" Jacob asked curiously
"Your an idiot!" Yelled Eva angrily
"Okay" said jacob taking a step back
"No its just that.... you cant read woman" eva began "I have been trying to reach out to you for 6 months and so has this new chick thats stumbled onto the block wants you to and you STILL don't see it"
"So... your asking me out?" Jacob asked
"YES!" she said and she hugged jacob. Lilly drew her gun not thinking about what happened last time she amied at eva and began to fire however jacob saw and pushed her out of the way causing the bullet to hit jacob in the shoulder (Jacob was at least a head above eva) Jacobs body fell to the ground and eva lept down onto him
"You fucking monster" she yelled "You KILLED HIM!"
"No...." said lilly "Not again...." Tyler rushed outside and ran over to jacob faster than a bullet. he then ran back inside to get his medical supplies Eva was crying over his body and desperately trying to revive him Eddie and Jessica ran out outside and jessica started crying to and she reveived a hug from eddie. Tyler ran outside with is medical bag and Lillys bag witch he threw on the floor. Lilly knew she did something wrong and she walked off the farm to continue the road looking at Jacobs lifeless body as it was carried inside
Nice, though the problem is, in my post above yours, Lilly is in the town that Jeremy and Danielle is in, as Danielle steals the Talkie from Lilly. Here is a few parts of it.
"I'm near this place, this town with a lot of people. Though i escaped out of there." Danielle says.
"They are fucking cannibals..:" She said, disgusted.
"Who was the woman who talked before?" Clementine said.
"I don't know, i stole this from someone, her name i think was, Lilly? I don't really know though."
**DLC: Plane crash explained**
Lilly Knew she wasnt going to make it. the plane was going down hard and that was partially her fault. What… more was SHE thinking? she had a small desk job and had only piloted once in her life before and that was with ascictance and in a small helicopter not something as big as this she ditched the controls and ran to the first row of seats where her backpack was sitting. lilly didn't have much. Binoculars, a small gun and a few food packs. she grabbed the parachute and put it on her back. the plane got closer and closer to the ground until lilly could see it. she ran to the emergency exit door and lept out of the plane screaming and fumbling for the parachute cord. Lilly eventually pulled it and her decent was slowed dramatically. The plane crash was defening and lilly ears had a ring in them. she noticed all the walkers shuffle over to the plane to investigate. this would buy her some time. she got closer and clo… [view original content]
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Okay then...
...Suddenly...
Rocks fall, everyone dies.
very clever
Sorry, but I don't get the last part - what happened to Gus? And what's the deal with Dave? Is Jeremy leaving the prison with the German guy?
I'll clarify.
Gus is now seemingly drugged, to avoid confusion. I believe Dave is somewhere in the meat-locker or prison as well, not sure though. and the German guy is one of Tavia's henchmen, Jeremy is going to the slaughterhouse (Which he'll survive, don't worry.)
I agree with that.
I personally feel like the Jeremy story is a little tough to write on, there's just not all that much to go on, it can honestly go anywhere from now xP.
I guess i'm a-okay (Nate reference :P) at writing if i know the specific scenario and what's sorta supposed to happen, like with my first post, but when i can somewhat control the entire story to where it's gonna go, that is sorta scary considering how much i can possibly fail at it
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So you might see me write more on Clems group rather than Jeremy simply :P.
I was also wondering where Jeremy and Clem are. I know that Clem just left the farm and all that but i mean the city, and how far away they are from eachother.
What I intended with my post was for Jeremy to go the place where they slaughter their meat (Human meat, that is.). After a long and intense fight Jeremy finally wins by killing the German butcher, and he proceeds to release the others, after putting on some clothes ;P .
In the end of this episode, Tavia's community has fallen, but Tavia is still alive, and quite some time later she encounters another, actually good, community, this is the one she will be with at the end of 400 days. (So basically, make sure Tavia doesn't die for continuity's sake.)
To answer your question, a few pages back someone made a list of all the locations our characters have been so far, including the farm. Look around google maps and try to find the closest city to the north of it.
Okay, after a short search I think the town Jeremy currently resides in is St Stephen if it's supposed to be a small town, but it could also be a larger town named Florence. Another possibility is a city even farther up named Greensboro. But the group would have to travel very far to go up there.
@Lord_zasca said:
That's the one.
I'm sorry to act like leuitenant Columbo
but one more question: hasn't Tavia told Ruth to let nobody else inside? I'm confused because the german man
So, Lord Zasca... Still playing borderlands
?
Maybe Ruth was taking a leak when the guards heard the phial break and went in without her permission, seeing as she doesn't seem to be a very respected figure, it could work.
If it doesn't, I'll adapt the story so that Ruth brings him to the butcher, aka the German man.
Also: in my story Tavia told Ruth to feed on Alfredo first and then after a week not sooner they allowed to eat one of the other imprisoners. Let's solve this
I feel like I'm screwing up a lot. Might have to do with the scene swaps confusing me. ' : s
But they are bringing Jeremy to the butcher because he is bleeding and possibly dying anyway, and they don't want to waste precious medical supplies on their food.
Okay, I changed it. Ruth is now the one to bring her to the butcher, which is still the German guy. Also, the last line was changed.
@HSPLazerz If you are going to write next, I have changed my post so that Ruth is the one to bring Jeremy to the butcher, aka the German guy.
You do very well, I've made several mistakes myself and it's just natural as he story has become so complex
Yeah, I guess. ; )
Jeremy can feel his heartbeat speeding while they are walking down the hallway. He tries to get free, but he's only strong enough to just take one step after another. "I knew you were trying to fool us... that's why I left the syringe and the bottle to test you. And it worked... Tavia will be very proud." Says Ruth. Jeremy looks at her appereance: she is very slender, has a short bob haircut, black hair and she's wearing black clothes. Her yellow rain boots are covered in blood and muck. As they are downstairs they don't pass any other people. Jeremy can sense the sounds of people upstairs, though. Do they know what's going on at this place? If they do: how can they have peace of mind, knowing that random people get tortured and abused - just for a warm meal? The familar sound of a metal door being opened made him stop tot hink about it any further. "Step inside." Ruth kicks him from behind so Jeremy falls on the ground and the door bangs. Very slowly he raises his head: a muscular man with the appeareance of a chunky butcher stays infront of him with a large knife in his hand. "I haven't expected to deal with another quarry today." He says with a german accent (Jeremy recognised it since he studied a year abroad - half a year in Netherlands and the rest of it in Germany. Good times...). The butcher leads him to a low table, looks at him closely and eventually demands Jeremy to sit down but he can barely do it - it's just strength-sapping. "I see... You won't be any trouble." states the butcher, turning around towards another table at the end of the room, there dealing with some kind of tools and knifes.
Jeremy takes the opportunity to look around. There's still some fresh blood on the floor, probably Alfredo's... shit... I have to get out of here, and Dave, too - it's now or never!
As he is looking for an escape Jeremy recognizes a small window with grates, but wait.. What is that? Yes, it's a face!. A black haired man looks through the tiny window. Waging his hands and obviously trying to communicate, but not with Jeremy - but who? As Jeremy turns his head into the same direction the stranger is looking to he cannot trust his eyes: A moustached man with long hair and a trucker hat is hiding behind a bunch of barrels, pointing his forefinger to his mouh telling Jeremy to be quiet...
How do Kenny and Pascucci get there?
Please continue with the other story arc - Kenny, Pascucci, Clem and Charlie (2 weeks - 1 day earlier)
Just got it from the psn store. only 12 bucks!
You are a modern genius
Im about to start writing a post for this but i also have a little "DLC" pack explaining the Plane crash scene coming soon
Awesome - can't wait
is this the longest TWD group fanfic, yet? I don't use to read fanfictions that's y I'm asking
Clem was bored. sitting in the car alone was not the most exciting thing in the world. Kenny and pascucci had started a fire to try and cook the Rabbit they had killed and charlie was looking for more wood to make the flames grow.Instantly she remembered something she could use Clementine reached into the back of the Jeep and grabbed the Walke Talke and turned it on.
"Hello..." she said nervously
"Um....Who is this" said a voice on the radio that she didint know but still sounded strangley familiar clementine dropped the Walke talke Just as kenny called for dinner
Continue
Herp derp, nevermind x3.
Is anybody going to to actually die eventually in the group or...?
(Spoilers fir who came to check the end before finishing.) Omid and Christa died. Amanda died and I guess Nate sort of counts.
which page does omid and christa die on
Clementine was shocked... the voice reminded her of the shot... the sudden event... could it really be her?
"Clementine? Are you coming?" Says Kenny.
"I'm on my way..." Clem said a little bit quiet.
"She already killed her... she already took our truck, i'm done with her that... that..." Clementine said to herself.
"Come on Clementine, it's one hell of a rabbit we got here" Kenny smiled.
Clementine walked out to the fire and sat down.
"Here you go Clem." Kenny said a little slowly, wondering how Clem was.
"Are you alright Clementine? You look a little bit worried."
"I'm alright i guess..." Clementine said, still a bit shocked about her...
"Clem, it's alright if your sad, we just left the group, you might feel guilty for leaving them, for leaving Jessicas chi-" Kenny says before Clem cuts him off.
"I don't need to be reminded of that..." Clem says a little bit angry.
Charlie comes back with some more wood, looking rather happy.
"So, are we all ready for some food? I'm quite so hungry, has anyone tasted it yet? How is it?" Charlie says with a smile.
No one answers.
"Did i miss something?"
"Uh, wel-" Kenny says
"Nothing, you missed nothing." Clem says.
"Come on Clementine, whatever it is, it's alright" Kenny said.
"It's nothing! Alright? Please, i feel like you treat me way to much like a child, i can handle a frickin' gun now!" Clementine says.
"Sorry Clem... but you know i care about you, right? And if you don't care for that, Lee said tha-" Kenny says before getting stopped by Charlie.
"Don't." Charlie whipsers to Kenny.
Nobody says anything for a while until Pascucci comes.
"And where exactly have you been?" Kenny says.
"Guys, you need to hear this..." Pascucci says, worried.
"Oh no..:" Clem says to herself as she sees Pascucci holding the Walkie Talkie.
"Hey, who is this? Please, tell me! I need help... i'm all alone..." The strange voice in the Talkie says, breathing heavily...
Kenny looks suspiciously at Clementine.
"Who is this?" Kenny says.
"My name is... it's Danielle." The voice says.
"What should we do?" Charlie says.
"We need to know more about this "Danielle" before we make any decision." Kenny says.
"Sorry to ask you but, you sound a little bit young..." Pascucci says.
"I am." Danielle says.
"Well, where are you?" Kenny says.
"I'm near this place, this town with a lot of people. Though i escaped out of there." Danielle says.
"Why?" Kenny says.
"They... i saw some bandits from before, who tried to kill me, i don't know what they did to my mom... i don't want to know..." Danielle says, almost crying.
"But what i saw when i tried to escape was bad, real fucking bad..."
"They are fucking cannibals..:" She said, disgusted.
"Oh jesus... not again..." Kenny said.
Right before Kenny was about to say something, Clementine walks over to the Talkie.
"Who was the woman who talked before?" Clementine said.
Everyone looks at Clementine.
"Who was it?" Clem said.
"I don't know, i stole this from someone, her name i think was, Lilly? I don't really know though."
"Motherfucker..." Kenny says.
Continue
Somewhere between eight and nine.
I said in a post that i have the deaths for EVERYONE in the group planned out should the time come for it.
Ok HSP look forward to that. But I agree, we need some deaths in this thing! Also will we meet with Jessica and co? Or find their dead bodies? Or some of their dead bodies? Or maybe they're alive. Don't write them back in yet, but it'll be interesting to see if they died in future chapters.
Nice! I wonder if Lilly is with Danielle or with Tavia.
Believe me, some deaths are about to come, i mean, we did after all just leave the rest of the group at the Farm, so that's somewhat of a half-death type of deal :P.
Would be real cool though to later on return and find them in which ever condition they are in
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Yes! Someone knew who it was!
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Thank you, i was always interested in what truly happened to her. I also thought it'd be interesting to have some sort of "secret" that some might not possibly know of, or at the very least have to think a little bit about who it is. Also nice with some sort of return, but that is not massive.
I'm thinking by the way for others that Danielle will somehow connect Jeremy and Clem together in someway.
Lol. I like how you included Jolene's daughter Danielle.
Lilly Knew she wasnt going to make it. the plane was going down hard and that was partially her fault. What was SHE thinking? she had a small desk job and had only piloted once in her life before and that was with ascictance and in a small helicopter not something as big as this she ditched the controls and ran to the first row of seats where her backpack was sitting. lilly didn't have much. Binoculars, a small gun and a few food packs. she grabbed the parachute and put it on her back. the plane got closer and closer to the ground until lilly could see it. she ran to the emergency exit door and lept out of the plane screaming and fumbling for the parachute cord. Lilly eventually pulled it and her decent was slowed dramatically. The plane crash was defening and lilly ears had a ring in them. she noticed all the walkers shuffle over to the plane to investigate. this would buy her some time. she got closer and closer until she landed and fell onto to some soft grass she heard a car moving and stumbled closer to it but saw nothing. She examined her surroundings and saw an empty road with trees bordering it. she knew she could sleep in the trees to hide from the walkers but for the first time she was alone. with no group and no incentive or no derection. lilly walked down the road
Lilly studied the farm. it had 5 people but she still wasnt shure about trying to get in the group. the farm had everything she needed. food, company and a safe place. she watched as a tall brown haired man sat on the porch. she had watched him for 3 days now and not only was he very experienced with his surroundings but he was kind of cute. Lilly wasn't the type for romance but this man was tempting her. she left the trees just as the man went inside and a blonde haired muscular guy saw her. He saw her and pulled out his gun
'Woah" said lilly politely "Im not going to hurt you i just want to see if i can join this little group of yours."
"Let me talk with my associates" the man said and he went inside. as lilly waited a pug came running out at her and jumped on her. it was the first time she had been genuinly happy in the last 8 weeks. The entire group came out and the blonde haired man started talking
"Whats your name?" he asked
"Lilly" she said in response
"Okay lilly" said the man "You can join but we will be cautious and not trust you at first and if we dont like you we will kick you out understand?"
"Yes" said lilly as she waled into the house. for the first time in weeks she found something. Hope
Lilly was adjusting to life on the farm well. there was no worry about walkers or food, it was happyness and she felt that he belonged here. All the people where nice though she was uncertian about Eva. she wasn't very open about anything and she seemed to keep her distance from her. Jacob on the other hand was the best. not only was he strong and cute but he had a good personality. he could be tough when the time called for it and he was really growing on lilly. She had finished working on the Potatoes and was called in for dinner. just as she got near the house she heared Eva and jacob talking
"So...uhh..." Eva began
"What is it?" Jacob asked curiously
"Your an idiot!" Yelled Eva angrily
"Okay" said jacob taking a step back
"No its just that.... you cant read woman" eva began "I have been trying to reach out to you for 6 months and so has this new chick thats stumbled onto the block wants you to and you STILL don't see it"
"So... your asking me out?" Jacob asked
"YES!" she said and she hugged jacob. Lilly drew her gun not thinking about what happened last time she amied at eva and began to fire however jacob saw and pushed her out of the way causing the bullet to hit jacob in the shoulder (Jacob was at least a head above eva) Jacobs body fell to the ground and eva lept down onto him
"You fucking monster" she yelled "You KILLED HIM!"
"No...." said lilly "Not again...." Tyler rushed outside and ran over to jacob faster than a bullet. he then ran back inside to get his medical supplies Eva was crying over his body and desperately trying to revive him Eddie and Jessica ran out outside and jessica started crying to and she reveived a hug from eddie. Tyler ran outside with is medical bag and Lillys bag witch he threw on the floor. Lilly knew she did something wrong and she walked off the farm to continue the road looking at Jacobs lifeless body as it was carried inside
Nice, though the problem is, in my post above yours, Lilly is in the town that Jeremy and Danielle is in, as Danielle steals the Talkie from Lilly. Here is a few parts of it.
Other than that, good job
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