I dont get it? Yeah it was kind of freaky i have not checked past postes but i assume that from what you are saying that he came on here and did stuff. if it was him he would have sweared a lot and stuffed up the document. Tyler is on the phone and he says that when he un hacked the photos it was still messed up with sweare words and bizzarly pictures of negan (And more disqusting ones that tyler will not tell me because "Thats some fucked up shit dude"
Edit: Oh shit just saw the stuffs. he even writes like a shitty version of me! he is good
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Some musical accompaniment
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"I had known her my entire life. Our family's had both decided to live out in the country so we wer… moree the only two kids around. Or parents tried to home school us at first, but that didn't work out so we ended up taking these long ass bus rides. Anyway being the only two kids around we grew close rather quickly. At age ten things started moving faster, she started saying things about being more then friends. I was a ten year old boy so of course I was oblivious. However even though I didn't know it we started getting even closer then we were. She'd start holding my hand on the long walks to the bus stop. On my eleventh birthday we ran into the forest to play, and I challenged her to a race up a tree. Hannah could climb better then anyone, but she let me win. That's the kinda person she was."
"When we got to the top of the tree we were both out of breath and so we sat there, for a long time. It had been… [view original content]
Yeah, I kind of left her story open, in case in the far future she were to somehow make a return. But Bryan searched the whole safe zone for h… moreer, (and probably the area.) And eventually had to leave the city due to walker numbers, and hasn't given up on finding her.
If you don't mind me asking, What time is it where you are right now? Because it seems like a lot of you guys are sleeping at the same time it's mid-day for me. Right now,it's midnight for me.
Fuck it, everyone deserves a second chance, so I'l believe your story (well, I kinda don't put you're still welcome to come back, forgive me for my skepticism). Welcome back.
I dont get it? Yeah it was kind of freaky i have not checked past postes but i assume that from what you are saying that he came on here and … moredid stuff. if it was him he would have sweared a lot and stuffed up the document. Tyler is on the phone and he says that when he un hacked the photos it was still messed up with sweare words and bizzarly pictures of negan (And more disqusting ones that tyler will not tell me because "Thats some fucked up shit dude"
Edit: Oh shit just saw the stuffs. he even writes like a shitty version of me! he is good
@TheZascaLivesOn
Fuck it, everyone deserves a second chance, so I'l believe your story (well, I kinda don't put you're still welcome to come back, forgive me for my skepticism). Welcome back.
Clementine wipes away a tear from her cheek. Her signature hat leaves a grim shadow on her hardened face. The group quietly continues eating their meals before Danielle starts talking. ''You talked to me about Hannah once before. You said you traveled together, and you even told me about how you met. Does that mean...'' Bryan stares into the fire. His face has twisted into a deep frown. ''I know what I told you.'', he says before standing up. ''I lied to you. I just arrived, and I didn't know if I could fully trust this group. I'm sorry.'' ''You don't have to apologize. For all you knew we could have been bandits, cannibals or worse.'', Jeremy comforts him, ''We're all just trying to survive.''
''I'm glad I've told you the true story. Everyone should get some rest, we've still got a long road ahead of us.''
-SCENE SWAP-
Clementine is holding his hand again. The warmth of her little hand gives him a feeling of strength and a will to carry on. The soft skin and the seemingly fragile structure of the palm of her hand reminds Bryan of the walks he and Hannah used to take in the same way during the summer. The air was crisp, and smelled just like it does today. As he looks around the forest he notices the previously barren trees are beginning to spring life once again. Leaves fill the branches and birds are chirping. Bryan looks down at Clementine. ''What a beautiful day, huh?'' Clementine shrugs. Her dark expression and watery eyes seem to drain the feeling of hope he had just a moment ago. The group quietly keeps moving, their loud way of walking worries Bryan. He used to sneak around the forest, observing Clem's group all the time, and he never made a sound. He decides to shrug off the thought and keeps walking.
(Play this song by Anadel, the same people who made ''In the water'': )
After a few minutes of silence Clementine suddenly asks him something. ''Do you think she's still alive?'', her voice is cracking. Bryan's grim expression takes on an even darker tone. He has been lying once again. He takes a deep breath before answering. ''She is dead.'', his throat feels dry, while his eyes feel wetter by the second. ''When I told you about what happened, that I was in the bathroom and I tried to find her after that. What I really meant was...'' He suppresses the tears eagerly waiting to escape his eyes. ''She got bit. Don't ask me how. She was the smartest person I had ever met. It really shouldn't have happened, but...''
''It did.'', Clementine finishes his sentence. Does she know how it feels? Does she still feel guilty about her caretaker, Lee? ''We survived for as long as we could. We told ourselves she wasn't like the others, and that she would make it. We didn't even think about cutting it off...'', he finally gives up fighting it and lets the tears flow out. ''And now she's dead... I could have saved her. I could have let her into that bathroom with me.'' He sighs. '' I couldn't bring myself to kill her, so I left her there, tied up to a pole like some sort of animal. Sometimes, I see her face in one of those ghosts. The thought of her walking around somewhere, eating people, still haunts my dreams every,single,night.
''That's what I meant when I said that I was still looking for her. I want to kill her ghost. I need to kill her ghost.''
Damn, it felt a lot longer while I was writing this. Well, at least it's extremely emotional. Don't be surprised if you suddenly tear up, there's been reports of ninja's infiltrating houses and cutting onions around you to make you cry. It happened to me once!
And no, it's NOT crying! It's like I said, ninja's... and onions...
Clementine wipes away a tear from her cheek. Her signature hat leaves a grim shadow on her hardened face. The group quietly continues eating t… moreheir meals before Danielle starts talking. ''You talked to me about Hannah once before. You said you traveled together, and you even told me about how you met. Does that mean...'' Bryan stares into the fire. His face has twisted into a deep frown. ''I know what I told you.'', he says before standing up. ''I lied to you. I just arrived, and I didn't know if I could fully trust this group. I'm sorry.'' ''You don't have to apologize. For all you knew we could have been bandits, cannibals or worse.'', Jeremy comforts him, ''We're all just trying to survive.''
''I'm glad I've told you the true story. Everyone should get some rest, we've still got a long road ahead of us.''
-SCENE SWAP-
Clementine is holding his hand again. The warmth of her little hand gives him a feeling of strength and a will to carry… [view original content]
Thanks to the post with the errors we got another excellent post. That. Was. Awesome. It really supports his mysterious character as you're never sure he's lying or not, though you can count on him for 100%.
And I don't know how but those onion cutting ninjas actually managed to haunt me sniff
Damn, it felt a lot longer while I was writing this. Well, at least it's extremely emotional. Don't be surprised if you suddenly tear up, ther… moree's been reports of ninja's infiltrating houses and cutting onions around you to make you cry. It happened to me once!
And no, it's NOT crying! It's like I said, ninja's... and onions...
Thanks to the post with the errors we got another excellent post. That. Was. Awesome. It really supports his mysterious character as you're ne… morever sure he's lying or not, though you can count on him for 100%.
And I don't know how but those onion cutting ninjas actually managed to haunt me sniff
On a serious note, I do actually like how I managed to kind of 'save' the story by addressing on those errors and actually creating a story around them, in this case exploring Bryan's mysteriousness and his fear of opening up to people.
Thanks to the post with the errors we got another excellent post. That. Was. Awesome. It really supports his mysterious character as you're ne… morever sure he's lying or not, though you can count on him for 100%.
And I don't know how but those onion cutting ninjas actually managed to haunt me sniff
On another note, I am still drawing the first episode slide. I have Clementine fully drawn but Christa is turning out to be a pain in the backside. : / I will try again now, wish me luck!
On another note, I am still drawing the first episode slide. I have Clementine fully drawn but Christa is turning out to be a pain in the backside. : / I will try again now, wish me luck!
As they come to a river Danielle stops walking until Bryan and Clem reach her. "What are you talking about?". Both Clem and Bryan don't reply. "Alright... I'll leave you alone." and she runs forward and grabs Jeremy's hand. First he looks very surprised though he doesn't dismiss her and keeps holding her hand. As soon as Clem feels unheard she asks Bryan: "You said she was tied to a pole... so you came back and ... what then?". Bryan swallows. "She was gone... no chains, no signs of violence or fights... It was like she just disappeared.". Clems swallows as well, and then she speaks: "I'd never do that... returning and checking on him...". "You mean her. Clem lowers her head: "No, I meant Lee, not Hannah.". She kicks a stone, trying to prevent the tears from flowing. Bryan feels stupid and doesn't say anything until Clementine continues. "He made me handcuff him to a radiator, so he wouldn't hurt me. I'll never forget his awful look, the yellowish eyes and his rotten smell. Whenever we meet a ghost I am reminded of him. Some of them smell different... others smell exactly like him. I hate that scent of hoplesness, it makes me wish I was dead so I can never smell it again..-". Bryan's face gets serious and he bows infront of her, taking her hand: "Please, sweetie: never say that again... I'd do everything to bring you back a life worth living. I know it's hard but please, never loose hope. Because if you do we're nothing but ghosts in the shape of humans.". "In the shape of good smelling humans without rotten flesh or slavering pronunciation." Clem adds with a weird grim, trying to loosen the situation. Bryan stays serious, trying to cheer up, but he's not in the mood for humorous remarks. He answers to not dissapoint her: "Exactly." After a few steps Clem stops walking and Bryan scans the environment, worried that someone's watching them. When he's sure that the area is clear he turns around and asks: "What is it Clem?". Her expression looks guilty. "Those people from the Marsh House, Ed and Diana... what did they say about their girl?". Her words hit him like a lightning. This is it, it all makes sense now: That name, he knew he heard that name before but he couldn't remember when or where - until now. With his eyes widely open he stares at her, having a lump in his throat: "You're their girl... Clementine." He reminds Diana sitting on the edge of Ed's bed, holding his hand, crying, rocking herself and singing Oh my darlin', Oh my darlin', Oh my darlin'... Clementine. Then he drops a tear: "I am so sorry... now you know it. They didn't make it...". She answers "I knew it before. I've seen them... as one of them. I am glad they had been with nice people... that they hadn't see the horrible things we have seen... Thanks for helping them.". Her mood changes from calm to gloomy and she starts to think of her awful time in Savannah and the hotel that is the link between her and Bryan.
Edit: Made some enhancements and added a few sentences
Well, those slides are going on a hold for a while, I have recently discovered that I SUCK at drawing humans. Clementine looks great right now, but Omid and Christa don't feel like being drawn or something...
On another note, I am still drawing the first episode slide. I have Clementine fully drawn but Christa is turning out to be a pain in the backside. : / I will try again now, wish me luck!
Well, those slides are going on a hold for a while, I have recently discovered that I SUCK at drawing humans. Clementine looks great right now, but Omid and Christa don't feel like being drawn or something...
It's kind of hard to just show you Clementine. The picture is supposed to show them walking away from our point of view, into a forest. Sadly, Omid and Christa hate me and have a paper-allergy, so that won't work.
Although I could actually alter the drawing in such a way that Clementine is on her own...
It's kind of hard to just show you Clementine. The picture is supposed to show them walking away from our point of view, into a forest. Sadly,… more Omid and Christa hate me and have a paper-allergy, so that won't work.
Although I could actually alter the drawing in such a way that Clementine is on her own...
TO THE BATCAVE! I mean, MY ROOM!
Hey guys, since this is Episode 5, for now, I think i'm not gonna write anything but just keep on reading. I'll be quick to start writing when the new season begins though.
As they come to a river Danielle stops walking until Bryan and Clem reach her. "What are you talking about?". Both Clem and Bryan don't reply.… more "Alright... I'll leave you alone." and she runs forward and grabs Jeremy's hand. First he looks very surprised though he doesn't dismiss her and keeps holding her hand. As soon as Clem feels unheard she asks Bryan: "You said she was tied to a pole... so you came back and ... what then?". Bryan swallows. "She was gone... no chains, no signs of violence or fights... It was like she just disappeared.". Clems swallows as well, and then she speaks: "I'd never do that... returning and checking on him...". "You mean her. Clem lowers her head: "No, I meant Lee, not Hannah.". She kicks a stone, trying to prevent the tears from flowing. Bryan feels stupid and doesn't say anything until Clementine continues. "He made me handcuff him to a radiator, so he wouldn't hurt me. I'll never forget his awful look, the yellowis… [view original content]
Hey guys, since this is Episode 5, for now, I think i'm not gonna write anything but just keep on reading. I'll be quick to start writing when the new season begins though.
Comments
What?
The hacker story, it's bizarre and somewhat incredible. Glad you intend to write with us again, though.
I'm from the Netherlands actually.
I dont get it? Yeah it was kind of freaky i have not checked past postes but i assume that from what you are saying that he came on here and did stuff. if it was him he would have sweared a lot and stuffed up the document. Tyler is on the phone and he says that when he un hacked the photos it was still messed up with sweare words and bizzarly pictures of negan (And more disqusting ones that tyler will not tell me because "Thats some fucked up shit dude"
Edit: Oh shit just saw the stuffs. he even writes like a shitty version of me! he is good
Nice, though i didn't like that music :P.
I had a hard time finding something proper. Next time I shall right I will find perfect music.
So Bryan said she was dead, even though he doesn't know ?
@TheZascaLivesOn
Fuck it, everyone deserves a second chance, so I'l believe your story (well, I kinda don't put you're still welcome to come back, forgive me for my skepticism). Welcome back.
... Ok then...
Welcome back, I guess.
Sorry :>
That's why I asked because I already wrote Bryan said she was dead...
If it really WAS a hacker then he is a very good one, making the exact same typos like our original @Lord_zasca from yesteryears, what an expert
Doesn't matter, it's an honest mistake.
I also wrote Bryan and his girlfriend met in the Marsh house, but I guess that got changed as well. : /
My sarcasm sense is tingling!
In all seriousness, I do agree with @TheMissus . The story is quite... unbelievable. But I think Zasca deserves a chance to redeem himself.
Yet his story was really romantic. I am sure he can make another romantic story, though, he might consider editing it
Yeah, I have to agree, his story was a lot more romantic. It warmed my heart.
I am going to finish The Wolf Among us ep. 2 now. When I come back I will definitely write.
Made my day
I do my best. ; )
So yeah, I just finished TWAU ep. 2 ... DAMN THOSE PLOT-TWISTS!
IKR, the entertainment didn't last long, found it very short
Yes, I wasn't satisfied with the length of the episode, it felt really short.
Clementine wipes away a tear from her cheek. Her signature hat leaves a grim shadow on her hardened face. The group quietly continues eating their meals before Danielle starts talking. ''You talked to me about Hannah once before. You said you traveled together, and you even told me about how you met. Does that mean...'' Bryan stares into the fire. His face has twisted into a deep frown. ''I know what I told you.'', he says before standing up. ''I lied to you. I just arrived, and I didn't know if I could fully trust this group. I'm sorry.'' ''You don't have to apologize. For all you knew we could have been bandits, cannibals or worse.'', Jeremy comforts him, ''We're all just trying to survive.''
''I'm glad I've told you the true story. Everyone should get some rest, we've still got a long road ahead of us.''
-SCENE SWAP-
Clementine is holding his hand again. The warmth of her little hand gives him a feeling of strength and a will to carry on. The soft skin and the seemingly fragile structure of the palm of her hand reminds Bryan of the walks he and Hannah used to take in the same way during the summer. The air was crisp, and smelled just like it does today. As he looks around the forest he notices the previously barren trees are beginning to spring life once again. Leaves fill the branches and birds are chirping. Bryan looks down at Clementine. ''What a beautiful day, huh?'' Clementine shrugs. Her dark expression and watery eyes seem to drain the feeling of hope he had just a moment ago. The group quietly keeps moving, their loud way of walking worries Bryan. He used to sneak around the forest, observing Clem's group all the time, and he never made a sound. He decides to shrug off the thought and keeps walking.
(Play this song by Anadel, the same people who made ''In the water'':
)
After a few minutes of silence Clementine suddenly asks him something. ''Do you think she's still alive?'', her voice is cracking. Bryan's grim expression takes on an even darker tone. He has been lying once again. He takes a deep breath before answering. ''She is dead.'', his throat feels dry, while his eyes feel wetter by the second. ''When I told you about what happened, that I was in the bathroom and I tried to find her after that. What I really meant was...'' He suppresses the tears eagerly waiting to escape his eyes. ''She got bit. Don't ask me how. She was the smartest person I had ever met. It really shouldn't have happened, but...''
''It did.'', Clementine finishes his sentence. Does she know how it feels? Does she still feel guilty about her caretaker, Lee? ''We survived for as long as we could. We told ourselves she wasn't like the others, and that she would make it. We didn't even think about cutting it off...'', he finally gives up fighting it and lets the tears flow out. ''And now she's dead... I could have saved her. I could have let her into that bathroom with me.'' He sighs. '' I couldn't bring myself to kill her, so I left her there, tied up to a pole like some sort of animal. Sometimes, I see her face in one of those ghosts. The thought of her walking around somewhere, eating people, still haunts my dreams every,single,night.
''That's what I meant when I said that I was still looking for her. I want to kill her ghost. I need to kill her ghost.''
Oh, I never knew he said she was dead. O.O
Damn, it felt a lot longer while I was writing this. Well, at least it's extremely emotional. Don't be surprised if you suddenly tear up, there's been reports of ninja's infiltrating houses and cutting onions around you to make you cry. It happened to me once!
And no, it's NOT crying! It's like I said, ninja's... and onions...
Thanks to the post with the errors we got another excellent post. That. Was. Awesome. It really supports his mysterious character as you're never sure he's lying or not, though you can count on him for 100%.
And I don't know how but those onion cutting ninjas actually managed to haunt me sniff
Told you so.
They are everywhere. Everywhere...
On a serious note, I do actually like how I managed to kind of 'save' the story by addressing on those errors and actually creating a story around them, in this case exploring Bryan's mysteriousness and his fear of opening up to people.
On another note, I am still drawing the first episode slide. I have Clementine fully drawn but Christa is turning out to be a pain in the backside. : / I will try again now, wish me luck!
Writing - please wait
As they come to a river Danielle stops walking until Bryan and Clem reach her. "What are you talking about?". Both Clem and Bryan don't reply. "Alright... I'll leave you alone." and she runs forward and grabs Jeremy's hand. First he looks very surprised though he doesn't dismiss her and keeps holding her hand. As soon as Clem feels unheard she asks Bryan: "You said she was tied to a pole... so you came back and ... what then?". Bryan swallows. "She was gone... no chains, no signs of violence or fights... It was like she just disappeared.". Clems swallows as well, and then she speaks: "I'd never do that... returning and checking on him...". "You mean her. Clem lowers her head: "No, I meant Lee, not Hannah.". She kicks a stone, trying to prevent the tears from flowing. Bryan feels stupid and doesn't say anything until Clementine continues. "He made me handcuff him to a radiator, so he wouldn't hurt me. I'll never forget his awful look, the yellowish eyes and his rotten smell. Whenever we meet a ghost I am reminded of him. Some of them smell different... others smell exactly like him. I hate that scent of hoplesness, it makes me wish I was dead so I can never smell it again..-". Bryan's face gets serious and he bows infront of her, taking her hand: "Please, sweetie: never say that again... I'd do everything to bring you back a life worth living. I know it's hard but please, never loose hope. Because if you do we're nothing but ghosts in the shape of humans.". "In the shape of good smelling humans without rotten flesh or slavering pronunciation." Clem adds with a weird grim, trying to loosen the situation. Bryan stays serious, trying to cheer up, but he's not in the mood for humorous remarks. He answers to not dissapoint her: "Exactly." After a few steps Clem stops walking and Bryan scans the environment, worried that someone's watching them. When he's sure that the area is clear he turns around and asks: "What is it Clem?". Her expression looks guilty. "Those people from the Marsh House, Ed and Diana... what did they say about their girl?". Her words hit him like a lightning. This is it, it all makes sense now: That name, he knew he heard that name before but he couldn't remember when or where - until now. With his eyes widely open he stares at her, having a lump in his throat: "You're their girl... Clementine." He reminds Diana sitting on the edge of Ed's bed, holding his hand, crying, rocking herself and singing Oh my darlin', Oh my darlin', Oh my darlin'... Clementine. Then he drops a tear: "I am so sorry... now you know it. They didn't make it...". She answers "I knew it before. I've seen them... as one of them. I am glad they had been with nice people... that they hadn't see the horrible things we have seen... Thanks for helping them.". Her mood changes from calm to gloomy and she starts to think of her awful time in Savannah and the hotel that is the link between her and Bryan.
Edit: Made some enhancements and added a few sentences
Well, those slides are going on a hold for a while, I have recently discovered that I SUCK at drawing humans. Clementine looks great right now, but Omid and Christa don't feel like being drawn or something...
Pleaaaaaaaaase, show us!
It's kind of hard to just show you Clementine. The picture is supposed to show them walking away from our point of view, into a forest. Sadly, Omid and Christa hate me and have a paper-allergy, so that won't work.
Although I could actually alter the drawing in such a way that Clementine is on her own...
TO THE BATCAVE! I mean, MY ROOM!
I love your sense of humour but yoy shouldn't be that hard on yourself. Drawing can be a tricky asshole sometimes
Yeah I've noticed. : /
I'm just trying to stay optimistic though, that's probably why I'm joking around so much. It's a way to lift my spirits.
Hey guys, since this is Episode 5, for now, I think i'm not gonna write anything but just keep on reading. I'll be quick to start writing when the new season begins though.
Looking forward to your posts when the new season starts!
@That_1_Guy
Fuck, I'm sorry. I forgot you said they met at the marsh house. I'm sorry.