Sarah approaches jacks dad. "Hey, John! Wait up. I uh, just wanted to apologize for my rudeness lately." John slowly speaks. "What's with the… more sudden attitude change?" Sarah sighs, "And what makes you think i'm not just trying to be nice."..."The way I see it you want another strike so you don't get kicked out. " Sarah laughs. "You really think I want to stay here that long? Wow old man, how stupid can you be?" John also laughs, "If your that anxious to leave then why don't you?" Sarah stares straight into the bright center of his old, powerful soul. "Bitch! I came over here trying to apologize! Now i'm practically being forced to leave! Wow man! You've got issues! Thanks to you I am leaving, and I ain't fucking around. Dead, fucking serious. I'll be gone tomorrow morning. Oh and just as a goodbye, FUCK YOU OLD MAN!"
"Kenny, it's alright man, just ignore her shes just trying to get you upset.-" ("Yelling coming from the outside") "Are you kidd… [view original content]
Erm, well. Sarah.... Not sure if i'm out of character, if you want I can take that out.... I sorta of had it like she secretly liked Jack, but hated his dad.
No need to take anything out, just add, who is speaking. I am referring to that part:
"Kenny, it's alright man, just ignore her shes just trying to get you upset.-" ("Yelling coming from the outside") "Are you kidding me? If that's Sarah arguing again, i'm going to kill her." Kenny stops crying and looks up. "Your going to what?" "Kenny I was kidding. You sure you feeling alright? I'll be right back, you should really consider going to sleep."
In the meantime I've found out who was speaking though it's not clear at first sight.
Erm, well. Sarah.... Not sure if i'm out of character, if you want I can take that out.... I sorta of had it like she secretly liked Jack, but hated his dad.
Sarah approaches jacks dad. "Hey, John! Wait up. I uh, just wanted to apologize for my rudeness lately." John slowly speaks. "What's with the… more sudden attitude change?" Sarah sighs, "And what makes you think i'm not just trying to be nice."..."The way I see it you want another strike so you don't get kicked out. " Sarah laughs. "You really think I want to stay here that long? Wow old man, how stupid can you be?" John also laughs, "If your that anxious to leave then why don't you?" Sarah stares straight into the bright center of his old, powerful soul. "Bitch! I came over here trying to apologize! Now i'm practically being forced to leave! Wow man! You've got issues! Thanks to you I am leaving, and I ain't fucking around. Dead, fucking serious. I'll be gone tomorrow morning. Oh and just as a goodbye, FUCK YOU OLD MAN!"
"Kenny, it's alright man, just ignore her shes just trying to get you upset.-" ("Yelling coming from the outside") "Are you kidd… [view original content]
Sarah tries to sneak out the settlement without drawing too much attention. Since she got out of arrest all eyes have been on her. With her back pressed to the wall of the building where the weapons are storaged she decides its best to break in for guns and ammo. They are usually locked and not open to the public. Her gun got annexed, so she's got no other choice.
As soon as Sarah climbs out of the back window she can feel a hard and pointy thing being stung into her back yet it doesn't go through her coat. "Alright, Alright... you can put the gun down." she surrenders. "Turn around slowly.. and don't make a move.". a deep voice orders. "Got it." When she has turned around she looks straight into an arrow being stressed infront of her face. "Who are you?". she asks as she's being dragged ungently into the bushes. Bryan tosses her to the ground and draws his gun. "What the... Who ARE you and why that violence?!". Now she can finally see his face and a shiver goes through her body.
"Bitch! I've been dating him all the time and there's no way you didn't know that!". Sarah and Erin are sitting in the treetops while their tree is surrounded by a bunch of walkers. They've been there for more than an hour but the girls eventually got used to the growls. Sarah replies with a very annoyed tone in her voice: "Jeez, of course I knew it. You can't blame me, though, he was the one making the first step, not me... Besides, you knew I had a thing for him, - and you dated him anyway!". Sarah is trying to concentrate so she doesn't fall, when Erin asks her desperately: "He asked me out. Now answer me: Have you slept with him? Just tell me, please, I gotta know!" Erins yells get followed by the walker growls becoming louder and Sarah shushing her. "Would you shut the fuck up or do you want us to end up as monster-meal? No, seriously, that's none of your fucking business, what we were doing. The only thing I'll say is that we've spend a wonderful evening together, and he was very.... Never mind." As Sarah has finished the sentence with a grin Erin starts to breath uncontrollably and she gets in a rage. "You damn whore! You have slept with him... damn bitch, you're really easy to read... Alright, you know what? Now take this: When Eric was alive, the evening when we got lost in the woods and when we told you the walker attacked us - well, we actually fucked - the walker story was a lie! Now we're even!". Sarah looks at her big sister with widened eyes as her expression turns from astonished into wrathful. Acting in anger she hustles her down the tree into the horde and Erin screams clang through the forest. In the same moment gunshots appear and the walkers fall to the ground one by one. Sarah can't see where the bullets are coming from. When the last walker kisses the dust a blonde man comes out of the bushes and he runs to the body of Erin, checking if she's alive, yet it's too late. Bryan arises with a frustrated face and shoots her into the head so she can't turn. Then he raises his head looking into Sarah's eyes when he slowly points the gun at her. She doesn't say a word but stares back at him with a widened mouth in the expectance of her death. After a while he lays down the gun, leaving the scene without a word.
"You know who I am....". says Bryan as Sarah begins to cry. "It wasn't what it looked like! Please, you gotta believe me! It was an accident!". She's about to lose her mind when a kid voice appears. "Bryan!". Have you seen a woman....". It's Clementine and she comes in company of Jack, who shouts: "Sarah, is that you?". As they are coming nearer Bryan asks Sarah: "Do they know Erin? Do they know what you did to your sister?". and Sarah begs him, trying to whisper: "Please, don't tell them anything!! I am begging you!!".
Oh wait, you said second paragraph... sorry about the confusion... I had just woke up I thought you said third... That was Jack in the second paragraph...
Sarah tries to sneak out the settlement without drawing too much attention. Since she got out of arrest all eyes have been on her. With her ba… moreck pressed to the wall of the building where the weapons are storaged she decides its best to break in for guns and ammo. They are usually locked and not open to the public. Her gun got annexed, so she's got no other choice.
As soon as Sarah climbs out of the back window she can feel a hard and pointy thing being stung into her back yet it doesn't go through her coat. "Alright, Alright... you can put the gun down." she surrenders. "Turn around slowly.. and don't make a move.". a deep voice orders. "Got it." When she has turned around she looks straight into an arrow being stressed infront of her face. "Who are you?". she asks as she's being dragged ungently into the bushes. Bryan tosses her to the ground and draws his gun. "What the... Who ARE you and why that violence?!". Now she can finally see his fac… [view original content]
... I really don't want to sound rude, but I am not quite sure you understood my latest post. It just doesn't fit. She was anxious as Bryan was threatening her with the gun. Bryan knows Sarah killed Erin as I've written in the flashback, but the settlement doesn't and this is what my last paragraph is about. How would the settlement react? Will Bryan tell anyone? Or will he take revenge on his own? Why would she talk with Jack about her feelings or the diary while she's being threatened? Besides, again: Who is the one addressed by that sentence:
"Wait a second, I remember you know... your the one who...
Which person is meant? Please use more additions like "says to Clem" or "Clem says".
Your post caused a lot of confusion. I am just assuming you didn't mean Jack but Bryan in your first few sentences. On the other hand: Bryan would never talk with her in such a nice way for he witnessed that she was being a coldhearted bitch.
Sorry, but would you please explain? Maybe it's just me being a retard... I just don't get it
... I really don't want to sound rude, but I am not quite sure you understood my latest post. It just doesn't fit. She was anxious as Bryan wa… mores threatening her with the gun. Bryan knows Sarah killed Erin as I've written in the flashback, but the settlement doesn't and this is what my last paragraph is about. How would the settlement react? Will Bryan tell anyone? Or will he take revenge on his own? Why would she talk with Jack about her feelings or the diary while she's being threatened? Besides, again: Who is the one addressed by that sentence:
"Wait a second, I remember you know... your the one who...
Which person is meant? Please use more additions like "says to Clem" or "Clem says".
Your post caused a lot of confusion. I am just assuming you didn't mean Jack but Bryan in your first few sentences. On the other hand: Bryan would never talk with her in such a nice way for he witnessed that she was being a coldhearted bitch.
So… [view original content]
Her eyes open widely and her face turns pale when she realizes the true identity of the person holding her down. As the memories rush through her mind she swiftly pushes Bryan away, allowing her to escape from his grasp. She hurries over to Jack, who seems to be citing from some kind of small book. When Bryan's head hits a tree his vision goes blurry and his body becomes paralyzed by fear. The sudden bang brings out horrible memories of a woman's mangled corpse, a woman he couldn't save. He desperately tries to block them, but his efforts are in vain. Sarah, the seemingly innocent, yet rebellious young woman had pushed her off a tree, right into an entire group of hungry ghosts. He turns his head around and looks at Jack and Sarah sharing an intimate moment, it seemed that she had been very good at hiding her love for him over the last couple of days. Bryan's expression turns blank. ''You...''
(Listen to this: )
He tightens his grip and lifts up his gun. He grabs the collar of Sarah's leather jacket and pulls her out of Jack's arms, before slamming her onto the ground. She lets out a grunt as the air gets beaten out of her lungs. Within a second, Bryan puts his heavy boot on her chest, leaving her unable to act. She desperately gasps for air when Bryan points his gun at her face. His blank expression has taken place for a much darker, colder look. ''Bryan!? What the fuck, man!?'', Jack exclaims, worrying over his new lover. ''You killed her... You pushed her off that tree...'', Bryan's eyes widen, and his mouth takes on a psychopathic grin when he slowly whispers, ''She killed her... This fucking bitch...'' ''Bryan, stop!'', Clementine says in a cracking, scared voice. ''It wasn't her...''
Bryan confusedly turns his head to the little girl. ''What do you mean, it wasn't her? I saw it. I saw her push that woman...'' Clementine looks down, the frown on her face makes her seem so much older than she really is. ''You know what I mean...'' Bryan's hand starts shaking, when he realizes the true meaning behind Clementine's words tears well up in his eyes. He pulls his foot off of Sarah's chest and holsters his gun. His eyes take a quick glance at Clementine, who is looking at him with a familiar expression. She, an eight-year-old, seems to be the only one to understand the loss he had suffered, and the pain he had to go through. The woman Sarah had pushed from a tree wasn't Hannah, but that doesn't justify her actions. Bryan takes another good look at Sarah, the person he was willing to kill just a few seconds ago, before walking towards the camper without looking back.
Her eyes open widely and her face turns pale when she realizes the true identity of the person holding her down. As the memories rush through … moreher mind she swiftly pushes Bryan away, allowing her to escape from his grasp. She hurries over to Jack, who seems to be citing from some kind of small book. When Bryan's head hits a tree his vision goes blurry and his body becomes paralyzed by fear. The sudden bang brings out horrible memories of a woman's mangled corpse, a woman he couldn't save. He desperately tries to block them, but his efforts are in vain. Sarah, the seemingly innocent, yet rebellious young woman had pushed her off a tree, right into an entire group of hungry ghosts. He turns his head around and looks at Jack and Sarah sharing an intimate moment, it seemed that she had been very good at hiding her love for him over the last couple of days. Bryan's expression turns blank. ''You...''
(Listen to this: )
He tightens his grip and li… [view original content]
Her eyes open widely and her face turns pale when she realizes the true identity of the person holding her down. As the memories rush through … moreher mind she swiftly pushes Bryan away, allowing her to escape from his grasp. She hurries over to Jack, who seems to be citing from some kind of small book. When Bryan's head hits a tree his vision goes blurry and his body becomes paralyzed by fear. The sudden bang brings out horrible memories of a woman's mangled corpse, a woman he couldn't save. He desperately tries to block them, but his efforts are in vain. Sarah, the seemingly innocent, yet rebellious young woman had pushed her off a tree, right into an entire group of hungry ghosts. He turns his head around and looks at Jack and Sarah sharing an intimate moment, it seemed that she had been very good at hiding her love for him over the last couple of days. Bryan's expression turns blank. ''You...''
(Listen to this: )
He tightens his grip and li… [view original content]
Thanks for putting some of my aspects into it. But, (No surprise here) i'm confused.I don't really get this part,
The woman Sarah had pushed from a tree wasn't Hannah, but that doesn't justify her actions. Bryan takes another good look at Sarah, the person he was willing to kill just a few seconds ago, before walking towards the camper without looking back.
Bryan has a messiah complex combined with a strong sense of justice plus he has a weakness for endsngered females. He keeps trying so save and takig revenge for every woman/ girl because he couldn't save his love Hannah and he feels like he has to take responsibility. That's why he sees Hannah in every girl that is in danger, of course this is just an image presentation. He saved Clem and Danielle back in the fields, when they got threatened by 3 strangers and he killed the bandit that took the deer from Clem's group. He also tried to kill Sarah for killing Erin, but he spared her twice, probably because she is a woman and it's hard for him to kill women because of Hannah... A vicious circle, kinda...
Thanks for putting some of my aspects into it. But, (No surprise here) i'm confused.I don't really get this part,
The woman Sarah had pushe… mored from a tree wasn't Hannah, but that doesn't justify her actions. Bryan takes another good look at Sarah, the person he was willing to kill just a few seconds ago, before walking towards the camper without looking back.
Her eyes open widely and her face turns pale when she realizes the true identity of the person holding her down. As the memories rush through … moreher mind she swiftly pushes Bryan away, allowing her to escape from his grasp. She hurries over to Jack, who seems to be citing from some kind of small book. When Bryan's head hits a tree his vision goes blurry and his body becomes paralyzed by fear. The sudden bang brings out horrible memories of a woman's mangled corpse, a woman he couldn't save. He desperately tries to block them, but his efforts are in vain. Sarah, the seemingly innocent, yet rebellious young woman had pushed her off a tree, right into an entire group of hungry ghosts. He turns his head around and looks at Jack and Sarah sharing an intimate moment, it seemed that she had been very good at hiding her love for him over the last couple of days. Bryan's expression turns blank. ''You...''
(Listen to this: )
He tightens his grip and li… [view original content]
No. We just started making backstories in Episode 5, but only to support the Main storyline. Since Omid and Christa are dead I don't think it makes much sense to make one, though if you're bursting with ideas feel free to post it
Bryan has a messiah complex combined with a strong sense of justice plus he has a weakness for endsngered females. He keeps trying so save and… more takig revenge for every woman/ girl because he couldn't save his love Hannah and he feels like he has to take responsibility. That's why he sees Hannah in every girl that is in danger, of course this is just an image presentation. He saved Clem and Danielle back in the fields, when they got threatened by 3 strangers and he killed the bandit that took the deer from Clem's group. He also tried to kill Sarah for killing Erin, but he spared her twice, probably because she is a woman and it's hard for him to kill women because of Hannah... A vicious circle, kinda...
Bryan started out as a seemingly flawless badass, but has quickly changed into a character with substance. Your detailed explanation a few posts has also made me appreciate his character much more.
Because I've written that Bryan said "You know very well who I am" before your post, which implicates that he knows very well that it is that Sarah from the tree - in fact I thought that was the reason for him to follow her. In your post on the other hand it looks like he doesn't recognize her until she flees into the arms of Jack. Weird, but not a big problem.
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I don't get your second paragraph: who says what?
Erm, well. Sarah.... Not sure if i'm out of character, if you want I can take that out.... I sorta of had it like she secretly liked Jack, but hated his dad.
No need to take anything out, just add, who is speaking. I am referring to that part:
In the meantime I've found out who was speaking though it's not clear at first sight.
I kind of don't like Sarah leaving. She could have been very good for creating some tension within the group.
I think so, too. she's a good antagonist
Yea randomz it would be nice if you put "Sarah said" or "Sarah replied" or "Sarah screamed" or something that tells us who's talking.
Sarah tries to sneak out the settlement without drawing too much attention. Since she got out of arrest all eyes have been on her. With her back pressed to the wall of the building where the weapons are storaged she decides its best to break in for guns and ammo. They are usually locked and not open to the public. Her gun got annexed, so she's got no other choice.
As soon as Sarah climbs out of the back window she can feel a hard and pointy thing being stung into her back yet it doesn't go through her coat. "Alright, Alright... you can put the gun down." she surrenders. "Turn around slowly.. and don't make a move.". a deep voice orders. "Got it." When she has turned around she looks straight into an arrow being stressed infront of her face. "Who are you?". she asks as she's being dragged ungently into the bushes. Bryan tosses her to the ground and draws his gun. "What the... Who ARE you and why that violence?!". Now she can finally see his face and a shiver goes through her body.
"Bitch! I've been dating him all the time and there's no way you didn't know that!". Sarah and Erin are sitting in the treetops while their tree is surrounded by a bunch of walkers. They've been there for more than an hour but the girls eventually got used to the growls. Sarah replies with a very annoyed tone in her voice: "Jeez, of course I knew it. You can't blame me, though, he was the one making the first step, not me... Besides, you knew I had a thing for him, - and you dated him anyway!". Sarah is trying to concentrate so she doesn't fall, when Erin asks her desperately: "He asked me out. Now answer me: Have you slept with him? Just tell me, please, I gotta know!" Erins yells get followed by the walker growls becoming louder and Sarah shushing her. "Would you shut the fuck up or do you want us to end up as monster-meal? No, seriously, that's none of your fucking business, what we were doing. The only thing I'll say is that we've spend a wonderful evening together, and he was very.... Never mind." As Sarah has finished the sentence with a grin Erin starts to breath uncontrollably and she gets in a rage. "You damn whore! You have slept with him... damn bitch, you're really easy to read... Alright, you know what? Now take this: When Eric was alive, the evening when we got lost in the woods and when we told you the walker attacked us - well, we actually fucked - the walker story was a lie! Now we're even!". Sarah looks at her big sister with widened eyes as her expression turns from astonished into wrathful. Acting in anger she hustles her down the tree into the horde and Erin screams clang through the forest. In the same moment gunshots appear and the walkers fall to the ground one by one. Sarah can't see where the bullets are coming from. When the last walker kisses the dust a blonde man comes out of the bushes and he runs to the body of Erin, checking if she's alive, yet it's too late. Bryan arises with a frustrated face and shoots her into the head so she can't turn. Then he raises his head looking into Sarah's eyes when he slowly points the gun at her. She doesn't say a word but stares back at him with a widened mouth in the expectance of her death. After a while he lays down the gun, leaving the scene without a word.
"You know who I am....". says Bryan as Sarah begins to cry. "It wasn't what it looked like! Please, you gotta believe me! It was an accident!". She's about to lose her mind when a kid voice appears. "Bryan!". Have you seen a woman....". It's Clementine and she comes in company of Jack, who shouts: "Sarah, is that you?". As they are coming nearer Bryan asks Sarah: "Do they know Erin? Do they know what you did to your sister?". and Sarah begs him, trying to whisper: "Please, don't tell them anything!! I am begging you!!".
Oh shit, things are getting intense. I love it.
Again, it's been quiet. Are people not that interested anymore or just busy? I love to write
Oh wait, you said second paragraph... sorry about the confusion... I had just woke up I thought you said third... That was Jack in the second paragraph...
This used to be a post, but it is now deleted.
Just for clarification: Sarah doesn't know Bryan personally, she just has seen him once in the Woods.
Beware of Bryan: He's everywhere!
... I really don't want to sound rude, but I am not quite sure you understood my latest post. It just doesn't fit. She was anxious as Bryan was threatening her with the gun. Bryan knows Sarah killed Erin as I've written in the flashback, but the settlement doesn't and this is what my last paragraph is about. How would the settlement react? Will Bryan tell anyone? Or will he take revenge on his own? Why would she talk with Jack about her feelings or the diary while she's being threatened? Besides, again: Who is the one addressed by that sentence:
Which person is meant? Please use more additions like "says to Clem" or "Clem says".
Your post caused a lot of confusion. I am just assuming you didn't mean Jack but Bryan in your first few sentences. On the other hand: Bryan would never talk with her in such a nice way for he witnessed that she was being a coldhearted bitch.
Sorry, but would you please explain? Maybe it's just me being a retard... I just don't get it
Urgghhh I have a great idea right now but my damn school is keeping me occupied like never before...
Just one question: Was my latest post hard to understand? Should I change anything?
Maybe we can wait for you, the americans are in bed, anyway.
I agree with Missus.
Little bit of column A a little bit from of column B. To be honest my life has been adsorbed by Persona 3 fes.
I have a question, I've read a lot but I may have missed this, have Omid and Christa had their own backstory?
No, they're dead
I lved your post bu Randomz's was just plain weird. I actually had a good idea to continue of off your post, but his is kind of in the way of that
Alright, I suggest to wait for him so he can explain himself.
So... Can I write now?
I say yes
Okay, I'll just grab a quick drink and I'll start right away.
Awesome :-)
I get misunderstood a lot, sorry. I think I understand now. I will delete my post, because it was way off lol.
Her eyes open widely and her face turns pale when she realizes the true identity of the person holding her down. As the memories rush through her mind she swiftly pushes Bryan away, allowing her to escape from his grasp. She hurries over to Jack, who seems to be citing from some kind of small book. When Bryan's head hits a tree his vision goes blurry and his body becomes paralyzed by fear. The sudden bang brings out horrible memories of a woman's mangled corpse, a woman he couldn't save. He desperately tries to block them, but his efforts are in vain. Sarah, the seemingly innocent, yet rebellious young woman had pushed her off a tree, right into an entire group of hungry ghosts. He turns his head around and looks at Jack and Sarah sharing an intimate moment, it seemed that she had been very good at hiding her love for him over the last couple of days. Bryan's expression turns blank. ''You...''
(Listen to this:
)
He tightens his grip and lifts up his gun. He grabs the collar of Sarah's leather jacket and pulls her out of Jack's arms, before slamming her onto the ground. She lets out a grunt as the air gets beaten out of her lungs. Within a second, Bryan puts his heavy boot on her chest, leaving her unable to act. She desperately gasps for air when Bryan points his gun at her face. His blank expression has taken place for a much darker, colder look. ''Bryan!? What the fuck, man!?'', Jack exclaims, worrying over his new lover. ''You killed her... You pushed her off that tree...'', Bryan's eyes widen, and his mouth takes on a psychopathic grin when he slowly whispers, ''She killed her... This fucking bitch...'' ''Bryan, stop!'', Clementine says in a cracking, scared voice. ''It wasn't her...''
Bryan confusedly turns his head to the little girl. ''What do you mean, it wasn't her? I saw it. I saw her push that woman...'' Clementine looks down, the frown on her face makes her seem so much older than she really is. ''You know what I mean...'' Bryan's hand starts shaking, when he realizes the true meaning behind Clementine's words tears well up in his eyes. He pulls his foot off of Sarah's chest and holsters his gun. His eyes take a quick glance at Clementine, who is looking at him with a familiar expression. She, an eight-year-old, seems to be the only one to understand the loss he had suffered, and the pain he had to go through. The woman Sarah had pushed from a tree wasn't Hannah, but that doesn't justify her actions. Bryan takes another good look at Sarah, the person he was willing to kill just a few seconds ago, before walking towards the camper without looking back.
I decided to loosely incorporate your post in mine, but it's a little more clear than your's was.
NOTE: I incorporated some aspects of @Randomz89101 's post, just in a much more clear way. This way his post still gets some recognition.
Great post! Although, isn't Clementine atleast 9 now?
Thanks for putting some of my aspects into it. But, (No surprise here) i'm confused.I don't really get this part,
The woman Sarah had pushed from a tree wasn't Hannah, but that doesn't justify her actions. Bryan takes another good look at Sarah, the person he was willing to kill just a few seconds ago, before walking towards the camper without looking back.
Sorry, I said that wrong. Have their pasts been put in a story?
Bryan has a messiah complex combined with a strong sense of justice plus he has a weakness for endsngered females. He keeps trying so save and takig revenge for every woman/ girl because he couldn't save his love Hannah and he feels like he has to take responsibility. That's why he sees Hannah in every girl that is in danger, of course this is just an image presentation. He saved Clem and Danielle back in the fields, when they got threatened by 3 strangers and he killed the bandit that took the deer from Clem's group. He also tried to kill Sarah for killing Erin, but he spared her twice, probably because she is a woman and it's hard for him to kill women because of Hannah... A vicious circle, kinda...
It was good, but also kinda weird, but that wasn't your fault. You did very well saving the story
No. We just started making backstories in Episode 5, but only to support the Main storyline. Since Omid and Christa are dead I don't think it makes much sense to make one, though if you're bursting with ideas feel free to post it
Damn, I love Bryan! We managed to build some great characters.
Exactly.
Why did you think it was weird?
Bryan started out as a seemingly flawless badass, but has quickly changed into a character with substance. Your detailed explanation a few posts has also made me appreciate his character much more.
Because I've written that Bryan said "You know very well who I am" before your post, which implicates that he knows very well that it is that Sarah from the tree - in fact I thought that was the reason for him to follow her. In your post on the other hand it looks like he doesn't recognize her until she flees into the arms of Jack. Weird, but not a big problem.