Walking Dead: Great Follies (Fan FIc)

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  • edited September 2013
    [Vince, Last saw him when on the Newspapers] you mean this?
  • edited September 2013
    this'll keep up for some time. It's important, and Repititive


    "Turner, Last saw him as a Walker across teh street" Liam said.

    "...Good. You are not the one who read my Journal" Oliver said.

    (?) You Were Wrong.
    "My Brother's Name isn't Turner. It's Vince, so off with you, Off, Off, Toodle oo! Also, Have this" Oliver smiled, Handing Liam a Bottle of Lemonade.

    "Why'd he give me this?" Liam asked. as he Looked at the rest of the group.
    [(o) Talk to Mackie]
    [(o)Talk to Sally]
    [(o) Talk to Wallace]
    [(o) Talk to Nicholas]
  • edited September 2013
    this'll keep up for some time. It's important, and Repititive


    "Turner, Last saw him as a Walker across teh street" Liam said.

    "...Good. You are not the one who read my Journal" Oliver said.

    (?) You Were Wrong.
    "My Brother's Name isn't Turner. It's Vince, so off with you, Off, Off, Toodle oo! Also, Have this" Oliver smiled, Handing Liam a Bottle of Lemonade.

    "Why'd he give me this?" Liam asked. as he Looked at the rest of the group.
    [(o) Talk to Mackie]
    [(o)Talk to Sally]
    [(o) Talk to Wallace]
    [(o) Talk to Nicholas]

    So Oliver is vince's brother?! Mind blown for the tenth time today.
    [(o)Talk to Sally]
  • edited September 2013
    So Oliver is vince's brother?! Mind blown for the tenth time today.
    [(o)Talk to Sally]

    There's been a lot of Mind Blowing recently around here. also, these Updates will be short because everyone choice will be a choice you need to choose.


    (o) Talk to Sally
    "Sally?" Liam asked.

    "Yes" The Woman responded as she walked towards him. "What is it?"
    [You Okay?]
    [Sorry about Jamila]
    [Are you still mad at me?]
  • edited September 2013
    Are you still mad at me?
  • edited September 2013
    "Are you Mad at me?" Liam asked.

    "...No. Not really" Sally replied. "You apologized. although it did take a bit of persuading. I'm not sure, Really, Nicholas is going to do whatever Jamila said he would. Right? I'm Just not sure. I'll be back with you on that" Sally said. Smiling. "How's everyone else?" She asked.

    "Well, Oliver's paranoid about someone reading his diary. and Luciel's being Luciel.." Liam looked at the rest.
    [(o) Talk to Mackie]
    [(o) Talk to Wallace]
    [(o) Talk to Nicholas]
  • edited September 2013
    Talk to Nicholas
  • edited September 2013
    What happened to Omar and Amelia? Have I missed something
  • edited September 2013
    (o) Talk to Nicholas
    Liam walked over to Nicholas.

    "Hey" Nick Said, Not sitting up from his Chair, He Looked at Jamila, who had ran out of Wallace's Tent, while Wally,Amelia and Omar just walked out. Jamila was Holding a Toy airplace and running around making airplane noises. "She's a Brash kid. Very curious too"
    [Too Curious]
    [A Bother as well]
    [She's Nice]
    [...]
  • edited September 2013
    She's nice
  • edited September 2013
    What happened to Omar and Amelia? Have I missed something

    Jamila would've said Wallace was interrigating them if Liam chose to say Interrigation.
  • edited September 2013
    Goddamit Ben! He didn't choose it!
  • edited September 2013
    Goddamit Ben! He didn't choose it!

    I Might make Alternate Versions where you can make Different Choices and see how it affects.

    I can't promise a less linear storyline than The Game though, But there'll probaly be more noticible Changes.
  • edited September 2013
    "She's Nice" Liam said.

    (?) You Complimented Nicholas' Daughter.

    "So? Heres what i Want to Know, we need to find a Better Place than This camp. as well as more food to survive at least 400 days. And I want to start Making Hunts for Better Forts, and some Food. Do you Want to Come with?"
    [Yes]
    [No.]


    Here comes the Final Choice of teh Chapter. lets see how everything comes together?
  • edited September 2013
    [YES] ololo
  • edited September 2013
    Yes
  • edited September 2013
    Yes
  • edited September 2013
    fun fact. this choice doesn't make much differences.


    "Sure" Liam said.
    "Okay. I guess it's time for me to Ask everyone else..." Nic
    holas Smiled. he stood up, with Diffiicult with his Lack-of-Hand. "EVERYONE!" He yelled, garnering all the attention of everyone.


    "What is it?" Omar asked.

    "We're going to start Trying to Find new Places and Food to Use to Survive for Over A Year until somethign convienent happens. Liam is coming with me, I'd like to know if any of you are as well?" Nicholas asked.

    "Not really" Mackie said." I think It'd be better if i were to Watch over what we have until you come Back" He smiled

    "Liam, you did Say that I'm exactly like those I hate. Lazy, Big-Bottomed Assholes who tell kids to kill themselvse. Maybe it's time I did do Something. Despite my better judgement of Mingle-Ability. I'm in" Luciel Said, Standing up.

    "...No." Sally answered. "Its just from what I've seen Theres not a high Chance of People being nice enough to Offer anything. So I won't bother"

    "Sure" Oliver smiled, Jumping up "I trust you guys" He Threw his Hand in front of Liam, Expecting a Handshake.

    "Omar, Amelia" Wallace Said "Stay here with Sally and Mackie and keep this place safe" He ordered "I'll go Recon with the Rest"

    "Okay then" Nicholas said, "We fine with this Every Chance we get?" He asked. Everyone nodded. "Very Well, Let's go!"

    END OF EPISODE TWO!
    Next time on, Great Follies


    "Liam, Do you want some?" Oliver asked

    "You left the Lady to die. She was weak. hopefully you'll have better Judgement" Luciel Grudged.

    "WHA-AAAARGH! NOOO!!" Whitney Yelled, "Why'd you Do that!?"

    "Everything will be fine" Wallave yelled, "Everything will be OKAY!!"
    a Gunshot sounded out...
    WALKING DEAD GREAT FOLLIES: HEARTS A MESS!


    Who came with you and Nicholas?

    Mackie/Jenny Sally Wallace Oliver Luciel
  • edited September 2013
    Plot twists are coming!
  • edited September 2013
    and here's where the writers block is gone.
  • edited September 2013
    Yes! Luciel's coming with us! Hopefully we can kill her off now!
  • edited September 2013
    now to tell you some trivia because i will not be makign a alternate of any importance.

    How to get some to come aloonge

    Luciel-Call her a hypocrite.
    Wallace- He comes no matter what
    Oliver- Guess Incorrectly.

    Not telling you about those who didn't come with you. because i don't wanna.
  • edited September 2013
    You're lucky, MoustachedPotato. I was going to say Vince.
  • edited September 2013
    so, any guesses as to how to get the ones you didn't get?
  • edited September 2013
    due to...thread in working order.

    One by one, The arts i've done of 4 characters.

    Oliver.

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  • edited September 2013
    I was pretty sure that when I will be back from school, there's gonna be new forum already. Did I missed something?

    Mackie probably comes with you if you give him the food, and Sally if you were nice to Jamila. I'm glad that Luciel came along. Bigger chance that she's gonna get killed.
  • edited September 2013
    I was pretty sure that when I will be back from school, there's gonna be new forum already. Did I missed something?

    Mackie probably comes with you if you give him the food, and Sally if you were nice to Jamila. I'm glad that Luciel came along. Bigger chance that she's gonna get killed.

    Correct. with Sally.

    It's related to food with Mackie, but you don't need to feed him. 'member, I went with bens choose to try and feed Mackie.

    (for the record. that's actually deciding who's in the group that goes out and looks for supplies and such. every day it'll be that group. so, if there was a Time Gap of which occurs at some point, you'll still have the same group out looking around.

    I think i'm great at making characters really hatable. It's funny you need to insult her for her to come along. Oliver's coming too. and who's this Whitney?

    so, thoughts on the picture.

    I went through 2 hours of database error and all of a sudden, there's no New forum, i'm not sure 'bout that either.
  • edited September 2013
    It's related to food with Mackie, but you don't need to feed him. 'member, I went with bens choose to try and feed Mackie.


    I dunno, maybe if you feed all the kids?


    Picture is cool, except his mouth, he kinda looks like zombie :p
    OR maybe he is a zombie? Don't kill him off, he can't die :(
  • edited September 2013
    I dunno, maybe if you feed all the kids?


    Picture is cool, except his mouth, he kinda looks like zombie :p
    OR maybe he is a zombie? Don't kill him off, he can't die :(

    yep.

    not to the zombie. I'd probaly loose a ton of readers if he dies.

    Although i have all of Ollie's Arc planned.

    So, I know all of Ben's Opinion on Jamila. look at the tags for proof. What do you think of her?

    Fun fact, Sally was based off my aunt in personality, and a character i made on Sims 3 in appearence.
  • edited September 2013
    I don't hate Jamila, but I don't like her either. She's ok, I guess. I like Sally though.
  • edited September 2013
    Girls based on my sister. so i wouldn't be suprised if i've been biased in making her character on all the annoying bits.

    Thanks with Sally.

    So, next episode's named after a song. Fits the feeling of the later episodes. *hint*
  • edited September 2013
    This game series adapts to the choices you make.

    The story is tailored by how you play.


    TIME-WASTERS UNITED
    Presents

    In association with
    Whatever Compelled Oliver to possess Ben.

    THE WALKING DEAD: GREAT FOLLIES
    Episode 3: Hearts a Mess

    DAY 99


    It had been about a Month since they Left the Millitary Base. Liam was dissapointed at the Lack of a Luciel Death during the Supply and Safer Place Hunting they've been doing recently. It was a Wednesday, which Meant it was Liam's Turn to Pass out the food before The group goes to try and find stuff without actually finding anything. They ran out a fair bit after Robert decided to Abandon them. and When Wallace and Amelia were out looking in the woods, they saw a Man with a Moustahce, a College Kid, and several Others holding food and items they Had with them when they left. Liam stood up and Walked to the Car,

    "Here's the Food as usual" Mackie Said "We've yet to find anything. so we've got only 5 today" He said.

    "Lucky we found this Meat in that Dairy ...Whatever happened there was bad" he continued

    "We're running out faster and faster" Oliver called out from the side.
    Liam yawned, Every single Wednesday he had to do this. He looked at the Group, Completly Accumstumed to this choice after approximately a Month's Time. In the end, the only people who haven't ever gave food out were Jamila,Oliver, and Luciel.
    [Give Apple to...
    [Give Chocolate Biscuit to....
    [Give Jerky to...
    [Give Meat Chunk to...
    [Cheese n' Crackers to...
  • edited September 2013
    Liam was dissapointed at the Lack of a Luciel Death during the Supply and Safer Place Hunting they've been doing recently.
    :(:(:(:(:(:(
  • edited September 2013
    :(:(:(:(:(:(

    so, who gets what.

    take a better read through Potato. make your choice and spot the Little References to the game,
  • edited September 2013
    [Give Apple to...Mackie
    [Give Chocolate Biscuit to....Oliver (because he's Oliver)
    [Give Jerky to...Jamila ( I want revenge on Ben)
    [Give Meat Chunk to... Sally
    [Cheese n' Crackers to...Luciel, seriously
    I noticed those references, 2 of them at least.
  • edited September 2013
    Cool. choices, the Luciel ones odd. i guess.

    I'll be back.
  • edited September 2013
    You did not expect that, did you?
    If I can't kill her by being an asshole to her, I'm going to earn her trust and leave her for the walkers.
  • edited September 2013
    hmmm...clever.



    (o)Give Apple to Mackie
    Liam turned to his Left, and Handed the Apple of Mackie.

    "Thanks...You are going to have some this time too i Hope" Mackie Said.

    "I get food almost every other day" Liam asided.

    (o)Give Chocolate Biscuit to Oliver

    Liam walked over to Oliver, who was Sitting on a Lump of Rock. "Hey, Bud" he smiled.

    "Food" Liam said, Holding it in front of the Man.

    "Yeah, Thanks Bud" He smiled. As he took the Biccie, and Immediatly Wolfed it down. "Thanks"

    (o)Give Jerky to Jamila
    Liam looked at Jamila, the Girl was Doodling, Holding up some Paper on the Truck's Side wall "Hey, Jamila" Liam said. Jamila looked at him.

    "Yes?" She asked, Smiling.

    "hungry?" Liam asked, Handing her some Jerky.

    "Thanks!" She Enthuasiastically Cheered, Taking the Jerky and Sitting down to Eat it.

    (o)Give Meat Chunk to Sally
    Liam walked over to Sally, who was Sitting on a Chair strumming a Acoustic Guitar she found a Few weeks ago.

    "Sally?" Liam asked, smiling.

    "Yes, what is it?" She asked, As she politely stopping playing.

    "I've got some food" Liam said, handing her some Meat.

    ".....Liam. I really appreciate the offer, but you know I'm Vegetarian" Sally said, not Smiling. "I mean...." Sally looked at Liam. "I'll eat Meat this once, Kay?" She asked.
    [You don't need to.]
    [You should]
    [You're Vegetarian?]
    [...]
  • edited September 2013
    [You should]
  • edited September 2013
    (?) You Agreed with Sally's Conclusion
    Sally smiled at Liam, as she Started to eat it hesitantly. She was practically forcing herself too.

    Liam only had one food item left.

    (o)Cheese n' Crackers to Luciel
    Liam walked to Luciel and showed her some Cheese n' Crackers.

    "Are you taunting me?" Luciel asked. "Because i'm not going to try and grab them if you're just going to Pull away"

    "No. Eat" Liam said.

    Luciel Looked at the Cheese n' Crackers suspiciously,before taking them and started to eat.

    "Okay" Nicholas smiled. as he Stood up "Now Some of us have Eaten, lets get going" Nicholas said, Picking up a Pistol.

    "Yeah. Here we go" Wallace said, as he, Luciel, Liam and Oliver stood up. not Simutaneously.

    "Same plan as usual?" Amelia asked.

    "Yes" Wallace confirmed "Hopefully we'll find a better camp this time" He continued. as the Group left to find Stuff.

    Like Normal, Omar, Amelia, Sally and Mackie were Staying with Jamila to look after the Camp. While the Rest were Aimlessly Looking through the Forest, waiting to find something.

    "Liam?" Oliver asked, Smiling.
    [Leave me Alone, psycho]
    [What?]
    [Oliver.]
    [...]

    "What?" Liam asked.

    Oliver Showed him a Handful of Pills. "Want some?"

    "What are those?" Liam asked.

    "Not sure. Found some in that Camp. They've got Opium in them though. Whatever that means. I've yet to try them.." Oliver added at the end.
    [You're doing drugs?]
    [Medicine]
    [No thanks. get rid of them]
    [...]
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