It isn't clear if they are either still waiting for ruth to come in or if she is already in the room. And Clem was staying guard on a truck - is she in the room now? Anyway, guess you can go on as Ruth hasn't noticed them yet
It isn't clear if they are either still waiting for ruth to come in or if she is already in the room. And Clem was staying guard on a truck - is she in the room now? Anyway, guess you can go on as Ruth hasn't noticed them yet
Whoever's next: I suggest that Clem becomes what Charlie was trying to teach her - being selfconfident, don't always trust strangers, not listening to grownups blindheaded and not being afraid. RIP, Charlie. Really, I am depressed.
Clementine sees Kenny and Pascucci through the field glasses Pascucci gave her. Suddenly she can see Pas making the secret gesture they have agreed upon in case someone's coming. The door is being opened...
As soon as Kenny and Pas can see black hair looking out from behind the door Pascucci hits Ruth head with the hilt of the knife. Kenny closes the door very quickly so nobody can hear them. "Holy shit - that was easy!". says Pascucci while he is trussing her unconscious body up in fetters. "Ok Ken, I got the keys - let's go. In the hallway there are two doors to the right and the stairs on the left. Straight ahead there is another door but made of mtetal - it looks very heavy. "I bet it's there - that Jeremy was talking about a metal door. We gotta be quiet and get in there.". Pascucci whispers, sensing the voices from upstairs. They unlock the door and get into the room very quickly, closing the door behind them. When Kenny switches on the headlight they can see three persons in it: a young man staring at them, a black man also staring with his eyes widely open nd a woman, that looks dead. "Don't kill us, please!" the young man says. "I've never seen you in here. Do you want to eat us?" asks he black guy.
"Sorry pal, but I don't like the taste of human meat." Kenny replied to the dark man. "Pascucci, start working on those locks, there's a lot of keys there so this could take awhile."
"THANK YOU !" Prisoners nearby thanked their unexpected saviors.
"Keep it the fuck down !" Kenny scolded them. "If we think we'll get caught we're leaving you behind."
"Do you know where we can find some sort of gas main, we want to take this place down if we can?" Pascucci asked.
"When I was getting dragged through the town when I got caught, I saw some tanks, I can show you once you free EVERYONE." The dark man said. "Names Gus by the way."
"You got yourself a deal." Pascucci said.
"Hey do you got someone watching the door for guards?" A random prisoner asked.
From the 10-19th My Girl friend, a couple of my friends, there girl friends and i will be going on a little road trip in 2 campers. its gonna be awesome! as a result there will be no posts from me. there might be a chance to check out whats going on when i have WI-FI but there will be no posts.
"Sorry pal, but I don't like the taste of human meat." Kenny replied to the dark man. "Pascucci, start working on those locks, there's a lot o… moref keys there so this could take awhile."
"THANK YOU !" Prisoners nearby thanked their unexpected saviors.
"Keep it the fuck down !" Kenny scolded them. "If we think we'll get caught we're leaving you behind."
"Do you know where we can find some sort of gas main, we want to take this place down if we can?" Pascucci asked.
"When I was getting dragged through the town when I got caught, I saw some tanks, I can show you once you free EVERYONE." The dark man said. "Names Gus by the way."
"You got yourself a deal." Pascucci said.
"Hey do you got someone watching the door for guards?" A random prisoner asked.
Kenny smiled. "The best person for the job."
Clementine had been eyeing on the weathered gray building for a while now. It didn't have a lot of windows but she had caught a few glimpses of Kenny and Pascucci taking care of many armed men guarding the place. Clementine held her hands tightly around her gun. She felt a weird sense of anger boiling up inside her. The urge to run in after the rest of her group was strong, but she had agreed on waiting outside to protect Danielle and Jeremy.
''Clementine?'', Danielle whispered loudly, ''I think I hear someone coming.''
Clementine looked outside the windows of their car, she heard a set of voices coming closer. Danielle had a frightened look on her face, Clementine had trusted her with Charlie's rifle even though she didn't have any experience with shooting with it either. The girls prepared themselves for the worst when they heard two loud voices awfully close to the car.
''So that's how they broke the fence.'', one of the guys said, ''We better go check it out, this thing might have some supplies left in it.''
''Are you crazy? What if one of those guys is in there?''
''What do you think these guns are for? Idiot...'', the first man said while walking closer to the jeep, Clementine heard the sound of a gun reloading.
''What do we do?'', Danielle whispered while readying her rifle.
- Choice -/ Stay hidden / Try to drive the car / Start shooting / Yell something /
Clementine had been eyeing on the weathered gray building for a while now. It didn't have a lot of windows but she had caught a few glimpses o… moref Kenny and Pascucci taking care of many armed men guarding the place. Clementine held her hands tightly around her gun. She felt a weird sense of anger boiling up inside her. The urge to run in after the rest of her group was strong, but she had agreed on waiting outside to protect Danielle and Jeremy.
''Clementine?'', Danielle whispered loudly, ''I think I hear someone coming.''
Clementine looked outside the windows of their car, she heard a set of voices coming closer. Danielle had a frightened look on her face, Clementine had trusted her with Charlie's rifle even though she didn't have any experience with shooting with it either. The girls prepared themselves for the worst when they heard two loud voices awfully close to the car.
''So that's how they broke the fence.'', one of the guys said, ''… [view original content]
" hide under the back seat! Clemintine whispered to Danielle. The door slowly creeped open.
" nobody's in here! See if you can hotwire it or somthing!" A woman nearly yelled.
" don't have to keys are right here" a guy said In Reply.
Danielle looked over at Clem. " you left the keys up there!" She asked incredibly to loud.
Clem closed her eyes and pushed herself further under the seat, aman in his mid 30s poked his head under the seat, and pointed a gun at the girls.
" Hey Liza come here, found some food for our watch dogs."
A girl no older than 20 slid beside the man. Clem began to reach for her gun in the waistband of her pants.
" don't even try! Now get out here both of you! Liza practically yelled.
Clemintine and dani emerged from behind the seat and now sat in the seats.
" drop ur weapons now!" The man yelled
Dani attempted to bold out the open door before being punched in the face by the man, breaking her nose causing blood to pour down her face. Tears began to slide down Dani's face.
" you gonna try anything like that ever again" Liza now faced dani, and dani shook her head no. continue
Any character can die at any point, but don't do it for no reason. We did just have two important characters die recently and I feel it's for the best to wait to kill more till later but it's up to whomever is writing at the time. Also why just kill Dani like that, we've barely got any character out of here, it just doesn't feel right to me but again your call. Just seems a bit quick as she was just introduced in the last page, making her death effectively meaningless. The audience doesn't feel... they don't feel anything.
" hide under the back seat! Clemintine whispered to Danielle. The door slowly creeped open.
" nobody's in here! See if you can hotwire it o… morer somthing!" A woman nearly yelled.
" don't have to keys are right here" a guy said In Reply.
Danielle looked over at Clem. " you left the keys up there!" She asked incredibly to loud.
Clem closed her eyes and pushed herself further under the seat, aman in his mid 30s poked his head under the seat, and pointed a gun at the girls.
" Hey Liza come here, found some food for our watch dogs."
A girl no older than 20 slid beside the man. Clem began to reach for her gun in the waistband of her pants.
" don't even try! Now get out here both of you! Liza practically yelled.
Clemintine and dani emerged from behind the seat and now sat in the seats.
" drop ur weapons now!" The man yelled
Dani attempted to bold out the open door before being punched in the face by the man, breaking her nose causing blood t… [view original content]
Any character can die at any point, but don't do it for no reason. We did just have two important characters die recently and I feel it's for … morethe best to wait to kill more till later but it's up to whomever is writing at the time. Also why just kill Dani like that, we've barely got any character out of here, it just doesn't feel right to me but again your call. Just seems a bit quick as she was just introduced in the last page, making her death effectively meaningless. The audience doesn't feel... they don't feel anything.
I think it would be unfair to disregard it just because I don't like it. If you wanted to change though that's cool to. I feel like constitutive criticism is important to this whole thread, I know I've changed posts do to it. Again your choice.
I think it would be unfair to disregard it just because I don't like it. If you wanted to change though that's cool to. I feel like constitutive criticism is important to this whole thread, I know I've changed posts do to it. Again your choice.
"You broke a little girls nose." Clementine said to the man.
"Like it fucking matters, she'll be pet food soon enough just like you." The man sneered at her.
"I don't know Alex I think I like this one she's got a lot a fighting spirit. Give her a little time in the hole we can turn that into useful energy, if you know what I mean." Liz replied.
"Ah come on that little runt ? She's ten at most, what's she gonna do for us ?" Alex responded.
There was a rustling sound in the bushes nearby however the two seemed not to notice for the moment. Clementine thought of running but knew better, she was still in their line of sight. She looked down at Dani who was slowly pulling herself off the ground well softly sobbing.
"Maybe your right but why not wait and see that other girl will keep the dogs busy for awhile and we can see if we can't convince the other one to help us out. At the very least we might be able to trap some people with a cute face like that." Liza finished.
Suddenly a loud boom cracks through the air. It was louder then anything Clementine had seen before. She turned to see the entire village going up in flames.
"Kenny!" She yelled falling to her knees, tears streaming down her face. The two would be captors just stared towards the building inferno with blank expressions. Somehow through the ringing from her ears she heard the bushed behind her snap and pop, and she turned to see two walkers crawling out from under the brush. They were heading for Liza and Alex, Clem didn't wait to see what happened to them. She grabbed Dani and told her to run, and even though it was a bad idea because walkers had just come from that direction they ran and disappeared into the wilderness. Leaving Jeremy behind.
(Writers note: Not sure how this is going to go over with people but I hope you like it.)
"You broke a little girls nose." Clementine said to the man.
"Like it fucking matters, she'll be pet food soon enough just like you." The m… morean sneered at her.
"I don't know Alex I think I like this one she's got a lot a fighting spirit. Give her a little time in the hole we can turn that into useful energy, if you know what I mean." Liz replied.
"Ah come on that little runt ? She's ten at most, what's she gonna do for us ?" Alex responded.
There was a rustling sound in the bushes nearby however the two seemed not to notice for the moment. Clementine thought of running but knew better, she was still in their line of sight. She looked down at Dani who was slowly pulling herself off the ground well softly sobbing.
"Maybe your right but why not wait and see that other girl will keep the dogs busy for awhile and we can see if we can't convince the other one to help us out. At the very least we might be able to trap some people with a cut… [view original content]
cool, huh so Jermey could wake up and find two people? he wouldnt even know they were enemies that could be interesting. Also Is Danielle a scared kid or hardcore? She was swearing like a trooper earlier but now she seems sort of helpless, not that I disagree its good to have a more normal child after Charlie even though he was a good character.
cool, huh so Jermey could wake up and find two people? he wouldnt even know they were enemies that could be interesting. Also Is Danielle a sc… moreared kid or hardcore? She was swearing like a trooper earlier but now she seems sort of helpless, not that I disagree its good to have a more normal child after Charlie even though he was a good character.
"The hell are you doing?! Run!!!" yells Kenny at Gus and Dave, just dressed in coats and boots they managed to get from the killed guards.
"Which way?!" asks Gus, gasping because of exhaustion. His body isn't used to physical training anymore. While running he tries to help Dave who is permanently tripping, Kenny on the other hand just focuses on shooting guards as well as covering the group. Before Kenny can answer an explosion kills the silence of the night and the hot blast wave flings them to the ground.
"Paaaas!! Where are ya, Pal?!" yells Kenny while getting on his feet and trying to orientate himself - smoke and fire everywhere. Then all of the sudden a hand grabs his arm from behind. It was Pascucci. "I'm here - see? The idea with the gas tanks worked - let's get the fuck outta here!" he proudly says with a grin. Even before they finally reach the area where they've parked the jeep they can realise from their distant position that the front doors are opened and two bodys are on the ground being eaten by two walkers.
"NOOO!! Clementine!!!" Kenny screams out of his soul, striking out for a sprint when Pascucci forcefully grabs his shoulders.
"Ken, stop! Can't you see it?! Everybody, climb on the truck!". In the dark of the forest that is situated behind the car they can barely see the enourmous walker horde. "The flames are attracting them - hurry!" says Pascucci as he helps Gus and Dave to climb the abandoned truck. Kenny falls down on his knees, feeling guilty for the supposed loss of his foster-daughter. "Get up!". Not till the walkers reach them Kenny finally gets on the roof of the truck.
After a long while of Kenny crying and swearing Pascucci managed with the help of Dave to shoot one walker after another while Gus killed all the walkers which tried to climb up with the butcher knife.
When the last walker fell on the ground Pascucci rests his hand on Kenny's shoulder as he eventually says: "Let's go, my friend." As they reach the car Kenny stays in the background because he can't stand the sight of Clems eaten up body when Pascucci says the relieving words: "It's not Clem and Danielle. Thank goodness!" making the sign of the cross.
As Kenny's eyes nearly pop out Jeremy's voice appears: "Over here! Backseat..-"
"Jeremy!" a happy looking Dave replies.
Scene swap
Tavia observes the settlement on fire from the distance in the safety of the trees. It's over... someone was a traitor. Everything I've build up perishes. It was ALMOST perfect... No way back... In a depressed state of mind she stumbles through the forests for a few minutes when she suddenly hears whispering voices of children. As she steps closer Tavia overhears Clem's and Dani's talk:
"What do we do, Clementine? They're everywhere! Where do they come from anyway?"
"You know, Danielle: The noises and the firelights caused by the explosion attract them. It saved our life, actually. Burning that sick settlement really was the best idea. I hope Kenny and Pascucci are alright. And the prisoners, too..."
Some strangers did that? No way! On the one hand Tavia is full of hate for the kids being partly responsible for that disaster. I could kill them off right now. But after a thinking process Tavia comes to the conclusion that she's better going to manipulate those brats to use them for her plans. Don't threaten, act nice. It always works.
"Hello. My name is Tavia. Don't shoot! Are you alright?....."
"The hell are you doing?! Run!!!" yells Kenny at Gus and Dave, just dressed in coats and boots they managed to get from the killed guards.
… more"Which way?!" asks Gus, gasping because of exhaustion. His body isn't used to physical training anymore. While running he tries to help Dave who is permanently tripping, Kenny on the other hand just focuses on shooting guards as well as covering the group. Before Kenny can answer an explosion kills the silence of the night and the hot blast wave flings them to the ground.
"Paaaas!! Where are ya, Pal?!" yells Kenny while getting on his feet and trying to orientate himself - smoke and fire everywhere. Then all of the sudden a hand grabs his arm from behind. It was Pascucci. "I'm here - see? The idea with the gas tanks worked - let's get the fuck outta here!" he proudly says with a grin. Even before they finally reach the area where they've parked the jeep they can realise from their distant position that t… [view original content]
I'd rather we end this episode with the group going back to the farm. We have to work it out somehow so Kenny changes his mind.
But that's just my opinion
Comments
Yea that was the idea
Also: She might've taken it to keep it in memory of him
So just to be clear, they are waiting for Ruth to open the door to the prison area ? I'd like to make a quick post to get things moving.
It isn't clear if they are either still waiting for ruth to come in or if she is already in the room. And Clem was staying guard on a truck - is she in the room now? Anyway, guess you can go on as Ruth hasn't noticed them yet
They heard the door creak. That means it opened...
I can't anymore sorry, I went to bed and now have to go to school. Hopefully someone will move things along well I'm gone.
CHARLIE!
Clementine sees Kenny and Pascucci through the field glasses Pascucci gave her. Suddenly she can see Pas making the secret gesture they have agreed upon in case someone's coming. The door is being opened...
As soon as Kenny and Pas can see black hair looking out from behind the door Pascucci hits Ruth head with the hilt of the knife. Kenny closes the door very quickly so nobody can hear them. "Holy shit - that was easy!". says Pascucci while he is trussing her unconscious body up in fetters. "Ok Ken, I got the keys - let's go. In the hallway there are two doors to the right and the stairs on the left. Straight ahead there is another door but made of mtetal - it looks very heavy. "I bet it's there - that Jeremy was talking about a metal door. We gotta be quiet and get in there.". Pascucci whispers, sensing the voices from upstairs. They unlock the door and get into the room very quickly, closing the door behind them. When Kenny switches on the headlight they can see three persons in it: a young man staring at them, a black man also staring with his eyes widely open nd a woman, that looks dead. "Don't kill us, please!" the young man says. "I've never seen you in here. Do you want to eat us?" asks he black guy.
Please continue
So... Anybody?
Give me a sec I just got home and haven't gotten to read your post carefully yet.
"Sorry pal, but I don't like the taste of human meat." Kenny replied to the dark man. "Pascucci, start working on those locks, there's a lot of keys there so this could take awhile."
"THANK YOU !" Prisoners nearby thanked their unexpected saviors.
"Keep it the fuck down !" Kenny scolded them. "If we think we'll get caught we're leaving you behind."
"Do you know where we can find some sort of gas main, we want to take this place down if we can?" Pascucci asked.
"When I was getting dragged through the town when I got caught, I saw some tanks, I can show you once you free EVERYONE." The dark man said. "Names Gus by the way."
"You got yourself a deal." Pascucci said.
"Hey do you got someone watching the door for guards?" A random prisoner asked.
Kenny smiled. "The best person for the job."
From the 10-19th My Girl friend, a couple of my friends, there girl friends and i will be going on a little road trip in 2 campers. its gonna be awesome! as a result there will be no posts from me. there might be a chance to check out whats going on when i have WI-FI but there will be no posts.
This is good
Yes ! I didn't fuck it up again !
Who the hell is Pascucci? WTF is this name? When will this dumb thread die? -.-
Nobody dislike his post! He feeds on dislikes!
I agree, everybody ignore derpington, his name just says in bold letters "Troll"
don't feed the troll.
This thread will die when people lose all their creativeness.
So that means you'll die first.
Clementine had been eyeing on the weathered gray building for a while now. It didn't have a lot of windows but she had caught a few glimpses of Kenny and Pascucci taking care of many armed men guarding the place. Clementine held her hands tightly around her gun. She felt a weird sense of anger boiling up inside her. The urge to run in after the rest of her group was strong, but she had agreed on waiting outside to protect Danielle and Jeremy.
''Clementine?'', Danielle whispered loudly, ''I think I hear someone coming.''
Clementine looked outside the windows of their car, she heard a set of voices coming closer. Danielle had a frightened look on her face, Clementine had trusted her with Charlie's rifle even though she didn't have any experience with shooting with it either. The girls prepared themselves for the worst when they heard two loud voices awfully close to the car.
''So that's how they broke the fence.'', one of the guys said, ''We better go check it out, this thing might have some supplies left in it.''
''Are you crazy? What if one of those guys is in there?''
''What do you think these guns are for? Idiot...'', the first man said while walking closer to the jeep, Clementine heard the sound of a gun reloading.
''What do we do?'', Danielle whispered while readying her rifle.
- Choice - / Stay hidden / Try to drive the car / Start shooting / Yell something /
Oh dear, tough one
Same, I don't really know what choice to make so I'll let somebody else take the challenge.
Very tense. Think I'll wait this one out.
Just gonna lame it out. Unless you know... no one goes after awhile.
" hide under the back seat! Clemintine whispered to Danielle. The door slowly creeped open.
" nobody's in here! See if you can hotwire it or somthing!" A woman nearly yelled.
" don't have to keys are right here" a guy said In Reply.
Danielle looked over at Clem. " you left the keys up there!" She asked incredibly to loud.
Clem closed her eyes and pushed herself further under the seat, aman in his mid 30s poked his head under the seat, and pointed a gun at the girls.
" Hey Liza come here, found some food for our watch dogs."
A girl no older than 20 slid beside the man. Clem began to reach for her gun in the waistband of her pants.
" don't even try! Now get out here both of you! Liza practically yelled.
Clemintine and dani emerged from behind the seat and now sat in the seats.
" drop ur weapons now!" The man yelled
Dani attempted to bold out the open door before being punched in the face by the man, breaking her nose causing blood to pour down her face. Tears began to slide down Dani's face.
" you gonna try anything like that ever again" Liza now faced dani, and dani shook her head no.
continue
Any character can die at any point, but don't do it for no reason. We did just have two important characters die recently and I feel it's for the best to wait to kill more till later but it's up to whomever is writing at the time. Also why just kill Dani like that, we've barely got any character out of here, it just doesn't feel right to me but again your call. Just seems a bit quick as she was just introduced in the last page, making her death effectively meaningless. The audience doesn't feel... they don't feel anything.
Sorry I killed Danni, I just... Idk if you guys wanna discard my comment go ahead, or I could fix it or something, jlmk
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I think it would be unfair to disregard it just because I don't like it. If you wanted to change though that's cool to. I feel like constitutive criticism is important to this whole thread, I know I've changed posts do to it. Again your choice.
Fixed! Dani's alive just.... A little bloody.
You can think on it for a bit and then I think I might go, I've got ideas for both.
"You broke a little girls nose." Clementine said to the man.
"Like it fucking matters, she'll be pet food soon enough just like you." The man sneered at her.
"I don't know Alex I think I like this one she's got a lot a fighting spirit. Give her a little time in the hole we can turn that into useful energy, if you know what I mean." Liz replied.
"Ah come on that little runt ? She's ten at most, what's she gonna do for us ?" Alex responded.
There was a rustling sound in the bushes nearby however the two seemed not to notice for the moment. Clementine thought of running but knew better, she was still in their line of sight. She looked down at Dani who was slowly pulling herself off the ground well softly sobbing.
"Maybe your right but why not wait and see that other girl will keep the dogs busy for awhile and we can see if we can't convince the other one to help us out. At the very least we might be able to trap some people with a cute face like that." Liza finished.
Suddenly a loud boom cracks through the air. It was louder then anything Clementine had seen before. She turned to see the entire village going up in flames.
"Kenny!" She yelled falling to her knees, tears streaming down her face. The two would be captors just stared towards the building inferno with blank expressions. Somehow through the ringing from her ears she heard the bushed behind her snap and pop, and she turned to see two walkers crawling out from under the brush. They were heading for Liza and Alex, Clem didn't wait to see what happened to them. She grabbed Dani and told her to run, and even though it was a bad idea because walkers had just come from that direction they ran and disappeared into the wilderness. Leaving Jeremy behind.
Awesome!
"Im so hungray" and as a matter of fact my freind is called pasucci. ITS ITALIAN
cool, huh so Jermey could wake up and find two people? he wouldnt even know they were enemies that could be interesting. Also Is Danielle a scared kid or hardcore? She was swearing like a trooper earlier but now she seems sort of helpless, not that I disagree its good to have a more normal child after Charlie even though he was a good character.
When it comes to new characters sometimes it takes awhile to nail down a personality %100. You are right though.
"The hell are you doing?! Run!!!" yells Kenny at Gus and Dave, just dressed in coats and boots they managed to get from the killed guards.
"Which way?!" asks Gus, gasping because of exhaustion. His body isn't used to physical training anymore. While running he tries to help Dave who is permanently tripping, Kenny on the other hand just focuses on shooting guards as well as covering the group. Before Kenny can answer an explosion kills the silence of the night and the hot blast wave flings them to the ground.
"Paaaas!! Where are ya, Pal?!" yells Kenny while getting on his feet and trying to orientate himself - smoke and fire everywhere. Then all of the sudden a hand grabs his arm from behind. It was Pascucci. "I'm here - see? The idea with the gas tanks worked - let's get the fuck outta here!" he proudly says with a grin. Even before they finally reach the area where they've parked the jeep they can realise from their distant position that the front doors are opened and two bodys are on the ground being eaten by two walkers.
"NOOO!! Clementine!!!" Kenny screams out of his soul, striking out for a sprint when Pascucci forcefully grabs his shoulders.
"Ken, stop! Can't you see it?! Everybody, climb on the truck!". In the dark of the forest that is situated behind the car they can barely see the enourmous walker horde. "The flames are attracting them - hurry!" says Pascucci as he helps Gus and Dave to climb the abandoned truck. Kenny falls down on his knees, feeling guilty for the supposed loss of his foster-daughter. "Get up!". Not till the walkers reach them Kenny finally gets on the roof of the truck.
After a long while of Kenny crying and swearing Pascucci managed with the help of Dave to shoot one walker after another while Gus killed all the walkers which tried to climb up with the butcher knife.
When the last walker fell on the ground Pascucci rests his hand on Kenny's shoulder as he eventually says: "Let's go, my friend." As they reach the car Kenny stays in the background because he can't stand the sight of Clems eaten up body when Pascucci says the relieving words: "It's not Clem and Danielle. Thank goodness!" making the sign of the cross.
As Kenny's eyes nearly pop out Jeremy's voice appears: "Over here! Backseat..-"
"Jeremy!" a happy looking Dave replies.
Scene swap
Tavia observes the settlement on fire from the distance in the safety of the trees. It's over... someone was a traitor. Everything I've build up perishes. It was ALMOST perfect... No way back... In a depressed state of mind she stumbles through the forests for a few minutes when she suddenly hears whispering voices of children. As she steps closer Tavia overhears Clem's and Dani's talk:
"What do we do, Clementine? They're everywhere! Where do they come from anyway?"
"You know, Danielle: The noises and the firelights caused by the explosion attract them. It saved our life, actually. Burning that sick settlement really was the best idea. I hope Kenny and Pascucci are alright. And the prisoners, too..."
Some strangers did that? No way! On the one hand Tavia is full of hate for the kids being partly responsible for that disaster. I could kill them off right now. But after a thinking process Tavia comes to the conclusion that she's better going to manipulate those brats to use them for her plans. Don't threaten, act nice. It always works.
"Hello. My name is Tavia. Don't shoot! Are you alright?....."
Please continue
I think she should be more like Clementine from the first season, acting like a moral compass for the more pragmatic ''season 2'' Clementine.
This is fantastic and I think a good end of episode.
Thanks. Just made some stylistic enhancements. I know it's gotten long, I had to stop writing finally. Can't wait for your contributions
So is this the end of the episode ?
I'd rather we end this episode with the group going back to the farm. We have to work it out somehow so Kenny changes his mind.
But that's just my opinion