Melody who is slowly getting angrier by the second remarks: "Are you just going to avoid this conversation two?" Melody waits a few seconds expecting an answer, and says, "Well fine i'm done, i'm done trying to please you, i'm heading to the river." Jeremy starts to think, Why was she trying to please me? "Melody wait! I'm- i'm sorry okay?" Jeremy who is now sweating through his shirt says "i'm just not the most talkative person." Melody who was startled by the fact he even answered her says: "You know what i'm sorry, I just wanted to get to know you a little bit better. I guess I overreacted." Jeremy waits a minute and says: "No it's fine, I just.... I don't know i'm not a good at talking." Jeremy who's shirt was soaking wet at this point remarks: "I guess i just li- never mind forget it." "No, continue" Melody insists. "well i guess I.... you know... might like you a little bit?" Jeremy says. Melody who looks increasingly shocked thinks: wow, i did not see that coming.Was i leading him on, I hope not. "Well.. um.. this is awkward." Now i feel bad for him, dangit he must really like me, just look at him sweat! "I gotta go think about this okay Jeremy." Melody then walks out the door to the river.
Clementine and Danielle who had just heard all of this sit awkwardly at the fire place. "Aw man i fuc$ed up didn't I? I ain't sweating that bad am I Clem?" Clementine shyly says "uh no..." Jeremy then says, "aw man i gotta go catch up with her, explain myself a little better-." Clementine interrupts: "No, don't. Women need time to think." "You sure?" Jeremy says. "Yes i'm positive just give her some time."
Clementine goes outside and catches up to Melody. "Hey, i think you guys would be good together." Melody responds as kindly as she possibly can by saying: "Clem it just won't work it out." "Your not even going to try? Were all getting lonely around here. You and him would be perfect together-." Melody interrupts, yelling now "Clem I can't because I'm with Gus!" Clementine suddenly gets sad. " Oh, i'm... i'm sorry... I just wow. Okay well... um see ya.
Melody who is slowly getting angrier by the second remarks: "Are you just going to avoid this conversation two?" Melody waits a few seconds ex… morepecting an answer, and says, "Well fine i'm done, i'm done trying to please you, i'm heading to the river." Jeremy starts to think, Why was she trying to please me? "Melody wait! I'm- i'm sorry okay?" Jeremy who is now sweating through his shirt says "i'm just not the most talkative person." Melody who was startled by the fact he even answered her says: "You know what i'm sorry, I just wanted to get to know you a little bit better. I guess I overreacted." Jeremy waits a minute and says: "No it's fine, I just.... I don't know i'm not a good at talking." Jeremy who's shirt was soaking wet at this point remarks: "I guess i just li- never mind forget it." "No, continue" Melody insists. "well i guess I.... you know... might like you a little bit?" Jeremy says. Melody who looks increasingly shocked thinks: wow, … [view original content]
So because she's worried about leading Jeremy on, she says she has to think instead of telling him about Gus ? I'd like to go next but this doesn't make sense.
Melody who is slowly getting angrier by the second remarks: "Are you just going to avoid this conversation two?" Melody waits a few seconds ex… morepecting an answer, and says, "Well fine i'm done, i'm done trying to please you, i'm heading to the river." Jeremy starts to think, Why was she trying to please me? "Melody wait! I'm- i'm sorry okay?" Jeremy who is now sweating through his shirt says "i'm just not the most talkative person." Melody who was startled by the fact he even answered her says: "You know what i'm sorry, I just wanted to get to know you a little bit better. I guess I overreacted." Jeremy waits a minute and says: "No it's fine, I just.... I don't know i'm not a good at talking." Jeremy who's shirt was soaking wet at this point remarks: "I guess i just li- never mind forget it." "No, continue" Melody insists. "well i guess I.... you know... might like you a little bit?" Jeremy says. Melody who looks increasingly shocked thinks: wow, … [view original content]
So because she's worried about leading Jeremy on, she says she has to think instead of telling him about Gus ? I'd like to go next but this doesn't make sense.
This thread is allready awesome, but i got an idea. What if there was fan art to go along with this?
it would make this even better! (assumeing anyone who does that would want to)
Just a thought. i will contribute to the story after i catch up on it.
This thread is allready awesome, but i got an idea. What if there was fan art to go along with this?
it would make this even better! (assumei… moreng anyone who does that would want to)
Just a thought. i will contribute to the story after i catch up on it.
"I think you should tell Jeremy, he seems to really care about you and if you don't you'll just hurt his feelings." Clementine said to Melody.
To Clem's surprise Melody started laughing, loudly, she almost started crying. "Even after the entire world's fallen to shit, and the dead are up walking, there is still relationship problems. Truly the humanity has survived as long as we still have things like this." Her laugh trailed off into a sigh. "You're right Clementine, I'll go tell him."
"That's good." Clem said. "I'll catch up in just a second."
Melody gave her a small smile before heading back into the cabin. Clem takes a minute to appreciate her new home she had spent that last few weeks in. It had been the safest place she had been since this whole mess had started. Kenny, Pascucci, and Gus shouldn't be much longer, I hope they caught something big Clem thought to herself. She looked into the trees as if she might catch a glimpse of them. She was about to go back into the cabin and wait for them when she saw something gleaming in the treetops, she looked at it for a second before it disappeared.
"Something doesn't feel right." She whispered to herself as she went back into the cabin.
(Scene Swap)
Something about this little girl interested him, he couldn't put his finger on it. He had been spying on her group since he had rescued her from the two bad people in the forest. He had discovered much information, such as names, and had even been able figure out the relationships of some of the members. The girls name was Clementine, she had been with the ball cap fellow, Kenny he thought it was, for awhile. Even though she was the youngest (far as he could tell anyway) the girl seemed to be the smartest. While spying he had many close calls, it always seemed that the girl would look in his direction, no matter where he hid. Maybe that was what fascinated him, the way she would almost always catch him. The worst time was when he had seen her with the other lady, Methony her name was. Or was it, he was bad at names. Anyway, he was to far away to hear them but the discussion didn't end with either of them killing each other. When the other lady left, the girl had looked right at his tree, he ad hid behind so many branches, but he knew she had seen.
Perhaps it was time to talk to this girl, no she would have grown suspicious by know. Likely she still remembered those arrows he had put into the bad people, that she didn't know where bad. Still though the thought of human contact after so long intrigued him. How long had it been ? Years maybe. Time had lost meaning when ghosts started coming back. He had to think on this more.
Me neither. Gus is bald and I thought Jeremy looked a bit younger, somewhat like this: http://sbtv.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/thumbs/tgfsaq-280-280-100-317372.jpeg
Why start a new thread? No need for that, though we can do that for the download.
I don't think this season should end up with a group or anything safe, we should end it with something that is basically like DOOM (lul) in my opinion, though not neccesarily ending Clem's story in anyway.
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First of i would like to say that while i was gone you guys have done a great job with the new posts. The comment issue could be fatal … morebut as long as we have one or 2 backups we should be fine. i however would like to discuccs the end of this wonder full thread.
1. WORD DOCUMENT DOWNLOAD
It has been mentioned before that someone is keeping a backup of the thread. when this is finished i propose a new thread should be made where we can download the document via dropbox or whatever.
PART 2?
In terms of continuing a new thread will be used but there are options to where we go next in the series
OPTION A
We give an ending where we can continue on the story. this means clementine survives and ends up with a group (Probably the farm one as this would give someone the difficult decision to decide wither jacob deserves to live or not.) and at least ONE person from this group survives (Preferably pascucci or Gus. someone who hasn… [view original content]
Melody who is slowly getting angrier by the second remarks: "Are you just going to avoid this conversation two?" Melody waits a few seconds ex… morepecting an answer, and says, "Well fine i'm done, i'm done trying to please you, i'm heading to the river." Jeremy starts to think, Why was she trying to please me? "Melody wait! I'm- i'm sorry okay?" Jeremy who is now sweating through his shirt says "i'm just not the most talkative person." Melody who was startled by the fact he even answered her says: "You know what i'm sorry, I just wanted to get to know you a little bit better. I guess I overreacted." Jeremy waits a minute and says: "No it's fine, I just.... I don't know i'm not a good at talking." Jeremy who's shirt was soaking wet at this point remarks: "I guess i just li- never mind forget it." "No, continue" Melody insists. "well i guess I.... you know... might like you a little bit?" Jeremy says. Melody who looks increasingly shocked thinks: wow, … [view original content]
(Okay done)
"I think you should tell Jeremy, he seems to really care about you and if you don't you'll just hurt his feelings." Clementine … moresaid to Melody.
To Clem's surprise Melody started laughing, loudly, she almost started crying. "Even after the entire world's fallen to shit, and the dead are up walking, there is still relationship problems. Truly the humanity has survived as long as we still have things like this." Her laugh trailed off into a sigh. "You're right Clementine, I'll go tell him."
"That's good." Clem said. "I'll catch up in just a second."
Melody gave her a small smile before heading back into the cabin. Clem takes a minute to appreciate her new home she had spent that last few weeks in. It had been the safest place she had been since this whole mess had started. Kenny, Pascucci, and Gus shouldn't be much longer, I hope they caught something big Clem thought to herself. She looked into the trees as if she might catch… [view original content]
I really didn't want to do this. But I've thought about this for a long time, so here it goes:
I am requesting to be the one to write the final post of Season 2, episode 5.
Now, I know we haven't even finished episode 4 yet, and this is more of a luck-based system. But I have thought it all through in my head, and I feel like I have come up with the greatest way to end ''Season 2'' of this beautiful fan-fiction. I completely understand if you don't agree with me asking, or rather begging, for this, but I feel like I would just get this out here and see if you all would mind me ''reserving'' the spot.
EDIT:@HSPLazerz Made a much better suggestion. Read on to find out what it was!
I really didn't want to do this. But I've thought about this for a long time, so here it goes:
I am requesting to be the one to write the f… moreinal post of Season 2, episode 5.
Now, I know we haven't even finished episode 4 yet, and this is more of a luck-based system. But I have thought it all through in my head, and I feel like I have come up with the greatest way to end ''Season 2'' of this beautiful fan-fiction. I completely understand if you don't agree with me asking, or rather begging, for this, but I feel like I would just get this out here and see if you all would mind me ''reserving'' the spot.
EDIT: @HSPLazerz Made a much better suggestion. Read on to find out what it was!
I really didn't want to do this. But I've thought about this for a long time, so here it goes:
I am requesting to be the one to write the f… moreinal post of Season 2, episode 5.
Now, I know we haven't even finished episode 4 yet, and this is more of a luck-based system. But I have thought it all through in my head, and I feel like I have come up with the greatest way to end ''Season 2'' of this beautiful fan-fiction. I completely understand if you don't agree with me asking, or rather begging, for this, but I feel like I would just get this out here and see if you all would mind me ''reserving'' the spot.
EDIT: @HSPLazerz Made a much better suggestion. Read on to find out what it was!
I know right, i feel like we all have the talent to do it. Sure, might be a few conflicts here and there about whether or not Clementine should die (just an example, she can't really die though as she is our focus, at least till the next season), but i'm sure after throwing a few ideas around, we'll be able to put it all together .
I know right, i feel like we all have the talent to do it. Sure, might be a few conflicts here and there about whether or not Clementine shoul… mored die (just an example, she can't really die though as she is our focus, at least till the next season), but i'm sure after throwing a few ideas around, we'll be able to put it all together .
Wow... That's just what I wanted his hair color to be! (Please keep this guy a mystery for until VERY LATE in the episode. It makes the episode more interesting, just like with Molly.)
Wow... That's just what I wanted his hair color to be! (Please keep this guy a mystery for until VERY LATE in the episode. It makes the episode more interesting, just like with Molly.)
Yea, also at the end of the Season we need to agree. Clementine: Dead or alive?
I think personally we should leave her fate ambiguous. I don't know how we'd do that but I know somehow we can
That'd sort of work, but i think we should all sorta chat about it. We can share ideas etc. and then say if we like it or not.
It should be ONE MASSIVE POST instead of a bunch of small little dialouges. People have different opinions, and yes, we are supposed to write our own posts and do almost anything we want, but for a final post we should all cooperate and discuss where we should go and who should write what as it IS one of the most important posts. If we don't, it'll probably go way off to Clem becoming a vampire or some shit, lol.
"Finally ready to get your hands dirty Gus?" says Kenny. "No, but i'm gonna have to". Pascucci says, "Fine, why don't you stay here and watch the truck while we go try to hunt some sort of meat. Haven't had something that good in a while." "You better bring back something good, I can't take those beans, and corn much longer." Says Gus. "Alright Gus, we'll be back before sunset. if we aren't somethings probably up." Kenny says. "Oh, and if you hear 2 shots in a row it's probably not a good sign. It will be our warning shot."
Hours later... "So how do you think things are going between Jeremy and Melody?" Pascucci says. "What do you mean?"- "Jeremy told me he was going to tell Melody about his feelings while we were gone. Says Pascucci. "Oh, well good luck for him...-HEY! Wait do you see that? it's a stinking deer." Says Kenny. "Alright i'll shoot." BAM! "Nice shot." says Pascucci. Lets grab and head back to the- What the.. BAM!
SCENE SWAP Man i really feel bad for that kid if he's still into Melody... BAM! "Let's hope that's a deer." Gus says aloud. BAM! "What the F^CK?" Gus immediately gets up and runs into the woods. "Kenny!? Pascucci?!" He is now yelling.
SCENE SWAP
"Now that was a warning shot." Says a person who looks like a bandit. "You give me this deer i won't kill you."- "And what if we don't give you the deer?" Remarks Kenny. "Then i will kill you."-"Fine you can have it, just please don't hurt us." replies Kenny. "Okay but one more thing, fingers crossed." BAM!
SCENE SWAP A third shot? That's strange. BAM! "This is getting out of hand, a fourth shot what if there not the only ones out here?" "GUS!!! Over here quick!" Yells Pascucci. "Kenny's been shot! I'm carrying him back to the truck, we gotta get back to the cabin, Melody told me she has plenty of supplies in case anything were to happen to someone.
Nearly an hour later...
"I'm gonna take a look at him." Says Gus. "Man he must have gotten him right in the middle of the chest!" Kenny who was waking in and out of consciousness says, "Ready to get your hands dirty boy?" Kenny tries to smile but couldn't, he was going through to much pain. A tear falls from the face of Gus. "Alright we're here get him out!
SCENE SWAP
"Your right Clementine I'll go tell him." Melody who was walking back to the cabin in almost complete darkness sees headlights. "Thank goodness your back i'm getting real hungry." Her sentence was interrupted by the voice of Gus. "Melody get all the supplies you can, Kenny's been shot! PLEASE CONTINUE
That was... random. I had a hard time following it, it was hard to tell who was speaking. Also there is no way they would just surrender to one bandit, that's the biggest problem. They have him out manned and out gunned.
A few hours before...
"Finally ready to get your hands dirty Gus?" says Kenny. "No, but i'm gonna have to". Pascucci says, "Fine, why don't… more you stay here and watch the truck while we go try to hunt some sort of meat. Haven't had something that good in a while." "You better bring back something good, I can't take those beans, and corn much longer." Says Gus. "Alright Gus, we'll be back before sunset. if we aren't somethings probably up." Kenny says. "Oh, and if you hear 2 shots in a row it's probably not a good sign. It will be our warning shot."
Hours later... "So how do you think things are going between Jeremy and Melody?" Pascucci says. "What do you mean?"- "Jeremy told me he was going to tell Melody about his feelings while we were gone. Says Pascucci. "Oh, well good luck for him...-HEY! Wait do you see that? it's a stinking deer." Says Kenny. "Alright i'll shoot." BAM! "Nice shot." says Pascucci. Lets grab and head back to the- What t… [view original content]
Poor Kenny has been shot for the third or even fourth time
Anyway: I have a request: I think this text is very puzzling. I don't quite get it. I wish it was more precise, you know? All I got is that Kenny,s been shot and that there are some bandits.
And another question to the others: Wasn't this episode "Before the Storm" meant to be peaceful and optimistic?
A few hours before...
"Finally ready to get your hands dirty Gus?" says Kenny. "No, but i'm gonna have to". Pascucci says, "Fine, why don't… more you stay here and watch the truck while we go try to hunt some sort of meat. Haven't had something that good in a while." "You better bring back something good, I can't take those beans, and corn much longer." Says Gus. "Alright Gus, we'll be back before sunset. if we aren't somethings probably up." Kenny says. "Oh, and if you hear 2 shots in a row it's probably not a good sign. It will be our warning shot."
Hours later... "So how do you think things are going between Jeremy and Melody?" Pascucci says. "What do you mean?"- "Jeremy told me he was going to tell Melody about his feelings while we were gone. Says Pascucci. "Oh, well good luck for him...-HEY! Wait do you see that? it's a stinking deer." Says Kenny. "Alright i'll shoot." BAM! "Nice shot." says Pascucci. Lets grab and head back to the- What t… [view original content]
Man Kenny must be made out of led at this point. It was supposed be peaceful, still we can't control what other people write, my problem with the post is that it is hard to read. Also it appears they just surrender to ONE bandit, that's not in Kenny's character.
Poor Kenny has been shot for the third or even fourth time
Anyway: I have a request: I think this text is very puzzling. I don't quite get … moreit. I wish it was more precise, you know? All I got is that Kenny,s been shot and that there are some bandits.
And another question to the others: Wasn't this episode "Before the Storm" meant to be peaceful and optimistic?
That was... random. I had a hard time following it, it was hard to tell who was speaking. Also there is no way they would just surrender to one bandit, that's the biggest problem. They have him out manned and out gunned.
I agree with you regarding our group outnumbering the bandit, though I really believe we should somehow stick to the episodes theme - we chose it for a reason. Like someone else wrote: the more peaceful and optimistic this episode is the harder does a desasterous final season hit our group.
Man Kenny must be made out of led at this point. It was supposed be peaceful, still we can't control what other people write, my problem with … morethe post is that it is hard to read. Also it appears they just surrender to ONE bandit, that's not in Kenny's character.
I agree with you regarding our group outnumbering the bandit, though I really believe we should somehow stick to the episodes theme - we chose… more it for a reason. Like someone else wrote: the more peaceful and optimistic this episode is the harder does a desasterous final season hit our group.
Sorry guys i'm just not the best writer. I will delete this post. The only time I will participate is when either I write short posts or wait until this episode to end.
A few hours before...
"Finally ready to get your hands dirty Gus?" says Kenny. "No, but i'm gonna have to". Pascucci says, "Fine, why don't… more you stay here and watch the truck while we go try to hunt some sort of meat. Haven't had something that good in a while." "You better bring back something good, I can't take those beans, and corn much longer." Says Gus. "Alright Gus, we'll be back before sunset. if we aren't somethings probably up." Kenny says. "Oh, and if you hear 2 shots in a row it's probably not a good sign. It will be our warning shot."
Hours later... "So how do you think things are going between Jeremy and Melody?" Pascucci says. "What do you mean?"- "Jeremy told me he was going to tell Melody about his feelings while we were gone. Says Pascucci. "Oh, well good luck for him...-HEY! Wait do you see that? it's a stinking deer." Says Kenny. "Alright i'll shoot." BAM! "Nice shot." says Pascucci. Lets grab and head back to the- What t… [view original content]
Man you don't have to be a great writer to participate in this thread. I liked your last post. This one was just hard to read, and some things didn't make sense. Everyone makes mistakes. If you wish to stop, please stop by and contribute when you want to.
Sorry guys i'm just not the best writer. I will delete this post. The only time I will participate is when either I write short posts or wait until this episode to end.
And again I am sorry.
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Me neither. Gus is bald and I thought Jeremy looked a bit younger, somewhat like this: http://sbtv.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/thumbs/tgfsaq-280-280-100-317372.jpeg
Melody who is slowly getting angrier by the second remarks: "Are you just going to avoid this conversation two?" Melody waits a few seconds expecting an answer, and says, "Well fine i'm done, i'm done trying to please you, i'm heading to the river." Jeremy starts to think, Why was she trying to please me? "Melody wait! I'm- i'm sorry okay?" Jeremy who is now sweating through his shirt says "i'm just not the most talkative person." Melody who was startled by the fact he even answered her says: "You know what i'm sorry, I just wanted to get to know you a little bit better. I guess I overreacted." Jeremy waits a minute and says: "No it's fine, I just.... I don't know i'm not a good at talking." Jeremy who's shirt was soaking wet at this point remarks: "I guess i just li- never mind forget it." "No, continue" Melody insists. "well i guess I.... you know... might like you a little bit?" Jeremy says. Melody who looks increasingly shocked thinks: wow, i did not see that coming. Was i leading him on, I hope not. "Well.. um.. this is awkward." Now i feel bad for him, dangit he must really like me, just look at him sweat! "I gotta go think about this okay Jeremy." Melody then walks out the door to the river.
Clementine and Danielle who had just heard all of this sit awkwardly at the fire place. "Aw man i fuc$ed up didn't I? I ain't sweating that bad am I Clem?" Clementine shyly says "uh no..." Jeremy then says, "aw man i gotta go catch up with her, explain myself a little better-." Clementine interrupts: "No, don't. Women need time to think." "You sure?" Jeremy says. "Yes i'm positive just give her some time."
Clementine goes outside and catches up to Melody. "Hey, i think you guys would be good together." Melody responds as kindly as she possibly can by saying: "Clem it just won't work it out." "Your not even going to try? Were all getting lonely around here. You and him would be perfect together-." Melody interrupts, yelling now "Clem I can't because I'm with Gus!" Clementine suddenly gets sad. " Oh, i'm... i'm sorry... I just wow. Okay well... um see ya.
If anybody wants me to change the last part i will, I figured i would ask before I make that part "official."
So because she's worried about leading Jeremy on, she says she has to think instead of telling him about Gus ? I'd like to go next but this doesn't make sense.
She wants to think about how she's going to tell him. But at the same time she wanted to avoid that conversation.
This thread is allready awesome, but i got an idea. What if there was fan art to go along with this?
it would make this even better! (assumeing anyone who does that would want to)
Just a thought.
i will contribute to the story after i catch up on it.
I guess that's fine. Can I go or are you gonna change something ?
We've already seen some fan art, more can't hurt.
Nah, you can go. I don't have to edit anything unless you think i made a bad decision with Melody dating Gus.
Anything within probability is go, and because we don't know enough about Melody, this is within her incompletely defined character.
(Okay done)
"I think you should tell Jeremy, he seems to really care about you and if you don't you'll just hurt his feelings." Clementine said to Melody.
To Clem's surprise Melody started laughing, loudly, she almost started crying. "Even after the entire world's fallen to shit, and the dead are up walking, there is still relationship problems. Truly the humanity has survived as long as we still have things like this." Her laugh trailed off into a sigh. "You're right Clementine, I'll go tell him."
"That's good." Clem said. "I'll catch up in just a second."
Melody gave her a small smile before heading back into the cabin. Clem takes a minute to appreciate her new home she had spent that last few weeks in. It had been the safest place she had been since this whole mess had started. Kenny, Pascucci, and Gus shouldn't be much longer, I hope they caught something big Clem thought to herself. She looked into the trees as if she might catch a glimpse of them. She was about to go back into the cabin and wait for them when she saw something gleaming in the treetops, she looked at it for a second before it disappeared.
"Something doesn't feel right." She whispered to herself as she went back into the cabin.
(Scene Swap)
Something about this little girl interested him, he couldn't put his finger on it. He had been spying on her group since he had rescued her from the two bad people in the forest. He had discovered much information, such as names, and had even been able figure out the relationships of some of the members. The girls name was Clementine, she had been with the ball cap fellow, Kenny he thought it was, for awhile. Even though she was the youngest (far as he could tell anyway) the girl seemed to be the smartest. While spying he had many close calls, it always seemed that the girl would look in his direction, no matter where he hid. Maybe that was what fascinated him, the way she would almost always catch him. The worst time was when he had seen her with the other lady, Methony her name was. Or was it, he was bad at names. Anyway, he was to far away to hear them but the discussion didn't end with either of them killing each other. When the other lady left, the girl had looked right at his tree, he ad hid behind so many branches, but he knew she had seen.
Perhaps it was time to talk to this girl, no she would have grown suspicious by know. Likely she still remembered those arrows he had put into the bad people, that she didn't know where bad. Still though the thought of human contact after so long intrigued him. How long had it been ? Years maybe. Time had lost meaning when ghosts started coming back. He had to think on this more.
I wanted Melody to date Jeremy
but maybe the story gets more interesting now that she's actually with Gus
To be honest, I only drew him bald because I had a lot of trouble drawing his hair. ; P
Why start a new thread? No need for that, though we can do that for the download.
I don't think this season should end up with a group or anything safe, we should end it with something that is basically like DOOM (lul) in my opinion, though not neccesarily ending Clem's story in anyway.
Well. that went quick, :P.
Damn, i like that idea with the guy who's, "interested", in Clem.
Please, no one kill him off! I have an idea for him :P.
I really didn't want to do this. But I've thought about this for a long time, so here it goes:
I am requesting to be the one to write the final post of Season 2, episode 5.
Now, I know we haven't even finished episode 4 yet, and this is more of a luck-based system. But I have thought it all through in my head, and I feel like I have come up with the greatest way to end ''Season 2'' of this beautiful fan-fiction. I completely understand if you don't agree with me asking, or rather begging, for this, but I feel like I would just get this out here and see if you all would mind me ''reserving'' the spot.
EDIT: @HSPLazerz Made a much better suggestion. Read on to find out what it was!
I would agree it just doesn't sound right to me. I think it should be any random guy. Luck.
Why don't we all, yes, ALL, co-operate in making the final post of Season 2?
Now, THAT would be epic.
1000 posts in this little game of ours.
You guys are awesome
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I know right, i feel like we all have the talent to do it. Sure, might be a few conflicts here and there about whether or not Clementine should die (just an example, she can't really die though as she is our focus, at least till the next season), but i'm sure after throwing a few ideas around, we'll be able to put it all together
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I think we should write it using replies, constantly adding small replies. Eventually it'll turn into a SUPER-REPLY!
I also have plans... WE SHALL FIGHT FOR IT.. nah it's luck of the draw. Whatever you do make him blond, please.
Yea, also at the end of the Season we need to agree. Clementine: Dead or alive?
I think personally we should leave her fate ambiguous. I don't know how we'd do that but I know somehow we can
Wow... That's just what I wanted his hair color to be! (Please keep this guy a mystery for until VERY LATE in the episode. It makes the episode more interesting, just like with Molly.)
YEA ! I was thinking of doing a DLC back story like we did with Lilly at one point, but yea, we can wait until the end of the episode.
"Im wanted... dead or alive." -Bon Jovi
I say we put it to a vote, i say alive.
SUPER-REPLY
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That'd sort of work, but i think we should all sorta chat about it. We can share ideas etc. and then say if we like it or not.
It should be ONE MASSIVE POST instead of a bunch of small little dialouges. People have different opinions, and yes, we are supposed to write our own posts and do almost anything we want, but for a final post we should all cooperate and discuss where we should go and who should write what as it IS one of the most important posts. If we don't, it'll probably go way off to Clem becoming a vampire or some shit, lol.
A few hours before...
"Finally ready to get your hands dirty Gus?" says Kenny. "No, but i'm gonna have to". Pascucci says, "Fine, why don't you stay here and watch the truck while we go try to hunt some sort of meat. Haven't had something that good in a while." "You better bring back something good, I can't take those beans, and corn much longer." Says Gus. "Alright Gus, we'll be back before sunset. if we aren't somethings probably up." Kenny says. "Oh, and if you hear 2 shots in a row it's probably not a good sign. It will be our warning shot."
Hours later... "So how do you think things are going between Jeremy and Melody?" Pascucci says. "What do you mean?"- "Jeremy told me he was going to tell Melody about his feelings while we were gone. Says Pascucci. "Oh, well good luck for him...-HEY! Wait do you see that? it's a stinking deer." Says Kenny. "Alright i'll shoot." BAM! "Nice shot." says Pascucci. Lets grab and head back to the- What the.. BAM!
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Man i really feel bad for that kid if he's still into Melody... BAM! "Let's hope that's a deer." Gus says aloud. BAM! "What the F^CK?" Gus immediately gets up and runs into the woods. "Kenny!? Pascucci?!" He is now yelling.
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"Now that was a warning shot." Says a person who looks like a bandit. "You give me this deer i won't kill you."- "And what if we don't give you the deer?" Remarks Kenny. "Then i will kill you."-"Fine you can have it, just please don't hurt us." replies Kenny. "Okay but one more thing, fingers crossed." BAM!
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A third shot? That's strange. BAM! "This is getting out of hand, a fourth shot what if there not the only ones out here?" "GUS!!! Over here quick!" Yells Pascucci. "Kenny's been shot! I'm carrying him back to the truck, we gotta get back to the cabin, Melody told me she has plenty of supplies in case anything were to happen to someone.
Nearly an hour later...
"I'm gonna take a look at him." Says Gus. "Man he must have gotten him right in the middle of the chest!" Kenny who was waking in and out of consciousness says, "Ready to get your hands dirty boy?" Kenny tries to smile but couldn't, he was going through to much pain. A tear falls from the face of Gus. "Alright we're here get him out!
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"Your right Clementine I'll go tell him." Melody who was walking back to the cabin in almost complete darkness sees headlights. "Thank goodness your back i'm getting real hungry." Her sentence was interrupted by the voice of Gus. "Melody get all the supplies you can, Kenny's been shot!
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That was... random. I had a hard time following it, it was hard to tell who was speaking. Also there is no way they would just surrender to one bandit, that's the biggest problem. They have him out manned and out gunned.
Poor Kenny has been shot for the third or even fourth time
Anyway: I have a request: I think this text is very puzzling. I don't quite get it. I wish it was more precise, you know? All I got is that Kenny,s been shot and that there are some bandits.
And another question to the others: Wasn't this episode "Before the Storm" meant to be peaceful and optimistic?
Soooo proud!
Man Kenny must be made out of led at this point. It was supposed be peaceful, still we can't control what other people write, my problem with the post is that it is hard to read. Also it appears they just surrender to ONE bandit, that's not in Kenny's character.
Sorry, hadn't seen you wrote that, too. I found that text difficult to understand as well.
I agree with you regarding our group outnumbering the bandit, though I really believe we should somehow stick to the episodes theme - we chose it for a reason. Like someone else wrote: the more peaceful and optimistic this episode is the harder does a desasterous final season hit our group.
I want that to, but I don't want to control other peoples writing to much as long as it's within reason to.
Sorry guys i'm just not the best writer. I will delete this post. The only time I will participate is when either I write short posts or wait until this episode to end.
And again I am sorry.
Man you don't have to be a great writer to participate in this thread. I liked your last post. This one was just hard to read, and some things didn't make sense. Everyone makes mistakes. If you wish to stop, please stop by and contribute when you want to.