Your stories are amazing, Raging Blades. Clayton Applauds Head to convenience store. Seems nice and cozy.
Here's a few more details on Pavel that I left out, (My bad). He wants to try to find his brother, Asim, that he believes is still in Atlanta. He's a taller and larger scale person, making it harder for him to get around small places. Even though he uses guns quite frequently, and is properly trained in them, he hates them, due to his mother dying by one.
Again, great job, you really got this down. If you want me to make some more references of Pavel in my stories, I can.
>>Tyranitar<<
“AWESOMEO should be back by now…” Tyranitar said to himself. His mother suggested he goes after him but he wasn… more’t sure if that was the right call. Even his little sister wanted him to go. After a few minutes of convincing he finally decided to go. The car was gone so he would need to go by foot. He gave his mother and sister a quick kiss and hug goodbye and set off…
>>Greg Harper<<
He really hated that Harpa guy. He decided he was going to leave before Harpa would kill him one way or another. After he pulled that gun, he felt unsafe. And cops… They could arrest him. Once he saw John walk in he had already decided to leave. Under cover of night he sneaked away. He caught a glimpse of Jennifer walking into the forest. He didn’t really know her so he decided to go off on his own. He needed a place to stay for the night. There was a small convenience store to his right. And a hotel to his left.
He… [view original content]
I loved Dale too, I liked that he made Andrea see sense in the Season 1 Finale. This is my cousin, she recently got a part in The Vampire Diaries which is another one of my favourite shows. I'm so happy for her so I use her as my new pp!
Yeah. Not many people like Rebecca. I actually liked her in E1. Who is your avatar?
Yup its Boyd. From 400 day's and small appearance in … moreE4. When they were fighting to keep the guy alive in 400 day's he went against it. This immediately reminded me of my favorite character from the show. Dale. They both had a firm grasp on humanity and seemed to be the moral part of their groups. Boyd even regretted stealing the boat!
Sadly I chose to let the guy live and Boyd died in the fighting. It sucked because out of all the people that could have died it was the one I liked the most and the one that set the guy free. I was beginning to like Boyd. This is how I commemorate him and remember him. Like Lee said "You deserved better old man"
Okay. I don't need to find Asim though right? I don't want Pavel interrupting into your other story.
Thanks . It means a lot from a good writer. You don't need to make references but if you want to its fine with me. I just write. You guys just make the characters.
Your stories are amazing, Raging Blades. Clayton Applauds Head to convenience store. Seems nice and cozy.
Here's a few more details on Pa… morevel that I left out, (My bad). He wants to try to find his brother, Asim, that he believes is still in Atlanta. He's a taller and larger scale person, making it harder for him to get around small places. Even though he uses guns quite frequently, and is properly trained in them, he hates them, due to his mother dying by one.
Again, great job, you really got this down. If you want me to make some more references of Pavel in my stories, I can.
I loved Dale too, I liked that he made Andrea see sense in the Season 1 Finale. This is my cousin, she recently got a part in The Vampire Diaries which is another one of my favourite shows. I'm so happy for her so I use her as my new pp!
Okay. I don't need to find Asim though right? I don't want Pavel interrupting into your other story.
Thanks . It means a lot from a good … morewriter. You don't need to make references but if you want to its fine with me. I just write. You guys just make the characters.
Summary Sorry in advance if it is TL:DR. If you have read the story from the beginning you do not have to read this.
Cody the character o… moref Cart_hero_2010 is wandering through the woods at night. He takes a rest and recalls past events. Him and his girlfriend were going to a party when approached by a zombie. They had no idea what it was and Cody tried to tell the man to back off. The man continued and frightened off Cody’s girlfriend who ran off into the woods. Cody gets back up and continues the search for her.
AWESOMEO the character of AWESOMEO. It has been a couple days through the apocalypse. He, Tyranitar, and Tyranitar’s mother and sister are hiding out in Tyranitar’s house. Eventually they began to run out of food. Tyranitar decides AWESOMEO should do it to prove his loyalty and friendship. AWESOMEO does not like the idea but does it. He chooses to take the minivan instead of walking.
LeeTheProfessional is the character of Lee… [view original content]
>>Tyranitar<<
“AWESOMEO should be back by now…” Tyranitar said to himself. His mother suggested he goes after him but he wasn… more’t sure if that was the right call. Even his little sister wanted him to go. After a few minutes of convincing he finally decided to go. The car was gone so he would need to go by foot. He gave his mother and sister a quick kiss and hug goodbye and set off…
>>Greg Harper<<
He really hated that Harpa guy. He decided he was going to leave before Harpa would kill him one way or another. After he pulled that gun, he felt unsafe. And cops… They could arrest him. Once he saw John walk in he had already decided to leave. Under cover of night he sneaked away. He caught a glimpse of Jennifer walking into the forest. He didn’t really know her so he decided to go off on his own. He needed a place to stay for the night. There was a small convenience store to his right. And a hotel to his left.
He… [view original content]
>>Tyranitar<<
“AWESOMEO should be back by now…” Tyranitar said to himself. His mother suggested he goes after him but he wasn… more’t sure if that was the right call. Even his little sister wanted him to go. After a few minutes of convincing he finally decided to go. The car was gone so he would need to go by foot. He gave his mother and sister a quick kiss and hug goodbye and set off…
>>Greg Harper<<
He really hated that Harpa guy. He decided he was going to leave before Harpa would kill him one way or another. After he pulled that gun, he felt unsafe. And cops… They could arrest him. Once he saw John walk in he had already decided to leave. Under cover of night he sneaked away. He caught a glimpse of Jennifer walking into the forest. He didn’t really know her so he decided to go off on his own. He needed a place to stay for the night. There was a small convenience store to his right. And a hotel to his left.
He… [view original content]
>>AWESOMEO<<
Say nothing.
AWESOMEO stayed silent. "Hey Spark! You didn't shoot him right?" Twistee said. Spark gave him a … morescary look "You just said I was a good shot and now your doubting my skill? God Twistee you better watch what you say!" Spark said with a dark chuckle at the end. Twistee mumbled to himself and went to the passenger door of the van. He took his baseball bat and smashed the window, one piece flew into AWESOMEO's arm making it bleed a little. AWESOMEO pulled it out with pain while Twistee was unlocking the door. He opened it and AWESOMEO quickly jabbed the piece of glass into the mans leg. Twistee fell back as he pulled the piece out. "Agh! I haven't wanted to stomp on someone's head so bad!" He said as he approached AWESOMEO again.
>>Jennifer Sax<<
She watched the scene unfold. She was not going to let someone die by the hand of these psychos. `She took out her pistol and got ready to sho… [view original content]
>>Liam Freeman<<
They had walked for hours. He was sure they were lost. Deceptio kept his hopes up but Liam knew it would be … morealmost impossible to get back. Liam decided to speak his thoughts. “Deceptio… Face it were not getting back.” Liam said. Deceptio scowled, as he looked back at Liam “I didn’t save you for nothing. I am getting you back there dead or alive.” Deceptio said as he turned his head and continued walking down the endless trail.
After another few minutes Deceptio decided they should rest a bit before continued. They both sat down and looked at each other. Deceptio looked exhausted, but determined to get out of the woods. Liam was really tired, as he hadn’t slept in a while. His eyes drooped a little. “Stay with me Liam. We need to get out of here,” Deceptio said shaking Liam a bit. Liam opened his eyes fully and saw a light behind Deceptio. Deceptio saw Liam was looking at something behind him and turned aroun… [view original content]
On page 4 we need a voter so can someone go over there and vote. Then I'll be able to continue the next segment. (The vote is shooting Spark, or Twistee, and what to do about Cody)
This problem has been resolved. The next parts will come soon! Thanks to Puncake32
>>Tyranitar<<
“AWESOMEO should be back by now…” Tyranitar said to himself. His mother suggested he goes after him but he wasn… more’t sure if that was the right call. Even his little sister wanted him to go. After a few minutes of convincing he finally decided to go. The car was gone so he would need to go by foot. He gave his mother and sister a quick kiss and hug goodbye and set off…
>>Greg Harper<<
He really hated that Harpa guy. He decided he was going to leave before Harpa would kill him one way or another. After he pulled that gun, he felt unsafe. And cops… They could arrest him. Once he saw John walk in he had already decided to leave. Under cover of night he sneaked away. He caught a glimpse of Jennifer walking into the forest. He didn’t really know her so he decided to go off on his own. He needed a place to stay for the night. There was a small convenience store to his right. And a hotel to his left.
He… [view original content]
>>Liam Freeman<<
They had walked for hours. He was sure they were lost. Deceptio kept his hopes up but Liam knew it would be … morealmost impossible to get back. Liam decided to speak his thoughts. “Deceptio… Face it were not getting back.” Liam said. Deceptio scowled, as he looked back at Liam “I didn’t save you for nothing. I am getting you back there dead or alive.” Deceptio said as he turned his head and continued walking down the endless trail.
After another few minutes Deceptio decided they should rest a bit before continued. They both sat down and looked at each other. Deceptio looked exhausted, but determined to get out of the woods. Liam was really tired, as he hadn’t slept in a while. His eyes drooped a little. “Stay with me Liam. We need to get out of here,” Deceptio said shaking Liam a bit. Liam opened his eyes fully and saw a light behind Deceptio. Deceptio saw Liam was looking at something behind him and turned aroun… [view original content]
>>AWESOMEO<<
Say nothing.
AWESOMEO stayed silent. "Hey Spark! You didn't shoot him right?" Twistee said. Spark gave him a … morescary look "You just said I was a good shot and now your doubting my skill? God Twistee you better watch what you say!" Spark said with a dark chuckle at the end. Twistee mumbled to himself and went to the passenger door of the van. He took his baseball bat and smashed the window, one piece flew into AWESOMEO's arm making it bleed a little. AWESOMEO pulled it out with pain while Twistee was unlocking the door. He opened it and AWESOMEO quickly jabbed the piece of glass into the mans leg. Twistee fell back as he pulled the piece out. "Agh! I haven't wanted to stomp on someone's head so bad!" He said as he approached AWESOMEO again.
>>Jennifer Sax<<
She watched the scene unfold. She was not going to let someone die by the hand of these psychos. `She took out her pistol and got ready to sho… [view original content]
>>AWESOMEO<<
Say nothing.
AWESOMEO stayed silent. "Hey Spark! You didn't shoot him right?" Twistee said. Spark gave him a … morescary look "You just said I was a good shot and now your doubting my skill? God Twistee you better watch what you say!" Spark said with a dark chuckle at the end. Twistee mumbled to himself and went to the passenger door of the van. He took his baseball bat and smashed the window, one piece flew into AWESOMEO's arm making it bleed a little. AWESOMEO pulled it out with pain while Twistee was unlocking the door. He opened it and AWESOMEO quickly jabbed the piece of glass into the mans leg. Twistee fell back as he pulled the piece out. "Agh! I haven't wanted to stomp on someone's head so bad!" He said as he approached AWESOMEO again.
>>Jennifer Sax<<
She watched the scene unfold. She was not going to let someone die by the hand of these psychos. `She took out her pistol and got ready to sho… [view original content]
Spark was pointing his rifle at the front window of the minivan. Twistee was about to get the guy when suddenly two bullets fired from the forest. One of them slammed right into the van, just missing Twistee’s head. The other flew into his leg. He cried out as he fell back ward. Spark quickly turned his gun to the source of the shot. A woman had shot it and was now running into the forest, probably knowing that Spark would have shot her.
Spark turned his gun back and saw the guy running into the other side of the forest. “DAMN IT!” He said as he dropped his gun and threw a brick off the roof. The distraction from the girl got them both to escape. Hopefully there was something left in the van though. Spark went down and brought the first aid kit.
Twistee was laying on the ground both hands on his leg. “Fu…. Bastard…. Got away…. I thought you had me… covered.” Twistee managed to say. Spark looked at him with an angry stare “Had you covered? You should have been more careful, and hell how was I supposed to know that chick was there?” Spark said. Twistee’s eyes slowly closed. Spark checked the van. “Shit… Nothing. He then bandaged Twistee’s leg and dragged Twistee to their base, where he began to treat the wound…
>>LeeTheProfessional<<
Say nothing.
LeeTheProfessional was still not sure of what to say. He decided to say nothing. Cody wiped his face and got up. “Can I… Stay with you? I’m lost. I doubt my family’s alive…” Cody said, as he looked to Pro. Pro wasn’t sure about it, but he knew what was best. He would bring Cody with him. They trudged through the muddy woods and had finally made it out. Cody gasped, and Pro was shocked. The farm and barn were on fire. A fireball of flame and death. About thirty people stood around watching it burn.
LeeTheProfessional didn’t know what to do. He couldn’t save the family in there, or else he would get killed. The farmer ran out with his gun and began shooting. He shot maybe two people but after that he received ten bullets into the chest. A man pulled him away from the farm. With his hatchet he hacked, and slashed at the farmer’s body, getting blood all over his clothes.
Pro remembered the wife, and children were still inside. Going in there was suicide but this wasn’t right. “We need to help them!” Cody said. “I know… But there’s too many of them…” Pro said.
“The others could still be alive. I have to help them. Cody. Leave”
“Let’s go. It’s probably too late already.”
>>Ohyoupokedme<<
Scavenge mall. Leave Ellie with Glinda.
“Ellie stay with Glinda. I’ll head to the mall by myself.” Ohyoupokedme finally decided. Ellie gave him a nod. Ohyoupokedme hugged Ellie and Glinda and left. He had finally got to the mall after an hour of walking. Luckily he was right. No lurkers. He needed to get as much as he could fit in his backpack and head back. He had been scavenging for an hour and a man appeared behind him pointing a gun at his back.
“Drop your gun. Put your hands on your head. And turn around.” The man said. Ohyoupoked me didn’t want to take any chances but he knew he stood no chance if he ran. He did what the man said. He turned around. “Look I don’t want any trouble. Just trying to survive like everyone else.” Ohyoupokedme said. The man looked at him and laughed. “I ain’t gonna hurt you. The names Raging_Blades.” Ohyoupokedme picked up his gun and backpack and began walking out his gun ready to shoot. “Oh come on why do you have to be like that? Can you at least tell me your name?” Raging_Blades said.
“Ohyoupokedme. Now leave me alone. I need to get back.” Poked me said as he reached the exit. “I’ve been in this mall ever since the walkers hit. Would you mind if I stayed with you?” Raging_Blades asked. Ohyoupokedme looked back at him.
"Fine. But if you do anything I don't like. Your on your own."
"No, have enough people as it is."
"Prove to me that your not bad. Then I'll think about it."
>>Spark<<
Spark was pointing his rifle at the front window of the minivan. Twistee was about to get the guy when suddenly two… more bullets fired from the forest. One of them slammed right into the van, just missing Twistee’s head. The other flew into his leg. He cried out as he fell back ward. Spark quickly turned his gun to the source of the shot. A woman had shot it and was now running into the forest, probably knowing that Spark would have shot her.
Spark turned his gun back and saw the guy running into the other side of the forest. “DAMN IT!” He said as he dropped his gun and threw a brick off the roof. The distraction from the girl got them both to escape. Hopefully there was something left in the van though. Spark went down and brought the first aid kit.
Twistee was laying on the ground both hands on his leg. “Fu…. Bastard…. Got away…. I thought you had me… covered.” Twistee managed to say. Spark looked at him with an an… [view original content]
>>Spark<<
Spark was pointing his rifle at the front window of the minivan. Twistee was about to get the guy when suddenly two… more bullets fired from the forest. One of them slammed right into the van, just missing Twistee’s head. The other flew into his leg. He cried out as he fell back ward. Spark quickly turned his gun to the source of the shot. A woman had shot it and was now running into the forest, probably knowing that Spark would have shot her.
Spark turned his gun back and saw the guy running into the other side of the forest. “DAMN IT!” He said as he dropped his gun and threw a brick off the roof. The distraction from the girl got them both to escape. Hopefully there was something left in the van though. Spark went down and brought the first aid kit.
Twistee was laying on the ground both hands on his leg. “Fu…. Bastard…. Got away…. I thought you had me… covered.” Twistee managed to say. Spark looked at him with an an… [view original content]
>>Spark<<
Spark was pointing his rifle at the front window of the minivan. Twistee was about to get the guy when suddenly two… more bullets fired from the forest. One of them slammed right into the van, just missing Twistee’s head. The other flew into his leg. He cried out as he fell back ward. Spark quickly turned his gun to the source of the shot. A woman had shot it and was now running into the forest, probably knowing that Spark would have shot her.
Spark turned his gun back and saw the guy running into the other side of the forest. “DAMN IT!” He said as he dropped his gun and threw a brick off the roof. The distraction from the girl got them both to escape. Hopefully there was something left in the van though. Spark went down and brought the first aid kit.
Twistee was laying on the ground both hands on his leg. “Fu…. Bastard…. Got away…. I thought you had me… covered.” Twistee managed to say. Spark looked at him with an an… [view original content]
Actually. You guys are in the role of pro. He actually tells Cody to leave. Pro heading in I knew was a suicide option. But hey... A good death is its own reward
>>Spark<<
Spark was pointing his rifle at the front window of the minivan. Twistee was about to get the guy when suddenly two… more bullets fired from the forest. One of them slammed right into the van, just missing Twistee’s head. The other flew into his leg. He cried out as he fell back ward. Spark quickly turned his gun to the source of the shot. A woman had shot it and was now running into the forest, probably knowing that Spark would have shot her.
Spark turned his gun back and saw the guy running into the other side of the forest. “DAMN IT!” He said as he dropped his gun and threw a brick off the roof. The distraction from the girl got them both to escape. Hopefully there was something left in the van though. Spark went down and brought the first aid kit.
Twistee was laying on the ground both hands on his leg. “Fu…. Bastard…. Got away…. I thought you had me… covered.” Twistee managed to say. Spark looked at him with an an… [view original content]
Pro: “The others could still be alive. I have to help them. Cody. Leave”
Alright, I have to see what I can do. Maybe the wife and child are new characters that Raging can introduce. I should stay silent and avoid any encounters, use distractions to my advantage. IDK what will happen to Cody but if I make it back safely, hopefully he is still waiting in the woods.
Poked: "Fine. But if you do anything I don't like. Your on your own."
Raging could have killed him when he had the chance, he seems trustworthy so far, maybe he can help Poked out.
EDIT: I changed my vote like I said, now it's 3 on 3. Let's see how this goes when we get more votes. Hopefully, it doesn't come back to bite in the ass. I'm counting on you Raging, lol.
>>Spark<<
Spark was pointing his rifle at the front window of the minivan. Twistee was about to get the guy when suddenly two… more bullets fired from the forest. One of them slammed right into the van, just missing Twistee’s head. The other flew into his leg. He cried out as he fell back ward. Spark quickly turned his gun to the source of the shot. A woman had shot it and was now running into the forest, probably knowing that Spark would have shot her.
Spark turned his gun back and saw the guy running into the other side of the forest. “DAMN IT!” He said as he dropped his gun and threw a brick off the roof. The distraction from the girl got them both to escape. Hopefully there was something left in the van though. Spark went down and brought the first aid kit.
Twistee was laying on the ground both hands on his leg. “Fu…. Bastard…. Got away…. I thought you had me… covered.” Twistee managed to say. Spark looked at him with an an… [view original content]
Actually. You guys are in the role of pro. He actually tells Cody to leave. Pro heading in I knew was a suicide option. But hey... A good death is its own reward
Yeah it already had 3 votes, so I chose that one anyway and Cody could die by himself out there in the woods. Damn, hopefully I get revenge on those scum!
He ran as fast as he could. He saw a faint light farther down the path and he rushed toward it. A man with a shotgun, and a flashlight attached was pointing his gun at Deceptio, and Liam. He laughed and got ready to shoot. “Which one you want first Jane?” The man said with a chuckle. "This boy it is," he said as he pointed Jane at Deceptio. Chase knew there were so many options. The right one he was not sure…
Charge the man and tackle him.
Pull out gun and shoot him.
Jump in front of Deceptio.
>>Harpadarpa<<
He awoke to the sound of a scream. Walkers had got in and were going in every direction. His grandma was awake on the ground on the other side of the room. John was sleeping in one of the chairs. John had awoken and had his gun ready. “HELP MY GRANDMA!” Harpadarpa yelled as he saw some walkers approach her, who was the one screaming. John ran quickly and shot some but there was too many. She was surrounded and Harpadarpa watched as the corpses surrounded her and began to pull her apart. “NO!!!!!!!!” Harpadarpa yelled as he saw John still shooting.
Some zombies had reached Harpadarpa and he had picked up a stool. He began whacking it at anything that came close. He found that hitting their body didn’t do anything but they had a more injuring reaction when he got them in the head. He now had now hit most of them in the head as they fell, blood oozing all over the wooden floor.
John had run out of ammo and was using his hands, punching them in the head, as he too found out the head was the weakness. John knew he needed to escape. Harpadarpa was an asshole but he didn’t deserve to die. “Catch” John said as he tossed the keys to Harpadarpa. Harp caught it and unlocked himself. John ran out the door and Harpadarpa crawled out a window. Sure the bastard saved him. But he handcuffed him and Harpa could have saved his grandma. Assuming Greg, and Jennifer ditched them he and John kept on running. Harpa thought about it... He wanted revenge, so he chased after John stealthily.
>>Greg Harper<<
Head to convenience store
The convenience store seemed to be the best place. The hotel was too big and there could be tons of the things in there. He walked in the convenience store where a man was waiting for him, a gun pointed at him. “Whoa dude! I’m cool. I swear I won’t hurt you.” Greg said immediately. The guy looked at him. “No gun? Seriously? How have you lived this far? I could use some company though. Don’t make me regret this.” The man said as he lowered his gun. “I was with a group, that I ditched. This one guy hated my guts, and I didn’t want him to kill me. How much supplies you got here? The name’s Greg by the way.” Greg said. “Not much. Just enough to get by these days I guess. I’m Gary. Gary Oak.” Gary said.
>>Jewfreeus<<
He, and Mr Cuddlesworth had just barricaded all the floors and doors. The floor was secure, and they were well supplied. Jewfreeus thought Mr Cuddlesworth was a helpful guy but his name was stupid. He called him Mr. C since he wouldn’t tell Jewfreeus his real name. Stephany was working on a ladder so they could get in and out easy. Since they had blocked off all the entrances, they could use the ladder to get in and out.
Luckily they were on the third floor so the ladder didn’t have to be that big. There were about twenty rooms in all, and enough to supply them for months. So far life was good. They could however use some more members, and continue going on runs to keep their stocks up…
>>Chase<<
He ran as fast as he could. He saw a faint light farther down the path and he rushed toward it. A man with a shotgu… moren, and a flashlight attached was pointing his gun at Deceptio, and Liam. He laughed and got ready to shoot. “Which one you want first Jane?” The man said with a chuckle. "This boy it is," he said as he pointed Jane at Deceptio. Chase knew there were so many options. The right one he was not sure…
Charge the man and tackle him.
Pull out gun and shoot him.
Jump in front of Deceptio.
>>Harpadarpa<<
He awoke to the sound of a scream. Walkers had got in and were going in every direction. His grandma was awake on the ground on the other side of the room. John was sleeping in one of the chairs. John had awoken and had his gun ready. “HELP MY GRANDMA!” Harpadarpa yelled as he saw some walkers approach her, who was the one screaming. John ran quickly and shot some but there was too many.… [view original content]
33/36 people are in the story! So far no one's character has died! Almost everybody is in the story except three!(Sorry you three people)
Note: If you are not mentioned immediately inform me. You will only receive one mention.
I just want to thank you all for putting in a character, voting, and complimenting my work. Its been fun and great to be here with you guys. You have been awesome, and very supportive for me.
Many thanks to Harpadarpa, and Clayton_Boylan for inspiration.
Also to my fans who can't wait, TheNarwhalKing, Puncake32, and WhatTheDuck.
And to my cool bros AWESOMEO, LeeTheProfessional, TheWalkingMustache, Markd4547(Amazing fan fics as well).
To the usual voters, Deceptio, Rafoli, Cart_hero_2010
Cool peeps goes to Glinda, and Gengar. (Go names that start with G!)
Other people who have joined the thread: gobananas01, WeMissYouCarley, Tntlee2099, ImagineThoseFandoms, Davidsanden27, Ohyoupokedme, Chase4902, Twistee, stevean2, Rock114, PertuLaulaa, Bubadoo, Kordas, Randomz, Rylee, Adrian14, Saltlick123, , Gary-Oak, Alive_Clem, Lost_Innocence, Ruby_Moon, maxbear29
I love you guys and girls! (No homo of course. Not that I am homophobic. You know what I mean right?)
33/36 people are in the story! So far no one's character has died! Almost everybody is in the story except three!(Sorry you three people)
… more Note: If you are not mentioned immediately inform me. You will only receive one mention.
I just want to thank you all for putting in a character, voting, and complimenting my work. Its been fun and great to be here with you guys. You have been awesome, and very supportive for me.
Many thanks to Harpadarpa, and Clayton_Boylan for inspiration.
Also to my fans who can't wait, TheNarwhalKing, Puncake32, and WhatTheDuck.
And to my cool bros AWESOMEO, LeeTheProfessional, TheWalkingMustache, Markd4547(Amazing fan fics as well).
To the usual voters, Deceptio, Rafoli, Cart_hero_2010
Cool peeps goes to Glinda, and Gengar. (Go names that start with G!)
Other people who have joined the thread: gobananas01, WeMissYouCarley, Tntlee2099, ImagineThoseFandoms, Davidsanden27, Ohyoupokedme, Chase4902, … [view original content]
>>Chase<<
He ran as fast as he could. He saw a faint light farther down the path and he rushed toward it. A man with a shotgu… moren, and a flashlight attached was pointing his gun at Deceptio, and Liam. He laughed and got ready to shoot. “Which one you want first Jane?” The man said with a chuckle. "This boy it is," he said as he pointed Jane at Deceptio. Chase knew there were so many options. The right one he was not sure…
Charge the man and tackle him.
Pull out gun and shoot him.
Jump in front of Deceptio.
>>Harpadarpa<<
He awoke to the sound of a scream. Walkers had got in and were going in every direction. His grandma was awake on the ground on the other side of the room. John was sleeping in one of the chairs. John had awoken and had his gun ready. “HELP MY GRANDMA!” Harpadarpa yelled as he saw some walkers approach her, who was the one screaming. John ran quickly and shot some but there was too many.… [view original content]
33/36 people are in the story! So far no one's character has died! Almost everybody is in the story except three!(Sorry you three people)
… more Note: If you are not mentioned immediately inform me. You will only receive one mention.
I just want to thank you all for putting in a character, voting, and complimenting my work. Its been fun and great to be here with you guys. You have been awesome, and very supportive for me.
Many thanks to Harpadarpa, and Clayton_Boylan for inspiration.
Also to my fans who can't wait, TheNarwhalKing, Puncake32, and WhatTheDuck.
And to my cool bros AWESOMEO, LeeTheProfessional, TheWalkingMustache, Markd4547(Amazing fan fics as well).
To the usual voters, Deceptio, Rafoli, Cart_hero_2010
Cool peeps goes to Glinda, and Gengar. (Go names that start with G!)
Other people who have joined the thread: gobananas01, WeMissYouCarley, Tntlee2099, ImagineThoseFandoms, Davidsanden27, Ohyoupokedme, Chase4902, … [view original content]
33/36 people are in the story! So far no one's character has died! Almost everybody is in the story except three!(Sorry you three people)
… more Note: If you are not mentioned immediately inform me. You will only receive one mention.
I just want to thank you all for putting in a character, voting, and complimenting my work. Its been fun and great to be here with you guys. You have been awesome, and very supportive for me.
Many thanks to Harpadarpa, and Clayton_Boylan for inspiration.
Also to my fans who can't wait, TheNarwhalKing, Puncake32, and WhatTheDuck.
And to my cool bros AWESOMEO, LeeTheProfessional, TheWalkingMustache, Markd4547(Amazing fan fics as well).
To the usual voters, Deceptio, Rafoli, Cart_hero_2010
Cool peeps goes to Glinda, and Gengar. (Go names that start with G!)
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33/36 people are in the story! So far no one's character has died! Almost everybody is in the story except three!(Sorry you three people)
… more Note: If you are not mentioned immediately inform me. You will only receive one mention.
I just want to thank you all for putting in a character, voting, and complimenting my work. Its been fun and great to be here with you guys. You have been awesome, and very supportive for me.
Many thanks to Harpadarpa, and Clayton_Boylan for inspiration.
Also to my fans who can't wait, TheNarwhalKing, Puncake32, and WhatTheDuck.
And to my cool bros AWESOMEO, LeeTheProfessional, TheWalkingMustache, Markd4547(Amazing fan fics as well).
To the usual voters, Deceptio, Rafoli, Cart_hero_2010
Cool peeps goes to Glinda, and Gengar. (Go names that start with G!)
Other people who have joined the thread: gobananas01, WeMissYouCarley, Tntlee2099, ImagineThoseFandoms, Davidsanden27, Ohyoupokedme, Chase4902, … [view original content]
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Your stories are amazing, Raging Blades. Clayton Applauds Head to convenience store. Seems nice and cozy.
Here's a few more details on Pavel that I left out, (My bad). He wants to try to find his brother, Asim, that he believes is still in Atlanta. He's a taller and larger scale person, making it harder for him to get around small places. Even though he uses guns quite frequently, and is properly trained in them, he hates them, due to his mother dying by one.
Again, great job, you really got this down. If you want me to make some more references of Pavel in my stories, I can.
I loved Dale too, I liked that he made Andrea see sense in the Season 1 Finale. This is my cousin, she recently got a part in The Vampire Diaries which is another one of my favourite shows. I'm so happy for her so I use her as my new pp!
Okay. I don't need to find Asim though right? I don't want Pavel interrupting into your other story.
Thanks
. It means a lot from a good writer. You don't need to make references but if you want to its fine with me. I just write. You guys just make the characters.
Cool!
Nope, this character is all yours. His fate...is in your hands!
thanks, man. This helped a lot with catching up.
Awww yeah! I am in! Now things will surely get even more interesting
oh, and I am choosing the convenience store, too. It's gonna win anyway, so no need to waste a vote on the hotel
Haha, if that comes up I'll vote to save you!
Greg Harper: Head to convenience store. Seems nice and cozy.
Smaller and would most likely have less walkers in it.
!!! TIE! Shoot at Spark and Twistee both received 2 votes. And every option from Pro's was picked. Someone please VOTE for both choices!!!!!!
Voting closed. Ohyoupokedme will scavenge mall and leave Ellie with Glinda.
On page 4 we need a voter so can someone go over there and vote. Then I'll be able to continue the next segment. (The vote is shooting Spark, or Twistee, and what to do about Cody)
This problem has been resolved. The next parts will come soon! Thanks to Puncake32
Voting finished. Greg will go to the convenience store for the night.
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Please vote for the story above this one!
Shoot at twistee
Say Nothing.
Thanks Puncake. You da man
TIE BROKEN! Jennifer will shoot at Twistee. LeeTheProfessional will say nothing.
>>Spark<<
Spark was pointing his rifle at the front window of the minivan. Twistee was about to get the guy when suddenly two bullets fired from the forest. One of them slammed right into the van, just missing Twistee’s head. The other flew into his leg. He cried out as he fell back ward. Spark quickly turned his gun to the source of the shot. A woman had shot it and was now running into the forest, probably knowing that Spark would have shot her.
Spark turned his gun back and saw the guy running into the other side of the forest. “DAMN IT!” He said as he dropped his gun and threw a brick off the roof. The distraction from the girl got them both to escape. Hopefully there was something left in the van though. Spark went down and brought the first aid kit.
Twistee was laying on the ground both hands on his leg. “Fu…. Bastard…. Got away…. I thought you had me… covered.” Twistee managed to say. Spark looked at him with an angry stare “Had you covered? You should have been more careful, and hell how was I supposed to know that chick was there?” Spark said. Twistee’s eyes slowly closed. Spark checked the van. “Shit… Nothing. He then bandaged Twistee’s leg and dragged Twistee to their base, where he began to treat the wound…
>>LeeTheProfessional<<
Say nothing.
LeeTheProfessional was still not sure of what to say. He decided to say nothing. Cody wiped his face and got up. “Can I… Stay with you? I’m lost. I doubt my family’s alive…” Cody said, as he looked to Pro. Pro wasn’t sure about it, but he knew what was best. He would bring Cody with him. They trudged through the muddy woods and had finally made it out. Cody gasped, and Pro was shocked. The farm and barn were on fire. A fireball of flame and death. About thirty people stood around watching it burn.
LeeTheProfessional didn’t know what to do. He couldn’t save the family in there, or else he would get killed. The farmer ran out with his gun and began shooting. He shot maybe two people but after that he received ten bullets into the chest. A man pulled him away from the farm. With his hatchet he hacked, and slashed at the farmer’s body, getting blood all over his clothes.
Pro remembered the wife, and children were still inside. Going in there was suicide but this wasn’t right. “We need to help them!” Cody said. “I know… But there’s too many of them…” Pro said.
“The others could still be alive. I have to help them. Cody. Leave”
“Let’s go. It’s probably too late already.”
>>Ohyoupokedme<<
Scavenge mall. Leave Ellie with Glinda.
“Ellie stay with Glinda. I’ll head to the mall by myself.” Ohyoupokedme finally decided. Ellie gave him a nod. Ohyoupokedme hugged Ellie and Glinda and left. He had finally got to the mall after an hour of walking. Luckily he was right. No lurkers. He needed to get as much as he could fit in his backpack and head back. He had been scavenging for an hour and a man appeared behind him pointing a gun at his back.
“Drop your gun. Put your hands on your head. And turn around.” The man said. Ohyoupoked me didn’t want to take any chances but he knew he stood no chance if he ran. He did what the man said. He turned around. “Look I don’t want any trouble. Just trying to survive like everyone else.” Ohyoupokedme said. The man looked at him and laughed. “I ain’t gonna hurt you. The names Raging_Blades.” Ohyoupokedme picked up his gun and backpack and began walking out his gun ready to shoot. “Oh come on why do you have to be like that? Can you at least tell me your name?” Raging_Blades said.
“Ohyoupokedme. Now leave me alone. I need to get back.” Poked me said as he reached the exit. “I’ve been in this mall ever since the walkers hit. Would you mind if I stayed with you?” Raging_Blades asked. Ohyoupokedme looked back at him.
"Fine. But if you do anything I don't like. Your on your own."
"No, have enough people as it is."
"Prove to me that your not bad. Then I'll think about it."
**Lets go. It's probably too late. **
"Let’s go. It’s probably too late already.”
"Fine. But if you do anything I don't like. Your on your own."
Again, excellent writing.
“Let’s go. It’s probably too late already.” Cody may die if he goes there.
"Prove to me that your not bad. Then I'll think about it."
Actually. You guys are in the role of pro. He actually tells Cody to leave. Pro heading in I knew was a suicide option. But hey... A good death is its own reward
Love it Spark's back and quality writing as ever Blades
“The others could still be alive. I have to help them. Cody. Leave”
Worth saving a family's life for one life
"Fine. But if you do anything I don't like. Your on your own.
Let Blades in the group I trust him
Your a legend Puncake
Pro: “The others could still be alive. I have to help them. Cody. Leave”
Alright, I have to see what I can do. Maybe the wife and child are new characters that Raging can introduce. I should stay silent and avoid any encounters, use distractions to my advantage. IDK what will happen to Cody but if I make it back safely, hopefully he is still waiting in the woods.
Poked: "Fine. But if you do anything I don't like. Your on your own."
Raging could have killed him when he had the chance, he seems trustworthy so far, maybe he can help Poked out.
EDIT: I changed my vote like I said, now it's 3 on 3. Let's see how this goes when we get more votes. Hopefully, it doesn't come back to bite in the ass. I'm counting on you Raging, lol.
Ah, I was thinking he would probably still come with me if I told him to leave. Can't wait to see the rest, bro!
Well. IDK. He could but that option probably won't be chosen anyway
Yeah it already had 3 votes, so I chose that one anyway and Cody could die by himself out there in the woods. Damn, hopefully I get revenge on those scum!
>>Chase<<
He ran as fast as he could. He saw a faint light farther down the path and he rushed toward it. A man with a shotgun, and a flashlight attached was pointing his gun at Deceptio, and Liam. He laughed and got ready to shoot. “Which one you want first Jane?” The man said with a chuckle. "This boy it is," he said as he pointed Jane at Deceptio. Chase knew there were so many options. The right one he was not sure…
Charge the man and tackle him.
Pull out gun and shoot him.
Jump in front of Deceptio.
>>Harpadarpa<<
He awoke to the sound of a scream. Walkers had got in and were going in every direction. His grandma was awake on the ground on the other side of the room. John was sleeping in one of the chairs. John had awoken and had his gun ready. “HELP MY GRANDMA!” Harpadarpa yelled as he saw some walkers approach her, who was the one screaming. John ran quickly and shot some but there was too many. She was surrounded and Harpadarpa watched as the corpses surrounded her and began to pull her apart. “NO!!!!!!!!” Harpadarpa yelled as he saw John still shooting.
Some zombies had reached Harpadarpa and he had picked up a stool. He began whacking it at anything that came close. He found that hitting their body didn’t do anything but they had a more injuring reaction when he got them in the head. He now had now hit most of them in the head as they fell, blood oozing all over the wooden floor.
John had run out of ammo and was using his hands, punching them in the head, as he too found out the head was the weakness. John knew he needed to escape. Harpadarpa was an asshole but he didn’t deserve to die. “Catch” John said as he tossed the keys to Harpadarpa. Harp caught it and unlocked himself. John ran out the door and Harpadarpa crawled out a window. Sure the bastard saved him. But he handcuffed him and Harpa could have saved his grandma. Assuming Greg, and Jennifer ditched them he and John kept on running. Harpa thought about it... He wanted revenge, so he chased after John stealthily.
>>Greg Harper<<
Head to convenience store
The convenience store seemed to be the best place. The hotel was too big and there could be tons of the things in there. He walked in the convenience store where a man was waiting for him, a gun pointed at him. “Whoa dude! I’m cool. I swear I won’t hurt you.” Greg said immediately. The guy looked at him. “No gun? Seriously? How have you lived this far? I could use some company though. Don’t make me regret this.” The man said as he lowered his gun. “I was with a group, that I ditched. This one guy hated my guts, and I didn’t want him to kill me. How much supplies you got here? The name’s Greg by the way.” Greg said. “Not much. Just enough to get by these days I guess. I’m Gary. Gary Oak.” Gary said.
>>Jewfreeus<<
He, and Mr Cuddlesworth had just barricaded all the floors and doors. The floor was secure, and they were well supplied. Jewfreeus thought Mr Cuddlesworth was a helpful guy but his name was stupid. He called him Mr. C since he wouldn’t tell Jewfreeus his real name. Stephany was working on a ladder so they could get in and out easy. Since they had blocked off all the entrances, they could use the ladder to get in and out.
Luckily they were on the third floor so the ladder didn’t have to be that big. There were about twenty rooms in all, and enough to supply them for months. So far life was good. They could however use some more members, and continue going on runs to keep their stocks up…
Jump in front of Deceptio.
Save my bro Deceptio lol
love this more exciting every story great work the decisions are getting so epic
33/36 people are in the story! So far no one's character has died! Almost everybody is in the story except three!(Sorry you three people)
Note: If you are not mentioned immediately inform me. You will only receive one mention.
I just want to thank you all for putting in a character, voting, and complimenting my work. Its been fun and great to be here with you guys. You have been awesome, and very supportive for me.
Many thanks to Harpadarpa, and Clayton_Boylan for inspiration.
Also to my fans who can't wait, TheNarwhalKing, Puncake32, and WhatTheDuck.
And to my cool bros AWESOMEO, LeeTheProfessional, TheWalkingMustache, Markd4547(Amazing fan fics as well).
To the usual voters, Deceptio, Rafoli, Cart_hero_2010
Cool peeps goes to Glinda, and Gengar. (Go names that start with G!)
Other people who have joined the thread: gobananas01, WeMissYouCarley, Tntlee2099, ImagineThoseFandoms, Davidsanden27, Ohyoupokedme, Chase4902, Twistee, stevean2, Rock114, PertuLaulaa, Bubadoo, Kordas, Randomz, Rylee, Adrian14, Saltlick123, , Gary-Oak, Alive_Clem, Lost_Innocence, Ruby_Moon, maxbear29
I love you guys and girls! (No homo of course. Not that I am homophobic. You know what I mean right?)
I LOVE YOU TOO MAN
Woo! I LIVE!
SHOOT HIM
Live to kill another day
Hehehehehehheheheheheh.
I love you too
Woo!
Now where's the next part?
"(No homo of course. Not that I am homophobic. You know what I mean right?)" Lol. Your writing is great, man, and you are awesome too.