Lord Brat Winterwood
With a minute of thinking finally the lord decided the destiny of the maester. The raven flew and his wife stand fro… morem the bed, walked to the window and started to open the message.
* Maester, I'am sending you to the Wall. That's all I can do - While telling this he gave the message to his wife and looked the maester - Lennon will take you to your chamber. - Lennon is one of the Starford's Elite Guards. The Elite Guards a company of soldiers who are specialized both in close and ranged combat. The Elite Guards consist of 30 man a general ( At Starford the general is Rick Wİnterwood ). Lennon is 27 years old, 1.86 CM height.
Terrence without a word left the room. Lennon grabed the maester by his arm and took him outside of the room. The deppresion in the room was very high and a minute only from the message to be readed.
* Brat, the message is from the Starks. I think you have to read it. - His wife looked … [view original content]
Lord Brat Winterwood
With a minute of thinking finally the lord decided the destiny of the maester. The raven flew and his wife stand fro… morem the bed, walked to the window and started to open the message.
* Maester, I'am sending you to the Wall. That's all I can do - While telling this he gave the message to his wife and looked the maester - Lennon will take you to your chamber. - Lennon is one of the Starford's Elite Guards. The Elite Guards a company of soldiers who are specialized both in close and ranged combat. The Elite Guards consist of 30 man a general ( At Starford the general is Rick Wİnterwood ). Lennon is 27 years old, 1.86 CM height.
Terrence without a word left the room. Lennon grabed the maester by his arm and took him outside of the room. The deppresion in the room was very high and a minute only from the message to be readed.
* Brat, the message is from the Starks. I think you have to read it. - His wife looked … [view original content]
Okay time for sime constructive criticism: The dialogue is pretty cringeworthy the way they talk is just silly plus Rick calls Brat 'dad' in this world people don't call their parents 'mum' or 'dad' they say 'father' and 'mother'. I am interested in the story though don't get me wrong.
Lord Brat Winterwood
With a minute of thinking finally the lord decided the destiny of the maester. The raven flew and his wife stand fro… morem the bed, walked to the window and started to open the message.
* Maester, I'am sending you to the Wall. That's all I can do - While telling this he gave the message to his wife and looked the maester - Lennon will take you to your chamber. - Lennon is one of the Starford's Elite Guards. The Elite Guards a company of soldiers who are specialized both in close and ranged combat. The Elite Guards consist of 30 man a general ( At Starford the general is Rick Wİnterwood ). Lennon is 27 years old, 1.86 CM height.
Terrence without a word left the room. Lennon grabed the maester by his arm and took him outside of the room. The deppresion in the room was very high and a minute only from the message to be readed.
* Brat, the message is from the Starks. I think you have to read it. - His wife looked … [view original content]
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Okay time for sime constructive criticism: The dialogue is pretty cringeworthy the way they talk is just silly plus Rick … morecalls Brat 'dad' in this world people don't call their parents 'mum' or 'dad' they say 'father' and 'mother'. I am interested in the story though don't get me wrong.
Lord Brat Winterwood
With a minute of thinking finally the lord decided the destiny of the maester. The raven flew and his wife stand fro… morem the bed, walked to the window and started to open the message.
* Maester, I'am sending you to the Wall. That's all I can do - While telling this he gave the message to his wife and looked the maester - Lennon will take you to your chamber. - Lennon is one of the Starford's Elite Guards. The Elite Guards a company of soldiers who are specialized both in close and ranged combat. The Elite Guards consist of 30 man a general ( At Starford the general is Rick Wİnterwood ). Lennon is 27 years old, 1.86 CM height.
Terrence without a word left the room. Lennon grabed the maester by his arm and took him outside of the room. The deppresion in the room was very high and a minute only from the message to be readed.
* Brat, the message is from the Starks. I think you have to read it. - His wife looked … [view original content]
Lord Brat Winterwood
With a minute of thinking finally the lord decided the destiny of the maester. The raven flew and his wife stand fro… morem the bed, walked to the window and started to open the message.
* Maester, I'am sending you to the Wall. That's all I can do - While telling this he gave the message to his wife and looked the maester - Lennon will take you to your chamber. - Lennon is one of the Starford's Elite Guards. The Elite Guards a company of soldiers who are specialized both in close and ranged combat. The Elite Guards consist of 30 man a general ( At Starford the general is Rick Wİnterwood ). Lennon is 27 years old, 1.86 CM height.
Terrence without a word left the room. Lennon grabed the maester by his arm and took him outside of the room. The deppresion in the room was very high and a minute only from the message to be readed.
* Brat, the message is from the Starks. I think you have to read it. - His wife looked … [view original content]
I don't know about it Torrhen. We have no evidence and we can't blame no one just yet. Let's be practical, Terrence you said that your soldiers caught the maester with a girl. What is her name? - The lord look at the master-at-arms complicated. He was left in the cold because there was nothing he can do about the situation. And it was fot the first time he felt like this.
Terrence was looking at the corpses. He was shocked. After the question of Brat he lifted his head up, looked first at Torrhen and after that to Brat.
It's Elena, Elena Snow. - No one know anything about her because she was a bastard, bur a farmer girl. - She is living alone, at the southern side of the city. At a small house with just one room.
We have to pay her a visit, ask her about it. Maybe she knows something about the situation. - Brat started to walk inside the chamber. He circled the room looking in every part of it. After that he shaked his head like he was telling them to move - Oh and Torrhen, bury the corpes at once. We don't want someone to this mess.
It was midday at Starford. Just a couple of hours from the training of Terrence. The castle was located at the western side of the city, the gate was at northern side, the farms and all the animals and trees for food were at the southern side of the city, the barracks were at the central side where is the center of the city and a statue of the founder of the house - Brick ''the peaceful'' Winterwood. He ruled the house when the Targaryens invaded the North. He died at the battle from a dragon fire. When they finaly arrived. They knocked at the door and Elena opened it.
My lord!? - She was shocked when saw Brat and Rick in front of the door - Please come in!
I have a few questions for you. I want to know that do you know who killed the maester? - The lord closed the door and looked Elena in the eyes, while she was looking at Rick. Elena looked at Rick after this bent her head down.
I don't know my lord...
Well, thank you for the help. I wish you all the good things. - Brat shaked her hand and left the house with Rick. - I think she knows something, but someone is forcing her not to talk to us. Rick call the small council at once. - Rick shaked his head and walked away from him.
The member of the small council are - the lord of the house Brat, his wife Elissa, Rick and Victor Winterwood ( The first and secondborn sons of Brat), Harris Snow ( Brat's bastard), Terrence and Torrhen. Torrhen is the commander of the garrison (20 for close combat and 10 archers) , Terrence is the master-at-arms who trains the amateurs, Rick is the commander of the Elite Guards(EG) , Victor has his own soldiers ( 30 soldiers like the Elite Guards, but Victors forces are weaker than Elite Guards and they fight only in close combat) and Lord Brat is the commander of the main army ( 150 soldiers - 120 for close combat and 30 archers ).
Okey, if everyone is here let's start to talk. The Lannisters have taken Lord Ned Stark into prison, Robb is calling us to fight for him. He gave us only 4 days to prepare our army and met with his army, Robb is gathering the Northern army against the Lannisters. I will take the main army. Terrence and Torrhen will stay at the castle for defence alongside with their soldiers. Elissa you'll stay the castle too. Now Rick and Victor ......
I will come father no matter what, I want to prove you that I am a real Winterwood. - Harris said this with a serious look to Brat
[Bring Rick and the EG][Bring Rick with his EG and Victor with his forces][Bring Victor with his forces]
Lord Brat Winterwood
* I don't know about it Torrhen. We have no evidence and we can't blame no one just yet. Let's be practical, Terre… morence you said that your soldiers caught the maester with a girl. What is her name? - The lord look at the master-at-arms complicated. He was left in the cold because there was nothing he can do about the situation. And it was fot the first time he felt like this.
Terrence was looking at the corpses. He was shocked. After the question of Brat he lifted his head up, looked first at Torrhen and after that to Brat.
* It's Elena, Elena Snow. - No one know anything about her because she was a bastard, bur a farmer girl. - She is living alone, at the southern side of the city. At a small house with just one room.
* We have to pay her a visit, ask her about it. Maybe she knows something about the situation. - Brat started to walk inside the chamber. He circled the room looking in every part of it. Afte… [view original content]
Lord Brat Winterwood
* I don't know about it Torrhen. We have no evidence and we can't blame no one just yet. Let's be practical, Terre… morence you said that your soldiers caught the maester with a girl. What is her name? - The lord look at the master-at-arms complicated. He was left in the cold because there was nothing he can do about the situation. And it was fot the first time he felt like this.
Terrence was looking at the corpses. He was shocked. After the question of Brat he lifted his head up, looked first at Torrhen and after that to Brat.
* It's Elena, Elena Snow. - No one know anything about her because she was a bastard, bur a farmer girl. - She is living alone, at the southern side of the city. At a small house with just one room.
* We have to pay her a visit, ask her about it. Maybe she knows something about the situation. - Brat started to walk inside the chamber. He circled the room looking in every part of it. Afte… [view original content]
Lord Brat Winterwood
* I don't know about it Torrhen. We have no evidence and we can't blame no one just yet. Let's be practical, Terre… morence you said that your soldiers caught the maester with a girl. What is her name? - The lord look at the master-at-arms complicated. He was left in the cold because there was nothing he can do about the situation. And it was fot the first time he felt like this.
Terrence was looking at the corpses. He was shocked. After the question of Brat he lifted his head up, looked first at Torrhen and after that to Brat.
* It's Elena, Elena Snow. - No one know anything about her because she was a bastard, bur a farmer girl. - She is living alone, at the southern side of the city. At a small house with just one room.
* We have to pay her a visit, ask her about it. Maybe she knows something about the situation. - Brat started to walk inside the chamber. He circled the room looking in every part of it. Afte… [view original content]
Lord Brat Winterwood
* I don't know about it Torrhen. We have no evidence and we can't blame no one just yet. Let's be practical, Terre… morence you said that your soldiers caught the maester with a girl. What is her name? - The lord look at the master-at-arms complicated. He was left in the cold because there was nothing he can do about the situation. And it was fot the first time he felt like this.
Terrence was looking at the corpses. He was shocked. After the question of Brat he lifted his head up, looked first at Torrhen and after that to Brat.
* It's Elena, Elena Snow. - No one know anything about her because she was a bastard, bur a farmer girl. - She is living alone, at the southern side of the city. At a small house with just one room.
* We have to pay her a visit, ask her about it. Maybe she knows something about the situation. - Brat started to walk inside the chamber. He circled the room looking in every part of it. Afte… [view original content]
Carl Winterwood is the third born son of Lord Brat Winterwood, 29 years old who was sent to the wall just before 3 days from the message from the Starks. He was sent to the wall because of a murder. He killed a man because this man attacked his girlfriend. He wanted to become a ranger and kill Mance Rayder. He's height is 1.80CM , with a medium lenght brown hair, brown eyes, with a scar at his left hand. Before this time he had no friends or a ally, but after this day he made a lifetime brothers. At a snowy day Carl was training at the sword training. He saw a big guy bullying someone.
Hey you - Carl pointed his finger to the big guy and he looked at him - yes the big guy, come and try to bully me! Draw your sword. Let's play a game, if I win you'll stop bullying this man, If you win, haha well you'll not win! - Carl draw his sword and pointed it to the big guy.
Carl was brave but not that skillful with the sword but he was great with the bow. The big guy started wo walk toward him drawing his sword. Carl smalled his eyes, made a step back.
First of all little boy, my name is Steve and I don't want you to cry - He laughed at him and swing his sword from above, but Carl reacted faster and blocked the attack. - Well, at least you know how to fight, here your friend Daniel doesn't know it.
They fighted each for a couple of minutes. A sword was coming from the right side after it from the other side and Carl blocked them all. Steve was tired from all the swings and at his final swing Carl swinged against Steve's sword and trow it away. Steve left empty-handed and Carl pointed his sword to the Steve's neck.
Now, Steve, I think this is over. From now on you'll never bully this man and me. If you want a lesson for fighting call me if you want - He put his sword down and laughed, they laughed together and Steve shaked Carl's hand and left.
Come on man, get up. The show is over, well my name is Carl, Carl Winterwood. - Carl gave a hand to tha man who was laying on the ground.
I actually didn't needed your help - He laughed and looked behind Steve - My name is Daniel, Daniel Loren. I think you saw that I can't fight very well. And this is my brother Nathaniel, he fight too well and he wants to be a ranger, but I don't want it, I good at craftind or building and repairing. I want to become a builder.
Well it's nice to meet you guys, I really needed friends to rely on. I want to become a ranger too myself and put a knife in Mance Rayder's neck. - Carl was happy to find brothers to talk and rely on.
Forget about it, I've heard that Lord Robb Stark is gathering an army to go south, I think there's giong to be a war. Carl you said that your family is Winterwood, they are sworn to the Stark right? So this means they will go to war too. - Nathaniel said like he was upset about it.
They started talking and knowing each other. But Carl's head was full with thoughts. At midnight Carl saw a dream, where he was injured and saw he's father and brothers die in a castle. He woke up suddenly and looked at his sword, then looked at the door.
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Carl Winterwood
Carl Winterwood is the third born son of Lord Brat Winterwood, 29 years old who was sent to the wall just before 3 days f… morerom the message from the Starks. He was sent to the wall because of a murder. He killed a man because this man attacked his girlfriend. He wanted to become a ranger and kill Mance Rayder. He's height is 1.80CM , with a medium lenght brown hair, brown eyes, with a scar at his left hand. Before this time he had no friends or a ally, but after this day he made a lifetime brothers. At a snowy day Carl was training at the sword training. He saw a big guy bullying someone.
* Hey you - Carl pointed his finger to the big guy and he looked at him - yes the big guy, come and try to bully me! Draw your sword. Let's play a game, if I win you'll stop bullying this man, If you win, haha well you'll not win! - Carl draw his sword and pointed it to the big guy.
Carl was brave but not that skillful with the sword… [view original content]
Carl Winterwood
Carl Winterwood is the third born son of Lord Brat Winterwood, 29 years old who was sent to the wall just before 3 days f… morerom the message from the Starks. He was sent to the wall because of a murder. He killed a man because this man attacked his girlfriend. He wanted to become a ranger and kill Mance Rayder. He's height is 1.80CM , with a medium lenght brown hair, brown eyes, with a scar at his left hand. Before this time he had no friends or a ally, but after this day he made a lifetime brothers. At a snowy day Carl was training at the sword training. He saw a big guy bullying someone.
* Hey you - Carl pointed his finger to the big guy and he looked at him - yes the big guy, come and try to bully me! Draw your sword. Let's play a game, if I win you'll stop bullying this man, If you win, haha well you'll not win! - Carl draw his sword and pointed it to the big guy.
Carl was brave but not that skillful with the sword… [view original content]
I know you shouldn't post replies to your comment when you can edit but can anybody see it, if you can reply, sorry if I couldn't get it straight but I am new to join the realm so its not 100% perfect
Carl Winterwood
Carl Winterwood is the third born son of Lord Brat Winterwood, 29 years old who was sent to the wall just before 3 days f… morerom the message from the Starks. He was sent to the wall because of a murder. He killed a man because this man attacked his girlfriend. He wanted to become a ranger and kill Mance Rayder. He's height is 1.80CM , with a medium lenght brown hair, brown eyes, with a scar at his left hand. Before this time he had no friends or a ally, but after this day he made a lifetime brothers. At a snowy day Carl was training at the sword training. He saw a big guy bullying someone.
* Hey you - Carl pointed his finger to the big guy and he looked at him - yes the big guy, come and try to bully me! Draw your sword. Let's play a game, if I win you'll stop bullying this man, If you win, haha well you'll not win! - Carl draw his sword and pointed it to the big guy.
Carl was brave but not that skillful with the sword… [view original content]
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[Blame no one] We need evidence if we want to blame someone. Investigation must be done first, then accusation.
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Okay time for sime constructive criticism: The dialogue is pretty cringeworthy the way they talk is just silly plus Rick calls Brat 'dad' in this world people don't call their parents 'mum' or 'dad' they say 'father' and 'mother'. I am interested in the story though don't get me wrong.
Thank you for the advice!
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[blmae no one] it makes no sense if we just blame it on someone else but we have no evidence, great chapter!
[Blame Terrence!]
The grammar is cringeworthy, too!
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The Voting is closed
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In the defense of Dennis66 he did say his English is not very good
Thank you!
I have a question - will your fanfiction appear regularly or you are posting it randomly?
I'am posting it from night to night because I have no time.
Sometimes in my free time I write it too.
Lord Brat Winterwood
Terrence was looking at the corpses. He was shocked. After the question of Brat he lifted his head up, looked first at Torrhen and after that to Brat.
It's Elena, Elena Snow. - No one know anything about her because she was a bastard, bur a farmer girl. - She is living alone, at the southern side of the city. At a small house with just one room.
We have to pay her a visit, ask her about it. Maybe she knows something about the situation. - Brat started to walk inside the chamber. He circled the room looking in every part of it. After that he shaked his head like he was telling them to move - Oh and Torrhen, bury the corpes at once. We don't want someone to this mess.
It was midday at Starford. Just a couple of hours from the training of Terrence. The castle was located at the western side of the city, the gate was at northern side, the farms and all the animals and trees for food were at the southern side of the city, the barracks were at the central side where is the center of the city and a statue of the founder of the house - Brick ''the peaceful'' Winterwood. He ruled the house when the Targaryens invaded the North. He died at the battle from a dragon fire. When they finaly arrived. They knocked at the door and Elena opened it.
My lord!? - She was shocked when saw Brat and Rick in front of the door - Please come in!
I have a few questions for you. I want to know that do you know who killed the maester? - The lord closed the door and looked Elena in the eyes, while she was looking at Rick. Elena looked at Rick after this bent her head down.
I don't know my lord...
Well, thank you for the help. I wish you all the good things. - Brat shaked her hand and left the house with Rick. - I think she knows something, but someone is forcing her not to talk to us. Rick call the small council at once. - Rick shaked his head and walked away from him.
The member of the small council are - the lord of the house Brat, his wife Elissa, Rick and Victor Winterwood ( The first and secondborn sons of Brat), Harris Snow ( Brat's bastard), Terrence and Torrhen. Torrhen is the commander of the garrison (20 for close combat and 10 archers) , Terrence is the master-at-arms who trains the amateurs, Rick is the commander of the Elite Guards(EG) , Victor has his own soldiers ( 30 soldiers like the Elite Guards, but Victors forces are weaker than Elite Guards and they fight only in close combat) and Lord Brat is the commander of the main army ( 150 soldiers - 120 for close combat and 30 archers ).
Okey, if everyone is here let's start to talk. The Lannisters have taken Lord Ned Stark into prison, Robb is calling us to fight for him. He gave us only 4 days to prepare our army and met with his army, Robb is gathering the Northern army against the Lannisters. I will take the main army. Terrence and Torrhen will stay at the castle for defence alongside with their soldiers. Elissa you'll stay the castle too. Now Rick and Victor ......
I will come father no matter what, I want to prove you that I am a real Winterwood. - Harris said this with a serious look to Brat
[Bring Rick and the EG] [Bring Rick with his EG and Victor with his forces] [Bring Victor with his forces]
[Bring Victor with his forces]
It makes sense. They fight only in close combats, and if someone has to protect the walls, is the EG.
[Bring Rick with his EG and Victor with his forces]
[Bring Victor and his forces.]
[Bring Rick and the EG]
Just Submitted my character, really hope I wrote what I could. Really Interested in this, hope it goes well.
[Bring Victor with his forces]
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creating sigil for house winterwood for fun.
[Bring Victor with his forces] The Elite Guard should stay with Rick who I assume will be ruling in Brat's place.
[Bring Rick with his EG and Victor with his forces]
Thank you! I'am looking forward to him.
The voting is closed
[Bring Victor with his forces]
Victor and his forces will go to the war with main army and his father ..
Dammit, i missed the voting, anyway, i would choose Victor and his forces also.
I am sorry
Carl Winterwood
Carl Winterwood is the third born son of Lord Brat Winterwood, 29 years old who was sent to the wall just before 3 days from the message from the Starks. He was sent to the wall because of a murder. He killed a man because this man attacked his girlfriend. He wanted to become a ranger and kill Mance Rayder. He's height is 1.80CM , with a medium lenght brown hair, brown eyes, with a scar at his left hand. Before this time he had no friends or a ally, but after this day he made a lifetime brothers. At a snowy day Carl was training at the sword training. He saw a big guy bullying someone.
Carl was brave but not that skillful with the sword but he was great with the bow. The big guy started wo walk toward him drawing his sword. Carl smalled his eyes, made a step back.
They fighted each for a couple of minutes. A sword was coming from the right side after it from the other side and Carl blocked them all. Steve was tired from all the swings and at his final swing Carl swinged against Steve's sword and trow it away. Steve left empty-handed and Carl pointed his sword to the Steve's neck.
Now, Steve, I think this is over. From now on you'll never bully this man and me. If you want a lesson for fighting call me if you want - He put his sword down and laughed, they laughed together and Steve shaked Carl's hand and left.
Come on man, get up. The show is over, well my name is Carl, Carl Winterwood. - Carl gave a hand to tha man who was laying on the ground.
I actually didn't needed your help - He laughed and looked behind Steve - My name is Daniel, Daniel Loren. I think you saw that I can't fight very well. And this is my brother Nathaniel, he fight too well and he wants to be a ranger, but I don't want it, I good at craftind or building and repairing. I want to become a builder.
Well it's nice to meet you guys, I really needed friends to rely on. I want to become a ranger too myself and put a knife in Mance Rayder's neck. - Carl was happy to find brothers to talk and rely on.
Forget about it, I've heard that Lord Robb Stark is gathering an army to go south, I think there's giong to be a war. Carl you said that your family is Winterwood, they are sworn to the Stark right? So this means they will go to war too. - Nathaniel said like he was upset about it.
They started talking and knowing each other. But Carl's head was full with thoughts. At midnight Carl saw a dream, where he was injured and saw he's father and brothers die in a castle. He woke up suddenly and looked at his sword, then looked at the door.
[Leave the Night's Watch] [Stay at the Night's Watch]
[Stay at the Night's Watch]
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I know you shouldn't post replies to your comment when you can edit but can anybody see it, if you can reply, sorry if I couldn't get it straight but I am new to join the realm so its not 100% perfect
[Stay at the Night's Watch]
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Has Carl taken his Vows yet?