Well guys this is it for today. Thank you all for compliments and joining, I definitely got more results then I expected and that's great. This has been really fun and I hope it lasts a while. I will probably do about three posts a day(usually around this time). Hope you guys like it so far!
Every book I own.
Example: Lord Of The Rings, Game Of Thrones, Hunger Games
They do this. "Insert talking here," said some guy. "Oh ye… moreah blah blah blah," other man responded.
They don't do it like this,
"Hello," said Bob
"Hey whats up bro?" Said Bobby
"Nothin much dude just chillin" Replied Bob
Also look at this thread. Most people do talking like that.
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/60116/what-comes-aftera-walking-dead-fan-fic
Yes, they do. Lord of the Rings sometimes doesn't, but that's because it goes more like this,
"Blahblahblah" Dildor Baggins said. Before,… more Gandalf the blue clearly said that "thbubaibe."
That sort of thing. Listing things said in the past. Or quoting titles in that world, or shit like that.
Well... I just looked in every book I have nearby, and they all have the line separation. I could go get Lord of the Rings, but it's all the way over there... One of the ones I looked at was Game of Thrones, though.
Well guys this is it for today. Thank you all for compliments and joining, I definitely got more results then I expected and that's great. T… morehis has been really fun and I hope it lasts a while. I will probably do about three posts a day(usually around this time). Hope you guys like it so far!
Well... I just looked in every book I have nearby, and they all have the line separation. I could go get Lord of the Rings, but it's all the way over there... One of the ones I looked at was Game of Thrones, though.
Seriously?... No one else is complaining.
It just annoys me if I have to keep on pressing enter when someone is talking. This way its eas… moreier. It takes up less space.
If it really means that much to you then I guess I could try... but its just so... annoying.
>>Zyphon Hartwell<<
The news spread fast. Some outbreak of people going crazy and eating people. It was crazy! Right now Zyph… moreon and people on his apartment floor were gathered in a room together. A radio was on giving everyone news. The only people with him was WeMissYouCarley and David. WeMissYouCarley was sitting beside Zyphon carefully listening to every detail of the news. David isolated himself in the corner like he didn't want to be there. "We better get out of the city Zyphon. Before the infected get onto the streets." WeMissYouCarley said.
Zyphon hadn't said much to the guy but he agreed. He began thinking about ways out. He knew the front door was not a good idea. He started thinking about the building. There was actually a platform on the 12th floor that he saw yesterday. They could take that down and then make a run to his car in the parking lot. "I have an idea. Follow me." He said. They all grabbed a knife and w… [view original content]
Chapter 1: End's Beginning
>>Cody<<
He had been searching the woods for a while. It was dark and he could barely see anyth… moreing. He decided to take a rest as he sat down his back against a hard oak tree. He recalled past events. It was almost evening. Him and his girlfriend were going to a party. They were almost there until a man stumbled out of an alley and started walking toward them, making weird sounds. "Hey what's your problem?" Cody said. The guy continued to stumble down the street toward them. "Stay back!" Cody said. The man didn't listen. Soon he was so close, his arms were reaching to grab Cody's girlfriend. Cody punched his face and he fell down. The man squirmed and began crawling toward him. "Whatever dude" Cody said as he walked away. When he turned he saw his girlfriend running away into the forest. And now here he was looking for her... He got back up and went down a path he swore he had seen before, calling h… [view original content]
>>LeeTheProfessional<<
Pro had been camping outside by a farm. It was night time and he sat by the warm crackling fire. He ac… moretually quite enjoyed camping, sleeping outside, and living in the wilderness. Right now he was roasting a hot dog on a stick over the fire. He twirled it around with care and watched as the flame flickered on. He was camping by this farm. The people living there had allowed him to sleep outside. After the dog was done roasting he began eating it. It tasted delicious. He was interrupted as a loud pitched sound was heard from the woods. Pro thought it was a scream...
What is that? I better go investigate.
Its probably just my mind playing tricks on me. I'll stay here.
>>John Kozlov<<
They were at the police station and were waiting for further orders. Apparently there was some infection, or outbreak going on. Most of the cops were gone. John was holding the fort with Gary, and Nector… [view original content]
>>Zyphon Hartwell<<
The news spread fast. Some outbreak of people going crazy and eating people. It was crazy! Right now Zyph… moreon and people on his apartment floor were gathered in a room together. A radio was on giving everyone news. The only people with him was WeMissYouCarley and David. WeMissYouCarley was sitting beside Zyphon carefully listening to every detail of the news. David isolated himself in the corner like he didn't want to be there. "We better get out of the city Zyphon. Before the infected get onto the streets." WeMissYouCarley said.
Zyphon hadn't said much to the guy but he agreed. He began thinking about ways out. He knew the front door was not a good idea. He started thinking about the building. There was actually a platform on the 12th floor that he saw yesterday. They could take that down and then make a run to his car in the parking lot. "I have an idea. Follow me." He said. They all grabbed a knife and w… [view original content]
" So far I guess Markd's character Spark since hes a bad guy "
No wonder...Markd4547 guy's are always the bad guys! (Tobis comic)
Rea… morelly amazing story so far man, but that's no surprise...i was aware of the fact that you are a good " Fanficer " after all!
" So far I guess Markd's character Spark since hes a bad guy "
No wonder...Markd4547 guy's are always the bad guys! (Tobis comic)
Rea… morelly amazing story so far man, but that's no surprise...i was aware of the fact that you are a good " Fanficer " after all!
Personally don't have to from my point of view was perfectly written very easy to read and I understood everything. Everyone has unique style to writing I won't make someone change their style to suit myself when it's perfectly fine. but i respect your opinion Harpar
Seriously?... No one else is complaining.
It just annoys me if I have to keep on pressing enter when someone is talking. This way its eas… moreier. It takes up less space.
If it really means that much to you then I guess I could try... but its just so... annoying.
He was at the airport. After some news of an outbreak everyone there had left. All but Gengar. For now he knew his family was safe, and the people after him were unlikely to find him in the infested city. One day a police officer came searching for some guy, named Rafael. The walkers eventually got him, as Gengar hid in one of the stores. Gengar walked over to the body and killed the walkers with a piece of glass. He then searched the officer's corpse. A name tag stated his name was Nector, and Gengar took the pistol off of him. The airport was quite secure for the past few days. Not many walkers could get in but the few that did, he killed with the pistol he got from the cop. All the supplies he had scavenged was in a airplane where he slept. Luckily it was in a hangar so it was fairly safe. Gengar wanted to find his family. He went to sleep hoping they were still alive. ..
>>Deceptio<<
Deceptio awoke to the sound of bickering downstairs. Two familiar voices were arguing about something. He yawned, pulled on his outdoor clothes, and went downstairs. He went down and saw Liam, and Ohyoupokedme getting real angry. "Your such a screw up! You almost got me killed out there!" Ohyoupokedme said in anger. Chase was keeping Ohyoupokedme away from hitting Liam, and Glinda was eating at the table, with a somber looking Ellie.
"I'm sorry okay! I'll just leave." Liam said.
"Yeah you better! Your going to screw us all over. God help whoever's group you join!" Ohyoupokedme snapped. Liam at this point looked really hurt. He went to the door and opened it. "Wait! Don't go!" Deceptio said. Liam looked back at him and shook his head mouthing the word No and he walked out the door into the pitch black of night. "Ohyoupokedme... Look what you did. I better go get him before the lurkers eat him" Deceptio said. "Well technically they don't eat all of you..." Ohyoupokedme began. Deceptio was already putting on his coat getting ready to leave. "He's not worth it but while your out don't forget the food, were running low. Check that mall on Walken street." Ohyoupokedme said as Deceptio walked out the door. Deceptio took out his flashlight and shined it around. Liam was no where to be seen.
I should go find Liam. He's a good guy.
I'll head to the mall. It's no use looking in all woods, in the dark.
>>Eli Conner<<
He hit the guy one more time with his spiked brass knuckles. The man was strapped in a chair, hands and feet bound. "I'll ask you again. Why did you attack me?" Eli said with more anger. The man looked scared, so far Eli had hit him twice and he looked like he would spill any second now. "We just... Me and my friends needed food and it seemed like you had a lot. Were just trying to survive just like you! Please don't kill me." The man said in a scared voice. Eli didn't want to hurt anymore and decided to let them go. "You better not try this to anyone else. Or I will find you." Eli said as he left three cans of food on the ground and unbound all the men. "Yes, yes okay thank you so much." The leader said quickly picking up all the cans. "In all your ways acknowledge Him and He will make Your paths straight." Eli said as he got into his Humvee and drove away.
Eli drove. Soon he found a man walking alone beside the road. The man wore a gas mask and a trench coat, and hailed him to pull over. Eli did so and rolled down the window. "I need a ride. Can I roll with you for a bit?" The mysterious man said with a few breathing sounds when he was talking.
>>Gengar<<
He was at the airport. After some news of an outbreak everyone there had left. All but Gengar. For now he knew his… more family was safe, and the people after him were unlikely to find him in the infested city. One day a police officer came searching for some guy, named Rafael. The walkers eventually got him, as Gengar hid in one of the stores. Gengar walked over to the body and killed the walkers with a piece of glass. He then searched the officer's corpse. A name tag stated his name was Nector, and Gengar took the pistol off of him. The airport was quite secure for the past few days. Not many walkers could get in but the few that did, he killed with the pistol he got from the cop. All the supplies he had scavenged was in a airplane where he slept. Luckily it was in a hangar so it was fairly safe. Gengar wanted to find his family. He went to sleep hoping they were still alive. ..
>>Deceptio<<
Deceptio aw… [view original content]
>>Gengar<<
He was at the airport. After some news of an outbreak everyone there had left. All but Gengar. For now he knew his… more family was safe, and the people after him were unlikely to find him in the infested city. One day a police officer came searching for some guy, named Rafael. The walkers eventually got him, as Gengar hid in one of the stores. Gengar walked over to the body and killed the walkers with a piece of glass. He then searched the officer's corpse. A name tag stated his name was Nector, and Gengar took the pistol off of him. The airport was quite secure for the past few days. Not many walkers could get in but the few that did, he killed with the pistol he got from the cop. All the supplies he had scavenged was in a airplane where he slept. Luckily it was in a hangar so it was fairly safe. Gengar wanted to find his family. He went to sleep hoping they were still alive. ..
>>Deceptio<<
Deceptio aw… [view original content]
Personally don't have to from my point of view was perfectly written very easy to read and I understood everything. Everyone has unique styl… moree to writing I won't make someone change their style to suit myself when it's perfectly fine. but i respect your opinion Harpar
>>Gengar<<
He was at the airport. After some news of an outbreak everyone there had left. All but Gengar. For now he knew his… more family was safe, and the people after him were unlikely to find him in the infested city. One day a police officer came searching for some guy, named Rafael. The walkers eventually got him, as Gengar hid in one of the stores. Gengar walked over to the body and killed the walkers with a piece of glass. He then searched the officer's corpse. A name tag stated his name was Nector, and Gengar took the pistol off of him. The airport was quite secure for the past few days. Not many walkers could get in but the few that did, he killed with the pistol he got from the cop. All the supplies he had scavenged was in a airplane where he slept. Luckily it was in a hangar so it was fairly safe. Gengar wanted to find his family. He went to sleep hoping they were still alive. ..
>>Deceptio<<
Deceptio aw… [view original content]
Comments
Name one book that doesn't do that.
Every book I own.
Example: Lord Of The Rings, Game Of Thrones, Hunger Games
They do this. "Insert talking here," said some guy. "Oh yeah blah blah blah," other man responded.
They don't do it like this,
"Hello," said Bob
"Hey whats up bro?" Said Bobby
"Nothin much dude just chillin" Replied Bob
Also look at this thread. Most people do talking like that.
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/60116/what-comes-aftera-walking-dead-fan-fic
Well guys this is it for today. Thank you all for compliments and joining, I definitely got more results then I expected and that's great. This has been really fun and I hope it lasts a while. I will probably do about three posts a day(usually around this time). Hope you guys like it so far!
Yes, they do. Lord of the Rings sometimes doesn't, but that's because it goes more like this,
"Blahblahblah" Dildor Baggins said. Before, Gandalf the blue clearly said that "thbubaibe."
That sort of thing. Listing things said in the past. Or quoting titles in that world, or shit like that.
Proof?
Well... I just looked in every book I have nearby, and they all have the line separation. I could go get Lord of the Rings, but it's all the way over there... One of the ones I looked at was Game of Thrones, though.
wait is it to late to join I made one
Oh we do can't wait till tomorrow.Seeya
Its never too late to join. People who joined later may appear later though
I'm too lazy to press enter. XD
Come on, please? I really want to read this. I just can't, if it's like this, though. It frustrates me so much.
okay thanks bud!
Seriously?... No one else is complaining.
It just annoys me if I have to keep on pressing enter when someone is talking. This way its easier. It takes up less space.
If it really means that much to you then I guess I could try... but its just so... annoying.
It's bugging me. It's bugging me a lot. So thank you
Better safe then sorry. Lets take the stairs.
YAY! I'M IN THE STORY!
Me: I'll take the van, its faster and the corpses can't get in.
Story arc is the relevant events occurring in the story, like AOW.
Love the story so far
LeeTheProfessional: What is that? I better go investigate.
If The Rock approves, it must be good.
Zyphon: Better safe than sorry. Lets take the stairs.
This reminds me, I need to continue on Asim's story.
But, great job, Raging_Blades.
" So far I guess Markd's character Spark since hes a bad guy "
No wonder...Markd4547 guy's are always the bad guys!
(Tobis comic)
Really amazing story so far man, but that's no surprise...i was aware of the fact that you are a good " Fanficer " after all!
Thanks. Looking forward to Asim's story as I have read the first part
.
Thanks! You are not so bad yourself
You join in this thread. http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/66747/fan-fic-preparation-thread/new
Prefer Anti-Hero lol necessary evil for survival like the governor or just for the chaos
Sorry, I've just been caught up in the Battle Royale for the time being. I need to hold it off for a day and work a little on Asim's story.
Hey Raging, do you know when the next part will be out?
Personally don't have to from my point of view was perfectly written very easy to read and I understood everything. Everyone has unique style to writing I won't make someone change their style to suit myself when it's perfectly fine. but i respect your opinion Harpar
SOON!
HOW SOON, LIKE VERY SOON? OR LIKE, LATER SOON.THE WORLD NEEDS TO KNOW
>>Gengar<<
He was at the airport. After some news of an outbreak everyone there had left. All but Gengar. For now he knew his family was safe, and the people after him were unlikely to find him in the infested city. One day a police officer came searching for some guy, named Rafael. The walkers eventually got him, as Gengar hid in one of the stores. Gengar walked over to the body and killed the walkers with a piece of glass. He then searched the officer's corpse. A name tag stated his name was Nector, and Gengar took the pistol off of him. The airport was quite secure for the past few days. Not many walkers could get in but the few that did, he killed with the pistol he got from the cop. All the supplies he had scavenged was in a airplane where he slept. Luckily it was in a hangar so it was fairly safe. Gengar wanted to find his family. He went to sleep hoping they were still alive. ..
>>Deceptio<<
Deceptio awoke to the sound of bickering downstairs. Two familiar voices were arguing about something. He yawned, pulled on his outdoor clothes, and went downstairs. He went down and saw Liam, and Ohyoupokedme getting real angry. "Your such a screw up! You almost got me killed out there!" Ohyoupokedme said in anger. Chase was keeping Ohyoupokedme away from hitting Liam, and Glinda was eating at the table, with a somber looking Ellie.
"I'm sorry okay! I'll just leave." Liam said.
"Yeah you better! Your going to screw us all over. God help whoever's group you join!" Ohyoupokedme snapped. Liam at this point looked really hurt. He went to the door and opened it. "Wait! Don't go!" Deceptio said. Liam looked back at him and shook his head mouthing the word No and he walked out the door into the pitch black of night. "Ohyoupokedme... Look what you did. I better go get him before the lurkers eat him" Deceptio said. "Well technically they don't eat all of you..." Ohyoupokedme began. Deceptio was already putting on his coat getting ready to leave. "He's not worth it but while your out don't forget the food, were running low. Check that mall on Walken street." Ohyoupokedme said as Deceptio walked out the door. Deceptio took out his flashlight and shined it around. Liam was no where to be seen.
I should go find Liam. He's a good guy.
I'll head to the mall. It's no use looking in all woods, in the dark.
>>Eli Conner<<
He hit the guy one more time with his spiked brass knuckles. The man was strapped in a chair, hands and feet bound. "I'll ask you again. Why did you attack me?" Eli said with more anger. The man looked scared, so far Eli had hit him twice and he looked like he would spill any second now. "We just... Me and my friends needed food and it seemed like you had a lot. Were just trying to survive just like you! Please don't kill me." The man said in a scared voice. Eli didn't want to hurt anymore and decided to let them go. "You better not try this to anyone else. Or I will find you." Eli said as he left three cans of food on the ground and unbound all the men. "Yes, yes okay thank you so much." The leader said quickly picking up all the cans. "In all your ways acknowledge Him and He will make Your paths straight." Eli said as he got into his Humvee and drove away.
Eli drove. Soon he found a man walking alone beside the road. The man wore a gas mask and a trench coat, and hailed him to pull over. Eli did so and rolled down the window. "I need a ride. Can I roll with you for a bit?" The mysterious man said with a few breathing sounds when he was talking.
Hop in. The Lord allows us all under his roof.
Maybe. I want to ask some questions first though.
Drive away.
Jeez.... I haven't even gotten to the outcomes of the past choices. On it now! Next part coming soon. And not Telltale soon. Maybe like 5-10 minutes.
Love this, thank you! ; )
Edit: I'll hope you can somehow write my character there later and please, you can be very improvised and creative. It's all cool.
I'll head to the mall. It's no use looking in all woods, in the dark.
Cold decision but it's safer
Drive away
Can I roll with you for a bit to me sounds like going kill you after a while he has no idea wheres his going so definitely to dangerous
Deceptio: I should go find Liam. He's a good guy.
Eli: Maybe. I want to ask some questions first though.
Deceptio Can't have his friend out there alone. Maybe the guy can help Eli, but he should be careful if anything.
Yeah to tell you the truth i didn't even notice.
Awwwww yeah.XD Deceptio-I should go find Liam.He's a good guy.Eli Conner-Maybe.I want to ask some questions firtst though.