Walking Dead: Text-Based Adventure Game (Closed)

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  • edited August 2014

    You quoted me :D Nice teaser, sounds like episode 2's gonna be really good.

    HarjKS posted: »

    Accolades trailer for 'A New World' will be on my site soon, as well as a teeny tiny teaser for 'Murmurs of Hope'. I hope you guys enjoy it.

  • Ohh, I've been quoted! :D Nice trailer. :)

    HarjKS posted: »

    Accolades trailer for 'A New World' will be on my site soon, as well as a teeny tiny teaser for 'Murmurs of Hope'. I hope you guys enjoy it.

  • I apparently have perfect timing.

    Read the "Hold it asshole" part just as the sound effect played.

    Pretty sweet :P

    HarjKS posted: »

    Accolades trailer for 'A New World' will be on my site soon, as well as a teeny tiny teaser for 'Murmurs of Hope'. I hope you guys enjoy it.

  • Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

    Gobananas01 posted: »

    Wow, that was....awesome. Better than the accolade trailers from the game, actually.

  • Thank you! :)

    You quoted me Nice teaser, sounds like episode 2's gonna be really good.

  • Yep, thanks again. :D

    Pipas posted: »

    Ohh, I've been quoted! Nice trailer.

  • Aha I tried to make the timing as best as I could, but since everyone reads at a different pace, it's difficult. I'm so glad it worked out and thank you so much! :D

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    I apparently have perfect timing. Read the "Hold it asshole" part just as the sound effect played. Pretty sweet :P

  • edited August 2014

    I want to interact and talk to you guys more, and reward you guys for all your love and support! :D How would you like me to do this?

    ANSWER HERE

    EDIT: Please NOTE this is only for ways I can interact with you guys more or reward you guys. It isn't for improvements upon the game, or for the website, etc. Unless it's a way to interact or reward you guys more, please then do not respond to this survey.

  • The only advice I'd give is to make the speech seem a bit more natural, more commas to separate speech, "I'm glad you're okay, we should check on the others" instead of "I'm glad you're okay we should check on the others", since it makes the dialogue feel more human and thus the characters more believable, seeing as people always fill speech in with "uh" and "ah" and such, instead of speaking like monotone robots in perfect sentences, but apart from that I really enjoyed this, the writing was good and I didn't see any glaring spelling or grammatical errors, so I give you props for that.

  • Thank you so much! I'll try my best to improve the dialogue, and I'm glad you enjoyed the episode. :D

    The only advice I'd give is to make the speech seem a bit more natural, more commas to separate speech, "I'm glad you're okay, we should che

  • This is great. Thanks for making it. :)

  • Cool!!! you're awesome :)

  • Excuse me?I didn't try to get into your bullshit game,I didn't even ask you to,I wrote 3 suggestions and the first one was to make a website using a new website builder,called enjin.

    HarjKS posted: »

    Another thing the 'SurveyMonkey' response is meant for ways for my game to be improved. I do not appreciate you clearly trying to get in on the game, after I've declined twice. Do not abuse the 'SurveyMonkey' response survey again please.

  • edited August 2014

    Harj,bro,I can make you a website,which have many perks and features!From them:

    • Donations
    • Forums
    • Homepage with News section
    • User tags
    • Theme Editor
      and much more!I will make an email to make you a new website.If you'd like to see how does it look,visit st-skytech.enjin.com,which is my website.
  • i hope you'll make the wolf among us too in the future :) with the wolf among us soundtrack :D

  • I was a little confused. What does it mean by us being attacked at the store? When we were at the gun store we saw a herd incoming and we ran, but I got into a fight with some walkers which I could shoot or stab. Was I attacked. Also, nice to see that this came out. I've been waiting for it :).

  • I don't have any plans for anything such as The Wolf Among Us, even though I'd love to. However The Wolf Among Us has inspired me for my next series after The Walking Dead, but I can't say too much. ;)

    Mich19 posted: »

    i hope you'll make the wolf among us too in the future with the wolf among us soundtrack

  • Behind the store if you throw the brick over-arm, then it will smash the car window and set off a car alarm. This attracts the walkers who see you, and you and John rush into the store. You then have the option of blocking the door with cardboard boxes or a broomstick. If you block it with a broomstick, you'll be safe and head to the gun store.

    If you block it with cardboard boxes, the door collapses and the walkers get through. John tries to defend you however he runs out of ammo, in which Steve shoots the window next to you and at the walker surrounding you and with Laura they save you and rush back to their home. This is what happens if you get attacked in the store.

    I'm glad you enjoyed the episode. :D

    Spooch posted: »

    I was a little confused. What does it mean by us being attacked at the store? When we were at the gun store we saw a herd incoming and we ra

  • I find the website fine, and on the questionnaire a lot of the fans like it. So I think I'll stick to it, thank you.

    • Donations

    No, I do not want people to pay me even if they fee like it, especially when I'm not wasting my own personal expenses on these games. So donations are out of the question for now, whether I will have them in the future, I do not know.

    • Forums

    Once again no, this serves as a forum for the game where people can support Telltale but also discuss about my own personal fan-made game here. I don't want to drive traffic away from Telltale Games when I owe them almost everything for the creation of this project, as well as the fans.

    • Homepage with News Section

    The homepage is the news section. It shows dev-diaries and the latest posts from me on the homepage. I think it'll suffice, thank you. :)

    • User tags

    I'm not sure what you mean by this.

    • Theme Editor

    I chose and edited the theme, and I like it and no one seems to have a problem with it. So I think I'll stick to it, thank you.

    Harj,bro,I can make you a website,which have many perks and features!From them: * Donations * Forums * Homepage with News section *

  • Thank you for playing and supporting it, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

    Elistra posted: »

    This is great. Thanks for making it.

  • Nope you're awesome. Thanks for playing and supporting the project. :D

    Mich19 posted: »

    Cool!!! you're awesome

  • oh it's okay ^__^ and can't wait for your next episode project :)

    HarjKS posted: »

    I don't have any plans for anything such as The Wolf Among Us, even though I'd love to. However The Wolf Among Us has inspired me for my next series after The Walking Dead, but I can't say too much.

  • Thanks so much! :D

    Mich19 posted: »

    oh it's okay ^__^ and can't wait for your next episode project

  • I love the fact that you take pride in your work! If others don't appreciate that, it's their problem, not yours. I take pride in my work as well. I haven't even started to type Episode 2 of my story yet, I'm just writing the plot, the choices and the outcomes on paper first. Do what you do man, be yourself! :D

    HarjKS posted: »

    I take a lot of pride in my work, and a few months is the maximum time I'd take to make an episode. I want to make this episode perfect, and

  • Thanks so much. By take pride in my work, I don't mean that I won't listen to others if they find it bad or something. It's just that I want to try and make it the best it can be, and in the best condition without looking sloppy. Which is why I'm so distressed at all these mistakes I didn't see when re-reading through the episode. I'm just hoping to make the next episode better, and I'm glad you're working on your game too. I wish you the best of luck! :D

    SivD1 posted: »

    I love the fact that you take pride in your work! If others don't appreciate that, it's their problem, not yours. I take pride in my work as

  • Just a tease, in case you guys haven't seen it. Who will you choose?

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  • Most likely John.

    Or the blurred character :P

    HarjKS posted: »

    Just a tease, in case you guys haven't seen it. Who will you choose?

  • You might change your mind once playing the episode. Or this may not happen to you at all, since it's only the introduction to one of the endings from 'A New World'.

    BlueShadiw posted: »

    Most likely John. Or the blurred character :P

  • Ah. I had John throw the brick. Guess I made the right choice :).

    HarjKS posted: »

    Behind the store if you throw the brick over-arm, then it will smash the car window and set off a car alarm. This attracts the walkers who s

  • That's great, a lot of the people I know (including my brother) tried throwing the brick over-arm.

    Spooch posted: »

    Ah. I had John throw the brick. Guess I made the right choice .

  • I didn't trust myself. I figured, if John messes up it won't be my fault, while if I mess up it will be my fault.

    HarjKS posted: »

    That's great, a lot of the people I know (including my brother) tried throwing the brick over-arm.

  • Clever. But don't worry you may want to trust yourself in 'Murmurs of Hope' and future episodes. Just a hint. :)

    Spooch posted: »

    I didn't trust myself. I figured, if John messes up it won't be my fault, while if I mess up it will be my fault.

  • Love that concept! I had something similar in mind for the introduction to my second episode. :)

    HarjKS posted: »

    You might change your mind once playing the episode. Or this may not happen to you at all, since it's only the introduction to one of the endings from 'A New World'.

  • edited August 2014

    Would you like a demo for Episode Two?

    Answer here please.

    EDIT: Okay so it seems a lot of you want the demo to come out, please note the demo will not use custom-music, but instead use regular music. So sounds like gunshots, walkers, and such will not be seen in the demo. This is mainly because I've decided to do all the audio after the episode has been fully written rather than during, and I haven't begun the audio yet.

    However I will work on finalising the demo now, and publishing it soon.

  • Holy crap! I honestly thought about doing a demo for mine this morning! I probably won't go through with it though...

    HarjKS posted: »

    Would you like a demo for Episode Two? Answer here please. EDIT: Okay so it seems a lot of you want the demo to come out, please note

  • edited August 2014

    I'm sure you should follow through with doing a demo. It really is good, and it helps people understand where the episode is going without giving away too much. I'm hoping fans can see improvements with this demo in terms of choice selection, grammar, writing, etc. As well as generally enjoy the episode and see one of the results from their ending in 'A New World' (if some people actually got this ending).

    SivD1 posted: »

    Holy crap! I honestly thought about doing a demo for mine this morning! I probably won't go through with it though...

  • Well, the reason I'm a bit hesitant is because I like to be immersed in a story. For example, when a new episode of the game comes out, I look to have some pop and snacks ready with me, and is play the whole episode all at once. I'll probably your demo if you release it (from the poll, it seems people really want you to), but I enjoy playing it all at once, but I'll go back and think on it when I've done more of the episode (I finished writing the 8 different opening this morning XD).

    HarjKS posted: »

    I'm sure you should follow through with doing a demo. It really is good, and it helps people understand where the episode is going without g

  • Also, have you gotten my message that I posted on your website?

    HarjKS posted: »

    I'm sure you should follow through with doing a demo. It really is good, and it helps people understand where the episode is going without g

  • I understand, and unfortunately I don't have any message from you.

    SivD1 posted: »

    Also, have you gotten my message that I posted on your website?

  • I appreciate your feedback.

    HarjKS posted: »

    I find the website fine, and on the questionnaire a lot of the fans like it. So I think I'll stick to it, thank you. * Donations No

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