I don't know if that's a good idea. They're all very short and they lack of detail. Never get a picture in my head. Perhaps you could do that for the next part? Thanks,
I wouldn't rush, man. Put as much effort as you can into each part, make it as detailed as possible. Make it the best you can be, and make up some new awesome scenarios.
Class: Neutral-Good
Gender: Female
Apperance (his unglamored for is a human one): Golden long heddle hair , green eyes , caucasian , 3,3 feet tall. Thin
Gender: Male
Class: Neutral
Glamour: white short heddle hair , blue eyes , 6,1 feet tall , pale skin. Young and very thin.
Unglamou… morer: Like the human form , but all his skin is transparent and he hasn´t got any feet. He doesn´t need to breath . If he is sad , he can make things or people ice
Jewf decided to fight. He lunged at Damien. Raven fired, but slightly missed. Panther then aimed the gun at Raven. Damien picked up a chair and ran at Jewf. Jewf dodged and tripped him. Damien roared and fell face first. He looked up, blood dripping from his nose. Panther ran at Damien, and kicked him down. Raven shot Jewf in the leg, causing an explosion of rage, pain and terror overcoming Jewf. He jumped up, trying his best to ignore the pain in his leg, but he couldn't. He yelled, and Damien used that instant to smash the chair he was holding over Jewf's head. Panther jumped behind him, and aimed the gun at Damien's face, but Raven jumped Panther and tackled him, sending the gun flying.
"GET OFF" Panther screamed and punched Raven in the face then pushed him off. Damien then roared and searched around, found a machete, and dug it deep into Panther's left arm. Panther screamed and kicked Damien in the balls. Damien stumbled backwards, regained balance, then ran at Jewf. Jewf dove out of the way, and Damien almost ran into the wall. Jewf was transforming now. He felt the claws coming out and the black fur coming out of his back, and his eyes turned yellow. He stabbed Damien in the side with his claw, and Damien yelled, then elbowed Jewf in the face. Hard. Jewf went flying back and fell on Raven. Raven then put the gun against Jewf's head.
"Say goodbye, motherfucker," Raven said. Then the earsplitting roar of the gun sounded and the right side of Ravens face exploded. Panther smiled triumphantly, but then Damien stood up above him.
"Remember me?" Damien said in his deep voice. His blood was visible because of his white shirt. Panther then surprisingly moved his gun to Damien. Damien retaliated by cutting the arm holding the gun. The cut as very deep and blood sprayed. Panther screamed and then went for the gun with his other hand. Then Damien stepped on Panther's back, picked up the gun with his machete, and laughed.
"Poor bastards. Tried to beat me. Learned your lesson, I guess." Damien said, then laughed when Panther started weakly muttering "Fuck... You... Fuck... You..." Over and over again. Then Jewf started to crawl to the desk. "Where the fuck are you going, wolf? You trying to crawl for your life?" Then he took the gun and shot Jewf 4 times in the chest. The gun ran out of ammo. Jewf was in half-wolf form, so the bullets didn't do much. Jewf then grabbed the chair and hurled it at Damien. It hit Damien square in the chest. He fell backwards and Panther grabbed the gun and aimed it at Damien's face. Damien sat up and sneered.
"Go ahead. Shoot me." Damien sneered.
"Happily," Panther said. He then tried to fire, but the gun clicked. Damien beamed and stabbed Panther. The blood poured out of the wound fast. He tried to cover the wound up with his shirt. Damien just ran over to Jewf and punched him hard in the face. Jewf retaliated by kicking him the the balls. Damien then kicked Jewf in the face.
"DIE, MOTHER FUCKING FUCKER." Jewf yelled, then he charged at him and tackled him. Jewf raised his hand and looked into his eyes. His eyes were full of terror and rage. "You better now, Damien, that in one motion I can tear your heart with one motion, right?" Damien just said extremely crude things. Then a gunshot filled the room and there was a bullet in Damien's torso. Jewf looked at Panther. Panther looked smug.
"Apperently, there was another gun," Panther sneered.
"Damien, I'm gonna kill you. Admit to the murders." Jewf said, raising his hand.
"I. Didn't. Kill. Anybody." Damien said, putting emphasis on each syllable.
Then Jewf strikes, but instead of killing him, he just lightly taps his chest. Then Grabs Damien's hands and handcuffs them. "Damien Thom, you're under arrest for the murder of Calvin Owl. You have the right to remain silent." Jewf said.
"Fucker," Damien spat.
3 hours later
They arrived at the police department to drop off Damien. They walked to the interrogation room. They arrived and Jewf saw the most beautiful girl he ever met.
"My name is The White Huntress, I will be interrogating you. Please step in the room." She said. Her voice was like silk. She was beautiful. She had brown hair and green eyes. She was tall and had weapons. She was Jewf's kind of girl.
"HEY! When you stop staring at the hottie, you wanna go get some lunch? I'm pretty goddamn hungry," Panther said.
"Sounds good," Jewf said. Then they left.
The interview
"So, can you tell me your name?" Huntress asked.
"No problem, bitch. I'm Damien Thom, son of fucking satan," Damien said.
"Mm. I don't care. So, can you tell me what you know about the murder of Calvin Owl?" Huntress asked.
"What should I know? I was roughly 2 miles away!" Damien said.
"Ok. So we got no where. Now, can you tell me about your gang? Who's in it?" Huntress asked.
"Me, Raven, who is now dead-"
"Really? And how did he die?"
"He was fighting Jewf, who attacked us, and Panther shot him in the face!"
"Well, never mind him. Who else?"
"Mr. Deceit, James, and Lillnette. That's it."
"That's all?"
"Yeah. I mean, the last 3 don't do anything. I'm the son of Satan! I'm more feared than fear itself!"
Then Huntress rolled her eyes and put on a face that said 'I am not amused'. "Well, you would be feared if you didn't hide for 3 months, and then get your ass kicked by Jewf. P.S, Deimos IS fear. So you get your facts right, dumbass."
Damien replied by flipping her off.
"OK. So, we made damn good progress, didn't we. You have been so very helpful."
"Fuck you."
"You will be escorted to your cell. Thank you. Never come in my line of sight again."
"MOTHERFUCKER!"
Then guards bursted in. They grabbed him and escorted him to his jail cell. They threw him in. They left the screaming Damien there.
"Hello, Damien." A voice live dirt rose in the air. Damien stopped yelling.
"Wh-who are you?" Damien spat out, terrified.
"Let me show you..." Then Deimos walked out of the shadows...
In the solving room (Or something)
"SO. We have nothing. All we have is some poor bastard that was solved for no reason except some note, and it caused the death of a probable innocent. The interview did almost nothing, but we added 3 names to our suspects list," The head officer said.
"Well, he left a note and resisted arrest," Jewf argued.
"Handwriting can be forged, Jewf. And even though I can see the resisting arrest part as evidence, but all that means is he didn't wanna be arrested. I'm gonna go get a fingerprint scanning on the note. So leave." The head Officer said.
So they left.
"So what are we gonna do now?" Panther asked.
"Go back to the crime scene to look for clues or talk to the suspects"
THE FORUM AMONG US EPISODE 1 CHAPTER 3
Jewf decided to fight. He lunged at Damien. Raven fired, but slightly missed. Panther then aimed t… morehe gun at Raven. Damien picked up a chair and ran at Jewf. Jewf dodged and tripped him. Damien roared and fell face first. He looked up, blood dripping from his nose. Panther ran at Damien, and kicked him down. Raven shot Jewf in the leg, causing an explosion of rage, pain and terror overcoming Jewf. He jumped up, trying his best to ignore the pain in his leg, but he couldn't. He yelled, and Damien used that instant to smash the chair he was holding over Jewf's head. Panther jumped behind him, and aimed the gun at Damien's face, but Raven jumped Panther and tackled him, sending the gun flying.
"GET OFF" Panther screamed and punched Raven in the face then pushed him off. Damien then roared and searched around, found a machete, and dug it deep into Panther's left arm. Panther screamed and kicked Damien i… [view original content]
THE FORUM AMONG US EPISODE 1 CHAPTER 3
Jewf decided to fight. He lunged at Damien. Raven fired, but slightly missed. Panther then aimed t… morehe gun at Raven. Damien picked up a chair and ran at Jewf. Jewf dodged and tripped him. Damien roared and fell face first. He looked up, blood dripping from his nose. Panther ran at Damien, and kicked him down. Raven shot Jewf in the leg, causing an explosion of rage, pain and terror overcoming Jewf. He jumped up, trying his best to ignore the pain in his leg, but he couldn't. He yelled, and Damien used that instant to smash the chair he was holding over Jewf's head. Panther jumped behind him, and aimed the gun at Damien's face, but Raven jumped Panther and tackled him, sending the gun flying.
"GET OFF" Panther screamed and punched Raven in the face then pushed him off. Damien then roared and searched around, found a machete, and dug it deep into Panther's left arm. Panther screamed and kicked Damien i… [view original content]
THE FORUM AMONG US EPISODE 1 CHAPTER 3
Jewf decided to fight. He lunged at Damien. Raven fired, but slightly missed. Panther then aimed t… morehe gun at Raven. Damien picked up a chair and ran at Jewf. Jewf dodged and tripped him. Damien roared and fell face first. He looked up, blood dripping from his nose. Panther ran at Damien, and kicked him down. Raven shot Jewf in the leg, causing an explosion of rage, pain and terror overcoming Jewf. He jumped up, trying his best to ignore the pain in his leg, but he couldn't. He yelled, and Damien used that instant to smash the chair he was holding over Jewf's head. Panther jumped behind him, and aimed the gun at Damien's face, but Raven jumped Panther and tackled him, sending the gun flying.
"GET OFF" Panther screamed and punched Raven in the face then pushed him off. Damien then roared and searched around, found a machete, and dug it deep into Panther's left arm. Panther screamed and kicked Damien i… [view original content]
Name: Gus 'Knight of the Swan'
Class: True Neutral
Gender: Male
Appearance (Glamoured): Very lean, long blonde hair and shining blu… moree eyes, wears a white cloak.
Appearance (Unglamoured): A swan.
Personality: Hot-headed, dark sense of humor, good sense of morals.
Comments
OK.
ok. I do have more scenario's.
Kewl
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@zachiscool3
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THE FORUM AMONG US EPISODE 1 CHAPTER 3
Jewf decided to fight. He lunged at Damien. Raven fired, but slightly missed. Panther then aimed the gun at Raven. Damien picked up a chair and ran at Jewf. Jewf dodged and tripped him. Damien roared and fell face first. He looked up, blood dripping from his nose. Panther ran at Damien, and kicked him down. Raven shot Jewf in the leg, causing an explosion of rage, pain and terror overcoming Jewf. He jumped up, trying his best to ignore the pain in his leg, but he couldn't. He yelled, and Damien used that instant to smash the chair he was holding over Jewf's head. Panther jumped behind him, and aimed the gun at Damien's face, but Raven jumped Panther and tackled him, sending the gun flying.
"GET OFF" Panther screamed and punched Raven in the face then pushed him off. Damien then roared and searched around, found a machete, and dug it deep into Panther's left arm. Panther screamed and kicked Damien in the balls. Damien stumbled backwards, regained balance, then ran at Jewf. Jewf dove out of the way, and Damien almost ran into the wall. Jewf was transforming now. He felt the claws coming out and the black fur coming out of his back, and his eyes turned yellow. He stabbed Damien in the side with his claw, and Damien yelled, then elbowed Jewf in the face. Hard. Jewf went flying back and fell on Raven. Raven then put the gun against Jewf's head.
"Say goodbye, motherfucker," Raven said. Then the earsplitting roar of the gun sounded and the right side of Ravens face exploded. Panther smiled triumphantly, but then Damien stood up above him.
"Remember me?" Damien said in his deep voice. His blood was visible because of his white shirt. Panther then surprisingly moved his gun to Damien. Damien retaliated by cutting the arm holding the gun. The cut as very deep and blood sprayed. Panther screamed and then went for the gun with his other hand. Then Damien stepped on Panther's back, picked up the gun with his machete, and laughed.
"Poor bastards. Tried to beat me. Learned your lesson, I guess." Damien said, then laughed when Panther started weakly muttering "Fuck... You... Fuck... You..." Over and over again. Then Jewf started to crawl to the desk. "Where the fuck are you going, wolf? You trying to crawl for your life?" Then he took the gun and shot Jewf 4 times in the chest. The gun ran out of ammo. Jewf was in half-wolf form, so the bullets didn't do much. Jewf then grabbed the chair and hurled it at Damien. It hit Damien square in the chest. He fell backwards and Panther grabbed the gun and aimed it at Damien's face. Damien sat up and sneered.
"Go ahead. Shoot me." Damien sneered.
"Happily," Panther said. He then tried to fire, but the gun clicked. Damien beamed and stabbed Panther. The blood poured out of the wound fast. He tried to cover the wound up with his shirt. Damien just ran over to Jewf and punched him hard in the face. Jewf retaliated by kicking him the the balls. Damien then kicked Jewf in the face.
"DIE, MOTHER FUCKING FUCKER." Jewf yelled, then he charged at him and tackled him. Jewf raised his hand and looked into his eyes. His eyes were full of terror and rage. "You better now, Damien, that in one motion I can tear your heart with one motion, right?" Damien just said extremely crude things. Then a gunshot filled the room and there was a bullet in Damien's torso. Jewf looked at Panther. Panther looked smug.
"Apperently, there was another gun," Panther sneered.
"Damien, I'm gonna kill you. Admit to the murders." Jewf said, raising his hand.
"I. Didn't. Kill. Anybody." Damien said, putting emphasis on each syllable.
Then Jewf strikes, but instead of killing him, he just lightly taps his chest. Then Grabs Damien's hands and handcuffs them. "Damien Thom, you're under arrest for the murder of Calvin Owl. You have the right to remain silent." Jewf said.
"Fucker," Damien spat.
3 hours later
They arrived at the police department to drop off Damien. They walked to the interrogation room. They arrived and Jewf saw the most beautiful girl he ever met.
"My name is The White Huntress, I will be interrogating you. Please step in the room." She said. Her voice was like silk. She was beautiful. She had brown hair and green eyes. She was tall and had weapons. She was Jewf's kind of girl.
"HEY! When you stop staring at the hottie, you wanna go get some lunch? I'm pretty goddamn hungry," Panther said.
"Sounds good," Jewf said. Then they left.
The interview
"So, can you tell me your name?" Huntress asked.
"No problem, bitch. I'm Damien Thom, son of fucking satan," Damien said.
"Mm. I don't care. So, can you tell me what you know about the murder of Calvin Owl?" Huntress asked.
"What should I know? I was roughly 2 miles away!" Damien said.
"Ok. So we got no where. Now, can you tell me about your gang? Who's in it?" Huntress asked.
"Me, Raven, who is now dead-"
"Really? And how did he die?"
"He was fighting Jewf, who attacked us, and Panther shot him in the face!"
"Well, never mind him. Who else?"
"Mr. Deceit, James, and Lillnette. That's it."
"That's all?"
"Yeah. I mean, the last 3 don't do anything. I'm the son of Satan! I'm more feared than fear itself!"
Then Huntress rolled her eyes and put on a face that said 'I am not amused'. "Well, you would be feared if you didn't hide for 3 months, and then get your ass kicked by Jewf. P.S, Deimos IS fear. So you get your facts right, dumbass."
Damien replied by flipping her off.
"OK. So, we made damn good progress, didn't we. You have been so very helpful."
"Fuck you."
"You will be escorted to your cell. Thank you. Never come in my line of sight again."
"MOTHERFUCKER!"
Then guards bursted in. They grabbed him and escorted him to his jail cell. They threw him in. They left the screaming Damien there.
"Hello, Damien." A voice live dirt rose in the air. Damien stopped yelling.
"Wh-who are you?" Damien spat out, terrified.
"Let me show you..." Then Deimos walked out of the shadows...
In the solving room (Or something)
"SO. We have nothing. All we have is some poor bastard that was solved for no reason except some note, and it caused the death of a probable innocent. The interview did almost nothing, but we added 3 names to our suspects list," The head officer said.
"Well, he left a note and resisted arrest," Jewf argued.
"Handwriting can be forged, Jewf. And even though I can see the resisting arrest part as evidence, but all that means is he didn't wanna be arrested. I'm gonna go get a fingerprint scanning on the note. So leave." The head Officer said.
So they left.
"So what are we gonna do now?" Panther asked.
"Go back to the crime scene to look for clues or talk to the suspects"
Go back to the crime scene to look for clues
"Talk to the suspects"
Damnit Raven!
Talk to the Suspects
So what do ya'll think of the story so far?
New part in 3 days!
Liar
I know
Well, to be fair, I was working on one, but my friend accidentally deleted it.
Thanks!
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/92489/the-58th-hunger-games-an-interactive-fan-fiction
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Yeah. xD. Sorry I haven't posted any parts for like a month. I've been busy. I'll start working tonight.
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