I'm asking this question from you who use English as their primarly language.
How good is my English in scale of 1-10? I try to do my best, but it's sometimes a little tricky
I'm asking this question from you who use English as their primarly language.
How good is my English in scale of 1-10? I try to do my best, but it's sometimes a little tricky
Just to be clear, Samantha's part starts right after Wilson and Nick leave her office.
And yeah, the next chapter will be here soon, I decided to change my plans a bit for the story so that's the reason for the delay
Possible spoiler alert for the coming chapters:
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I first thought I would keep all the characters together, but now I've decided it's better to separate them to smaller groups (They get lost when the safe zone falls apart). It gives me a chance to develop every character better and make the story different. They will try to find each other, but at the same time they're trying to find a new safe zone.
I hate it when I say it's gonna be here soon and then the radio silence begins
I've just been deleting stuff and writing it again and then again deleting it because I'm not happy with it (The whole chapter has been rewritten at least 5 times now XD). I'm not too satisfied with the other chapters, so I'll try to fix it.
Just to be clear, Samantha's part starts right after Wilson and Nick leave her office.
And yeah, the next chapter will be here soon, I de… morecided to change my plans a bit for the story so that's the reason for the delay
Possible spoiler alert for the coming chapters:
.
.
.
.
I first thought I would keep all the characters together, but now I've decided it's better to separate them to smaller groups (They get lost when the safe zone falls apart). It gives me a chance to develop every character better and make the story different. They will try to find each other, but at the same time they're trying to find a new safe zone.
It's just a time skip, don't worry about anyone dying. yet. People just tend to not like time skips But I have my reasons.
There's always possibility for Buddy appearing though.
Name: Cameron
Age: 25
Appearance: short light brown hair, green eyes, tall,
Personality: Doesn't like to be serious but can be seri… moreous if the situation demands it, he doesn't trust easily,
Weapons: Mac 11 and a combat knife
Skills: He's a sneaky little bastard. Good at picking locks, can bullshit his way through any situation.
Occupation: Drug/ weapons smuggler.
Other info: Bandit. Has drug problems.
That a bandit for you, hope you like it.
Sorry for not being so active on the forums lately. I have a lot of shit going on right now and I need to deal with all of that (and at the same time I have to write the next chapter). And I'm not kidding right now, the chapter has been rewritten 13 times and I swear I will not do that ever again
Ps. (SPOILER WARNING: GAME OF THRONES) I just finished Game of Thrones Season 3. How can the writers be so fucking cruel? Part of me died while watching all of those people dying. I mean, wasn't Eddard enough? Let me just finish Season 4 and then I'll join your story Liquid :P (If I still can)
Sorry for not being so active on the forums lately. I have a lot of shit going on right now and I need to deal with all of that (and at the … moresame time I have to write the next chapter). And I'm not kidding right now, the chapter has been rewritten 13 times and I swear I will not do that ever again
Ps. (SPOILER WARNING: GAME OF THRONES) I just finished Game of Thrones Season 3. How can the writers be so fucking cruel? Part of me died while watching all of those people dying. I mean, wasn't Eddard enough? Let me just finish Season 4 and then I'll join your story Liquid :P (If I still can)
Really great chapter! I'm quite creeped out by Buddy and I guess that won't end well for Nick and Wilson.
"Ok, now I'm scared"
… more Yes, yes, absolutely
[Let them free]
I really don't see the point in killing a family just because they could be dangerous. That's just brutal.
[Go check out the body]
Just in case they could save someone. If it is a Lurker, they can still shoot it and drive away.
Take all the time you need with that chapter, I'm sure it's going to be awesome!
Oh man, Season 3 of Game of Thrones... I knew it was com… moreing, but still, seeing it was even harder than reading it.
Let me just finish Season 4 and then I'll join your story Liquid :P (If I still can)
Of course you can, you're always welcome
That scene made me cringe a little bit XD Actually most Theon scenes in Season 3 were painful to watch, especially since they were only mentioned in the books, but never explicitly shown. I had no idea how far they would go there. However most of the things they did to him were ultimately well-deserved, except maybe that dick part
But I loved Jaime in that season. Loosing his hand was the best thing that could happen to him character-wise.
I'm still shaking from the deaths of all starks. I screamed at my tv when Jofferey sentenced Ned to die and two seasons later his son and wife dies. Just when I thought Robb was going to win the war! I really didn't see that one coming. Jon is still alive though, he's awesome. Arya too.
That scene made me cringe a little bit XD Actually most Theon scenes in Season 3 were painful to watch, especially since they were only ment… moreioned in the books, but never explicitly shown. I had no idea how far they would go there. However most of the things they did to him were ultimately well-deserved, except maybe that dick part
But I loved Jaime in that season. Loosing his hand was the best thing that could happen to him character-wise.
When I read the books, I actually had to stop reading after the Red Wedding, it was so intense. But it was even worse in the show. I thought it would be easy, until it started with them stabbing Robb's wife in the belly ;_; That did not happen in the books and I didn't thought the showwriters would be that cruel. Things just keep getting worse for the Starks. Jon and Arya are awesome though, I agree. If you like them, you'll love Season 4.
I'm still shaking from the deaths of all starks. I screamed at my tv when Jofferey sentenced Ned to die and two seasons later his son and wi… morefe dies. Just when I thought Robb was going to win the war! I really didn't see that one coming. Jon is still alive though, he's awesome. Arya too.
Comments
Great chapter!!!
Shoot the bomber
10/10.
To me your English is perfect and well prepared, I enjoy reading this well written story.
[Shoot the bomber]
[Shoot the bomber]
Awesome Chapter!!!
[Shoot the bomber]
10/10.
Your English is better then mine and I'm from the USA, that's saying something. XD
Whoah, I didn't think I'd get 10 from aynone :d Thank you very much
Hahah, I don't think so man
Thank you!
Thank you!
Thanks!
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/92420/river-that-s-run-red-interactive-twd-story-chatacter-sumbission-open
Just to be clear, Samantha's part starts right after Wilson and Nick leave her office.
And yeah, the next chapter will be here soon, I decided to change my plans a bit for the story so that's the reason for the delay
Possible spoiler alert for the coming chapters:
.
.
.
.
I first thought I would keep all the characters together, but now I've decided it's better to separate them to smaller groups (They get lost when the safe zone falls apart). It gives me a chance to develop every character better and make the story different. They will try to find each other, but at the same time they're trying to find a new safe zone.
http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/92912/the-hunger-games-only-one-gets-to-live
I hate it when I say it's gonna be here soon and then the radio silence begins
I've just been deleting stuff and writing it again and then again deleting it because I'm not happy with it (The whole chapter has been rewritten at least 5 times now XD). I'm not too satisfied with the other chapters, so I'll try to fix it.
I'm sure you'll understand :c
I'm pretty sure you guys will hate the way I start the next chapter
Unless you do something like killing my favorite character, I won't hate you.
But if you kill someone else's favorite character I will love you >:3
You are a very twisted person, my friend...
Buddy?!
It's one of my many lovable qualities. ^-^
It's just a time skip, don't worry about anyone dying. yet. People just tend to not like time skips
But I have my reasons.
There's always possibility for Buddy appearing though.
So I've noticed... :P
Phew, that's a relief.
Fuck
You might have noticed, but you have not yet to truly known ^-^
0.o
Soon, soon, everything's soon ^-^
If anyone wants to do some bandits, it would be appreciated.
Name: Cameron
Age: 25
Appearance: short light brown hair, green eyes, tall,
Personality: Doesn't like to be serious but can be serious if the situation demands it, he doesn't trust easily,
Weapons: Mac 11 and a combat knife
Skills: He's a sneaky little bastard. Good at picking locks, can bullshit his way through any situation.
Occupation: Drug/ weapons smuggler.
Other info: Bandit. Has drug problems.
That a bandit for you, hope you like it.
Thank you!
Yup, If you need more just ask... But I'll Wait to see if anyone else wants to first.
Sorry for not being so active on the forums lately. I have a lot of shit going on right now and I need to deal with all of that (and at the same time I have to write the next chapter). And I'm not kidding right now, the chapter has been rewritten 13 times and I swear I will not do that ever again
Ps. (SPOILER WARNING: GAME OF THRONES) I just finished Game of Thrones Season 3. How can the writers be so fucking cruel? Part of me died while watching all of those people dying. I mean, wasn't Eddard enough? Let me just finish Season 4 and then I'll join your story Liquid :P (If I still can)
Take all the time you need with that chapter, I'm sure it's going to be awesome!
Oh man, Season 3 of Game of Thrones... I knew it was coming, but still, seeing it was even harder than reading it.
Of course you can, you're always welcome
Nothing to see here.
Really great chapter! I'm quite creeped out by Buddy and I guess that won't end well for Nick and Wilson.
Yes, yes, absolutely
[Let them free]
I really don't see the point in killing a family just because they could be dangerous. That's just brutal.
[Go check out the body]
Just in case they could save someone. If it is a Lurker, they can still shoot it and drive away.
[Let them free]
[Drive away]
Awesome Chapter!
Thanks!
And the things they did to Theon
Sure, he should be punished for invading Winterfell but shit, cutting his d*ck off? Seriously?
Edit: I accidentally responded to the wrong comment first xd
Thanks :>
That scene made me cringe a little bit XD Actually most Theon scenes in Season 3 were painful to watch, especially since they were only mentioned in the books, but never explicitly shown. I had no idea how far they would go there. However most of the things they did to him were ultimately well-deserved, except maybe that dick part
But I loved Jaime in that season. Loosing his hand was the best thing that could happen to him character-wise.
I'm still shaking from the deaths of all starks. I screamed at my tv when Jofferey sentenced Ned to die and two seasons later his son and wife dies. Just when I thought Robb was going to win the war! I really didn't see that one coming. Jon is still alive though, he's awesome. Arya too.
When I read the books, I actually had to stop reading after the Red Wedding, it was so intense. But it was even worse in the show. I thought it would be easy, until it started with them stabbing Robb's wife in the belly ;_; That did not happen in the books and I didn't thought the showwriters would be that cruel. Things just keep getting worse for the Starks. Jon and Arya are awesome though, I agree. If you like them, you'll love Season 4.