Our Last Hope - Interactive story

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  • edited March 2015

    Great chapter!!!

    Shoot the bomber

    finlander posted: »

    Okay bro, I've deleted the old story, go read the new one on page 7.

  • edited March 2015

    10/10.

    To me your English is perfect and well prepared, I enjoy reading this well written story.

    finlander posted: »

    I'm asking this question from you who use English as their primarly language. How good is my English in scale of 1-10? I try to do my best, but it's sometimes a little tricky

  • [Shoot the bomber]

    finlander posted: »

    Okay bro, I've deleted the old story, go read the new one on page 7.

  • [Shoot the bomber]

    Awesome Chapter!!!

    finlander posted: »

    Okay bro, I've deleted the old story, go read the new one on page 7.

  • [Shoot the bomber]

    finlander posted: »

    Okay bro, I've deleted the old story, go read the new one on page 7.

  • 10/10.

    Your English is better then mine and I'm from the USA, that's saying something. XD

    finlander posted: »

    I'm asking this question from you who use English as their primarly language. How good is my English in scale of 1-10? I try to do my best, but it's sometimes a little tricky

  • Whoah, I didn't think I'd get 10 from aynone :d Thank you very much

    TheUnkGuy posted: »

    10/10. To me your English is perfect and well prepared, I enjoy reading this well written story.

  • Hahah, I don't think so man :D Thank you!

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    10/10. Your English is better then mine and I'm from the USA, that's saying something. XD

  • Thank you!

    supersagig posted: »

    [Shoot the bomber] Awesome Chapter!!!

  • Thanks!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Great chapter!!! Shoot the bomber

  • edited March 2015

    Just to be clear, Samantha's part starts right after Wilson and Nick leave her office.

    And yeah, the next chapter will be here soon, I decided to change my plans a bit for the story so that's the reason for the delay

    Possible spoiler alert for the coming chapters:

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    I first thought I would keep all the characters together, but now I've decided it's better to separate them to smaller groups (They get lost when the safe zone falls apart). It gives me a chance to develop every character better and make the story different. They will try to find each other, but at the same time they're trying to find a new safe zone.

  • I hate it when I say it's gonna be here soon and then the radio silence begins :D

    I've just been deleting stuff and writing it again and then again deleting it because I'm not happy with it (The whole chapter has been rewritten at least 5 times now XD). I'm not too satisfied with the other chapters, so I'll try to fix it.

    I'm sure you'll understand :c

    finlander posted: »

    Just to be clear, Samantha's part starts right after Wilson and Nick leave her office. And yeah, the next chapter will be here soon, I de

  • I'm pretty sure you guys will hate the way I start the next chapter :D

  • Unless you do something like killing my favorite character, I won't hate you.

    But if you kill someone else's favorite character I will love you >:3

    finlander posted: »

    I'm pretty sure you guys will hate the way I start the next chapter

  • You are a very twisted person, my friend...

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Unless you do something like killing my favorite character, I won't hate you. But if you kill someone else's favorite character I will love you >:3

  • Buddy?!

    finlander posted: »

    I'm pretty sure you guys will hate the way I start the next chapter

  • It's one of my many lovable qualities. ^-^

    mr.quality posted: »

    You are a very twisted person, my friend...

  • It's just a time skip, don't worry about anyone dying. yet. People just tend to not like time skips :D But I have my reasons.

    There's always possibility for Buddy appearing though.

    finlander posted: »

    I'm pretty sure you guys will hate the way I start the next chapter

  • So I've noticed... :P

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    It's one of my many lovable qualities. ^-^

  • It's just a time skip, don't worry about anyone dying.

    Phew, that's a relief.

    yet

    Fuck

    finlander posted: »

    It's just a time skip, don't worry about anyone dying. yet. People just tend to not like time skips But I have my reasons. There's always possibility for Buddy appearing though.

  • edited March 2015

    You might have noticed, but you have not yet to truly known ^-^

    mr.quality posted: »

    So I've noticed... :P

  • 0.o

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    You might have noticed, but you have not yet to truly known ^-^

  • Soon, soon, everything's soon ^-^

    mr.quality posted: »

    0.o

  • If anyone wants to do some bandits, it would be appreciated.

  • Name: Cameron

    Age: 25

    Appearance: short light brown hair, green eyes, tall,

    Personality: Doesn't like to be serious but can be serious if the situation demands it, he doesn't trust easily,

    Weapons: Mac 11 and a combat knife

    Skills: He's a sneaky little bastard. Good at picking locks, can bullshit his way through any situation.

    Occupation: Drug/ weapons smuggler.

    Other info: Bandit. Has drug problems.

    That a bandit for you, hope you like it.

    finlander posted: »

    If anyone wants to do some bandits, it would be appreciated.

  • Thank you!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Name: Cameron Age: 25 Appearance: short light brown hair, green eyes, tall, Personality: Doesn't like to be serious but can be seri

  • Yup, If you need more just ask... But I'll Wait to see if anyone else wants to first.

    finlander posted: »

    Thank you!

  • edited March 2015

    Sorry for not being so active on the forums lately. I have a lot of shit going on right now and I need to deal with all of that (and at the same time I have to write the next chapter). And I'm not kidding right now, the chapter has been rewritten 13 times and I swear I will not do that ever again D:

    Ps. (SPOILER WARNING: GAME OF THRONES) I just finished Game of Thrones Season 3. How can the writers be so fucking cruel? Part of me died while watching all of those people dying. I mean, wasn't Eddard enough? Let me just finish Season 4 and then I'll join your story Liquid :P (If I still can)

  • Take all the time you need with that chapter, I'm sure it's going to be awesome!

    Oh man, Season 3 of Game of Thrones... I knew it was coming, but still, seeing it was even harder than reading it.

    Let me just finish Season 4 and then I'll join your story Liquid :P (If I still can)

    Of course you can, you're always welcome :D

    finlander posted: »

    Sorry for not being so active on the forums lately. I have a lot of shit going on right now and I need to deal with all of that (and at the

  • edited May 2015

    Nothing to see here.

  • Really great chapter! I'm quite creeped out by Buddy and I guess that won't end well for Nick and Wilson.

    "Ok, now I'm scared"

    Yes, yes, absolutely D:

    [Let them free]

    I really don't see the point in killing a family just because they could be dangerous. That's just brutal.

    [Go check out the body]

    Just in case they could save someone. If it is a Lurker, they can still shoot it and drive away.

    finlander posted: »

    Nothing to see here.

  • [Let them free]

    [Drive away]

    Awesome Chapter!

    finlander posted: »

    Nothing to see here.

  • edited April 2015

    Thanks!

    Really great chapter! I'm quite creeped out by Buddy and I guess that won't end well for Nick and Wilson. "Ok, now I'm scared"

  • edited April 2015

    And the things they did to Theon D:

    Sure, he should be punished for invading Winterfell but shit, cutting his d*ck off? Seriously? :D

    Edit: I accidentally responded to the wrong comment first xd

    Take all the time you need with that chapter, I'm sure it's going to be awesome! Oh man, Season 3 of Game of Thrones... I knew it was com

  • Thanks :>

    supersagig posted: »

    [Let them free] [Drive away] Awesome Chapter!

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    That scene made me cringe a little bit XD Actually most Theon scenes in Season 3 were painful to watch, especially since they were only mentioned in the books, but never explicitly shown. I had no idea how far they would go there. However most of the things they did to him were ultimately well-deserved, except maybe that dick part D:

    But I loved Jaime in that season. Loosing his hand was the best thing that could happen to him character-wise.

  • I'm still shaking from the deaths of all starks. I screamed at my tv when Jofferey sentenced Ned to die and two seasons later his son and wife dies. Just when I thought Robb was going to win the war! I really didn't see that one coming. Jon is still alive though, he's awesome. Arya too.

    That scene made me cringe a little bit XD Actually most Theon scenes in Season 3 were painful to watch, especially since they were only ment

  • edited April 2015

    When I read the books, I actually had to stop reading after the Red Wedding, it was so intense. But it was even worse in the show. I thought it would be easy, until it started with them stabbing Robb's wife in the belly ;_; That did not happen in the books and I didn't thought the showwriters would be that cruel. Things just keep getting worse for the Starks. Jon and Arya are awesome though, I agree. If you like them, you'll love Season 4.

    finlander posted: »

    I'm still shaking from the deaths of all starks. I screamed at my tv when Jofferey sentenced Ned to die and two seasons later his son and wi

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