Interactive GoT Fan Fiction: The Winds Beyond The Wall

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  • [Go with Alexia]

    Damn that's some fine drawings you got there! Edric looks fucking pissed lol

    You're using Photoshop?

  • Thanks! I'm actually using paint.net for these :D

    Upshaw posted: »

    [Go with Alexia] Damn that's some fine drawings you got there! Edric looks fucking pissed lol You're using Photoshop?

  • [Go with Alexia]

    Loved this chapter and your drawings! :D

    Maya She walked side by side with king Raymun, and one of the Hornfoot clan leaders was walking right behind them. Maya didn’t say a word

  • Wow, these are great! Skjorn looks pretty much how I imagined him, but my favourites here are Maya and Edric, they look awesome!

    I've been doing more of those pics of the POV characters, here ya go: Here's link to the gallery: http://imgur.com/a/gYRMZ#7

  • I'm planning on catching up on this soon. I ended at the end of the first part. Glad to see it's back.

  • Awesome Drawing man!

    I've been doing more of those pics of the POV characters, here ya go: Here's link to the gallery: http://imgur.com/a/gYRMZ#7

  • Those drawings are really good man, Argus looks awesome!

    [Go with Alexia] Great to have the story back!

  • RIP Jonk u.u

    I've been doing more of those pics of the POV characters, here ya go: Here's link to the gallery: http://imgur.com/a/gYRMZ#7

  • [Go with Alexia]

    Yes the story continues.

    Maya She walked side by side with king Raymun, and one of the Hornfoot clan leaders was walking right behind them. Maya didn’t say a word

  • [Go with Alexia] wonderful drawing btw!

  • [Go with Alexia]

    Nice to see you back :)

  • [Stay with the army]

  • edited May 2015

    Hey WildlingKing, you should put this all on http://www.wattpad.com/getmobile It would be easier to sort through than the word document you have.

  • Thanks for the advice, I'll check it out.

    Hey WildlingKing, you should put this all on http://www.wattpad.com/getmobile It would be easier to sort through than the word document you have.

  • My reaction, when I saw, that there is a new chapter:

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    And it was awesome as always :D

    Anyway: [Go with Alexia] it just sounds like it could get more interesting :D

  • Vote closed! Maya will go with Alexia and try to find Ivan Longbeard in the Frostfangs.

    I have been writing the next part, which is a Lenlie POV, and it will probably be posted tomorrow.

    And here is The King-Beyond-The-Wall, Raymun Redbeard for you:

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    I'll make Robett at some point, but which other characters would you like to see? Go ahead and suggest. :)

  • Yeah, why not :)

    cheyman99 posted: »

    Awesome, do you think you could make Gorgar if you have the time.

  • Awesome, do you think you could make Gorgar if you have the time.

    Vote closed! Maya will go with Alexia and try to find Ivan Longbeard in the Frostfangs. I have been writing the next part, which is a Len

  • Thanks can't wait to see him.

    Yeah, why not

  • He looks great! I guess any of the Thenns would be cool, especially the Magnar. Fleshbearer also sounds like a nice looking guy. And Eren Meratus could look a bit out of place considering the other characters, which makes me very interested in him as well.

    Vote closed! Maya will go with Alexia and try to find Ivan Longbeard in the Frostfangs. I have been writing the next part, which is a Len

  • Yep, I'll definitely do Magnar, Eren and Fleshbearer, interesting characters all of them :D

    He looks great! I guess any of the Thenns would be cool, especially the Magnar. Fleshbearer also sounds like a nice looking guy. And Eren Me

  • The Earth when you're trying to draw every single character, submitted or made by you:

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tv6p48v0meE

    Vote closed! Maya will go with Alexia and try to find Ivan Longbeard in the Frostfangs. I have been writing the next part, which is a Len

  • I want to see your illustration of Cruz. :D

    Vote closed! Maya will go with Alexia and try to find Ivan Longbeard in the Frostfangs. I have been writing the next part, which is a Len

  • [Go with Alexia]

    Maya She walked side by side with king Raymun, and one of the Hornfoot clan leaders was walking right behind them. Maya didn’t say a word

  • Hahaa :D I'll only do those that people wish me to do... First at least :p

    The Earth when you're trying to draw every single character, submitted or made by you: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tv6p48v0meE

  • Yeah, it could be interesting :D I'll do it at some point.

    Herodriver posted: »

    I want to see your illustration of Cruz.

  • Here is the next part, sorry it took a little longer to get it done than I expected!

    -

    Lenlie

    The huge tent was crowded with people, all of them silent, waiting. Magnar Krygorn sat quietly in his chair with a stern look on his face. They had travelled to the southern parts of the Vale of Thenn. Lenlie had thought that it would be hard to travel with these strangers that most likely saw her lesser than themselves, but it had been surprisingly easy – much easier than traveling with Fleshbearer at least. Princess Sigira and her friend Gorgar the Frozen had proved to be more than nice to her. At one point Lenlie even thought that Gorgar was trying to hit on her, but she had ignored the man’s smiles and hinting words. As much as she was thankful for Sigira and Gorgar she could never give herself for a Thenn, she was still a warrior of Ice Rivers. And a handsome young man like Gorgar wouldn’t want to share more than one night with me anyway.

    After a while a tall man with short brown hair and blue eyes walked into the tent, he looked tired, like someone who had made a long and restless journey. Right after the blue-eyed man in walked a black-eyed young man. No shoes, a Hornfoot.

    “Welcome home, Skjorn.” Krygorn said and Lenlie could even see a small smile on the Magnar’s face.

    “Thank you, Magnar. It’s good to be back. And I’ve brought some Hornfoots me, about fifty men that didn’t want to follow Raymun Redbeard.” Skjorn, the blue-eyed man, spoke with the same respectful voice that all the Thenns had when they talked to their Magnar. “This young man here is Dogga, he was one of Harg the Scarface’s guards before Raymun killed Harg.” Lenlie could see deep anger in Dogga’s dark eyes.

    “Harg hated Raymun, I believe you would have liked to meet him, Magnar Krygorn.” Dogga said with a serious tone. Krygorn had a skeptical look on his eyes.

    “No, young man, I don’t think I would’ve liked to meet him. From what I have heard of him he seemed to be a fool.” Krygorn said with stern voice and Dogga’s eyes widened of anger.

    “Harg was NOT a fool, you… you damn Thenn! He was a true warrior! He… He wanted to kill Raymun!”

    “He could have killed Raymun if he wanted to, but somehow he managed to get killed by his own prisoner in front of his own men. A fool’s death for a fool man.” Magnar’s hard look made Dogga turn his head. “Anyway, if you want to avenge your master the best way would be offering your help to me.” Dogga made a small nod and stayed quiet.

    “Skjorn, I assume you got the bottles that you were sent to fetch from the Hardhome?” Krygorn asked, now turning his eyes to the blue-eyed man. Skjorn nodded.

    “I already visited Raymun, and… Offered my tears.” Skjorn said with something dark in his eyes. “Of course, I can’t be sure if the Redbeard took them or not. And sadly I have some bad news as well… About Barryn.” For a moment the whole tent was silent again.

    “I want to speak with Skjorn alone.” Magnar said, and of course the Thenn obeyed the word of their leader. Lenlie walked outside the tent, wondering what had this Skjorn talked about, but Princess Sigira woke her from her thoughts.

    “Are you hungry, Lenlie? Would you like to eat with me and Gorgar? Though I’m afraid we don’t have any human flesh to offer.” The Princess said with a happy tone, but as she looked at Lenlie her smile faded. “I’m sorry, I shouldn’t joke with such things. It must not have been a nice thing… Learning to do that… Eating your enemies.”

    “No, it wasn’t easy, but I learned. Like everyone else in the Ice Rivers.” Lenlie said with a sigh. “I know it must seem like… Like something only a monster would do. My father said that I had to learn it because that is what the clans of the Ice Rivers have always done, but my mother’s advice was what helped me more. She said that after a man is dead he will no longer crave for his body, his soul has gone away and only flesh remains. And that flesh is no different from any other animal.”

    Sigira looked uncertain of what to think about Lenlie’s words.

    “Well, now we have just deer’s flesh.” She said quietly and they walked to the tent of Gorgar the Frozen.

    -

    “So, had Skjorn and Barryn killed the Redbeard?” Gorgar asked Sigira after they had eaten.

    “Perhaps, I didn’t see Barryn though.” Sigira said yawning, and Gorgar let out a little laugh.

    “He has probably crawled under some rock… Though I think there is not a rock big enough.” Gorgar said with a grin on his face.

    “Oh, ha ha.” Sigira rolled her eyes as she laid down. “So, what should we talk about?”

    “Well, perhaps we should get to know each other a little more.” Gorgar said and shrugged. Sigira raised her eyebrows.

    “I think I already know you better than I need to.” Sigira’s tone was lazy and she yawned again.

    “Yes, but think about poor Lenlie. She has just met us, and we her.” Lenlie thought that Gorgar was a annoying but she kept her calm. ‘Poor Lenlie’, oh fuck you. “So what would you like to know about us, sweetie?” Gorgar asked.

    “Well I guess you could tell me why you’re called ‘The Frozen’.” Lenlie said with little interest in her voice.

    “Oh, I’ve just been in some cold places.” Gorgar answered with a grin on his face.

    “I think we’ve all been in cold places.” Lenlie sighed and the man gave her a sly look with his golden-brown eyes.

    “So my turn to ask. Have you been stolen, sweetie?” Gorgar asked and Princess Sigira chuckled.

    “A boy of your age tried once.” Lenlie said with a serious tone. “I cut him open. He would have died if I wouldn’t have helped him when he started to cry for mercy."

    “And why didn’t you let him steal you in the first place? Too ugly?” Gorgar asked now with a little more serious face.

    “Too weak.” Lenlie answered giving Gorgar a sly smile.

    “Well that’s true.” Sigira said. “If the boy started to cry for mercy he surely must have been too weak.”

    “And you Gorgar?” Lenlie asked without paying much attention to Sigira. “Have you stolen your wife already?”

    “He steals women only to play one night with them.” Sigira said with a laugh. Lenlie couldn’t tell if the look Gorgar gave her was angry, excited or something else. You won’t steal me, not even for a night. They kept talking, mostly Sigira who taught Lenlie little about the history of Thenns and her family. After some time it was getting dark and they were about to get to sleep…

    “Sigira, I thought I’d find you here.” It was Magnar Krygorn. “I have been thinking about something… And I've come to a decision.” Sigira looked at his father with tired and confused eyes.

    “Decision? What are you talking about?”

    “If I am going to die in this battle my son needs someone to protect him, to raise him and make him a leader someday.” Magnar said with the softest voice Lenlie had heard him use.

    “You are not going to send me back, father.” Sigira didn't even have to raise her voice, the fury could be seen in her eyes.

    “Storg needs you.” The look on Krygorn’s eyes was hard, hiding all the feelings behind it.

    “He is already eight! He doesn’t need me looking over him!” Sigira sounded frustrated, but her father grabbed her hand.

    “Our family must live on. If we both die in this battle, what’s stopping someone from making my son his puppet?” Magnar looked at his daughter and sighed. “I wouldn't like to do this, but this is a command.” For a moment Lenlie thought the Princess would shout at her father. Then Sigira raised her head and looked her father in the eyes.

    “Of course, I cannot defy a command from my Magnar.” She said it with a cold tone and left the tent, Magnar following her after giving a short look at Lenlie and Gorgar. Lenlie couldn’t help but feel sad for Sigira. And she felt a little unsure of herself as well. Sigira had been the one who saved her from Fleshbearer, and she had supported her all this time as they had traveled.

    “I guess it’s just me and you now.” Gorgar said with a carefree tone and Lenlie just shook her head.

    [March to battle with the army] [Leave with Sigira]

  • [Leave with Sigira]

    Here is the next part, sorry it took a little longer to get it done than I expected! - Lenlie The huge tent was crowded with people

  • Good to see that Skjorn made it back to the Vale of Thenn together with his new horn-footed friends :D

    [Leave with Sigira]

    I like her and think she could use a bit of support after what she did for Lenlie.

    Here is the next part, sorry it took a little longer to get it done than I expected! - Lenlie The huge tent was crowded with people

  • [Leave with Sigira]

    Is Gorgar going with them if they leave or is he staying. I hope Gorgar goes with them.

    Here is the next part, sorry it took a little longer to get it done than I expected! - Lenlie The huge tent was crowded with people

  • Yeah, I think Gorgar enjoys the company of these two women enough to skip the battle :D Actually since he is your character you can decide at this point because I'm okay with both options.

    cheyman99 posted: »

    [Leave with Sigira] Is Gorgar going with them if they leave or is he staying. I hope Gorgar goes with them.

  • I guess he should stick with them. I think they are a good team and could help each other out. And Gorgar can keep trying to get with Lenlie.

    Yeah, I think Gorgar enjoys the company of these two women enough to skip the battle Actually since he is your character you can decide at this point because I'm okay with both options.

  • [Leave with Sigira]

  • [Leave with Sigira]

    Could be more interesting to go with her

    Here is the next part, sorry it took a little longer to get it done than I expected! - Lenlie The huge tent was crowded with people

  • [Leave with Sigira]

  • [Leave with Sigira] I think this won't be just babysitting trip :)

  • [Leave with Sigira]

  • [Leave with Sigira]

  • edited May 2015

    Vote is closed and Lenlie will leave with Sigira.

    So for your information my studying for this spring ends 26th and this is my last week of reading before the exam so I will definitely not be doing any writing this week. However, after the exam next Tuesday I'll have much more time for writing - at least after I'm done with the hangover I'm going to have Wednesday.

    edit: Lenlie leaves with Sigira, not Maya -__-

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