In the group we have no id say (most killable down to least killable)
1.Pascucci
* Charlie
* Kenny
4.Clementine
5.Miranda the Pug
PS having pascucci and charlie on 1 was NOT a mistake
Well, I'd say everybody but Clem as long as it's plausible. I'd like Charlie to survive too, but that's just my opinion. We don't have specific rules for that.
You could hear Clementines heavy breathing increasing every step of Lilly getting closer.
"We need to get the fuck outta here." Danielle said.
"What? Are you insane? I can't leave my group behind!" Clem said.
"Well it's for sure as hell better than getting even close to this bitch, come on! We can find your group later!" Danielle said.
What am i supposed to do? I can't leave them behind, who knows what'll happen? Besides, Lilly might steal the car, but i have no idea what Lilly is gonna do to us though...
Lilly was getting closer and closer, you could hear every step she took, and for every step, the less time Clem had to decide.
Clem sighed. "Honestly, no, but i'm not leaving them, my group, it just isn't gonna happen."
Danielle slowly gave Clementine the gun.
"Here we go..." Clem said, scared.
She slowly opened the door.
"Up with your hands." Clem said, as she aimed her gun at Lilly.
"Who the fuck do you think you are, stealing from me? Huh? I've already dealt with assholes like you, i've had enough with all of you." Lilly said, very angry.
"I said, UP with your HANDS." Clem said, getting progressively more mad. "I will shoot you."
"Oh i don't think so..." Lilly said whilst she took something and pointed it at Clem.
What is that she's holding? It's to dark...
"I'm not afraid to pull the trigger." Lilly said.
"Well neither am i." Clem said.
"Hey Clem, is everything all rig-"
He was interupted by the loud sound, and the muzzle flash, as he was falling down to the ground.
Lilly didn't make any expression, she just stood there.
"What the... fu-... what have you do-?" Clementine stutterd.
Lilly looked back at Clem. "Clementine, is that yo-"
Clementine fired her weapon.
Lilly fell to the ground.
Everything went silent.
No one said a word.
They just stood there, shocked.
After a while, when everyone realised what happened, they ran over to the body.
Clementine could barely hear a thing of what everyone said.
"WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED?"
"Oh my god, oh no no no..."
"Stay with me god damnit!"
"I'm so, so sorry for bringing you all into this..."
Clementine didn't say a thing, she slowly went over to the body...
"NO!" Clementine screamed, in sadness, and anger.
"You'll make it, okay? Please, you can do it, just hold on!" Clementine said.
There was no response.
Kenny checked his pulse.
"He's... he's dead..." Kenny said.
Clementine went to Lilly.
"Clem, what are you doing?" Kenny said.
Lilly tried to move.
"Help..." Lilly struggled.
Clementine took her gun.
"Fu- fuck you." Clem cried whilst in anger.
She fired several shots into Lilly, though not the head.
I'm really worried, as i did do a pretty massive plot twist so to speak, so anyone can just tell me to delete it and i'll do so.
Charlie went back? What i thought would work is that Ken, Pascucci, and Charlie all got back after Pascucci persuaded Charlie, by telling him that they were gonna plan it out with Clem and get Danielle.
How couldn't Lilly see it was Clem? It was real dark x3.
The reason Clementine gets brutal here is because she just lost someone she cared about, and she's had enough, so she sorta "snaps", though not necessarily into a bad person.
If anyone disagrees with anything, i can try to do something about it.
Well how will the group meet Jeremy? I thought that Clem and Co. could possibly be found sometime by some people at the town, after staying at someplace rather close to the town, or to save some of the people (one of them being Jeremy) as Danielle saw them about to become food, and she can't leave them, i don't know, just a few general ideas to toss out before somebody panicks with how fucked up my post was, and how it can't go anywhere from here, cause i think it's possible! .
You could hear Clementines heavy breathing increasing every step of Lilly getting closer.
"We need to get the fuck outta here." Danielle sa… moreid.
"What? Are you insane? I can't leave my group behind!" Clem said.
"Well it's for sure as hell better than getting even close to this bitch, come on! We can find your group later!" Danielle said.
What am i supposed to do? I can't leave them behind, who knows what'll happen? Besides, Lilly might steal the car, but i have no idea what Lilly is gonna do to us though...
Lilly was getting closer and closer, you could hear every step she took, and for every step, the less time Clem had to decide.
"Give me the gun." Clem said.
"What?" Danielle said.
"Do you have any idea what she'll do to yo-"
"Don't worry about it, i got this." Clem said.
"You sure?" Danielle said, looking somewhat scared.
Clem sighed. "Honestly, no, but i'm not leaving them, my group, it just isn't gonna happen."… [view original content]
You could hear Clementines heavy breathing increasing every step of Lilly getting closer.
"We need to get the fuck outta here." Danielle sa… moreid.
"What? Are you insane? I can't leave my group behind!" Clem said.
"Well it's for sure as hell better than getting even close to this bitch, come on! We can find your group later!" Danielle said.
What am i supposed to do? I can't leave them behind, who knows what'll happen? Besides, Lilly might steal the car, but i have no idea what Lilly is gonna do to us though...
Lilly was getting closer and closer, you could hear every step she took, and for every step, the less time Clem had to decide.
"Give me the gun." Clem said.
"What?" Danielle said.
"Do you have any idea what she'll do to yo-"
"Don't worry about it, i got this." Clem said.
"You sure?" Danielle said, looking somewhat scared.
Clem sighed. "Honestly, no, but i'm not leaving them, my group, it just isn't gonna happen."… [view original content]
Also, I sort of took Clementine shooting the shit out of Lily like Lee beating the shit out of Andy St John. Lee is punching him repeatedly fo… morer killing Mark and indirectly Larry. Clem is killing Lily for killing Charlie, but neither shoot them in the head, they leave them to reanimate, and I can imagine Clem saying to Kenny and Pasucci "Let's go...Let's go...." like Lee.
Side notes:
I'm really worried, as i did do a pretty massive plot twist so to speak, so anyone can just tell me to delete it and i'll do so… more.
Charlie went back? What i thought would work is that Ken, Pascucci, and Charlie all got back after Pascucci persuaded Charlie, by telling him that they were gonna plan it out with Clem and get Danielle.
How couldn't Lilly see it was Clem? It was real dark x3.
The reason Clementine gets brutal here is because she just lost someone she cared about, and she's had enough, so she sorta "snaps", though not necessarily into a bad person.
If anyone disagrees with anything, i can try to do something about it.
Well how will the group meet Jeremy? I thought that Clem and Co. could possibly be found sometime by some people at the town, after staying at someplace rather close to the town, or to save some of the people (one of them being Jeremy) as Danielle saw them about to become food, and she can't le… [view original content]
Also, I sort of took Clementine shooting the shit out of Lily like Lee beating the shit out of Andy St John. Lee is punching him repeatedly for killing Mark and indirectly Larry. Clem is killing Lily for killing Charlie, but neither shoot them in the head, they leave them to reanimate, and I can imagine Clem saying to Kenny and Pasucci "Let's go...Let's go...." like Lee.
Well, I'd say everybody but Clem as long as it's plausible. I'd like Charlie to survive too, but that's just my opinion. We don't have specific rules for that.
Edit: What do the others think about it?
I gotta admit I am really depressed now. But we gotta deal with it. I've had so many ideas for him as he was my most favorite Character in this story together with Jacob, who's going to die probably. Anyway: well done. Just a bit confusing because it isn't always clear who says what
Side notes:
I'm really worried, as i did do a pretty massive plot twist so to speak, so anyone can just tell me to delete it and i'll do so… more.
Charlie went back? What i thought would work is that Ken, Pascucci, and Charlie all got back after Pascucci persuaded Charlie, by telling him that they were gonna plan it out with Clem and get Danielle.
How couldn't Lilly see it was Clem? It was real dark x3.
The reason Clementine gets brutal here is because she just lost someone she cared about, and she's had enough, so she sorta "snaps", though not necessarily into a bad person.
If anyone disagrees with anything, i can try to do something about it.
Well how will the group meet Jeremy? I thought that Clem and Co. could possibly be found sometime by some people at the town, after staying at someplace rather close to the town, or to save some of the people (one of them being Jeremy) as Danielle saw them about to become food, and she can't le… [view original content]
Guys what gun did Charlie have? Cause if I write next I want one of them to pick it up. If it's a rifle Pasucci is going to pick it up, but if it's a pistol I'm planning on Clem picking it up.
Guys what gun did Charlie have? Cause if I write next I want one of them to pick it up. If it's a rifle Pasucci is going to pick it up, but if it's a pistol I'm planning on Clem picking it up.
REALLY? Whew, what a relief, i was worried everyone was gonna hate it for, well, obvious reasons :P.
Thank you, i actually agree, there wasn't much more for Charlie now. His own character was sort of finished now and his actions has affected the group to. He had influenced Kenny into understanding that they aren't just kids, and can handle themselves, he helped Clementine in all sorts of ways, etc.
Whoever's next: I suggest that Clem becomes what Charlie was trying to teach her - being selfconfident, don't always trust strangers, not listening to grownups blindheaded and not being afraid. RIP, Charlie. Really, I am depressed.
This is a short one, but it sets the stage if you want.
Clem was so close to tears, but she looked at the walls of this community and back at Charlie.
"Shit...He wanted to kill the others in that community..." Pasucci said.
"Now he can't" Kenny said.
"Let's go...Let's go..." Clem said, sniffing.
"What?" Kenny asked.
"That's Crazy!" Pasucci said.
"It was his wish...to eliminate all of them assholes. We gotta do this for him. We've got to take them down. Just like Charlies wish" Clementine said.
Kenny and Pasucci store at each other, not sure what to make of the situation.
"She's right you know" Pasucci said.
Kenny looked at Pasucci, then at Clem.
"I know she is, we've got to do this for Charlie" Kenny said.
"For...Charlie" Clem said.
So Clem, Pasucci and Kenny are going to go attack, someone might die(your choice) but I think now is time for Jeremy. We know Kenny Clem and Pasucci can't take them all down, but with the help of Jeremy and the other locked up prisoners they may be able to take down the place.
I'm so sorry :C. I only saw your post after i posted it
By the way, if a text is like this, it means basically what Clementine is thinking.
If somebody says something, but it doesn't say who, it's basically the last person who said it, though in the instance of people screaming all over the place after Lilly shot Charlie, it's basically is just everyone who's saying a bunch of stuff but you don't know who.
I gotta admit I am really depressed now. But we gotta deal with it. I've had so many ideas for him as he was my most favorite Character in thi… mores story together with Jacob, who's going to die probably. Anyway: well done. Just a bit confusing because it isn't always clear who says what
You could hear Clementines heavy breathing increasing every step of Lilly getting closer.
"We need to get the fuck outta here." Danielle sa… moreid.
"What? Are you insane? I can't leave my group behind!" Clem said.
"Well it's for sure as hell better than getting even close to this bitch, come on! We can find your group later!" Danielle said.
What am i supposed to do? I can't leave them behind, who knows what'll happen? Besides, Lilly might steal the car, but i have no idea what Lilly is gonna do to us though...
Lilly was getting closer and closer, you could hear every step she took, and for every step, the less time Clem had to decide.
"Give me the gun." Clem said.
"What?" Danielle said.
"Do you have any idea what she'll do to yo-"
"Don't worry about it, i got this." Clem said.
"You sure?" Danielle said, looking somewhat scared.
Clem sighed. "Honestly, no, but i'm not leaving them, my group, it just isn't gonna happen."… [view original content]
Whoever's next: I suggest that Clem becomes what Charlie was trying to teach her - being selfconfident, don't always trust strangers, not listening to grownups blindheaded and not being afraid. RIP, Charlie. Really, I am depressed.
We lost 2 major characters in 2 days. Dont make it 3. have one of them injured but not killed. some prisoners could die though. im going to wait 15 minutes and if nobody has posted i will go
This is a short one, but it sets the stage if you want.
Clem was so close to tears, but she looked at the walls of this community and back … moreat Charlie.
"Shit...He wanted to kill the others in that community..." Pasucci said.
"Now he can't" Kenny said.
"Let's go...Let's go..." Clem said, sniffing.
"What?" Kenny asked.
"That's Crazy!" Pasucci said.
"It was his wish...to eliminate all of them assholes. We gotta do this for him. We've got to take them down. Just like Charlies wish" Clementine said.
Kenny and Pasucci store at each other, not sure what to make of the situation.
"She's right you know" Pasucci said.
Kenny looked at Pasucci, then at Clem.
"I know she is, we've got to do this for Charlie" Kenny said.
"For...Charlie" Clem said.
So Clem, Pasucci and Kenny are going to go attack, someone might die(your choice) but I think now is time for Jeremy. We know Kenny Clem and Pasucci can't take them all down, but… [view original content]
We lost 2 major characters in 2 days. Dont make it 3. have one of them injured but not killed. some prisoners could die though. im going to wait 15 minutes and if nobody has posted i will go
I gotta admit I am really depressed now. But we gotta deal with it. I've had so many ideas for him as he was my most favorite Character in thi… mores story together with Jacob, who's going to die probably. Anyway: well done. Just a bit confusing because it isn't always clear who says what
This is a short one, but it sets the stage if you want.
Clem was so close to tears, but she looked at the walls of this community and back … moreat Charlie.
"Shit...He wanted to kill the others in that community..." Pasucci said.
"Now he can't" Kenny said.
"Let's go...Let's go..." Clem said, sniffing.
"What?" Kenny asked.
"That's Crazy!" Pasucci said.
"It was his wish...to eliminate all of them assholes. We gotta do this for him. We've got to take them down. Just like Charlies wish" Clementine said.
Kenny and Pasucci store at each other, not sure what to make of the situation.
"She's right you know" Pasucci said.
Kenny looked at Pasucci, then at Clem.
"I know she is, we've got to do this for Charlie" Kenny said.
"For...Charlie" Clem said.
So Clem, Pasucci and Kenny are going to go attack, someone might die(your choice) but I think now is time for Jeremy. We know Kenny Clem and Pasucci can't take them all down, but… [view original content]
Note: In the last three pages there were much too many continuity erros. I really don't want to appear like a smartass but I want to remind you to read all the posts very closely to avoid logical errors and to keep the story plausible. Thanks.
Ok then so I forgot Clem didn't know about Charlie wanting to kill the New Crawford guys. To fix this can we just say either Charlie said it in his final words or Kenny/Pasucci told her?
Make Kenny/Pascucci tell her, it just seems odd to have his final words be "Kill all of them" which basically means "Risk your life for me even though i'm about to die".
Ok then so I forgot Clem didn't know about Charlie wanting to kill the New Crawford guys. To fix this can we just say either Charlie said it in his final words or Kenny/Pasucci told her?
Note: In the last three pages there were much too many continuity erros. I really don't want to appear like a smartass but I want to remind you to read all the posts very closely to avoid logical errors and to keep the story plausible. Thanks.
Ok then so I forgot Clem didn't know about Charlie wanting to kill the New Crawford guys. To fix this can we just say either Charlie said it in his final words or Kenny/Pasucci told her?
Comments
In the group we have no id say (most killable down to least killable)
1.Pascucci
Charlie
Kenny
4.Clementine
5.Miranda the Pug
PS having pascucci and charlie on 1 was NOT a mistake
Thank you, that's perfect for my story x3.
I'll post it immediatly (dat grammar)!
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Well, I'd say everybody but Clem as long as it's plausible. I'd like Charlie to survive too, but that's just my opinion. We don't have specific rules for that.
Edit: What do the others think about it?
You could hear Clementines heavy breathing increasing every step of Lilly getting closer.
"We need to get the fuck outta here." Danielle said.
"What? Are you insane? I can't leave my group behind!" Clem said.
"Well it's for sure as hell better than getting even close to this bitch, come on! We can find your group later!" Danielle said.
What am i supposed to do? I can't leave them behind, who knows what'll happen? Besides, Lilly might steal the car, but i have no idea what Lilly is gonna do to us though...
Lilly was getting closer and closer, you could hear every step she took, and for every step, the less time Clem had to decide.
"Give me the gun." Clem said.
"What?" Danielle said.
"Do you have any idea what she'll do to yo-"
"Don't worry about it, i got this." Clem said.
"You sure?" Danielle said, looking somewhat scared.
Clem sighed. "Honestly, no, but i'm not leaving them, my group, it just isn't gonna happen."
Danielle slowly gave Clementine the gun.
"Here we go..." Clem said, scared.
She slowly opened the door.
"Up with your hands." Clem said, as she aimed her gun at Lilly.
"Who the fuck do you think you are, stealing from me? Huh? I've already dealt with assholes like you, i've had enough with all of you." Lilly said, very angry.
"I said, UP with your HANDS." Clem said, getting progressively more mad. "I will shoot you."
"Oh i don't think so..." Lilly said whilst she took something and pointed it at Clem.
What is that she's holding? It's to dark...
"I'm not afraid to pull the trigger." Lilly said.
"Well neither am i." Clem said.
"Hey Clem, is everything all rig-"
He was interupted by the loud sound, and the muzzle flash, as he was falling down to the ground.
Lilly didn't make any expression, she just stood there.
"What the... fu-... what have you do-?" Clementine stutterd.
Lilly looked back at Clem. "Clementine, is that yo-"
Clementine fired her weapon.
Lilly fell to the ground.
Everything went silent.
No one said a word.
They just stood there, shocked.
After a while, when everyone realised what happened, they ran over to the body.
Clementine could barely hear a thing of what everyone said.
"WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED?"
"Oh my god, oh no no no..."
"Stay with me god damnit!"
"I'm so, so sorry for bringing you all into this..."
Clementine didn't say a thing, she slowly went over to the body...
"NO!" Clementine screamed, in sadness, and anger.
"You'll make it, okay? Please, you can do it, just hold on!" Clementine said.
There was no response.
Kenny checked his pulse.
"He's... he's dead..." Kenny said.
Clementine went to Lilly.
"Clem, what are you doing?" Kenny said.
Lilly tried to move.
"Help..." Lilly struggled.
Clementine took her gun.
"Fu- fuck you." Clem cried whilst in anger.
She fired several shots into Lilly, though not the head.
Everyone stared at Clem.
She went over to the dead body.
She waited for a bit, and calmed down.
"I'm sorry..." Clem said.
She took the gun, and aimed it to his head.
"Goodbye, Charlie."
Continue
Side notes:
I'm really worried, as i did do a pretty massive plot twist so to speak, so anyone can just tell me to delete it and i'll do so.
Charlie went back? What i thought would work is that Ken, Pascucci, and Charlie all got back after Pascucci persuaded Charlie, by telling him that they were gonna plan it out with Clem and get Danielle.
How couldn't Lilly see it was Clem? It was real dark x3.
The reason Clementine gets brutal here is because she just lost someone she cared about, and she's had enough, so she sorta "snaps", though not necessarily into a bad person.
If anyone disagrees with anything, i can try to do something about it.
Well how will the group meet Jeremy? I thought that Clem and Co. could possibly be found sometime by some people at the town, after staying at someplace rather close to the town, or to save some of the people (one of them being Jeremy) as Danielle saw them about to become food, and she can't leave them, i don't know, just a few general ideas to toss out before somebody panicks with how fucked up my post was, and how it can't go anywhere from here, cause i think it's possible!
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Hope it's actually okay :P.
Oh my god you had me on the edge of my seat shitting my self. I was like "Oh my god Pascucci!" then when i saw "goodbye, Charlie" my face was like
:O
Thank ya
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Yeah, i was trying to sorta build it up to that very moment, in which i gotta admit i did an alright job at
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Exactly what i was thinking, that Clementine sort of learned it from Lee and the St John Days :P.
Its perfect. IMO Charlies story was complete. A story arc for pascucci would be nice now.
Good job!
Also, I sort of took Clementine shooting the shit out of Lily like Lee beating the shit out of Andy St John. Lee is punching him repeatedly for killing Mark and indirectly Larry. Clem is killing Lily for killing Charlie, but neither shoot them in the head, they leave them to reanimate, and I can imagine Clem saying to Kenny and Pasucci "Let's go...Let's go...." like Lee.
I was attached to jacob the most.... You know how that ended
I gotta admit I am really depressed now. But we gotta deal with it. I've had so many ideas for him as he was my most favorite Character in this story together with Jacob, who's going to die probably. Anyway: well done. Just a bit confusing because it isn't always clear who says what
Charlie is famous for having his beloved rifle
Guys what gun did Charlie have? Cause if I write next I want one of them to pick it up. If it's a rifle Pasucci is going to pick it up, but if it's a pistol I'm planning on Clem picking it up.
REALLY? Whew, what a relief, i was worried everyone was gonna hate it for, well, obvious reasons :P.
Thank you, i actually agree, there wasn't much more for Charlie now. His own character was sort of finished now and his actions has affected the group to. He had influenced Kenny into understanding that they aren't just kids, and can handle themselves, he helped Clementine in all sorts of ways, etc.
Though i have to say...
I'M SORRY @TheMissus
Whoever's next: I suggest that Clem becomes what Charlie was trying to teach her - being selfconfident, don't always trust strangers, not listening to grownups blindheaded and not being afraid. RIP, Charlie. Really, I am depressed.
This is a short one, but it sets the stage if you want.
Clem was so close to tears, but she looked at the walls of this community and back at Charlie.
"Shit...He wanted to kill the others in that community..." Pasucci said.
"Now he can't" Kenny said.
"Let's go...Let's go..." Clem said, sniffing.
"What?" Kenny asked.
"That's Crazy!" Pasucci said.
"It was his wish...to eliminate all of them assholes. We gotta do this for him. We've got to take them down. Just like Charlies wish" Clementine said.
Kenny and Pasucci store at each other, not sure what to make of the situation.
"She's right you know" Pasucci said.
Kenny looked at Pasucci, then at Clem.
"I know she is, we've got to do this for Charlie" Kenny said.
"For...Charlie" Clem said.
So Clem, Pasucci and Kenny are going to go attack, someone might die(your choice) but I think now is time for Jeremy. We know Kenny Clem and Pasucci can't take them all down, but with the help of Jeremy and the other locked up prisoners they may be able to take down the place.
I'm so sorry :C. I only saw your post after i posted it
By the way, if a text is like this, it means basically what Clementine is thinking.
If somebody says something, but it doesn't say who, it's basically the last person who said it, though in the instance of people screaming all over the place after Lilly shot Charlie, it's basically is just everyone who's saying a bunch of stuff but you don't know who.
Wrong thread sorry XD
Charlies arc was over. while i loved the guy i knew that sooner or later he had to die and he wasnt bringing anything new to the group.
We lost 2 major characters in 2 days. Dont make it 3. have one of them injured but not killed. some prisoners could die though. im going to wait 15 minutes and if nobody has posted i will go
It's funny though, cause what you said fit my post xD.
darnitben said originally: "Clems first swear!" or something similar
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That was a part of her process of growing up, in which i wanted to view in this horrible situation.
I agree I just said it's whoever post's next's choice.
Oh guys remember to make Tavia's fate ambiguous and have her run into the woods when nobody is looking. We need her alive for the 400 days stuff.
Um...read Lord_zasca's DLC to see the group with Jacob in it.
I fucked up and can't think of how to fix it, so I'll let someone else do it, I'll go later.
Sorry man go ahead!
I only did introductions, and began building Jeremys nerdy side, so your whatever your planning to do is still good. Probably.
I did. He got shot and Tyler is trying to save him, I know it
Well, that's your opinion
How does it make sense, Clem knowing about Charlie's wish to kill the New Crawford guys. It was never mentioned infront of her.
Agreed, besides, it just seems odd risking your life just because he wanted it, look i get it, it's "For Charlie", but still, it's just, weird.
So, Jeremy can suddenly talk? And Pascucci was outside the building peeking through the window. How could he come over so fast?
I didn't know he was still under drug use, I thought Kenny was outside the window I will fix it. Sorry it gets confusing sometimes.
Note: In the last three pages there were much too many continuity erros. I really don't want to appear like a smartass but I want to remind you to read all the posts very closely to avoid logical errors and to keep the story plausible. Thanks.
Ok then so I forgot Clem didn't know about Charlie wanting to kill the New Crawford guys. To fix this can we just say either Charlie said it in his final words or Kenny/Pasucci told her?
Make Kenny/Pascucci tell her, it just seems odd to have his final words be "Kill all of them" which basically means "Risk your life for me even though i'm about to die".
Do your thing, I fucked up with the cannon and don't know how to fix it.
Sorry for my part in that, with so many people writing it get's confusing.
We could do that, or Kenny and Pascucci could just tell her, whatever fits the story best.