Sorry guys i'm just not the best writer. I will delete this post. The only time I will participate is when either I write short posts or wait until this episode to end.
And again I am sorry.
"Oh my god! What happened?" yells Danielle while Melody runs into her bedroom getting the medical supplies. The gasping men drag Kenny into the cabin placing him on the floor next to the fireplace. Jeremy helps them to undress him while Pascucci tries to calm everybody down: "Everything's gonna be alright... it's gonna be fine... Hang on Kenny....". Kenny moans in pain: "It's nothing... I am ok... I am going to catch that bastard - that deer was mine...". Gus laughs: "Are you seriously crying after that deer? This actually sounds good, you are obviously not seriously injured!". Driveling from pain and rage Kenny keeps repeating himself: "...I swear... he's as good as dead..."
Clementine observed the scene: Jeremy's aunt was a nurse and taught him a lot, that's why he and Melody take care of Kenny. "He had a Guardian angel - the bullet hit his chest but missed EVERY vital organ, even the lungs." Jeremy remarked. They finally managed to get rid of the bullet and Kenny got sutured (Danielle desperately wanted to see it, but after a few seconds she had to run outside to vomit because of disgust). Eventually Kenny now sleeps thanks to the drugs Melody gave him.
Clementine tries to bear what just happened and is now very concerned. Someone was trying to kill one of us - is it still safe here? With an expression full of worry and a bad feeling in her belly she steps to the window to look outside, checking if somebody has followed them. Is the bandit still after us? Then suddenly she catches sight of a person putting something on the ground, leaving their piece of land, disappearing into the woods. All she could recognise was blond hair and an olivegreen coat. There is something large and brown coloured laying on the ground just a few yards next to the cars. What is it? Clementine tries to focus on it and a few wrinkles appear above her nose as she finally knows what it is. "Errr... guys... this isn't by chance the deer which you had shot down, is it?".
Scene swap:
I had to kill him - in fact he tried to kill the moustached man first, the one who is with the girl. She must be protected.
He is sitting in the treetops, observing the cabin when a bald black man and a skinny man dressed in weird colours finally step outside, dragging the deer into the little house. The unknown man smiles as his plan works. Have a nice meal.
SUPER-REPLY .
That'd sort of work, but i think we should all sorta chat about it. We can share ideas etc. and then say if we like it or not… more.
It should be ONE MASSIVE POST instead of a bunch of small little dialouges. People have different opinions, and yes, we are supposed to write our own posts and do almost anything we want, but for a final post we should all cooperate and discuss where we should go and who should write what as it IS one of the most important posts. If we don't, it'll probably go way off to Clem becoming a vampire or some shit, lol.
"Oh my god! What happened?" yells Danielle while Melody runs into her bedroom getting the medical supplies. The gasping men drag Kenny into th… moree cabin placing him on the floor next to the fireplace. Jeremy helps them to undress him while Pascucci tries to calm everybody down: "Everything's gonna be alright... it's gonna be fine... Hang on Kenny....". Kenny moans in pain: "It's nothing... I am ok... I am going to catch that bastard - that deer was mine...". Gus laughs: "Are you seriously crying after that deer? This actually sounds good, you are obviously not seriously injured!". Driveling from pain and rage Kenny keeps repeating himself: "...I swear... he's as good as dead..."
Clementine observed the scene: Jeremy's aunt was a nurse and taught him a lot, that's why he and Melody take care of Kenny. "He had a Guardian angel - the bullet hit his chest but missed EVERY vital organ, even the lungs." Jeremy remarked. They finally managed to get ri… [view original content]
A few hours before...
"Finally ready to get your hands dirty Gus?" says Kenny. "No, but i'm gonna have to". Pascucci says, "Fine, why don't… more you stay here and watch the truck while we go try to hunt some sort of meat. Haven't had something that good in a while." "You better bring back something good, I can't take those beans, and corn much longer." Says Gus. "Alright Gus, we'll be back before sunset. if we aren't somethings probably up." Kenny says. "Oh, and if you hear 2 shots in a row it's probably not a good sign. It will be our warning shot."
Hours later... "So how do you think things are going between Jeremy and Melody?" Pascucci says. "What do you mean?"- "Jeremy told me he was going to tell Melody about his feelings while we were gone. Says Pascucci. "Oh, well good luck for him...-HEY! Wait do you see that? it's a stinking deer." Says Kenny. "Alright i'll shoot." BAM! "Nice shot." says Pascucci. Lets grab and head back to the- What t… [view original content]
"Oh my god! What happened?" yells Danielle while Melody runs into her bedroom getting the medical supplies. The gasping men drag Kenny into th… moree cabin placing him on the floor next to the fireplace. Jeremy helps them to undress him while Pascucci tries to calm everybody down: "Everything's gonna be alright... it's gonna be fine... Hang on Kenny....". Kenny moans in pain: "It's nothing... I am ok... I am going to catch that bastard - that deer was mine...". Gus laughs: "Are you seriously crying after that deer? This actually sounds good, you are obviously not seriously injured!". Driveling from pain and rage Kenny keeps repeating himself: "...I swear... he's as good as dead..."
Clementine observed the scene: Jeremy's aunt was a nurse and taught him a lot, that's why he and Melody take care of Kenny. "He had a Guardian angel - the bullet hit his chest but missed EVERY vital organ, even the lungs." Jeremy remarked. They finally managed to get ri… [view original content]
I know I risk my comment to get lost but I say it anyways:
Just my opinion: This story arc sounds interesting but doesn't really support ou… morer rule of character developement as we now have WAY too many of them. We barely know Jeremy, Gus, Melody and Danielle and now we gotta deal with 3 other persons, not too mention how full the house is.
In all seriousness, I believe it was I who created the character. The story was stuck because someone added a lot of characters, something we don't want a lot of right now. I created him to get Clementine out of the situation, and I left the piece of cloth on the ground for her to find.
Granted, you were the one to expand on his character, giving him a few scenes and showing us some insight on his thoughts and experiences.
"Oh my god! What happened?" yells Danielle while Melody runs into her bedroom getting the medical supplies. The gasping men drag Kenny into th… moree cabin placing him on the floor next to the fireplace. Jeremy helps them to undress him while Pascucci tries to calm everybody down: "Everything's gonna be alright... it's gonna be fine... Hang on Kenny....". Kenny moans in pain: "It's nothing... I am ok... I am going to catch that bastard - that deer was mine...". Gus laughs: "Are you seriously crying after that deer? This actually sounds good, you are obviously not seriously injured!". Driveling from pain and rage Kenny keeps repeating himself: "...I swear... he's as good as dead..."
Clementine observed the scene: Jeremy's aunt was a nurse and taught him a lot, that's why he and Melody take care of Kenny. "He had a Guardian angel - the bullet hit his chest but missed EVERY vital organ, even the lungs." Jeremy remarked. They finally managed to get ri… [view original content]
I think I've got an amazing idea for continuing the story. I can't write right now though, I'm rather busy. ; (
On a side note, I have recently come up with the idea to try and improve my drawing skills by drawing even more stuff for this fan-fiction. I will create drawings for every episode, just like the episode slides in the actual games. I have already started on the one for the first episode, and more is sure to come when I'm finished.
EDIT: I'm also going to experiment with my posts a bit. For instance, I will try to find fitting music for certain scenes, and link them to you at the start of the scene. If people don't like the idea, I'll let it go, of course.
I think I've got an amazing idea for continuing the story. I can't write right now though, I'm rather busy. ; (
On a side note, I have rece… morently come up with the idea to try and improve my drawing skills by drawing even more stuff for this fan-fiction. I will create drawings for every episode, just like the episode slides in the actual games. I have already started on the one for the first episode, and more is sure to come when I'm finished.
EDIT: I'm also going to experiment with my posts a bit. For instance, I will try to find fitting music for certain scenes, and link them to you at the start of the scene. If people don't like the idea, I'll let it go, of course.
But... I MADE HIM YOU !%^$@$#^@#^$@$&*.
In all seriousness, I believe it was I who created the character. The story was stuck because s… moreomeone added a lot of characters, something we don't want a lot of right now. I created him to get Clementine out of the situation, and I left the piece of cloth on the ground for her to find.
Granted, you were the one to expand on his character, giving him a few scenes and showing us some insight on his thoughts and experiences.
So, let's just say we created him together. : )
The direction I want the story to go has to do with Kenny going after the bandits. So if anyone is going to write soon, please don't let them go after the bandits just yet.
Kenny needs to rest and recover, anyway. In the meantime we can focus on Clem's character developement, Jeremy/Melody/Gus-triangle and, of course, the unknown protector.
Edit: I just realized Melody hasn't spoken to Jeremy, yet because of the sudden incident with Kenny. Anybody?
The direction I want the story to go has to do with Kenny going after the bandits. So if anyone is going to write soon, please don't let them go after the bandits just yet.
Some Episode images would be real cool, i know how to photoshop so if that's necessary, i could do that. And who knows, maybe we can even go as far as to create a real launcher of some sorts with an engine such as CryEngine. With it, we can basically create our own menu of sorts just like the real Walking Dead game. We can create real 3D Episode Slides, then you can press "play" and you'll be taken then to the page with everything we have written for the Episode you specified. Not to brag or anything, but i have some experience in creating games, so creating just a menu wouldn't be so tough, creating Episode Slides would be really cool as well .
Who knows, maybe one day we can create a real game outta this. I know that'd be ULTRA COMPLEX etc. but if we get just a few people together it shouldn't be all THAT tough to create (would be actually). Voice acting on the other hand... shit, anyone who can do Clem's voice? x3.
Just my dreams, not what i think will happen nor that we should think about, would be real tough to do, just would be ultra cool to have a game and i just wanted to throw that out there.
Seriously though, i think i'm gonna ask some friends of mine if we could get together and do something like this, me and my friends are all wanting to develop games, and love The Walking Dead .
I think I've got an amazing idea for continuing the story. I can't write right now though, I'm rather busy. ; (
On a side note, I have rece… morently come up with the idea to try and improve my drawing skills by drawing even more stuff for this fan-fiction. I will create drawings for every episode, just like the episode slides in the actual games. I have already started on the one for the first episode, and more is sure to come when I'm finished.
EDIT: I'm also going to experiment with my posts a bit. For instance, I will try to find fitting music for certain scenes, and link them to you at the start of the scene. If people don't like the idea, I'll let it go, of course.
I think I've got an amazing idea for continuing the story. I can't write right now though, I'm rather busy. ; (
On a side note, I have rece… morently come up with the idea to try and improve my drawing skills by drawing even more stuff for this fan-fiction. I will create drawings for every episode, just like the episode slides in the actual games. I have already started on the one for the first episode, and more is sure to come when I'm finished.
EDIT: I'm also going to experiment with my posts a bit. For instance, I will try to find fitting music for certain scenes, and link them to you at the start of the scene. If people don't like the idea, I'll let it go, of course.
Some Episode images would be real cool, i know how to photoshop so if that's necessary, i could do that. And who knows, maybe we can even go a… mores far as to create a real launcher of some sorts with an engine such as CryEngine. With it, we can basically create our own menu of sorts just like the real Walking Dead game. We can create real 3D Episode Slides, then you can press "play" and you'll be taken then to the page with everything we have written for the Episode you specified. Not to brag or anything, but i have some experience in creating games, so creating just a menu wouldn't be so tough, creating Episode Slides would be really cool as well .
Who knows, maybe one day we can create a real game outta this. I know that'd be ULTRA COMPLEX etc. but if we get just a few people together it shouldn't be all THAT tough to create (would be actually). Voice acting on the other hand... shit, anyone who can do Clem's voice? x3.
Just my dreams, not wh… [view original content]
I'm still going to draw those episode slides, but if you want to create your own, that's fine too. Also I will post the slides as a reply at the start of every episode as well as in a newer post, just so they'll be noticed more.
Some Episode images would be real cool, i know how to photoshop so if that's necessary, i could do that. And who knows, maybe we can even go a… mores far as to create a real launcher of some sorts with an engine such as CryEngine. With it, we can basically create our own menu of sorts just like the real Walking Dead game. We can create real 3D Episode Slides, then you can press "play" and you'll be taken then to the page with everything we have written for the Episode you specified. Not to brag or anything, but i have some experience in creating games, so creating just a menu wouldn't be so tough, creating Episode Slides would be really cool as well .
Who knows, maybe one day we can create a real game outta this. I know that'd be ULTRA COMPLEX etc. but if we get just a few people together it shouldn't be all THAT tough to create (would be actually). Voice acting on the other hand... shit, anyone who can do Clem's voice? x3.
Just my dreams, not wh… [view original content]
I can contribute Illustrator skills, here's my deviantART account:
http://ilovemydog.deviantart.com
Your idea is awesome, a fan game would be a dream coming true!
You got some real skills, contribution appreciated .
Thanks man, i agree. A fan game would be so amazing, it's li-, like, a DOUBLE RAINBOW :O.
And @That_1_Guy go ahead and draw em'!
You got some real skills, contribution appreciated .
Thanks man, i agree. A fan game would be so amazing, it's li-, like, a DOUBLE RAINBOW :O.
And @That_1_Guy go ahead and draw em'!
Sorry guys i'm just not the best writer. I will delete this post. The only time I will participate is when either I write short posts or wait until this episode to end.
And again I am sorry.
It's all about progress. Little by little we become better writers with each page. The mistakes we've made before, and the success we have now, come together to forum a group fic 32 pages and growing, opening a path for new readers to join in. That's our fanfiction. That's our group fic. Our fic is the fic that will create better writers.
Kenny needs to rest and recover, anyway. In the meantime we can focus on Clem's character developement, Jeremy/Melody/Gus-triangle and, of cou… morerse, the unknown protector.
Edit: I just realized Melody hasn't spoken to Jeremy, yet because of the sudden incident with Kenny. Anybody?
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Don't stop, please.
Me neither. I was just trying to discuss if we're still going to try to stick to this leitmotif or not
"Oh my god! What happened?" yells Danielle while Melody runs into her bedroom getting the medical supplies. The gasping men drag Kenny into the cabin placing him on the floor next to the fireplace. Jeremy helps them to undress him while Pascucci tries to calm everybody down: "Everything's gonna be alright... it's gonna be fine... Hang on Kenny....". Kenny moans in pain: "It's nothing... I am ok... I am going to catch that bastard - that deer was mine...". Gus laughs: "Are you seriously crying after that deer? This actually sounds good, you are obviously not seriously injured!". Driveling from pain and rage Kenny keeps repeating himself: "...I swear... he's as good as dead..."
Clementine observed the scene: Jeremy's aunt was a nurse and taught him a lot, that's why he and Melody take care of Kenny. "He had a Guardian angel - the bullet hit his chest but missed EVERY vital organ, even the lungs." Jeremy remarked. They finally managed to get rid of the bullet and Kenny got sutured (Danielle desperately wanted to see it, but after a few seconds she had to run outside to vomit because of disgust). Eventually Kenny now sleeps thanks to the drugs Melody gave him.
Clementine tries to bear what just happened and is now very concerned. Someone was trying to kill one of us - is it still safe here? With an expression full of worry and a bad feeling in her belly she steps to the window to look outside, checking if somebody has followed them. Is the bandit still after us? Then suddenly she catches sight of a person putting something on the ground, leaving their piece of land, disappearing into the woods. All she could recognise was blond hair and an olivegreen coat. There is something large and brown coloured laying on the ground just a few yards next to the cars. What is it? Clementine tries to focus on it and a few wrinkles appear above her nose as she finally knows what it is. "Errr... guys... this isn't by chance the deer which you had shot down, is it?".
Scene swap:
I had to kill him - in fact he tried to kill the moustached man first, the one who is with the girl. She must be protected.
He is sitting in the treetops, observing the cabin when a bald black man and a skinny man dressed in weird colours finally step outside, dragging the deer into the little house. The unknown man smiles as his plan works.
Have a nice meal.
Please continue
EDIT: Made a few stylistic enhancements
You're right. I must say, I'm bursting witjh ideas already!
So he killed the bandits an got their deer, that's awesome.
Exactly
Radical !
This post fits in with your username.
Random.
Sorry, your post here is fine, it's just that i have no idea what just happened.
We are also trying to go for a more peaceful approach for this episode, until Episode 5.
Also, i find that somethings are a little out of character.
Damn, i love this "mysterious protector" of Clem
.
So you don't let newcomers in? I'll back away slowly then, enjoy your game.
I'm glad I made him.
Never said that, in fact we love newcomers to join, but as in every game there are certain rules which don't come from me - we've made them together
But... I MADE HIM YOU !%^$@$#^@#^$@$&;*.
In all seriousness, I believe it was I who created the character. The story was stuck because someone added a lot of characters, something we don't want a lot of right now. I created him to get Clementine out of the situation, and I left the piece of cloth on the ground for her to find.
Granted, you were the one to expand on his character, giving him a few scenes and showing us some insight on his thoughts and experiences.
So, let's just say we created him together. : )
Hey guys, just wanted to say that I changed the text. It is longer and more detailed now.
I think I've got an amazing idea for continuing the story. I can't write right now though, I'm rather busy. ; (
On a side note, I have recently come up with the idea to try and improve my drawing skills by drawing even more stuff for this fan-fiction. I will create drawings for every episode, just like the episode slides in the actual games. I have already started on the one for the first episode, and more is sure to come when I'm finished.
EDIT: I'm also going to experiment with my posts a bit. For instance, I will try to find fitting music for certain scenes, and link them to you at the start of the scene. If people don't like the idea, I'll let it go, of course.
In case some people don't want to wait for you: Which direction do you want the story to go? Btw. I like your idea with the drawings
HAHA, this whole thread is about building the story together. You did technically make him though. I expanded it.
Yep, we're all doing this together! (I'd better start to copyright my posts...)
The direction I want the story to go has to do with Kenny going after the bandits. So if anyone is going to write soon, please don't let them go after the bandits just yet.
Kenny needs to rest and recover, anyway. In the meantime we can focus on Clem's character developement, Jeremy/Melody/Gus-triangle and, of course, the unknown protector.
Edit: I just realized Melody hasn't spoken to Jeremy, yet because of the sudden incident with Kenny. Anybody?
Some Episode images would be real cool, i know how to photoshop so if that's necessary, i could do that. And who knows, maybe we can even go as far as to create a real launcher of some sorts with an engine such as CryEngine. With it, we can basically create our own menu of sorts just like the real Walking Dead game. We can create real 3D Episode Slides, then you can press "play" and you'll be taken then to the page with everything we have written for the Episode you specified. Not to brag or anything, but i have some experience in creating games, so creating just a menu wouldn't be so tough, creating Episode Slides would be really cool as well
.
Who knows, maybe one day we can create a real game outta this. I know that'd be ULTRA COMPLEX etc. but if we get just a few people together it shouldn't be all THAT tough to create (would be actually). Voice acting on the other hand... shit, anyone who can do Clem's voice? x3.
Just my dreams, not what i think will happen nor that we should think about, would be real tough to do, just would be ultra cool to have a game and i just wanted to throw that out there.
Seriously though, i think i'm gonna ask some friends of mine if we could get together and do something like this, me and my friends are all wanting to develop games, and love The Walking Dead
.
I actually had the same idea with music
.
I can contribute Illustrator skills, here's my deviantART account:
http://ilovemydog.deviantart.com
Your idea is awesome, a fan game would be a dream coming true!
I'm still going to draw those episode slides, but if you want to create your own, that's fine too. Also I will post the slides as a reply at the start of every episode as well as in a newer post, just so they'll be noticed more.
That's good. We're all on the same page! ; P
You got some real skills, contribution appreciated
.
Thanks man, i agree. A fan game would be so amazing, it's li-, like, a DOUBLE RAINBOW :O.
And @That_1_Guy go ahead and draw em'!
I'll do my best to get them done soon! (Here's my DeviantArt account: http://sporadicduck.deviantart.com/ )
Gonna follow you, pal
I'll follow you back! (I also gave you a Llama. : P)
Thanks for making me feel better guys. I guess my problem is i'm just not good at writing "Peacefully." I'm Just going to lay low for a while though.
I have been reading this fan fic and holy crap, you guys started from newbies to complete expert story-writers.
It's all about progress. Little by little we become better writers with each page. The mistakes we've made before, and the success we have now, come together to forum a group fic 32 pages and growing, opening a path for new readers to join in. That's our fanfiction. That's our group fic. Our fic is the fic that will create better writers.
Yeah that was my intention, I was trying to make it more dramatic by holding it off.
@TheMissus is eating popcorn and waiting for the story to go on
Indeed, indeed...
Got school
.
I've got a small amount of homework, I will write after that.
I won't really write a lot until things are about to happen, i have some great ideas for the "protector"
.