Continuing upon the end of S1(fan-fic)

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  • edited January 2014

    Clementine woke to the sound of rain hitting the windows. The storm seemed to have let down a little, and thunder no longer snapped from above. It was still dark though, but her eyes quickly adjusted. When she sat up from her small bed she noticed everyone was still sleeping, except the silent man (although he wasn't silent anymore) and Kenny seemed to be missing. When she looked the other way the silent man was sitting in a chair just looking straight at the door. Kenny was no where in sight. Must of gone to the bathroom. She thought.
    "Hey." She whispered to him.

    He slowly turned his head in her direction, and gave her a nod, but didn't say anything. She could see the small hint of a smile on his face though. His blond hair was messy, but somehow managed to look good anyway. His face was dirty but yet handsome. He wore what she last saw him in, and olive green coat, ripped, with a hood. Many weapons hung from his body, knives, and a bow, with a large quiver of arrows. He had two holsters but only one was filled with a gun.

    "Where's your other gun ?" She asked.

    "Lost it." Was his reply.

    "Who are you?"

    "You wouldn't know me."

    "I'd like to."

    He smiled again. "Thanks." He said

    "How come you didn't say anything when you gave me the medicine?"

    "I don't have many words."

    "Why have you been helping us?" It was the question that had been on Clem's mind since the man had shown up. What had caused him to take pity on them.

    "Because your group isn't bad a bunch, and you are a good person." He replied looking right at her.

    Clem smiled. "I don't know your name, and I don't want to call you the hooded man what is it?" She had been wondering this for awhile to.

    For a second he froze, his eyes hardened, and he took a long time to speak. "It's been so long since I've used a name..."

    (Continue)

    Note: I feel this is a little dialogue heavy but I'm gonna role with it. I really wanted to name him I really did but, I think some one else is better suited to go down the tunnels I've dug.

  • Me too. Kenny plays a big part in my opener

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    Just a question, is it okay that I made it so that Kenny lies about still being hurt? I desperately want Kenny out of the cabin-group because I have huge plans for him involving the Season-finale.

  • i really want him to say "Its timothy!"

    MegaMoto posted: »

    Clementine woke to the sound of rain hitting the windows. The storm seemed to have let down a little, and thunder no longer snapped from above

  • Maybe people aren't better suited to go down the tunnels I've dug...

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    i really want him to say "Its timothy!"

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    MegaMoto posted: »

    Maybe people aren't better suited to go down the tunnels I've dug...

  • You guys better don't plan too much, because you can never know where the story goes

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    Me too. Kenny plays a big part in my opener

  • Okay, contact me via Skype: williamnumpru

    @darnitben @TheMissus

    Lord_zasca posted: »

    i could get the actual Jacob, Pascucci and tyler for voices (Good freinds of mine)

  • Your not gonna like kill me if I give you my skype are you? Lol

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Okay, contact me via Skype: williamnumpru @darnitben @TheMissus

  • edited January 2014

    ''I barely remember it myself.'', the sudden realization sends a chill down his spine. He used to live a quiet life in a small apartment in Savannah. He had a job as a night-time security guard in the Marsh house, offering him a lot of silence and time alone. One day while working, he met a beautiful woman who was locked out of her room. He helped her and they got talking. The next day, they met up again. The two survived for a few months, up until... He shakes the thought out of his head.

    ''It's Bryan. My name is Bryan.'', Clementine looks at him with an innocent smile on her face. He hangs his head low when she asks a devastating question, ''Do you have any family?'', she looks at him with a hopeful look in her eyes. ''Well... I have you.'' Her face suddenly twists into a sad expression, ''I'm sorry.'' He finally looks at her with tears silently flowing from his eyes, ''It's okay.'' Clementine looks at the bathroom door, wondering why Kenny is taking so long. ''Do you think we should check on him?'', she says while getting up. ''He's not there.'', Bryan replies.

    (Play this for the rest of the post: )

    She looks at him with a confused look on her face, ''What do you mean?'' Bryan sighs before saying, ''He went out tonight. He left you a note and said I had to be the one to protect you.'' Clementine looks at the wooden table next to her. On it there's Kenny's box and a note attached to it. She slowly picks up the note and starts to read it.

    She gasps, ''Kenny...''

    (Scene switches to a black screen with the words:)

    -One hour earlier-

    (Scene switches to a shot of Kenny jogging through the woods)

    He looked at his map one more time. The last time he came here the bandit had come from up north. He gripped his hands tightly around his knife. His loaded gun sat tightly in its holster. The heavy rainfall had made the muddy ground of the forest extremely soggy, and Kenny had tripped because of this at least four times. If he wouldn't have been alone he could have gone a lot quicker, but the risk was too great. The bandit might have been killed by the hooded stranger, but the source of the problem was still there. While walking he started to question the reasons behind his decision to go alone. Did he want to protect the people he cared about, or was he simply losing his mind?

    His trip through the forest was beginning to feel like an eternity when he finally walked onto an open field. He looked in front of him and noticed what looked like a walled off settlement filled with trailers and other types of caravans. The lights were off but Kenny saw some guards walking on the walls.

    ''Let's see what these assholes have to offer.'', he whispered to himself before sneaking closer to the fortified walls of the settlement.

  • edited January 2014

    OH MY GOD!
    I JUST LOST AN ENTIRE POST DUE TO MY OWN STUPIDITY!

    EDIT: I rewrote it now. It seems a little more refined to me, but it was still extremely annoying.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    ''I barely remember it myself.'', the sudden realization sends a chill down his spine. He used to live a quiet life in a small apartment in Sa

  • edited January 2014

    Happened to me several times, actually. Take a deeeeeep breath and run in circles shouting. Trust me, it works ;)

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    OH MY GOD! I JUST LOST AN ENTIRE POST DUE TO MY OWN STUPIDITY! EDIT: I rewrote it now. It seems a little more refined to me, but it was still extremely annoying.

  • It did. Thank you!

    TheMissus posted: »

    Happened to me several times, actually. Take a deeeeeep breath and run in circles shouting. Trust me, it works

  • Question. Are people content with the name I chose for Clem's silent protector? I personally think it fits him very well.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    ''I barely remember it myself.'', the sudden realization sends a chill down his spine. He used to live a quiet life in a small apartment in Sa

  • edited January 2014

    I love it. Planning to draw a pic of Clem and Bryan today, btw

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    Question. Are people content with the name I chose for Clem's silent protector? I personally think it fits him very well.

  • edited January 2014

    Just for clarification:

    Kenny thinks that the one bandit who stole his deer and got killed by Brian is still alive so he goes after him and now bangs into the bandits settlement?

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    ''I barely remember it myself.'', the sudden realization sends a chill down his spine. He used to live a quiet life in a small apartment in Sa

  • edited January 2014

    Uhm... If you put it like that it does sound a bit... dumb. I think I'm going to change it.

    EDIT: I changed the last sentence. I am also going to clarify his reasons of going alone now, he might be going crazy. ; )

    TheMissus posted: »

    Just for clarification: Kenny thinks that the one bandit who stole his deer and got killed by Brian is still alive so he goes after him and now bangs into the bandits settlement?

  • Actually, haven't found it dumb since Bryan never told anybody that he killed the bandit off, I just wanted to be sure

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    Uhm... If you put it like that it does sound a bit... dumb. I think I'm going to change it. EDIT: I changed the last sentence. I am also going to clarify his reasons of going alone now, he might be going crazy. ; )

  • edited January 2014

    Not the name I would have chosen but like I said, it was a choice that someone else had to make.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    Question. Are people content with the name I chose for Clem's silent protector? I personally think it fits him very well.

  • I was just thinking about drawing him as well! I'll wait on you though. I would love to see your interpretation first.

    TheMissus posted: »

    I love it. Planning to draw a pic of Clem and Bryan today, btw

  • Ah man, my plan was that he'd meet Clem completely when the group gets overrun and that he comes and sorta "rescues" Clem, not like this :l.

    But, this is how the game is like, can't fight it.

    Clem, Jeremy, and Pascucci make their way back to the cabin. "Man, this thunderstorm is bad! We got back just in time" Pascucci says. "Hey Cle

  • edited January 2014

    Exactly, i planned a lot with the mysterious man at the ending, but instead he gets revealed rather quickly, and now my plans are, gone.

    TheMissus posted: »

    You guys better don't plan too much, because you can never know where the story goes

  • That would have actually been much more interesting to me as well.

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Ah man, my plan was that he'd meet Clem completely when the group gets overrun and that he comes and sorta "rescues" Clem, not like this :l. But, this is how the game is like, can't fight it.

  • Kenny losing his mind, i might be able to save my idea with Bryan! :D.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    Uhm... If you put it like that it does sound a bit... dumb. I think I'm going to change it. EDIT: I changed the last sentence. I am also going to clarify his reasons of going alone now, he might be going crazy. ; )

  • Yeah, for the story I have kind of planned out Kenny isn't the man he used to be. ; P

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Kenny losing his mind, i might be able to save my idea with Bryan! .

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  • WHO THE HELL ACTUALLY LIKED THIS!?

    Please, everyone reading this, flag it as spam so our thread isn't being slandered by this abomination.

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  • just ignore it and message @Darth Marsden

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    WHO THE HELL ACTUALLY LIKED THIS!? Please, everyone reading this, flag it as spam so our thread isn't being slandered by this abomination.

  • @AHouseDivided WHAT THE FUCK ! I... don't even.... WHAT ! Why would.... This is awful. This is down right disgusting.

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  • Just finished the Clem-Bryan pic, gonna Upload it as soon as the troll pics get removed

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    I was just thinking about drawing him as well! I'll wait on you though. I would love to see your interpretation first.

  • He actually wants you to say that, so please: everybody just ignore him

    MegaMoto posted: »

    @AHouseDivided WHAT THE FUCK ! I... don't even.... WHAT ! Why would.... This is awful. This is down right disgusting.

  • Good idea, I'm going to start my picture of Bryan now while this whole mess gets sorted out...

    TheMissus posted: »

    Just finished the Clem-Bryan pic, gonna Upload it as soon as the troll pics get removed

  • You are a psychotic fucking pedophile.

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  • Is the Clem Porn Trolls gone? Seriously... that was a reminder of how fucked up this world is :l.

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