Pascucci walks up and down the room, nervously sighing when Gus interupts his thinking process. "I know you miss him but the world is still spinning and we gotta go on. Let's forget about Kenny and make something useful...". Gus touches his belly, continuing: "We need some food...". Pascucci gives him an evil stare: "Great idea. You could do something for the group for once in your life, e.g. bringing something to eat instead of puffy words.". Gus clenches his fists and starts to yell: "Fuck you, Pascucci! I've been teaching the girls all the time...!". Before he could finish the sentence Pascucci laughs out loudly: "Jesus christ, give me a break! Ain't surviving with history lessons or algebra! Kenny, Jeremy and I have been the ones doing the hard stuff! Wake up and become a man!". Pascucci and Gus now stand infront of each other with their heads tightly packed and Melody intervenes. "Leave him alone, Pascucci! Gus has so many other qualities...". Then Gus turns around speaking to her: "...the fuck, Melody?! Are you saying I am not as good as the others? Seriously, don't butt into us, Ok, never asked you to - get off me!". She stares at him with her eyes widely opened, not believing what she just heard. Then her expression turns into absolute despite and she slaps his face. "Seems like I didn't know you well enough... Don't you dare talking to me like that!". Everybody stares at Gus and Melody, except of Bryan who's sitting in the armchair, listening to the argument. Clementine and Danielle paused their attempts in crafting and follow what is going to happen next. Eventually Gus grins at Melody and then looks at Pascucci scornfully, saying: "Fine... Alright - you know what? You can all suck my balls. I go.". He leaves the cabin without turning around. "Wait! He can't just go..." says a worried Danielle. "You're right. I am going to get him back." gasps Melody, feeling guilty. Pascucci holds her back: "Don't. Just let him. He'll return, that's sure as hell. Probably needs some time to think.". Jeremy says: "Ok, we haven't had anything to eat, yet. I am going to go fishing.". Melody sighs: "Good idea - I'll accompany you if you don't mind. I need a break from these four walls.". Jermy blushes: "Sure. Outside in 5 minutes, I'll go get the stuff...".
Pascucci is still very nervous. "Don't come after me." he wrote in his letter. He then looks at Clem and Danielle, who are kneeling on the floor trying to craft a selfmade boardgame and Bryan, who is looking through the window into the distance, as if he was expecting anything, as Pascucci finally speaks. "I go. Kenny is a moron and needs someone to wash his brain. You can take care of the kids, right?" he asks, looking at Bryan's weapons. Bryan replies sparing with words: "I will.". Pascucci starts to pack a bag when Bryan surprisingly goes on: "He doesn't want you to do it. You should stay.". Pascucci sighs. "He's my friend. If you had a friend you would do the same.". Jeremy stays silent and A minute later Pascucci closes the door behind him. Clem and Danielle continue crafting silently. After a few minutes Dani whispers: "He frightens me...". Clem looks at him: Bryan sits silently in the armchair, staring straight forward with an emotionless expression, holding his gun. Then she smiles at Danielle and replies whispering: "He doesn't look like it but he is a very good person, actually.". As if he heard what she just said Bryan releases a vague smile.
Please continue with either Jeremy, Pascucci or Kenny
Ah man, my plan was that he'd meet Clem completely when the group gets overrun and that he comes and sorta "rescues" Clem, not like this :l.
But, this is how the game is like, can't fight it.
This is FUCKING RADICAL. Good job ma.... (looks at user name, and comment to HSP) lady. I thought Bryan's hood would be more like an assassin's creed hood, but rather then that it's perfect, exactly as I imagined. He must of left his bow somewhere though...
... I know about the bow, but gotta admit I was too lazy and tired to add the bow. Gonna make a few enhancements tomorrow, e.g. the eyes are too big. Maybe I am going to add the bow, too.
This is FUCKING RADICAL. Good job ma.... (looks at user name, and comment to HSP) lady. I thought Bryan's hood would be more like an assassin'… mores creed hood, but rather then that it's perfect, exactly as I imagined. He must of left his bow somewhere though...
Pascucci walks up and down the room, nervously sighing when Gus interupts his thinking process. "I know you miss him but the world is still sp… moreinning and we gotta go on. Let's forget about Kenny and make something useful...". Gus touches his belly, continuing: "We need some food...". Pascucci gives him an evil stare: "Great idea. You could do something for the group for once in your life, e.g. bringing something to eat instead of puffy words.". Gus clenches his fists and starts to yell: "Fuck you, Pascucci! I've been teaching the girls all the time...!". Before he could finish the sentence Pascucci laughs out loudly: "Jesus christ, give me a break! Ain't surviving with history lessons or algebra! Kenny, Jeremy and I have been the ones doing the hard stuff! Wake up and become a man!". Pascucci and Gus now stand infront of each other with their heads tightly packed and Melody intervenes. "Leave him alone, Pascucci! Gus has so many other qualities...… [view original content]
Very good posts. just curious to when we will end the episode. i had to make adjustments to my orignal post (Due to people leaving) i ask kindly that no one else leaves and the episode ends with clementine, melody, daneille and Bryan (OR Timothy....Timothy....) left at the cabin with food stretched thin. not going to say anything about my post except this. 7 enter 2 leave
Very good posts. just curious to when we will end the episode. i had to make adjustments to my orignal post (Due to people leaving) i ask kind… morely that no one else leaves and the episode ends with clementine, melody, daneille and Bryan (OR Timothy....Timothy....) left at the cabin with food stretched thin. not going to say anything about my post except this. 7 enter 2 leave
No, seriously: Guys? We should stop plannimg too much for the future. This isn't the sense of this game, but making the best continuation to the previous post. If everything goes like "I will do/kill this/that anyway, no matter what" the game is irrelevant for me because I know everything could change not doing justice to the storyline so far. I find it even somewhat egoistic, sorry to call it like that. We shouldn't dictate someone what to do next. If someone isn't content with all we do the person can also make a fanfic by himself. We can of course build a rough frame for the episodes together, like we did before. I wouldn't even say how many posts to go until the end of this episode - we never planned it before because we always sensed the very perfect moment to end the episode. Don't get me wrong: I also have certain ideas but I learned to keep them in my mind and to plan only the very next post.
So, what do you think about it? I really love what we built together and I am interested in your thoughts
I have the feeling that all this planning is getting out of hand. This thread used to be about continuing upon the last post, which gave it a very interesting concept. While it's logical for people to have certain ideas about where they want the story to go, it is better not to plan too far ahead as that goes against the luck-based concept of this game.
That worries me too.
No, seriously: Guys? We should stop plannimg too much for the future. This isn't the sense of this game, but making th… moree best continuation to the previous post. If everything goes like "I will do/kill this/that anyway, no matter what" the game is irrelevant for me because I know everything could change not doing justice to the storyline so far. I find it even somewhat egoistic, sorry to call it like that. We shouldn't dictate someone what to do next. If someone isn't content with all we do the person can also make a fanfic by himself. We can of course build a rough frame for the episodes together, like we did before. I wouldn't even say how many posts to go until the end of this episode - we never planned it before because we always sensed the very perfect moment to end the episode. Don't get me wrong: I also have certain ideas but I learned to keep them in my mind and to plan only the very next post.
So, what do you thi… [view original content]
So... My attempt at drawing Bryan kind of failed. So I will start a new attempt later today. @TheMissus I was trying to base my version of off your's, but I couldn't make it work like I wanted it to...
So... My attempt at drawing Bryan kind of failed. So I will start a new attempt later today. @TheMissus I was trying to base my version of off your's, but I couldn't make it work like I wanted it to...
Very good posts. just curious to when we will end the episode. i had to make adjustments to my orignal post (Due to people leaving) i ask kind… morely that no one else leaves and the episode ends with clementine, melody, daneille and Bryan (OR Timothy....Timothy....) left at the cabin with food stretched thin. not going to say anything about my post except this. 7 enter 2 leave
Absolutely. I am glad You see it this way, too. No offense to you @Lord_zasca. I repsect you since you've been a great devoted contributor to this story. But I don't think it is fair to lead the story the way you want (I said "leading" because you even said "unless you kill everyone then my plan will still stay the same" which I interpret that you don't care what the collctive has written - you're going to change anything anyway no matter if it fits the story or not). For me Charlie was a character I really loved but it never occured to me to tell you to bring him back. The game has been about the luck-based concept so why don't we just keep it that way?
I think you're absolutely right.
I have the feeling that all this planning is getting out of hand. This thread used to be about continuing … moreupon the last post, which gave it a very interesting concept. While it's logical for people to have certain ideas about where they want the story to go, it is better not to plan too far ahead as that goes against the luck-based concept of this game.
Absolutely. I am glad You see it this way, too. No offense to you @Lord_zasca. I repsect you since you've been a great devoted contributor to … morethis story. But I don't think it is fair to lead the story the way you want (I said "leading" because you even said "unless you kill everyone then my plan will still stay the same" which I interpret that you don't care what the collctive has written - you're going to change anything anyway no matter if it fits the story or not). For me Charlie was a character I really loved but it never occured to me to tell you to bring him back. The game has been about the luck-based concept so why don't we just keep it that way?
This is actually the way I see it. I have a lot of ideas and I am hoping to contribute them at the right time, when it fits the storyline best. But I am never said if I gotta discard my idea due to story changes, because mostly you guys made another great twist so I don't mind
Well, for me it's not about planning ahead nor doing whatever i want even if it doesn't fit with the current story.
It's just sort of my ho… morepes that i get to do what i've been imagining in my head, but not that i no matter what will do it.
So, i'll only do it if it makes sense.
Whoever disliked this discussion: I really don't mind but I waould like to know WHY you disliked it. Everybody can share his opinion and I am openminded
This is actually the way I see it. I have a lot of ideas and I am hoping to contribute them at the right time, when it fits the storyline best… more. But I am never said if I gotta discard my idea due to story changes, because mostly you guys made another great twist so I don't mind
Whoever disliked this discussion: I really don't mind but I waould like to know WHY you disliked it. Everybody can share his opinion and I am openminded
If anyone reads this, I am baffled by the sudden change in behavior from AHouseDivided. He started out as a pretty nice guy but then he started to post all that... Crap.
That worries me too.
No, seriously: Guys? We should stop plannimg too much for the future. This isn't the sense of this game, but making th… moree best continuation to the previous post. If everything goes like "I will do/kill this/that anyway, no matter what" the game is irrelevant for me because I know everything could change not doing justice to the storyline so far. I find it even somewhat egoistic, sorry to call it like that. We shouldn't dictate someone what to do next. If someone isn't content with all we do the person can also make a fanfic by himself. We can of course build a rough frame for the episodes together, like we did before. I wouldn't even say how many posts to go until the end of this episode - we never planned it before because we always sensed the very perfect moment to end the episode. Don't get me wrong: I also have certain ideas but I learned to keep them in my mind and to plan only the very next post.
So, what do you thi… [view original content]
I think I have enough to add to @TheMissus comment about planning to make a new one. When Bryan was introduced I had so many plans, I was gonna do so many things with him. I did almost none of them. I was gonna have him been lost in the woods so long he forgot his name and he would be nameless. I was gonna make him a huge bad-ass (which kinda happened anyway), and many more. None of it happened though (except bad-ass a bit). So I decided then and there to not make plans it was pointless, and the story was more fun that way anyway. I don't know about you but that's what I'm thinking.
On a side note, my inspiration to make Bryan a bigger character then he seemed when @That_1_Guy introduced him was because I wanted to make a super cool blond guy, because there are tons of super cool blond guys in anime.
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Finished the Bryan and Clem pic. It's my interpretation so please, don't be mad if it differs from your imagination
Edit: made some enhancements
Damn bro
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I say bro to everyone, i guess i'm weird like that... :l.
Actually, I am a girl
Pascucci walks up and down the room, nervously sighing when Gus interupts his thinking process. "I know you miss him but the world is still spinning and we gotta go on. Let's forget about Kenny and make something useful...". Gus touches his belly, continuing: "We need some food...". Pascucci gives him an evil stare: "Great idea. You could do something for the group for once in your life, e.g. bringing something to eat instead of puffy words.". Gus clenches his fists and starts to yell: "Fuck you, Pascucci! I've been teaching the girls all the time...!". Before he could finish the sentence Pascucci laughs out loudly: "Jesus christ, give me a break! Ain't surviving with history lessons or algebra! Kenny, Jeremy and I have been the ones doing the hard stuff! Wake up and become a man!". Pascucci and Gus now stand infront of each other with their heads tightly packed and Melody intervenes. "Leave him alone, Pascucci! Gus has so many other qualities...". Then Gus turns around speaking to her: "...the fuck, Melody?! Are you saying I am not as good as the others? Seriously, don't butt into us, Ok, never asked you to - get off me!". She stares at him with her eyes widely opened, not believing what she just heard. Then her expression turns into absolute despite and she slaps his face. "Seems like I didn't know you well enough... Don't you dare talking to me like that!". Everybody stares at Gus and Melody, except of Bryan who's sitting in the armchair, listening to the argument. Clementine and Danielle paused their attempts in crafting and follow what is going to happen next. Eventually Gus grins at Melody and then looks at Pascucci scornfully, saying: "Fine... Alright - you know what? You can all suck my balls. I go.". He leaves the cabin without turning around. "Wait! He can't just go..." says a worried Danielle. "You're right. I am going to get him back." gasps Melody, feeling guilty. Pascucci holds her back: "Don't. Just let him. He'll return, that's sure as hell. Probably needs some time to think.". Jeremy says: "Ok, we haven't had anything to eat, yet. I am going to go fishing.". Melody sighs: "Good idea - I'll accompany you if you don't mind. I need a break from these four walls.". Jermy blushes: "Sure. Outside in 5 minutes, I'll go get the stuff...".
Pascucci is still very nervous. "Don't come after me." he wrote in his letter. He then looks at Clem and Danielle, who are kneeling on the floor trying to craft a selfmade boardgame and Bryan, who is looking through the window into the distance, as if he was expecting anything, as Pascucci finally speaks. "I go. Kenny is a moron and needs someone to wash his brain. You can take care of the kids, right?" he asks, looking at Bryan's weapons. Bryan replies sparing with words: "I will.". Pascucci starts to pack a bag when Bryan surprisingly goes on: "He doesn't want you to do it. You should stay.". Pascucci sighs. "He's my friend. If you had a friend you would do the same.". Jeremy stays silent and A minute later Pascucci closes the door behind him. Clem and Danielle continue crafting silently. After a few minutes Dani whispers: "He frightens me...". Clem looks at him: Bryan sits silently in the armchair, staring straight forward with an emotionless expression, holding his gun. Then she smiles at Danielle and replies whispering: "He doesn't look like it but he is a very good person, actually.". As if he heard what she just said Bryan releases a vague smile.
Please continue with either Jeremy, Pascucci or Kenny
oh, uhh.. sorry about that your idea sounds better.
This literally fits my imagination of him exactly
if your talking about the media (movie,tv show) i have no idea but here is the website where i got the gif from http://www.glitters20.com/category/funny/funny-gif/
Timothy!!!
This is FUCKING RADICAL. Good job ma.... (looks at user name, and comment to HSP) lady. I thought Bryan's hood would be more like an assassin's creed hood, but rather then that it's perfect, exactly as I imagined. He must of left his bow somewhere though...
... I know about the bow, but gotta admit I was too lazy and tired to add the bow. Gonna make a few enhancements tomorrow, e.g. the eyes are too big. Maybe I am going to add the bow, too.
Thanks for the compliments
Much like your artwork amazing, with only the nit pickiest of flaws.
Since I've been working on this story with you guys I wish english was my mother tongue
Thanks for the nice words, man, girl, toad, whatever
The correct answer was: TOAD
Nice! better than anything i could have done
Very good posts. just curious to when we will end the episode. i had to make adjustments to my orignal post (Due to people leaving) i ask kindly that no one else leaves and the episode ends with clementine, melody, daneille and Bryan (OR Timothy....Timothy....) left at the cabin with food stretched thin. not going to say anything about my post except this. 7 enter 2 leave
Well, spoilers for what my post is gonna be for the end of this Episode.
I have different plans x3.
? unless you kill everyone then my plan will be the same
You worry me...
Hail to the hypnotoad
That worries me too.
No, seriously: Guys? We should stop plannimg too much for the future. This isn't the sense of this game, but making the best continuation to the previous post. If everything goes like "I will do/kill this/that anyway, no matter what" the game is irrelevant for me because I know everything could change not doing justice to the storyline so far. I find it even somewhat egoistic, sorry to call it like that. We shouldn't dictate someone what to do next. If someone isn't content with all we do the person can also make a fanfic by himself. We can of course build a rough frame for the episodes together, like we did before. I wouldn't even say how many posts to go until the end of this episode - we never planned it before because we always sensed the very perfect moment to end the episode. Don't get me wrong: I also have certain ideas but I learned to keep them in my mind and to plan only the very next post.
So, what do you think about it? I really love what we built together and I am interested in your thoughts
Can someone post a summary of what has happened so far? I'm interested in joining in but I have no idea what is going on...
I think you're absolutely right.
I have the feeling that all this planning is getting out of hand. This thread used to be about continuing upon the last post, which gave it a very interesting concept. While it's logical for people to have certain ideas about where they want the story to go, it is better not to plan too far ahead as that goes against the luck-based concept of this game.
There is a very good summary made by @TheMissus a few pages back. Stuff has happened in between though.
So... My attempt at drawing Bryan kind of failed. So I will start a new attempt later today. @TheMissus I was trying to base my version of off your's, but I couldn't make it work like I wanted it to...
Page 26, read every comment from there on, please
Oh I am sorry to hear that, was so curious about it
Which original post are you refering to?
It's no big deal, I will just try again!
Absolutely. I am glad You see it this way, too. No offense to you @Lord_zasca. I repsect you since you've been a great devoted contributor to this story. But I don't think it is fair to lead the story the way you want (I said "leading" because you even said "unless you kill everyone then my plan will still stay the same" which I interpret that you don't care what the collctive has written - you're going to change anything anyway no matter if it fits the story or not). For me Charlie was a character I really loved but it never occured to me to tell you to bring him back. The game has been about the luck-based concept so why don't we just keep it that way?
Well, for me it's not about planning ahead nor doing whatever i want even if it doesn't fit with the current story.
It's just sort of my hopes that i get to do what i've been imagining in my head, but not that i no matter what will do it.
So, i'll only do it if it makes sense.
This is actually the way I see it. I have a lot of ideas and I am hoping to contribute them at the right time, when it fits the storyline best. But I am never said if I gotta discard my idea due to story changes, because mostly you guys made another great twist so I don't mind
Whoever disliked this discussion: I really don't mind but I waould like to know WHY you disliked it. Everybody can share his opinion and I am openminded
Yeah, better to give actual feedback then to just dislike, this entire thread has been filled with people just disliking.
If anyone reads this, I am baffled by the sudden change in behavior from AHouseDivided. He started out as a pretty nice guy but then he started to post all that... Crap.
Do you think his account was hacked or something?
EDIT: I guess we figured that one out.
Okay, I've got the bare-bones pose set up now. Time to flesh him out!
I agree, this is about going with the flow.
Great, wanna see it
I think I have enough to add to @TheMissus comment about planning to make a new one. When Bryan was introduced I had so many plans, I was gonna do so many things with him. I did almost none of them. I was gonna have him been lost in the woods so long he forgot his name and he would be nameless. I was gonna make him a huge bad-ass (which kinda happened anyway), and many more. None of it happened though (except bad-ass a bit). So I decided then and there to not make plans it was pointless, and the story was more fun that way anyway. I don't know about you but that's what I'm thinking.
On a side note, my inspiration to make Bryan a bigger character then he seemed when @That_1_Guy introduced him was because I wanted to make a super cool blond guy, because there are tons of super cool blond guys in anime.
This sentence pretty much sums up the essence of this thread