he was good! he even emailed my boss a rude letter after i told her about the hacker. he was laughed so hard when he saw it because he was convinced it was me! this is an expert we are talking about and if i didnt have tyler i would have lost everything
My sarcasm sense is tingling!
In all seriousness, I do agree with @TheMissus . The story is quite... unbelievable. But I think Zasca deserves a chance to redeem himself.
It really doesn't matter! You're post made me feel all warm and fuzzy! Besides we already solved it by saying Bryan was previously lying, which added to his mysterious character.
Clementine wipes away a tear from her cheek. Her signature hat leaves a grim shadow on her hardened face. The group quietly continues eating t… moreheir meals before Danielle starts talking. ''You talked to me about Hannah once before. You said you traveled together, and you even told me about how you met. Does that mean...'' Bryan stares into the fire. His face has twisted into a deep frown. ''I know what I told you.'', he says before standing up. ''I lied to you. I just arrived, and I didn't know if I could fully trust this group. I'm sorry.'' ''You don't have to apologize. For all you knew we could have been bandits, cannibals or worse.'', Jeremy comforts him, ''We're all just trying to survive.''
''I'm glad I've told you the true story. Everyone should get some rest, we've still got a long road ahead of us.''
-SCENE SWAP-
Clementine is holding his hand again. The warmth of her little hand gives him a feeling of strength and a will to carry… [view original content]
As they come to a river Danielle stops walking until Bryan and Clem reach her. "What are you talking about?". Both Clem and Bryan don't reply.… more "Alright... I'll leave you alone." and she runs forward and grabs Jeremy's hand. First he looks very surprised though he doesn't dismiss her and keeps holding her hand. As soon as Clem feels unheard she asks Bryan: "You said she was tied to a pole... so you came back and ... what then?". Bryan swallows. "She was gone... no chains, no signs of violence or fights... It was like she just disappeared.". Clems swallows as well, and then she speaks: "I'd never do that... returning and checking on him...". "You mean her. Clem lowers her head: "No, I meant Lee, not Hannah.". She kicks a stone, trying to prevent the tears from flowing. Bryan feels stupid and doesn't say anything until Clementine continues. "He made me handcuff him to a radiator, so he wouldn't hurt me. I'll never forget his awful look, the yellowis… [view original content]
The group slowly makes there way away from from the river. Clementines hand in Bryan's, and Danielle's in Jeremy's. Clementine looks up to Bryan, "Do you think that we will find Kenny, or Pascucci?" Bryan glances back down. When there eyes suddenly meet. "Remember hold that hope, you can't ever give up on finding somebody, I never have." Clementine smiles and the group continues walking.
2 hours had passed before anybody even said a word. Then Clementine says quietly, "This is the smallest our group has been since Lee die- never mind." They begin traveling through the woods, when they come across something. Danielle begins to cry, along with Clementine. Jeremy drops to his knees, and Bryan stands still. "Pascucci!
1 hour earlier... "So when in the hell do you plan we get out of this blind?" Asks a worried Pascucci. "Well it looks like the Zork's have begun to die down. I suppose if we stay stealthy and quiet, we could try to sneak back to the base." Says Frank. "Alright, let's do it!" The two stay sneaky the whole way back to the base when they are confronted by an angry Steve.
"Where the hell is there heads? You know I keep the heads Frank!" Frank now speaks angry, "Look, while you were here sitting on your ass! We were out there trying to kill those two suckers, and my new friend here got shot! So why don't you stop your wining, and help him get some stitches." Steve gives Frank the dirtiest look. "So he's your friend now? Huh, bitch!" Steve shoots Pascucci in the chest, and walks away. Pascucci drops to his knees, and with his last ounce of breath says to Frank, "F-Find Kenny" Frank looks back at Steve, when Steve yells "Get your ass over here right now bitch! He's dead, get over it. I need your help." Frank pulls his gun out of his pocket and aims his gun at Steve. He has a wide open shot at Steve, but he decided not to shoot him. "I'd be just as bad as him if I did that." Frank mumbles to himself as he leaves the base and heads off on his own.
Present time... "What- what happened to Pascucci?" Asks a worried Danielle. "He's one of them now...." Says Brian as he pierces one of his arrows through the ghost of Pascucci. Danielle stops crying, "This is all Kenny's fault." Clementine quickly barks back, "How the hell is this Kenny's fault? I miss Pascucci as much as you, but don't go off playing the blame game!" Danielle stops, look Clementine right in the eyes and starts yelling, "If Kenny hadn't have left, Pascucci wouldn't have gone and looked for him! It's always Kenny's fault! He causes pain for everyone! If he hadn't left, Melody would still be alive! So would Gus!" Clementine looks up at Danielle, "Yeah, you caused the death of things too, I mean, if you hadn't gone outside yourself, your arm would still be there wouldn't it?"
Sorry about not continuing off of the stranger flashback, I just didn't feel comfortable doing it, I thought someone else would be better at doing that.
Guys, I have a question. What if after this season ends, (Before season 2 begins) we have a 400-days like scenario. We could go back to Charlie, before he met up with our group. And show how he had to fight his brother, and the bad group, etc.And we could do plenty of other things like that?
We can have some origins of all these characters, maybe even bring in some cameos from that other "Interactive TWD Fanfic" ;P.
You know what would be interesting, maybe even have some sort of complete Nostalgia Episode where we go back to the 3 months between Episode 1 and 2 of Season 1 of the real game?
Guys, I have a question. What if after this season ends, (Before season 2 begins) we have a 400-days like scenario. We could go back to Charl… moreie, before he met up with our group. And show how he had to fight his brother, and the bad group, etc.And we could do plenty of other things like that?
Yeah those both sound like good ideas, it could play out like this.
400 Days like thingy
Part 1: Charlie's back story.
Part 2: New buddy, Mark.
Part 3: Jeremy, and Dave back story. (suggestion)
Part 4: Bryan back story. (suggestion, and it could be more detailed then the way he told it)
Part 5: How Kenny survived. (suggestion)
More suggestions.... Pascucci back story, Danielle back story, Gus back story, how the 400 days characters met each other after there stories (example: how Vince survived from day 3-399)
Note: I would have abbreviated all of the back stories, but... BS...
We can have some origins of all these characters, maybe even bring in some cameos from that other "Interactive TWD Fanfic" ;P.
You know wha… moret would be interesting, maybe even have some sort of complete Nostalgia Episode where we go back to the 3 months between Episode 1 and 2 of Season 1 of the real game?
Guess, I can remove my part with Clementine feeling gloomy and remembering the Marsh House as it was out of place starting with the Clem/Stranger backstory now that they are all excited because of walker Pascucci(?)
The group slowly makes there way away from from the river. Clementines hand in Bryan's, and Danielle's in Jeremy's. Clementine looks up to Bry… morean, "Do you think that we will find Kenny, or Pascucci?" Bryan glances back down. When there eyes suddenly meet. "Remember hold that hope, you can't ever give up on finding somebody, I never have." Clementine smiles and the group continues walking.
2 hours had passed before anybody even said a word. Then Clementine says quietly, "This is the smallest our group has been since Lee die- never mind." They begin traveling through the woods, when they come across something. Danielle begins to cry, along with Clementine. Jeremy drops to his knees, and Bryan stands still. "Pascucci!
1 hour earlier... "So when in the hell do you plan we get out of this blind?" Asks a worried Pascucci. "Well it looks like the Zork's have begun to die down. I suppose if we stay stealthy and quiet, we could try to sneak back to … [view original content]
No, no please don't remove it. I just didn't feel comfortable doing that, i guess i will delete my post and put it back up when somebody continues off of your post. I'm sorry, i didn't mean to mess that part up, I was looking forward to that.
Guess, I can remove my part with Clementine feeling gloomy and remembering the Marsh House as it was out of place starting with the Clem/Stranger backstory now that they are all excited because of walker Pascucci(?)
No, please don't delete it, I am afraid it could get lost as your text was very good.
I didn't intend to offend you, I was just a bit worried that we've missed an opportunity for this side story, as the story will change from calm into turbulent. The next logical step would be Clem and Danielle argueing and Clementine revealing her secret about Danielle and the cause of the fire in the cabin.
Going back to sleep now, we'll see in the morning
Edit: Whoever wants to make the Stranger flashback can post it in a reply on my post instead of making a new comment so it's above your part of the story. No need to delete anything. If nobody makes his story than be it.
No, no please don't remove it. I just didn't feel comfortable doing that, i guess i will delete my post and put it back up when somebody continues off of your post. I'm sorry, i didn't mean to mess that part up, I was looking forward to that.
No, please don't delete it, I am afraid it could get lost as your text was very good.
I didn't intend to offend you, I was just a bit worrie… mored that we've missed an opportunity for this side story, as the story will change from calm into turbulent. The next logical step would be Clem and Danielle argueing and Clementine revealing her secret about Danielle and the cause of the fire in the cabin.
Going back to sleep now, we'll see in the morning
Edit: Whoever wants to make the Stranger flashback can post it in a reply on my post instead of making a new comment so it's above your part of the story. No need to delete anything. If nobody makes his story than be it.
I fucking wrote way more then what I posted about Bryan. I didn't want to get out of hand though. I'd love to write more in the future, it was really fun.
Yeah those both sound like good ideas, it could play out like this.
* 400 Days like thingy
* Part 1: Charlie's back story.
* Part 2: Ne… morew buddy, Mark.
* Part 3: Jeremy, and Dave back story. (suggestion)
* Part 4: Bryan back story. (suggestion, and it could be more detailed then the way he told it)
* Part 5: How Kenny survived. (suggestion)
More suggestions.... Pascucci back story, Danielle back story, Gus back story, how the 400 days characters met each other after there stories (example: how Vince survived from day 3-399)
Note: I would have abbreviated all of the back stories, but... BS...
I fucking wrote way more then what I posted about Bryan. I didn't want to get out of hand though. I'd love to write more in the future, it was really fun.
That would be the most emotional moment in our story so far! Although I'm not sure it's the best thing to do, as I kind of treat our story as sort of an interactive novel. And that 400 Days flashback thingy would never happen in one of those.
I'm not saying we shouldn't do it, just that I have some doubts.
Good morning. One question: does anybody want to do the stranger flashback at all? Please tell me, because if not I think it's best to remove that part out of my post due to continuity. I feel like it was a mistake making too great demands on you with the flashback. In the future I'll end my posts with a simple Continue from here instead of making concrete demands.
im still catching up! also im in a bit of a pickle on my PS3. i bought TWAU season pass and i cant download it (it says that i bought it) so im occupied with that
Good morning. One question: does anybody want to do the stranger flashback at all? Please tell me, because if not I think it's best to remove … morethat part out of my post due to continuity. I feel like it was a mistake making too great demands on you with the flashback. In the future I'll end my posts with a simple Continue from here instead of making concrete demands.
Good morning. One question: does anybody want to do the stranger flashback at all? Please tell me, because if not I think it's best to remove … morethat part out of my post due to continuity. I feel like it was a mistake making too great demands on you with the flashback. In the future I'll end my posts with a simple Continue from here instead of making concrete demands.
Good morning. One question: does anybody want to do the stranger flashback at all? Please tell me, because if not I think it's best to remove … morethat part out of my post due to continuity. I feel like it was a mistake making too great demands on you with the flashback. In the future I'll end my posts with a simple Continue from here instead of making concrete demands.
''At least I didn't nearly kill everyone!'' Danielle gets up of off her knees and stands next to Pascucci's lifeless body. Her eyes are red and drenched in tears, just like her angry-looking face. She points her finger at Clementine. ''It's all your fault!'' Clementine just stares at her, she tries to speak, but she starts breathing uncontrollably instead. As Danielle continues with her rant the world around her becomes blurry. Time seems to slow down when Danielle makes a sudden move. She forms a fist and moves it to Clementine's face. The little girl collapses, blood spilling from her nose. As her head hits the hard, dirt-covered ground everything goes black.
''I don't care if she caused the fire! We are not leaving her behind!'' As Clementine's eyes slowly open Jeremy's sorrowful face is the first thing to greet her. Bryan is screaming at Danielle, whose only hand is bleeding heavily. ''She's awake!'' Bryan immediately rushes over to Clementine and pushes Jeremy away. ''Are you alright? Oh god... I'm so glad you're back.'', he turns to Danielle, ''Take a good look at what you've done. You punched an innocent little girl!'' Clementine gags as she tastes some blood running down her mouth. Jeremy picks up a rag, ''We have to stop the bleeding.'' ''The settlement is just over this hill, if we go now they can help us with both their injuries.'' Bryan picks Clementine up and carries her up the hill. When he finally reaches the top he lays her down and takes a deep breath before picking her back up. Aside from a few new campers, the settlement looks just like it did the last time he was here. Guards are patrolling the walls with heavy guns in their hands.
''I can walk...'', Clementine says when Bryan carefully starts to move down the other side of the hill. ''I know, but this is a lot faster, honey.''
''At least I didn't nearly kill everyone!'' Danielle gets up of off her knees and stands next to Pascucci's lifeless body. Her eyes are red an… mored drenched in tears, just like her angry-looking face. She points her finger at Clementine. ''It's all your fault!'' Clementine just stares at her, she tries to speak, but she starts breathing uncontrollably instead. As Danielle continues with her rant the world around her becomes blurry. Time seems to slow down when Danielle makes a sudden move. She forms a fist and moves it to Clementine's face. The little girl collapses, blood spilling from her nose. As her head hits the hard, dirt-covered ground everything goes black.
''I don't care if she caused the fire! We are not leaving her behind!'' As Clementine's eyes slowly open Jeremy's sorrowful face is the first thing to greet her. Bryan is screaming at Danielle, whose only hand is bleeding heavily. ''She's awake!'' Bryan immediately rushes over to Clemen… [view original content]
And also, WHAT THE FUCK? Just because he would be "as bad as him" (and if i might add, he wouldn't), he doesn't kill him after killing Pascucci? Are you shitting me?
I mean, what happens is just odd, like an example, Steve kills Pas but not Frank, which is the most risky thing anyone can do, what stops Frank from killing Steven? Oh yeah, right, his own stupidity...
Also, i felt like the writing was sorta mixed, it was basically like "BOOM He's dead, walker form gets killed by Bryan, THE END."
The group slowly makes there way away from from the river. Clementines hand in Bryan's, and Danielle's in Jeremy's. Clementine looks up to Bry… morean, "Do you think that we will find Kenny, or Pascucci?" Bryan glances back down. When there eyes suddenly meet. "Remember hold that hope, you can't ever give up on finding somebody, I never have." Clementine smiles and the group continues walking.
2 hours had passed before anybody even said a word. Then Clementine says quietly, "This is the smallest our group has been since Lee die- never mind." They begin traveling through the woods, when they come across something. Danielle begins to cry, along with Clementine. Jeremy drops to his knees, and Bryan stands still. "Pascucci!
1 hour earlier... "So when in the hell do you plan we get out of this blind?" Asks a worried Pascucci. "Well it looks like the Zork's have begun to die down. I suppose if we stay stealthy and quiet, we could try to sneak back to … [view original content]
''At least I didn't nearly kill everyone!'' Danielle gets up of off her knees and stands next to Pascucci's lifeless body. Her eyes are red an… mored drenched in tears, just like her angry-looking face. She points her finger at Clementine. ''It's all your fault!'' Clementine just stares at her, she tries to speak, but she starts breathing uncontrollably instead. As Danielle continues with her rant the world around her becomes blurry. Time seems to slow down when Danielle makes a sudden move. She forms a fist and moves it to Clementine's face. The little girl collapses, blood spilling from her nose. As her head hits the hard, dirt-covered ground everything goes black.
''I don't care if she caused the fire! We are not leaving her behind!'' As Clementine's eyes slowly open Jeremy's sorrowful face is the first thing to greet her. Bryan is screaming at Danielle, whose only hand is bleeding heavily. ''She's awake!'' Bryan immediately rushes over to Clemen… [view original content]
I felt like it was a bit forced here.
And also, WHAT THE FUCK? Just because he would be "as bad as him" (and if i might add, he wouldn't), … morehe doesn't kill him after killing Pascucci? Are you shitting me?
I mean, what happens is just odd, like an example, Steve kills Pas but not Frank, which is the most risky thing anyone can do, what stops Frank from killing Steven? Oh yeah, right, his own stupidity...
Also, i felt like the writing was sorta mixed, it was basically like "BOOM He's dead, walker form gets killed by Bryan, THE END."
No, this is coming from a person who made a death that made sense, and brought up something that no one else, including YOU, did not think of. You're not a fan of suicide? To bad, this IS The Walking Dead, no fuck it, that is how the world is, end of story.
So, please, stop going around everywhere complaining about her death, she died, you're sad, so is everyone else, except that YOU are walking around telling me to go fuck off because of it.
No, this is coming from a person who made a death that made sense, and brought up something that no one else, including YOU, did not think of.… more You're not a fan of suicide? To bad, this IS The Walking Dead, no fuck it, that is how the world is, end of story.
So, please, stop going around everywhere complaining about her death, she died, you're sad, so is everyone else, except that YOU are walking around telling me to go fuck off because of it.
Sounded like you were hostile, though you sorta were on the post itself.
Anyways, it would've been dumb if it was somewhat obvious that Mel was gonna commit suicide. I think personally that what i wrote should be enough to notice that she's, basically not alright, though i did write so of course it's gonna be obvious to me. The "no build up" thing was intentional for the element of surprise.
Clem didn't go on an "acid trip", she simply day dreamed, considering she was very depressed, she dreamed about hope.
Also, why did you change your reply from:
I didn't tell you fuck off. Relax, man. To me anyway it didn't make sense, Melody and given no prior inclination to having thoughts of suicide. Sure most people with depression don't tell anyone. But there was no build up, Clem went on a weird acid trip, and when she woke Melody was dead. I'm sorry if you don't like my critique of your work, if you don't agree with it fine. Sorry.
To:
I'm sorry, I said something rude about a post I didn't agree with, and I wish to avoid further argument.
Sounded like you were hostile, though you sorta were on the post itself.
Anyways, it would've been dumb if it was somewhat obvious that Mel… more was gonna commit suicide. I think personally that what i wrote should be enough to notice that she's, basically not alright, though i did write so of course it's gonna be obvious to me. The "no build up" thing was intentional for the element of surprise.
Clem didn't go on an "acid trip", she simply day dreamed, considering she was very depressed, she dreamed about hope.
Also, why did you change your reply from:
I didn't tell you fuck off. Relax, man. To me anyway it didn't make sense, Melody and given no prior inclination to having thoughts of suicide. Sure most people with depression don't tell anyone. But there was no build up, Clem went on a weird acid trip, and when she woke Melody was dead. I'm sorry if you don't like my critique of your work, if you don't agree with it fine. Sorry.
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Thanks. il be on and off this thread because im trying to clear his mess and catch up on the awesome writng!
he was good! he even emailed my boss a rude letter after i told her about the hacker. he was laughed so hard when he saw it because he was convinced it was me! this is an expert we are talking about and if i didnt have tyler i would have lost everything
It really doesn't matter! You're post made me feel all warm and fuzzy! Besides we already solved it by saying Bryan was previously lying, which added to his mysterious character.
Damn, would've been cool to see if she would still be alive and we could possibly even meet her etc.
Ah well, still good, i like how he has this goal of killing her, or the walker form of her.
Just sayin', but Clem calls them Walkers xP.
It'll be awesome with a Stranger flashback
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The group slowly makes there way away from from the river. Clementines hand in Bryan's, and Danielle's in Jeremy's. Clementine looks up to Bryan, "Do you think that we will find Kenny, or Pascucci?" Bryan glances back down. When there eyes suddenly meet. "Remember hold that hope, you can't ever give up on finding somebody, I never have." Clementine smiles and the group continues walking.
2 hours had passed before anybody even said a word. Then Clementine says quietly, "This is the smallest our group has been since Lee die- never mind." They begin traveling through the woods, when they come across something. Danielle begins to cry, along with Clementine. Jeremy drops to his knees, and Bryan stands still. "Pascucci!
1 hour earlier... "So when in the hell do you plan we get out of this blind?" Asks a worried Pascucci. "Well it looks like the Zork's have begun to die down. I suppose if we stay stealthy and quiet, we could try to sneak back to the base." Says Frank. "Alright, let's do it!" The two stay sneaky the whole way back to the base when they are confronted by an angry Steve.
"Where the hell is there heads? You know I keep the heads Frank!" Frank now speaks angry, "Look, while you were here sitting on your ass! We were out there trying to kill those two suckers, and my new friend here got shot! So why don't you stop your wining, and help him get some stitches." Steve gives Frank the dirtiest look. "So he's your friend now? Huh, bitch!" Steve shoots Pascucci in the chest, and walks away. Pascucci drops to his knees, and with his last ounce of breath says to Frank, "F-Find Kenny" Frank looks back at Steve, when Steve yells "Get your ass over here right now bitch! He's dead, get over it. I need your help." Frank pulls his gun out of his pocket and aims his gun at Steve. He has a wide open shot at Steve, but he decided not to shoot him. "I'd be just as bad as him if I did that." Frank mumbles to himself as he leaves the base and heads off on his own.
Present time... "What- what happened to Pascucci?" Asks a worried Danielle. "He's one of them now...." Says Brian as he pierces one of his arrows through the ghost of Pascucci. Danielle stops crying, "This is all Kenny's fault." Clementine quickly barks back, "How the hell is this Kenny's fault? I miss Pascucci as much as you, but don't go off playing the blame game!" Danielle stops, look Clementine right in the eyes and starts yelling, "If Kenny hadn't have left, Pascucci wouldn't have gone and looked for him! It's always Kenny's fault! He causes pain for everyone! If he hadn't left, Melody would still be alive! So would Gus!" Clementine looks up at Danielle, "Yeah, you caused the death of things too, I mean, if you hadn't gone outside yourself, your arm would still be there wouldn't it?"
Guys, I have a question. What if after this season ends, (Before season 2 begins) we have a 400-days like scenario. We could go back to Charlie, before he met up with our group. And show how he had to fight his brother, and the bad group, etc.And we could do plenty of other things like that?
We can have some origins of all these characters, maybe even bring in some cameos from that other "Interactive TWD Fanfic" ;P.
You know what would be interesting, maybe even have some sort of complete Nostalgia Episode where we go back to the 3 months between Episode 1 and 2 of Season 1 of the real game?
Yeah those both sound like good ideas, it could play out like this.
More suggestions.... Pascucci back story, Danielle back story, Gus back story, how the 400 days characters met each other after there stories (example: how Vince survived from day 3-399)
Note: I would have abbreviated all of the back stories, but... BS...
I thought it' be cool if Clem takes on his formulation.
Guess, I can remove my part with Clementine feeling gloomy and remembering the Marsh House as it was out of place starting with the Clem/Stranger backstory now that they are all excited because of walker Pascucci(?)
No, no please don't remove it. I just didn't feel comfortable doing that, i guess i will delete my post and put it back up when somebody continues off of your post. I'm sorry, i didn't mean to mess that part up, I was looking forward to that.
No, please don't delete it, I am afraid it could get lost as your text was very good.
I didn't intend to offend you, I was just a bit worried that we've missed an opportunity for this side story, as the story will change from calm into turbulent. The next logical step would be Clem and Danielle argueing and Clementine revealing her secret about Danielle and the cause of the fire in the cabin.
Going back to sleep now, we'll see in the morning
Edit: Whoever wants to make the Stranger flashback can post it in a reply on my post instead of making a new comment so it's above your part of the story. No need to delete anything. If nobody makes his story than be it.
You didn't offend me, I just didn't want to ruin that opportunity for the stranger flashback. I apologize for not continuing from your post.
I fucking wrote way more then what I posted about Bryan. I didn't want to get out of hand though. I'd love to write more in the future, it was really fun.
I was thinking if we did that, it could pick up right at the safe zone, and show how he found his wife, etc.
That would be the most emotional moment in our story so far! Although I'm not sure it's the best thing to do, as I kind of treat our story as sort of an interactive novel. And that 400 Days flashback thingy would never happen in one of those.
I'm not saying we shouldn't do it, just that I have some doubts.
Good morning. One question: does anybody want to do the stranger flashback at all? Please tell me, because if not I think it's best to remove that part out of my post due to continuity. I feel like it was a mistake making too great demands on you with the flashback. In the future I'll end my posts with a simple Continue from here instead of making concrete demands.
im still catching up! also im in a bit of a pickle on my PS3. i bought TWAU season pass and i cant download it (it says that i bought it) so im occupied with that
Yeah, I'm not sure it's smart to 'force' people into writing a certain thing. You can, however, always suggest people to do so.
I like it, though i don't have time currently (yup, school).
Alright, again you're absolutely right and I am sorry. Didn't mean to force anybody. I am going edit my post.
You don't have to apologize, I have asked people to continue with a certain character lots of times. It's no big deal. : )
''At least I didn't nearly kill everyone!'' Danielle gets up of off her knees and stands next to Pascucci's lifeless body. Her eyes are red and drenched in tears, just like her angry-looking face. She points her finger at Clementine. ''It's all your fault!'' Clementine just stares at her, she tries to speak, but she starts breathing uncontrollably instead. As Danielle continues with her rant the world around her becomes blurry. Time seems to slow down when Danielle makes a sudden move. She forms a fist and moves it to Clementine's face. The little girl collapses, blood spilling from her nose. As her head hits the hard, dirt-covered ground everything goes black.
''I don't care if she caused the fire! We are not leaving her behind!'' As Clementine's eyes slowly open Jeremy's sorrowful face is the first thing to greet her. Bryan is screaming at Danielle, whose only hand is bleeding heavily. ''She's awake!'' Bryan immediately rushes over to Clementine and pushes Jeremy away. ''Are you alright? Oh god... I'm so glad you're back.'', he turns to Danielle, ''Take a good look at what you've done. You punched an innocent little girl!'' Clementine gags as she tastes some blood running down her mouth. Jeremy picks up a rag, ''We have to stop the bleeding.'' ''The settlement is just over this hill, if we go now they can help us with both their injuries.'' Bryan picks Clementine up and carries her up the hill. When he finally reaches the top he lays her down and takes a deep breath before picking her back up. Aside from a few new campers, the settlement looks just like it did the last time he was here. Guards are patrolling the walls with heavy guns in their hands.
''I can walk...'', Clementine says when Bryan carefully starts to move down the other side of the hill. ''I know, but this is a lot faster, honey.''
So... Is Bryan taking Clem to the settlement? Or back to the group?
It's the settlement. The rest of the group, Danielle and Jeremy, are following them.
EDIT: I just cleared it up, the last sentence has been changed.
Wait, is this the same settlement Kenny is at?
I felt like it was a bit forced here.
And also, WHAT THE FUCK? Just because he would be "as bad as him" (and if i might add, he wouldn't), he doesn't kill him after killing Pascucci? Are you shitting me?
I mean, what happens is just odd, like an example, Steve kills Pas but not Frank, which is the most risky thing anyone can do, what stops Frank from killing Steven? Oh yeah, right, his own stupidity...
Also, i felt like the writing was sorta mixed, it was basically like "BOOM He's dead, walker form gets killed by Bryan, THE END."
I. Want. To. Punch. Danielle.
I want to hit her with a car
I'm sorry, I said something rude about a post I didn't agree with, and I wish to avoid further argument.
I want to either glass her or salt lick her.
I want to hit her with a car, then punch her, then glass her, and finish it off with a good ol' salt licking.
No, this is coming from a person who made a death that made sense, and brought up something that no one else, including YOU, did not think of. You're not a fan of suicide? To bad, this IS The Walking Dead, no fuck it, that is how the world is, end of story.
So, please, stop going around everywhere complaining about her death, she died, you're sad, so is everyone else, except that YOU are walking around telling me to go fuck off because of it.
I'm sorry, I said something rude about a post I didn't agree with, and I wish to avoid further argument.
Sounded like you were hostile, though you sorta were on the post itself.
Anyways, it would've been dumb if it was somewhat obvious that Mel was gonna commit suicide. I think personally that what i wrote should be enough to notice that she's, basically not alright, though i did write so of course it's gonna be obvious to me. The "no build up" thing was intentional for the element of surprise.
Clem didn't go on an "acid trip", she simply day dreamed, considering she was very depressed, she dreamed about hope.
Also, why did you change your reply from:
To:
Look, I'm sorry. I don't want to argue anymore.
As much as I hate Danielle got to admit, I love her character.
Yeah.
You know what? The next post, a zombified version of The Hulk will come and do everything you just stated!