No problem. I'm just glad to see people enjoy it. And it's only going to get better from here, I hope.
Are you thinking of including some interaction between Gryff and Rodrik ?
Ah, that would be telling but I do wish to include as many show / book / game characters as I can, where I can. And I did outright have Rodrik mention in Part 3, that Gryff and Ser Harys are in the area. As Ludd says in Episode 2, "When my son Gryff returns from Harrenhal..." So far as I'm concerned, Gryff, Harys and Torrhen are currently in Roose Bolton's army, preparing to attack Harrenhal along with the rest of Robb Stark's army. So I think it's a fair assumption they're going to cross paths, sooner or later.
Thank YOU for writing this fanfiction DillonDex Yep, between a rock and a hard place it is ! Hard to choose between those two, especially i… moref we take in mind Mira's canonical determinant state: this could very much indeed be the last time Rodrik sees his sister. Are you thinking of including some interaction between Gryff and Rodrik ? Perhaps explore Rodrik "waving his prick around the Whitehills" ?
Thank YOU for writing this fanfiction DillonDex Yep, between a rock and a hard place it is ! Hard to choose between those two, especially i… moref we take in mind Mira's canonical determinant state: this could very much indeed be the last time Rodrik sees his sister. Are you thinking of including some interaction between Gryff and Rodrik ? Perhaps explore Rodrik "waving his prick around the Whitehills" ?
Rodrik "waving his prick around the Whitehills"
Godamnit... I get what you were referencing but you just made me imagine Rodrik literally waving his prick around like a 12 year old. XD
Rodrik "waving his prick around the Whitehills"
Godamnit... I get what you were referencing but you just made me imagine Rodrik literally waving his prick around like a 12 year old. XD
Man, you made me lol at 1:30 am with my family sleeping. What has been seen cannot be unseen !
EDIT: The 27th was my Bday, the 28th is your Telltale birthday. Happy late/early bday to us both !
I LOVE THE STORY! Great job writing and fleshing out the Forresters! I love the voice things you've done too. I was just wondering when did Rodrik say the "we ten years old again laughing about how serious father was....," in the series? It was in the next time voice thing. Can't wait for the next installment!
I LOVE THE STORY! Great job writing and fleshing out the Forresters!
Thank you very much, it really does mean a lot.
I love the voice things you've done too. I was just wondering when did Rodrik say the "we ten years old again laughing about how serious father was....,"
They're a gimmick, but a pretty cool one I think! I hope to do more of them eventually. And that line from Rodrik (which I love) is actually one of the many deleted lines I've found when pouring through the game files. So it never actually happens in the series.
It was meant to occur in Episode 4, when Rodrik talks with Elaena in the Ironwood Grove, and they discuss life when they were children.
I LOVE THE STORY! Great job writing and fleshing out the Forresters! I love the voice things you've done too. I was just wondering when did … moreRodrik say the "we ten years old again laughing about how serious father was....," in the series? It was in the next time voice thing. Can't wait for the next installment!
I was so happy to read about Naomi! You did well, she's exactly how I imagined.
I think Asher would do the right thing, as he doesn't see… morem the type to leave people behind. So I picked wait.
Next choice I picked accept drink because as much as Rodrik may not like it he and Gryff are currently brothers in arms.
Well I'm happy to hear that! I did try my best to make sure she lived up to your great descriptions.
I think Asher would do the right… more thing, as he doesn't seem the type to leave people behind. So I picked wait.
Fair enough, but I reckon the fact that she's your character impacted your decision-making
Next choice I picked accept drink because as much as Rodrik may not like it he and Gryff are currently brothers in arms.
Fair enough once again, I can't wait to see where the odds fall in the next few days on that one.
wow, It's awesome that you build my Submitted character in it:) I hope you will give him another appearance soon, it was really hard to write all that haha
I really like what you are writing there. I will show it to some friends of mine, who are really into things like that
keep up the good work
Don't worry, all the submitted characters will get the spotlight eventually. It's just a matter of finding the right time and story for them. Haytham is now among the Forrester soldiers at Harrenhal, so he'll have a lot more interaction, moving forward.
I really like what you are writing there. I will show it to some friends of mine, who are really into things like that keep up the good work
wow, It's awesome that you build my Submitted character in it:) I hope you will give him another appearance soon, it was really hard to writ… moree all that haha
I really like what you are writing there. I will show it to some friends of mine, who are really into things like that
keep up the good work
Such good writing man, don't underestimate yourself mate ! Choices are very well done and the consequences feel like our choices matter (maybe because THEY DO !). Keep up the outstanding writing, can't wait for the rest
Such good writing man, don't underestimate yourself mate ! Choices are very well done and the consequences feel like our choices matter (maybe because THEY DO !). Keep up the outstanding writing, can't wait for the rest
I hope you will give him another appearance soon
Don't worry, all the submitted characters will get the spotlight eventually. It's … morejust a matter of finding the right time and story for them. Haytham is now among the Forrester soldiers at Harrenhal, so he'll have a lot more interaction, moving forward.
I really like what you are writing there. I will show it to some friends of mine, who are really into things like that keep up the good work
Thank you, I appreciate it! And will do!
I lit up at the first choice, I've been a proud Asher/Beskha shipper for a while, I had to pick kiss. I know it won't last but even it it's only for five seconds I have to pick it. ^_^
I picked Rickard because he seems to have the most chemistry with Rodrik.
And while I don't ship them, per se, I figured a moment such as this must have happened between them at some point. And I thought I'd let the polls decide how it goes down.
And I'm eager to see who wins out in the end with Rodrik's choice.
Got my fingers crossed that Naomi survived!
Remember the ancient rule... no character is dead, until you see their body!
Another great part!
I lit up at the first choice, I've been a proud Asher/Beskha shipper for a while, I had to pick kiss. I know it won't… more last but even it it's only for five seconds I have to pick it. ^_^
I picked Rickard because he seems to have the most chemistry with Rodrik.
Got my fingers crossed that Naomi survived!
Heyyaaa, Again I really liked it
Can you tell me now who of them three Characters is/was your favourite?
Also I have a question about the last choice. This "Revenge" I didn't quite understood what kind of revenge that is,
Some brawling or are they going to kill them?
Heyyaaa, Again I really liked it Can you tell me now who of them three Characters is/was your favourite?
Thank you. and yes, I did send you a private message about it. Just check on your feed, it should be there!
Also I have a question about the last choice. This "Revenge" I didn't quite understood what kind of revenge that is, Some brawling or are they going to kill them?
I'm not going to say it's a gamble everyone will have to either accept or refuse.
Heyyaaa, Again I really liked it
Can you tell me now who of them three Characters is/was your favourite?
Also I have a question about th… moree last choice. This "Revenge" I didn't quite understood what kind of revenge that is,
Some brawling or are they going to kill them?
Loving the Story! Glad to see Axel found a way into the story! You wrote him exactly how i thought it up and he made quite an impact as well. I am curious to see how he gets what is coming to him!
Loving the Story! Glad to see Axel found a way into the story! You wrote him exactly how i thought it up and he made quite an impact as well. I am curious to see how he gets what is coming to him!
I really liked this one! I loved the battle against the Dothraki. You may recall that I found Rodrik's story a bit boring before? Well I'm super into it now.
For the first choice I chose for Asher and Beskha to go their own way. I prefer them on their own as I've always seen them as Asher and Beskha vs the world. Doing whatever the fuck they want regardless of consequence. Plus both of them hate being told what to do.
I picked revenge for Rodrik, as he's the always fight back type. I'm hoping that he doesn't kill anyone though.
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No problem.
I'm just glad to see people enjoy it. And it's only going to get better from here, I hope.
Ah, that would be telling
but I do wish to include as many show / book / game characters as I can, where I can. And I did outright have Rodrik mention in Part 3, that Gryff and Ser Harys are in the area. As Ludd says in Episode 2, "When my son Gryff returns from Harrenhal..." So far as I'm concerned, Gryff, Harys and Torrhen are currently in Roose Bolton's army, preparing to attack Harrenhal along with the rest of Robb Stark's army. So I think it's a fair assumption they're going to cross paths, sooner or later. 
Godamnit... I get what you were referencing but you just made me imagine Rodrik literally waving his prick around like a 12 year old. XD
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Man, you made me lol at 1:30 am with my family sleeping. What has been seen cannot be unseen !
EDIT: The 27th was my Bday, the 28th is your Telltale birthday. Happy late/early bday to us both !
These days shall always shall always be remembered!
I LOVE THE STORY! Great job writing and fleshing out the Forresters! I love the voice things you've done too. I was just wondering when did Rodrik say the "we ten years old again laughing about how serious father was....," in the series? It was in the next time voice thing. Can't wait for the next installment!
Thank you very much, it really does mean a lot.
They're a gimmick, but a pretty cool one I think! I hope to do more of them eventually. And that line from Rodrik (which I love) is actually one of the many deleted lines I've found when pouring through the game files. So it never actually happens in the series.
It was meant to occur in Episode 4, when Rodrik talks with Elaena in the Ironwood Grove, and they discuss life when they were children.
Aaaandddddd Part 4 is up
Edit: Aaaandddddd Part 5 is too.
I was so happy to read about Naomi! You did well, she's exactly how I imagined.
I think Asher would do the right thing, as he doesn't seem the type to leave people behind. So I picked wait.
Next choice I picked accept drink because as much as Rodrik may not like it he and Gryff are currently brothers in arms.
Well I'm happy to hear that! I did try my best to make sure she lived up to your great descriptions.
Fair enough, but I reckon the fact that she's your character impacted your decision-making
Fair enough once again, I can't wait to see where the odds fall in the next few days on that one.
I have no doubt that it had an impact
I unashamedly snorted at Rodrik calling Gryff a 'goblin fuck'. Literally, I lost it. Keep up the awesome work, @DillonDex.
wow, It's awesome that you build my Submitted character in it:) I hope you will give him another appearance soon, it was really hard to write all that haha
I really like what you are writing there. I will show it to some friends of mine, who are really into things like that
keep up the good work
Don't worry, all the submitted characters will get the spotlight eventually.
It's just a matter of finding the right time and story for them. Haytham is now among the Forrester soldiers at Harrenhal, so he'll have a lot more interaction, moving forward.
Thank you, I appreciate it! And will do!
Is Croft going to appear in this story?
Such good writing man, don't underestimate yourself mate ! Choices are very well done and the consequences feel like our choices matter (maybe because THEY DO !). Keep up the outstanding writing, can't wait for the rest
Two-Eye'd-Croft? (For now) with the Second Sons?
Yes.
I have plans for him.
Thank you! I'm glad you think so
I mean hope it is, I can never bring myself to read my writing back.
And I am trying to make the choices as different as possible. And I have even bigger ones planned for the future... Thank you for your comment.
Keep it up, I'm liking it more with each line I read.
You've done an amazing job so far.
Well, I'm getting a lot of positive feedback; it's very motivational, thank you!
Awesome! I love that guy.
I kinda didn't get where Haytham is with the soldiers in Harrenhal o.o
Maybe I just overread it lol
Wow and I thought it was just me who loved Croft ^_^
Another great part!
I lit up at the first choice, I've been a proud Asher/Beskha shipper for a while, I had to pick kiss. I know it won't last but even it it's only for five seconds I have to pick it. ^_^
I picked Rickard because he seems to have the most chemistry with Rodrik.
Got my fingers crossed that Naomi survived!
Thank you.
as always, it is appreciated.
And while I don't ship them, per se, I figured a moment such as this must have happened between them at some point. And I thought I'd let the polls decide how it goes down.
And I'm eager to see who wins out in the end with Rodrik's choice.
Remember the ancient rule... no character is dead, until you see their body!
it's awesome how you write down the fights.
Good job !
I bet I know who you voted for on Rodrik's choice!
Hahaha it's kinda obvious
Who do you want to see on Rodrik's site ?
These lips are sealed
I must remain neutral!
That's a pity :c
Will you tell me, when you release Part 6?
Holy crap, I didn't see Rodrik's choice coming. IMO, all of them would fit the role but you know there can only be one
Eh, they didn't know each other much at the time, which means they easily could have fooled around before strengthening their frat bond
Well they aren't related by blood so there's nothing wrong with us judgey.
Seems like I did a good job at writing Haytham
Aaaaandddddd Part 6 is up... right on my two-year anniversary on the website, too.
Heyyaaa, Again I really liked it
Can you tell me now who of them three Characters is/was your favourite?
Also I have a question about the last choice. This "Revenge" I didn't quite understood what kind of revenge that is,
Some brawling or are they going to kill them?
Thank you.
and yes, I did send you a private message about it. Just check on your feed, it should be there!
I'm not going to say
it's a gamble everyone will have to either accept or refuse.
Loving the Story! Glad to see Axel found a way into the story! You wrote him exactly how i thought it up and he made quite an impact as well. I am curious to see how he gets what is coming to him!
Thank you very much!
I'm glad to hear Axel lived up to your expectations. I did try to make him as faithful to your descriptions as possible!
He will be playing a big role, going forward.
I really liked this one! I loved the battle against the Dothraki. You may recall that I found Rodrik's story a bit boring before? Well I'm super into it now.
For the first choice I chose for Asher and Beskha to go their own way. I prefer them on their own as I've always seen them as Asher and Beskha vs the world. Doing whatever the fuck they want regardless of consequence. Plus both of them hate being told what to do.
I picked revenge for Rodrik, as he's the always fight back type. I'm hoping that he doesn't kill anyone though.