Act 1: Gateway Dream - Chapter 2: A Peaceful House - Part 2.
Jerry Stewart - Harvest Hills, San Antonio.
Jerry didn’t need to think lo… moreng about it. “No, I’ve got enough problems as is. I don’t need another reason for them to hate me. Will you scam now?” Jerry answered, a cold and somewhat sarcastic tone carried in his voice. Stan frowned and gave a cold look. “Please--” Stan asked finally asked. “No. Now scam, kid.” Jerry gave a cold look while forcing Stan’s foot out of the door then closing it.
Inside his home he let out a sigh and walked into his living room, he looked out the sliding glass doors and at his swimming pool. He wanted a drink. Jerry walked into the kitchen and pulled out a shot glass, sitting on the counter, soon pulling out a bottle of whiskey and pouring it into the glass. Before he could do more someone started knocking on the door again.
Jerry left the bottle of whiskey and glass at the counter as he approached… [view original content]
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
This chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die first?
What's a theme you would like to see?
Those are the questions I would love to be answered. I don't know why, but the fact that they all start with "W" is fucking for my mind. o.o
Act 1: Gateway Dream - Chapter 2: A Peaceful House - Part 2.
Jerry Stewart - Harvest Hills, San Antonio.
Jerry didn’t need to think lo… moreng about it. “No, I’ve got enough problems as is. I don’t need another reason for them to hate me. Will you scam now?” Jerry answered, a cold and somewhat sarcastic tone carried in his voice. Stan frowned and gave a cold look. “Please--” Stan asked finally asked. “No. Now scam, kid.” Jerry gave a cold look while forcing Stan’s foot out of the door then closing it.
Inside his home he let out a sigh and walked into his living room, he looked out the sliding glass doors and at his swimming pool. He wanted a drink. Jerry walked into the kitchen and pulled out a shot glass, sitting on the counter, soon pulling out a bottle of whiskey and pouring it into the glass. Before he could do more someone started knocking on the door again.
Jerry left the bottle of whiskey and glass at the counter as he approached… [view original content]
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
T… morehis chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die… [view original content]
Who's character development are you most interested in?/Who is your favorite character so far?
I really am interested in Jerry's character and development, it's a normal guy in some trouble because he did something bad...and now he's losing it a little bit. Interested to see where it will go.
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Well, maybe another location will be introduced >:3
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
If Jerry does something that puts people in danger again, he may be forced to leave.
What's a location you would like to see?
Something like a travelling caravan...a group that never stays in one place, but always manages to stay alive in good spirits. Idk :P
Who do you want to die first?
It's up to you >:D
What's a theme you would like to see?
Hopelessness. Not everything goes the way you want it to.
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
T… morehis chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die… [view original content]
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
T… morehis chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die… [view original content]
Act 1: Gateway Dream - Chapter 2: A Peaceful House - Part 2.
Jerry Stewart - Harvest Hills, San Antonio.
Jerry didn’t need to think lo… moreng about it. “No, I’ve got enough problems as is. I don’t need another reason for them to hate me. Will you scam now?” Jerry answered, a cold and somewhat sarcastic tone carried in his voice. Stan frowned and gave a cold look. “Please--” Stan asked finally asked. “No. Now scam, kid.” Jerry gave a cold look while forcing Stan’s foot out of the door then closing it.
Inside his home he let out a sigh and walked into his living room, he looked out the sliding glass doors and at his swimming pool. He wanted a drink. Jerry walked into the kitchen and pulled out a shot glass, sitting on the counter, soon pulling out a bottle of whiskey and pouring it into the glass. Before he could do more someone started knocking on the door again.
Jerry left the bottle of whiskey and glass at the counter as he approached… [view original content]
The hell is wrong with everyone choosing the last option? Y'all want them walkers to get in?
[Go to Dean for help.]
Getting everyone m… moreight take too long, doing it herself could lead to her death and not doing anything is very likely something very, very bad.
Oh so many... Stan, Josie, Dean, Atlanta, they're all awesome
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Jerry by far. An asshole and a selfish coward with little to no redeeming qualities, who is also a danger to everyone around him. He just pisses me off with every selfish action he makes.
Who's character development are you most interested in?
I could see Stan having a pretty interesting development
Who do you think will die first?
Sadly, not Jerry. I could totally see Dean or Anthony or Josie getting killed. God, hopefully not Josie...
Where do you think the plot is going?
It's not going to be any brighter. It'll probably get worse and I can totally see the community fall pretty soon
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Death. I can see so much death. And walkers getting into the community after Josie did nothing for some odd reason.
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
Hopefully Jerry after the rest finally realized that he is a selfish waste of space with anger issues
What's a location you would like to see?
I was always fond of malls in a zombie apocalypse, for some odd reason
Who do you want to die first?
Take a lucky guess Little hint: It starts with Jer and ends with ry. By the way, if you put these two syllables together, the word douchebag magically appears.
What's a theme you would like to see?
Hope... I always like it when things get brighter before they get inevitably worse again.
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
T… morehis chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die… [view original content]
Who is your favorite character so far?
Oh so many... Stan, Josie, Dean, Atlanta, they're all awesome
Who is your least favorite charac… moreter so far?
Jerry by far. An asshole and a selfish coward with little to no redeeming qualities, who is also a danger to everyone around him. He just pisses me off with every selfish action he makes.
Who's character development are you most interested in?
I could see Stan having a pretty interesting development
Who do you think will die first?
Sadly, not Jerry. I could totally see Dean or Anthony or Josie getting killed. God, hopefully not Josie...
Where do you think the plot is going?
It's not going to be any brighter. It'll probably get worse and I can totally see the community fall pretty soon
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Death. I can see so much death. And walkers getting into the community after Josie did nothing for some odd reason.
Who do you think … [view original content]
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
T… morehis chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die… [view original content]
Act 1: Gateway Dream - Chapter 2: A Peaceful House - Part 2.
Jerry Stewart - Harvest Hills, San Antonio.
Jerry didn’t need to think lo… moreng about it. “No, I’ve got enough problems as is. I don’t need another reason for them to hate me. Will you scam now?” Jerry answered, a cold and somewhat sarcastic tone carried in his voice. Stan frowned and gave a cold look. “Please--” Stan asked finally asked. “No. Now scam, kid.” Jerry gave a cold look while forcing Stan’s foot out of the door then closing it.
Inside his home he let out a sigh and walked into his living room, he looked out the sliding glass doors and at his swimming pool. He wanted a drink. Jerry walked into the kitchen and pulled out a shot glass, sitting on the counter, soon pulling out a bottle of whiskey and pouring it into the glass. Before he could do more someone started knocking on the door again.
Jerry left the bottle of whiskey and glass at the counter as he approached… [view original content]
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
T… morehis chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die… [view original content]
I want to keep you all updated on the story, so, I'm going leave the voting open until sometime tonight, then I will began working on the next part and it will be posted sometime tomorrow.
I want to keep you all updated on the story, so, I'm going leave the voting open until sometime tonight, then I will began working on the ne… morext part and it will be posted sometime tomorrow.
Oh, and tease something in this chapter.
Hehehe >:3
Act 1: Gateway Dream - Chapter 2: A Peaceful House - Part 2.
Jerry Stewart - Harvest Hills, San Antonio.
Jerry didn’t need to think lo… moreng about it. “No, I’ve got enough problems as is. I don’t need another reason for them to hate me. Will you scam now?” Jerry answered, a cold and somewhat sarcastic tone carried in his voice. Stan frowned and gave a cold look. “Please--” Stan asked finally asked. “No. Now scam, kid.” Jerry gave a cold look while forcing Stan’s foot out of the door then closing it.
Inside his home he let out a sigh and walked into his living room, he looked out the sliding glass doors and at his swimming pool. He wanted a drink. Jerry walked into the kitchen and pulled out a shot glass, sitting on the counter, soon pulling out a bottle of whiskey and pouring it into the glass. Before he could do more someone started knocking on the door again.
Jerry left the bottle of whiskey and glass at the counter as he approached… [view original content]
Act 1: Gateway Dream - Chapter 2: A Peaceful House - Part 2.
Jerry Stewart - Harvest Hills, San Antonio.
Jerry didn’t need to think lo… moreng about it. “No, I’ve got enough problems as is. I don’t need another reason for them to hate me. Will you scam now?” Jerry answered, a cold and somewhat sarcastic tone carried in his voice. Stan frowned and gave a cold look. “Please--” Stan asked finally asked. “No. Now scam, kid.” Jerry gave a cold look while forcing Stan’s foot out of the door then closing it.
Inside his home he let out a sigh and walked into his living room, he looked out the sliding glass doors and at his swimming pool. He wanted a drink. Jerry walked into the kitchen and pulled out a shot glass, sitting on the counter, soon pulling out a bottle of whiskey and pouring it into the glass. Before he could do more someone started knocking on the door again.
Jerry left the bottle of whiskey and glass at the counter as he approached… [view original content]
I want to keep you all updated on the story, so, I'm going leave the voting open until sometime tonight, then I will began working on the ne… morext part and it will be posted sometime tomorrow.
Oh, and tease something in this chapter.
Hehehe >:3
Who is your favorite character so far? Dean, my boy. (pls don't hurt him now that I've said that. He isn't even my character)
Who is your least favorite character so far? Jerry
Who's character development are you most interested in? Dan
Who do you think will die first? Atlanta
Where do you think the plot is going? People might get feely and sad and then they'll be on top of the world and then there might be a fight for power.
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on? Judging by the title, ahhhh things are going to be very bad. I'm feeling a new group vs the original group
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group? I think if Jerry continues the way he is, he would be kicked. He might see the error in his ways and just leave by his own will.
What's a location you would like to see? An army base 11/10
Who do you want to die first? Jerry. I might seem like I hate him but it's because I do
What's a theme you would like to see? Failure among the group
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
T… morehis chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die… [view original content]
I've been working on the part and it will most likely come out today, it needs some work and I will probably need to go back and edit some. But today is when it will come out. Just bare with me.
Voting closed!
(!) Josie will go to Dean for help first.
I've been working on the part and it will most likely come out today, it need… mores some work and I will probably need to go back and edit some. But today is when it will come out. Just bare with me.
I will kill people CS! I will people that you love, I know most peoples' the favorites >:D
I might be kidding, but it'll come out within the next two hours at most. >:3
Comments
[Go to Dean for help.] Awesome Chapter!!!
Let me say once again, you did make a mistake choosing to not teach Stan to shoot, but I didn't say when you'd the consequences. >:3
This chapter will be focusing on developing characters, sorry if it's a little slow, but it'll pick up speed near the end of this chapter. I would like to hear what y'all think is going to happen, plot-wise and character-wise. but to make it a little easier for me to hear your opinions on some topic I'm gonna provide a list for you to answer if you want to. You by no means have to answer these questions.
Who is your favorite character so far?
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Who's character development are you most interested in?
Who do you think will die first?
Where do you think the plot is going?
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
What's a location you would like to see?
Who do you want to die first?
What's a theme you would like to see?
Those are the questions I would love to be answered. I don't know why, but the fact that they all start with "W" is fucking for my mind. o.o
Some people just what to watch the world burn
Yeah, hopefully he keep himself sane, maybe Anthony can help if he seeks his help.
Thank you!
[Dont do anything]
I like all the characters honestly :c
I love them all!
I'm interested in Stan
Stan.
Downhill.
Hopefully Elias's glorious hai- I'm kidding, probably about leaving Harvest Hills because theres nothing left in it? Idk. ;-;
;-; someone is going to be exiled? y you do this? ;-;
I want to see the airport for some odd reason
A walker
Everyone sitting around a campfire talking about funny stories
SO MANY QUESTIONS WOT
Who is your least favorite character so far?
They're all interesting...I can't choose
Who's character development are you most interested in?/Who is your favorite character so far?
I really am interested in Jerry's character and development, it's a normal guy in some trouble because he did something bad...and now he's losing it a little bit. Interested to see where it will go.
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Well, maybe another location will be introduced >:3
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
If Jerry does something that puts people in danger again, he may be forced to leave.
What's a location you would like to see?
Something like a travelling caravan...a group that never stays in one place, but always manages to stay alive in good spirits. Idk :P
Who do you want to die first?
It's up to you >:D
What's a theme you would like to see?
Hopelessness. Not everything goes the way you want it to.
Who is your favorite character so far? Stan
Who is your least favorite character so far? Jerry. Hopefully Clarice can fix that ;P
Who's character development are you most interested in? Everyone
Who do you think will die first? Ashley or Atlanta or Dan or Stan.
Where do you think the plot is going? Somewhere, Outside of Harvest Hills
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on? The walkers breaking into the community
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group? Jerry , duh
What's a location you would like to see? The rest of My Anns Hills
Who do you want to die first? Jerry.
What's a theme you would like to see? Clarice XD. Seriously , the group starving or battles between two groups and both of them are good
The hell is wrong with everyone choosing the last option? Y'all want them walkers to get in?
[Go to Dean for help.]
Getting everyone might take too long, doing it herself could lead to her death and not doing anything is very likely something very, very bad.
Some people just want to watch the world burn...
Hm... Good thinking Liquid.
I wanted to say to everyone answering the question... Thank you! I'm taking note of your answers and will be remember them... >:3
Who is your favorite character so far?
Oh so many... Stan, Josie, Dean, Atlanta, they're all awesome
Who is your least favorite character so far?
Jerry by far. An asshole and a selfish coward with little to no redeeming qualities, who is also a danger to everyone around him. He just pisses me off with every selfish action he makes.
Who's character development are you most interested in?
I could see Stan having a pretty interesting development
Who do you think will die first?
Sadly, not Jerry. I could totally see Dean or Anthony or Josie getting killed. God, hopefully not Josie...
Where do you think the plot is going?
It's not going to be any brighter. It'll probably get worse and I can totally see the community fall pretty soon
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
Death. I can see so much death. And walkers getting into the community after Josie did nothing for some odd reason.
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
Hopefully Jerry after the rest finally realized that he is a selfish waste of space with anger issues
What's a location you would like to see?
I was always fond of malls in a zombie apocalypse, for some odd reason
Who do you want to die first?
Take a lucky guess
Little hint: It starts with Jer and ends with ry. By the way, if you put these two syllables together, the word douchebag magically appears.
What's a theme you would like to see?
Hope... I always like it when things get brighter before they get inevitably worse again.
woo
Woop, woop, woop!
B3
B;3
B3
Your wish wasdone before you even wanted it
[Go to Dean for help]
As for your questions:
Who is your favorite character so far?
Atlanta maybe. Not sure yet
Who is your least favorite character so far?
No one really but Jerry could either be one of my favorite of my least favorite.. I do tend to like the anti heroes so I don't know
Who do you think will die first?
Stan or Ashley
Where do you think the plot is going?
Don't know but it's a matter of time before shit hits the fan
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on?
New characters and rival groups
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group?
Maybe Jerry? but he'll form his own badass group
What's a location you would like to see?
More of San Antonio and the suburbs also
Who do you want to die first?
Honestly no one but this is TWD so the better person you are the sooner you go
What's a theme you would like to see?
Emphasis on the interactions between the characters
[Get everyone she can]
Great chapter!!
[Don’t do anything.]
It'll be fineeeee.
As for the questions:
Who is your favorite character so far? Jerry. The true hero of the story.
Who is your least favorite character so far? Anthony. He hurt Jerry.
Who's character development ar ehough most interested in? Jerry. There's so many things you can do to him.
Who do you think will die first? Stan. I will not miss you.
Where do you think the plot is going? Somewhere interesting.
What do you think chapter 3 will be focused on? Newcomers to the group.
Who you think could leave or exiled from the group? Sadly, Jerry. People just don't understand him.
What's a location you would like to see? The city of De-Troit.
Who do you want to die first? Anyone who's name isn't Jerry.
Whats a theme you want to see? War.
I want to keep you all updated on the story, so, I'm going leave the voting open until sometime tonight, then I will began working on the next part and it will be posted sometime tomorrow.
Oh, and tease something in this chapter.
Hehehe >:3
NOT JERRY!!!!!
I'm sure Jerry will be fine, he'll lock his doors and put on some Billy Joel and he'll be fine.
[Go to Dean for help]
I'm not late this time. It's a miracle
[Go to Dean for help.]
Dean can save us all, I know it.
So that foreshadows ZomBees? Or will Nic Cage die in the next part? God, I'm so confused now...
You will know soon enough...
Oh I forgot to answer the questions hello
Who is your favorite character so far? Dean, my boy. (pls don't hurt him now that I've said that. He isn't even my character)
Who is your least favorite character so far? Jerry
Who's character development are you most interested in? Dan
Who do you think will die first? Atlanta
Where do you think the plot is going? People might get feely and sad and then they'll be on top of the world and then there might be a fight for power.
What do you think chapter 3 will be focusing on? Judging by the title, ahhhh things are going to be very bad. I'm feeling a new group vs the original group
Who do you think could leave or be exiled from the group? I think if Jerry continues the way he is, he would be kicked. He might see the error in his ways and just leave by his own will.
What's a location you would like to see? An army base 11/10
Who do you want to die first? Jerry. I might seem like I hate him but it's because I do
What's a theme you would like to see? Failure among the group
Soon enough will never truly be soon enough...
Today is when the next part will come out. Hopefully, then... You'll know what I mean...
Voting closed!
(!) Josie will go to Dean for help first.
I've been working on the part and it will most likely come out today, it needs some work and I will probably need to go back and edit some. But today is when it will come out. Just bare with me.
Turns out soon enough is sooner than soon enough. I was wrong again, guys!
Soon...
i can't i need it now
Well, it's close to be done... Be patient young CS...
HURRY
oh boy oh boy oh boy
I will kill people CS! I will people that you love, I know most peoples' the favorites >:D
I might be kidding, but it'll come out within the next two hours at most. >:3
violently waits
Removes the word "kills" from the writing
what ;-;
You remove kill from that and you got
I believe that is the best thing I've read all day