Continuing upon the end of S1(fan-fic)

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  • What exactly do you mean with your last sentence? ''We need to have an eye on these...". I'd like to write but I'm a little confused about that bit right there.

    On another note, the group is getting rather large. This is not necessarily a bad thing, but I'd still much prefer a bit of a smaller group so it's easier to keep track of all the different characters. Other than that, good job.

    TheMissus posted: »

    SCENE SWAP 3 hours of driving passed and the sky slowly becomes a little lighter. "Why haven't you killed her..." asks Jeremy. He leans

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    I got your point and felt the same - it IS a large group but I felt like a lady was definately missing. And we dealt with even more people at the Church and it worked. Some of them got to die anyway.

    With an eye on these I meant "an eye on the supplies"

    Also thought the campfire was a very good way to introduce the new characters, their appeareance and their backgrounds

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    What exactly do you mean with your last sentence? ''We need to have an eye on these...". I'd like to write but I'm a little confused about tha

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    I feel stupid now. You want me to make changes? Just say and I'll do it

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    What exactly do you mean with your last sentence? ''We need to have an eye on these...". I'd like to write but I'm a little confused about tha

  • I understand, sorry for the inconvenience.
    I read episode 1 and 2, but i just read the summary for episode 3.
    I will also make note of the rules, thanks.

    TheMissus posted: »

    The first part was good. I don't want to appear unfriendly but let's give them some rest finally, they just survived the most dangerous and ac

  • You don't have to. This was just a question and a note to everyone writing this thing. I don't want to have to write too many characters at the same time.

    On another note, I have been crazy busy and haven't been able to work on the drawings I had planned. I have some spare time tonight though, so I'll start drawing Jeremy after dinner! : D

    Next on the list is probably Pascucci, and after that I'll draw Danielle. If the Asian woman becomes important I'll draw her as well, lots to do!

    TheMissus posted: »

    I feel stupid now. You want me to make changes? Just say and I'll do it

  • Not a problem! Feel free to join us :)

    I understand, sorry for the inconvenience. I read episode 1 and 2, but i just read the summary for episode 3. I will also make note of the rules, thanks.

  • I asked myself if you're still going to make the drawings actually :) good to hear. Will you write next?

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    You don't have to. This was just a question and a note to everyone writing this thing. I don't want to have to write too many characters at th

  • Will ther be a end of season 2 fan fic, or will we just continue this one?

    TheMissus posted: »

    I asked myself if you're still going to make the drawings actually good to hear. Will you write next?

  • Guess we'll just see how long this thread is going to stay alive

    hayd24 posted: »

    Will ther be a end of season 2 fan fic, or will we just continue this one?

  • I'm not going to write this time, I would love to see some other people write for a change. I'm going to draw Jeremy now, if no one has written something, it's my turn!

    TheMissus posted: »

    Guess we'll just see how long this thread is going to stay alive

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    The group makes there way to the campfire
    Melody: "Sorry i must have gave you quite the scare back there." "Whats your names anyways?" The group stays silent for a while when Kenny replies with: "Why don't you tell us who you are first. Your going to be the one doing the talking." A shocked Melody, slowly gains a frown. She then says "Okay, i'm sorry. I'm not very good at first impressions. I really am sorry for what happened back there. If you really want to hear my story i'll go first."

    "So as i said before i used to be a elementary school teacher. used to be.

    This world changes you, i'm sure you understand that. We have all lost people that meant to us, whether or not they were family, our your apocalypse family, everyone has lost someone. Kenny starts to think about Duck and Katjaa| Clementine starts to think about lee
    |
    Jeremy starts to think about Dave|
    I'm no different then the rest of you, we're all human. Now i hope i have opened up to you, at least a little bit.

    Everyone at the campfire seemed changed, they new adding Melody to the group could be an addition for the humanity in a world gone to crap.
    Now does somebody else want to share their stories now?"

    "I'll go" Replies Clementine.

    Tell them about Lee | Talk about your parents (past life) | Tell them about Omid and Crista | Tell them about your whole story overall

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    " At first I was left with a baby sitter, but.. She died, I met a man named lee, he was my friend, and he took care of me... But but" Clem face is nearly emotionless. " he got bit, I I I killed him, I was to young and to stupid." Clem's voice begins to falter. " I found christa and omid, who were part of our group before, they took care of me for a while, we met up with Kenny too. Christa and omid died, christa was pregnant but they all, died. Everybody died. We met up with other survivors, some of which you see here, but the others there gone." Clem was now crying lightly, trying to muffle her sobs with her hand. please continue- sorry if it was to short I was at school and risked getting my laptop taken away! ;)

  • This was great :) Actually I'd choose to talk about her past life with her parents as we know very little of it, but I wanna let someone else continue.

    The group makes there way to the campfire Melody: "Sorry i must have gave you quite the scare back there." "Whats your names anyways?" The gr

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    "Before it all started, i was a lot different then what i am now."

    A tear nearly comes out of her eye put resisted.

    Me and my dad had a special bond you know? He would always play hide and seek with me, except we played with our rules. We each would have a walkie talkie and he would try to find me based on what i was telling him.

    "I remember every Friday my mom and i would always bake cookies for my dad while he was at work. That was fun."

    Every year my parents would go to Savannah. Little did I know that would be the last time i would tell them i loved them."

    Then i was left with a babysitter. Her name was Sandra. She seen the news and got scared. My mom kept trying to call and Sandra wouldn't let me answer the phone. She was already starting to lose her mind. At the time i was just a little girl, who was I to disobey her and grab the phone. But i could tell Sandra was acting strange so i grabbed my walkie talkie and went into my tree house.

    Sandra, who had completely lost her mind, opened our front door, and one of those things were there. She ran and tried to open the sliding glass door and she... she... (Clementine starts to cry) She wasn't fast enough.

    I was alone for a couple days then He came. But i'll save that for another time."

  • You should probably change it, I also think the babysitter's name is Sarah. I'm not sure though.

    "Before it all started, i was a lot different then what i am now." A tear nearly comes out of her eye put resisted. Me and my dad had a

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    Btw her name wasn't ann it was Sandra. Also was this continuing from my post or the post above?

    "Before it all started, i was a lot different then what i am now." A tear nearly comes out of her eye put resisted. Me and my dad had a

  • That's the name I was looking for.

    darnitben posted: »

    Btw her name wasn't ann it was Sandra. Also was this continuing from my post or the post above?

  • Okay i'll change it now, and i also just looked up the name it was Sandra. I'm going to change that also.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    You should probably change it, I also think the babysitter's name is Sarah. I'm not sure though.

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    Yeah i just looked it up after i had finished it, I updated it to Sandra. (I assumed she didn't have a name so i just made one up but i was wrong) And i did not see your post until now.

    darnitben posted: »

    Btw her name wasn't ann it was Sandra. Also was this continuing from my post or the post above?

  • It is Sandra, actually

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    You should probably change it, I also think the babysitter's name is Sarah. I'm not sure though.

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    Kenny takes over the role of the speaker by clearing his throat: "To be honest, Melody, our group just contained three of us: Pascucci, Clementine and myself - I am Kenny. We were four people... Unfortunately... One of us died this night. Charlie... He was a good kid..."

    "A kid? Oh, this is horrible... I am so sorry." Melody remarks by holding her palms infront of her face.

    "Thanks, Mel... We appreciate it. Anyway, these guys joined us. We helped them out of a very bad situation. There was this cannibalistic settlement..-" Kenny gets cut off by Melody. "Oh, I've heard of that! Actually, I thought this was an urban legend... Is that true?".

    "Yeah, it is... Or was. It's over now. We took care of it. Anyway: I'd really like to get to know you guys. After all we risked our lifes. Who are you?" asks Kenny, looking at Gus, Jeremy and Danielle...

    Continue with Gus / Jeremy / Danielle / all of them - these are new characters, so make a lot of descriptions (Gus is a skinny bold african american, Jeremy is african-american and Danielle has brown hair, is 11yo and is assumed to be Jolene's daughter, that's all we know) - be creative

  • Wish it was a little more detailed :l.

    darnitben posted: »

    " At first I was left with a baby sitter, but.. She died, I met a man named lee, he was my friend, and he took care of me... But but" Clem fac

  • The babysitters name is Sandra :P.

    "Before it all started, i was a lot different then what i am now." A tear nearly comes out of her eye put resisted. Me and my dad had a

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    Danielle is Jolene's daughter, that's what i was thinking of when i added her in here. Tough to say what her personality is yet, except that she acts tough, when she's really not.

    TheMissus posted: »

    Kenny takes over the role of the speaker by clearing his throat: "To be honest, Melody, our group just contained three of us: Pascucci, Clemen

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    Gus looked up at Kenny.

    "I...I guess I'll go" Gus said.

    Most of the gang looked up at Gus.

    "I was on my own at first, I woke up in the middle of the night and there were riots on the street, atleast that's what I thought it was, turned out to be the walkers" Gus said.

    "I immediately went to my parents house. They weren't there. I was afraid. I didn't know what to do, and they boxed me in. I used one of the tools to keep them from getting to me and I thought I was screwed" Gus said.

    "Then this man, Aaron, saved my life, he took me in, and helped me settle in to a new group and a new house" Gus looked down.

    "I was safe...so I thought" Gus looked down.

    "What about before?" Melody asked.

    "I never had a serious relationship. My parents were my life I guess. I'm not the best at technology, but I was smart at school, straight A's. I was a Mummy's boy, as well, my hair wasn't always black, but I dyed it a while ago. I had a brother actually, he was distant, moved out when he was 17 actually. His name was Clive and moved somewhere near Savannah, Crawland or something...

    But my worst nightmare happened..." Gus put his hands to his head.

    "Um...what...what happened?" Melody asked.

    "My group, I saw my Mum and Dad, but not like he used to be...
    and that's part of the worst part, but then there's more. My group got attacked, knocked out, tortured. By that women and her stupid gang!"
    They Killed Aaron RIGHT IN FRONT MY EYES. Apparently something about him being bitten, I had no idea. I'm sorry, I have a little temper" Gus said.

    "Not the only one" Kenny said.

    Gus looked up at Kenny, trying to break a smirk, but he couldn't to it.

    "They was about to eat me...then you guys saved my life" Gus said.

    Gus put his hands in his head, and took a deep breath before looking into the deep sky...

  • Sorry I was at school and I wanted to add but I didn't want to get my laptop taken away.

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Wish it was a little more detailed :l.

  • What is the time frame currently? Like what day into the ZA are we?

  • The group stays silent for a while then Jeremy takes his turn,

    "This whole time i had never been alone, I always had Dave by my side. Me and him we have been best friends since before the outbreak. I'll still never forget that night."

    "I was staying at his house, we were watching the news and the walkers were everywhere. Dave was frightened by the fact that his mom had gone out grocery shopping. I told him it was no big deal it's going to pass by in a week. But boy was I wrong. "

    "His mom did make it home that night but she was bit. At the time we thought she would have a fever and it would all pass by. Again I was wrong. It killed her in a matter of hours. Dave's brother Demarious went to give his last words to her when she came back. She just tore him apart. We locked her in the room and headed to our local hospital. Thinking a doctor could help. Apparently other people had the same idea. The hospital was surrounded by those things. That's when me and Dave decided to head north.

    "We were heading north when (Jeremy gets a disgusted look in his face) Taiva happened. She's all i have to blame for what happened to Dave. We were best friends.

    (A tear rolls down his face)

    But now I have you guys.

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    I liked it :) though Gus doesn't have hair. You might change it because it was said several times. Other than that very well done!

    Gus looked up at Kenny. "I...I guess I'll go" Gus said. Most of the gang looked up at Gus. "I was on my own at first, I woke up in th

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    I'd say 9 months past the outbreak. 5 1/2 when Lee died plus 3 1/2 of the story. Someone else said 1 1/2 years though, a few comments before but I don't think this is right.

    What is the time frame currently? Like what day into the ZA are we?

  • Awesome

    The group stays silent for a while then Jeremy takes his turn, "This whole time i had never been alone, I always had Dave by my side. Me an

  • Yeah, that's alright :P.

    darnitben posted: »

    Sorry I was at school and I wanted to add but I didn't want to get my laptop taken away.

  • I would but when I click edit nothing happens.

    TheMissus posted: »

    I liked it though Gus doesn't have hair. You might change it because it was said several times. Other than that very well done!

  • Yeah, it did that to me yesterday to. Weird huh? It started working when I came back to the thread 20 minutes later

    I would but when I click edit nothing happens.

  • It was me, I am still confused with the timeline to be honest. : S

    Here's a link to the official timeline: http://walkingdead.wikia.com/wiki/The_Walking_Dead_Telltale_Games_Timeline

    TheMissus posted: »

    I'd say 9 months past the outbreak. 5 1/2 when Lee died plus 3 1/2 of the story. Someone else said 1 1/2 years though, a few comments before but I don't think this is right.

  • I am going to write now, if the site lets me. It's been acting a little weird lately...

  • True. It hasn't been working properly since yesterday. Hope This is going to be fixed

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    I am going to write now, if the site lets me. It's been acting a little weird lately...

  • Same here.

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    I am going to write now, if the site lets me. It's been acting a little weird lately...

  • I think they might have done an update, the site is slightly different.

    HSPLazerz posted: »

    Same here.

  • It won't let me edit my post, great. I'll just make a new post then...

    I'M GOING TO WRITE NOW!

    That_1_Guy posted: »

    I think they might have done an update, the site is slightly different.

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