Could be a good time to think about where the story is gonna go, i feel personally like we're going nowhere currently, i don't wanna add new people, but nor do i wanna do something we've already done. We've already found a group before and then had to abandoned it for many reasons, have had a lot of action, lost many people, we've had things such as cannibalism etc.
What more could there really be?
Personally, i think we need something new. I got several ideas, though that'd be for the end.
I think now should be used as a bit of a breather, let the group be happy for just a little bit, show the world isn't all horror. This way when something bad happens it hurts a lot more. Much like how we got small happy moments with Charlie, and then when he died it made some people have feels.
Could be a good time to think about where the story is gonna go, i feel personally like we're going nowhere currently, i don't wanna add new p… moreeople, but nor do i wanna do something we've already done. We've already found a group before and then had to abandoned it for many reasons, have had a lot of action, lost many people, we've had things such as cannibalism etc.
What more could there really be?
Personally, i think we need something new. I got several ideas, though that'd be for the end.
I think now should be used as a bit of a breather, let the group be happy for just a little bit, show the world isn't all horror. This way whe… moren something bad happens it hurts a lot more. Much like how we got small happy moments with Charlie, and then when he died it made some people have feels.
I think now should be used as a bit of a breather, let the group be happy for just a little bit, show the world isn't all horror. This way whe… moren something bad happens it hurts a lot more. Much like how we got small happy moments with Charlie, and then when he died it made some people have feels.
There was someone who said that he keeps saving all comments in a word doc, but he was not a very active member. I just made this super summar… morey, don't know when I will have that much time to save all this. Any other active user interested in making a Backup?
(I was very pissed actually when they closed the stickied TWAU ep.2 thread - was this really necessary?)
I actually have an interesting idea involving a big settlement. I think it would be cool if Kenny wants something permanent and turns into the leader of a big community.
It's something not touched upon yet, and it could make for an interesting story arc.
Could be a good time to think about where the story is gonna go, i feel personally like we're going nowhere currently, i don't wanna add new p… moreeople, but nor do i wanna do something we've already done. We've already found a group before and then had to abandoned it for many reasons, have had a lot of action, lost many people, we've had things such as cannibalism etc.
What more could there really be?
Personally, i think we need something new. I got several ideas, though that'd be for the end.
I (or rather, Darth Marsden) would like to re-emphasize that for the time being,
PLEASE DO NOT REPLY TO INDIVIDUAL POSTS. Use the 'Add Comment' button at the bottom of the page to ensure your post is not accidentally eaten by the site.
Apologies for the problems - we're still trying to chase up the web team to get an answer to why this is happening and how long it will take to fix. We won't stop until we get it sorted though, so please bear with us.
That would mean we can continue with the story, as long as we don't 'reply' but 'add comment'
Anyway, a Backup is highly appreciated. Whoever is going to make one - it was nice if it would be downloadable as a doc file together with the summaries.
@That_1_Guy Unfortunately I am not able to continue. If I could I think it was best if one of the grown ups followed them and either expell or help the 3 guys, dunno... It's a complicated situation we're dealing with. We wanted this episode to be peaceful and I don't have any idea how to solve this peacefully
Clementine and Danielle stared at the group quietly. The teenage boy and the red-haired woman awkwardly held their weapons in a weak attempt to look menacing. The old woman frowned, waiting for the two girls to respond. ''I asked you a question.'', the woman said while pointing her gun at Danielle's face, ''Who are you?''.
Tears started rolling down Danielle's face, she quietly sobbed. Clementine had a gun in her pocket, but the woman would shoot before she would even have the chance to pick it up. Desperately searching for a way out, Clementine started talking. ''My name is Clementine, this is Danielle.'', she said in a weak voice, ''We don't have a group, not anymore.''
Danielle confusedly looked at Clementine, and quickly understood what she was doing. ''There was a walker attack.'', she added, ''Our whole group... Died.'' . Luckily, Danielle was a good actress, and the group soon started acting nicer to the girls. They withdrew their guns and started asking questions. ''Are you two alright?'', the freckled woman asked, ''Have you been--''
Her sentence was cut short by the sound of piercing flesh. The red-headed woman stumbled to the ground with an arrow in her shoulder. The boy looked up at the trees and received an arrow in his eye, causing him to collapse immediately. The elderly woman screamed in fear, yet another arrow had pierced her bristle back. The two girls watched as her lifeless body fell to the ground, leaving a pool of blood underneath her.
Danielle started screaming and quickly ran back the way they came, leaving Clementine behind. Clem looked up at where the arrows had come from and noticed a silhouette swiftly moving through the trees, before disappearing. She walked over to the tree she last saw the figure moving. Clementine picked up a red piece of cloth, seemingly drenched in blood. She jogged over to a creak nearby and washed the cloth to reveal a green fabric.
''I guess we're not alone in this forest anymore.'', she muttered to herself before stuffing the green piece of cloth in her back-pocket.
-SCENE SWAP-
''Danielle, you have to calm down.'', Pascucci was trying to comfort Danielle, ''You just have to tell us where Clementine is, and we'll make sure she's safe.''
Danielle told them where they had gone and what had happened. The two were shocked when she mentioned the arrows coming from the trees. ''We have to go there, right now!'', Kenny grabbed his rifle from his back and put on his coat. Pascucci picked up his gun and asked Jeremy to go with them, he picked up the axe they had found in the basement and ran outside. Together the three men quickly found the open place Danielle had described, along with one body and two walkers which they quickly disposed off.
''She was right, someone shot these people with arrows.'', Kenny remarked, ''If you look at this boy, you can see the arrow probably came from that direction.''
''No sign of Clem though.'', Jeremy said in a hopeful, yet doubtful voice.
''Wait, I see someone.'', Pascucci said while pointing at the nearby creak. The three men swiftly sneaked over to a set of bushes overlooking the stream of water. They soon noticed Clementine kneeling down, washing some kind of cloth, resulting in a mixture of blood and water.
''Clementine!'', Kenny yelled, ''Clementine, over here!''.
She quickly turned around and pulled out her gun, but when she recognized the familiar faces of her friends she holstered her gun and ran up to them. The group shared a moment of joy before carrying on back to the cabin. Clementine held her hands in her pockets, tightly gripping around the green piece of cloth, wondering about her ''savior'', and thinking about the group he had killed.
CHOICE:: / Tell the group about the piece of cloth / Don't tell them about the piece of cloth / Ask about Danielle /
My characters...NOOOOOO! It seemed like it caused a huge amount of inconvenience, sorry about that. Also I didn't know about that glitch, I suggest you make a new thread.
Hello everyone! I am happy to announce that I am finally done with drawing Jeremy AND Danielle! Next on the list is Pascucci and possibly Melody, so stay tuned for more!
Jeremy ( Forgive me for the red-ish color. I have a horrible camera and the lighting was wrong.):
Sorry for killing them off, I really liked the idea of your characters but the majority of the people decided against it. So I wrote them out of the story.
My characters...NOOOOOO! It seemed like it caused a huge amount of inconvenience, sorry about that. Also I didn't know about that glitch, I suggest you make a new thread.
(I know the rules about new characters and we don't have to do anything with this guy but.)
He just went out to find some food. All he wanted was a small rabbit but instead he stumbled upon a confrontation upon a women and her son maybe an two little girls. He had been hiding in the tree tops, it was the best way to avoid detection from prey and lurkers. He watched silently, the shadow of the leaves keeping him hidden. For a second things were resolving themselves, the older people had put their guns away. It had been a ruse though, he had seen the boy reach for his gun when the girls lowered their guards, they never would have seen it coming. He quickly put arrows in the two, and one of the girls fled. The other looked at him though. How could she see him, how did she know ? He quickly fled making a rookie mistake and getting his clothes on a branch. A small bit of cloth tumbled down to the forest ground below, but he had no time to retrieve it, it was likely the girl thought he was a bandit and would shoot him on sight. This whole situation was a damn shame. He would have to skip dinner tonight.
(back at the cabin)
Kenny had noticed Clementine clutch the small green fabric but decided not to pester her about it. He was sure she would tell him or someone else about it if it was important. Still he was a little worried, the last time Clem had kept secrets hadn't ended great, but he had to trust her at some point. He was going to the book shelf for a new book (he had read over ten since he had discovered the thing) when he put his foot down a little to hard and burst through the floor.
"Dammit" He cursed as the wood scraped his leg.
When he looked down into the new hole he had made in the floor he noticed there was a small box laying on the ground between the floor boards and the earth. He pulled it out and opened it. Inside was a small leather book and a bunch of comic books underneath that. He opened up the leather book and read the first page.
My parents said this nature hike will do me good, that I need to get out of my room more. They don't understand me, my friends are probably wondering why I haven't shown up to the dungeon raid by now. How could they just spring this on me. At least I had enough time to pack a few things. I managed to sneak some comic's into my bag without them noticing, all well as some fantasy, and sci fi novels, you know the things you need to survive. There is a book shelf here but it's full of things only my parents would read. I found a loose floor board in our cabin, I can stash my things there to reduce the risk of detection. I'll try to vent my frustrations with this trip in this here journal as much as possible.... .
Kenny flipped through the pages to see a lot of them were filled. How long did his parent's keep him here ? In any case Kenny thought Clementine would enjoy the comics, and when he ran out of books he could try the novels at some point.
First of i would like to say that while i was gone you guys have done a great job with the new posts. The comment issue could be fatal but as long as we have one or 2 backups we should be fine. i however would like to discuccs the end of this wonder full thread.
1. WORD DOCUMENT DOWNLOAD
It has been mentioned before that someone is keeping a backup of the thread. when this is finished i propose a new thread should be made where we can download the document via dropbox or whatever.
PART 2?
In terms of continuing a new thread will be used but there are options to where we go next in the series
OPTION A
We give an ending where we can continue on the story. this means clementine survives and ends up with a group (Probably the farm one as this would give someone the difficult decision to decide wither jacob deserves to live or not.) and at least ONE person from this group survives (Preferably pascucci or Gus. someone who hasn't seen the limelight in a while and is not really a prominent character with clementine)
OPTION B
We continue from the end of season 2. In this case people can go all out with deaths and can kill everyone if they wanted too. if we chose this option then any surviving characters would get a flashback at the end
In both cases we should wait until season 2 is complete to continue with season 2. please give me you're opinions on this
@Lord_zasca
I think we should continue from our own story, we've built up a good cannon I think, and would hate to see it go away to follow season two. That being said if season two ends in a very open way, which can be continued we could look at doing a separate fic. Although two may be a bit much.
Might be interesting if the find a settlement in an Air Force Base with 1 plane they are trying to get working again. later on they have to pick Clem and 1 other person to go on the plane to safety. then they crash land somewhere. These are just my current thoughts.
I actually have an interesting idea involving a big settlement. I think it would be cool if Kenny wants something permanent and turns into the… more leader of a big community.
It's something not touched upon yet, and it could make for an interesting story arc.
Might be interesting if the find a settlement in an Air Force Base with 1 plane they are trying to get working again. later on they have to pi… moreck Clem and 1 other person to go on the plane to safety. then they crash land somewhere. These are just my current thoughts.
I think we should just continue with with what we have right now. Some people I think should definitely survive are Jeremy, Danielle, Melody, Miranda the pug and most likely Clementine as well.
@That_1_Guy Again I agree with someone, though instead of Danielle I'd keep either Pascucci or Kenny, most likely Pascucci because he is one of our original characters
@TheMissus I think it would be cool to start out in a very tense scene showing the farm group in danger. After that there will be a time-skip followed by a different scene showing what is happening to the people who survived the attack.
Eventually the group would hopefully meet up with Clem and co.
The next day Kenny, Pascucci and Gus are leaving the cabin to hunt something eatable. Melody's provisions are nearly gone, just a few cans of beans, corn and cucumbers left. Gus tried his best refusing to dirty his hands, but it was aimless. "Everybody has to know how to feed his family." said Kenny. "I am more into talking and teaching." Gus responded. "I've never seen a deer being talked into making itself comfortable on a plate, so: no more backtalkin', Gus - Jeremy needs a break from mens work, too..."
Danielle makes herself comfortable on the floor next to the chimney, reading the Comic novels Clementine gave her. Clementine and Jeremy on the other hand sit at the table while Melody is cutting Clementine's hair. While her hair is being cut she dissolves math questions. "And how about 9 x 9?". "81." Clem responds without a lag. "Clever! Okay, honey: this is it. Your hair looks wonderful. You can have a look at it in the river. We really need a mirror, huh? Sigh Wish I had such nice curls like yours..." Clementine gazes at Melody and her long hair that looks like beautiful black satin. "You should cut it - the walkers nearly got me once because of it. It was horrible." Melody's expression turns from happy into sad. After a while Clementine asks: "Can I cut it? I've never done it before.". Melody smilles again: "Sure, honey: you are right. It's the smartest thing to do these days. Here...". As Melody takes a seat Clem receives the scissors and starts to cut it. "Lee told me to keep my hair short and I always will. I miss him so much.". "He must have been the most wonderful person in the world. Tell me about him." Melody pleases. Clem sighs and eventually starts to speak: "One day, we were staying at a motor inn, I had a fever and didn't feel well. I was so afraid to tell anybody. Duck, he was Kenny's son and my friend... a man nearly killed him because he thought he was bitten. I was sooo afraid anybody would try to kill me, too. But Lee somehow knew that something was wrong with me and when he found out about the fever he had been staying with me all night long and the next day too and he told me all the stories from his youth and childhood. He never gave me the feeling I would turn or that I was useless. I could feel the palm of his hand on my forehead like every 10 minutes... all night long. He always believed in me and never gave up. I miss him...". Melody tries to prevent her eyes from shedding tears. "I bet, honey... I am sure he loved you very much.". "I wish he did.". Time passes when Clementine finally puts the scissors on the table: "Done!". Jeremy looks up from his book examining Melody's new hair but when she looks at him he immediately continues to read, acting like he wasn't interested. "This is real short but I love it! Thank you, Clemmy!". "I'll go outside to the river, okay?". Melody replies: "I'd rather you stay in the house - the men are gone and ....". Clem interrupts her with a smile: "Alright, got it." and she accompanies Danielle at the fireplace, taking one of the comics."
Melody drinks a glas of water and silently looks at Jeremy who is still reading. This man is a puzzle she thinks as she finally speaks: "You never spoke a word to me, Jeremy, unless I had asked you a question. This is sad since we've been living together for so long now." Jeremy looks up and immediately starts to sweat as Melody goes on. "Anyway, I noticed you were looking at me all the time we've been at this table. Tell me: What is your problem with me? Do I do something wrong?". Nothing... Nothing is wrong with you, Melody. replies Jeremy to himself in his mind as he notices Melody's now exposed slender neck. Not a single thing. He sweats even more when Melody remarks: "I don't even know you..."
Continue from here with a serious conversation between Melody and Jeremy
Once we had a problem with someone trying to kill of Kenny, it'll be odd if someone new reads through it and all of a sudden finds out that Ken is alive without any notice.
No need to make a new thread, just a few things like that.
Though we still do need a backup considering my own thread about Telltale releasing their engine to the public, was deleted.
Comments
Many didn't even dislike him
Could be a good time to think about where the story is gonna go, i feel personally like we're going nowhere currently, i don't wanna add new people, but nor do i wanna do something we've already done. We've already found a group before and then had to abandoned it for many reasons, have had a lot of action, lost many people, we've had things such as cannibalism etc.
What more could there really be?
Personally, i think we need something new. I got several ideas, though that'd be for the end.
I think now should be used as a bit of a breather, let the group be happy for just a little bit, show the world isn't all horror. This way when something bad happens it hurts a lot more. Much like how we got small happy moments with Charlie, and then when he died it made some people have feels.
Exactly
.
Agreeing
I'll make a back-up tomorrow if I have spare time. I bet some of you guys have back-ups but it doesn't hurt to have several back ups
You can never have enough.
I just don't post, I read the comments though.
Its an italian last name.
Im back! i see site glitches
I actually have an interesting idea involving a big settlement. I think it would be cool if Kenny wants something permanent and turns into the leader of a big community.
It's something not touched upon yet, and it could make for an interesting story arc.
NEWS REGARDING THE GLITCH
Taken from the "Deleted Comments" thread:
I (or rather, Darth Marsden) would like to re-emphasize that for the time being,
PLEASE DO NOT REPLY TO INDIVIDUAL POSTS. Use the 'Add Comment' button at the bottom of the page to ensure your post is not accidentally eaten by the site.
Apologies for the problems - we're still trying to chase up the web team to get an answer to why this is happening and how long it will take to fix. We won't stop until we get it sorted though, so please bear with us.
That would mean we can continue with the story, as long as we don't 'reply' but 'add comment'
Anyway, a Backup is highly appreciated. Whoever is going to make one - it was nice if it would be downloadable as a doc file together with the summaries.
@TheMissus Yep, it seems like we are able to continue again. I think I might write something, I'm just not sure where to go from here.
@That_1_Guy Unfortunately I am not able to continue. If I could I think it was best if one of the grown ups followed them and either expell or help the 3 guys, dunno... It's a complicated situation we're dealing with. We wanted this episode to be peaceful and I don't have any idea how to solve this peacefully
@TheMissus I think I know just how to solve this, I'll write this time.
Clementine and Danielle stared at the group quietly. The teenage boy and the red-haired woman awkwardly held their weapons in a weak attempt to look menacing. The old woman frowned, waiting for the two girls to respond. ''I asked you a question.'', the woman said while pointing her gun at Danielle's face, ''Who are you?''.
Tears started rolling down Danielle's face, she quietly sobbed. Clementine had a gun in her pocket, but the woman would shoot before she would even have the chance to pick it up. Desperately searching for a way out, Clementine started talking. ''My name is Clementine, this is Danielle.'', she said in a weak voice, ''We don't have a group, not anymore.''
Danielle confusedly looked at Clementine, and quickly understood what she was doing. ''There was a walker attack.'', she added, ''Our whole group... Died.'' . Luckily, Danielle was a good actress, and the group soon started acting nicer to the girls. They withdrew their guns and started asking questions. ''Are you two alright?'', the freckled woman asked, ''Have you been--''
Her sentence was cut short by the sound of piercing flesh. The red-headed woman stumbled to the ground with an arrow in her shoulder. The boy looked up at the trees and received an arrow in his eye, causing him to collapse immediately. The elderly woman screamed in fear, yet another arrow had pierced her bristle back. The two girls watched as her lifeless body fell to the ground, leaving a pool of blood underneath her.
Danielle started screaming and quickly ran back the way they came, leaving Clementine behind. Clem looked up at where the arrows had come from and noticed a silhouette swiftly moving through the trees, before disappearing. She walked over to the tree she last saw the figure moving. Clementine picked up a red piece of cloth, seemingly drenched in blood. She jogged over to a creak nearby and washed the cloth to reveal a green fabric.
''I guess we're not alone in this forest anymore.'', she muttered to herself before stuffing the green piece of cloth in her back-pocket.
-SCENE SWAP-
''Danielle, you have to calm down.'', Pascucci was trying to comfort Danielle, ''You just have to tell us where Clementine is, and we'll make sure she's safe.''
Danielle told them where they had gone and what had happened. The two were shocked when she mentioned the arrows coming from the trees. ''We have to go there, right now!'', Kenny grabbed his rifle from his back and put on his coat. Pascucci picked up his gun and asked Jeremy to go with them, he picked up the axe they had found in the basement and ran outside. Together the three men quickly found the open place Danielle had described, along with one body and two walkers which they quickly disposed off.
''She was right, someone shot these people with arrows.'', Kenny remarked, ''If you look at this boy, you can see the arrow probably came from that direction.''
''No sign of Clem though.'', Jeremy said in a hopeful, yet doubtful voice.
''Wait, I see someone.'', Pascucci said while pointing at the nearby creak. The three men swiftly sneaked over to a set of bushes overlooking the stream of water. They soon noticed Clementine kneeling down, washing some kind of cloth, resulting in a mixture of blood and water.
''Clementine!'', Kenny yelled, ''Clementine, over here!''.
She quickly turned around and pulled out her gun, but when she recognized the familiar faces of her friends she holstered her gun and ran up to them. The group shared a moment of joy before carrying on back to the cabin. Clementine held her hands in her pockets, tightly gripping around the green piece of cloth, wondering about her ''savior'', and thinking about the group he had killed.
CHOICE:: / Tell the group about the piece of cloth / Don't tell them about the piece of cloth / Ask about Danielle /
Even real old reply's have been deleted, jesus.
Seriously? Are they story-related?
My characters...NOOOOOO! It seemed like it caused a huge amount of inconvenience, sorry about that. Also I didn't know about that glitch, I suggest you make a new thread.
Hello everyone! I am happy to announce that I am finally done with drawing Jeremy AND Danielle! Next on the list is Pascucci and possibly Melody, so stay tuned for more!
Jeremy ( Forgive me for the red-ish color. I have a horrible camera and the lighting was wrong.):
And here is Danielle. Again, sorry for the weird red color, Horrible camera + Bad lighting = These pictures.
Sorry for killing them off, I really liked the idea of your characters but the majority of the people decided against it. So I wrote them out of the story.
(I know the rules about new characters and we don't have to do anything with this guy but.)
He just went out to find some food. All he wanted was a small rabbit but instead he stumbled upon a confrontation upon a women and her son maybe an two little girls. He had been hiding in the tree tops, it was the best way to avoid detection from prey and lurkers. He watched silently, the shadow of the leaves keeping him hidden. For a second things were resolving themselves, the older people had put their guns away. It had been a ruse though, he had seen the boy reach for his gun when the girls lowered their guards, they never would have seen it coming. He quickly put arrows in the two, and one of the girls fled. The other looked at him though. How could she see him, how did she know ? He quickly fled making a rookie mistake and getting his clothes on a branch. A small bit of cloth tumbled down to the forest ground below, but he had no time to retrieve it, it was likely the girl thought he was a bandit and would shoot him on sight. This whole situation was a damn shame. He would have to skip dinner tonight.
(back at the cabin)
Kenny had noticed Clementine clutch the small green fabric but decided not to pester her about it. He was sure she would tell him or someone else about it if it was important. Still he was a little worried, the last time Clem had kept secrets hadn't ended great, but he had to trust her at some point. He was going to the book shelf for a new book (he had read over ten since he had discovered the thing) when he put his foot down a little to hard and burst through the floor.
"Dammit" He cursed as the wood scraped his leg.
When he looked down into the new hole he had made in the floor he noticed there was a small box laying on the ground between the floor boards and the earth. He pulled it out and opened it. Inside was a small leather book and a bunch of comic books underneath that. He opened up the leather book and read the first page.
My parents said this nature hike will do me good, that I need to get out of my room more. They don't understand me, my friends are probably wondering why I haven't shown up to the dungeon raid by now. How could they just spring this on me. At least I had enough time to pack a few things. I managed to sneak some comic's into my bag without them noticing, all well as some fantasy, and sci fi novels, you know the things you need to survive. There is a book shelf here but it's full of things only my parents would read. I found a loose floor board in our cabin, I can stash my things there to reduce the risk of detection. I'll try to vent my frustrations with this trip in this here journal as much as possible.... .
Kenny flipped through the pages to see a lot of them were filled. How long did his parent's keep him here ? In any case Kenny thought Clementine would enjoy the comics, and when he ran out of books he could try the novels at some point.
(continue)
Comment masacre!!
End
First of i would like to say that while i was gone you guys have done a great job with the new posts. The comment issue could be fatal but as long as we have one or 2 backups we should be fine. i however would like to discuccs the end of this wonder full thread.
1. WORD DOCUMENT DOWNLOAD
It has been mentioned before that someone is keeping a backup of the thread. when this is finished i propose a new thread should be made where we can download the document via dropbox or whatever.
PART 2?
In terms of continuing a new thread will be used but there are options to where we go next in the series
OPTION A
We give an ending where we can continue on the story. this means clementine survives and ends up with a group (Probably the farm one as this would give someone the difficult decision to decide wither jacob deserves to live or not.) and at least ONE person from this group survives (Preferably pascucci or Gus. someone who hasn't seen the limelight in a while and is not really a prominent character with clementine)
OPTION B
We continue from the end of season 2. In this case people can go all out with deaths and can kill everyone if they wanted too. if we chose this option then any surviving characters would get a flashback at the end
In both cases we should wait until season 2 is complete to continue with season 2. please give me you're opinions on this
@Lord_zasca
I think we should continue from our own story, we've built up a good cannon I think, and would hate to see it go away to follow season two. That being said if season two ends in a very open way, which can be continued we could look at doing a separate fic. Although two may be a bit much.
Might be interesting if the find a settlement in an Air Force Base with 1 plane they are trying to get working again. later on they have to pick Clem and 1 other person to go on the plane to safety. then they crash land somewhere. These are just my current thoughts.
@Lord_zasca I totally agree with what @MegaMoto said
Maybe for the final part or something
I think we should just continue with with what we have right now. Some people I think should definitely survive are Jeremy, Danielle, Melody, Miranda the pug and most likely Clementine as well.
@That_1_Guy Again I agree with someone, though instead of Danielle I'd keep either Pascucci or Kenny, most likely Pascucci because he is one of our original characters
I got the idea of starting the next season with the farm group, wonder how they developed as the time passed.
@TheMissus I think it would be cool to start out in a very tense scene showing the farm group in danger. After that there will be a time-skip followed by a different scene showing what is happening to the people who survived the attack.
Eventually the group would hopefully meet up with Clem and co.
The red color hue is very soft, no worries. Well done! Danielle looks similar to my imagination of her
Attention: the glitch has been fixed! All our comments are back! We can go on as usual
The next day Kenny, Pascucci and Gus are leaving the cabin to hunt something eatable. Melody's provisions are nearly gone, just a few cans of beans, corn and cucumbers left. Gus tried his best refusing to dirty his hands, but it was aimless. "Everybody has to know how to feed his family." said Kenny. "I am more into talking and teaching." Gus responded. "I've never seen a deer being talked into making itself comfortable on a plate, so: no more backtalkin', Gus - Jeremy needs a break from mens work, too..."
Danielle makes herself comfortable on the floor next to the chimney, reading the Comic novels Clementine gave her. Clementine and Jeremy on the other hand sit at the table while Melody is cutting Clementine's hair. While her hair is being cut she dissolves math questions. "And how about 9 x 9?". "81." Clem responds without a lag. "Clever! Okay, honey: this is it. Your hair looks wonderful. You can have a look at it in the river. We really need a mirror, huh? Sigh Wish I had such nice curls like yours..." Clementine gazes at Melody and her long hair that looks like beautiful black satin. "You should cut it - the walkers nearly got me once because of it. It was horrible." Melody's expression turns from happy into sad. After a while Clementine asks: "Can I cut it? I've never done it before.". Melody smilles again: "Sure, honey: you are right. It's the smartest thing to do these days. Here...". As Melody takes a seat Clem receives the scissors and starts to cut it. "Lee told me to keep my hair short and I always will. I miss him so much.". "He must have been the most wonderful person in the world. Tell me about him." Melody pleases. Clem sighs and eventually starts to speak: "One day, we were staying at a motor inn, I had a fever and didn't feel well. I was so afraid to tell anybody. Duck, he was Kenny's son and my friend... a man nearly killed him because he thought he was bitten. I was sooo afraid anybody would try to kill me, too. But Lee somehow knew that something was wrong with me and when he found out about the fever he had been staying with me all night long and the next day too and he told me all the stories from his youth and childhood. He never gave me the feeling I would turn or that I was useless. I could feel the palm of his hand on my forehead like every 10 minutes... all night long. He always believed in me and never gave up. I miss him...". Melody tries to prevent her eyes from shedding tears. "I bet, honey... I am sure he loved you very much.". "I wish he did.". Time passes when Clementine finally puts the scissors on the table: "Done!". Jeremy looks up from his book examining Melody's new hair but when she looks at him he immediately continues to read, acting like he wasn't interested. "This is real short but I love it! Thank you, Clemmy!". "I'll go outside to the river, okay?". Melody replies: "I'd rather you stay in the house - the men are gone and ....". Clem interrupts her with a smile: "Alright, got it." and she accompanies Danielle at the fireplace, taking one of the comics."
Melody drinks a glas of water and silently looks at Jeremy who is still reading. This man is a puzzle she thinks as she finally speaks: "You never spoke a word to me, Jeremy, unless I had asked you a question. This is sad since we've been living together for so long now." Jeremy looks up and immediately starts to sweat as Melody goes on. "Anyway, I noticed you were looking at me all the time we've been at this table. Tell me: What is your problem with me? Do I do something wrong?". Nothing... Nothing is wrong with you, Melody. replies Jeremy to himself in his mind as he notices Melody's now exposed slender neck. Not a single thing. He sweats even more when Melody remarks: "I don't even know you..."
Continue from here with a serious conversation between Melody and Jeremy
Edit: made some enhancements
You ruined my image of both of them! Just joking, seriously though, i had a COMPLETELY different image of them :P.
Nice work though never the less
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Once we had a problem with someone trying to kill of Kenny, it'll be odd if someone new reads through it and all of a sudden finds out that Ken is alive without any notice.
No need to make a new thread, just a few things like that.
Though we still do need a backup considering my own thread about Telltale releasing their engine to the public, was deleted.
I never thought Jeremy would be bald.