Trapped - Interactive Murder Mystery (CHARACTER SUBMIT: CLOSED)

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  • edited December 2014

    Episode 2, Chapter 3-2


    Felix Davis

    Aaargh!

    A lot of blood falls into the floor. The pain was horrible, but he had to keep going if he wanted to find this bastard and get out of here. Any man would be in pain if they'd cut their own fingers off with scissors, just to make enough blood for that fucking machine. His thumb was lying on the ground with a lot of blood surrounding it

    Come on Felix! You've survided from something much more worse than this! I'm not this weak! Felix yells to himself

    He takes a deep breath and looks at his leg, which has lost enough blood to fill the machine already.

    Fuuuuckhhh.......

    Saws, hammers, drills and other tools were on the bloody table.

    His eyes are looking for a tool that wouldn't cause so much pain, but would help him to bleed

    What do I use and where to....

    [Scissors – cut a few fingers off]

    [Drill – Drill some tooths off]

    [Knife – Do some cuts in your leg (Causes even more blood loss on the leg)]

    [Saw – Cut your leg off]


    Felix Hector: Wh... What? Amy?

    Amy: Felix! Thank god you're okay!

    Amy hugs Felix and looks at him. Felix is still a little confused

    Felix Hector: How are you here?

    Amy: No, let me ask you first. Why are you here?

    Felix Hector: We came here to check out the n...

    Amy: No, I mean that why are you here? In this mansion?

    Felix Hector: I came here for a vacation. Didn't I tell you?

    Amy: No! I didn't see you at work, so I tracked you down here!

    Felix Hector: Well, I thought I told you...

    Jacob: I'm sorry to bother you, but who the hell is this?

    Felix Hector: Oh yeah.... She's my friend Amy. We work in the same office building.

    Amy: You can't believe what just happened! When I went into your room to check out your room if you were there, the second thing I remember is waking up in a dark room. I met a man there his name was Felix Davis I think. He saved my life.

    Felix Hector: Wait.... Felix Davis? WHERE!?

    Amy: I don't know where he is now, but there was this audio tape, which said that he has to pass some tests to get out of there. After he continued his journey, a door opened behind me. I walked in and now I'm here.

    Felix Hector: Where? Where was that door? We need to find him!

    Amy: Relax! Follow me.

    The group follows Amy out of the basement. She goes into an storage room and points at a door

    Amy: I came from there

    Drake: What? I didn't notice any door when I came here to get my laptop

    Amy: I moved some stuff out of the way when I got out. It was probably behind them

    Drake: Could be...

    Jacob: Come on then, let's check this out! He opens the door

    Hope: I'm not so sure... I'll probably wait here

    Drake: Come on now you pussy, there's nothing to be afraid of!

    Hope: … Expect a killer?

    Drake: Umm... expect a killer. C'mon now!

    Drake, Jacob, Hope, Leroy and Sleeve get into the room

    Sleeve: Bye bye... The door closes

    Felix Hector: Whoah WHOAH WHOAH! He tries to open the door but it's locked

    Amy: Oh my god! Who was that man!?

    Felix Hector: Seems like he's the one to blame for all of this shit!

    [Try to open the door]

    [Go get help]


    Tim and Meryl

    Meryl: So you're telling me is that some little girl disappeared, her mother's body was on a fucking dining table in tens of pieces, and now this fucker is after us?

    Tim: Pretty much like that.

    Meryl: …. And you swear you don't have anything to do with these murders?

    Tim: Yes.

    Meryl looks at Tim's face as they walk trough the mansion

    Meryl: So, where are we going?

    Tim: In to the dining room.

    Meryl: May I ask why?

    Tim: The others are there.

    Suddenly Tim stops

    Meryl: Uhh.. Tim? This is not the dining room.

    Tim: Shut up.

    Meryl: What?

    Tim walks into the kids' playroom. He looks around a little and then he looks at a closet

    Meryl: What are you doing? Why are we here?

    Tim: Because there's someone in that closet over there.

    Meryl: What? Ho... Wh.... Okay then, let's check that closet, which is probably empty and then get to the dining room, okay?

    Tim walks slowly in front of the closet. He starts to open it, when suddenly somebody kicks it open in to his face

    Tim falls into the ground, and he could feel somebody kicking him

    Then Meryl grabs the figure and hits it in the face

    Meryl: Who the fuck are you!?

    ???: Let me go you stupid bitch! You aren't going to kill me too!

    Meryl: I'm not going to kill you!

    Tim gets up and takes a closer look at the figure. It's a teenage girl with a black curly hair and brown eyes looking at him

    ???: Who are you? What the fuck do you want?

    Meryl: I'm Meryl, and that is Tim. We don't want to harm you. What is your name?

    Bridgette: I'm Bridgette.

    Then she turns around

    Bridgette: Hey Liam, it's safe to come out.

    A short boy comes out of the closet

    Liam: He.... Hello..

    Meryl: What are you guys doing here?

    Bridgette: I was hanging around here with my brother, when he said he wanted some food, so I went into the dining room and I saw.... I saw our aunt's body in tens of pieces on the table. After that I ran immediately here to tell Liam, but then we heard you guys coming this way and we decided to hide.

    Liam: Are we going to be okay?

    Meryl: Yes young man, yes we will

    Bridgette: We couldn't find our cousin Valery anywhere. Do you guys know where she is?

    Meryl looks at Tim

    Meryl: Uhh...

    [Tell them the truth]

    [Lie to them]

  • [Scissors – cut a few fingers off] Felix would be better able to walk to catch the killer.

    [Try to open the door] A good chance to catch the killer.

    [Tell them the truth]

    finlander posted: »

    Episode 2, Chapter 3-2 Felix Davis Aaargh! A lot of blood falls into the floor. The pain was horrible, but he had to keep going i

  • [Saw – Cut your leg off] Why Not? XD

    [Try to open the door] Spliting up doesn´t help

    [Tell them the truth] Why the heck will you lie about it?

    Amazing Chapter!!

    finlander posted: »

    Episode 2, Chapter 3-2 Felix Davis Aaargh! A lot of blood falls into the floor. The pain was horrible, but he had to keep going i

  • [Scissors – cut a few fingers off] That sounds like something that would be in SAW xD.

    [Try to open the door] Oh damn, I guess it's me? :P

    [Tell them the truth] Probably going to die so why not.

    finlander posted: »

    Episode 2, Chapter 3-2 Felix Davis Aaargh! A lot of blood falls into the floor. The pain was horrible, but he had to keep going i

  • Sheesh, this is brutal.

    [Knife – Do some cuts in your leg (Causes even more blood loss on the leg)]

    [Try to open the door]

    [Tell them the truth]

    finlander posted: »

    Episode 2, Chapter 3-2 Felix Davis Aaargh! A lot of blood falls into the floor. The pain was horrible, but he had to keep going i

  • Thanks!

    supersagig posted: »

    [Saw – Cut your leg off] Why Not? XD [Try to open the door] Spliting up doesn´t help [Tell them the truth] Why the heck will you lie about it? Amazing Chapter!!

  • VOTING CLOSED!

    [Scissors – cut a few fingers off]

    [Try to open the door]

    [Tell them the truth]

  • edited December 2014

    Episode 2, Chapter 3-3


    Felix Davis

    Felix: These scissors.... I could maybe.... my fingers....

    Felix grabs the scissors and looks at his left hand, which doesn't have a thumb anymore. If that hurts, how much will this hurt ?

    Felix: Okay then... Just relax and... He puts his index finger between the scissors' blades

    Felix: …. Just relax and take a deep breath....

    ZAP

    Felix: Aaaaaaaaargghhhhh!

    His finger falls into the ground. He fastly takes his hand above the machine to fill it with his blood

    Felix: Gohhd.... Almost done....

    He puts his leg above the machine so the blood that bleeds from that would help to fill the machine

    Felix: Still one....... I can do this....

    Now he puts his middle finger between the scissors' blades

    Felix: O..... Okay.... Here we go.... It won't hurt so much.....

    Deep breath

    ZAP

    Felix: AAAARGH HOLY FUCK! AAAAARGH!

    His finger drops to the ground

    He keeps his hand above the machine, which is almost full of his blood

    He cries. That's something he hasn't done in a long time. The tears of pain

    Felix: Co... Come on n.... Come on now you stupid fucking machine!

    BLINK

    The door opens. There's an elevator there

    Felix: YES! Finally!

    He tries to walk into the elevator

    Felix: Heh, and this fucker thought I wouldn't survive it... He walks towards it

    Suddenly his legs just gives up. Felix falls to the ground

    The elevator's door is open, but Felix doesn't move or say anything.


    Tim and Meryl

    Meryl looks at Tim

    Meryl: Uhh....

    Tim: She's missing

    Liam: Missing? Holy cow...

    Bridgette: Wait, what do you mean missing? She's fucking 7 years old! First I see my aunt sliced in pieces and a car driven trough a wall and now this? What the fuck is happening in here?

    Meryl: There's some psycopath trying to kill us.

    Liam: Did...... Did that psycho do that to our aunt?

    Tim: Yes.

    Bridgette: We need to find Valery!

    Tim: We already tried.

    Bridgette: Let's fucking try harder then!

    Meryl: Look, you need to relax.

    Bridgette: Don't tell me what to do!

    Liam: Are you having your period? He laughs

    Bridgette: Shut the fuck up Liam! At least my puberty has started....

    Liam: Well there's nothing I can do abo....

    Meryl: Okay kids, enough. Let's go find the others

    They arrive to the dining room, but all they can see is Lloyd's dead body on the ground

    Bridgette: That's fucking gross...

    Meryl: Tim, where are the others?

    Tim: How should I know?

    Meryl: Well you were here!

    Tim: No, I was in that room taking a beating from you, don't you remember?

    Meryl: Well where the fuck have they disappeared?

    Bridgette: Let's go look for them! I'm sure they're here somewh....

    They hear multiple gun shots

    Liam: Ouch! My ears!

    Meryl: Come on kids, we need to check out what happened!

    --

    Sleeve, Leroy, Jacob, Hope and Drake

    Sleeve: Bye bye... The door closes

    Drake: Yo, what the fuck!?

    Jacob: What are you d.......

    Sleeve: SHUT THE FUCK UP EVERYBODY!

    They all stop talking and look at Sleeve with very scared faces

    Sleeve: Just...... I need silence....

    Leroy: Why did you close the door!?

    Sleeve: WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST SAY!?

    Leroy: Uhh... He walks a few steps backwards

    Sleeve: I..... I have something to tell you guys. I'm not here on a vacation.

    Drake: What.... What do you mean?

    Sleeve: I'm not supposed to tell this. I know I'm going to have a terrible, terrible death because of this...

    Hope: Well, what the fuck is it?

    Sleeve gives a desperate look to Hope

    Sleeve: There's someone assisting the killer...

    Jacob: So.... You're going to have a terrible death for telling this to us? How does this information cause you a death?

    Sleeve: The assistant is among us right now.

    All of them look at each other with serious faces

    Leroy: How do you know?

    Sleeve: I'm one of the assistants. I... I SWEAR I DIDN'T WANT TO! But there was nothing I could do...

    Leroy: So who.... Who is it?

    Sleeve: It's... He takes a DEEP breath

    Sleeve: The assistant's name is....

    Someone kicks the door open

    Amy: Watch out people!!

    Amy has a pistol in her hand

    Jacob: NO DON'T SH....

    Multiple shots are fired.


    The end of Episode 2

  • So, now when Ep. 2 is done I'll do a little quiz.

    1) Who is your favourite character so far?

    2) What is your favourite chapter?

    3) Which episode do you think will be the best?

    4) What do you want to see next episode?

    5) Who do you think will die next?

    6) Who do you think will live longest?

    7) Who do you think is the killer?

    8) What episode do you think the killer will be revealed in?

  • Amy is bipolar?

    Awesome Chpater!!!!

    finlander posted: »

    Episode 2, Chapter 3-3 Felix Davis Felix: These scissors.... I could maybe.... my fingers.... Felix grabs the scissors and looks

    1. Liam
    2. The last one
    3. 3 or 5
    4. Merly dying
    5. Sleeve
    6. Hope
    7. Valery XD (Joke)
    8. No idea
    finlander posted: »

    So, now when Ep. 2 is done I'll do a little quiz. 1) Who is your favourite character so far? 2) What is your favourite chapter? 3)

  • 1) Tim ( no one said I couldn't say my own character XD)

    2) Chapter 3-3

    3) When the sun rises (hey it's the last episode where shit will go down)

    4) MOAR DEATH

    5) Sleeve

    6) Maybe Tim? I kind of made him a bit OP

    7) I don't know. However I do think that Tim is definitely not going to be the killer because he kind of seems to fit the killer role too much

    8) 3 or 4

    finlander posted: »

    So, now when Ep. 2 is done I'll do a little quiz. 1) Who is your favourite character so far? 2) What is your favourite chapter? 3)

  • So people want more death? Fine by me >;D

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    1) Tim ( no one said I couldn't say my own character XD) 2) Chapter 3-3 3) When the sun rises (hey it's the last episode where shit wi

  • Thanks!

    supersagig posted: »

    Amy is bipolar? Awesome Chpater!!!!

  • I only want Merly dying because of being stupid :P. And that my 3 characters live XD

    finlander posted: »

    So people want more death? Fine by me >;D

  • We'll see..

    supersagig posted: »

    I only want Merly dying because of being stupid :P. And that my 3 characters live XD

  • Oh shit.

    finlander posted: »

    We'll see..

  • Damn. WHO IS IT?

    finlander posted: »

    Episode 2, Chapter 3-3 Felix Davis Felix: These scissors.... I could maybe.... my fingers.... Felix grabs the scissors and looks

  • Have I just doomed Tim?

    finlander posted: »

    So people want more death? Fine by me >;D

  • We'll see... >>:DD

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Have I just doomed Tim?

  • Alt text

    finlander posted: »

    We'll see... >>:DD

  • I hate mights , maybes , we´ll see and that shit XD

    finlander posted: »

    We'll see... >>:DD

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    finlander posted: »

    We'll see... >>:DD

  • edited December 2014

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    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Have I just doomed Tim?

  • edited December 2014

    Guys, I have some information to share with you!

    I'll start another story alongside with this. You'll find out what it is after Ep.3 is finished.

    My schedule will be like this:

    • Trapped Episode 3
    • Trapped Episode 4
    • Second story (Name is still unknown) Episode 1
    • Trapped Finale
    • Second story Episode 2
    • Second story Episode 3
    • Secret project Episode 1

    And so on. I'm really excited to tell you what the second story is, and even more excited to tell you what the third story will be (I'll reveal the third one after I've finished Episode 2 of the second story)

  • TELL ME. TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    finlander posted: »

    Guys, I have some information to share with you! I'll start another story alongside with this. You'll find out what it is after Ep.3 is f

  • edited December 2014

    Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-1


    Jacob: NO DON'T SH....

    Multiple shots are fired

    Sleeve falls into the ground with multiple bullet holes in his body

    Amy: Are you guys okay!? What did that psycopath do to you!?

    Jacob: No, no, no, NO! FUCKING FUCK! WHY. DID. YOU. SHOOT!!?

    Amy: Wh.. Wh.. What do you mean?

    Felix Hector walks into the room

    Felix: Did that son of a bitch hurt you?

    Leroy: He was about the tell something about the killer's ”assistant”, but then your friend here shot him.

    Amy: Bu... But I thought.....

    Drake: Fucking hell! He was just about to tell us who it was! Where did you even get than gun!? And how the hell did you get past that door?

    Amy: It was on a box there. Felix kicked the door open...

    Hope: Come on guys, she had a reason to shoot. I would've shot him too. I mean, think about the situation: There's a murderer on the loose, the most suspective guy takes a few of us into a room and closes the door and it gets locked. What would you do? Panic? Exactly.

    Drake: I don't know man..... It wasn't right but it wasn't wrong either.

    Jacob: But now we know that one of us who were in the room is the killer's assistant. I promise, that I don't have anything to do with these murders!

    Hope: Well it wasn't me either

    Drake: Or me

    Leroy: It wasn't me either!

    Felix Hector: So one of you guys is a fucking pathetic murderer. I'll keep my eye on you...

    Drake: Yo Amy, where did that Felix guy go?

    Amy: He went trough that door... She points at a metallic door at the other side of the room

    Drake: I guess we need to try to bust that open.

    Felix Hector: I don't know if we can... I had problems with opening this door already.

    Hope: So... There's nothing we can do? I have to admit, this killer is a smart son of a bitch.

    Jacob: He sure is. Maybe we should split up and look for an other way in?

    Felix Hector: Seems like that's the only way...

    Leroy: Whoa whoa whoa, split up?

    Felix Hector: Finding him is much faster if we split up. We need to find him!

    Jacob: Well.... Let's split up then...

    Felix Hector: Okay then... But somebody needs to stay here and try to open the door. Any volunteers?

    Everybody stays silent

    Felix Hector: Alright... Hope, you stay here.

    Hope: What?

    Felix Hector: You heard me.

    Hope: Dude, have you watched slasher or horror films at all? The one who is left alone will always die!

    Felix Hector: Well, this isn't a movie. Come on man, you would be a big help if you could open that door somehow.

    Hope: sigh Alright then...

    They all split up into small groups and goes looking for Felix Davis

    The groups:

    • Jacob and Drake
    • Felix Hector and Amy
    • Leroy

    The end of the part

  • Awesome Chapter!!!!!!

    finlander posted: »

    Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-1 Jacob: NO DON'T SH.... Multiple shots are fired Sleeve falls into the ground with multiple bu

  • Character submit is open again.

  • Thank you!

    supersagig posted: »

    Awesome Chapter!!!!!!

  • Thanks again! :-]

    supersagig posted: »

    Name: Karin Moira Redborn Age: 37 Gender: Female Personality: Calm , Brave , Serious ,Smart Apperance: brown short heddle hair , green eyes , caucasian , 6,0 feet tall Something: She´s Liam mother

  • Name: Karin Moira Redborn

    Age: 37

    Gender: Female

    Personality: Calm , Brave , Serious ,Smart

    Apperance: brown short heddle hair , green eyes , caucasian , 6,0 feet tall

    Something: She´s Liam mother

  • Do I call her Karin or Karin Moira?

    supersagig posted: »

    Name: Karin Moira Redborn Age: 37 Gender: Female Personality: Calm , Brave , Serious ,Smart Apperance: brown short heddle hair , green eyes , caucasian , 6,0 feet tall Something: She´s Liam mother

  • Like you want :P

    finlander posted: »

    Do I call her Karin or Karin Moira?

  • Soo... 2 people are with Drake?

    finlander posted: »

    Episode 3 – Mind Games, Chapter 1-1 Jacob: NO DON'T SH.... Multiple shots are fired Sleeve falls into the ground with multiple bu

  • No, there are two Felix's so I had to put his last name Hector in it :P

    Pipas posted: »

    Soo... 2 people are with Drake?

  • Since I'm afraid you're going to kill out Tim I've decided to submit another character

    Name: Stranger

    Gender: Male

    Age: 26

    Appearance: Wears a black hoodie that overshadows half of his face, tattered jeans, black boots, 7 ft

    Personality: Always pissed off for some reason

    The reason for being there: Unknown but is seen lurking in the shadows

  • No, I mean this.

    The groups:

    Jacob and Drake

    Felix Hector and Drake

    Leroy

    Why is Drake there twice?

    finlander posted: »

    No, there are two Felix's so I had to put his last name Hector in it :P

  • Ohh... Sorry, my bad xd It's supposed to be Felix Hector and Amy. I'll fix that

    Pipas posted: »

    No, I mean this. The groups: Jacob and Drake Felix Hector and Drake Leroy Why is Drake there twice?

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