Dark Angels
Hey Guys, after many Self Debates, Rage Quits, and Saltlicks Thrown, i'm finally making a FanFic! After a poll for what it should be about, the theme is a special elite Team goes on a mission but it goes wrong and they encounter some badass villains and the team will struggle to stay alive.I'll post votes for decisions in the story,I'm not sure how many people there will be or when i'll start but if you decide to submit character, I would like to know... Character Submission Closed
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Group/Alliance(I will update as spots are taken and which ones people can still choose from): Team Member, Team Allies, Neutral, Evil Role (No more Main Villains)
Any other info:
UnIntroduced Characters I have so Far
Introduced Characters so far Lynne Bowen, Hopeless, Jordan Wilkerson,, Elsa Houten, Arin Osco,Javier Mendoza,Jack, Sparker, Vicente Carmine,Jacob, Constance Benson, John Lottman,Gary, Rick, Zack, Rebecca Saunders, Alex Mason, Ethan Willows, Melanie Royald, Anthanasius Redborn, Anslem Sanders, Audrey Degaldo, Warren Roldan, PeGaSuTy 89240, OKMHG810. Diana Wilshire , Harry Cooper
Prologue
Part 1- The Mission
Part 2- The Hunt
Part 3- Out for Blood
Part 4-All Angels Fall
Part 5- The Will to Survive
Since the Story is over now I'll just post which characters are deceased: Hopeless, Jack, Arin Osco, Gary, Rick, Vicente Carmine, Rebecca Saunders and a whole lot of henchmen
Comments
My parting contribution for the next few days!
Name: Lynne Bowen
Age: 24
Appearance: Short dark brown hair, grey eyes. Fair skin, muscular. Is 5'6, and weighs 145lbs (all muscle).
Personality: Lynne is a no-nonsense soldier. She doesn't stand for incompetence and dislikes to work with others, she instead enjoys working on her own where she feels others can not hinder her from completing her job to her liking. She isn't keen to forming alliances, but will if it can benefit her mission.
Group/Alliance: Neutral
Specialtity: Sniper, and Close Combat Specialist. Main weapons are Semi Automatic combat rifle, and two handguns.
Thanks
Codename: Hopeless
Age: 18
Appearance: Short blond hair, about 5'3".
Personality: Calm, even in a fight. Will think before acting.
Group/Alliance: Team Member
Any other info: M4A1 rifle, combat knife and a sidearm.
This is GoldenPaladins Character
Name: Jordan Wilkerson
Age: 37
Appearance: Muscular man with one eye and a long grey beard, kind of looks like Kenny.
Personality: Loyal, Strong of will, willing to do anything, Is good at teamwork.
Group/Alliance: Team Member
Thanks for the character!
Also, just to avoid copyright issues.... XD
One of the main characters in my original novel is named Lynne, and she also knows someone with the last name Bowen. So, lets agree that I'm not stealing this character, she is mine. XD
(!) Saltlick123 will remember that
Name: Sparker
Age: 35
Appearance: Exactly like the Joker with a lot of hidden tricks in his clothes knifes, guns, bombs and hidden sheet
Personality: Funny, smart, manipulated, crazy, killa
Group/Alliance: Main Villains
Other info: Liam Neeson is Irish and Joker has a lot of AK47's
Name: Arin Osco
Age: 27
Appearance: White, Tee-Shirt and Leather Jacket, Carries Around a Survival Knife.
Personality: Funny, Hair Trigger, Brave, Merciful.
Group/Alliance: Team Member
Other Info: I Care Deeply about friends, Wants to die saving someones life.
Cool Character, but why in the other info does it say Liam Neeson is Irish? Is that one of your characters beliefs since he is crazy?
Thank you for the contribution!
Good point got me there sheet rekt XDD
(!) Saltlick123 will go and Saltlick someone now
Name: Ethan Willows
Age: 18
Appearance: brown short heddle hair , brown eyes , 4,4 feet tall , brown skin.
Personality: Shy , Dumb , Nervous , Funny
Team Allies
Thanks! But what group is he in?
Team Allies
Thanks
Name: Alex Mason
Age: 36
Appearance: Tank top with bullet proof vest, always carrying his guns and the keys to his tank.
Personality: Likes to cause destruction and mayhem. Takes orders from no one and likes to be the leader. He does not like to waste time and always goes for the easy kill
Group/Alliance(I will update as spots are taken): Main Villain
Any other info: Has a tank. He enjoys pain. Also he is a former military member.
Thanks!
He'll be a good fit
Keep up the awesome characters guys! The sooner I get most of the characters I need, The sooner I can start writing
The waiting game begins...
Name: Melanie Royald
Age: 25
Appearance: red long curly hair , green eyes , 5,5 feet tall , caucasian
Personality: Amorous , Funny , Caring , Smart
Team Allies
Name: Anslem Sanders
Age: 44
Appearance: bald head , blue eyes , 6 feet tall , caucasian
Personality: Dickhead , Dumb , Brave , Agressive (he is alcoholic)
Team Allies
Thanks for the characters
Now we just need to get more users in here
Name: Vicente Carmine
Age: 51
Appearance: Vicente is a tall and surprisingly muscular man with short graying hair and a well-trimmed beard. He has very light blue eyes and olive skin. He also wears a very expensive black suit and often smokes expensive cigars. Usually, he wears dark sunglasses, but he takes them off when he has a serious talk with someone.
Personality: Vicente is equally both: ruthless and pragmatic. If something has to be done, he does it without a second thought, no matter how gruesome it might be. But if commiting a crime could cause more problems for him than not commiting it, like shooting innocents without reason, he would never do it. He is fully capable of showing mercy, if only so that he himself can expect mercy later on. He has a charming and extremely cunning personality and is a good boss for his men, only punishing them when they really did a big mistake. Because of his pragmatism he is against needless violence, instead preferring to solve problems with cunning, threats and intimidation. If those do not work, he tries it with torture. He does not tolerate treason under any costs and quickly executes every traitor personally. When he is not commiting any crimes he is a disturbingly cheerful and friendly person, but he can be absoultely terrifying when he's angry. If pushed into a fight he proves himself to be a surprisingly tough opponent, skilled in firearms and very strong for a man of his age.
Group/Alliance: Main Villains
Additional Info/Backstory: Vicente was born in a very poor Italo-American family and was basically driven into crime from a very young age. He started as a low-level thug in a street-gang and soon catched the eye of a wealthy crimelord, who employed him. From there on, Vicente quickly became a major factor in the crimelords financial success, finally murdering him to take over the organisation. He quickly changed the organisation into a billion-dollar business, ruling with an iron fist. His main sources of income are arms deal, human traficking and smuggling stolen goods all over the world.
Vicente never married and since a few years he tries to find a worthy successor for his organisation.
Quick question: Is there a limit to how many characters we are allowed to submit? I have an idea for at least one more character.
Thanks! and for your question, it depends on how many other users come in here.
Name: Elsa Houten.
Age: 28 years.
Appearance: About 5'7, with wavy Auburn colored hair and blue eyes. Has a few freckles on her cheeks.
Personality: Severely anxious and would rather not mess around. Elsa is mostly serious, but she has her moments of optimism and joking. She also does not want to build a snowman. That joke got old after the first 600 times.
Alliance/Group: Team Member (please and thank you!).
Thanks! Nice character.
Thank you.
(I'm so sorry. XD)
Name: Anthanasius Redborn
Age: 26
Appearance: blue short heddle hair , blue eyes , 5,2 feet tall , caucasian
Personality: Lonely , Silent , Thoughtful , Agressive
Team Ally
Name: Constance Benson
Age: 55
Appearance: white short curly hair , blue eyes , 4,9 feet tall , caucasian
Personality: Caring , Helpful , Calm , Smart
Team Ally
Well since we're still waiting i'll make a prologue
Dark Angels Prologue
Hopeless: What's the job now?
Jordan Wilkerson: Don't know, we're going to get debriefed at Head Quarters.
Lynne Bowen: I heard it's something about a fucked up clown called Sparker, It should be easy money.
Jordan Wilkerson: Lynne, you're not even part of the team so Shut Up
Elsa Houten: She has the right to talk!
Lynne Bowen: I don't need your help "princess", and Jordan the only reason i'm here is because I'm paying you guys back for getting me outta that hellhole back in Ireland.
Jordan Wilkerson: Yeah you do owe us BIG TIME! Think just this mission is gonna cover it!?
Lynne Bowen: Fuck You asshole, I'm helping you this one time then we're even, Besides where's Arin and the others?
Hopeless: They're at HQ waiting for us.
Lynne Bowen: Cool, At least I know they're not assholes like someone... Stares at Jordan
Hopeless: Can't we all just get along...
Elsa Houten: Yeah, C'mon guys, I'm starving, can we just all relax?
Jordan Wilkerson: Aw, You want a snow cone?
Elsa Houten: Say that one more time.
Jordan Wilkerson: Ohhhhh, Elsas gonna FREEZE me ohhhhhh
Elsa Houten: You're not worth my time Jordan.....
Hopeless: Finally, We're almost there
Lynne Bowen: About time....
END OF PROLOGUE (Will start doing more when more people start to participate)
Great Part
I'm loving the Frozen puns. I'm loving EVERYTHING.
Thanks
I'm just waiting for some more forum members to participate:)
I did 2 more characters for you
Thanks, I'll make choices once I start writing the main part and once more people start to participate.
Thanks for the character!
I'll shout at people to come and read it while I wait for everyone else to update their stories. Believe me, I have a character submitted in like everyone's Walking Dead story. Three of them were killed (as I figured they would). The others haven't shown up yet. :P